pporse wrote:

hi~ i'm from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue (Mania)▣▣▣

column set
1 2 3 4

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[Pharos's NM]
00:17:700 (17700|0) - delete. what does this LN express?
if it express vocal sound,
00:17:512 - add note
00:17:700 - ^
00:17:887 - ^
00:18:075 - ^

00:32:887 (32887|0) - LN.. I don't think it's necessary in this diff. change to single note

00:42:637 (42637|1) - move to 3rd column
00:43:575 (43575|2) - move to 2nd column
it is better that left finger and right finger are used alternately.

00:46:012 (46012|1) - move to 4th column
00:46:575 (46575|3) - move to 2nd column
^

01:00:075 (60075|2) - move to 2nd column
for hand balance

01:09:262 (69262|3) - change endpoint until 01:09:637
01:09:637 - add note on 1st column

01:17:887 (77887|2,78075|1,78262|2) - Ctrl+H

01:33:450 ~ 01:45:450 - umm.. use only one instrument. u used drum sound and also used vocal sound.
it is really dizzy @.@ when i played this map, i didn't know what i play.

01:44:887 (104887|1,105075|2) - if those notes are drum sound, u have to add notes at 01:44:700 and 01:45:262

01:45:450 ~ 01:51:450 - ^^
┌if u want to use drum sound,
├01:45:450 (105450|0) - change to singgle note. as previously mentioned, i don't think it's necessary.
├01:46:387 (106387|1) - delete
├01:49:575 (109575|2) - move to 4th column
├01:49:762 (109762|3) - delete
└01:51:450 - add note
^ Following This ^

┌if u want to use vocal sound,
├01:46:575 (106575|3) - change to single note
├01:46:762 - add note on 2nd column
├01:46:950 (106950|0) - delete
└01:47:512 - add LN on 1st column until 01:48:075
^ Not Following ^

02:14:325 (134325|2) - move to 2nd column

02:22:950 (142950|3) - move to 1st column
02:24:075 (144075|1) - move to 4th column
02:24:637 (144637|2) - move to 2nd column
02:25:200 (145200|0) - delete and add note on 3rd column
02:25:387 - add note on 2nd column
02:25:575 (145575|1) - move to 3rd column

02:26:325 (146325|2) - move to 1st column
02:27:075 (147075|0) - move to 4th column

02:30:075 - add LN on 3rd column until 02:30:637
02:30:637 (150637|2) - move to 2nd column
for pattern balance

02:39:450 (159450|2) - misplaced if use vocal sound. move to 02:39:262

03:03:262 (183262|1) - change endpoint until 03:03:825
03:03:637 (183637|2) - delete

03:21:075 (201075|3) - delete. it's not necessary and
03:21:262 (201262|2) - move to 4th column
03:21:637 - add note on 3rd column
03:22:575 (202575|1) - move to 3rd column

03:22:950 (202950|2) - delete and add note on 4th column
03:23:137 - add note on 3rd column

03:34:200 (214200|0,214575|1) - key swap
03:34:950 (214950|3,215325|2) - ^
03:35:700 (215700|3,215700|0) - change to 1/1 LN

03:40:575 - 4chord ?? too much lol it is enough to use 2chord.
recommend 03:40:575 (220575|2,220575|0) - delete and
03:42:075 - add note on 3rd column

03:58:950 (238950|3) - change endpoint until 03:59:325

All OK Not because i'm Lazy but it's a good Suggestion, Thanks ^.^

good luck

Kyle Y wrote:

General

SPOILER

offset should be 518 you listen the the music in 25% speed then you will know

Insane

SPOILER

00:01:630 (6) - not straight, please copy 00:02:192 (8,9,10) -
00:01:442 (5) - nc
00:02:192 (8) - nc
00:05:567 (4,5,6,7) - slider, please follow the music
00:07:067 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:11:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think you can even make a longer combo - -'
00:12:505 (5) - nc
00:14:005 (9) - nc
00:17:567 - circle
00:29:755 (1) - what's this... make a better slider
00:31:442 (3) - blanket
00:41:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use combination of circle and slider
just like
00:54:505 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - please use streams until 00:55:911 - and connect to 00:56:005 (1) -
00:56:005 (1) - don't draw such long slider in insane
00:59:567 (4,5) - slider
01:01:255 (10) - move to (288,248)
01:02:942 - circle
01:03:130 (2) - same problem
01:08:567 (2,3,4) - I think not a good flow
01:12:505 (5) - ended 01:13:630 -
01:14:005 - 01:14:192 - 01:14:380 - circle
01:14:380 (1) - 01:15:317 (2) - 01:16:067 (3) - move 1/2 beat after
01:15:130 - 01:15:880 - 01:16:630 - circle
01:18:505 (1,2,3) - spinner
------(I just stopped here)------
Problem 1: unblanketed sliders
Problem 2: slider and circle sometime not follow the music
Problem 3: Slider not good in looking
Problem 4: not good flowing

Normal

SPOILER

00:00:505 (1,2,3,4) - try this

00:05:005 - I think you should map it
00:17:567 - maybe circle
00:21:317 (2) - ended 00:21:692 - and circle at 00:21:880 -
00:56:005 (1) - don't repeat
00:56:942 - 1/2 beat slider at here
00:57:317 - one beat slider here
00:57:692 (3) - start at 00:57:880 (3) - ended 00:57:880 (3) - and reverse for once
00:59:567 - add circle
01:00:505 (7,8,9,10) - slider?
01:02:005 (1) - ended 01:02:380 - and reverse 2 times
01:06:505 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - not recommend in normal
01:16:817 - circle
01:17:005 - 1/2 reversed slider
01:17:567 - circle
01:17:942 - slider ended 01:18:130 -
01:18:317 - circle
01:18:411 - spinner ended 01:20:755 -
01:22:255 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - just like what you did in insane diff, break a here and spinner start
------(I just stopped here)------
Problem 1: unblanketed sliders
Problem 2: slider and circle sometime not follow the music
Problem 3: Slider not good in looking

Awaken wrote:

From my queue here~

Only standard diffs since I'm only expert in it.

[General]

1. Widescreen should be disabled.

I'll continue this later.

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

I'll mod it friday so placeholder :3

Oyatsu wrote:

Tittle should be: Hikaru nara
not tap on N.
Good luck!

-July- wrote:

Normal

00:49:643 (4,1) - Feels a bit far.
01:14:018 (1,2) - Blanket (i've been hearing this "blanket" from a lot of people.. can you explain this? XD)
01:18:518 - Add spinner OKAY
01:20:768 - End spinner
02:19:268 (3) - The note is outside the map.
02:44:018 (1) - Placed strangely.
03:11:393 (2) - Also partly outside the map.
03:14:018 (1,2) - Part of it is sticking out the map, move it a bit to the left.
03:23:018 (1) - Another one that's a bit too far out.
03:48:518 (1,2,3,4) - Shorten the long slider by two ticks and add one note at the end? (whoops.. forgot to fix that one last night XD)

This is all I could do. xD I'm no expert on high difficulties but I hope my input on your normal difficulty helped!

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

I'll mod it friday so placeholder :3
Here's my mod :3

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

General

1. 00:04:955- ~ 00:21:643- ~ 00:21:830- ~ 00:23:143- ~ 00:26:705- ~ 00:26:893- ~ 00:27:455- ~ 00:27:643- ~ 00:29:705- ~ 00:29:893- ~ 00:31:393- ~ 00:31:580- ~ 00:39:643- ~ 00:39:830- ~ 00:40:018- ~ 00:40:205- ~ 00:41:330- ~ 00:41:518- ~ 00:41:705- ~ 00:41:893- Unsnapped green lines ( I'm too lazy to mention all unsnapped green lines ) (got too lazy to fix that...sorry :0 )
2. AudioLeadIn should be 2000 because the beginning is too fast . Here's the code :
   

   AudioLeadIn: 2000

3. Pls delete the OSB file during there's no SB (how do you do this..? ono;;)
4. The offset fits better on 315 where the instruments starts
   About delayed hitsounds , I will check after I'll reinstall audacity

Normal

• 
  I will say only nazi stuff other things I will say in-game chat

1. 00:03:518(7)- Add NC because new vocals
2. 00:26:018(4)- This slider touch the HP bar . Place it on 245|76 . Also add NC
3. 00:28:643(5)- Remove finish from slider's tail because there's no cymbal emphasis
4. 00:30:518(2,3)- A 1/1 slider together with a 1/2 slider doesn't fit the vocals and instruments so better . I suggest to delete the 1/2 slider ( I mean 3 ) and then add a reverse to (2)-
5. 00:32:018(4)- Add NC I feel there's new vocals

Hmm just suggestion . You're a newbie mapper so I gave you some advices . Call me for a IRC to give you more advices :3

1. 00:03:515 (7) - nc
2. 00:26:015 (4) - i dont think is nice to have a rhythm like this here,before this is all 1/1, how about 1/1 here too
3. 00:32:952 (1,2,3) - the overlap is ugly
4. 00:39:327 (8,1) - ^
5. 00:48:140 (2,4) - urankable
6. ...did you followed the ds rule, you have to make normal with ds, otherwise its unrankable, plz fix all the ds
7. 02:40:640 (1,3) - stack
8. 03:14:015 (1,2) - blanket
9. 03:17:015 (1,2) - kida weird

Alex Li wrote:

from my q
[General]
you need at least a hard for the spread in std, the spread now is kinda unrankable (someone's already making the hard diff.. :3)
[Normal]

1. 00:03:515 (7) - nc
2. 00:26:015 (4) - i dont think is nice to have a rhythm like this here,before this is all 1/1, how about 1/1 here too
3. 00:32:952 (1,2,3) - the overlap is ugly
4. 00:39:327 (8,1) - ^
5. 00:48:140 (2,4) - urankable
6. ...did you followed the ds rule, you have to make normal with ds, otherwise its unrankable, plz fix all the ds
7. 02:40:640 (1,3) - stack
8. 03:14:015 (1,2) - blanket
9. 03:17:015 (1,2) - kida weird

[Insane]
after i watched your insane and lie diff
i thought
wtf seriously 1.2 sv for the whole set and ds 1.0 for the whole time and the jumps are so random
you want make sure that what you make fits the music and fun to play
you dont want to make something that is unexpected for the players and boring to play
thats all i can say
gl

Alex Li wrote:

from my q
[General]
you need at least a hard for the spread in std, the spread now is kinda unrankable

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Alex Li wrote:

from my q
[General]
you need at least a hard for the spread in std, the spread now is kinda unrankable

Ahh I forgot about spread sry for that I missing this . Blame me cuz I modded at midnight or 1 am .

Alex Li 's right . The spread is kinda unrankable : N/I/I

The spread should be N/H/I so make Insane a hard diff and then replace ''Insane'' with ''Hard'' to keep the spread rankable .

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Ahh btw I forgot to post the IRC :

Blankets and what means ds @.@

08:56 ByBy_ChAn: hey
08:56 lord_of_rhythm: hey.. :0
08:57 ByBy_ChAn: I said in mod that we will talk about some stuffs in game chat
09:03 lord_of_rhythm: aahh sure XD slr i was testing stuff
09:03 ByBy_ChAn: np
09:04 lord_of_rhythm: hmm uhm before that,can you explain what "blanket" mean?
09:04 ByBy_ChAn: what mean blanket ?
09:05 ByBy_ChAn: sure . a blanket is when a circle is placed on the middle of slider 
09:05 ByBy_ChAn: lemme give a pic
09:06 lord_of_rhythm: okie--
09:07 ByBy_ChAn: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2765333
09:07 ByBy_ChAn: from my first ranked map
09:08 lord_of_rhythm: aaaahh..so that's what a blanket is..
09:08 ByBy_ChAn: yeap
09:09 lord_of_rhythm: i love that beatmap btw :0
09:13 ByBy_ChAn: ohh my hetalia map ?
09:27 lord_of_rhythm: what does ds mean?
09:27 lord_of_rhythm: :?
09:27 ByBy_ChAn: ds -> distance snap
09:28 lord_of_rhythm: ooohhh...

And the source should be 四月は君の嘘 not in romanji letters . Also , add to the tags ''your lie in april'' because ''shigatsu wa kimi no uso'' means ''your lie in april''

NO KD ! I modded it last night and I received KD

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi! mod for request via queue

General
You must change the name of the diffs to:
- 5K Ensemble
- Pharo's 4K NM
- 4K Normal+
- Pharo's 4K HD
Because different keys (4k and 5k) are in this map.

Columns: 1|2|3|4

Pharo's NM

00:04:452 - add note in 2
00:05:952 (5952|1) - move to 4
00:07:452 (7452|3) - move to 1
01:05:015 (65015|2) - delete this line, is so difficult for normal players XD
01:10:640 - add note in 4
01:17:952 (617952|2) - move to 1
01:35:015 (635015|1) - delete this line and 01:35:390 (635390|2) move to 4
01:36:515 (636515|1) - delete this line
01:37:640 (637640|3) - move to 2
01:41:765 (641765|0) - delete this line
01:56:671 (656671|2) - move this to 01:56:765 - and the line ends in 01:57:140 -
02:03:140 - add note in 1
02:09:140 - add note in 4
02:14:577 (134577|2) delete this line
02:16:452 (136452|1) delete
02:16:640 (136640|0) delete
02:18:515 (138515|2) delete this line
03:21:140 -
this is so hardcore for normal (? change for this:




03:23:952 -
this is so hard too xD change for this:




03:40:640 - delete 1 and 4
03:42:140 - add note in 3
03:59:577 (239577|2) delete this line
that's all ~

Normal+

00:14:202 (14202|3) - move to 2
00:14:765 (14765|0) - move to 3
00:42:140 - add note in 2
00:45:490 (45490|2) - move to 2
00:46:452 (46452|3) - move to 3
01:33:890 (633890|3) - move to 2
01:49:827 (649827|0) - move to 4
02:06:140 - add note in 4
02:30:140 - :
change this for:




03:12:140 - put this double in 1 and 4
03:13:651 - ^
03:19:640 - ^
that's all :3

Pharo's HD

Check out the difficulty, you need re-edit this diff. You've put doubles in sounds that are no strongs, and you haven't put doubles in sounds that are strongs (in some parts). Despite this, the rhythm is very well followed ^^

Okay, ready good luck!

Meiko Senpai wrote:

Hi! mod for request via queue

General
You must change the name of the diffs to:
- 5K Ensemble
- Pharo's 4K NM
- 4K Normal+
- Pharo's 4K HD
Because different keys (4k and 5k) are in this map.

Columns: 1|2|3|4

Pharo's NM

00:04:452 - add note in 2
00:05:952 (5952|1) - move to 4
00:07:452 (7452|3) - move to 1
01:05:015 (65015|2) - delete this line, is so difficult for normal players XD
01:10:640 - add note in 4
01:17:952 (617952|2) - move to 1
01:35:015 (635015|1) - delete this line and 01:35:390 (635390|2) move to 4
01:36:515 (636515|1) - delete this line
01:37:640 (637640|3) - move to 2
01:41:765 (641765|0) - delete this line
01:56:671 (656671|2) - move this to 01:56:765 - and the line ends in 01:57:140 -
02:03:140 - add note in 1
02:09:140 - add note in 4
02:14:577 (134577|2) delete this line
02:16:452 (136452|1) delete
02:16:640 (136640|0) delete
02:18:515 (138515|2) delete this line
03:21:140 -
this is so hardcore for normal (? change for this:




03:23:952 -
this is so hard too xD change for this:




03:40:640 - delete 1 and 4
03:42:140 - add note in 3
03:59:577 (239577|2) delete this line
that's all ~

Normal+

00:14:202 (14202|3) - move to 2
00:14:765 (14765|0) - move to 3
00:42:140 - add note in 2
00:45:490 (45490|2) - move to 2
00:46:452 (46452|3) - move to 3
01:33:890 (633890|3) - move to 2
01:49:827 (649827|0) - move to 4
02:06:140 - add note in 4
02:30:140 - :
change this for:




03:12:140 - put this double in 1 and 4
03:13:651 - ^
03:19:640 - ^
that's all :3

Pharo's HD

Check out the difficulty, you need re-edit this diff. You've put doubles in sounds that are no strongs, and you haven't put doubles in sounds that are strongs (in some parts). Despite this, the rhythm is very well followed ^^

Okay, ready good luck!

Pharos21 wrote:

Woohh... It's Getting HOT Right now
Keep it up DUDE..
Here

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello, requested by PM... as a "recheck"

I guess this moved to WIP, so probably gonna mod at least two diffs.

[> General <]

1. - Timing Check: BPM is fine, and offset is 505 (-10)
2. - You should find someone for metadata confirmation. I can feel it wrong, but i'm unsure.

[> Normal <]

1. - This diff improved a little bit much, but you still have some issues with the distance spacings.
2. 00:02:577 (6,1) - Check the spacing here, you've previously used 1.2x spacing.
3. 00:22:827 (4,1) - ^
4. 00:31:077 (3) - A silent sliderend might be unrankable, so try to increase the volume here.
5. 00:32:015 (1,2) - Spacing~
6. 00:40:640 (9,1) - ^
7. 00:45:140 (4,5,1) - ^
8. - I guess i won't mention all spacing issues that's available further on, try finding them yourself by using AiMod and Distance Snap is checked.
9. 01:02:015 (1,2) - Try double blanketing here, not just one slider blankets.
10. 01:06:515 (5,6,7,1) - Avoid this weird overlap next time.
11. 01:18:515 (1) - I prefer this spinner ends on 01:20:390 -
12. 01:33:140 (8,1,2) - Flow is too straight, try curving one of these sliders.
13. 01:53:015 (3,4) - ^
14. - I was quite picky on spacings and patterns. But i can hear good rhythms, but weird placements of notes due DS... I guess this still needs more work.

[> Insane <]

1. - Some patterns are not probably placed well. Rhythm and flow looks fine, but few more issues looks exactly the same as i mentioned from the past weeks.
2. 00:05:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not likely symmetrical, so recorrect it.
3. 00:15:702 (1,2,3,4,5) - It could've been better when the spacing is a little balanced here.
4. 00:25:077 (5,6,7) - Spacing~
5. 00:32:952 (6) - I know you're trying to follow the vocals, but this slider looks off the flow.
6. 00:54:515 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try making a Hexagon formation here.
7. 01:12:515 (5) - Slider looks okay atm, but it's unrankable when the sliderpoints are out of grid. Because some players in osu play in portrait screen, not widescreen, they might get a 100, 50, or miss because of this.
8. 01:36:140 (4,5,1) - Spacing~
9. 01:44:202 (1,2,3,4) - You've almost made this square formation perfect, the only thing you need to do is recorrecting it.
10. 01:50:015 (9) - What kind of slider point placements is this??!!
11. 01:51:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:44:202 (1,2,3,4) -
12. 02:00:515 (1,2) - In the previous track, pattern was okay, then here it got worse.
13. - This also needs work, focus on pattern placements and spacings here.

I guess that's all, it's better you find more modders at this rate. And see what's their opinions about this map. I'm sure they might say the same thing as this, but i'm just giving you a warn.
Good Luck once again!

SoGa wrote:

[General]

1. Current difficulties spread is Unrankable ,sry but , at least ,the lower diff has to be under 2.0 consider to add an Easy diff there .
2. The gaps between this set is a little big tho, 2.10 3.79 4.44

Sorry..I got lazy to finalize the spacing X"D

[Normal]

1. Is there really has to spam those inherited points to sv:0.85 ? delete all of them , they r unnecessary , if u want them to 0.85 , just change the sv lower .
2. 00:00:515 (1,2) - is this one ds =1.30 why is this set change to 1.15? 00:01:827 (4,5) - fix is for consistency
3. 00:02:577 (6,1) - The distance here is too close , use DS to move this one to other way 00:03:515 (1) -
4. 00:03:515 (1) - Unrankable due to unsnap object ,check Aimod
5. Actually the first break is unnecessary , don't be so lazy , there has good sound to map lmao You got me XD I did get lazy
6. 00:18:515 (3,4) - Fix the DS for consistency
7. 00:18:515 (3,4,1) - ^
8. 00:20:765 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:21:327 (2,3) - ^ this jump is too big and sudden ,there is no downbeat , u dont have to jump here , in a normal diff , this is consider as a jump , fix it
10. 00:28:640 (5,1) - Actually this kind of overlap is seems ugly ,not aesthetics , change em
11. 00:29:390 (1,2) - DS is too big
12. 00:31:077 (3) - I rather put this one to right side , don't place them turning around in just a solo place , spread them out pls ,and also ,this one suppose to move to 00:31:265 (3) - instead of
13. 00:35:015 (1,2) - Blanket it
14. 00:36:515 (3,4) - ^
15. 00:38:015 (5) - NC here
16. 00:44:015 (1,2,3,4) - i would use this rhythm instead ,it is more easier for beginner
17. 00:53:015 (2,3,4) - delete those finish ,it is too noisy , just change them to whistle , or maybe put nothing there
18. 01:02:015 (1,2,3) - Blanket pls
19. 01:06:515 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't recommend to stack them like this , it is hard for beginner to react lmao,i would change it like this way ,more simple and easier to play
20. 01:11:765 (5,6) - the jump is real ,fix it
    
21. Almost all are the same question , u gotta rework this one if ur aim for rank u gotta watch at other diff and learn to map a lower diff
22. Suggestion : Use DS in the whole normal diff indeed!
23. Put NC every 1 set or 2 set , in here set mean every 4 white ticks
24. Learn to use hitsound ,here i will give u a common hitsound All good with this one
    

I will end here , if u don't understand my mod ,feel free to catch me in-game

1. You need to decrese the normal by 0.01 star diff lol now that's weird (or make an easy)
2. I think you don't need "shigatsu wa kimi no uso" in the tags as it is in the source already

1. Mhm imo this diff needs quite some work on appearence, rest is fine, but you could make the map look a lot better
2. 00:12:505 (1) - rotate so it blankets 00:11:005 (1) - and improves flow
3. 00:14:005 (1,2,3) - the spacing can get quite confusing (first time I played I clicked too fast due to the spacing change)
4. 00:19:630 (4,2) - really bad overlap
5. 00:24:505 (2) - you could center this between 00:23:755 (1,3) - much better
6. 00:25:255 (3,4) - this just looks off, either blanket 3 or create a more interesting shape
7. 00:28:630 (5,1) - blanket
8. 00:35:755 (2,3) - badly centered
9. 00:37:255 (4) - or if it's blanketing this one you should stack them so it doesn't look so bad in the above point ^
10. 00:39:317 (4,1) - spacing, you can't do this as a "band aid" if you run out of space, you have to redesign the pattern or move 1, it's a normal so spacing should be mostly consistent
11. 00:44:755 (3,4) - imperfect stack
12. 01:03:505 (2,3) - blanket, you could as well change 3's shape as it is quite different from the rest in this pattern
13. 01:13:255 (8) - imo ctrl+g flows better
14. 01:14:005 (1,2) - blanket (even if you blanket the note after, you have to blanket the previous too or it looks ugly)
15. 01:27:505 (1,3) - might as well stack them
16. 01:30:505 (5,6) - center better
17. 01:41:005 (3,5) - imperfect stack (5 should also be centered with 01:41:755 (4) - )
18. 01:42:505 (5,6,1,2,1) - all of these are badly centered
19. 01:59:380 (8,1) - ^
20. 02:06:505 (1) - really weird shape and it should stack with 02:05:380 (7) - and blanket 02:05:755 (8) -
21. 02:08:005 (2) - if you change the above copy paste the change to this one
22. 02:36:880 (1,2) - blanket
23. 03:05:380 (2,4) - imperfect stack, should also blanket with 03:05:755 (3) -
24. 03:18:505 (3,1) - blanket
25. 03:35:005 (5,6) - spacing
26. 03:48:130 (8,1) - blanket
27. 03:48:505 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:01:442 (5,6,7) - I think you could make this a different combo
2. 00:26:005 (5,6) - rotate 6 so it centers 5
3. 00:57:692 - add note, follows the vocals
4. 01:00:880 (7,8) - this is wrong I think, mostly 8. You should add a note at 01:01:161 - and move 8 to 01:01:255 - reducing the slider by 1 tick
5. 01:12:880 (10,11) - same as above
6. 01:18:505 (9) - imo you could map this part better, the slider feels boring, mostly because there's actually a beat to follow in the background
7. 01:54:505 (1,2) - center better
8. 02:00:317 - the piano still plays here, I'd add a note
9. 02:05:380 (8,9) - same as 1st chorus
10. 02:47:567 (3,4) - NC then NC 02:48:130 (5) - too
11. 02:48:130 (5) - should finish slider here and add note at 03:12:786 - (I know the curve is there for that but it doesn't replace a clickable note)
12. 03:19:817 - note missing
13. 03:20:942 (5,6) - a slow slider would fit here instead of the singles
14. This isn't the prettiest map either, but it plays well, so I guess it's allright ^^

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[General]

1. You need to decrese the normal by 0.01 star diff lol now that's weird (or make an easy)
2. I think you don't need "shigatsu wa kimi no uso" in the tags as it is in the source already

[Normal]

1. Mhm imo this diff needs quite some work on appearence, rest is fine, but you could make the map look a lot better
2. 00:12:505 (1) - rotate so it blankets 00:11:005 (1) - and improves flow
3. 00:14:005 (1,2,3) - the spacing can get quite confusing (first time I played I clicked too fast due to the spacing change)
4. 00:19:630 (4,2) - really bad overlap
5. 00:24:505 (2) - you could center this between 00:23:755 (1,3) - much better
6. 00:25:255 (3,4) - this just looks off, either blanket 3 or create a more interesting shape
7. 00:28:630 (5,1) - blanket
8. 00:35:755 (2,3) - badly centered
9. 00:37:255 (4) - or if it's blanketing this one you should stack them so it doesn't look so bad in the above point ^
10. 00:39:317 (4,1) - spacing, you can't do this as a "band aid" if you run out of space, you have to redesign the pattern or move 1, it's a normal so spacing should be mostly consistent
11. 00:44:755 (3,4) - imperfect stack
12. 01:03:505 (2,3) - blanket, you could as well change 3's shape as it is quite different from the rest in this pattern
13. 01:13:255 (8) - imo ctrl+g flows better
14. 01:14:005 (1,2) - blanket (even if you blanket the note after, you have to blanket the previous too or it looks ugly)
15. 01:27:505 (1,3) - might as well stack them
16. 01:30:505 (5,6) - center better
17. 01:41:005 (3,5) - imperfect stack (5 should also be centered with 01:41:755 (4) - )
18. 01:42:505 (5,6,1,2,1) - all of these are badly centered
19. 01:59:380 (8,1) - ^
20. 02:06:505 (1) - really weird shape and it should stack with 02:05:380 (7) - and blanket 02:05:755 (8) -
21. 02:08:005 (2) - if you change the above copy paste the change to this one
22. 02:36:880 (1,2) - blanket
23. 03:05:380 (2,4) - imperfect stack, should also blanket with 03:05:755 (3) -
24. 03:18:505 (3,1) - blanket
25. 03:35:005 (5,6) - spacing
26. 03:48:130 (8,1) - blanket
27. 03:48:505 (1,2) - ^

[Lie]

1. 00:01:442 (5,6,7) - I think you could make this a different combo
2. 00:26:005 (5,6) - rotate 6 so it centers 5
3. 00:57:692 - add note, follows the vocals
4. 01:00:880 (7,8) - this is wrong I think, mostly 8. You should add a note at 01:01:161 - and move 8 to 01:01:255 - reducing the slider by 1 tick
5. 01:12:880 (10,11) - same as above
6. 01:18:505 (9) - imo you could map this part better, the slider feels boring, mostly because there's actually a beat to follow in the background
7. 01:54:505 (1,2) - center better
8. 02:00:317 - the piano still plays here, I'd add a note
9. 02:05:380 (8,9) - same as 1st chorus
10. 02:47:567 (3,4) - NC then NC 02:48:130 (5) - too
11. 02:48:130 (5) - should finish slider here and add note at 03:12:786 - (I know the curve is there for that but it doesn't replace a clickable note)
12. 03:19:817 - note missing
13. 03:20:942 (5,6) - a slow slider would fit here instead of the singles
14. This isn't the prettiest map either, but it plays well, so I guess it's allright ^^

Sorry but I can't mod mania and I ran out of time for the Insane (normal took a while and long song x.x), but good luck with the set!

i'll check them tomorrow

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

p/3726145
p/3750675

forgot give kudos ?

hi ~

metadate check request from my queue


Artist : ok
Title : ok
Romanised Title ok
source : Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso 四月は君の嘘 done!!
tag delete : hikaru nara
bg : ok
mp3 : ok
hitsound delay : I fixed here file's moved/deleted ono;;

-Famous-'s Hard WIP check AI mod


and … mania mapset SV timing is fast


(STD mapset)

good luck >w</