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Zan-

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-09T17:20:11+00:00

~~Thanks for mods. Willl update tomorrow~~

Niji wrote:
Hello ZanZan-, mod as requested from my Queue . .

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

Black --> My Suggestion/opinion
Red --> Unrankable issue
Blue --> Comment
Green --> Positive Support

Mod Inside-
[Basic]
00:40:242 - add note zan! - hoho good, its like i miss note here

01:48:636 (108636|1,109257|1) - move to 2 .

[Hald]

00:03:869 (3869|1) - move to 3 biar konsisten aja, suaranya sama kaya 00:04:180 (4180|3) -

00:42:418 (42418|3) - move to 0

00:47:392 (47392|0) - move to 3

01:09:309 (69309|0) - move to 3

01:19:257 (79257|0) - ^
^sorry rejected all, i want to keep all of these pattern ><

Pharos21 wrote:
Hi Ho Bosss......

Mod dari (see signature) hadir!!!...

ok sebelumnya..

Uncheck Widescreen support ( No SB kan ? )

Diff nya ngga Easy, Medium, Hard aja? - ini diff name Reflect Beat style

The mod

1.2.3.4

Basic
HP or OD or both = 7

00:06:356 (6356|2) - Pindah ke 2 (nyesuain pattern sebelumnya) terus tambahin wistle
00:06:977 (6977|1) - ^ 3 (sama)

00:16:926 (16926|2) - ^ 2 (^)
^ after all, i rearranged

sisanya Fine ~

medium
00:16:304 (16304|0) - pindah ke 2
00:16:615 (16615|1) - Pindah ke 1

00:21:278 (21278|0) - ^ 2
00:25:630 (25630|2) - ^ 2 ?

00:29:983 (29983|3,29983|1) - Geser kanan 1 kolom GRAK!

00:30:294 (30294|0) - Pindah ke 2
^rearranged

Fine~

Hard
OD or HP = 7 ( Have Mercy Please TT-TT ) - HP/OD = 8 udah cukup karena penggunaan LN dan Normal yg banyak | HP/OD = 7 malah kekecilan

Pattern Clear ~

Lagunya bagus Saatnya cari extended version nya hehehe

Well GL ~ ^.^

thanks all~

updated

Takane6

978 posts

Joined June 2014

Takane6 2015-01-11T13:08:35+00:00

nya~ zan~
mod from queue:3

column: 1 2 3 4
[Hard]
00:15:371 (15371|0) - i think the sound is appear in here 00:15:216 maybe?
00:20:345 (20345|3) - the sound appear in here 00:20:190 ?
00:15:371 - add note
00:20:345 - ^
00:32:159 (32159|3) - change into LN? (same sound with 00:32:314 , 00:32:625 and 00:32:936 ) end at 00:32:314

00:38:376 (38376|3) - change into LN? (same sound with 00:38:687 , 00:38:998 ) end at 00:38:687

[Medium]
00:59:827 (59827|1) - (optional) you can add note here (because the snare sound are same like 01:00:138 ) but and move one of the hitsound ( the clap or the whistle) to the added note
01:41:485 (101485|2,101641|1,101796|0,102262|3,102573|2,102884|1,103195|0,103661|1,103661|3) - (optional) ctrl+h maybe? because the pitch is increasing not decreasing
01:44:749 (104749|1,105060|0,105371|2,105682|3,106148|2,106148|0) - maybe better if you make it 1-2-4-3-[14]

[Basic]
00:14:128 - you can add note here (in 00:16:615 - 00:19:102 - 00:21:589 - 00:24:076 - 00:26:563 - 00:29:050 - ) but its up to you

01:05:112 (65112|2) - maybe the LN started from here 01:04:957 ?
01:15:060 (75060|0) - maybe the LN started from here 01:14:905 ?
01:46:148 - add note (use hitsound finish) ?

This map actually is very nice...
thats why its hard to find the problem here
hope this map ranked
good luck

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-11T13:42:36+00:00

Takane6 wrote:
nya~ zan~
mod from queue:3

column: 1 2 3 4
[Hard]
00:15:371 (15371|0) - i think the sound is appear in here 00:15:216 maybe?
00:20:345 (20345|3) - the sound appear in here 00:20:190 ?
00:15:371 - add note
00:20:345 - ^
00:32:159 (32159|3) - change into LN? (same sound with 00:32:314 , 00:32:625 and 00:32:936 ) end at 00:32:314
00:38:376 (38376|3) - change into LN? (same sound with 00:38:687 , 00:38:998 ) end at 00:38:687
^ after this mod makes me galau(?) i rearranged by removing some LNs

[Medium]
00:59:827 (59827|1) - (optional) you can add note here (because the snare sound are same like 01:00:138 ) but and move one of the hitsound ( the clap or the whistle) to the added note | nope

01:41:485 (101485|2,101641|1,101796|0,102262|3,102573|2,102884|1,103195|0,103661|1,103661|3) - (optional) ctrl+h maybe? because the pitch is increasing not decreasing
01:44:749 (104749|1,105060|0,105371|2,105682|3,106148|2,106148|0) - maybe better if you make it 1-2-4-3-[14]
^after listening over and over, i think the pitch is like 2-1-3-4

[Basic]
00:14:128 - you can add note here (in 00:16:615 - 00:19:102 - 00:21:589 - 00:24:076 - 00:26:563 - 00:29:050 - ) but its up to you added, give more consistency

01:05:112 (65112|2) - maybe the LN started from here 01:04:957 ?
01:15:060 (75060|0) - maybe the LN started from here 01:14:905 ?
^nope, current is correct

01:46:148 - add note (use hitsound finish) ? added

This map actually is very nice...
thats why its hard to find the problem here
hope this map ranked
good luck

thanks~

Kawawa

Kawawa 2015-01-12T16:10:24+00:00

YOYO~
4K Column 1/2/3/4*

First

LOL!!!! I SAW that BG file name "loli.jpg"
OOPS, so cute !
this is a suggestion. u choice
always u obviously have the right to refuse

Baisc

00:24:076 (24076|2) - move to 4?
△cuz, When i viewed through a around note, col3 is often seen in that part. so for hand balance, just suggestion
00:26:252 (26252|1) - this one is hitsound only W. maybe u use both W and C

01:48:636 (108636|1,108636|3,108791|0,108946|3,109102|0,109257|1,109257|3) -
^that part, i suggest u, this like ▽

△ i think that 01:48:325 (108325|2) - because of col3, for the convenience of beginners? XD

Medium

00:40:708 (40708|3) - i dunno this one, only have normal diff?, if u not intend, again check it

00:51:433 (51433|3) - move to2?
△cuz, 00:51:744 (51744|3,51900|0,52055|3,52211|0,52366|3) - for this flow keep

Hard

00:31:019 (31019|2,31123|3,31226|0,31433|2,31537|1,31537|3,31537|0) - suggestion ▽like this

△i think that better flow. just personally...
anyway, if u △ done, 00:31:848 (31848|2,32003|1) - Ctrl + H?

01:28:739 - this line have so many note. maybe one delete?, other diffi all one have.
01:38:221 (98221|2,98376|3,98376|1,98532|0) - personally, I think a little strange this note
suggestion ▽

Nice

to star

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-12T16:14:47+00:00

KawaEE wrote:
YOYO~
4K Column 1/2/3/4*
First
LOL!!!! I SAW that BG file name "loli.jpg"
OOPS, so cute !
^ why you check it xD

this is a suggestion. u choice
always u obviously have the right to refuse

Baisc
00:24:076 (24076|2) - move to 4?
△cuz, When i viewed through a around note, col3 is often seen in that part. so for hand balance, just suggestion | ok
00:26:252 (26252|1) - this one is hitsound only W. maybe u use both W and C | oops fixed, my bad
01:48:636 (108636|1,108636|3,108791|0,108946|3,109102|0,109257|1,109257|3) -
^that part, i suggest u, this like ▽

△ i think that 01:48:325 (108325|2) - because of col3, for the convenience of beginners? XD | ok with rearrange

Medium
00:40:708 (40708|3) - i dunno this one, only have normal diff?, if u not intend, again check it | rearranged
00:51:433 (51433|3) - move to2?
△cuz, 00:51:744 (51744|3,51900|0,52055|3,52211|0,52366|3) - for this flow keep | ok good

Hard
00:31:019 (31019|2,31123|3,31226|0,31433|2,31537|1,31537|3,31537|0) - suggestion ▽like this

△i think that better flow. just personally...
anyway, if u △ done, 00:31:848 (31848|2,32003|1) - Ctrl + H?
^ ok looks good

01:28:739 - this line have so many note. maybe one delete?, other diffi all one have. | oops my bad
01:38:221 (98221|2,98376|3,98376|1,98532|0) - personally, I think a little strange this note
suggestion ▽

^rearranged
Nice to star

frog! so fast ;w;
its already late night here, will check your mod tomorrow~

thanks~ updated!!!

Ayachi-

2,261 posts

Joined November 2013

Ayachi- 2015-01-16T22:08:11+00:00

m4m
1234
[Basic]
00:04:180 - add note like 00:01:693 -
00:06:667 - ^
00:09:154 - ^
00:14:128 - 00:16:615 - 00:19:102 - 00:21:589 - 00:24:076 - 00:26:563 - 00:29:050 - 00:53:920 - 00:56:408 - 00:58:895 -^ if all added star =1.28
ok they all sound different from 00:01:693 - when I listened again orz, but I still recommend to add
01:46:459 (106459|3) - column 2
01:48:636 - be like 00:48:946 - because 01:48:636 - same as 01:48:791 - 01:48:946 - 01:49:102 - 01:49:257 -

[Medium]
00:40:242 - remove a note, same as 00:40:553 -
01:18:791 - LN conflict with hard
01:19:879 - ^
01:20:812 - ^
01:43:584 - ^, suggest change the one in Hard and make it end at 01:43:661 -
01:46:071 - ^
01:48:558 - ^

[Hard]
LNs mentioned in medium
00:46:459 - remove a note, different
01:46:148 - ^
01:48:636 - 01:49:257 - remove a note, same as 01:49:102 - 01:48:946 - 01:48:791 -

good luck
not much time because of exams x_x

Seiryuu

265 posts

Joined June 2013

Seiryuu 2015-01-17T01:33:23+00:00

From mod queue.

Basic

I have no idea how to mod this lol

Hard

00:41:485 (41485|2,41485|3,42107|0,42107|1) - Suggest adding making triple for cymbal sounds.
00:50:190 - Try this maybe?

01:20:034 (80034|3) - I think this should be at 01:19:879

Medium

01:00:993 - Add note? (Missing beat)
00:07:288 (7288|0,7444|2) - Follow the same sounds as before. (Same sound, or my earpiece is spoilt? ;w;)
01:42:262 (102262|1,102573|2) - Move these to same column ^
01:47:547 (107547|1) - Move to 1. ^
01:48:946 (108946|0,108946|3,109257|3,109257|2,109257|0) - Repeated sound, make the same.

~~Short mod gg kudos pls~~ jk I'm just tired ;w;
Good luck :3

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-17T17:14:11+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
m4m
1234
[Basic]
00:04:180 - add note like 00:01:693 -
00:06:667 - ^
00:09:154 - ^
00:14:128 - 00:16:615 - 00:19:102 - 00:21:589 - 00:24:076 - 00:26:563 - 00:29:050 - 00:53:920 - 00:56:408 - 00:58:895 -^ if all added star =1.28
ok they all sound different from 00:01:693 - when I listened again orz, but I still recommend to add
^nope, single is ok too, and look at 00:34:024 - e.t.c it's single

01:46:459 (106459|3) - column 2 | ok

01:48:636 - be like 00:48:946 - because 01:48:636 - same as 01:48:791 - 01:48:946 - 01:49:102 - 01:49:257 -
^ not same at all, there are cymbal only at 01:48:636 - and 01:49:257 - so imake double

[Medium]
00:40:242 - remove a note, same as 00:40:553 - | instead of remove, i added note at 00:40:553 -

01:18:791 - LN conflict with hard
01:19:879 - ^
01:20:812 - ^
^ cant I make different structure on that part? ._.

01:43:584 - ^, suggest change the one in Hard and make it end at 01:43:661 -
01:46:071 - ^
01:48:558 - ^
^ yosh, LN in Hard changed

[Hard]
LNs mentioned in medium
00:46:459 - remove a note, different
01:46:148 - ^
^ same, they have cymbal even a little

01:48:636 - 01:49:257 - remove a note, same as 01:49:102 - 01:48:946 - 01:48:791 -
^mentioned in Basic

good luck
not much time because of exams x_x | i know so that i force you to mod this week :U

[-Seiryuu-] wrote:
From mod queue.

Basic
I have no idea how to mod this lol

Medium
00:41:485 (41485|2,41485|3,42107|0,42107|1) - Suggest adding making triple for cymbal sounds. | nope, double for cymbal is enough in Normal-ike diff

00:50:190 - Try this maybe?
^ nope~

01:20:034 (80034|3) - I think this should be at 01:19:879 | not really current is fit tho,

Hard
01:00:993 - Add note? (Missing beat) | it's just an echo
00:07:288 (7288|0,7444|2) - Follow the same sounds as before. (Same sound, or my earpiece is spoilt? ;w;) | no, i make variations
01:42:262 (102262|1,102573|2) - Move these to same column ^ | want to keep
01:47:547 (107547|1) - Move to 1. ^ } keep
01:48:946 (108946|0,108946|3,109257|3,109257|2,109257|0) - Repeated sound, make the same. keep, i dont really like jack, even though its looks better if in same coloumn

~~Short mod gg kudos pls~~ jk I'm just tired ;w;
Good luck :3

thanks~

Ryouta-

88 posts

Joined June 2014

Ryouta- 2015-01-18T03:18:59+00:00

M4M
Coll : |1|2|3|4|

Check This

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-18T03:30:32+00:00

Ryouta- wrote:
M4M
Coll : |1|2|3|4|

Check This
Basic
00:14:128 (14128|3) - move to 1 (soundnya Tinggi> Rendah> Tinggi) | i know, but really boring if always at 1

00:24:076 (24076|3,24387|0) - Ctrl + H
01:34:024 (94024|0) - move to 4
^keep

01:38:687 (98687|3,98998|0) - Ctrl + H | ok, better

Medium
00:13:817 (13817|2) - move to 4
00:14:128 (14128|3) - move to 2
^ok

00:36:045 (36045|1,36200|2) - Ctrl + H
01:48:636 (108636|2) - move to 1
01:48:791 (108791|1) - move to 2
^keep

Hard
00:01:148- add note ? | good, i just realized there are drum sounds

00:40:863 (40863|3,40863|2) - move to 1 and 2 | keep

00:41:952 - add note ?
00:42:262 - ^
00:44:439 - ^
00:44:749 - ^
00:46:926 - ^
00:47:237 - ^
^keep, i only focus on clap and finish

00:53:299 - ^
00:55:786 - ^
00:58:273 - ^
^keep only focus on clap

thanks~

Arzenvald

4,056 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 2015-01-19T05:09:44+00:00

late mod orz..
1 2 3 4

[Basic]
00:30:294 (30294|0,30604|3,31071|1,31226|2) - this part a bit makes me surprised... try something simpler like http://puu.sh/eIHxP.jpg ?
00:40:863 (40863|3) - remove, then 00:41:019 (41019|2,41174|0) - move to 4 3
01:39:931 (99931|1,100242|2,100553|0,100863|3) - move backward 1/2 beat, something like http://puu.sh/eIHOl.png
01:48:636 (108636|0,108636|3,108791|1,108946|2,109102|1,109257|0,109257|3) - http://puu.sh/eIHTD.png

solid, i like it
[Hard]
00:41:174 (41174|3,41485|2,41485|3) - you forget 1/4 trill? or?
01:25:941 (85941|2,86097|1,86252|2,86408|1,86563|2,86718|1) - ctrl + H
01:30:838 - missing.... orz i think it's your job to find another missing sound..
01:36:045 (96045|1) - move to 01:35:734
01:41:174 (101174|1,101174|3,101174|0) - starts after last kiai, i really suggest you to not layer the percussion, current music flow rather off with your current pattern placement, mixed up both horn & percussion..
try to focus at 1 instrument in some phase, like, you ignore the percussion... it will affect whole feeling on your chart..

[Medium]
only want to point out per phase :
00:01:071 (1071|0,1071|2) - until 00:11:641 (11641|0,11641|3) - , i suggest you to not layer the percussion, let the player play the synth (toreroret~), as i said on Hard, try to focus at 1 instrument in some phase... like you did at 00:51:433 (51433|1,51433|2) - this phase.. i personally love this phase

01:21:278 (81278|1,81278|3) - until 01:41:174 (101174|0,101174|3) - (kiai phase), uhh, same case above, tbh, even this part seems even more bland, there's a lot of instrument you can layer, rich of instrument, and whole part was like.. 'duh where's the special part of this diff...
technically, medium diff is the most flawless diff in this mapset.. but then, physically, you can variate more things to make this diff even more fun.. same as Basic & Hard diff, you can make it more playful... =w=)b

poke me at chat if you need more assistance.. aand, good luck!

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-20T13:59:51+00:00

ExUsagi wrote:
late mod orz..
1 2 3 4

[Basic]
00:30:294 (30294|0,30604|3,31071|1,31226|2) - this part a bit makes me surprised... try something simpler like http://puu.sh/eIHxP.jpg ? | keep, i think your suggestion is harder ._.
00:40:863 (40863|3) - remove, then 00:41:019 (41019|2,41174|0) - move to 4 3 | ok
01:39:931 (99931|1,100242|2,100553|0,100863|3) - move backward 1/2 beat, something like http://puu.sh/eIHOl.png | brilliant give variation
01:48:636 (108636|0,108636|3,108791|1,108946|2,109102|1,109257|0,109257|3) - http://puu.sh/eIHTD.png | uhuk want to keep~

solid, i like it | "i like you too" Basic replied
[Hard]
00:41:174 (41174|3,41485|2,41485|3) - you forget 1/4 trill? or?
01:25:941 (85941|2,86097|1,86252|2,86408|1,86563|2,86718|1) - ctrl + H | keep
01:30:838 - missing.... orz i think it's your job to find another missing sound.. | what? i think theres no sound
01:36:045 (96045|1) - move to 01:35:734 nope, 01:35:734 - not loud to be double
01:41:174 (101174|1,101174|3,101174|0) - starts after last kiai, i really suggest you to not layer the percussion, current music flow rather off with your current pattern placement, mixed up both horn & percussion..
try to focus at 1 instrument in some phase, like, you ignore the percussion... it will affect whole feeling on your chart..
| adding notes at clap-like sound

[Medium]
only want to point out per phase :
00:01:071 (1071|0,1071|2) - until 00:11:641 (11641|0,11641|3) - , i suggest you to not layer the percussion, let the player play the synth (toreroret~), as i said on Hard, try to focus at 1 instrument in some phase... like you did at 00:51:433 (51433|1,51433|2) - this phase.. i personally love this phase
^thanks for like but, i think its not big problem here, its still normal-like diff pattern at all

01:21:278 (81278|1,81278|3) - until 01:41:174 (101174|0,101174|3) - (kiai phase), uhh, same case above, tbh, even this part seems even more bland, there's a lot of instrument you can layer, rich of instrument, and whole part was like.. 'duh where's the special part of this diff...
technically, medium diff is the most flawless diff in this mapset.. but then, physically, you can variate more things to make this diff even more fun.. same as Basic & Hard diff, you can make it more playful... =w=)b
good suggestion but u know la im lack of idea ;_; and i try rearranged some

poke me at chat if you need more assistance.. aand, good luck!

thanks for pointing out about that all!

Fuuyu

856 posts

Joined September 2013

Fuuyu 2015-01-21T15:31:18+00:00

Wafu~ Zan-chan .... Let's just start XD

Modding : All Diffs

Garou Mod

Column : |0~3|

Basic

Medium

00:41:796 - Add a note at 1

00:50:812 - Add a LN at 3 that end here 00:51:433

01:25:319 (85319|3,85319|0) - Isn't this a bit hard for NM, or is it just not? For me delete the note at 3

01:25:941 (85941|1) - Also delete this

No other comments ... >///<

Hard

Well, for some reason the song title fits well in the song XD, Good Luck

Lirai

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Joined December 2013

Lirai 2015-01-22T04:53:36+00:00

harder lah

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-22T05:36:50+00:00

DE-CADE wrote:
harder lah

relax la

Lirai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2013

Lirai 2015-01-22T09:44:35+00:00

As requested ~

dont fake me plz xd

[Basic]

00:00:449 (449|3,760|2,1071|0,1382|1) - You can create a jack here, 33 22 , since the drum had a same beat

00:39:931 (39931|0) - You can move this to 3, it's different sound with the next note which on col 1

00:49:413 (49413|0) - Move to 2
00:49:568 (49568|3) - Move to 3
^ Since drumpad vol was descending, it's better to make it near each part, even tho trill 14 was really hard for newb

01:01:382 - Disini lo bisa ngikut trompet

01:29:983 - Add to 3
01:30:294 - Add to 4
^ Since Tom's heard, also to accend your stream

01:48:014 - Add to 2, use 1/1 before drumroll just like 00:48:014

[Medium]

00:11:330 (11330|0) - Move to 3, place is here good to differ snare and kick 00:11:019 (11019|1) - like this note

00:14:439 (14439|2,14439|0,15060|1,15060|3) - Ctrl+h ,Evade the Jack on col 3 which isn't suits

00:31:382 - Add to 2 W since drum heard on 1/2

00:39:309 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2583091 jacknya gk pas imo, kelebihan xd

00:52:211 (52211|0) - Move to 2
00:57:185 (57185|0) - ^
^ trill doesn't suits imo

01:34:801 - Knapa disini gk layering pake LN? padahal sama 01:24:853

[Hard]

00:02:470 - Add note to 1
00:04:957 - Add note to 4
^ Jangan patah"lah

00:31:226 - Add to 1, +Drum

00:40:397 - Add to 2

00:58:895 (58895|0) - Move to 4
00:59:050 - Add to 3

01:09:465 - Add to 2
01:19:413 - Add to 1

Good Luck ~

Zan-

1,589 posts

Joined February 2012

Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-22T14:15:28+00:00

thankis, ~~will reply later~~ too lazy

but updated~

Kyousuke-

1,798 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyousuke- 2015-01-24T07:55:50+00:00

hi owo~ m4m

love this song too much <3

Column:
      _ _ _ _ 
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[General]

Basic: OD 7 | HP 6
Medium: OD 7 | HP 8

Basic

it's already good owo i can't find any error lol :U
01:15:371 (75371|2) - better to move at 4?

Medium

00:07:599 (7599|1) - move to 3. same like pattern before, same with this 00:06:977 - , and different with this 00:08:221 -
00:15:060 (15060|2) - move to 2. this sound is different with 00:14:439 - and for countinuation at 00:15:682 - because similiar sound
00:25:009 (25009|2) - move to 2. because it's different with 00:24:387 - and similiar with 00:25:630 -
00:27:496 (27496|2) - move to 2. same with this 00:28:739 - and for countinuation at 00:26:874 - . also different with this 00:28:117 -

00:33:091 (33091|2) - move to 4. same with this 00:31:848 -
00:35:579 (35579|2) - move to 2. same with this 00:34:335 - and different with 00:36:200 -

00:42:573 (42573|3) - move to 3. because different with this 00:43:040 -
00:45:527 (45527|3) - move to 3. same reason

00:52:055 (52055|3) - better move to 3, different with 00:51:744 - and 00:52:366 - and more comfortable~
00:57:029 (57029|3) - same?

01:25:630 (85630|2,85941|1,85941|3) - better to move 1 col to left. following next pattern

Hard

00:33:091 - 00:34:024 - suggestion~ http://puu.sh/eWRrf/2849ee3b7a.png

00:58:895 (58895|1) - this ln should be at col 3, coz you've put 00:56:408 (56408|1) - in col 2
suggestion~
00:58:428 (58428|1) - move to 3, 00:58:739 (58739|2) - move to 2
00:58:895 (58895|1) - move to 3

01:25:164 (85164|2) - this ln should be end at 01:25:319 -

01:37:910 (97910|3) - this ln should be end at 01:38:066 -
01:38:532 (98532|1) - this ln should be start at 01:38:687 -
^ if applied, 01:38:532 - add note at 3
^ if applied, and 01:38:221 (98221|2) - this ln seems not necessary, so delete it and 01:38:221 - add note at 3

01:40:397 (100397|0) - this ln should be end at 01:40:553 -
01:40:708 (100708|1) - this ln should be end at 01:40:863 -

~~will mod basic later~ _( :3_//_~~ *edit: Basic modded
sorry poor mod ;_;

pls rank dis map xD
goodluck~!

Last edited by Kyousuke- 2015-01-24T13:12:03+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-24T08:49:24+00:00

Kyousuke- wrote:
hi owo~ m4m

love this song too much <3
Column:
      _ _ _ _ 
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[General]
Basic: OD 7 | HP 6
Medium: OD 7 | HP 8
Medium
00:07:599 (7599|1) - move to 3. same like pattern before, same with this 00:06:977 - , and different with this 00:08:221 -
00:15:060 (15060|2) - move to 2. this sound is different with 00:14:439 - and for countinuation at 00:15:682 - because similiar sound
00:25:009 (25009|2) - move to 2. because it's different with 00:24:387 - and similiar with 00:25:630 -
00:27:496 (27496|2) - move to 2. same with this 00:28:739 - and for countinuation at 00:26:874 - . also different with this 00:28:117 -

00:33:091 (33091|2) - move to 4. same with this 00:31:848 - | ok
00:35:579 (35579|2) - move to 2. same with this 00:34:335 - and different with 00:36:200 -

00:42:573 (42573|3) - move to 3. because different with this 00:43:040 -
00:45:527 (45527|3) - move to 3. same reason

00:52:055 (52055|3) - better move to 3, different with 00:51:744 - and 00:52:366 - and more comfortable~
00:57:029 (57029|3) - same?

01:25:630 (85630|2,85941|1,85941|3) - better to move 1 col to left. following next pattern | ok

Hard
00:33:091 - 00:34:024 - suggestion~ http://puu.sh/eWRrf/2849ee3b7a.png

00:58:895 (58895|1) - this ln should be at col 3, coz you've put 00:56:408 (56408|1) - in col 2
suggestion~
00:58:428 (58428|1) - move to 3, 00:58:739 (58739|2) - move to 2
00:58:895 (58895|1) - move to 3
^ok

01:25:164 (85164|2) - this ln should be end at 01:25:319 -

01:37:910 (97910|3) - this ln should be end at 01:38:066 -
01:38:532 (98532|1) - this ln should be start at 01:38:687 -
^ if applied, 01:38:532 - add note at 3
^ if applied, and 01:38:221 (98221|2) - this ln seems not necessary, so delete it and 01:38:221 - add note at 3

01:40:397 (100397|0) - this ln should be end at 01:40:553 -
01:40:708 (100708|1) - this ln should be end at 01:40:863 -

will mod basic later~ _( :3_//_

no reply means reject.
i reject your mods about end point some LNs because current end point is still ok, no need to cut the LNs

~~waiting for basic~~ no change in basic

btw thanks for mod

Lunatic Raccoon

546 posts

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Lunatic Raccoon 2015-01-25T06:33:40+00:00

Hi Zan here comes my requested mod in the queue
Modding Medium and Hard
I can only point out a few things because the map is almost perfect <3

General

Song's impression: Sweet song, just as Dormir's regular style
Map impression: Tea-break maps, suitable for newbies and relaxation
Kind of curious here. Why does the tags have both "groovin" and "colette"? Does the song appears in both versions?

Medium

00:11:174 (11174|3,11330|2) - Double? It seems louder than the others
00:41:796 - Add a single here makes in more fun to play (The note can be either normal or long)
00:44:283 - ^
00:50:812 - Starting from here, the pitch goes back up. Add a LN here?
01:01:382 - You use the LN separately with the normal one right? If so, there must be an additional note distinguishing the long and the normal one at 01:01:382
01:03:869 - ^
01:06:356 - ^
01:08:843 - ^
Continue adding if you agree

Hard

00:09:465 (9465|3,9620|2) - To LNs and add two more at 00:09:775 and 00:09:931. 00:09:775 (9775|1) should be removed as well
You have already attached the pattern from 00:01:693 to 00:03:869 with the one from 00:04:180 to 00:06:356. It would be wiser to have the next 2 patterns the same with each other (Not the same with the previous 2, just the same with each other)
Or you can take a look at this: http://puu.sh/eZI3P/4a2cbc24b9.jpg (Just a suggestion, you can change the column to whatever you like)
01:01:382 - The same as normal
Continue adding if you agree

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-25T11:20:10+00:00

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:
Hi Zan here comes my requested mod in the queue
Modding Medium and Hard
I can only point out a few things because the map is almost perfect <3 \`v`/
General
Song's impression: Sweet song, just as Dormir's regular style <3
Map impression: Tea-break maps, suitable for newbies and relaxation written on creator's word: "relax."
Kind of curious here. Why does the tags have both "groovin" and "colette"? Does the song appears in both versions? yes, this song also appears in other versions
Medium
00:11:174 (11174|3,11330|2) - Double? It seems louder than the others | nope~
00:41:796 - Add a single here makes in more fun to play (The note can be either normal or long)
00:44:283 - ^
00:50:812 - Starting from here, the pitch goes back up. Add a LN here?
01:01:382 - You use the LN separately with the normal one right? If so, there must be an additional note distinguishing the long and the normal one at 01:01:382
01:03:869 - ^
01:06:356 - ^
01:08:843 - ^
Continue adding if you agree | I only add as double if it feels louder like 01:03:869 - 01:06:356 - e.t.c
Hard
00:09:465 (9465|3,9620|2) - To LNs and add two more at 00:09:775 and 00:09:931. 00:09:775 (9775|1) should be removed as well
You have already attached the pattern from 00:01:693 to 00:03:869 with the one from 00:04:180 to 00:06:356. It would be wiser to have the next 2 patterns the same with each other (Not the same with the previous 2, just the same with each other)
Or you can take a look at this: http://puu.sh/eZI3P/4a2cbc24b9.jpg (Just a suggestion, you can change the column to whatever you like)
^it took me long time to get what you say xD i take your suggestion with some different placement, thanks<3
01:01:382 - The same as normal | same with my replu at medium too lol
Continue adding if you agree

thanks~~~

Frim4503

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Frim4503 2015-01-27T10:36:39+00:00

as requested from

sorry for delay
kolom 1,2,3,4

Basic

00:49:413 (49413|0) - move to 1
00:49:568 (49568|3) - ^ 4

Medium

00:02:003 (2003|1) - move to 2
00:02:625 (2625|2) - ^ 3
00:05:112 (5112|2) - ^ 3
00:11:641 (11641|2) - ^ 3
00:53:765 (53765|0) - ^ 1
00:54:076 (54076|2) - ^ 3
00:54:231 (54231|3) - ^ 4

Hard

00:30:294 - 00:31:226 - http://img7.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 81b6a3.jpg

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-27T14:00:14+00:00

fak dopost

Last edited by Zan- 2015-01-27T14:02:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-01-27T14:01:17+00:00

Frim4503 wrote:
as requested from
sorry for delay
kolom 1,2,3,4

Basic
00:49:413 (49413|0) - move to 1
00:49:568 (49568|3) - ^ 4
seems ok, since other diff are in symmetric col.

Medium
00:02:003 (2003|1) - move to 2
00:02:625 (2625|2) - ^ 3
00:05:112 (5112|2) - ^ 3
00:11:641 (11641|2) - ^ 3
00:53:765 (53765|0) - ^ 1
00:54:076 (54076|2) - ^ 3
00:54:231 (54231|3) - ^ 4
^ no matched notes with those link, did you mod with latest update?

Hard
00:30:294 - 00:31:226 - http://img7.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 81b6a3.jpg
^hhhh no, your suggestion is full 1/4, the correct one is mixed 1/4->1/6->1/3

thanks anyway~

Frim4503

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Joined July 2013

Frim4503 2015-01-27T17:03:01+00:00

Medium

00:02:003 (2003|1) - move to 2
00:02:625 (2625|2) - ^ 3
00:05:112 (5112|2) - ^ 3
00:11:641 (11641|2) - ^ 3
00:53:765 (53765|0) - ^ 1
00:54:076 (54076|2) - ^ 3
00:54:231 (54231|3) - ^ 4
^ no matched notes with those link, did you mod with latest update?

idk
maybe i forgot to update it
sorry

Taiwan-NAK

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Joined July 2013

Taiwan-NAK 2015-01-31T16:44:27+00:00

Line : 1 2 3 4

Hard

00:00:915 (915|2) - Move to 2

00:01:537 (1537|2) - Remove

00:02:470 (2470|0) - Move to 3 and 00:02:625 (2625|3) - Move to 3

00:02:781 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655893

00:04:180 - Add

00:04:957 (4957|1,5112|0) - Ctrl+J

00:05:268 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655899

00:07:755 - Add at 1 or 3

00:09:775 - 00:10:242 - 00:10:553 - Add

00:06:977 (6977|2) - Maybe move to 4 feels good

00:08:687 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655965

00:30:294 (30294|0,30371|1,30449|2,30527|3,30604|0,30656|1,30708|2,30760|3,30812|2,30863|1,30915|0) - Ctrl+H and 00:30:915 - Add at 1

00:31:433 (31433|1) - Move to 4

00:38:221 (38221|2,38376|3) - Ctrl+J

00:55:319 - 00:52:832 - 00:51:589 - 00:52:522 - Add

00:53:299 - Add at 3

00:55:009 - 00:55:319 - 00:52:832 - Add

00:55:786 - Add at 4

00:57:496 - 00:57:806 - Add

00:58:273 - Add at 3

00:59:516 (59516|0) - no LN here

00:59:983 (59983|2,60294|1) - LN here better

01:00:993 - 01:01:148 - 01:01:226 - missed sound

01:00:915 (60915|2,61071|1) - Remove a note for this part . just one note here better

01:00:604 - 00:59:983 - Add

01:01:382 - Start from here. follow the soft sound better i guess and end here 01:08:843 -
01:11:330 - Same. end here 01:18:791 -

01:20:579 - 01:20:734 - Add . and change pattern for this

00:50:345 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2656033

01:30:604 - 01:31:071 - Add

the end

nice one

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-02-01T11:06:35+00:00

Taiwan-NAK wrote:
Line : 1 2 3 4

Hard
00:00:915 (915|2) - Move to 2 | nope

00:01:537 (1537|2) - Remove | nice catch!

00:02:470 (2470|0) - Move to 3 | yes | and 00:02:625 (2625|3) - Move to 3 | no

00:02:781 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655893 | nooo

00:04:180 - Add | no

00:04:957 (4957|1,5112|0) - Ctrl+J | good

00:05:268 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655899 | nooo

00:07:755 - Add at 1 or 3 | nope

00:09:775 - 00:10:242 - 00:10:553 - Add | add some

00:06:977 (6977|2) - Maybe move to 4 feels good | i dont want jack

00:08:687 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2655965 | good

00:30:294 (30294|0,30371|1,30449|2,30527|3,30604|0,30656|1,30708|2,30760|3,30812|2,30863|1,30915|0) - Ctrl+H and 00:30:915 - Add at 1 | good

00:31:433 (31433|1) - Move to 4 | no

00:38:221 (38221|2,38376|3) - Ctrl+J no

00:55:319 - 00:52:832 - 00:51:589 - 00:52:522 - Add no la

00:53:299 - Add at 3 xxx

00:55:009 - 00:55:319 - 00:52:832 - Add xxx

00:55:786 - Add at 4 xxx

00:57:496 - 00:57:806 - Add xxx

00:58:273 - Add at 3 xxx

00:59:516 (59516|0) - no LN here bass

00:59:983 (59983|2,60294|1) - LN here better good

01:00:993 - 01:01:148 - 01:01:226 - missed sound i think its just echo

01:00:915 (60915|2,61071|1) - Remove a note for this part . just one note here better bcs of ^ so i put double

01:00:604 - 00:59:983 - Add

01:01:382 - Start from here. follow the soft sound better i guess and end here 01:08:843 -
01:11:330 - Same. end here 01:18:791 -
^too long la

01:20:579 - 01:20:734 - Add . and change pattern for this aha

00:50:345 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2656033 relax map, that hard to read ;_;

01:30:604 - 01:31:071 - Add nope

the end nice one

thanks~

[AyanoTatemaya]

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[AyanoTatemaya] 2015-02-03T12:15:04+00:00

omg is this mapped by Zan? im a big fan kyaah~! >.<

col: 1|2|3|4

[Hard]
00:08:687 (8687|2,8998|3) - move to 4 and 2, respectively
00:33:091 (33091|3,33247|2) - ctrl+j. feels more natural, and can be jacked with 00:32:781 (32781|2) -
00:36:200 - http://puu.sh/fpMp9/62fd4cc1e8.jpg
00:40:553 (40553|0,40708|1) - ctrl+j
00:42:418 (42418|0,42418|1) - move 1 space to the right, then move 00:42:573 (42573|2) - to 2. if followed, move 00:44:905 (44905|3) - to 3 and 00:47:392 (47392|3) - to 2 for variation~
00:51:045 (51045|2,51123|1) - ctrl+j, accents the increasing pitch better
00:52:055 (52055|3) - move to 3
00:54:698 (54698|2) - move to 2
00:56:718 (56718|2,56874|3,57029|1,57185|2) - hmmm. reverse stairs... http://puu.sh/fpO7d/54bc5d387c.jpg
explanation? 00:52:522 (52522|2,52832|1,53143|0,55009|2,55319|1,55630|0) - and then look at 00:59:983 (59983|2,60294|1,60604|2) - . *runs~*
01:02:625 - http://puu.sh/fpOTz/55f5e95e28.jpg
01:12:418 (72418|1,72573|0) -

http://puu.sh/fpPOh/32cfd13970.jpg
01:19:413 - note at 2, then move 01:19:568 (79568|1,79724|2) - to 3 and 1
01:25:941 (85941|2,86097|1) - (optional, to make the pattern slightly harder) ctrl+j, then move 01:26:252 (86252|2) - to 1
01:30:604 (90604|0,90915|3) - anticlimatic. add notes on 01:30:604 - and 01:30:915 - preferably at 4 and 1
01:34:957 (94957|3) - move to 3
01:37:755 - http://puu.sh/fpQLx/5048205e6e.jpg
01:42:573 - http://puu.sh/fpQZH/6878aab65f.jpg

gomenasai senpai for my very unhelpful mod. pls dont hate me!

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-02-04T15:14:00+00:00

[AyanoTatemaya] wrote:
omg is this mapped by Zan? im a big fan kyaah~! >.< | urusai >:|

col: 1|2|3|4

[Hard]
00:08:687 (8687|2,8998|3) - move to 4 and 2, respectively
00:33:091 (33091|3,33247|2) - ctrl+j. feels more natural, and can be jacked with 00:32:781 (32781|2) -
00:36:200 - http://puu.sh/fpMp9/62fd4cc1e8.jpg
00:40:553 (40553|0,40708|1) - ctrl+j
00:42:418 (42418|0,42418|1) - move 1 space to the right, then move 00:42:573 (42573|2) - to 2. if followed, move 00:44:905 (44905|3) - to 3 and 00:47:392 (47392|3) - to 2 for variation~
00:51:045 (51045|2,51123|1) - ctrl+j, accents the increasing pitch better
00:52:055 (52055|3) - move to 3
00:54:698 (54698|2) - move to 2
00:56:718 (56718|2,56874|3,57029|1,57185|2) - hmmm. reverse stairs... http://puu.sh/fpO7d/54bc5d387c.jpg
explanation? 00:52:522 (52522|2,52832|1,53143|0,55009|2,55319|1,55630|0) - and then look at 00:59:983 (59983|2,60294|1,60604|2) - . *runs~* | short bass .-.
01:02:625 - http://puu.sh/fpOTz/55f5e95e28.jpg
01:12:418 (72418|1,72573|0) - http://puu.sh/fpPOh/32cfd13970.jpg | keep, i want those holds follow pitch correctly
01:19:413 - note at 2, then move 01:19:568 (79568|1,79724|2) - to 3 and 1
01:25:941 (85941|2,86097|1) - (optional, to make the pattern slightly harder) ctrl+j, then move 01:26:252 (86252|2) - to 1
01:30:604 (90604|0,90915|3) - anticlimatic. add notes on 01:30:604 - and 01:30:915 - preferably at 4 and 1
01:34:957 (94957|3) - move to 3
01:37:755 - http://puu.sh/fpQLx/5048205e6e.jpg
01:42:573 - http://puu.sh/fpQZH/6878aab65f.jpg

gomenasai senpai for my very unhelpful mod. pls dont hate me!

no reply means ok, this really helpful, make pattern more enjoyable, love you nee-chan!

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-02-06T18:29:21+00:00

I'll go through this on irc with you soon.

Ichigaki

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Ichigaki 2015-02-08T08:47:50+00:00

After checking some pattern in all diffs, and hitsound a bit, Congratulations, Bubbled

IRC mod

12:36 Ichigaki: males ah
12:36 Ichigaki: gw modding ja lah
12:36 Ichigaki: dormir mau?
12:37 Zan -: mod mah silahkan
12:37 Zan -: aja
12:37 Ichigaki: irc?
12:37 Zan -: ih dopost
12:38 Zan -: mumpung internet gue ganteng, yaudah irc
12:38 Zan -: tadinya mau ngecek ini
12:38 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/522454 Petit Rabbit's - Nichijou Decoration [Insane]]
12:38 Zan -: yaudah dormir yuk
12:38 Ichigaki: males gw
12:38 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581457 Dormir - Une mage blanche [Hard]]
12:39 Zan -: ahay
12:39 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581457 Dormir - Une mage blanche [Hard]]
12:39 Ichigaki: pake normal sebagai reference
12:39 Ichigaki: aktifin show sample sound
12:40 Ichigaki: lu nambah hitsound ga?
12:40 Zan -: medium pak
12:41 Zan -: custom? ada 1
12:41 Ichigaki: hit clap kan?
12:41 Ichigaki: okay
12:41 Zan -: iya
12:41 Ichigaki: 00:01:226 (1226|1) - remove whistle
12:42 Zan -: bentar nyobain
12:42 Ichigaki: 00:05:112 (5112|1,5112|2) - ganti C salah satunya
12:42 Ichigaki: normal udah jadi reference kan?
12:42 Zan -: 1 1 nyong
12:42 Zan -: udah
12:42 Zan -: gue coba dulu mod lu
12:43 Zan -: 00:01:226 (1226|1) - lepas W serasa ada yg hilang coy
12:44 Ichigaki: 00:01:537 - add note disini kalo gitu
12:44 Zan -: 00:01:537 - added with W
12:46 Ichigaki: 00:01:693 - sampai 00:11:641 - ga paham LNnya gw
12:47 Ichigaki: 'ga konsisten'
12:48 Zan -: emang sih...
12:48 Zan -: bentar
12:49 Zan -: 00:01:693 (1693|3) - short piano | 00:02:781 (2781|0,3091|3,3402|1) - ada piano ada efek yg nut net nut |
12:49 Ichigaki: 00:02:159 (2159|1,2470|2) - nut nut
12:49 Ichigaki: 00:04:646 (4646|0,4957|0) - ^
12:49 Ichigaki: 00:06:977 (6977|1,7133|3,7288|0,7444|2) - ?
12:50 Ichigaki: 00:09:154 (9154|0,9309|2,9465|3,9620|1,9775|0) - ?
12:50 Ichigaki: 00:11:252 - add note
12:51 Zan -: 00:02:159 (2159|1,2470|2) - nut nut gak terlalu kerasa ngehold jadi gak di LN | 00:06:977 (6977|1,7133|3,7288|0,7444|2) - tapi kenapa di sini gue LN-in, changed these to normal
12:52 Zan -: 00:09:309 (9309|2,9465|3,9620|1,9775|0) - this too changed
12:52 Ichigaki: 00:09:154 (9154|0) - ini ngapain?
12:53 Zan -: 00:09:154 (9154|0) - kayak sebelumnya... short piano....
12:53 Zan -: ah blame me wkwkwkwk
12:53 Ichigaki: 00:11:952 - 00:30:294 - yang lu ikutin apaan sih?
12:53 Ichigaki: drum? piano?
12:53 Ichigaki: konsisten sih, gitu terus, tapi bingung gw yang diikutin apaan
12:55 Zan -: ya gitu, rhythm basicnya...
12:56 Ichigaki: 00:12:729 - bagian kaya gini ga harusnya kosong 
12:56 Ichigaki: 00:13:972 - ini juga
12:56 Zan -: tapi gua kasih bolong2 kayak di 00:22:677 - sebagai gap aja... ok im bad
12:56 Ichigaki: artinya, isi semua
12:56 Ichigaki: baguslah
12:56 Zan -: semua modder bilang itu, and i say same reason to reject, i give gap
12:57 Ichigaki:  tapi better to not
12:57 Ichigaki: lagian para advance player pasti bisa, dan itu emang udah ikut rhythmnya 
12:57 Ichigaki: dan asing kalo di abaikan
12:57 Ichigaki: ini sugestiku
12:58 Ichigaki: terserah juga kamu biarkan atau isi
12:59 Ichigaki: 00:30:449 (30449|1,30527|0) - ctrl + g
13:00 Ichigaki: 00:31:382 - add buat drum, mungkin enak
13:00 Zan -: kimochi warui, aku kamu :*)))
13:00 Ichigaki: ehh
13:00 Ichigaki: jijik?
13:00 Ichigaki: ;-;)a
13:01 Zan -: still in my pendirian, i give gap yo
13:02 Zan -: bentar fixing HS
13:03 Ichigaki: 00:38:066 (38066|1) - harusnya sama kaya 00:33:091 (33091|1) - 
13:04 Ichigaki: 00:37:133 (37133|3,37288|2) - soalnya ada ini
13:04 Ichigaki: 00:37:133 (37133|3,37288|2) - add note
13:04 Ichigaki: 00:41:097 - add note (sorry salah link tadi)
13:04 Ichigaki: 00:40:086 - 00:40:397 - add note for bas
13:04 Ichigaki: *bass
13:05 Zan -: 00:30:449 (30449|1,30527|0) - reversed
13:05 Zan -: yah kan udah ada ini 00:30:449 (30449|1,30527|0) - masih ngikutin synth itu
13:05 Zan -: 00:37:133 (37133|3,37288|2) - repattern, jadi sama kaya 00:34:646 - | akhirnya ada yg ngingetin ini :*)))
13:07 Zan -: 00:41:097 - not added - lebih suka yg skrng
13:07 Ichigaki:  00:48:946 (48946|2,48946|3,49102|0,49102|1,49257|2,49257|3,49413|0,49413|1,49568|2,49568|3) - kenapa hard lebih gampang daripada medium?
13:08 Zan -: 00:40:086 - 00:40:397 - not added (for bass) ngikutin feeling vocalnya | bentar chi gue bilang 1 1 gue bales ;wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww;
13:08 Ichigaki: lama xd
13:08 Ichigaki: ya deh
13:09 Zan -: 00:48:946 (48946|2,48946|3,49102|1,49102|0,49257|3,49257|2,49413|1,49413|0,49568|3,49568|2) - apa yg harus ku lakukan dengan ini
13:09 Ichigaki: tukar dengan medium
13:09 Ichigaki: 00:48:946 (48946|2,49102|1,49257|2,49413|1,49568|2) - atau ini di ctrl H
13:10 Zan -: 00:48:946 - 2,4 - 1,3 - repeat gimana?
13:10 Ichigaki: eh?
13:10 Ichigaki: terserah kamu aja deh
13:12 Zan -: geuleuh
13:13 Ichigaki: ya gw bingung juga
13:13 Zan -: http://puu.sh/fCYbN/f58056746c.jpg | begini juga kebilang susah kan?
13:13 Ichigaki: itu kan kalo di ctrl H
13:13 Ichigaki: `-`)a
13:13 Ichigaki: nggak terlalu sih
13:13 Zan -: yausahlah, skip ini xD
13:13 Ichigaki: tapi udah lumayan beda dari 12 , 34
13:13 Zan -: yaudah
13:14 Zan -: next pak
13:14 Ichigaki: 01:08:843 (68843|3) - bandingin sama Medium
13:16 Zan -: susahan hard
13:16 Ichigaki:  bukan
13:16 Ichigaki: LNnya doang
13:16 Ichigaki: cukup nggak konsisten, mengingat LN usage mu cukup sama antara hard sama medium
13:17 Zan -: hmmm betul sih, lemme think
13:17 Ichigaki: 01:18:791 - sampai 01:21:589 - juga
13:18 Zan -: beda di dua part itu gapap kali ya............
13:18 Zan -: gapapa
13:18 Ichigaki: cuma mengingatkan, better to be consistent
13:19 Ichigaki: 01:30:915 (90915|1,91071|1) - rasa-rasa ku suaranya beda
13:19 Ichigaki: yang terakhir lebih rendah
13:19 Zan -: sebenernya awal map ini di submit, semua LN sama, tapi pas kena mod gue jadi repattern wkwk
13:19 Zan -: keep dolo lah
13:20 Zan -: moved
13:20 Zan -: 01:30:604 - 01:30:915 -
13:23 Ichigaki: 01:37:288 (97288|0,97599|3,97910|2) - bandingin sama 01:24:853 (84853|3,85164|2,85475|1,85786|0) - 
13:24 Zan -: anjrit ancur LN gua, kenapa berantakan gini wkwkwwk remap remap
13:26 Ichigaki: 01:39:775 (99775|2,100086|3) - juga
13:26 Ichigaki: 01:41:641 (101641|2) - add ini di Medium
13:26 Ichigaki: 01:44:128 (104128|0) - ^
13:26 Ichigaki: eh ga usah nggak apa sih kalau LN ini
13:27 Ichigaki: 01:48:636 (108636|1) - remove?
13:27 Zan -: LN mana
13:27 Zan -: lagi remap nih
13:30 Ichigaki: remap ya?
13:30 Ichigaki: udah deh mod gw
13:31 Zan -: iyak, yaudah btar aja
13:31 Zan -: entar
13:33 Ichigaki: gimana ini?
13:33 Ichigaki: nunggu lu atau stop aja?
13:34 Zan -: remap kiai doang, silahkan lu ngapain dulu
13:34 Zan -: pause
13:36 Zan -: jadi casual pattern......... rip
13:38 Ichigaki: rip
13:38 Ichigaki: gara-gara aku?
13:39 Zan -: ya nggak juga, gara2 lu malah gua sadar ini hilang konsistensi, bagus kok
13:39 Zan -: update
13:39 Zan -: ing
13:40 Zan -: coba update pak
13:40 Ichigaki: wait, gw nonton The Interview
13:41 Ichigaki: ahahahaha
13:41 Zan -: ah gak tau film bioskop e__e
13:41 Ichigaki: tentang Kim Jong Un
13:41 Ichigaki: oh ya
13:41 Zan -: aduh korea
13:41 Ichigaki: film amerika btw
13:41 Ichigaki: oh ya
13:42 Ichigaki: tentang audio preview time
13:42 Ichigaki: gw bingung enaknya nyaranin dimana
13:42 Zan -: hooh
13:42 Ichigaki: 00:30:294 - disini kurang pas
13:42 Ichigaki: 01:20:656 - mungkin sini?
13:43 Zan -: ok deh deket2 kiai aja
13:43 Zan -: ok di situ
13:44 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581459 Dormir - Une mage blanche [Medium]]
13:44 Zan -: kiai hard cek tak?
13:45 Ichigaki: udah
13:45 Ichigaki: ga masalah udahan
13:45 Ichigaki: tapi kok LNnya pada ilang
13:45 Ichigaki: lol
13:45 Zan -: okelah jadi casual ye kwkw
13:45 Zan -: cari aman
13:45 Zan -: pusing ngeLN di kiai
13:45 Ichigaki: lol
13:46 Zan -: jatohnya gak konsisten lagi
13:46 Ichigaki: medium ye sekarang
13:46 Zan -: oke
13:47 Ichigaki: 00:30:915 (30915|1,31071|0,31226|3,31382|1,31537|2,31537|0) - rearrange
13:48 Ichigaki: 00:48:946 (48946|3,48946|0,49102|1,49102|2,49257|0,49257|3,49413|1,49413|2,49568|0,49568|3) - 34, 12, 34, 12, 34
13:48 Zan -: ga ada ide...
13:48 Zan -: 00:48:946 - done
13:49 Ichigaki: 01:13:195 (73195|3) - LN ini mulainya dari 01:13:040 - perasaan
13:49 Ichigaki: kalau ganti, jangan lupa Hardnya juga
13:51 Zan -: 00:30:915 (30915|1,31071|0,31226|3,31382|1,31537|0,31537|2) - chi... bingung...
13:52 Ichigaki: ikut drum aje la
13:52 Ichigaki: 00:31:382 (31382|1) - move to 00:30:760 - 
13:52 Zan -: 01:13:195 (73195|3) - ih ini startnya bener kok
13:52 Zan -: decade nanya ini NM doang atau buat bubble?
13:53 Ichigaki: nm
13:53 Ichigaki: xd
13:53 Zan -: oke
13:53 Ichigaki: minggu depan atau 2 minggu depan kali
13:53 Ichigaki: 00:33:558 (33558|1) - remove
13:53 Zan -: 00:30:915 (30915|1,31071|0,31226|3,31382|1,31537|2,31537|0) - kalo ngikut drum, ini udah ikut drum
13:53 Ichigaki: ah, iye, lupa, terserah deh
13:54 Ichigaki: rearrange aja saranku
13:54 Ichigaki: kurang playable gitulah
13:54 Zan -: 00:36:045 (36045|1) - ini juga remove dunk
13:54 Ichigaki: iya la
13:54 Ichigaki: 00:38:532 (38532|1) - 
13:55 Ichigaki: tapi lagi, ini keputusanmu juga
13:55 Ichigaki: lagian udah konsisten juga sebenarnya
13:55 Zan -: remove aja deh, jadi kerasa gak konsisten lagi
13:55 Ichigaki: 00:46:770 - add note
13:56 Ichigaki: 00:44:283 (44283|3) - kaya ini
13:56 Ichigaki: 00:56:563 (56563|1) - remove? kurang denger akunya
13:57 Zan -: 00:46:770 - added with W|C
13:57 Zan -: 00:56:563 (56563|1) - ada synth atau apalah itu
13:57 Ichigaki: 00:59:827 - http://puu.sh/fD33F/ca2e9d3a21.jpg
13:57 Zan -: 00:51:589 - added nih di sini btw
13:59 Ichigaki:  01:40:708 (100708|3) - normal note aja la
13:59 Zan -: full screen dong
14:00 Zan -: 00:59:827 - full screen dund kk
14:00 Ichigaki: wait
14:01 Ichigaki: internet
14:01 Zan -: gue lupa belom sholat, astaghfirullah, brb
14:01 Ichigaki: http://puu.sh/fD3pR/d4633f027e.jpg
14:07 Zan -: 00:59:983 - oke
14:08 Ichigaki: brb :<
14:25 Ichigaki: come back~
14:25 Ichigaki: abis shalat ama makan ww
14:26 Ichigaki: full screen http://puu.sh/fD3pR/d4633f027e.jpg
14:30 Zan -: hadeuh lu juga baru sholat wkwk
14:30 Ichigaki: huehue
14:31 Zan -: lanjut medium pak
14:31 Ichigaki: itu yang masalah full screen tadi
14:31 Ichigaki: preview timenya jangan lupa 
14:32 Zan -: iya udah, preview udah fix all diff
14:32 Ichigaki: basic desu~
14:32 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581455 Dormir - Une mage blanche [Basic]]
14:32 Ichigaki: 00:00:449 (449|3,760|2,1071|0,1382|1) - kurang baik hsnya
14:33 Ichigaki: pilih yang lebih utama
14:33 Zan -: bentar 5 menit lagi
14:33 Zan -: brb
14:33 Ichigaki: pokoknya usahakan hitsound itu jangan sampe ' x | x '
14:33 Ichigaki: pilih yang paling menonjol aja
14:33 Ichigaki: kata ExPew gitu
14:40 Zan -: 00:00:449 (449|3,760|2,1071|0,1382|1) - berarti clap aja ya
14:41 Ichigaki: ya
14:41 Ichigaki: omg
14:41 Ichigaki: semua hitsoundnya
14:41 Ichigaki: lol
14:41 *Ichigaki slaps Zan
14:42 Zan -: ya emang wkwwk
14:42 Zan -: baru tau gue kalo begitu kurang baik
14:42 Zan -: modder ga ada yg mempermasalahkan ini
14:42 Zan -: jadi ya gitu...
14:47 Zan -: HS fixed at all
14:58 Ichigaki: done?
14:58 Ichigaki: sorry abis bantu ibu
14:58 Ichigaki: updated kah?
15:00 Zan -: oh updating deh
15:00 Zan -: updated
15:04 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/581455 Dormir - Une mage blanche [Basic]]
15:04 Ichigaki: 00:50:812 - 
15:04 Ichigaki: coba deh bandingin sama adv
15:04 Ichigaki: menurutmu lebih cocok mana
15:14 Ichigaki: 01:48:014 (108014|1) - remove
15:14 Ichigaki: oi jan, belum
15:14 Zan -: dc
15:14 Ichigaki: :<
15:14 Ichigaki: ohhh
15:14 Zan -: lagi hujan, labil
15:14 Ichigaki: pantas
15:14 Ichigaki: itu deh apply
15:14 Ichigaki: 00:50:812 - sama ini, coba bandingin sama ADV
15:14 Ichigaki: menurutmu enak mana
15:15 Zan -: removed
15:15 Zan -: apaan mana adv
15:15 Ichigaki: 00:50:812 - 
15:15 Ichigaki: bandingin doang sama adv
15:18 Zan -: hard?
15:18 Zan -: medium?
15:18 Ichigaki: medium
15:18 Ichigaki: orz
15:18 Ichigaki: gw lupa
15:18 Ichigaki: hhhh
15:18 Ichigaki: wait, gw nganter adek gw
15:18 Ichigaki: coba lu cek ulang lagi
15:19 Ichigaki: trus update
15:21 Zan -: k
15:21 Zan -: ok
15:22 Zan -: dah, di samain sama medium
15:34 Ichigaki: updated?
15:35 Zan -: iya udah

To next BN : Please look more about hitsound consistency, the other should be fine.

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-02-08T10:24:32+00:00

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-02-08T11:35:10+00:00

yao

[Hard]
00:04:957 (4957|0) - Why clap?
00:09:465 (9465|3) - Missing clap

00:13:661 (13661|1,13661|2) - Clap + whistle in Hard, but in Medium it's only whistle. Optional, you can put C|W in medium
00:16:148 (16148|2,16148|1) - ^
00:18:636 (18636|2,18636|1) - ^
00:21:123 (21123|2,21123|1) - ^
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - ^
00:26:097 (26097|1,26097|2) - ^
00:28:584 (28584|3,28584|2) - ^

00:30:915 (30915|0) - Best off putting whistle here, since it's an abrupt hitnormal in all that whistle.

00:36:356 (36356|2) - Sure about clap here?

00:41:019 (41019|1) - Missing clap, there is clap in medium

00:54:853 (54853|3) - Spread whistle|clap to 00:54:853 (54853|0) - , so only one sample is on 1 note.
00:56:097 (56097|2) - Same here. (00:56:097 (56097|0) - )
00:58:584 (58584|0) - Same here. (00:58:584 (58584|3) - )

01:10:086 (70086|0) - Clap? (Optional)
01:20:034 (80034|0) - ^ ? Definitely is more fitting.

01:25:475 (85475|1) - Missing whistle
01:25:786 (85786|0) - Missing whistle
01:36:822 (96822|0) - Missing whistle
01:37:288 (97288|0) - Missing whistle
01:37:599 (97599|3) - Missing whistle

01:39:931 (99931|1,99931|0) - Whistle clap here, but there is no sound in Medium. Add in Medium Whistle.

Call me back to fix Basic hitsounding.

Ginshu

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Ginshu 2015-02-09T08:58:09+00:00

Zan - wrote:

Zan-

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Topic Starter

Zan- 2015-02-11T15:24:42+00:00

Starry- wrote:
yao

[Hard]
00:04:957 (4957|0) - Why clap?
00:09:465 (9465|3) - Missing clap

00:13:661 (13661|1,13661|2) - Clap + whistle in Hard, but in Medium it's only whistle. Optional, you can put C|W in medium
00:16:148 (16148|2,16148|1) - ^
00:18:636 (18636|2,18636|1) - ^
00:21:123 (21123|2,21123|1) - ^
00:23:610 (23610|2,23610|1) - ^
00:26:097 (26097|1,26097|2) - ^
00:28:584 (28584|3,28584|2) - ^

00:30:915 (30915|0) - Best off putting whistle here, since it's an abrupt hitnormal in all that whistle.

00:36:356 (36356|2) - Sure about clap here?

00:41:019 (41019|1) - Missing clap, there is clap in medium

00:54:853 (54853|3) - Spread whistle|clap to 00:54:853 (54853|0) - , so only one sample is on 1 note.
00:56:097 (56097|2) - Same here. (00:56:097 (56097|0) - )
00:58:584 (58584|0) - Same here. (00:58:584 (58584|3) - )

01:10:086 (70086|0) - Clap? (Optional) | no
01:20:034 (80034|0) - ^ ? Definitely is more fitting.

01:25:475 (85475|1) - Missing whistle
01:25:786 (85786|0) - Missing whistle
01:36:822 (96822|0) - Missing whistle
01:37:288 (97288|0) - Missing whistle
01:37:599 (97599|3) - Missing whistle

01:39:931 (99931|1,99931|0) - Whistle clap here, but there is no sound in Medium. Add in Medium Whistle.

Call me back to fix Basic hitsounding.

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