Hi ~ As requested by form
[General]
Seems Okay !
Seems Okay !
[Insane]
- 00:06:048 - Are you sure want to skip the instrument here ? You always following this until now. well it's work pretty nice to emphasize the drum, But it's totally up to you
- 00:15:892 (3) - I would bend them more slightly to create smoother slider to follow during gameplay, try make them like this :
- 00:17:954 (2) - ^
- 00:26:954 (6,1) - This is unrankable because the reverse point of (1) is get covered with the hitburst of (6). You should move them somewhere, i'd recommend stacking it with 00:26:017 (2) - instead ~
- 00:28:642 (4,5,6) - This pattern didn't really comfortable to play imo, since you need to move the cursor edgy down when the (6) was placed a bit downside then how it should be placed according to the angle of (5). You can try moving (6) a bit upside or changing (5) to 2 note then create another cool pattern ;w;
- 00:31:642 (5) - Finish totally feels a bit too loud here considering that you didn't use finish on some louder instrument on this part. Try remove it ?
- 00:55:642 (2,3,4) - Really hard to recognize that this part is 1/4 because of that huge spacing. I'd reduce them a bit,
- 01:03:798 (4) - You forget normal sampleset here maybe ? the 1/4 drum stream is still go on here lol
- 01:22:642 (1) - Add Soft finish here maybe to continue your hitsound rhytm that has been built from 01:21:142 (1) - ?
That was pretty fun ! Some triplets are too much for me but that 1/2 note pattern is pretty enjoyable since they spaced on a perfect size.
[Hard]
- Some triplet and stacks pattern are a bit hard to read here due the appearance between them that are on the same time. I'd go for Ar 8 here.
- 00:00:704 (1) - Wrong snapping, this kick slider should be based on 1/6 snap like on Insane, pls listen closely at 25%
- 00:03:142 (3) - Hmm.. i don't really like this whistle, it's not so prominent on the music ><
- 00:14:392 (1) - You forgot Normal sampleset on the slider's head to emphasize the snare drum hit.
- 00:16:642 (4) - The end point of this slider didn't land on anything at the music, i'd ditch them by 1/4 so it would cover the vocal at 00:16:923 - , 3/4 spacing wouldn't be a problem imo due to how strong the vocal it is. or maybe you want to change this into 3/4 reverse instead for easier pattern.
- 00:48:142 (2,3) - This surely would play smoother if you make them a 1/1 slider instead.
- 00:51:517 (2) - Try Normal Finish here instead of soft clap, it sounds much identical and fit with the one that played on BGM imo !
- 01:20:954 (1) - This can be arranged to follow the instrument if you add note here and start this spinner 1/2 later so the start and the end of spinner would make sense to the guitar.
Hitsound can be a bit better imo, maybe you can try add some whistles in the intro part of the songs. But the patterns does make sense. Nice job !
[Normal]
- Why don't you map the end part ? it kind of unfair you know,, also it would make players think that this diff ends too early than it should be.
- 00:17:392 (4) - I can't hear any 3/4 instrument or vocal that landed on the reverse, this just unnecessary. Change this into a 3/2 slider pls. start from 00:17:392 - than end it on the red tick.
- 00:23:392 (3) - CTRL H this ? i don't know if this was did on purpose. But doing it will definetely make the pattern a lot smoother to follow.
- 00:30:892 (1,2) - Just saying that they didn't aligned horizontal properly.
- 00:32:392 (4) - Make this a 3/4 reverse to cover the vocal maybe ? it work nicely like you did at 00:35:392 (3) -
- 00:38:017 (2,3,4) - Didn't really make sense along the drum imo, try this rhytm
- 01:02:392 (5) - Remove the finish on the end, you didn't have one on Insane. Also i think newbies will get confused by 3/4 spacing, meh =w=
- 01:18:329 (4) - Move this upside so it won't against your prevous flow ? around 219,255 would be very nice !
Need some polishing in aesthetical feelings if you ask me, some U shaped slider is not really neat to follow here. But it's up to you, also i think you can make some rhytm a bit variety more instead of following the metronome.
[Easy]
Good Luck on this !- Same as normal, you'd better map the last part. Since it's still fun and mappable.
- 00:10:642 - This 2/1 break didn't make sense and this part feels very empty. Add a note maybe ?
- 00:20:017 (2,3) - I really not recommend 1/1 stack on easiest diff, it's very frustating for newbies you know ><
- 00:32:392 (2) - The finish on the end is too loudddd, remove it pls
The major problem is how you arrange your pattern that make the spacing gap is pretty confusing for newbies, something like 00:12:892 (2,3) - would perfectly fit for newbies if it was 3/2 slider reverse instead. Well i hope you can make easier rhytm on your next Easy diffs @@