baraatje123 wrote:
From LordRaika's Modding Party
[General]
Set preview point at the start of the kiai (01:19:227)
If they hear no noise when previewing, they don't know if they'd like the song add in 01:17:798 -
[Normal]
Set CS to 3.6 (Not too small, but then 00:09:227 (1,1) - Looks perfect :3) look nice
00:37:798 (1,2) - These notes overlap quite ugly, change location of (1) fixed
00:42:084 (1,1) - Delete NC, You shouldn't do inconsistent NC in Normal fixed
00:57:798 (1,1,1) - Again, an ugly overlap, change location of any of these 3 fixed
01:07:798 (3) - For the flow, maybe you should Ctrl G this fixed
01:29:941 (4,1) - The blanket can be improved quite a lot (off-topic, you are really good with blankets :3) fixed
01:33:513 (1,2) - ^^ fixed
01:44:227 (3,1) - ^^ fixed
01:47:084 (4,1) - ^^ fixed
01:52:441 (5) - ^^ (Move to 248:324 for good blanket) fixed
[Hard]
00:22:084 (3,4,5,6) - Due to high spacing between these notes, this is really hard, and BPM is quite high for this pattern to not be too hard for a hard√
00:45:834 (6,7,8) - Doesn't feel really good, with the reverse suddenly ending, and then nothing. You can better make a 1/4 slider with 2 reverses (starting at white, ending at blue,) and then add a note
00:48:156 (5,6,7) - Kinda ugly overlap, change shape of (7) to prevent this √
00:49:227 (1,2) - ^^, change any of these 2 sliders √
01:09:941 (4,5) - Blanket could earn some improvement √
01:16:370 (5) - Move to 123:148 (select note, and then click the coordinates) √
01:17:798 (1,2,3,4) - Give them all NC, cause after a SV change, AFAIK, you must have a NC √
01:33:513 (2,5) - Ugly overlap, move (5) to 380:136 (start of (1,2)) √
01:37:798 (5,6) - Blanket could use some improving √
01:51:370 (3) - Jumps is to high, due to the others being low spaced, and due to that, this looks like 1/1 for me
[Insane]
00:07:799 (1,2,3,4) - Give them all NC, cause after a SV change, AFAIK, you must have a NC √
00:22:084 (4) - NC √
00:23:335 (15,1) - Jump is very high, being only 1/4 (3.75 DS) √
00:34:406 (9) - Ctrl G maybe, it feels better with the slower part (not having a 3+ jump, but only a 2 jump) √
00:42:798 (8,1) - Sliders like these are so ugly xD. Make them have one point. You can better delete all grey nodes first, and then add 1 again, due to a bug sometimes appearing
00:46:370 (2) - NC √
00:57:798 (6) - NC √
01:03:513 (6) - NC√
01:07:798 (5) - NC√
01:10:656 (5) - NC√
01:11:370 (1) - Remove NC √
01:15:834 (5) - Shift E (gives the slider the soft sampleset)
01:17:798 (8,9,10) - Give them all NC, cause after a SV change, AFAIK, you must have a NC √
01:30:656 (5) - NC
01:32:084 (11,1) - Overlap looks kinda ugly
01:42:084 (5) - NC
01:50:656 (8) - NC√
Good map, and good luck!
You deserve a star
thanks for your help :3Xinely wrote:
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General
- 7secs w/o sound at start here? maybe you can crop it, kinda weird imonot a big deal。。
- as i know ogg format for hitsounds are unrankable (asked Hinsvar here), try use wav instead√
- According Ranking Criteria, a map should has preview time, add in 01:17:798 - please√
- remove letterbox (since no break) and widescreen support (since no SB)√
- do tags like "kawaii" and "moe" needed here? I kopycopied by others ;w; ,del
Normal
- 00:09:227 (1,1) - with some arrange from these sliders, you can avoid the overlap with keep spacing 1,0x here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2582743 (not really good aa orz)√
- 00:14:941 - until 00:20:298 - actually better to use soft sampleset with whistles for all slider's heads you mapped here√
- 00:23:870 (2) - avoid stack for easiest diff since it might make confuse for newbie 8( √
- 00:26:013 (5) - 00:31:727 (5) - NC per 4 stanzas looks so long, make it become 2 stanza please by NC those sliders√
- 00:28:334 - it has a high tone vocal and weak guitar, how about map it? just make 3/2 slider repeat start from 00:27:798 -
- 00:29:584 (2) - same as 00:23:870 (2) -√
- 00:32:977 - you're following other guitars like 00:31:727 - 00:31:013 - so i'd say to map this time to has it has guitar sound same as i've mention, try change 00:32:441 (6,7) - become http://puu.sh/eRI8p.jpg instead√
- 00:34:941 (1) - since the music has cymbal at slider's head, i think you've to add finish here√
- 00:39:227 (2) - we cant avoid the overlap but at least make better overlapping shape please, move to 92,264√
- 00:42:084 (1) - remove NC please to keep consistency with 00:44:941 (2) - √
- 00:40:656 (1) - is whistle body here intentional? i feel that's quite noisy, also next sliders dont have it so looks like inconsistency√
- 00:46:370 (1) - should add finish on head coz the cymbal√
- 00:52:084 (1) - same as 00:40:656 (1) -√
- 01:12:084 (1) - ^√
- 01:20:656 (3) - ^√
- 00:54:941 (1) - the flow from 00:56:191 - feels a little bit weird coz the curve, move 2nd last node (10th node if you calculate from head) to 336,184√
- 00:57:798 (1,1) - please avoid the overlap, we can see it in testplay √
- 00:59:227 (1,1) - same here too√
- 01:07:798 (3) - ctrl+G please for natural flow </3 , also the head and tail a little bit overlapping, try to avoid it please √
- 01:22:084 (1) - yep, avoid stack please √
- 01:22:084 (1,2) - make them symmetrical for better design and flow http://puu.sh/eRMFN.jpg√
- 01:24:941 (1,3,1) - same as 00:40:656 (1) - and for other sliders
- 01:29:227 (3,4) - if 2 sliders have same curve's shape and placed in same flow (from left to left again), they look a little bit bad, i'd say to make like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2583817 √
- 01:33:513 (1,2) - if these sliders supposed for blanket, you can do better blanket actually example 01:33:513 (1) - middle curve placed at 456,296 √
- 01:50:298 (1,2,3,4,5) - when your all notes unless this one use 1/1 gap, it's weird when this pattern has 1/2 and become harder, try this instead http://puu.sh/eRNo9.jpg but your Normal literally lacks 1/2 especially in kiai diff
okay spread issue, from Normal to hard has huge spread, a diff between them would be nice (tbh i'd like to rename your Normal become Easy and make new Normal diff), from Hard to Insane a little bit huge coz the CS 4,5 in Insane, i'd say to use 4 or max 4,2
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