Hello from my
modding queue [Easy]
00:18:479 (2,3) - This is too confusing and bunched up for new players. Consider changing it.
00:22:693 (1) - Put this right in front of the last slider
00:31:288 (3,4) - These sliders are too short and most new players would confuse it for 2 notes.
00:51:008 (3) - This shape doesn't look too good. Fix it up a bit
01:32:805 (1,2) - White tick to red tick is too fast for new players to read.
01:38:199 (1,2,3) - This is MUCH too confusing. Change it too mabye just one repeat slider.
The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop.
Approach rate and Overall difficulty down by 1
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.
Overall I think your biggest problem is that you are making the map too confusing and scrunched up by trying to hit every beat. In easy you dont REALLY need to hit every beat, and plenty of maps don't anyway. I suggest you don't use so many small sliders, as it doesn't look good, and is too confusing to read for new players. Remember easy is for new players that can't read notes fast.[Normal]
00:09:715 (2) - Fix blanket
00:15:783 (5) - Please dont overlap. Normal mode players assume that since it's so close, it's faster than it really is.
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these 2 or at least make them the same shape.
00:30:783 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:31:457 (2,3,4) - Fix this up a bit.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249662700:36:850 (4) - This curves too much.
00:40:727 (3,1,2) - Clean this up a bit.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249662900:46:963 (1,2,3) - Blanket these
00:49:659 (1,2) - Make these perfectly parallel
00:57:075 (2,1) - Blanket
01:01:288 (4) - This is an odd slider shape.
01:09:041 (4,5) - These two sliders are unnecessary. Combine them into 1
01:11:738 (3,4) - ^
01:12:412 (5,1) - Fix blanket
01:15:951 (2) - Curve this to blanket 1
01:35:502 (3) - Make this blanket 1
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496667The kiai time keeps on turning on and off, which isn't good. Kiai time should be from 00:57:749 - 01:26:738 - , non stop.
I suggest changing the colors to fit the background.
Overall cleanliness if your biggest problem here. Alot of the blankets are sub-par for ranked, and some of the parts look sloppy. However other than looks, this is a good difficulty.[Hard]
00:04:996 (2) - Fix blanket
00:11:906 (1) - Curve less
00:16:625 (4,1) - Stack perfectly
00:25:390 (1,2) - Blanket these two
00:32:131 (5) - Curve down
00:33:816 (2,1,2,3,4) - Fix up a bit
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/249686700:36:850 (5) - Curve less for a blanket
00:56:738 (1,1,1) - These are unnecessary
01:38:199 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
HP drain and Overall difficulty up by 1
Kiai is inconsistent between difficulties
Overall quite good, just fix the blankets and a few other minor problems.[Overall]
This is quite a good map. The main problem is the cleanliness of the modes. They don't look too good. However aside from bad looks and patterns sometimes, this is pretty good. I use overall too much...