This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Thanks MariroseMarirose wrote:
from queue
offset=1008
Good luck
thanks for the modRuberusuScarlet wrote:
hi ~
mod and metadate check request from my queue
|1|2|3|4|modgood luck >w</[General]
Artist : ( ! ) アイリス → eyelis
Romanised Artist : delete
Title : ok
Romanised Title : ok
tag add : Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai Tenri-hen 川崎里実 kawasaki satomi 増田武史 masuda takeshi 前口渉 maeguchi wataru
offset 1008 → 970
[Future]
00:13:942 (13942|3) - delete
00:31:546 - add 3
00:31:636 - ^4
00:31:816 (31816|1) - start to 00:31:726 -
00:32:804 - add 1 or 2
00:54:271 (54271|1) - delete i can still hear some
01:02:445 - add 1
01:08:373 - ^1
01:08:552 (68552|0) - move to 2
01:33:343 - add 1 or 4
01:39:990 (99990|2,99990|3) - end to 01:41:606 -
01:41:606 (101606|3) - move to 2
01:41:786 (101786|1) - ^4
02:03:612 - add 2
02:03:792 - ^2
02:10:708 - ^1
02:21:487 - ^2
02:24:361 - ^4
02:25:978 - ^1
02:36:217 - ^2
02:37:834 - ^2
02:43:582 - ^3
03:00:289 - ^1 or4
03:30:199 (210199|2) - delete i can still hear some
03:36:756 - add 3
03:36:846 - ^2
03:38:912 - ^3
03:46:816 - ^1 and 3
03:54:091 - ^2
03:57:415 (237415|3) - move to 03:57:235 -
rest applied
change mp3 now, but for the BG i'm still finding some appropriate so i'll change that later_S u w a k o_ wrote:
better to be 神のみぞ知るセカイ_天理篇
bg size is inapproritate plz check ranking rule which is 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9
320kbps is unrankable. change to 128kbps ~ 192kbps. i highly recommend to change to 192
you can add some tag if you feel necessary and related to song
and check aimod
pattern modding later sory
and offset seems 948
|1|2|3|4|
Thanks for the modLokovodo wrote:
And this is a mod!~|1|2|3|4|
Hello from my modding queue~ I am going to mod just the normal since its a pretty long map and it needs a lot more work than Future
[Normal]
00:10:828 (10828|0) - i do not recommend charting this long note to the vocals here. keep
00:07:415 (7415|2) - move to 4
00:08:133 (8133|2) - move to 2
00:08:492 (8492|1) - move to 3
00:13:163 (13163|1) - move to 1
00:13:343 (13343|0) - move to 3
00:13:702 (13702|2) - move to 4
00:26:456 add note
00:32:205 (32205|1) - change into long note ending at 00:32:564 nope
00:37:594 (37594|3) - move to 2
00:58:792 (58792|3) - move to 3
01:03:462 (63462|3) - move to 2
01:05:439 (65439|3) - turn this note at 4 into a long note ending at where you currently have a note at 01:05:977
01:12:085 (72085|0) - move to 3
01:12:265 (72265|1) - move to 1
01:12:445 (72445|2) - move to 2
01:14:959 (74959|3) - move to 2
01:16:936 (76936|3,77295|2,77474|0,77654|1,77834|3,78013|0,78193|2,78552|3) - this is very difficult for normal i suggest reworking this entirely since 1 long notes on offtick, 2 the layering of regular notes on long notes, 3 continuing long note stair pattern. no change here
02:09:930 remove note at 1
02:10:109 add note at 1
02:10:109 add long note at 4 ending at 02:10:379
02:11:007 (131007|1) - move to 3
02:11:187 (131187|2) - move to 2
02:11:367 (131367|0) - move to 3 better at 1
02:12:085 (132085|3) - move to 1
02:14:421 - 02:16:037 again very difficult same again
02:29:331 add note
02:46:936 (166936|1) - move to 4
02:47:295 (167295|3) - move to 2
03:02:025 - 03:10:289 in this section there are many difficult long notes with overlaying regular notes. i keep mentioning difficulty since this is easiest difficulty on map so you should care about the gap a bit same again
03:41:726 (221726|1) - move to 3
03:41:906 (221906|2) - move to 2
03:42:085 make a note form here to 03:42:624 on either 1 or 4
04:10:648 add note at 2
04:12:265 add note 3
04:13:522 add note 3
04:15:139 add note 3
04:16:037 add note 1
04:16:217 add note 1
04:18:912 add note 2
04:19:091 add note 4
04:19:271 add note 1
04:19:450 add note 2
Rest Applied
Layout:
4k: |0|1|2|3|
Thanks for the mod_Xenophilius_ wrote:
Hi! From _andreamtr & _Xenophilius_'s Modding Queue.Layout:
4k: |0|1|2|3|Future
- 00:31:486 (31486|2,31576|3) - Ctrl + G
- 00:43:343 - Better if same as 00:14:600 -
- 01:52:325 - Same ^
- 00:57:894 (57894|1) - Move to 2
- 01:54:301 - Add note
- 02:35:977 - Add note
- 02:03:462 (123462|0,123462|3,123552|1,123642|2,123732|1,123822|3,123822|0,123912|1,124001|2,124091|3,124181|2,124271|1,124361|0,124450|1,124540|2,124540|3) - Is better if you Ctrl + H all those notes because the final ones represent bass notes in the song. Rearranged
- 03:01:666 - Suggest to add a note here in 0
- 03:22:684 (202684|2) - Move in 1
- 04:17:834 - Add a note in 1 and Ctrl + H those 04:18:013 (258013|1,258013|3,258373|2,258373|0) -
Rest Applied
thanksPharos21 wrote:
Hiya ^.^
Mod from my Queue
Whoa.. Dat Mp3
Whoa.. Dat BG
Whoa.. Dat Source
Whoa.. Dat wait.. let me check this one
[General]
Widescreen Support = Off if you don't use SB
[MOD]
Column
1-2-3-4Normal+00:03:822 (3822|0) - delete since you're not using double on the previous pattern nope
00:05:439 - add note
00:10:109 - ^
00:18:193 (18193|3) - Delete ( you don't use doubke note on the next pattern) nope
00:17:654 (17654|1) - end @ white line above nope, it ends in red line
00:20:528 (20528|1) - ^ ^
00:25:558 - Add Note
00:30:768 (30768|1,30947|0) - LN on 2, note on 1 keep
00:59:870 (59870|2,60229|3,60229|1) - move 1 column to left nope
01:00:588 (60588|0) - Move to 2 nope
01:00:947 (60947|1) - ^ 1 nope
01:05:259 (65259|1,65439|3,65618|1,65977|0,65977|2) - i'm confuse.. what are you following? vocal or drum? remaped
if vocal 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Delete nope
if Drum 01:04:361 - add note and then 01:05:618 (65618|1) - Move to red line above (delete both LN) only add notes
01:15:858 - again.. are you following vocal or drum? add note if drum I'm following both, so added
^for pattern similiar like this ^ i suggest don't vocal mapping please ^.^
The rest seems Fine to me
Rest appliedFutureonly 2 diff 0_0 ?
Already Perfect.... nothing to MOD nice
i suggest for Normal+ use this Diff as reference and don't vocal mapping (last time i did that.. i get scolded veeery hard)
Can i GD? >.< sorry, intended to have only 2 diffs
i wish i have star so i can shot a star TT_TT It's okay
GL. ~
Thanks[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Hello JamesHappy :)
first, WTF 4 minutes of song T_T
okay then i will give full mod
Remember this mod is only suggestion, you can reject with a reason
1 2 3 4 <(^o^<)Normal+00:00:948 (948|3) - consider to delete this one for smooth intro
00:03:283 (3283|1) - i don' understand what kind music you follow to . . or maybe it just your improvisation ? and if you follow the piano, you should add note here 00:03:642 - , and if you follow vocal you should remove that red tick "pattern works for song" try hear this on 25% pls
00:04:001 (4001|2) - delete this, if you follow the vocal Nope
00:09:391 (9391|1) - ^ Nope
00:09:750 - and 00:10:468 - if you follow piano, you have to put a note here XD
00:15:678 (15678|3,16397|3,17115|2,17834|3,18552|1,19271|1) - hey . . this is 2 note here, and 00:16:037 (16037|1,16756|1,17474|2,18193|0,19630|0) - sholud be 1 note, swap that note placement . . . try to follow start from this 00:21:067 - (correct place)
00:22:864 (22864|1) - move to 1, then if applied . . . 00:23:223 (23223|2) - move to 2 Nope
00:23:223 (23223|2) - you missing a note here, try to be consistent XD ????
00:24:480 (24480|1) - move to 3, then if applied . . . 00:25:199 (25199|3) - move to 1 Nope
00:27:894 - try this, will be better and friendly to play I prefered mine, so no change
00:30:768 - add note here try to be consistent with 00:27:894 - same sound right ?
00:31:666 (31666|0) - delete this, and i think the LN have an issues . . try this http://puu.sh/fTA8h/72bf448f89.jpg, cuz the second LN is contain faded out music, so just only need 1 LN Sorry, Rejected
start from this 00:32:564 - try to be more creative (follow vocal right ?), i can suggest you with this image http://puu.sh/fTAuD/430c96fc0b.jpg I'm not following vocal here, I'm following the drum beats so Rejected
00:49:810 - suggest to try this http://puu.sh/fTAO9/9bf4fa8bec.jpg, for better pitch Nope
00:53:762 (53762|1,54480|2) - change to single note only, too epic for Normal diff Nope
00:57:714 - try this, more rythimically http://puu.sh/fTB7l/257cd30bb1.jpg
00:59:870 (59870|2) - move to 2, pitch Nope
01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete this one
01:08:133 (68133|3) - LN starts here 01:08:492 - listen carefully
01:09:750 (69750|0) - move to 4, then if applied 01:10:289 (70289|2) - move to 1 Nope
01:16:397 (76397|3,77115|0,77834|3) - delete, not too strong here, remember . . . i know you put 2 note for drum . . like in there 01:18:912 (78912|0,78912|1) - (nah, it's correct place) try to follow them
01:17:474 - missing drum here, add 1 note
01:24:301 (84301|3) - move to 1 for avoid triple jacks and for balance too
01:30:049 (90049|1) - delete, cuz 3 notes . . . only need 2 is enough
01:32:924 (92924|3) - delete, remember . . . the LN is contain a note too . . so you push 3 note here . . . only need 2 note here . . .
01:35:798 - nah, this is correct, good joob
01:38:672 - try this http://puu.sh/fTC7X/7ba885c414.jpg more friendly to plays Rejected
01:52:684 (112684|3) - delete, the music is break here, do not to add any thing, and then 01:53:043 - add 1 note (if applied) That one is for the piano. Intended that part
01:56:636 (116636|3,116816|2,116995|1,116995|0,117355|0,117534|1,117714|3,117714|2,118073|0,118253|3,118433|0,118433|1,118792|3,118792|0) - suggest to remap this, i think the pattern is not follow the rythim properly I prefer this way so reject
01:59:331 (119331|0,119331|3,119510|3,119510|0) - this part does'nt have any same sound here, why you put here ? 01:59:331 (119331|3,119331|0) - move to 2 and 3
01:59:151 - hey, i hear a kick sound here
02:06:876 (126876|0,126876|3) - put them in colomn 2 and 3 , to follow the music properly This time, Nope
02:07:235 - for the reff of music, i think it will be same suggstion as above . . so i'll skip this
02:18:013 (138013|0,138373|0) - move to 3 and 2, then if applied 02:18:732 (138732|1) - move to 1
02:34:181 (154181|0) - move to 2 Nope
02:42:085 - add a note you follow the piano right ?
02:43:522 - add note No Sound Here
02:55:019 (175019|0) - move to 2 Nope
02:50:528 (170528|3) - LN end at here 02:52:684 - No Change
03:10:648 (190648|3) - delete, and 2 note should be there 03:11:007 - add at 1, then if applied 03:11:187 (191 187|0,191546|0) - move to 3 and 2 No Change
03:24:840 (204840|2) - suggest to delete, need only 1 LN here . . if not . . you can delete this 03:24:840 (204840|1) - 3 notes here XD i'm so dead This time, Nope
03:27:714 (207714|3) - delete ^
03:33:642 (213642|0) - move to 2 ^
03:35:977 (215977|3) - move to 1 ^
04:00:229 - start this, don't be a boring note . . XD ^
04:08:133 (248133|0,248133|3) - make to be LN, then 04:08:672 (248672|0,248672|3,249031|3,249031|1) - convert to be single note, example
No Change
04:16:037 (256037|0) - move to 3
Rest of the mods applied and fixedFuture00:01:666 (1666|3,2385|0,3103|0) - delete this, cuz you don't put the double note start from there 00:03:822 -
00:13:702 - add note on 4
00:14:780 (14780|1) - move to 3 Nope
00:19:989 (19989|2) - move to 4 Nope
00:20:349 (20349|0) - move to 3 Nope
00:21:427 (21427|0) - move to 4 Nope
00:27:175 (27175|2,27175|1) - superb jack :v , suggest move to 1 and 4 Nope
00:30:049 (30049|0,30049|3) - move to 2 and 3 Nope
00:58:971 (58971|2) - delete this, better to plays, and if applied add 1 note on 00:59:151 -
01:04:001 (64001|1,64001|3) - if you use this. . . then suggest to remove 01:04:181 (64181|0) - for better play
01:05:618 (65618|1) - delete to . . . (have some break, because after guitar impact)
01:08:492 (68492|1) - same reason ^
01:10:289 - for the rest , the suggestion is same as above . . hope you understand this, LOL
01:52:325 (112325|2) - move to 2 Nope
01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - Hey . . delete this, no need to stairs here XD i changed my mind, deleted anyway. Blame me for this one ;w;
02:42:804 - missing piano here, add 1 note No sound here
02:51:247 (171247|1,171965|1) - delete this, if you follow the piano
02:54:121 (174121|2) - same reason ^
03:06:157 (186157|3) - consider to move it, the pattern is not follow any rythim sound if you put jack in there
03:27:714 (207714|1,207714|2,207714|3,207714|0) - why 4 notes here XD ? delete the single note in 1 and 4 ... then after deleted, move the slider to 1
and 4, then if all of them applied . . 03:29:870 (209870|0) - move to 3 Nope
03:35:798 (215798|3) - should be there 03:35:618 -
04:17:115 (257115|2,257115|1) - move to 1 and 4 Nope
04:17:474 (257474|1,257474|2) - move to 1 and 4 Nope
04:20:169 (260169|0,260169|3) - move to 2 and 3 Nope
Rest of the mods applied and fixed
dafak I'm so dead XD . . long mod does'nt mean the beatmap is bad . . still need an improve . . .
Good luck for your beatmap
Thanks MariroseMarirose wrote:
Hey JamesHappy o/
from my queue
Normal mod
i chose Future diff
here's the mod
Above all,mp3 okay,bg okay,mapset okay
no hitsound
still WIP status
[Normal Mod]
Cloumn=1,2,3,4Futurewhen started,accordin to ur idea, the heavy piano"main"sound should be double but
look at 00:05:977 - ,00:06:696 - ,00:08:133 - ,00:08:852 - ,i think you miss them D: added except the first one
00:10:289 - theres no sound here,overmapped,remove
00:11:007 - same,remove
00:13:163 (13163|2) - remove
etc..
check the pattern and overmap problem this part,you can do it
00:30:947 (30947|0,30947|1) - and 00:31:666 (31666|0,31666|1) - not the same sound,so i recommand donno make them same column
00:37:953 - it should be double right?
00:58:253 (58253|1) - umm if you followed the instrument,it should end at 01:00:409 - ,if vocal,i recommand you can replace 00:58:792 (58792|0,59151|0) - to LN for the vocal to contact this followed the instrument so applied
01:09:750 (69750|2,70289|3,70648|3) - you know what to do:) same as above
01:16:936 (76936|3) - if vocal,try replace 01:17:295 (77295|0,77654|0,78013|1) - as vocal LN delete instead
01:18:552 (78552|3,78732|2) - i think jackhammer fits here,01:18:732 (78732|2) - let this one at col4
01:23:403 - you didnt double for the vocal before this,so it should be single note
01:27:175 (87175|3,87175|0,87355|2,87355|1) - thats okay cuz the heavy drum beat
but01:27:714 - why only 1 note? lol and 01:27:894 - why 2 notes?? >< a bit problem yeah i forgot that one /me slapped myself
01:28:612 - 1 note is enough
etc...
check the sound,"soft"or"heavy"?
01:50:169 - bass and drum,its okay for double but 01:50:349 - only 1 note is enough(double for the bass 01:50:169 - here is enough,neednt double at this line
01:52:145 - add for the chord
01:52:774 (112774|3,112953|1) - no sound,overmap,remove and dont forget to make this 01:52:864 (112864|2) - at col2 will better
01:59:151 - hithat sound,add one
02:04:720 - you miss a drum here
02:07:774 (127774|2,128133|2) - cuz the vocal LN 02:07:235 (127235|0) - ,i recommand you can try replace them as vocal LN to contact
replaced with a note instead
02:09:930 - for the drum hit,why not double><
02:11:007 (131007|1) - move this to col3,make it jackhammer to fits the guitar and this patter is "col1,2",the same as 02:10:648 - but different sound,so make them different
02:15:678 - double here,not 02:15:858 - here
02:16:037 - double
02:19:630 (139630|0,139810|2) - jackhammer is okay
check the sound carefully this part
now the piano and violin part
02:43:343 (163343|1) - you follow the piano,theres no piano sound!remove
02:50:528 (170528|3) - i think this chord end at 02:53:403 - will better
then 02:56:636 (176636|3) - soft chord,ignore the sound like this
03:00:588 (180588|3) - and this..
etc...
03:02:385 (182385|2) - this guitar sound slap should started 03:02:564 -
03:11:007 - double
03:23:942 - and 03:24:121 - has clearly sound,try to catch I didn't heard very well, even on 25%
03:33:642 (213642|0,213642|3,213822|3,213822|0,214001|3,214001|0) - all soft drum before 03:34:181 - ,make them 1 note each line
03:36:696 (216696|2,216786|1) - overmap,remove nope
the last kiai part,notice: follow the different drum before and make sure if the piano note overmapped
Rest of the mods applied and fixed
mod end
Good Luck
ThanksKruzon wrote:
Hi, sorry for late modding ORZ
As usual, my 4k modding format will be: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
Oh, and I'll only give a thorough mod on Normal+, sorry I'm the very definition of laziness itself yeah 2lazy4me
Normal+
First and foremost, won't you name it a Normal instead of Normal+? No change
00:07:415 (7415|3,7774|3) - feels odd to me, don' think jack placed well here, perhaps 00:07:774 (7774|3) - move to 1 re-arranged
00:08:133 (8133|1,8492|2) - might as well press Ctrl +H, better flow
seriously, i think this is a lot better if: (you may need to apply them all first before thinking of rejecting them,)
00:08:852 (8852|0) - move to 3
00:09:211 (9211|2,9391|1,9570|3,9570|0,9750|2,9930|0,10109|1,10289|2,10468|0) - Ctrl + H
00:10:648 (10648|1) - move to 3
00:10:828 (10828|0,11007|2,11367|3,11726|1,12085|3,12445|1) - Ctrl + H
00:11:007 (11007|1) - move to 1
00:11:367 (11367|0,12085|0) - move them to 3
00:11:726 (11726|2,12445|2) - move them to 1
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00:17:474 (17474|3,17474|2) - 2 notes here seem to break the surrounding notes' consistency, consider deleting 1 of them (I suggest delete 4)
00:17:654 (17654|1,17834|3) - hmm.. quite hard to press for a normal+ owo- perhaps make the long note into a single note instead
00:20:528 (20528|1,20708|3) - same case as above
00:24:480 (24480|1,24840|2) - rather than deploying these noodles, how about 2-notes jack on this area? No thanks
00:30:947 (30947|2,30947|0,31666|3,31666|0) - why did you cut off the long notes? actually wait i understand you're following the violin but honestly, this is
a bad move. I don't know about those ET out there, but normal people would get confuse since they follow drum starting here 00:26:816 (26816|1,26816|0) - It's not wrong, but it definitely feels off, it's as if you're switching to vocal suddenly from layer of instrument- My suggestion:
00:30:947 (30947|2,31666|0) - delete them Nope
00:30:947 (30947|0) - increase its length to here 00:31:666 (31666|0) - or recommended here 00:32:564 (32564|0) -
umm, if you somehow agree to these suggestion, then you may apply these: I prefer this way so nope
00:30:947 (30947|0) - move to 3
00:32:564 (32564|2) - move to 1
00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0,44421|1) - hmm wrong consistency, I think it should be 1 & 2 & 1 & 2 notes density instead, not 2 & 1 & 2 (did you understand this? lol) (Also, im aware 00:44:061 (44061|3,44061|0) - has louder impact and deserve more notes, but think again how odd will this become 00:44:421 (44421|1) - ) added on the 1-note part instead
00:45:678 (45678|2) - not necessarily to be added, especially on this difficulty, perhaps delete it
00:47:115 (47115|2) - same reason as above
00:48:552 (48552|2) - same reason as above
01:08:492 (68492|0) - oops?
01:33:283 (93283|0) - deserve 1 more note to be added
01:46:037 (106037|1) - no cue sound, delete
01:47:474 (107474|2) - same reason
01:47:295 (107295|3,107654|1,107654|0) - perhaps Ctrl + H them No thanks
01:48:013 (108013|1,108193|2,108373|0,108373|3) - follow this 01:46:576 (106576|0,106756|1,106936|2,106936|3) -, i think more better flow No thanks
01:48:732 (108732|2) - you may move it to 2 ^
01:48:912 (108912|1) - no cue sound (umm well you can add this ghost notes on harder diff, but i dont see the reason to map ghost notes on normal)
01:50:349 (110349|1) - same reason
01:54:660 (114660|0) - same
01:56:097 (116097|1) - same (ok i realized at this point i may destroy your pattern with my suggestion, therefore.. i will pay no heed on consistency for now.)
Starting here, it will be mostly on notes displacement*
honestly, i think this is rather awkward to press, on this difficulty, 02:14:780 (134780|2,134959|0,135139|1) - seems like you're mapping 2 layers of sound here oooo nerf it
hmm.. how about, 02:34:181 (154181|2) - move to 4 and 02:34:540 (154540|0) - move to 3, afterward 02:35:079 (155079|1,155439|2) - shift them 1 time to the left, and finally 02:35:798 (155798|1) - move to 3 No thanks
02:38:313 (158313|0,158672|1,159031|2) - pitch-wise, it's better to Ctrl+H them
02:49:810 (169810|0,169989|1,170169|2) - why not connect them to 02:49:271 (169271|0,169450|1,169630|2) - ? resuming the zig-zag kinda fitting at this point
03:45:858 (225858|2,226397|1,226397|0,226936|1,227654|1) - note presentation looks funny, perhaps 03:46:936 (226936|1) - move to 4 and
03:47:295 (227295|3) - move to 3
04:08:672 (248672|3,248672|0,249031|1,249031|3,249391|2,249391|3,249930|1,249930|0) - at this point, the sound seem to decrease/descends its tension, but this pattern of yours suggest it to get more powerful, it contradicts- therefore, press Ctrl + H
04:19:271 (259271|1,259450|1,259630|0) - hmmm... i suggest 04:19:271 (259271|1) - move to 1 and 04:19:630 (259630|0) - move to 4,
resuming the stairs
Rest of the mods applied and fixed
- mod ends -
Overall, it's a nice song. Though, you gotta pay attention to the notes consistency, the rest is fine C:
Good luck with your map