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Hanatan - You and beautiful world

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Raose
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Joined July 2012
Raose

Sakura wrote:

[Raose's Insane]
00:00:792 (1) - You could use a triplet here, there's 2 notes right after this so i dunno why you went for a single one. made it a 1/4 slider
00:04:167 (6,7) - Your jump here is inconsistent with 00:06:605 (5,6) What made you feel the difference? the music isnt any different from me on those 2 spots. It also sounds like you're missing a note at 00:04:542 compared to 00:07:542 (8) oops, made distance smaller. About the missing note, there's a different sound at 00:07:355 (7,8) that is not present in the first pattern, that's why there's no note there :p
00:10:355 (8,1) - And now instead you go for a pause, seems like you keep switching the feel the music gives you everytime it comes up again. the pause is similar to 00:06:605 (5,6); the sound that's present at 00:07:355 (7,8) isn't here also ><
00:34:542 - Again it feels like you're missing a note. filled it in with a slider
00:37:730 (1) - Add hitsound finish yep
01:16:167 (6,7) - This doesnt feel much different than the rest of the song, why jump? stacked these
01:28:167 (7,8) - This too samee
thanks for mod :D

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: you and beautiful world _hanatan_.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91355
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:You and beautiful world
TitleUnicode:You and beautiful world
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Haneure
Version:World
Source:
Tags:vocaloid utaite hanatan dkun raose CDFA
BeatmapID:539900
BeatmapSetID:138220

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"background.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,37930,48980
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,255,255

[TimingPoints]
230,375,4,2,1,45,1,0
605,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
1355,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
90230,-200,4,2,1,10,0,0
91730,-100,4,2,1,35,0,1
115730,-200,4,2,1,20,0,0


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Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
Lets get it

[General]
  1. There seems to be two mp3s in the file folder, delete whichever one you aren't using
  2. The dark purple combo color is a bit hard to see with the bg. Stacked notes will be hard to read with it. I highly suggest you change this throughout the diffs
  3. There seems to be quite a large gap between the normal and the hard. It seems more like an easy to me. CDFA's Normal is labeled with an E while dkun's hard is labeled with an H, skipping the N icon'd diff. The hard has a lot of spacing changes while the normal has a lot of consistent 1/1 patterns. You will definitely need to close the gap with another difficulty for sure. Make another diff with more 1/2 patterns but not as difficult as dkun's hard, I'll check over it quickly and we can get this moving.
[World]
  1. 00:36:980 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this pattern up a bit, and then situate 00:37:730 (1) - between 00:37:167 (2,3) - (placed below them, 1.2x spaced). Will provide for a cleaner looking pattern imo and it will also flow better with the back and forth motions that 00:36:980 (1,2,3,4) - give off
  2. 00:53:948 (5,6) - Having these stacked underneath 00:53:480 (4) - 's slider end really kill the momentum that was going through with the pattern. I think unstacking them and have them spaced at like 0.6x would be neat. Also provides for a better springboard into 00:54:230 (7) -
  3. 01:36:980 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Great pattern here. This was really fun to play!
[Insane]
Not really a fan of the sv changes since sometimes they are not consistent - either have all of one or none tbh.
  1. 00:21:042 (6,7) - This pattern plays awkwardly since 6 ends on a strong beat in the music. Because of this, players will not know to jump to 00:21:417 (7) - . I highly recommend that you change up this rhythm here so that the stronger beat is accented accordingly.
  2. 00:28:355 (3,4) - The little breath thingy you use to do your slider slowdowns is present here. For consistency's sake and for a cue to the players, I recommend you change this rhythm so that you continue doing what you have been with the sv changes
  3. 00:34:730 (1) - ^, here you might be able to slide with it though since there is also another sound present you may be accenting
  4. 01:13:730 (1) - ^
  5. 01:13:730 (1,2) - Not really a fan of these slider shapes here, played a little strange to me with the flow coming from the previous patterns. Maybe resorting to regular 3 point sliders would be better
  6. 01:19:730 (5) - Slider slowdown thing
  7. 01:42:792 (5) - The volume of this slider might be too quiet for players to hear. Either accent it with a whistle or something to give more audio feedback or up the volume
  8. 01:58:730 (2) - Perhaps following the vocals would be better here. The repeat slider seems a bit too fast for it
[dkun's hard]
  1. 01:46:730 (1,2) - This angle is a bit awkward coming off of the longer slider, maybe try and make it a bit smoother?
Call me back once the spread issue is sorted out, and the suggestions are applied. Nice maps guys!
Haneure
47 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Haneure

Lust wrote:

Lets get it

[General]
  1. There seems to be two mp3s in the file folder, delete whichever one you aren't using What on earth, I didn't catch that one for sure! Fixed!
  2. The dark purple combo color is a bit hard to see with the bg. Stacked notes will be hard to read with it. I highly suggest you change this throughout the diffs Changed!
  3. There seems to be quite a large gap between the normal and the hard. It seems more like an easy to me. CDFA's Normal is labeled with an E while dkun's hard is labeled with an H, skipping the N icon'd diff. The hard has a lot of spacing changes while the normal has a lot of consistent 1/1 patterns. You will definitely need to close the gap with another difficulty for sure. Make another diff with more 1/2 patterns but not as difficult as dkun's hard, I'll check over it quickly and we can get this moving. Looking into making a new difficulty to fill the gap now.


[Insane]
Not really a fan of the sv changes since sometimes they are not consistent - either have all of one or none tbh. Tried to add in more to make them more consistent, per your following suggestions.
  1. 00:21:042 (6,7) - This pattern plays awkwardly since 6 ends on a strong beat in the music. Because of this, players will not know to jump to 00:21:417 (7) - . I highly recommend that you change up this rhythm here so that the stronger beat is accented accordingly. Adjusted, whistle on the said beat for emphasis :)
  2. 00:28:355 (3,4) - The little breath thingy you use to do your slider slowdowns is present here. For consistency's sake and for a cue to the players, I recommend you change this rhythm so that you continue doing what you have been with the sv changes Will do~
  3. 00:34:730 (1) - ^, here you might be able to slide with it though since there is also another sound present you may be accenting I'm going to try my luck and try to slide with it :P
  4. 01:13:730 (1) - ^ Same as above.
  5. 01:13:730 (1,2) - Not really a fan of these slider shapes here, played a little strange to me with the flow coming from the previous patterns. Maybe resorting to regular 3 point sliders would be better Kept one of the sliders, adjusted the part a bit. Should flow better now
  6. 01:19:730 (5) - Slider slowdown thing Will ask about in-game again..
  7. 01:42:792 (5) - The volume of this slider might be too quiet for players to hear. Either accent it with a whistle or something to give more audio feedback or up the volume Made the volume louder
  8. 01:58:730 (2) - Perhaps following the vocals would be better here. The repeat slider seems a bit too fast for it Added in a dramatic slowdownn >:o woahhhhh! (To follow vocals more.)


[dkun's hard]
  1. 01:46:730 (1,2) - This angle is a bit awkward coming off of the longer slider, maybe try and make it a bit smoother?
I asked dkun and he gave me permission to change this part of the map on my own. Fixed!

Call me back once the spread issue is sorted out, and the suggestions are applied. Nice maps guys! Thanks for taking the time to look at the map. :D
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose

Lust wrote:

[World]
  1. 00:36:980 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this pattern up a bit, and then situate 00:37:730 (1) - between 00:37:167 (2,3) - (placed below them, 1.2x spaced). Will provide for a cleaner looking pattern imo and it will also flow better with the back and forth motions that 00:36:980 (1,2,3,4) - give off ok :D
  2. 00:53:948 (5,6) - Having these stacked underneath 00:53:480 (4) - 's slider end really kill the momentum that was going through with the pattern. I think unstacking them and have them spaced at like 0.6x would be neat. Also provides for a better springboard into 00:54:230 (7) - good idea
  3. 01:36:980 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Great pattern here. This was really fun to play! thanks!!
sankyuu for mod *u*

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294,119,82542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Maeglwn
Maeglwn
just modding the normal cause lust asked me to

I think I did some sort of irc thing a while back I think I forget

regardless this is completely rankable and I hope to see it ranked soon

[Normal]
  1. letterbox conflicts with every other diff, fix
  2. 00:08:855 (2,3) - unstack please
  3. 01:14:855 (3,4,5,6,7) - you probably shouldn't have any weird 1/2 notes in this part since it's a normal. I'd just get rid of the 1/2 notes entirely considering how they're already stacked on notes. well, aside from 5, that one is obviously fine
  4. 01:19:730 (1) - I HATE THIS SPINNER SO MUCH, you'd be so much better off just putting notes here instead. spinners for the most part to make vocals better are an awful awful awful thing and you should never ever ever do it
  5. 01:23:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - this entire part is just plain weird. the spinner is fine, but if you change the last spinner and then change these notes to like 1/1 sliders or something that'd be AWESOME. this part would be so cool. at leasti n my opinion :P the way it is right now is just so.. weird. the timing is really weird on these note hits and it looks like they're all the same distance away on the time line because of the triangle, etc. idk. the stack is bothering me too. these notes are just.. meh. I'd recommend sliders or something instead, especially if you get rid of the last spinner
  6. 01:34:730 (1) - this finish really does not feel necessary
  7. 01:41:855 (3,1) - PLEASE fill this pause. with like.. AT LEAST a slider and as ingle tap or something. PLEASE. this is a kiai so you want as much playing as possible, not to mention vocal gaps in a song and not mapping the beat behind it makes for a VERY VERY awkward map. pleeeeeeeeeeease put something in this pause
seems good

just fix these and rank it already jesus it's been FOREVER HANEURE I'VE BEEN WAITING

good luck :3
Haneure
47 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Haneure

Maeglwn wrote:

just modding the normal cause lust asked me to

I think I did some sort of irc thing a while back I think I forget

regardless this is completely rankable and I hope to see it ranked soon

[Normal]
  1. letterbox conflicts with every other diff, fix
  2. 00:08:855 (2,3) - unstack please eh.. changed the part!
  3. 01:14:855 (3,4,5,6,7) - you probably shouldn't have any weird 1/2 notes in this part since it's a normal. I'd just get rid of the 1/2 notes entirely considering how they're already stacked on notes. well, aside from 5, that one is obviously fine minor adjustments
  4. 01:19:730 (1) - I HATE THIS SPINNER SO MUCH, you'd be so much better off just putting notes here instead. spinners for the most part to make vocals better are an awful awful awful thing and you should never ever ever do it aye aye captain!
  5. 01:23:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - this entire part is just plain weird. the spinner is fine, but if you change the last spinner and then change these notes to like 1/1 sliders or something that'd be AWESOME. this part would be so cool. at leasti n my opinion :P the way it is right now is just so.. weird. the timing is really weird on these note hits and it looks like they're all the same distance away on the time line because of the triangle, etc. idk. the stack is bothering me too. these notes are just.. meh. I'd recommend sliders or something instead, especially if you get rid of the last spinner aye aye caaaaaptain
  6. 01:34:730 (1) - this finish really does not feel necessary going to hang onto this.
  7. 01:41:855 (3,1) - PLEASE fill this pause. with like.. AT LEAST a slider and as ingle tap or something. PLEASE. this is a kiai so you want as much playing as possible, not to mention vocal gaps in a song and not mapping the beat behind it makes for a VERY VERY awkward map. pleeeeeeeeeeease put something in this pause aye aye captain
seems good

just fix these and rank it already jesus it's been FOREVER HANEURE I'VE BEEN WAITING

good luck :3
Thanks for the mod, Maeg o/
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
log
21:16 Haneure: o/
21:16 Lust: o/
21:16 Haneure: ee
21:17 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/409572 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Insane]]
21:17 Lust: 00:21:042 (5,1) - this is unrankable, since 5's hitburst obscures 1's repeat making it difficult to see
21:17 *Haneure is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/409572 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Insane]]
21:18 Haneure: ah, so would it do if i just spread apart the locations?
21:18 Lust: just make sude 1's repeat isnt underneath 00:21:042 (5) - 
21:18 Lust: sure*
21:20 Haneure: will do
21:21 Lust: 00:23:292 - add a circle here, so the momentum from the previous play can be continued and the music is accented well 
21:21 Lust: you can just stack the circle on 00:23:480 (2) - 
21:21 Haneure: o
21:22 Lust: the spacing is rather short there anyway, the circle will make the play more clear
21:22 Haneure: done~
21:22 Lust: 00:25:730 (1,2) - stuff like this is fine since the spacing is larger
21:22 Haneure: makes sense
21:22 Lust: 00:32:292 - this might need a circle though
21:22 Lust: you can do that same stacking stuff
21:23 Haneure: hmm, i just went ahead and added a circle like.. http://puu.sh/fj2tF/37895f9c8a.jpg ? if that works
21:23 Lust: thats fine
21:23 Haneure: alright then
21:24 Lust: 01:30:230 (1) - maybe increase the volume just a tiny bit in this section to provide more feedback for the player
21:25 Lust: 01:37:730 (1,1) - same deal here
21:25 Lust: 01:42:230 (4,5) - and here
21:25 Haneure: increased it by 10%
21:25 Haneure: is that enough? or should i up it some more
21:25 Lust: 01:56:855 (1) - and here
21:25 Lust: that should be fine
21:26 Haneure: alright, increased the hitsound volumes
21:27 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421486 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [CDFA's Easy]]
21:27 Lust: 01:30:417 (1) - remove this spinner, poorly placed imo and the space between the end and the start of the next slider isnt enough time
21:28 Lust: 01:32:480 (1) - appears way before the spinner ends and isnt really near the center of the playfield
21:28 Lust: i dont think CDFA would mind if you did that
21:28 Haneure: well, he said i could edit the difficulty as i please
21:28 Haneure: basically handed off the difficulty to me
21:30 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/605555 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Normal]]
21:30 Lust: 01:24:980 (3,4) - ctrl+g these for more apparent flow and a smoother pattern
21:31 Haneure: done
21:31 Lust: same volume raising stuff i told you about 
21:32 Lust: just do the same thing in this diff too
21:32 Haneure: will do!
21:37 Lust: talking to dkun about one small thing in his diff
21:38 Haneure: yee
21:41 Lust: alright go ahead and update
21:41 Lust: c:
21:41 Haneure: uh.. hm
21:41 Lust: no changes on dkun's end
21:41 Haneure: can i ask about something here? on this
21:41 *Haneure is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421486 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [CDFA's Easy]]
21:41 Lust: whats up?
21:42 Haneure: is this fine? if i just add a slider here, like this
21:42 Haneure: http://puu.sh/fj5un/b46dd48ffc.jpg
21:42 Haneure: 01:31:730 (1) -
21:42 Haneure: but it overlaps w/ location of 01:33:980 (3) -  so
21:43 Haneure: i'm not really positive on that being alright, so i just wanted to check
21:43 Lust: its fine how it is, just delete the spinner and you'll be good to go
21:43 Haneure: will do, going to update
21:43 Haneure: no changes on world i guess?
21:43 Lust: nop
21:43 Haneure: awesome :D
21:44 Haneure: ok, submitted
21:46 Lust: everything looking sharp! c:

What we fixed:
  1. Unrankable pattern in the Insane diff
  2. Some rhythm adjustments in the Insane diff
  3. Raised the volumes of certain sections in the Normal and Insane diffs
  4. Bettered the flow of a pattern in the Normal diff
  5. Removed an unfitting spinner in the Easy diff

Post back when you're ready!
Haneure
47 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Haneure

Lust wrote:

log
21:16 Haneure: o/
21:16 Lust: o/
21:16 Haneure: ee
21:17 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/409572 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Insane]]
21:17 Lust: 00:21:042 (5,1) - this is unrankable, since 5's hitburst obscures 1's repeat making it difficult to see
21:17 *Haneure is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/409572 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Insane]]
21:18 Haneure: ah, so would it do if i just spread apart the locations?
21:18 Lust: just make sude 1's repeat isnt underneath 00:21:042 (5) - 
21:18 Lust: sure*
21:20 Haneure: will do
21:21 Lust: 00:23:292 - add a circle here, so the momentum from the previous play can be continued and the music is accented well 
21:21 Lust: you can just stack the circle on 00:23:480 (2) - 
21:21 Haneure: o
21:22 Lust: the spacing is rather short there anyway, the circle will make the play more clear
21:22 Haneure: done~
21:22 Lust: 00:25:730 (1,2) - stuff like this is fine since the spacing is larger
21:22 Haneure: makes sense
21:22 Lust: 00:32:292 - this might need a circle though
21:22 Lust: you can do that same stacking stuff
21:23 Haneure: hmm, i just went ahead and added a circle like.. http://puu.sh/fj2tF/37895f9c8a.jpg ? if that works
21:23 Lust: thats fine
21:23 Haneure: alright then
21:24 Lust: 01:30:230 (1) - maybe increase the volume just a tiny bit in this section to provide more feedback for the player
21:25 Lust: 01:37:730 (1,1) - same deal here
21:25 Lust: 01:42:230 (4,5) - and here
21:25 Haneure: increased it by 10%
21:25 Haneure: is that enough? or should i up it some more
21:25 Lust: 01:56:855 (1) - and here
21:25 Lust: that should be fine
21:26 Haneure: alright, increased the hitsound volumes
21:27 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421486 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [CDFA's Easy]]
21:27 Lust: 01:30:417 (1) - remove this spinner, poorly placed imo and the space between the end and the start of the next slider isnt enough time
21:28 Lust: 01:32:480 (1) - appears way before the spinner ends and isnt really near the center of the playfield
21:28 Lust: i dont think CDFA would mind if you did that
21:28 Haneure: well, he said i could edit the difficulty as i please
21:28 Haneure: basically handed off the difficulty to me
21:30 *Lust is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/605555 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [Normal]]
21:30 Lust: 01:24:980 (3,4) - ctrl+g these for more apparent flow and a smoother pattern
21:31 Haneure: done
21:31 Lust: same volume raising stuff i told you about 
21:32 Lust: just do the same thing in this diff too
21:32 Haneure: will do!
21:37 Lust: talking to dkun about one small thing in his diff
21:38 Haneure: yee
21:41 Lust: alright go ahead and update
21:41 Lust: c:
21:41 Haneure: uh.. hm
21:41 Lust: no changes on dkun's end
21:41 Haneure: can i ask about something here? on this
21:41 *Haneure is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/421486 Hanatan - You and beautiful world [CDFA's Easy]]
21:41 Lust: whats up?
21:42 Haneure: is this fine? if i just add a slider here, like this
21:42 Haneure: http://puu.sh/fj5un/b46dd48ffc.jpg
21:42 Haneure: 01:31:730 (1) -
21:42 Haneure: but it overlaps w/ location of 01:33:980 (3) -  so
21:43 Haneure: i'm not really positive on that being alright, so i just wanted to check
21:43 Lust: its fine how it is, just delete the spinner and you'll be good to go
21:43 Haneure: will do, going to update
21:43 Haneure: no changes on world i guess?
21:43 Lust: nop
21:43 Haneure: awesome :D
21:44 Haneure: ok, submitted
21:46 Lust: everything looking sharp! c:

What we fixed:
  1. Unrankable pattern in the Insane diff
  2. Some rhythm adjustments in the Insane diff
  3. Raised the volumes of certain sections in the Normal and Insane diffs
  4. Bettered the flow of a pattern in the Normal diff
  5. Removed an unfitting spinner in the Easy diff

Post back when you're ready!
Thanks for the help Lust, I can't wait to see this ranked after all this time :cry:
Last edited by Haneure , edited 2 times in total.
Lust
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Lust
Nomination #1

Go go go go
Love
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Love
Few things I want to point out, so hold still.

mp3 so quiet, 45% hitsounds still too loud for the song
Midge
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Midge
Yea ok yea ok YWA OKN

gl :^)
Haneure
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Haneure

Midge wrote:

Yea ok yea ok YWA OKN

gl :^)
keke, thx bruh :^)
Love
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Love
Just going to pop, mp3 is way too quiet.

Add MISERICORDIA, Yuyoyuppe, and cut version to tags.
Remove hanatan from the tags as well.
Move the offset -186 with this new mp3 here. This is how you should move the offset and have the notes snapped with it: http://puu.sh/fGQjz/23d318deb2.png

The mod will be with the new timing. Don't forget to change the volume of the hitsounds as well.

[World]
  1. AR 8.5? Would fit a bit more with this being the hardest difficulty and all.
  2. 00:37:544 (1) - Remove the finisher on this, it's pretty calm and shouldn't need it.
  3. 01:06:419 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is actually a bit awkward to start off a star with a back and forth motion before you do the actual star. So I came up with a differen't pattern. You can make this the easy way with the Compose > Create Polygon Circles with 2x spacing and 6 notes, then move/delete/switch accordingly. It will look like this as the finished result. http://puu.sh/fGS81/451c1d71ad.png
[Insane]
  1. 01:25:544 (1) - The spinner seems a bit out of place due to the vast amount of notes before it. Either change 01:23:669 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - to match the vocals more or just remove the spinner and map through that.
  2. 01:42:044 (4,5) - This won't change playability at all, but it'll look a lot cleaner. http://puu.sh/fGWvp/874d13ae05.png
[dkHard]
  1. 00:00:512 (1) - Any reason for this being on a blue tick? Move it up to 00:00:606 just to keep consistent with the rest of the higher difficulties.
[Normal]
  1. There's quite a bit of inherited sections that are unused, delete those.
  2. Fix the AIMod errors with the checkbox that's there. http://puu.sh/fH06x/d942b646c5.png
  3. 00:37:169 (6,7) - Try making this into a repeat slider that ends on 00:37:544.
  4. 00:53:106 (2) - You should delete this since there's already a slider-note-slider pattern after.
  5. 00:59:856 (3) - Delete this and add a note between the two sliders on 01:00:606, would make a bit more sense since the vocal is present here as well.
  6. 01:22:544 (1) - Move the red point to the right 1 grid and move the slider to the left 1 grid as well. This will just make it dead center.
  7. 01:25:169 (4) - Move this to the left 1 grid for symmetry.
  8. 01:33:044 (4) - Remove the finisher on the start of this and add a finisher to the start of 01:31:544 (1).
  9. 01:55:544 - Change the volume of this to 40%
[CDFA's Easy]
  1. 01:30:231 - Delete this inherit section, it's not being used.
  2. 01:31:544 - Add something here, it feels pretty empty with the start of the kiai being here and all.
Call me back for a recheck and I'll probably re-bubble just for someone else to check the timing as well.
Love
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Love
didn't want to edit, the offset should be 44. Sorry I didn't word that correctly.
Haneure
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Haneure

Love wrote:

Just going to pop, mp3 is way too quiet.

Add MISERICORDIA, Yuyoyuppe, and cut version to tags.
Remove hanatan from the tags as well. yes sir! o7
Move the offset -186 with this new mp3 here. This is how you should move the offset and have the notes snapped with it: http://puu.sh/fGQjz/23d318deb2.png

The mod will be with the new timing. Don't forget to change the volume of the hitsounds as well.

[Insane]
  1. 01:25:544 (1) - The spinner seems a bit out of place due to the vast amount of notes before it. Either change 01:23:669 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - to match the vocals more or just remove the spinner and map through that. ehm.. I'll keep this as is, sorry
  2. 01:42:044 (4,5) - This won't change playability at all, but it'll look a lot cleaner. http://puu.sh/fGWvp/874d13ae05.pngI still want the smooth curve, but I do agree the previous shape looked quite messy. Adjusted though :D
[Normal]
  1. There's quite a bit of inherited sections that are unused, delete those.
  2. Fix the AIMod errors with the checkbox that's there. http://puu.sh/fH06x/d942b646c5.png
  3. 00:37:169 (6,7) - Try making this into a repeat slider that ends on 00:37:544.
  4. 00:53:106 (2) - You should delete this since there's already a slider-note-slider pattern after.
  5. 00:59:856 (3) - Delete this and add a note between the two sliders on 01:00:606, would make a bit more sense since the vocal is present here as well.
  6. 01:22:544 (1) - Move the red point to the right 1 grid and move the slider to the left 1 grid as well. This will just make it dead center.
  7. 01:25:169 (4) - Move this to the left 1 grid for symmetry.
  8. 01:33:044 (4) - Remove the finisher on the start of this and add a finisher to the start of 01:31:544 (1).
  9. 01:55:544 - Change the volume of this to 40%
Fixed all of the above^

[CDFA's Easy]
  1. 01:30:231 - Delete this inherit section, it's not being used.
  2. 01:31:544 - Add something here, it feels pretty empty with the start of the kiai being here and all.
Fixed all of the above^

Call me back for a recheck and I'll probably re-bubble just for someone else to check the timing as well.
Raose
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Raose

Love wrote:

[World]
  1. AR 8.5? Would fit a bit more with this being the hardest difficulty and all. looks nice
  2. 00:37:544 (1) - Remove the finisher on this, it's pretty calm and shouldn't need it. replaced with whistle
  3. 01:06:419 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is actually a bit awkward to start off a star with a back and forth motion before you do the actual star. So I came up with a differen't pattern. You can make this the easy way with the Compose > Create Polygon Circles with 2x spacing and 6 notes, then move/delete/switch accordingly. It will look like this as the finished result. http://puu.sh/fGS81/451c1d71ad.png oohh nice
ty for mod :D

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: youandbeautifulworld.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 91355
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:You and beautiful world
TitleUnicode:You and beautiful world
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Haneure
Version:World
Source:
Tags:vocaloid utaite MISERICORDIA Yuyoyuppe cut version dkun raose CDFA
BeatmapID:539900
BeatmapSetID:138220

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.40000000596046
SliderTickRate:2

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Haneure
47 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Haneure
Updated the map with the mods and some changes (ended up mapping out the part w/ the spinner after all)
Love
osu! Alumni
1,267 posts
Joined August 2010
Love
Did a little irc mod as well.

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16:14 Love: one little thing
16:14 Love: 01:32:294 (3,4) - 
16:14 Haneure: ah?
16:15 Love: 4 is positioned a bit weirdly
16:15 Love: trying to think of another way
16:15 Love: for minimal changes, this would be better http://puu.sh/g2TJN/5b477fac47.png
16:16 Love: lemme see real quick
16:16 Haneure: what if I just swapped around the two notes
16:16 Haneure: where 3 and 4 are
16:16 Haneure: or would the jump from 01:32:481 (4,5) - be a bit much
16:16 Haneure: oh wait
16:17 Love: try swapping 01:32:106 (2,3) - 
16:17 Love: though it wouldn't fit the next ones
16:18 Haneure: ermm hm
16:18 Haneure: i reupdated it w/ a change to that part, would you mind checking on it?
16:18 Haneure: or i'll try to think of a way to make your suggestion work
16:18 Love: hm
16:18 Love: lemme see
16:18 Haneure: uh huhm
16:19 Love: with what you changed
16:19 Love: swap 01:32:106 (2,3) - 
16:19 Love: I mean
16:19 Love: 01:32:106 (2,4) - 
16:19 Love: shit rofl
16:19 Haneure: ah
16:19 Haneure: oh
16:19 Haneure: wait that's just like what i had before then
16:19 Haneure: just spaced out more
16:20 Haneure: oh
16:20 Haneure: no i'm dumb nvm
16:20 Love: XD
16:20 Haneure: that looks pretty nice :D
16:20 Love: ye :P
16:20 Haneure: woo
16:20 Haneure: tyty
16:20 Haneure: was the part that i mapped out in place of the spinner alright?
16:21 Love: yeah, it's fine :P
16:21 Haneure: ok, awesome
16:21 Haneure: i'll reupdate the map now
16:21 Love: mmkay
16:21 Haneure: ok, updated!

ChenYa0Ayase
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ChenYa0Ayase
I love Hanatan's song so i give you a little Mod :D
Good map !!

CDFA'sEasy

Easy song's without mod aren't my strenght , but i try it
Didn't find any problem

World


I didn't find problem in "World" too

Waiting for qualified

I hope your map will been rank soon

Good luck!
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Hello, i'm popping this bubble for this reason :

00:00:606 (1) - In dkun's Hard, Insane and World diff, it is snapped wrongly, this must be 1/6 since you can hear 4 notes between the red and white tick. Plus, this slider sounds clearly offbeat, the piano does not start on the red tick, the timing needs to be more accurate. So try to get a more accurate timing, i'm sorry i can't help with timing.



__________________________________________


Additional mod :

General

  1. The background's dimension is 1290 * 767, it will be better if you redim it to 1280*720.
  2. Disable widescreen support on diffs which have it enabled.

Normal

  1. 00:20:857 (3,4) - They are overlapping the scorebar, move them downward.
  2. 00:35:669 (3) - Could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? I guess it is not intentional, you should fix the distance between objects here.

dkun's Hard

  1. 00:00:419 - (timing section) I recommend you to raise the volume of this timing section to 20%, 5% is close to inaudible and it may be unrankable because hitsounds from objects must be audible, only sliderends, ticks and slide are excluded.
  2. 00:32:294 (2) - this symmetry is a bit "forced" for a Hard diff, it looks like a large jump even if it's 1/1, you can see a distance of 3.00x between these sliders. Try to reduce the distance between them
  3. 01:37:544 (4,1) - same as ^

Insane

  1. 00:10:169 (6) - there should be a higher distance between 00:09:419 (5,6) - , as you did for 00:09:044 (4,5) - , it will be easier to read.
  2. 00:20:012 (2) - there is nothing audible on the blue tick here, adding a circle here can be overmapping, i recommend you to avoid that. So remove this circle because it follows nothing audible.

World

  1. 00:00:419 - (timing section) same as dkun's Hard.

Call me back when you have fixed everything unrankable and got a more accurate timing.
Charles445
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1/6 for slider
dkun
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Cherry Blossom wrote:

dkun's Hard

  1. 00:00:419 - (timing section) I recommend you to raise the volume of this timing section to 20%, 5% is close to inaudible and it may be unrankable because hitsounds from objects must be audible, only sliderends, ticks and slide are excluded. I just discussed this with Charles. I'm not changing this. It's audible.
  2. 00:32:294 (2) - this symmetry is a bit "forced" for a Hard diff, it looks like a large jump even if it's 1/1, you can see a distance of 3.00x between these sliders. Try to reduce the distance between them I humbly decline. I think this is fine.
  3. 01:37:544 (4,1) - same as ^
those
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those

Charles445 wrote:



1/6 for slider
I'm just listening to the preview.. don't you mean 80bpm?
Haneure
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Haneure

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, i'm popping this bubble for this reason :

00:00:606 (1) - In dkun's Hard, Insane and World diff, it is snapped wrongly, this must be 1/6 since you can hear 4 notes between the red and white tick. Plus, this slider sounds clearly offbeat, the piano does not start on the red tick, the timing needs to be more accurate. So try to get a more accurate timing, i'm sorry i can't help with timing.



__________________________________________


Additional mod :

General

  1. The background's dimension is 1290 * 767, it will be better if you redim it to 1280*720.
  2. Disable widescreen support on diffs which have it enabled.
Fixed all of the above

Normal

  1. 00:20:857 (3,4) - They are overlapping the scorebar, move them downward. Fixed
  2. 00:35:669 (3) - Could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? I guess it is not intentional, you should fix the distance between objects here. Fixed


Insane

  1. 00:10:169 (6) - there should be a higher distance between 00:09:419 (5,6) - , as you did for 00:09:044 (4,5) - , it will be easier to read. Makes sense, changed
  2. 00:20:012 (2) - there is nothing audible on the blue tick here, adding a circle here can be overmapping, i recommend you to avoid that. So remove this circle because it follows nothing audible. Sorry, I'll keep this as is for the lead in

World

  1. 00:00:419 - (timing section) same as dkun's Hard. Rose will decline this.

Call me back when you have fixed everything unrankable and got a more accurate timing.

Charles445 wrote:



1/6 for slider Applied these timings
Updated~
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Rebubbled.
Gaia
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Gaia
Oh! :3/
those
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those

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Rebubbled.
BPM. My post is just a few posts above!
Haneure
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Haneure

Gaia wrote:

Oh! :3/
!! :D
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
yeh shud be halved
Gaia
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Gaia

those wrote:

Charles445 wrote:



1/6 for slider
I'm just listening to the preview.. don't you mean 80bpm?
Yes I agree with those, this is doubled bpm )':
I've also asked a few other BN's too so 80bpm should be right

Just half bpm, and remember to double both the SV and the tick rate!!

also, in Insane kiai isn't snapped to 01:31:544 -

with that in mind i have to pop the bubble once again ;~;
[]


[General]
Raose mapped World right? You should put that on the description box or something =w=

some unsnapped green lines here and there o3o

not using the sb right? delete .osb file
you should add ~1500ms of audio leadin for all diffs o3o

[Easy]
00:01:169 - snap to 00:01:171
00:04:544 (1) - 00:07:544 (1) - 01:16:544 (1) - 01:31:544 (1) - missing finish on the head
00:31:544 (4) - ^ finish would fit better imo
00:54:794 (3) - touching hp bar
00:57:794 (2) - 01:08:294 (2) - 01:11:294 (6) - whistle fits slider end better i think
01:21:794 (6) - finish on end ?

also some nazi things like blankets otherwise its nice and dank B)

[Normal]
00:13:160 - snap to 00:13:169
01:29:858 - snap to 01:29:856
00:30:044 (1,2,3,4) - what's this following? It sounds just like the other rhythms, this sounds better

00:58:544 (1,2,3) - it seems like you like following vocals, so my suggestion is..

01:42:044 (4,5,6) - personally would prefer using a repeat slider here since this is bad polarity in normals =w= (its not as bad as blue tick polarity tho, so it's fine if you want to keep it)

[Hard]
00:00:419 - snap to 00:00:437
00:01:169 - snap to 00:01:171
00:03:794 (5) - missing clap on head
00:04:544 (1) - missing whistle/finish on head (probably whistle judging by 00:07:544 (1) - )
00:08:856 - not a note i'd ignore personally o3o
00:10:544 (1) - I'm sure you meant to use soft whistle right?
00:12:794 (5) - whistle on the head of this ?
00:13:544 (1) - 00:19:544 (1) - 00:31:544 (1) - 01:16:544 (8) - 01:22:544 (5) - soft finish on head (the rest just find yourself if you agree with me o3o)
00:21:044 (3) - remove drum sampleset on the sliderend?
00:24:794 (4) - probably needs a nc to signify the change in spacing
00:50:107 (2) - put it at 00:50:856 - instead?
01:06:794 (5) - 01:15:794 (6) - missing clap on head
01:09:044 (3) - whistle instead?
01:25:169 (5) - i'd prefer you not ignore the beat on 01:25:544 - because it's quite a stressed note and ignoring it shounds empty ><
01:39:794 - recommend a circle here for the clap
01:43:169 (9,1) - i know you're going for the symmetry here but the spacing here is way too big :> how about this? http://puu.sh/gd7wm/20e6c60be7.jpg

Just hitsound suggestions!

[Insane]
00:13:160 - snap to 00:13:169

00:01:544 (1,2,3) - i'd personally prefer an nc whenever there's a SV change, but its no rule saying u gotta do it so just pointing it out!!
00:27:606 (5) - 00:29:106 (2) - what are you following here? you were following violins before but then suddenly switched to piano?
00:53:106 (2) - try to avoid notes like these as they miss the snare beat on the white tick (not an issue, simply just pointing it out again :p)
01:22:544 (2) - no sv change here? try to be consistent ><!
01:38:106 (3,4) - this jump here is waaay too big and too sudden, please nerf orz (maybe switch 4 and 6)

[World]
00:01:169 - snap to 00:01:171
00:05:294 (3) - 00:27:794 (7) - whistle on head?
01:15:419 (5) - this spacing compared to (3) -> (4) is really small, maybe try this http://puu.sh/gd8lF/4f7f6ceb06.jpg

really awesome >~<


i seriously hope this will be the last time, ahhhhhh
Cherry Blossom
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Gaia wrote:

also, in Insane kiai isn't snapped to 01:31:544 -
lol aimod why did you do ? x)


Awh i see, it was snapped on a 1/16 tick.
Eni
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Eni
the wonders of 2015 ranking
Shiro
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Shiro
Okay I was asked to look at this, just a clarification: the kiai time *is* snapped 1/16 before the downbeat. Granted, that doesn't make sense and should be changed, but I don't believe it warranted a pop. In general, kiai must be snapped but not always on the downbeat. The most common case is drumlines that go for cymbal crashes 1/2 before the downbeat - in those cases, having the kiai start on the red tick is better.
Second thing: BPM is doubled, please set it to what it should be (75 and 80)
Third: 00:00:637 (1) - this starts 1/6 too late, which is extremely confusing. It should start on the white tick, where there is a clear piano sound.
Fourth: hitsounds are really quiet and that's a bother, you should make them louder.

While I agree with this pop, I don't consider the kiai time to be a poppable issue. Rest is though.
Haneure
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Okay, thanks for the help/mods everyone! I'll edit this post w/ a reply to the above mods and update the map with that in a bit after I get back home.


SPOILER
also, if you're not going to offer something helpful to this mapset, I suggest you kindly refrain from making those sorts of posts, thanks. call me butthurt because i am but man, can't help but be a little miffed after like 3 pops on a relatively simple mapset. orz

Edit: nvm just made a new post anyway
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Kibbleru
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i believe previous BNs can come and rank this.
Charles445
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Charles445
Halving BPM is a waste of time by the way
There's no technical reason to do it
If anything it makes it harder to snap things properly
ztrot
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ztrot
yo everything here seems fine the silly bpm half is not needed as the SV isn't being abused to achieve a speed over 3.6 so halfing it really does nothing for it.
I do ask that you up the overall hit-sound vol by 15% for all sections if you would. After that I'll throw you a bubble back.
Haneure
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Haneure

Gaia wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:169 - snap to 00:01:171 ?? it should already be snapped to that
00:04:544 (1) - 00:07:544 (1) - 01:16:544 (1) - 01:31:544 (1) - missing finish on the head keeping as is
00:31:544 (4) - ^ finish would fit better imo added finish
00:54:794 (3) - touching hp bar fixed
00:57:794 (2) - 01:08:294 (2) - 01:11:294 (6) - whistle fits slider end better i think fixed
01:21:794 (6) - finish on end ? added finish

also some nazi things like blankets otherwise its nice and dank B)

[Normal]
00:13:160 - snap to 00:13:169 fixed
01:29:858 - snap to 01:29:856 fixed
00:30:044 (1,2,3,4) - what's this following? It sounds just like the other rhythms, this sounds better it's following the piano that comes in. no change

00:58:544 (1,2,3) - it seems like you like following vocals, so my suggestion is.. no change

01:42:044 (4,5,6) - personally would prefer using a repeat slider here since this is bad polarity in normals =w= (its not as bad as blue tick polarity tho, so it's fine if you want to keep it) sorry, no change

[Insane]
00:13:160 - snap to 00:13:169 fixed

00:01:544 (1,2,3) - i'd personally prefer an nc whenever there's a SV change, but its no rule saying u gotta do it so just pointing it out!! keeping it, sorry
00:27:606 (5) - 00:29:106 (2) - what are you following here? you were following violins before but then suddenly switched to piano? I am following the piano here because it has more of a presence here
00:53:106 (2) - try to avoid notes like these as they miss the snare beat on the white tick (not an issue, simply just pointing it out again :p) I don't see a need to change, sorry
01:22:544 (2) - no sv change here? try to be consistent ><! piano has enough of a presence to warrant having no sv change this one time. no change. 'Ive declined this many times already
01:38:106 (3,4) - this jump here is waaay too big and too sudden, please nerf orz (maybe switch 4 and 6) no thank you. spacing of the notes warrants this.

[World]
00:01:169 - snap to 00:01:171 it's already snapped
00:05:294 (3) - 00:27:794 (7) - whistle on head? no change
01:15:419 (5) - this spacing compared to (3) -> (4) is really small, maybe try this http://puu.sh/gd8lF/4f7f6ceb06.jpg I personally think that a difference in spacing is okay for the highest difficulty of this mapset.

I was given permission to edit/make changes to Rose's difficulty here, for clarification.

really awesome >~<


i seriously hope this will be the last time, ahhhhhh
Thank you for the mod, updated with increased hitsound volumes across the mapset as well

Edit: submitted w/ dkun's changes as well.
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ztrot
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looks good to me, I see no need to halve the bpm so I'm gonna leave this here... bubbled
Kibbleru
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i thought doubled bpm was just straight up unrankable?

i hope we start clarifying the RC soon

also this isnt important but how come in hard insane world diffs u guys omitted that first piano note at 00:00:571 - ?
sounds like there shud be one there to me owo
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