Krimek
Krimek wrote:
[Normal][Insane]
- 01:02:476 (3) - Make that slider not so strongly curved, this might be better. ✓
- 01:09:196 (1,2,3) - They aren't linear to each others. Try 01:09:676 (2) - (x:405|y:117). ✓
- 01:20:716 (1) - Fix blanket ✓
- 02:07:756 (3) - Make it a bit more curvy. ✓
- 02:20:236 (1) - Maybe make that slider edgy? ✓
- 00:53:596 (5) - Move it to (x:232|y:276) for better triangle. ✓
- 01:06:316 (3) - Improve blanket ✓
- 01:42:556 (1) - Make it less curvy since the next 2 sliders aren't as well. Is for Blanket with the others.
- 02:01:036 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket(s) ✓
Oko
Okoratu wrote:
[Norml]
ichhassenormalhitwhistles.jpg ichliebenormalhitwhistles.jpg
01:39:916 (1) - head
01:43:756 (1) -
01:47:596 (1) - head cuz 01:51:436 (1) -
02:25:996 (1) - head
02:33:676 (1) - head
02:37:516 (1) -
ich wuenschte du wuerdest soft whistles auch mehr wie 00:53:836 (1,2,3) - verwenden im rest des songs
01:02:476 (3) - der sieht nen bisschen zerdrueckt aus, vor allem im unteren teil ein bisschen weniger zerdruecken funktioniert ebenso ✓
01:04:156 (2,3,1,2,3) - ist unangenehm kompliziert imo, etwas wie 01:00:316 (3,4,1) - wuerde besser funktionieren Was ist daran kompliziert? o:
01:37:516 (3) - normal sampleset? ✓
02:01:036 (1) - ekelhaft nah an hp bar ✓
02:19:996 (4) - etwas nach links fuer smoother transition ✓
[I]
00:54:556 (4,5,6) - wtf das kann man doch kaum als 1/4 richtig lesen :c, wuerde 00:54:796 (5,6) - stacken oder so damit das klarer is ✓
01:47:116 (1,2,3) - das laesst sich auch nicht wirklich nice lesen ;; Weiß noch nicht, wie ich das machen soll :/
02:24:556 (2,3,4) - mehr space waere glaub ich nich verkehrt ✓
Kibbleru
Kibbleru wrote:
bad mod
insanenormal
- 02:24:316 (1) - not too sure what you're trying to follow here but the music kinda sounds 1/4 for me ✓ Oops, copied the rhythm from the other one earlier *runs*
- 01:33:196 (2,3) - maybe use a slider instead, these notes aren't as strong as 01:34:876 (2,3) - so i don't think it would need 2 circles also the rhythm gets somewhat weird so sliders would help. (i mean the music not the hitobjects) ✓
Near
Near wrote:
Normal
01:00:316 (3) - Feels weird to have nothing emphasizing this part, since the slider is trying to put enphasis, what do you think about a whistle? Sounds good here. You can do it on the other diff too. ✓
I'll list below some sliders you can do the same
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02:19:276 (3) - Try curving this 180º. Flows really really better imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2763291. Meh, wanted this to a bit more unique :bInsane
01:22:396 - You can add a circle here, it's really weird and confusing without it. Plus, this is the only part of this section you use this kind of pattern starting on a blue tick. ✓
01:31:516 (4) - This is more like a preference thing but... instead of a 1/2 slider you can add triplets or a circle + slider to emphisize this part of the song. Wouldn't be overmap since this whole secion is full 1/4. Following these whistle like sounds ;w;
01:42:556 (1,1,1) - I love what you did here, srsly. :3
01:47:596 (1) - COMBO BREAK HOW TO FIX
02:16:156 - Do the same thing about the red tick here too please ;_; ✓[/notice]
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Kwan
IamKwaN wrote:
[I]I am too lazy, throw out a 1-diff mod and run~
- 00:48:556 - this is basically a kick instead of snare, since you didn't capture kicks for hitsounding, just leave the hitsound here empty is fine. Same goes for 00:52:396 - Leaving it out sounds weird. Getting a new sample for this anyways I guess.
- 00:54:556 (4,5,6,7) - You need to alter the spacing so as to distinguish the difference of rhythm gaps. ✓ Messed this up after applying mod lol
- 00:55:756 (1) - Ignoring the stress at 00:55:876 - and capturing the upbeat at 00:55:996 - make it incomprehensible. Chop it into a 1/4 slider and a circle. ✓ Not exactly the instrument I am following here but meh, can't hurt.
- 00:59:956 (2) - You won't start a slider on a upbeat instead of a downbeat, why not something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765133 ✓ I don't even remember why I did it like this lol
- 01:07:636 (2) - I don't understand why you sacrifice the snare for putting the hitsounds and choose such rhythms D: Same for 01:33:556 (7) - 01:37:396 (3) - 01:41:236 (7) - 02:01:396 (2) - I didn't follow drums here at all. The instrument always playing these doubles felt much more intuitive to play for me so I went for this and I also don't want to spam 1/4 to cover that white tick as well :/
- 01:36:796 (2,3) - ^ Regarding to above, I have an additional justification, switching instruments make it really weird. If you can capture 01:37:036 - , it would be a lot better to start 01:37:396 (3) - on blue tick. ✓
- 01:08:596 (7,8) - This spacing gives me an impression of untidiness. Intentional to show the vocal's start.
- Ah.. about the hitsounds, I guess you need one custom sample for kicks really, normal sampleset doesn't fit good for kicks, like 01:08:236 (4,6) - they should suppose have the same hitsound, while the snare at 01:08:716 - uses the N sampleset. I guess you need to re-do the hitsounds and differentiate different types of drums.
- 01:22:396 - You love polarity a lot so why skipping 01:22:396 - where it is worthwhile to put a circle with whistle? ✓ Well, I wanted to follow that instrument on the blue tick only but I personally already knew it doesn't work well *runs* Fixed it now o/
- 01:25:756 - Skipping a much heavier kick than 01:25:636 - isn't a good idea, try this maybe: http://puu.sh/fTAMd.jpg This is against the instrument I am following here which ignores the red tick. Even though the red tick might be stronger, it would sound pretty weird to me following it in the overall impression of the pattern :/
- 01:42:556 (1,1,1) - About this gimmick, it doesn't really fit. I assume you're following whistle-like instruments for these sliders 01:42:556 (1,1) - on the heads, so what are you following on head of 01:43:156 (1) - ? I have already asked for several opinions on this before I even completed mapping the part to avoid stuff like this. I am following this funky instrument thingy here.
- 01:55:276 (1) - Soft finish fits better. ✓
- Nah, rhythms are most likely the same if I move forwards, I stop repeating stuff. What I expect are more splendid hitsounding and rhythms on an experienced mapper like you :C