Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi Taiko Modding~~

chaica's Kantan

00:32:203 これは、少し音楽とずれているので00:32:143に配置してみてはどうでしょうか？ - 変更しました

chaica's Futsuu

00:20:203 dよりkのほうがいいかも？ - 変更しました
00:32:203 これも上と同じく00:32:143に配置かな？ - 変更しました

　
Rankedがんばってください~

modありがとうございました！頑張りたいと思います～

hi~ for m4m (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/236568)

chaica's Kantan

00:12:043 (7) - k? because I think it's similar pitch to 00:13:003 (9) -
00:17:323 (14) - d?

chaica's Futsuu

00:05:323 (3) - change to k? because the "ki" syllable in vocal is higher than previous two notes
00:20:923 (31) - I think better to change to d, because 30,31,32 is all similar vocal pitch.
00:22:603 (35,36,37) - d? because vocals dip there.
00:24:763 (40,41) - you could probably delete these since it doesn't really fit with anything in my opinion.
00:30:283 (50,51,52) - kdd?

Muzukashi

00:11:563 - add k?

Oni

00:01:483 (5,6,7,8) - suggest change to kkd d? personal preference.
00:03:403 (13,14,15,16) - ^
00:16:963 (31) - I don't think this note really fits anything. delete?
00:22:603 (13,14,15,16,17) - what about kdddk? or kdkkd?

overall each diff plays well. star :3

good luck.

Niko-nyan wrote:

Hi mame :3
I'm here as your request
WHY THIS SONG SO moe <3

General
"Remove ministop from tag because it's already at Source" - fixed

Oni
00:06:283 (7,8,9,10) - kdd k maybe because ddd a bit awful for me - no change
00:17:803 - the hitsound on spinner don't have any effect when ingame you should remove this - no change
00:31:243 - remove finish? because the note a bit noisy when K K when no drum sound on it- no change

Muzukashii
00:31:243 - remove finish? because the note a bit noisy when K K when no drum sound on it - no change ><

sorry for a fast mod because this song too moe and so short <3 <3 star

sorry
Thank you for modding ><!!

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi Taiko Modding~~

Muzukashii

00:32:203 これも上と同じで - fixed

Oni

00:32:203 これもだね - fixed

Rankedがんばってください~

modありがとうございました！がんばります><!!!!

mrdumpling64 wrote:

hi~ for m4m (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/236568)

Muzukashi

00:11:563 - add k? - fixed

Oni

00:01:483 (5,6,7,8) - suggest change to kkd d? personal preference. - no change
00:03:403 (13,14,15,16) - ^ - no change
00:16:963 (31) - I don't think this note really fits anything. delete? - fixed
00:22:603 (13,14,15,16,17) - what about kdddk? or kdkkd? - no change

overall each diff plays well. star :3

good luck.

Thank you for modding ><!!

Quick Checking. via Mame's PM.

以上です、機会があればまた見るかもしれません。
Good Luck~

mrdumpling64 wrote:

hi~ for m4m (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/236568)

chaica's Kantan

00:12:043 (7) - k? because I think it's similar pitch to 00:13:003 (9) - fixed
00:17:323 (14) - d? - fixed

chaica's Futsuu

00:05:323 (3) - change to k? because the "ki" syllable in vocal is higher than previous two notes - fixed
00:20:923 (31) - I think better to change to d, because 30,31,32 is all similar vocal pitch. - fixed
00:22:603 (35,36,37) - d? because vocals dip there. - fixed
00:24:763 (40,41) - you could probably delete these since it doesn't really fit with anything in my opinion. - no change
00:30:283 (50,51,52) - kdd? - fixed


overall each diff plays well. star :3

good luck.

Thank you Modding!><

JUDYDANNY wrote:

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My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
D and K are finisher .
“+ ?” is just my opinion.(※example→ add? , remove?)
Big text is strong suggestion.
Brown Big is Serious problem. Maybe you must change to something.

[General]

1. 00:20:683 –全diff赤線に変えて下さい、拍のタイミングが変わってます。
   何が変わるって言うと、白線の位置とかNCでのズンチャズンチャって鳴ってるシンバルの位置が変わります。現状では聞こえが非常によくないので拍の位置が悪いのも明白だと思います。 - fixed
2. 00:32:143 – このノーツの必要性を感じません、全diff対象です。
   この曲がすでに00:31:243 – からフェードアウトしているので31:243で終わらせるべきだと思います。 - fixed

[Muzukashii]

1. divisor 1/4の3連符(kiai以外の全部)は 流れに沿ってないので不必要に感じます - fixed
2. 00:08:203 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - 全反転じゃないでしょうか. - fixed
3. 00:25:723 (17) - 連打の位置を一歩手前にずらしているのであればkの方が合うと思います。というのもこのような形にしても個人的にはあまり違和感感じないくらい(18)より(17)の方がk音にfitすると思いました. - fixed
4. 00:27:883 (24) - 　消去? ひとやすみしませんか? ここを削ればその後の構成がスカスカに感じるかもしれませんが、もしそう感じた場合はスカスカに感じる部分の方にもう1工夫入れた方がいいと思います。 - fixed
5. Oniにも関わることですが,基本的な構成は個性と判断してスル―しました。少し難しく感じましたが、悪くはないのでこのまま質をあげていけばいい譜面になると思います。 - ありがとうございます><音に合うように少し構成を見直したいと思います....!
   
   [Oni]
   1. 00:08:203 (13,14,15,16,17) - 全反転じゃないでしょうか.00:07:243 (1,2) - 間はボーカルは落ちてますが、実際はバックの音は上がっており、ボーカルもさほど落ちていません、kから始めた方がいいと思います。 - fixed
   2. 00:05:323 (3) - don? - fixed
   3. 00:17:563 (34) - k? - fixed
   4. 00:20:923 - kじゃないでしょうか、Muzukashii同様。 - fixed

以上です、機会があればまた見るかもしれません。
Good Luck~

modありがとうございました><!!!!

日本人なので日本語で。
"-"は休符
明日は良いことあるように(切実）

[chaica's Kantan]
00:19:243
歌詞合わせのようですが最初のみ拾うとリズムが不安定になります。
dkkなどの1/1で3音すべて拾う、もしくはすべて拾わない方が良いのでは。

[chaica's Futsuu]
特に問題なし。
00:24:523
kkk-d-d-k-k-dよりはkkk-d-k-d-d-kの方が自分は好きですが、
個人差程度の可能性が高いので変更の可否はお任せします。

[Muzukashii]
特に問題ないと思います。

[Oni]
00:24:523
kkd-d-ddd-d-k-dk →k-ddk-d-kkd-k-dk change
kiaiの1回目がdkdkベースなのでそれを考慮し、kdkdをベースにしました。
こちらの方が統一感が出るはずです。

tasuke912 wrote:

日本人なので日本語で。
"-"は休符
明日は良いことあるように(切実）

[Muzukashii]
特に問題ないと思います。 - thanks

[Oni]
00:24:523
kkd-d-ddd-d-k-dk →k-ddk-d-kkd-k-dk change
kiaiの1回目がdkdkベースなのでそれを考慮し、kdkdをベースにしました。
こちらの方が統一感が出るはずです。 - fixed

modありがとうございました><!!!!

hi~ from PM

[chaica's Futsuu]
00:30:523 (19) - k?

[Muzukashii]
00:20:923 (5) - k? (same as Oni)
00:22:603 (6) - k? (00:22:363 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - dkkddk is better)
00:30:283 (32,33) - Ctrl+G?

good luck!

Hello, I'm from PM :333
This song is so cute <3
Sorry I am a beginner/bad modder I can only mod muzukashii and oni >_<.
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*
Oh also, sorry if I mentioned something that someone has mod or has denied before, I'm too lazy to read through



Good Luck >wO

NeviltiS wrote:

hi~ from PM

[Muzukashii]
00:20:923 (5) - k? (same as Oni) - fixed
00:22:603 (6) - k? (00:22:363 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - dkkddk is better) - fixed
00:30:283 (32,33) - Ctrl+G? - no change ><

good luck!

Thank you for modding ><

S a n d wrote:

Hello, I'm from PM :333
This song is so cute <3
Sorry I am a beginner/bad modder I can only mod muzukashii and oni >_<.
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*
Oh also, sorry if I mentioned something that someone has mod or has denied before, I'm too lazy to read through

Muzukashii

00:01:963 Change to d? - no change
00:06:043 Change to ? - no chnage
00:10:123 Change to k? - Because pitch is the same, there is no change
00:10:603 Change to k? - Because pitch is the same, there is no change
00:20:683 Change to k? - no change
00:25:003 Move to 00:26:203? Then change 00:26:443 to k? - fixed
00:28:603 Change to k? - fixed
00:30:043 Change to k? - fixed

Oni

00:01:963 Change to d? - no change
00:06:283 Change to ? - no change
00:09:283 Add k? - fixed
00:10:243 Change to k? - no change
00:12:523 OVERLAPPING NOTE - fixed thanks ;w;
00:13:963 Change to k? - fixed
00:14:683 Change to k? - no change
00:16:123 Change to k? - no change
00:17:563 Change to k? - no change
00:21:643 and 00:21:763 Change to k? - no change
00:22:363 Change to ? - no change
00:25:003 Change to k? - fixed
00:25:723 Change to k? - no change

Good Luck >wO

thank you for modding >w<

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Quick Checking. via Mame's PM.

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
D and K are finisher .
“+ ?” is just my opinion.(※example→ add? , remove?)
Big text is strong suggestion.
Brown Big is Serious problem. Maybe you must change to something.

[General]

1. 00:20:683 –全diff赤線に変えて下さい、拍のタイミングが変わってます。
   何が変わるって言うと、白線の位置とかNCでのズンチャズンチャって鳴ってるシンバルの位置が変わります。現状では聞こえが非常によくないので拍の位置が悪いのも明白だと思います。
2. 00:32:143 – このノーツの必要性を感じません、全diff対象です。
   この曲がすでに00:31:243 – からフェードアウトしているので31:243で終わらせるべきだと思います。

[Kantan]

1. 00:07:243 (3,4) – CTRL+G で色反転? - fixed
   *1-00:07:243 (3,4) –で音は上がってます 　ボーカルは地味落ちしていますが、バックは意外と上がってます。
   *2-前奏でのkkの活用を考えると(3)にkを置くのは少し違和感を感じます -
   
2. 00:15:883 (12) – k? - fixed
   *-00:17:323 (14) – の違和感の緩和にいいと思います
   
3. 00:19:243 (16) – 消去か00:18:763 (16) – に移動or追加? - 00:18:763に移動しました
   *1- 00:18:763 –　はベースのリズムになってますし、まだ曲のリズムは止まってません。763の方がノーツの必要性は高いです。
   *2- ボーカルを取るにしても Kantanとしてもこの密度としてもこの変化は00:20:683 (18) –に繋げるリズムとして非常にやりづらく感じました。

[Futsuu]

1. 00:06:283 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 形を整えるなら dkd-kkk-kdkを推します
   
2. Either
   A.00:24:763 (40) – を00:25:243 (41) –に移動? - 移動しました
   *- ボーカルの伸びを捉えるならこちらが自然だと思います。
   B. 00:24:523 (39,40,41,42,43) – kkk-d-d >>>k-k-ddd?　- 変更しました
   *- 連打の位置を奇数打から始めたいならばdddから始めても問題ないかと、kkkよりはいいと思います。

以上です、機会があればまた見るかもしれません。
Good Luck~

Modありがとうございました！もっと精進したいと思います

NeviltiS wrote:

hi~ from PM

[chaica's Futsuu]
00:30:523 (19) - k?　- fixed

good luck!

Modありがとうございました！

Hi~ from pm mod request~
It's a cute song >w<

[chaica's Kantan]

• 
  00:05:323 k
  00:09:163 d
  00:30:763 d?

[chaica's Futsuu]

• 
  00:01:483 and 00:03:403 d
  00:18:763 d

[Muzukashii]

• 
  00:07:003 d
  00:30:643 del

[Oni]

• 
  00:10:243 del
  00:10:363 ^
  00:10:483 d
  00:24:643 del

good luck!

hi~.from PM req

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good?

[ chaica's Kantan]

• 
  
  00:30:762 - d

[ chaica's Futsuu]

• 
  
  00:17:804 - dを消してスピナーを入れる。 00:18:765 - 終端。00:18:765 - にdを入れてみてもいいかと思ったのですが、い～ま～はのボーカルがその後に始まる
  のでスピナーで。

Muzu と Oniの提案はないです。Good luck

Hi!~~



good luck!~

stu00608 wrote:

Hi~ from pm mod request~
It's a cute song >w<

[Muzukashii]

• 
  00:07:003 d - - fixed
  00:30:643 del - no change

[Oni]

• 
  00:10:243 del - fixed
  00:10:363 ^ - fixed
  00:10:483 d - no change
  00:24:643 del - - fixed

good luck!

Thank you for modding ><!!!

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi!~~

Muzukashii

00:01:963 (5) - d - no change
00:31:243 (34) - D? - no change

Oni

00:08:203 (13) - d - fixed
00:22:843 (15) - d - no change

good luck!~

Thank you for modding ><!!

stu00608 wrote:

Hi~ from pm mod request~
It's a cute song >w<

[chaica's Kantan]

• 
  00:05:323 k　- fixed
  00:09:163 d - fixed
  00:30:763 d? - no change

[chaica's Futsuu]

• 
  00:01:483 and 00:03:403 d - no change
  00:18:763 d - no change

[Muzukashii]

• 
  00:07:003 d
  00:30:643 del

good luck!

Thank you Modding!

Charlotte wrote:

hi~.from PM req

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good?

[ chaica's Kantan]

• 
  
  00:30:762 - d　- 変更しました

[ chaica's Futsuu]

• 
  
  00:17:804 - dを消してスピナーを入れる。 00:18:765 - 終端。00:18:765 - にdを入れてみてもいいかと思ったのですが、い～ま～はのボーカルがその後に始まる
  のでスピナーで。 - 追加しました

Muzu と Oniの提案はないです。Good luck

Modありがとうございました！

update

_Gezo_ asked me about metadata.

Artist : Unknown Artist
Romanised Artist : Unknown Artist

Official website doesn't show the singer/artist of this song >.> So you should put them according to the same case : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3420695

Title : ミニストップひとやすみの歌【木曜日】学生の歌
Romanised Title : Ministop hitoyasumi no Uta[Mokuyoubi]Gakusei no Uta

That space is not necessary between "Uta" and "[" , "]" and "G" that according the official video.



Official video : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lE7X0iej_Fo

何かわからないことがありましたら、Forum/in-gameでpmください。頑張ってください

alacat wrote:

_Gezo_ asked me about metadata.

Artist : Unknown Artist
Romanised Artist : Unknown Artist

Official website doesn't show the singer/artist of this song >.> So you should put them according to the same case : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3420695

Title : ミニストップひとやすみの歌【木曜日】学生の歌
Romanised Title : Ministop hitoyasumi no Uta[Mokuyoubi]Gakusei no Uta

That space is not necessary between "Uta" and "[" , "]" and "G" that according the official video.



Official video : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lE7X0iej_Fo

何かわからないことがありましたら、Forum/in-gameでpmください。頑張ってください

本当にありがとうございます..とても勉強になりましたm(__)m
すべて治しました

There is still room for improvement in setting metadata imo.

Official twitter suggests that the song title is "ミニミニストップひとやすみの歌" as below.
https://twitter.com/ministop_fan/status ... 1981630465
https://twitter.com/ministop_fan/status ... 1637601280

Prefer to use "MINISTOP" as source according to the official website and the thumbnail of the official video.
http://www.ministop.co.jp/

Therefore the title should be changed to Miniministop Hitoyasumi no Uta[Mokuyoubi]Gakusei no Uta...? *sigh*

TKS wrote:

There is still room for improvement in setting metadata imo.

Official twitter suggests that the song title is "ミニミニストップひとやすみの歌" as below.
https://twitter.com/ministop_fan/status ... 1981630465
https://twitter.com/ministop_fan/status ... 1637601280

Prefer to use "MINISTOP" as source according to the official website and the thumbnail of the official video.
http://www.ministop.co.jp/

Therefore the title should be changed to Miniministop Hitoyasumi no Uta[Mokuyoubi]Gakusei no Uta...? *sigh*

全て治しました。本当にありがとうございますm(__)m

#hellmetadata2015 #今はミニミニストップ一休み #土曜日モッディング

Try: Volume 75%

[Oni]
00:01:963 (8) - or 00:03:883 (16) - change hitsounds so they are the same. 8: d or 16: k.
00:05:083 (2) - delete | there's no strong syllable support (I doubt the i is really pronounced separately
00:11:683 (8,9) - this triplet isn't really necessary imo, the melody doesn't continue, it's separated from the rest.
00:26:203 (28,29,30) - Here, I don't think this dkd works well. ddk seems better.

[Muzukashii]
00:01:963 (5) - 00:03:883 (10) - Same as oni
00:24:523 (11,12) - k alone would suffice. the second k doesn't really fit nice and has no strong support.
00:30:283 (32,33,34) - Add some more notes ? The gap in that moment is huge compared to oni

[chaica's Futsuu]
all ok. a bit dense at parts but it's ok.

[chaica's Kantan]
A bit too continuous (long 2/1 sequences, will see with Ono if that's okay due to the nature of the song), try to have some breaks, or on the opposite more notes.
00:18:763 (18) - Delete this note, not really necessary and that would make a nicer break

edit : talked with ono pretty quick, you can delete 00:07:243 (4) - 00:11:083 (8) - to have breaks

talked with alacat again about such a kuso metadata.
just change hitoyasumi to Hitoyasumi. then maybe it would be ready to go because there is no reliable information for now.

先刻のpostにも書いたとおりhitoyasumiの頭のhを大文字に変えてください。助詞ではないので小文字にする必要がありません(公式のソースがある場合を除いて)

#hellmetadata2015

TKS wrote:

talked with alacat again about such a kuso metadata.
just change hitoyasumi to Hitoyasumi. then maybe it would be ready to go because there is no reliable information for now.

先刻のpostにも書いたとおりhitoyasumiの頭のhを大文字に変えてください。助詞ではないので小文字にする必要がありません(公式のソースがある場合を除いて)

#hellmetadata2015

すいません、、見落としていました。更新しました

_Gezo_ wrote:

#hellmetadata2015 #今はミニミニストップ一休み #土曜日モッディング

Try: Volume 75% - fixed

[Oni]
00:01:963 (8) - or 00:03:883 (16) - change hitsounds so they are the same. 8: d or 16: k. - fixed
00:05:083 (2) - delete | there's no strong syllable support (I doubt the i is really pronounced separately - fixed
00:11:683 (8,9) - this triplet isn't really necessary imo, the melody doesn't continue, it's separated from the rest. - fixed
00:26:203 (28,29,30) - Here, I don't think this dkd works well. ddk seems better. - fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:01:963 (5) - 00:03:883 (10) - Same as oni - fixed
00:24:523 (11,12) - k alone would suffice. the second k doesn't really fit nice and has no strong support. - no change . Because there was the sound of the turning point of the interval, I felt it if necessary.
00:30:283 (32,33,34) - Add some more notes ? The gap in that moment is huge compared to oni - fixed

Thank you for modding ><!!!

_Gezo_ wrote:

#hellmetadata2015 #今はミニミニストップ一休み #土曜日モッディング

Try: Volume 75%


[chaica's Futsuu]
all ok. a bit dense at parts but it's ok.

[chaica's Kantan]
A bit too continuous (long 2/1 sequences, will see with Ono if that's okay due to the nature of the song), try to have some breaks, or on the opposite more notes.
00:18:763 (18) - Delete this note, not really necessary and that would make a nicer break - fixed

edit : talked with ono pretty quick, you can delete 00:07:243 (4) - 00:11:083 (8) - to have breaks - fixed

Thank you for Modding!!!

why would anybody map this

2nd of x checks, since it's a short map it'll be hard. These are mostly break suggestions

[Kantan]
00:20:683 - add note here ? idk it was deleted either by accident or for some odd reason.
Speculation about adding breaks here 00:25:483 (21,4) - The pattern is rather large... So maybe add breaks ?

I don't think this map can have many more breaks.

[Futsuu]
00:00:523 (1,2) - add more notes here so you have a nice transition (KF ------------------- M as it stands now)
00:10:123 (10,11,12) - d k as 2/1 to have a small break and rhythm variety?
00:06:283 (4,5,6) - ^ just noticed
00:15:883 (21,22,23) - There too, d d 2/1 should be nice to have.
00:19:243 (1,2,3) - I think you can delete 2 to have a break before the pattern which is rahter large
00:24:523 (5,6,7) - delete at least 6, it's not necessary imo. 7 is optional, but it would be nice to delete it as well if you wish to conserve a fairly simple futsuu
00:28:363 (13,14,15,16,17) - i'd say k k d d on that pattern, or k k d (17 deleted), same as above reasons, to have a better spread.

[Muzu]
00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - as it stands now this particular part is not really good for the spread. have something like this ? (anything above would start to be too hard) http://i.chiyozel.com/ACzB5mpH
00:06:283 (6,7,8,9,10) - ddd k
00:08:203 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - very large breakless portion, consider removing some notes to have some 2/1 breaks? (
00:11:563 (20) - despite necessary would be ok at least.
00:12:043 (21,22,23,24,25) - 22 or 24
00:13:483 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - move 28 between 26 and 27, so you have kkd ddk. works better if you deleted 24 above.)
00:16:843 (1,2,3,4) - dk d(spin) ?
00:25:723 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - I strongly recommend you to delete some notes here. long pattern.

[Oni]
Considering every change, you should try to add more breaks so it evens out the spread. That is, make more deletions where you think it is suitable.

00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and next: doubtful about it, but it would be cool to have it all 1/2, for spread. At least this would be very nice.

_Gezo_ wrote:

2nd of x checks, since it's a short map it'll be hard. These are mostly break suggestions

[Muzu]
00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - as it stands now this particular part is not really good for the spread. have something like this ? (anything above would start to be too hard) http://i.chiyozel.com/ACzB5mpH - no change
00:06:283 (6,7,8,9,10) - ddd k - fixed
00:08:203 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31) - very large breakless portion, consider removing some notes to have some 2/1 breaks? (
00:11:563 (20) - despite necessary would be ok at least.
00:12:043 (21,22,23,24,25) - 22 or 24
00:13:483 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - move 28 between 26 and 27, so you have kkd ddk. works better if you deleted 24 above.) - fixed
00:16:843 (1,2,3,4) - dk d(spin) ? - fixed
00:25:723 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - I strongly recommend you to delete some notes here. long pattern. - fixed

[Oni]
Considering every change, you should try to add more breaks so it evens out the spread. That is, make more deletions where you think it is suitable.

00:00:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and next: doubtful about it, but it would be cool to have it all 1/2, for spread. At least this would be very nice. - no change

I am not good at English...sorry...
mod thank you ><

_Gezo_ wrote:

2nd of x checks, since it's a short map it'll be hard. These are mostly break suggestions

[Kantan]
00:20:683 - add note here ? idk it was deleted either by accident or for some odd reason. - addd ,Why did it disappear...T_T
Speculation about adding breaks here 00:25:483 (21,4) - The pattern is rather large... So maybe add breaks ? - yes,I am fit the pattern.

I don't think this map can have many more breaks.

[Futsuu]
00:00:523 (1,2) - add more notes here so you have a nice transition (KF ------------------- M as it stands now) - 00:01:483-addk.
00:10:123 (10,11,12) - d k as 2/1 to have a small break and rhythm variety? ^ - delete k
00:06:283 (4,5,6) - ^ just noticed - 00:06:763 note delete,
00:15:883 (21,22,23) - There too, d d 2/1 should be nice to have. - 00:16:363 note delete.
00:19:243 (1,2,3) - I think you can delete 2 to have a break before the pattern which is rahter large - 00:19:723 note delete.
00:24:523 (5,6,7) - delete at least 6, it's not necessary imo. 7 is optional, but it would be nice to delete it as well if you wish to conserve a fairly simple futsuu - fixed
00:28:363 (13,14,15,16,17) - i'd say k k d d on that pattern, or k k d (17 deleted), same as above reasons, to have a better spread. - fixed

thank you modding!!

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