Hi Hi MOD
[General]
Nothing
[Insane]
OK, but still need some improvement on rhythm and hitsound
00:01:227 (1) - Finish is exactly needed
00:07:590 (3) - I am not in favor of this rhythm, since the music is obviously tight on this timing. (At least you should remove the whistle here)
00:09:863 (5,6,7,8) - a bit inappropriate overmapping, the music is quite quiet here. how about deleting 00:09:977 (6) - ? (just rhythm modding)
00:12:136 (1,2) - 00:13:045 (4,5) - About these two, i prefer add a note between them (just imo) (and don't forget clap on each of them.)
00:12:590 (3,6) - clap on the tail
00:14:863 (3,4,5,6) - clap
00:22:136 (3) - 00:26:681 (1) - clap on the reserve point
00:28:499 - I think it is more reasonable if you add a note here.
00:29:863 (5,6,7,8) - the exact rhythm here is 1/8, consider to change it.
00:43:954 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:47:590 (3) - here 00:47:704 is a drum sound, you can do like this: 00:50:318 (1,2,3) - 01:48:499 (1,2,3) - ……
00:53:954 (1) - clap on the tail
00:54:636 (2) - ^
00:58:953 (7,8,9,10) - 1/8
01:09:863 (3) - What about Ctrl+G
01:20:772 (5,6,7,8) - 1/8
01:28:954 (2,3) - too close imo, since such distance before is 1/4 (01:28:499 (1,2) )
01:42:363 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 不像弧线...
01:52:818 (2) - http://puu.sh/dQ9qn/3118c84663.png
02:16:227 (2,3,4,5) - a little closed, just move a little to keep the distance balance
02:22:136 (3) - change to three circles
02:51:340 - a rhythm here
03:05:886 - ^
03:10:318 (1) - set one reserve
03:18:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/8
03:22:136 (3) - wtf the rhythm
03:37:590 (1) - ^
03:42:704 (4) - ctrl+G You are trying to learn from HW? 23333
03:44:068 - a rhythm here
03:47:590 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - a bit overmapped
04:04:863 (1) - finish
[Hard]
Nice but a bit hard on the changable distance
00:34:863 (3,4) - Curious about whether it is a bit distant
00:39:181 (4,1) - ^
00:54:636 (2,3,4) - uh... I don't know how to describe, but same as the first problem
01:15:772 (1,2) - a little far
01:27:590 (4,5,6) - too hard..
02:41:227 (6) - soft finish may be better
03:42:590 (3,1) - I am doubt whether it is unrankable, since your reserve arrow was invisible
03:44:863 (1) - forgot clap
03:45:772 (3) - what about ctrl+g
04:08:045 (3,4,5) -
低难度应该没问题..摸着摸着快睡着了 可能是歌的缘故
Good luck yeah
[General]
Nothing
[Insane]
OK, but still need some improvement on rhythm and hitsound
00:01:227 (1) - Finish is exactly needed
00:07:590 (3) - I am not in favor of this rhythm, since the music is obviously tight on this timing. (At least you should remove the whistle here)
00:09:863 (5,6,7,8) - a bit inappropriate overmapping, the music is quite quiet here. how about deleting 00:09:977 (6) - ? (just rhythm modding)
00:12:136 (1,2) - 00:13:045 (4,5) - About these two, i prefer add a note between them (just imo) (and don't forget clap on each of them.)
00:12:590 (3,6) - clap on the tail
00:14:863 (3,4,5,6) - clap
00:22:136 (3) - 00:26:681 (1) - clap on the reserve point
00:28:499 - I think it is more reasonable if you add a note here.
00:29:863 (5,6,7,8) - the exact rhythm here is 1/8, consider to change it.
00:43:954 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:47:590 (3) - here 00:47:704 is a drum sound, you can do like this: 00:50:318 (1,2,3) - 01:48:499 (1,2,3) - ……
00:53:954 (1) - clap on the tail
00:54:636 (2) - ^
00:58:953 (7,8,9,10) - 1/8
01:09:863 (3) - What about Ctrl+G
01:20:772 (5,6,7,8) - 1/8
01:28:954 (2,3) - too close imo, since such distance before is 1/4 (01:28:499 (1,2) )
01:42:363 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 不像弧线...
01:52:818 (2) - http://puu.sh/dQ9qn/3118c84663.png
02:16:227 (2,3,4,5) - a little closed, just move a little to keep the distance balance
02:22:136 (3) - change to three circles
02:51:340 - a rhythm here
03:05:886 - ^
03:10:318 (1) - set one reserve
03:18:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/8
03:22:136 (3) - wtf the rhythm
03:37:590 (1) - ^
03:42:704 (4) - ctrl+G You are trying to learn from HW? 23333
03:44:068 - a rhythm here
03:47:590 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - a bit overmapped
04:04:863 (1) - finish
[Hard]
Nice but a bit hard on the changable distance
00:34:863 (3,4) - Curious about whether it is a bit distant
00:39:181 (4,1) - ^
00:54:636 (2,3,4) - uh... I don't know how to describe, but same as the first problem
01:15:772 (1,2) - a little far
01:27:590 (4,5,6) - too hard..
02:41:227 (6) - soft finish may be better
03:42:590 (3,1) - I am doubt whether it is unrankable, since your reserve arrow was invisible
03:44:863 (1) - forgot clap
03:45:772 (3) - what about ctrl+g
04:08:045 (3,4,5) -
低难度应该没问题..摸着摸着快睡着了 可能是歌的缘故
Good luck yeah