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Becky(CV:Saitou Chiwa) - Ponytail no Shijuu ~TV Size~

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Lanturn
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Lanturn
Thank you Tari :3
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
Xgor's SB bubble check time!
Most of the things look fine, buut there is some minor stuff that could be improved.

Quite a lot of the subtitle images has a huge chunk of unused transparency.

Scene12-17 is just the same thing. Just one will be enough.

Aaand.... it looks a bit silly how the osu! logo is not quite fit into the TV. Intentional?



Not sure if these reasons is enough for a pop but I felt they was good enough to be mentioned.
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Lanturn
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Lanturn
Talked to you ingame. Fixed everything mentioned.
Xgor
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Xgor
Re-bub.

Edit:... nevermind osb removal first...

Edit 2: This time baby!
Suimya
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Suimya
I love this song, so why not <3

General:
  1. I highly suggest you to raise the volume on all diffs on kiai since, the kiai kinda sounded so too loud and the hitstound can be barely get heard. About 80% or 85% would do imo~
samplefish's Normal:
  1. 00:42:205 (5) - I highly suggest you here to switch the whistle on the head with a clap instead, the whistle here is not so strong, since there is a storng beat in the music. So clap would fit much better here o.o
  2. 01:08:830 (2) - I think you missed a whistle on slider's repeat, i highly suggest you to add it o.o
  3. 01:09:955 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead, since in the music i can hear a finish. So yeah..you should add it imo ></
  4. 01:30:955 (1) - ^ i can hear it that's why. It seems missing somehow o.o
  5. 01:36:955 (1) - ^ on slider's start
  6. 01:42:955 (1) - ^


Hard:
  1. 00:24:955 (1,3) - how about switching the nc here, since the music really didn't change on (1) it changed on the (3) imo
  2. 00:42:205 (4) - switch this whistle for a clap instead? it'll follow the finish in the background perfectly with it o.o
  3. 01:24:205 (3) - I don't think the whistle on the tail are really needed here, so i highly suggest you to remove it. it'll sound much better without tbh ></
  4. 01:28:517 (2) - ^ remove this whistle too. Same reason as above
  5. 01:29:455 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead on slider's start, i can hear so i think it'll sound much better. The whistle sounds a bit too low for this part, so yeah that's why you should change it to finish o.o
  6. 01:30:955 (1) - ^
  7. 01:36:955 (1) - ^
  8. 01:46:892 (1) - switch this clap for a finish too, i didn't really hear a clap in the music o.o i hear a finish imo.


Sonnyc's Insane
  1. 00:21:955 (1) - add a whistle to this slider's start, since you did the same here 00:23:455 (1) -
  2. 00:24:580 (3) - missing a whistle hear, since i saw you did the same here 00:23:080 (3) - , so it's kinda weird you didn't add one here o.o

Gaia:
  1. 01:18:955 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't even know...why the spam of the nc here? maybe do something like this instead o.o
  2. 01:24:955 (1) - finish instead of whistle here, it'll sound much better
  3. 01:30:955 (1) - ^
  4. 01:36:955 (1) - ^
  5. 01:42:955 (1) - ^

That's all. Call me back~
samplefish
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http://puu.sh/fIgAp/2a291ea068.png

nice

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osu file format v14

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Title:Ponytail no Shijuu ~TV Size~
TitleUnicode:ポニーテールの四十 ～TVサイズ～
Artist:Becky (CV: Saitou Chiwa)
ArtistUnicode:ベッキー(CV：斎藤千和)
Creator:Lanturn
Version:samplefish's Normal
Source:のうりん
Tags:samplefish Sonnyc Nourin No-Rin Ending Bekki Natsume 戸次菜摘 Forty AKB40
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Lanturn
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Sekai-nyan wrote:

I love this song, so why not <3

General:
  1. I highly suggest you to raise the volume on all diffs on kiai since, the kiai kinda sounded so too loud and the hitstound can be barely get heard. About 80% or 85% would do imo~ Done on my diffs.
Hard:
  1. 00:24:955 (1,3) - how about switching the nc here, since the music really didn't change on (1) it changed on the (3) imo I'd honestly prefer to keep it by measures here. It's usually how I like to keep my combos unless it gets stupid like the gaia 1/2 note one lol.
  2. 00:42:205 (4) - switch this whistle for a clap instead? it'll follow the finish in the background perfectly with it o.o if you meant finish, then yes. omg this sounds so good as a finish.
  3. 01:24:205 (3) - I don't think the whistle on the tail are really needed here, so i highly suggest you to remove it. it'll sound much better without tbh ></ only reason I'm keeping this is because it gives off that double whistle feeling. If you look at this spot on Gaia, it should make sense. I have two earlier notes with these whistles.
  4. 01:28:517 (2) - ^ remove this whistle too. Same reason as above removed this one.
  5. 01:29:455 (1) - switch this whistle for a finish instead on slider's start, i can hear so i think it'll sound much better. The whistle sounds a bit too low for this part, so yeah that's why you should change it to finish o.o I did Gaia first, but it's basically the same thing. I don't like to overuse finishes here because it feels a little spammy otherwise. So I have it on a set pattern. Hope this makes sense.
  6. 01:30:955 (1) - ^
  7. 01:36:955 (1) - ^
  8. 01:46:892 (1) - switch this clap for a finish too, i didn't really hear a clap in the music o.o i hear a finish imo. If I remember correctly, I banged claps on to match the guitar. I do this elsewhere in the song as well, so I'm going to keep this one too.
Gaia:
  1. 01:18:955 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't even know...why the spam of the nc here? maybe do something like this instead o.o Alright, went 12,12,12,12.
  2. 01:24:955 (1) - finish instead of whistle here, it'll sound much better For all of these, the finish sounds a bit spammy imo. so I'd rather leave as whistles.
  3. 01:30:955 (1) - ^
  4. 01:36:955 (1) - ^
  5. 01:42:955 (1) - ^

That's all. Call me back~
Thanks :3
Just gonna wait on Sonnyc before I update all the diffs.
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Fix for me plz
Lanturn
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All updated. Applied both whistles.

Should be ready to go!

Edit: I changed metadata after talking to KSHR / alacat. It should be fine now. Thanks you two :3
Suimya
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Suimya
after some more fixes, I think this good to go now :3

Qualified~
Lanturn
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Thanks a lot Sekai! <3

Thanks everyone who modded as well!

#10!
Len
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congratz !!!!! w
KSHR
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Kekkon shi~tai~

gratz!
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Congratss !
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grats :D
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congrats \o
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yay grats moeturn :3~
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Gratz! Lanturn!
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Congratss XD
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Gaia diff is secretly made by Gaia ヽ(｡ゝω・｡)

Congrats Lanturn O/
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shock.jpg is glorious
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yesssssss c:
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This is what true happiness looks like.

Congratulations.
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Nice!
Lanturn
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Thanks everyone! I had tons of fun with this song :)
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