So many moddings.
Thanks nanda2009 kajiyatta [CSGA]Ar3sgice!
i will apply after check.
Thanks nanda2009 kajiyatta [CSGA]Ar3sgice!
i will apply after check.
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Hanatan - Orange
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Topic Starter
Awsome Modding. Thanks a lot!nanda2009 wrote:
Hi. M4M :3
[General][W h i t e's Normal]
- Who's Lynn? Add it to tags.
- Add White to tags. So people can search his/her GD just by using keyword "White" rather than "W_h_i_t_e"
- Slider tick 1? it plays better imo
- Nazi. Each map have different breaktime. Change it so it'll be same
- 00:11:951 (6) - enable clap at this object for consistency with Hard difficulty
- 00:16:951 (3) - enable finish at the tail
- 00:17:951 - 00:38:617 - This part is mappable. Why don't you map it? Afterall, you also mapped 00:11:951 - 00:17:951 even though there's no vocal there
- 01:17:951 (1) - reverse it? It plays better imo. Although you have to make a change for a bit at 01:19:617 - 01:20:617
- 01:39:951 (4) - Silence the tail? But I guess it'll make the map hard. But idk, imo it plays better
- 02:54:617 (2) - I prefer to place this at 256,296 for better flow. and it plays better imo
- 03:00:617 (3) - make it curve to up, so it'll have a better flow with 03:01:951 (1)
- 03:05:284 (2) - same case as 02:54:617 (2)
[Hard]
- 00:02:284 (3,4,5) - bad flow. move the curve of (4) up. So it'll be similar to this : fixed
- 00:04:617 (2,3) - a bit tricky. Try this : fixed
keep the distance between (4,5) 1.0x- 00:11:951 (5,1) - reverse the combo fixed
- 00:07:951 (4) - I'm not sure what this slider is following, I prefer moving this slider tail to 00:08:284 and add a circle at 00:08:451. So it'll follow the vocal
- 00:17:951 - 00:38:617 - This part is mappable. Why don't you map it? Afterall, you also mapped 00:11:951 - 00:17:951 even though there's no vocal there i want make this beatmap like musicvideo
- 00:41:952 (1) - move this to 296,100. For better flow between (6,1)
- 01:07:951 (4,5,1) - Make this look straight
- 01:00:617 - 01:04:617 - These pattern are exactly the same with Normal difficulty. Make something different, like :
Do this too, to other parts that similar to the current one. Or try to be creative and do something better- 01:12:617 (1) - clap for consistency
- 01:20:617 (1,2) - What is these objects following? Try to follow the vocal
- 01:34:284 (2) - imo the flow looks better if you reverse this slider. Also, it'll make this slider looks like a 90° rotated version of 01:35:284 (4). Also, it plays better fixed
- 01:40:617 (1) - useless imo. delete
- 01:51:284 (1,2) - stack? fixed
- 02:29:284 (2) - it plays better if you reverse it imo. fixed
- 02:40:451 (3) - disable clap at the head. and add a clap at the tail of 02:41:117 (4) fixed
- 03:11:284 (1) - reverse. If you do this, I suggest you to move 03:10:951 (3) to 288,72, So it'll face (1). Also silence the slider's end fixed
- 03:34:617 (1) - clap at the repeater fixed
- 04:02:284 (1,2) - I prefer this : fixed
Your mapset really good imo. But maybe you want a better sample for clap. idk, the current one feels out of place when played.
GL o/
Topic Starter
Thanks! very helpful!kajiyatta wrote:
M4M from your queue
[General]
almost suggestion
[Normal]
Placement
00:15:951(2,3) I don't like this shape, so you can make nice flow like this?
00:48:617(3) put a center between (1) and (2)
01:06:284(3) same. put it x:160 y:192
01:21:951(1,2,3) put it beautifully, to be center.
01:39:951(4) Ctrl+G better to be easier flow.
02:41:951(1,2) just suggestion, it would be better to make reverse slider
Hit Sonud
00:11:951(6) add clap
[Hard]
Placement
02:41:117(4) tiny thing, curved this slider. it follows next and previous slider fixed
Rhythm
01:20:617(1) to follow the vocal, maybe it would be more nice fixed
02:20:284~ you can follow the vocal more positively, it feels bored. e.g)
03:38:617(2,3,4) I prefer it fixed
Hit Sonud
00:10:951(4) add whistle at end fixed
02:47:284(1) add finish at head fixed
03:37:951(1)^ fixed
nice maap. good luck and star~
Fix it! Thx
Normal
osu file format v12
[General]
AudioFilename: Orange.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 80617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1617,230617
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Orange
TitleUnicode:オレンジ
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:DingGGu
Version:W h i t e's Normal
Source:
Tags:utaite yurica nicovideo hatsune miku vocaloid cordelia w_h_i_t_e tohma
BeatmapID:258675
BeatmapSetID:96054
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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128,188,157284,2,0,L|112:248,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,304,157951,6,0,P|88:320|120:324,1,62.5
192,312,158617,2,0,P|220:296|252:292,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,296,159284,6,0,P|384:300|436:264,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,192,160284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,120,160617,2,0,P|384:84|324:88,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,161617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,96,161951,6,0,P|184:140|192:164,1,62.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,224,162617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,228,162951,2,0,P|172:276|240:300,1,125,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,163951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,180,164617,6,0,P|356:164|320:116,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,165617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,116,165951,2,0,P|156:164|96:180,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,184,166951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,167284,6,0,B|100:260|136:252|136:252|180:272,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,168284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,284,168617,2,0,L|296:228,1,62.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,156,169284,2,0,L|324:100,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,136,169951,6,0,B|360:192|360:192|388:248,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,170951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,171284,2,0,L|288:320,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,348,171951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,244,172617,6,0,P|116:184|160:140,2,125,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,174617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,244,175284,6,0,P|396:184|352:140,2,125,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,177284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,176,177951,6,0,P|128:200|72:176,2,125,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,179951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,176,180617,2,0,P|384:200|440:176,1,125,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,181951,6,0,L|293:304,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,182617,2,0,L|153:311,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,183284,6,0,P|96:264|80:324,2,125,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,185284,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,236,185951,6,0,P|416:264|432:324,2,125,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,187951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188617,6,0,P|212:148|220:76,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,120,189617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,189951,2,0,P|348:92|340:164,1,125,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,216,191284,6,0,B|249:220|275:243|269:283|243:307|243:307|212:334|176:304|126:337|126:337|108:280|61:280|55:239|55:239|51:203|72:169|106:168|137:188,1,500,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,215284,6,0,L|256:212,2,62.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,216284,2,0,P|256:356|312:332,1,125
356,272,217284,2,0,L|384:216,1,62.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,217951,6,0,B|396:132|352:148|352:148|320:132,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,218951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,219284,2,0,B|160:148|160:148|116:132|76:160,1,125,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,216,220284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,284,220617,6,0,P|68:264|52:224,2,62.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,280,221617,2,0,P|224:256|280:280,1,125,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,332,222617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,244,223284,6,0,B|328:220|304:204|304:204|308:168|300:136,1,125,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,224284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,224617,2,0,B|204:168|208:204|208:204|184:220|168:244,2,125,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,228,226617,6,0,P|108:288|160:316,2,125,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,228284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,228617,2,0,P|256:40|372:92,1,250,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,152,230284,1,4,0:0:0:0:
416,228,242284,5,0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,242617,2,0,L|276:240,1,62.5
ㅎㅇ 노 쿠도스 부탁
버블퀄 된듯한데요?
General
깔~ 끔
Normal
언스냅 하나 보이네요
- 01:07:951 (4) - 일부러 빼신게 아니라면 머리 박수
- 01:39:951 (4) - 소리 더 줄이시는게 좀 더 이파트를 끝내기에 좋을꺼같음
- 02:21:951 (3) - 끝에 박수
- 02:25:951 (1,3) - 좀 더 완벽하게 감싸보시는건 어때요? 아마 1번에있는 4번째 점을 x:444, y:284 정도로 움직이면 될꺼같음
- 02:32:617 (3) - 1/2박으로 줄이시고 리핏같은거로 처리하시는게 모든 음에 맞아요.
02:33:617 - 좀 여유가 있다면 여기에도 1서클 추가하시고.SPOILER
3,4번 참조 - 02:47:284 (1) - 머리 피닛
모딩 완성했어요~ 확인 부탁합니다.
여담이지만 앞으로는 모딩 코맨트는 하나에 몰아서 해주세요~
여담이지만 앞으로는 모딩 코맨트는 하나에 몰아서 해주세요~
안녕하세요? :>
삽질나기에요
쿠도수쏴드림.
hard
03:40:617 (1) - clap
삽질나기에요
쿠도수쏴드림.
hard
03:40:617 (1) - clap
Topic Starter
Sonnyc wrote:
General:
-- 브레이크를 당기셔서 여기에서 시작하세요. 03:51:284
-- 틱2가 음악과 잘 맞습니다.
W h i t e 's Normal:
00:11:951 (6) - 클랩을 잊으셨군요
00:14:617 (1) - 콤보가 너무 짧아요. 음악에도 안맞는거 같고, 콤보 풀어주세요
00:16:951 (5) - 이후 여기는 뉴콤
00:58:617 (2) - 여기는 (1)과 다시 대칭시켜주세요. 약간 어긋나서 그런지 스페이싱도 차이가 나네요
01:03:284 (1,2) - 1칸 내리세요
01:04:617 (1,2) - (1) 끝, (2) 시작에 클랩
01:19:617 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣으면 음악과 어울려요
01:59:284 (1,2) - 여기도 또 대칭이 어긋났네요
02:11:617 (4) - 클랩
02:11:951 (5) - 끝에 클랩
02:31:284 (1) - ^ 이건 음악에 어울려서
02:32:617 (3) - 시작에 클랩
02:57:284 (2) - 클랩
03:01:951 (1,2) - 시작마다 클랩
03:07:951 (2) - 클랩
03:09:951 (3) - 시작에도 클랩
03:11:284 (1) - 빨간 점 때문에 하트 모양이 아쉽네요. 모양 만들어 드렸으니 써주세요~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/790249212,216,191284,6,0,B|280:216|292:304|232:360|180:292|126:337|126:337|108:272|48:284|24:232|48:172|100:160|137:188,1,500,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hard: 대부분 적용했습니다!
00:02:617 (4) - 음악과 어울리니 끝에 휘슬 추가 해주세요
00:05:284 (4) - ^
00:12:617 (2) - 새로운 박자이니 뉴콤해주세요. 짧은 콤보가 보기 않좋으실지라도 이게 음악에 잘 맞아요.
00:15:284 (6,1) - (6)부분에서 콤보를 시작해주세요
00:16:951 (5) - 이후 뉴콤. (음? 노말의 데자뷰)
00:17:784 (6) - 간격 때문에 1칸 내리세요.
00:40:951 (5) - (424,340)에 놓으면 좋을듯 합니다. 겹쳐놓는거 보다는요
00:49:451 (7) - (342,98). 여기는 그냥 직선이 무난할듯 해요
00:52:618 (6,1) - (6)에서 콤보를 시작하세요
00:52:285 (5) - (228,88)? 비슷한 의견
00:54:952 (5) - (292,176). 간격 오류
00:56:285 (1) - 2칸 위로. 간격 오류 (혹시 의도적인 거셨다면 그냥 수정하시는게 나을거라고 봐요
00:57:284 (3) - ctrl+G 하셔서 점프를 넣는게 좋을거 같아요
01:04:617 (1,2) - (1) 끝에 클랩, (2) 클랩.
01:20:617 - 여기에 타임 라인 넣으셔서 음량 좀 줄이세요. 좀 큰듯 하네요
01:26:117 (4) - 1칸 내리는게 흐름에 좋을듯요
01:32:951 (6,1) - 음.. 미니 점프라고 믿어요 ㅇㅅ,,
02:06:451 (4) - 1칸 올리는게 흐름에 좋아요
_____________________________________________________________________________________
02:08:451 (3) - ^
02:11:284 (5,1,2) - (5,1)은 새로운 하나의 콤보로 묶으시고 (2) 부터 새 콤보를 또 시작해주세요
03:36:617 (3,4,5) - 줄도 아니고 뭐가 있는 거도 아니라서 약간 애매한 패턴 같아요. 갠적으로 줄로 만드는게 가장 무난할듯 하네요
hard
03:40:617 (1) - clap 제거 only finish
03:40:617 (1) - clap 제거 only finish
Beautiful song, I hope this gets ranked! :>
슬라다음에 노트 찍는걸 조금 줄여주세요
그것때문에 어려운것같아요..
그것때문에 어려운것같아요..
Mapping is more polished from the last map (Palette) I saw from you, which I'm pretty happy about. Funny you two switched places this time.
Some parts of the storyboard still retain the shivering but that's inconsequential.
Everything seems good to go, bubbled. Apologies if you waited long, since my Sunday dragged until a Friday, ahaha.
Some parts of the storyboard still retain the shivering but that's inconsequential.
Everything seems good to go, bubbled. Apologies if you waited long, since my Sunday dragged until a Friday, ahaha.
Topic Starter
Thank you Faust, i always thank you <3Faust wrote:
Mapping is more polished from the last map (Palette) I saw from you, which I'm pretty happy about. Funny you two switched places this time.
Some parts of the storyboard still retain the shivering but that's inconsequential.
Everything seems good to go, bubbled. Apologies if you waited long, since my Sunday dragged until a Friday, ahaha.
After a quick fix because of an accidentally deleted object (Which wasn't around when I did a check..)
Re-bubbled. Be careful next time. Though I'd have to say some fault lies with myself since I never explicitly asked why that section was empty on the Normal.
Things to note, eh.
Re-bubbled. Be careful next time. Though I'd have to say some fault lies with myself since I never explicitly asked why that section was empty on the Normal.
Things to note, eh.
Shohei Ohtani
It's a cool map and a cool storyboard. However, I'm kind of bothered by the break in the end, ending with only three notes.
Idunno, I don't have much influence in this since it's bubbled. If any BAT could look at that that'd be super cool
Since it's kind of weird to be playing and it's like "OH YEAH BREAK WOO" and then it's just like 3 notes.
Idunno, I don't have much influence in this since it's bubbled. If any BAT could look at that that'd be super cool
Since it's kind of weird to be playing and it's like "OH YEAH BREAK WOO" and then it's just like 3 notes.
mapset is fine but I'm worried about the timing, maybe need calll faust back to check it
For the record, I was getting +14 offset.
i got +14ms also.
Topic Starter
i apply offset suggestion. but, i didn't upload my beatmap.
i wait Faust.
i wait Faust.
No need to wait for me, you know.
The added 14ms of offset settles well, if you wanted an answer from me.
The added 14ms of offset settles well, if you wanted an answer from me.
Topic Starter
ummmm.. i just said re-bubble pleaseFaust wrote:
No need to wait for me, you know.
The added 14ms of offset settles well, if you wanted an answer from me.
some part of english is hard for me T^T.
anyway thanks for check.
+ i uploaded yesterday.
Re-bubbled.
Requested that 'flower' be added to tags, citing the name of her album. Dat 14ms.
Requested that 'flower' be added to tags, citing the name of her album. Dat 14ms.
Osu needs more hanatan!
gratz!
츅츅
Congratulation!
eveless wrote:
Osu needs more hanatan!
What is Osu
out of curiosity, what is the font that you used for the SB in the beginning?
edit: forgot to say congrats LOL sorry
edit: forgot to say congrats LOL sorry
Topic Starter
font name is "Uni うに"Raose wrote:
out of curiosity, what is the font that you used for the SB in the beginning?
edit: forgot to say congrats LOL sorry
thanks
Goooooooood!
Osu! needs more Hanatan!
Osu! needs more Hanatan!
*기립박수*
제대하면(6/26) 꼭 플레이해보겠습니다
제대하면(6/26) 꼭 플레이해보겠습니다
Topic Starter
헐...말년 병장..Shino wrote:
*기립박수*
제대하면(6/26) 꼭 플레이해보겠습니다
몸조심해서 제대하시길~~~!!
랭크 축하합니다 :>
gratz
축축~
good job on second map
nice, congrats :3
I have just discovered this song. I frickin' love this and the video!! One thing that put me off is the fact that there's no osu!mania maps for it >.<;
The converted osu! standard -> mania is a lil dull. I was wondering if I can make mania versions for this (easy/normal & hard/insane)
The converted osu! standard -> mania is a lil dull. I was wondering if I can make mania versions for this (easy/normal & hard/insane)
I love storyboards like this. The ones that re-create the PV and add a little personal touch are great. Great job :3
^_^
