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smd

desperatediffs: 00:38:123 - should have a drumwhistle like 00:35:529 - sounds like what on lower diffs wehre they're mapped with the exact same rhythmzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hard
00:37:637 (4,5,6) - not really liking how 1/2 spacing here is visually the same as 1/1 spacing right before it at 00:36:664 (1,2) - .... but then again if you make it less pattern is ruined why do you do this to me

mao
00:43:150 (5) - nice finish dude
00:04:556 (3,4,1) - like is the nonlogic spacing just for visuals cuz 1 is way more impacting than 4 yet 4 has the hugespacing and 1 has the nospacing
00:22:718 (4,1) - probably just me but like would look better with consistent or higher spacing rather than lower than usual

zetera
would be nice if the overlaps you were using were... cleaner i guess? right now they're just "somewhere under another object," but if you made them consistently overlapping the same amount for each one, it would look more structured/less messy (so like compare current overlaps vs consistent overlaps)

quality mod B)

Hi~ request in-game moe






Other diffs have no problem.
Mukyu~

catchy



Additionally:
Change background resolution to 1366x768 - and probably higher quality.

Can't really find moar.. Aber ey. Es ist 2 Uhr morgens, don't blame me!

pishifat wrote:

smd

desperatediffs: 00:38:123 - should have a drumwhistle like 00:35:529 - sounds like what on lower diffs wehre they're mapped with the exact same rhythmzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Applied

hard
00:37:637 (4,5,6) - not really liking how 1/2 spacing here is visually the same as 1/1 spacing right before it at 00:36:664 (1,2) - .... but then again if you make it less pattern is ruined why do you do this to me I made the 1/1 spacing a little bit higher, but I suppose it's fine since the tails use regular 1/2-spacing

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ request in-game moe

- Easy :

1. 00:09:096 (3,1) - Honestly I don't like how flow works here. Even if new combo could make it work, continue movement from the actual end of 00:10:394 (1) - is more logic for player. I think it's really fine since there is a 2/1-gap and I intentionally break the flow a bit there
2. 00:11:691 (3,4) - Invert timeline position of them (http://puu.sh/kg3sY/28d521b60e.jpg) because miss 00:12:339 - sounds really akward when you play it. They are following the main melody though :c
3. 00:16:879 (3,4) - ^ ^
4. 00:28:556 (1) - Curve it juste a little more to catch better 00:29:529 (2,3) - . Okay!

- Insane :

1. 00:16:231 (5) - I would move it to 336:304 for two reasons : first, it would make a good pattern by align 00:15:583 (1,2,5) - , and second, it makes spacing more coherent to similar parts of the song (but you have to replace 00:16:718 (6,7,8,9) - if you do it). Hmm I prefer the current low over that to be honest
2. 00:34:394 (3) - I don't like this flow who force a triangle invert at movement of your slider, it would work better like that -> http://puu.sh/kg4zt/c4db683f0c.jpg . Changed! Nice suggestion

Other diffs have no problem.
Mukyu~

CrimsonClaw wrote:

catchy

Additionally:
Change background resolution to 1366x768 - and probably higher quality. Scaling it even more (to 1366x768) doesn't make sense. I still need to find a higher quality background though

Can't really find moar.. Aber ey. Es ist 2 Uhr morgens, don't blame me!

Thanks everyone! ^3^

Wow, quick mods.

pishifat wrote:

smd

zetera
would be nice if the overlaps you were using were... cleaner i guess? right now they're just "somewhere under another object," but if you made them consistently overlapping the same amount for each one, it would look more structured/less messy (so like compare current overlaps vs consistent overlaps) Tried to fix them accordingly. If only there was a tool to measure the distance of those..

Nozhomi wrote:

CrimsonClaw wrote:

catchy

Zetera's Insane

pishifat wrote:

Zetera
would be nice if the overlaps you were using were... cleaner i guess? right now they're just "somewhere under another object," but if you made them consistently overlapping the same amount for each one, it would look more structured/less messy (so like compare current overlaps vs consistent overlaps)

aka:
00:05:529 (2,4)
00:10:231 (4,5)
00:11:691 (1,1)
00:11:853 (2,1)
00:13:475 (2,4)
00:17:529 (3,2)
00:24:015 (3,1)
00:34:231 (2,4)
00:36:339 (1,3)
00:36:664 (2,1) Thank you, helped me out!

Other Stuffz:
00:05:204 (1) - too high spacing I guess, reduce to 3x (or increase the spacing between those 00:06:339 (4,1) ) Agreed, made something like a blanket.
00:07:799 (1) - make it a proper blanket here and use some more spacing probably? I disagree. Creating a blanket would not follow my intentions and would alter the player's movement.
00:09:096 (1,2) - you have been using high spaced jumps here, wouldn't it be nice if you did that 00:09:096 (1,2) - here too? I used this pattern to keep the oval flow. I can decrease the spacing of said pattern tho. Also, you linked the same thing twice.
00:13:637 (3) - increase spacing a bit to stress that beat even more Used the same spacing as 00:12:664 (1,2) - have. I only did this with eye measurement before, so it wasn't exactly similar.
00:18:177 (1) - same as ^ I intentionally broke the oval flow at 00:17:529 (3,4,1) - to stress this beat. Also, I used a spacing different to the one for the objects 3 and 4. So imo, it is stressed enough.
00:14:448 (2) - strg+j this slider for flow-purposes Fine.
00:16:231 (3) - same as ^ - additionaly: try to even it a bit This slider was intentional, because there is a slight break between it and the following object. So I broke the flow to make the gap somewhat more understandable.

MOVE

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Thanks guys!

update

I'm going to apply these mods soon, I'm just a bit busy atm

my, my, desp mapping tacos

you hsould put "warning inappropiate lyrics" xdd

this is alive? o.o

nice.

Yeah babe

[General]

1. Don't be afraid to use 2.80SV! It's rankable, and believe me when I say that it'll make this map much easier for players. (by this I mean DO IT)
2. The "MOOOVE"s can be big notes yeah yeah?

[Oni]

1. HP6, we're going to go upwards in HP for this song, because of how short it is and how HP works very poorly in taiko. I'll explain along the way.
   
   
2. 00:08:772 (22,23,24,25,26) - d dd dk would be cool to follow vocals again, so it can be (vocals -> drums -> vocals ->drums)
3. 00:23:691 (68) - finisher too? Both of the call out sounds as big notes would fit nicely.
4. 00:28:880 (86,87,88) - kdk? Fits vocals and actually sounds nice as a rhythm.
5. 00:31:799 (97) - Remove finish...
   00:32:448 (99,100,101) - Then add a finisher to each of these? Similar to authentic style vocal emphasizing :p

[Muzukashii]

1. OD5, as 4 is very low and players should be accurate at this level anyways.
2. HP7, short songs need higher HP to be worth anything.
   
   
3. 00:24:015 (48) - Finisher on this note doesn't quite fit too well since without mapping the first shout, it seems like you're following an instrument. May as well follow that assumption through and remove the finisher.
4. 00:27:258 - Adding a don should make for better spread, Futsuu is already about as empty as this diff is.
5. 00:29:853 - ^
6. 00:32:448 (68) - k? It looks like you're commiting to the vocals so you may as well.
7. 00:36:339 - Add a don for the same spread reasons as before. Oni is kinda intense here.

[Futsuu]

1. HP8, because HP rules are different for taiko. (You can currently pass with 40% LOL)
2. HP4, amounts lower than this are very effortless.
   
   
3. 00:07:799 (11,12,13,14,15) - Notice how this is 1/2? I think you can restructure this part to have an even mapping. I recommend d kdd k d k d k d kdd k
4. d k d (break goes here) (onbeat is here, where you repeat)
5. 00:31:799 (48) - Delete, for the sake of a 1/1 break.

[Kantan]

1. HP9, same reason (except you can literally be a dead cat and pass this diff)
2. OD4, same reason.
   
   
3. 00:18:177 (16,17,18,19,20) - I don't know, in other diffs you map this part of the song easier but here it's a hard part. Maybe put this d k d k d at the
4. middle of this section? Like so:
   
5. 00:25:961 (23,24,25,26) - k k k d d d, definitely. Futsuu has this part rather complicated and spread kinda sucks.

MOVE BITCH

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]

1. Don't be afraid to use 2.80SV! It's rankable, and believe me when I say that it'll make this map much easier for players. (by this I mean DO IT) Ehh... Why would there be a need for 2,8x SV here... I am a noob taiko player and I can read and play it just fine, there is no 1/8 or anything confusing in the diffs o.o I changed it to 1,6x SV for now, to have it a bit faster and fit the pace of the song better, but I don't think I will use anything higher than that
2. The "MOOOVE"s can be big notes yeah yeah? I don't think they are as strong as the vocals in the last part D:

[Oni]

1. HP6, we're going to go upwards in HP for this song, because of how short it is and how HP works very poorly in taiko. I'll explain along the way. Okay, fixed
   
   
2. 00:08:772 (22,23,24,25,26) - d dd dk would be cool to follow vocals again, so it can be (vocals -> drums -> vocals ->drums) Fixed
3. 00:23:691 (68) - finisher too? Both of the call out sounds as big notes would fit nicely. Applied
4. 00:28:880 (86,87,88) - kdk? Fits vocals and actually sounds nice as a rhythm. Fixed!
5. 00:31:799 (97) - Remove finish...
   00:32:448 (99,100,101) - Then add a finisher to each of these? Similar to authentic style vocal emphasizing :p Nah, for me, the first vocals are much more strong than these... I added a finish for the call out too though

[Muzukashii]

1. OD5, as 4 is very low and players should be accurate at this level anyways. Alright
2. HP7, short songs need higher HP to be worth anything. Okay Okay
   
   
3. 00:24:015 (48) - Finisher on this note doesn't quite fit too well since without mapping the first shout, it seems like you're following an instrument. May as well follow that assumption through and remove the finisher. Instead I added the call out, as Muzu is not dense enough anyway right?
4. 00:27:258 - Adding a don should make for better spread, Futsuu is already about as empty as this diff is.
5. 00:29:853 - ^
6. 00:32:448 (68) - k? It looks like you're commiting to the vocals so you may as well. Fixed!
7. 00:36:339 - Add a don for the same spread reasons as before. Oni is kinda intense here.

About the spread issues, I added a few dons at different places to fill up 1/1-gaps, not at those you mentioned though. The reason is that I want to emphasize the special breaks there when the vocals end and start at red ticks.

[Futsuu]

1. HP8, because HP rules are different for taiko. (You can currently pass with 40% LOL) This is so weird lel
2. HP4, amounts lower than this are very effortless. I suppose you mean OD? Then fixd
   
   
3. 00:07:799 (11,12,13,14,15) - Notice how this is 1/2? I think you can restructure this part to have an even mapping. I recommend d kdd k d k d k d kdd k
4. d k d (break goes here) (onbeat is here, where you repeat) I didn't quite understand what you mean because one timestamp is missing. I just kept it as it is for now and added a little bit more density? ;w;
5. 00:31:799 (48) - Delete, for the sake of a 1/1 break. Uhh.. I'm not going to delete the most important vocal around here :c

[Kantan]

1. HP9, same reason (except you can literally be a dead cat and pass this diff) Alright
2. OD4, same reason. Yey
   
   
3. 00:18:177 (16,17,18,19,20) - I don't know, in other diffs you map this part of the song easier but here it's a hard part. Maybe put this d k d k d at the Reduced density
4. middle of this section? Like so:
   Nah, I don't really think this fits..
5. 00:25:961 (23,24,25,26) - k k k d d d, definitely. Futsuu has this part rather complicated and spread kinda sucks. Uhh.. not sure about this one, but I'd like to keep emphasis on the strong vocals here instead of adding filler ks... Also I don't want to have the same rhythm in every measure

MOVE BITCH

Thank you very much! Some little parts of the mod I didn't really get, oh well.
About the spread, I will see what I can do to improve it further. I didn't know Taiko was so picky about spread before compared to Standard, since my full Taiko spread had GDs by pros to fit the spread...

It is... REALLY strict. We better have not a single section of the map with equal density (unless the song doesn't give for more) or the DQs come in pairs.

I'll put this as a placeholder for a possible future mod.......................................

Yyyyeaaah especially in a song like this spread is going to annihilate you lol. And for that missing timestamp, I added that bullet point on accident, whoops. But I don't recommend more notes in that section because the gap between Kantan and Futsuu is fucking gigantic.

Hello just a nitpicky guy here.

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)

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Lanturn's Beginner

Easy

Normal

The upper difficulties are cool to me, Good luck~

Alright I'm going to rearrange the Taiko Diffs so the spread will be better. And I will apply Crimmi's Mod soon.

As requested

[General]
Please get a better mp3. This one just randomly stops in the middle of a sound, which sound terrible

[Lanturn]
00:18:177 (1) - Please don't make it in such way the borders touch each other, please "space" them a little

[50cc]
00:18:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uhm, did you make a mistake here with DS? Make it all 1.2 (like the rest)

[100cc]
00:08:448 (2,3,4) - Spacing? Shouldn't it be 1.2?
00:18:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
00:32:448 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
Uhm, since when are jumps allowed in Easy/Normal? O.o

[150cc]
00:23:853 (2) - Please space normally, stacks as these are quite hard to play, also due the fact this is quite fast (185 bpm 1/2)

[150cc Mirror]
00:35:042 (5) - What's the point of an extended slider? It feels a bit too much. A 1/4 is good enough

[Mao plays on a WiiU, so he has 200cc as well]
CS 2.5 O.o
Great diff

[Zetera also has a WiiU, bu he likes 200cc Mirror]
Also great

[Speedhack, 999cc]
00:03:258 (3,4) - The fact (3) is a wiggle and (4) is a cruve feels rather weird to me. Why not make them both similar?
00:08:448 (3,4) - ^^
00:11:853 (2) - Make it straight, for consistency with the previous similar patterns
00:13:637 (3,4) - The fact (3) is a wiggle and (4) is a cruve feels rather weird to me. Why not make them both similar?
00:22:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please give the whole part 1.5 spacing. The (3) really feels like 1/4 distance. If the "Jump" becomes bigger, it'll be seen as 1/2 making it play more naturally
00:24:664 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please try the following rhythm, it feels more natural (and follows the song more)

00:30:664 (5) - Remove a reverse and put a circle at 00:30:988 (see above)
00:38:610 (1,1) - Stack?
00:41:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try this rhythm


I like this map a lot
Only diff which needs a bit more attention is the Vidyagames (wow, I type a diff name like it is O.o)
You are free to call me after 12 sp
Good luck!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Alright I'm going to rearrange the Taiko Diffs so the spread will be better.

tell me when you're done `_J`

ok dad

Changed the mushroom to a generic slider because it was ugly. as for the banana, I'd like to keep where it currently ends. If I read that right, it means it would end after the song ends if I applied the change for the banana.

Thanks for the mods Baraatje and Crimmi

Fixed stuff from pishi. @Noz: Why is that stupid? Don't really get it o:

On Oni, 1.6 SV is just really shitty. Any other SV would work. Try 2.0 or 2.8. Much better, right? I like the map though

[Zetera also has a WiiU, bu he likes 200cc Mirror]
Also great

How do you know I own a WiiU??

200cc is only for WiiU

Star GL.

will revive this soon

First step would be to update with my diff

When >_>

It has been a long time but I hope I will be able to apply all of these mods this weekend!

nice

Alright,
Revived.

I made the Kantan more dense to fit the difficulty spread, the rhythm seems kinda random to me now. I will have to talk to professional Taiko mappers and modders to clean this up more.
I also use 2.0x SV for Muzukashii and Oni now.

Crimmi wrote:

Hello just a nitpicky guy here.

General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)

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1. That BG is kind of bad, maybe you can use one of these alternatives?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
   Found a better background.
   
2. Consider adding "Soyo Oka" "Move Bitch" & "Ludacris" Since their songs are used in this mashup.

Added those tags.

Easy

1. 00:43:475 (1) - It would be better if this was just two or three notes.

I don't think so, I prefer the map to end at the last note

Normal

1. 00:05:691 (2) - It'll feel better that this was removed and (1) was extended to it's place like 00:02:610 (1,2). I would do that but I want to have some more density for spread-purposes
2. 00:10:880 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:43:475 (6) - Maybe shorten this back to the red tick. Same as Easy

The upper difficulties are cool to me, Good luck~

Thanks a lot!

Baraatje123 wrote:

As requested

[General]
Please get a better mp3. This one just randomly stops in the middle of a sound, which sound terrible This is a soundcloud mashup song, there is no other mp3 than this one. It's probably supposed to end like this

[50cc]
00:18:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uhm, did you make a mistake here with DS? Make it all 1.2 (like the rest)

[100cc]
00:08:448 (2,3,4) - Spacing? Shouldn't it be 1.2?
00:18:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
00:32:448 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
Uhm, since when are jumps allowed in Easy/Normal? O.o

These spacing changes are no problems in E/N. In Easy, that one are big gaps and they make a clean and readable pattern. In Normal, those are used to emphasize things and make more clean patterns. Newbies won't use a ruler to measure the spacing, it can be changed for the sake of certain patterns as long as it is not misreadable as another gap. These are no "jumps" either, just simple spacing changes, because the speed of movement is not significantly changed.

[150cc]
00:23:853 (2) - Please space normally, stacks as these are quite hard to play, also due the fact this is quite fast (185 bpm 1/2) I will think about this, but I really want to stress that strong vocal with the antijump - jump concept

[150cc Mirror]
00:35:042 (5) - What's the point of an extended slider? It feels a bit too much. A 1/4 is good enough I'd like to keep this one as a variation and because it follows the vocals nicely

[Speedhack, 999cc]
00:03:258 (3,4) - The fact (3) is a wiggle and (4) is a cruve feels rather weird to me. Why not make them both similar? I use wiggle sliders for "bitch" because I think it fits nicely xD
00:08:448 (3,4) - ^^ ^
00:11:853 (2) - Make it straight, for consistency with the previous similar patterns Variation is a good thing
00:13:637 (3,4) - The fact (3) is a wiggle and (4) is a cruve feels rather weird to me. Why not make them both similar?
00:22:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please give the whole part 1.5 spacing. The (3) really feels like 1/4 distance. If the "Jump" becomes bigger, it'll be seen as 1/2 making it play more naturally Increased the 1/2-spacing, not that much though (I think it's more readable now)
00:24:664 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please try the following rhythm, it feels more natural (and follows the song more)
Hmm I don't think so.. I like my current pattern more
00:30:664 (5) - Remove a reverse and put a circle at 00:30:988 (see above) The slider is following the vocal
00:38:610 (1,1) - Stack? 00:37:961 (2,3,1,2,1) - These make a gradually rotated pattern
00:41:529 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try this rhythm Again I think mine fits better, sorry


I like this map a lot
Only diff which needs a bit more attention is the Vidyagames (wow, I type a diff name like it is O.o)

Sorry for the diff names, as it's mario kart I just had to do it

You are free to call me after 12 sp
Good luck!

Thank you a lot! There is much red in this mod, I'm sorry but I really prefer my rhythms for the highest difficulty. There are still some things I need to think about.

Updated!

My Kantan was replaced by Stefan's Kantan, which he accidently created while checking my diff.

I have no idea how do I land in beatmaps but it works.

Beginner

1. 00:18:177 (1) - I know it's a Beginner but you are losing a lot of map making it.
2. 00:25:961 (4) - NC. A combo with 6 is much.
3. 00:36:339 (4) - ^
4. 00:38:934 (1) - Here there is no rhythm that extend

Easy

1. 00:20:124 (4,5,6) - DS error

Normal

• 1. 00:08:448 (2,3,4) - 00:32:448 (4,5,6,7) - DS error

Hard

1. I see no error

Insane

1. 00:24:015 (3) - This can be more beautiful
2. 00:30:664 (7) - And this can be more symmetrical x)

I hope I have helped, Good Luck ♥

Marianna wrote:

Easy

1. 00:20:124 (4,5,6) - DS error It's intentional. I wanted to have the last circle in the middle of the playfield.

Normal

• 1. 00:08:448 (2,3,4) - Fixed this one, it was intentional but doesn't make much sense anymore since there were some pattern changes 00:32:448 (4,5,6,7) - DS error Intentional, to emphasize the vocals

Hard

1. I see no error

Insane

1. 00:24:015 (3) - This can be more beautiful I want it to be like this, for the weird vocal
2. 00:30:664 (7) - And this can be more symmetrical x) Fixed!

I hope I have helped, Good Luck ♥

Thanks for modding!

Du könntest den Background für die Taiko Difficulties anpassen, benutz diesen Code bei [Events], zweite Zeile:

0,0,"bg.jpg",0,45

Mao wrote:

nice

Wait who edited this post *stares at Desp*

Mao wrote:

Wait who edited this post *stares at Desp*

now kiss

dafuq is this even

bananannian wrote:

dafuq is this even

quality song

Stefan wrote:

Du könntest den Background für die Taiko Difficulties anpassen, benutz diesen Code bei [Events], zweite Zeile:

0,0,"bg.jpg",0,45

Würde dann so aussehen

Will do when I'm ingame! Thanks!
Kudosu since you also helped me with the taiko spread on irc.

Random mod because games

General

1. ~

Lanturn's Beginner

1. Nice diff, I like the banana-slider

Easy

1. 00:29:853 (3) - Unstack this? The gameplay can be confuse for newbies players but is only a suggestion
2. 00:31:150 (1) - Can you make a blanket with the next slider (optional)
3. 00:35:042 (3) - nazi* Maybe move the second tick to the other side? Like this slider 00:36:664

Normal

1. Good stuff

Hard

1. Nothing wrong here

Insane

1. 00:32:772 (8) - Crtl+G for this slider? Makes a good jump in my opinion
2. 00:43:961 (6) - Unstack?

Mao's Insane

1. Good job

Zetera's Insane

1. 00:12:339 (3) - This jump is really big compared with the others jumps, my suggestion is using Crtl+G in this slider
2. 00:43:961 (4) - Unstack?

Vidyagames

1. dem jumps, dem vidyagames, nice diff

And that's it, so many diff but is a good map, I hope this will be ranked soon

Good luck

Hello there! From my queue!

[Lanturn's Beginner]

00:08:772 (2,4) - Blanket is slightly off. Like 1 or 2 pixels. *enters sassy mode*

00:25:312 (3) - x396 y72

00:25:961 (4) - x456 y176 both suggestions


[Easy]

00:11:366 (2,3) - x428 y348?

00:23:366 (1) - You should curve this slider like [url=puu.sh/lPU56/b6b808c96f.png]this.[/url] Flows better~

00:31:150 (1) - Hmmm.. I was going to suggest a curved slider to fit with 00:31:799 (2) - , but that might ruin flow


[Normal]

Found nothing


[Hard]

00:02:610 (1,3) - Blanket is off slightly

00:12:988 (1) - Move the 3rd point to the right a little bit, and maybe down a bit, and it should look better


[Insane]

00:35:366 (6) - x456 y212

00:41:529 (1,3) - Blanket is off

00:43:961 (6) - x12 y320?


[Mao's Insane]

00:15:258 (4,5,1,2) - You could try to make them into a diamond shape~

00:23:042 (1,2,3) - I believe these are 1/3rds instead of 1/4ths


[Zetera's Insane]

00:04:556 (3,4) - Blanket is off


[Vidyagames]

00:19:799 (2) - ctrl+g?

00:23:042 (4,5,1) - These are 1/3rds. I can hear them. Unless you have a good reason that they should be 1/4ths

00:41:529 (1,2) - ctrl+g?


Nice map~

MoodyRPG wrote:

Random mod because games Cool

General

1. ~

Easy

1. 00:29:853 (3) - Unstack this? The gameplay can be confuse for newbies players but is only a suggestion No, this is a rumor. I've seen several testplays on Easy difficulties (not this one but anyways) and newbies never had problems with stacks.
2. 00:31:150 (1) - Can you make a blanket with the next slider (optional) Done!
3. 00:35:042 (3) - nazi* Maybe move the second tick to the other side? Like this slider 00:36:664 Hmm, that was not the intention, but seems nice, done!

Normal

1. Good stuff

Hard

1. Nothing wrong here

Insane

1. 00:32:772 (8) - Crtl+G for this slider? Makes a good jump in my opinion Yes, good idea.
2. 00:43:961 (6) - Unstack? Nah, I prefer to keep the weird abrupt ending as a stack here to show that

Mao's Insane

1. Good job

Vidyagames

1. dem jumps, dem vidyagames, nice diff

And that's it, so many diff but is a good map, I hope this will be ranked soon

Good luck

Thanks a lot for the random mod ♥

ColdTooth wrote:

Hello there! From my queue!

[Easy]

00:11:366 (2,3) - x428 y348? Nah, would look too blocky

00:23:366 (1) - You should curve this slider like [url=puu.sh/lPU56/b6b808c96f.png]this.[/url] Flows better~ It doesn't really matter

00:31:150 (1) - Hmmm.. I was going to suggest a curved slider to fit with 00:31:799 (2) - , but that might ruin flow Did something similar, blanketed (2) but kept a straigth slider


[Normal]

Found nothing


[Hard]

00:02:610 (1,3) - Blanket is off slightly Fixed!

00:12:988 (1) - Move the 3rd point to the right a little bit, and maybe down a bit, and it should look better You are right, fixed!


[Insane]

00:35:366 (6) - x456 y212 I don't see a reason

00:41:529 (1,3) - Blanket is off Fixed

00:43:961 (6) - x12 y320? No I want to keep the stack

[Vidyagames]

00:19:799 (2) - ctrl+g? No, I prefer lower spacing here because the music is calm

00:23:042 (4,5,1) - These are 1/3rds. I can hear them. Unless you have a good reason that they should be 1/4ths There is no 1/3 here, these are on 1/4 D:

00:41:529 (1,2) - ctrl+g? Would make the flow weird...


Nice map~

Thank you :3 You should explain what's the problem when you are just giving me coordinates, because sometimes I don't really get it (and others might find that useful too).

Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
...
Dank memes.

[Oni]

00:02:610 to 00:18:177 is the same pattern repeated 3 times in a row; a bit of variation would make the map more interesting.
Example of how I would do just that:
00:10:231 - add d
00:13:312 - add k
00:14:123 - add k
00:17:853 (54) - change to k

00:20:772 (61) - delete to emphasis instrumental break

00:28:394 - could use a d
00:30:339 - ^
00:32:123 - ^
00:32:934 - ^, which would emphasize 00:33:096 (101), the snare

And that's pretty much it. Overall it's a nicely mapped difficulty, K's are used appropriately (although I personally disagree with 00:31:475 (96,97), I think there's not enough emphasis in the vocals to warrant those two), patterns are bouncy and fun to play, impulse is correct. The low bpm makes this a very easy oni though, which is why many of the suggestions above increase difficulty.

[Muzukashii]
Same thing with Oni, 00:02:610 to 00:17:529 could use some variation;
00:04:394 (5) - delete
00:05:691 (8) - delete
00:10:880 (20) - delete
00:12:664 - add k

00:20:772 (42) - either delete like Oni, or move to 00:20:448
00:31:799 (68) - now this is different from that in Oni; a single K is definitely not good here because of the ddK pattern. Either emphasize both (dKK) or neither (ddk).
An alternate way (which is what I would do) is this:

67 and 71 are K's

Overall Muzu and Oni are very similar in terms of star rating, which is why the above suggestions all reduce difficulty, to make the spread looks better.

[Futsuu]

00:20:772 (30) - likewise, remove

00:23:366 to 00:38:934 - look, I know it's going to be very boring, which is why I'm also on the fence about this, but I would suggest maybe removing all the 3/4s and only mapping to the drum pattern. It is rare indeed that notes are placed on blue lines in Futsuu, but I guess with the bpm as low as this the rule could be waived a bit. Just note that I personally would not do so.
[]

This literally took 15 minutes.

There you go! Hope you find this mod helpful, and have fun beatmapping! :3

bananannian wrote:

Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
...
Dank memes.

[Oni]

00:02:610 to 00:18:177 is the same pattern repeated 3 times in a row; a bit of variation would make the map more interesting.
Example of how I would do just that:
00:10:231 - add d Added!
00:13:312 - add k Nah I want to keep my doubles ;-; I prefer them over triplets
00:14:123 - add k Added!
00:17:853 (54) - change to k Sure!

00:20:772 (61) - delete to emphasis instrumental break No, it seems so weird because this is part of the melody

00:28:394 - could use a d I prefer the break to emphasize the vocals
00:30:339 - ^ Added!
00:32:123 - ^ Vocals
00:32:934 - ^, which would emphasize 00:33:096 (101), the snare That sounds really nice, added!

And that's pretty much it. Overall it's a nicely mapped difficulty, K's are used appropriately (although I personally disagree with 00:31:475 (96,97), I think there's not enough emphasis in the vocals to warrant those two), patterns are bouncy and fun to play, impulse is correct. The low bpm makes this a very easy oni though, which is why many of the suggestions above increase difficulty. Thanks! I like the Ks so I won't change those

[Muzukashii]
Same thing with Oni, 00:02:610 to 00:17:529 could use some variation;
00:04:394 (5) - delete I prefer to keep this - Otherwise the rhythm will be pretty boring
00:05:691 (8) - delete ^
00:10:880 (20) - delete ^
00:12:664 - add k Done

00:20:772 (42) - either delete like Oni, or move to 00:20:448 Same as Oni
00:31:799 (68) - now this is different from that in Oni; a single K is definitely not good here because of the ddK pattern. Either emphasize both (dKK) or neither (ddk). Fixed!
An alternate way (which is what I would do) is this:

67 and 71 are K's

Overall Muzu and Oni are very similar in terms of star rating, which is why the above suggestions all reduce difficulty, to make the spread looks better.

[Futsuu]

00:20:772 (30) - likewise, remove Same as Oni

00:23:366 to 00:38:934 - look, I know it's going to be very boring, which is why I'm also on the fence about this, but I would suggest maybe removing all the 3/4s and only mapping to the drum pattern. It is rare indeed that notes are placed on blue lines in Futsuu, but I guess with the bpm as low as this the rule could be waived a bit. Just note that I personally would not do so. No, the diff will be boring if I remove those. Also on this BPM they are really playable
[]

This literally took 15 minutes.

There you go! Hope you find this mod helpful, and have fun beatmapping! :3

Sure, it was helpful! Thank you very much :3

quality remix

I miss the old background image tho

MoodyRPG: I now arranged those patterns to look the same: 00:31:799 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Spacing should be fine.

ColdTooth: The pattern is not supposed to form a blanket. If I was to create a blanket there, I gave those sliders a stronger curvation. But that wouldn't be well-playable.

Hello there. Let me try to find something I can complain about. :p

[Lanturn's Beginner]

1. 00:38:934 (1) - Slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. Arguable but anyway... this is Beginner after all.

[Hard]

1. 00:35:529 (2) - http://puu.sh/lZeud/003510eeda.jpg not extended to the lyrics but reflects the song better, aslo follows general rhythm on this hard.
2. 00:38:123 (5) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:41:529 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to increase spacing here, beats are strong and imo requires a little more stress. http://puu.sh/lZf2G/59410a3713.jpg

Fine. Fine. Plays good, idk :3

Sieg wrote:

Hello there. Let me try to find something I can complain about. :p

[Lanturn's Beginner]

1. 00:38:934 (1) - Slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. Arguable but anyway... this is Beginner after all. I-i don't hope he will get rid of his beautiful banana xD

[Hard]

1. 00:35:529 (2) - http://puu.sh/lZeud/003510eeda.jpg not extended to the lyrics but reflects the song better, aslo follows general rhythm on this hard.
2. 00:38:123 (5) - ^ Nah, I have to disagree here. The rhythms should be special because of the special vocals. Also I was following vocals closely throughout the rest of the map.

[Insane]

1. 00:41:529 (1,2,3) - I suggest you to increase spacing here, beats are strong and imo requires a little more stress. http://puu.sh/lZf2G/59410a3713.jpg Applied!

Fine. Fine. Plays good, idk :3

Thanks very much! :3

From queue. Your arguing skills convinced me enough to mod this map. Not because your non muscular avatar though XD

[General]
The lyrics of the song are not that suitable for kids as long as this game must be aimed for all players. Adding a advertisement of +18 explicit lyrics would hurt no one.
[Lanturn's Beginner]

1. Some long sliders are rather monotonous because there's no sound on the slider-body. It would be better if you could find a sliderslide.wav since most of the objects are sliders and in this way might have fitted better in these 00:38:934 (1) - 00:18:177 (1) -
2. 00:18:177 (1) - This slider shape is really neat and I had to highlighted that. However, the length of it avoids a very important beat 00:18:177 (1) - which should be emphasized according to what you do in the previous slider following the instruments. It would make more sense if you turned it into a 2/1 slider with a reverse here to don't skip that point.
3. 00:18:177 (1) - The whistle of the slider's end creates a really weird sound here because it's almost not noticeable. It would be better if you removed that whistle and added drum sample set to follow properly the drums.
4. 00:38:934 (1) - The way this slider flows isn't bad, but it would be better if you made something more catchy which could have followed the pitch sound with perceptive slider's waves. Something like this would be more intuitive since the piano / saxophone notes are the main beats here.
   
   ^

   

[Easy]
IMPORTANT

1. Check Aimod. There are some warning of spacing you should fix
   
   ^

   
   []
2. 00:06:826 (4,1) - The flow between these two sliders is a bit awkward because the (4) doesn't direct properly the next slider. It would flow way better if you Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J and Ctrl + G this 00:06:826 (4) - to improve the flow, besides in this way both slider might make a perceptive flow and a new blanket. Like this:
   ^

   
3. 00:20:772 (6) - This object should have NC to keep consistency in the way you managed the NC at every white big tick.
4. 00:29:529 (2) - This stack doesn't play bad. However, I'd dare to say it's the only one over this easy. It's not a problem but it would be better if you removed the stack to keep consistency the non.stack patterns you managed in the whole diff.
5. 00:31:799 (2,3,4) - The way these objects flow is a bit forced because it's not really intuitive to make players go to left by following the next objects when this slider's end directs next notes would be at the bottom. It would make more sense if you ctrl + J these 00:32:772 (3,4) - to improve substantially the flow. It doesn't flow good when you force players to go like this
   this

   
   compared to a smoother flow like this
   vs this

   
6. 00:38:934 - Leaving this big space of almost 3 seconds is a bit dull because if you consider what you did in the previous section 00:18:177 - This part could have supported as well that pattern to give more variety to the diff.

[Normal]
IMPORTANT

1. Check Aimod in this diff too. If I'm not wrong, the distance snap among the notes must the same in Easy and Normal diffs.
   
   ^

   
   []
2. 00:14:285 (3) - The flow of this slider suggest that the next note will probably be blanketing that object and not as this object is 00:14:934 (4) -, it would be way better if you tried out this slider to improve flow you among those notes.
3. 00:20:772 (7) - NC here just to keep consistent the way you put NC at every white big tick.
4. 00:32:448 (4,5,6,7) DS problem here. I honestly don't see the reason of increasing the DS here to 1.40x since this is not a strong part that could let to increase the spacing that hard. What would be the purpose then? It would be way better if you kept the 1.20x as well as you did in the previous objects.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:853 (2) - The understack here plays really weird because of the low AR this diff manages. It would be better if you placed it here 160|360 to improve the flow of this section. Consider doing the same here 00:34:880 (5) -
2. 00:24:988 (5,6) - The distance of these objects is rather weird because if their sliders' ends are snapped to 1/4 there's no need of making this little jump here as long as you kept consistent the DS in this pattern too 00:24:826 (4,5) . It would flow way better if you kept the DS among these 00:24:988 (5,6) - and let the jump reside over this object 00:25:961 (1) since that's a stronger beat here.
3. 00:27:583 (6,7) - ^ Same here, thus in this case, you could have moved the 00:28:556 (1) - here 212|208 to emphasize this beat with the jumps as well as you did here 00:25:961 (1) -
4. 00:32:448 (1) - Remove NC here to keep consistency in the way you managed the new combos over this diff.
5. 00:32:448 (1,2,3,4) - This square pattern doesn't have the exact DS. Sometimes it's 2.31x sometimes it's 2.34x *runs*
6. 00:35:042 (1) - Remove NC here too.

[Insane]
IMPORTANT

1. HP - 1 to don't have the same HP drain of the hardest diff.
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2. 00:06:826 (6) - Ctrl + G here to improve the flow just as well as you did in the upcoming patterns like these 00:09:096 (5,6) - 00:16:880 (7,8) -
3. 00:14:610 (6) - Same here and what do you think of making this slider more straight to make a more symmetric pattern here? it would look nice if you tried out this
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4. 00:38:447 (8) - This understack plays a bit weird because the song doesn't support properly this hidden thing in this part as the other understack are made. It's because if you listen closely to the song in this section 00:38:448 - seems that things go faster so it would make more sense if that object be more visible to improve the readability of the pattern.

[Mao's Insane] Meow Meow (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)

1. 00:03:583 (4) - The flow that this slider is creating is a bit forced considering on how you started the diff? what would it be the reason of making players go into a non-perceptive flow to click 00:03:907 (1) ? It would be better if you ctrl + G this 00:03:583 (4) - to improve considerably the flow.
2. 00:09:745 (3) - Same, Ctrl + G this would be more smoother than the current flow this slider makes.
3. 00:05:853 (3,4) - I know you weren't intended to blanket these, but it would be better if you tried out to make a neater visual look of those two objects.
4. 00:11:853 (2) - The way you made a jump here plays honestly weird because 00:11:853 (2) - isn't a strong beat that need being emphasized with this jump. it would flow way better if you ctrl + g and let the jump be here 00:12:339 (3) - since 3 is stronger than 2, talking in instruments / beats reasons.
5. 00:29:529 (4) - Ctrl + G. Making a zig zag pattern would have made the things easier to follow and don't create weird momentum with the 1/4 sliders of this segment.
6. 00:38:934 - from that to 00:41:366 - is almost 4 seconds where you could've placed creativity patterns as well as you did in the previous patterns. Like adding notes here 00:40:880 - and here 00:41:204 - ; or following the piano sound here with 3/4 slider like this http://puu.sh/m1EII/e701cb173e.jpg Leaving as it is right now is kinda dull compared to the rhythm you managed in the whole diff. /w\
7. 00:42:988 (4) - NC here to keep consistent the nc of this diff.

[Zetera's Insane]
IMPORTANT

1. Why the HP over 7.7? Was it to don't have the same HP of the other diffs?
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2. 00:13:799 - 100% you should add a note here. Rhythmically talking, the transition of these two notes 00:13:637 (3,4) - is rather hard to follow since you managed a constantly 1/4 rhythm without gaps before. This pattern would make players be confuse since if they are unaware where to click they will probably get 100x because of the gap this pattern has. It would be better if you add a note here 00:13:799 - to improve substantially the segment here. Consider doing the same here 00:34:556 -
3. 00:16:231 (3) - This slider doesn't flow but but it would flow better if you tried out this kind of shape to lead players properly to follow the next object
   
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4. 00:36:177 (3,1) - Not a bad jump but honestly the DS is almost 4.0x compared with the jumps you managed before. Consider reducing a bit the DS to improve the pattern.
5. 00:38:934 - From that to 00:41:366 - is almost 4 seconds where you could've placed creativity patterns as well as you did in the previous patterns. Like adding notes here 00:40:880 - and here 00:41:204 - ; or following the piano sound here with 3/4 slider like this Leaving as it is right now is kinda dull compared to the rhythm you managed in the whole diff. /w\

[Vidyagames]

1. 00:05:853 (5) - Ctrl + G this to improve the flow to 5 -> 6 . the current slider direction doesn't lead properly to players to follow the next note.
2. 00:25:312 (4) - ^

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