Hey Kibbleru!
Pretty cool mapset you have here! Here's a star! Good luck with the ranking process! Any questions can be asked via PM or in-game.
General
- You can add the romanisation of the source in tags: Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata.
Sekai's Easy
Hello again, Sekai-nyan!- 00:11:961 (1) - I think a circular flow would be better for the movement of the cursor if the curve makes a path from the circle (6) to the circle (2).
- 00:19:644 (3) - How about this rhythm? The slider landed on an upbeat, which I don't think it fits with the music, because it sounds weird to me.
- 00:57:693 (2) - This slider bothers me a little, and it sounds weird in my opinion, and also a little empty. I would change the rhythm to a circle and a slider.
- 01:12:693 - You should add a whistle hitsound on that slider tick, because it's too empty. Else, you should change the rhythm so you could add a whistle. You can try this rhythm:SPOILER
The green point in the image is on 01:12:327 .
Normal
- 00:14:888 (1) - I would rotate this to the right, to make a circular flow, like 26° with selection centre. It should do a good movement for the cursor. There's also 00:12:693 (2) -, but the opposite.
- 00:39:766 (1,2,3) - Follow the drum instead of the "ding" sound, like you did during 00:36:839 ? The circle (2) is bothering me a little. Or remove that circle, so it could be like 00:45:619 .
- 00:56:412 - Add a circle there? It feels something missing there. And since you used a 1/2 rhythm before, maybe this rhythm should be 1/2. Else, you can try this rhythm.
Cloud's Hard
Hey CloudSplash16!- 00:05:375 (3) - I'd make the distance from the previous slider to this slider by the same distance as you used between 00:04:644 (1,2) . The beats there are quite similar to each other, so I don't think a jump would go there. But the jump can be on 00:06:107 (1) -, since the beat on that big downbeat contains a big beat.
- 00:09:583 (2,3) - Switching the place in the timeline seems to sound better, in my opinion.
- 00:30:802 (4) - Replace the slider by two circles? The tail doesn't really fit on the downbeat for me. And the rhythm would get the same objects since you followed the vocals after that with circles.
- 00:58:790 - For this rhythm, I would transfer the rhythm before (00:57:327 (1,2,3,4) - ) because that part gets intense. It would be best to replace the long slider (1) by a short one, since the short is more shorter and would fit for that part. But if you apply this, the green 1/2 slider rhythm will be a little easy. You can try this rhythm.
- 01:01:717 (1,2,3) - It needs something more than that, like 01:07:571 (1,2,3) -, because it's a little empty for the starting chorus.
No Dap's Hard
Hello No Dap!- 00:11:046 (2) - Move this to the up so it makes the distance would be the same from (1) and (3)?
- 00:19:827 (2) - You should space this up to 1.4x from the sliders that are before and after (00:19:278 (1,3) - ) so the distance could be constant through that part.
- 00:41:229 (1) - Similar to the previous suggestion, but with 2.0x, since you put a jump on big downbeats.
- 01:02:083 (2) - This slider sounds weird to me. I would try to make a rhythm like 01:07:571 (1,2,3) because in my opinion, the vocal on 01:02:449 needs something clickable.
Insane
- 00:05:741 (5) - I'd bring the circle more to x:193 y:223 because it's kind of confusing and "unreachable." I also think it would bother the circle (6).
- 00:38:119 (5) - Space this a bit more from the circle (4), like you did to 00:48:363 (5) .
- 01:05:467 (4) - I don't see a point of placing this slider on the blue tick, since there's nothing on that tick. You can just reduce the length and move it to the red tick.
- 01:08:302 (3) - I'd just go with two circles on the white and red tick, so it'll keep the consistency in the rhythm, since the repeat slider seems off with map.
- 01:21:839 (4) - How about switching the head and tail? So it won't go to the same direction
and would be a little funner..