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James2250
make the stack leniency the same on all difficulties?

Easy:
not a big fan of the claps..can't you make them follow some sort of rhythm so they always happen between equal times?
00:22:729 (2) - I don't like the sound of this, either extend to 00:26:452 and delete 1 or remap it somehow
02:30:176 (4) - add note

Normal:
00:07:831 (3) - add note
00:15:280 (6) - ^
00:24:591 (1) - extend by 1/4
00:25:625 (3) - add note
00:28:728 (8) - ^
01:55:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spread these out more?
02:10:315 (1,2,3) - stack endpoints slightly better
02:39:281 (1,2,3) - center these more?

Dusty's Hard:
make sure all timing sections that change the audio of the notes/adds custom hitsounds are placed 1/4 before the note it is meant to effect
01:08:24 timing section isn't needed?
01:39:28 timing section isn't needed?
01:42:59 timing section isn't needed?

Lunatic:
01:30:901 (7,1) - bad jump
02:02:246 (1) - start at 02:02:452 (same endpoint)
nice difficulty

*star*
Dusty

James2250 wrote:

make the stack leniency the same on all difficulties?
Isn't the point of stack leniency that you can change it on harder diffs/diffs with different stacking patterns if you need to? This isn't like timing.

edit: whatever, changed, lowering it doesn't break my difficulty anyways

Dusty's Hard:
01:08:24 timing section isn't needed?
01:39:28 timing section isn't needed?
01:42:59 timing section isn't needed?
Fixed

edit: fixed really

Download: IOSYS - Artificial Children (Sakura301) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
Sakura

James2250 wrote:

make the stack leniency the same on all difficulties? All 3 of mine have the same, maybe ask Dusty? he said stack leniency doesnt need to be the same

Easy:
not a big fan of the claps..can't you make them follow some sort of rhythm so they always happen between equal times?
00:22:729 (2) - I don't like the sound of this, either extend to 00:26:452 and delete 1 or remap it somehow Removed the repeat, and added a few notes after, not sure if this is what you wanted
02:30:176 (4) - add note Done

Normal:
00:07:831 (3) - add note If you think it's still a Normal with that, i'm fine with it
00:15:280 (6) - ^ ^
00:24:591 (1) - extend by 1/4 Done
00:25:625 (3) - add note ^
00:28:728 (8) - ^ ^
01:55:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spread these out more? Spreaded (if that's a word)
02:10:315 (1,2,3) - stack endpoints slightly better Hope they are slightly better stacked now :<
02:39:281 (1,2,3) - center these more? Centered

Dusty's Hard:
make sure all timing sections that change the audio of the notes/adds custom hitsounds are placed 1/4 before the note it is meant to effect
01:08:24 timing section isn't needed?
01:39:28 timing section isn't needed?
01:42:59 timing section isn't needed?

Lunatic:
01:30:901 (7,1) - bad jump is this better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7004
02:02:246 (1) - start at 02:02:452 (same endpoint) Done
nice difficulty Thanks :D

*star*
Lunah_old
Hi

Easy
00:11:970 (1) - Start the slider here and reduce 00:12:383 (1)
00:12:383 (1) - Remove
00:29:762 (1) - Add spinner here same to this (02:30:591 (1) -)

Normal
02:23:556 (1) - Remove new combo here
02:23:970 (2) - Add new combo here


Lunatic
00:08:452 (2) - Position precise with 00:08:039 (1)
00:26:453 (7) - 00:26:556 (1) - shortly time for arrive
01:12:591 (1) - Stretch this spin to here 01:15:694
01:15:694 (1) - Remove this beat

omg hard difficulty *-*

*starrrr ~
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Remove thumbs.db file from Letters, Lyrics, and SB folder.

[Easy]
-- This diff is boring. Is it just me?
-- Decrease all audio volume 3 or 4 or 5 levels. The current volume is too high.
00:11:143 (3) - Add new combo.

[Normal]
00:24:591 (1) - Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:26:660 (2) - This note sounds weird. Move backward one 1/2 tick. Then add a note on 00:26:866. I believe this way will be better.
00:28:728 - Add note here.
00:38:453 (1) - Oh no, the placement looks like 1/2 stream. Move it farther from (4).

[Dusty's Hard]
00:26:452 (1) - Move one or two tiny grid(s) up.
02:14:038 (1) - Move one tiny grid left.
02:27:280 (1) - Move two tiny grids right.

[Lunatic]
Sorry, I don't want to mod this diff. This diff is overmapped badly. This diff make the map ugly. I suggest you to remove this diff.
Star.
Topic Starter
Sakura

LoweH wrote:

Hi

Easy
00:11:970 (1) - Start the slider here and reduce 00:12:383 (1) No idea what you mean
00:12:383 (1) - Remove Umm i'll need more feedback on this
00:29:762 (1) - Add spinner here same to this (02:30:591 (1) -) I do see how a spinner would be there, but then where will the hitsound go X_X

Normal
02:23:556 (1) - Remove new combo here Done
02:23:970 (2) - Add new combo here Done


Lunatic
00:08:452 (2) - Position precise with 00:08:039 (1) No idea what you mean, but it's start is stacked below (1)'s end
00:26:453 (7) - 00:26:556 (1) - shortly time for arrive Removed (7) "now watch someone complain coz everytime i fix something here, something else is an error"
01:12:591 (1) - Stretch this spin to here 01:15:694 Done
01:15:694 (1) - Remove this beat Done

omg hard difficulty *-*

*starrrr ~
Topic Starter
Sakura

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Remove thumbs.db file from Letters, Lyrics, and SB folder. I dont see any of that?

[Easy]
-- This diff is boring. Is it just me? Well it's an Easy, supposed to be... very easy
-- Decrease all audio volume 3 or 4 or 5 levels. The current volume is too high. I disagree
00:11:143 (3) - Add new combo. Sure i guess

[Normal]
00:24:591 (1) - Extend one 1/4 tick.No
00:26:660 (2) - This note sounds weird. Move backward one 1/2 tick. Then add a note on 00:26:866. I believe this way will be better. Ok
00:28:728 - Add note here. There's a note there
00:38:453 (1) - Oh no, the placement looks like 1/2 stream. Move it farther from (4). Huh? why?, it is a 1/1 stream and the placement suggests so as im using the default spacing


[Lunatic]
Sorry, I don't want to mod this diff. This diff is overmapped badly. This diff make the map ugly. I suggest you to remove this diff. =,( seriously?
Star.
James2250
Just here to say don't remove Lunatic, its my favorite difficulty here *_*
Dusty
Topic Starter
Sakura

James2250 wrote:

Just here to say don't remove Lunatic, its my favorite difficulty here *_*
I didnt have plans of removing it anyways =P

Edit: mostly because, i feel it would be dishonest to ZUN having a touhou song beatmaped and not having a Lunatic on it
ztrot
Insane still needs alot of work you seem to start combos on blue tick where they make no sense, you fixed most of what I posted in mod here was my last post 01:18:591 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - this just doesn't sound or play right.
ztrot
I'm done nazing this map for now looks fine bubble
Dusty
The entire Letters folder is unused right now... if you could delete that and get a rebubble that'd be great

(sorry, Sakura, I should have told you to delete it until I got something new ready)
ztrot
Repaired
Andrea
[Overall]

Offset +10.

Why .osb file is so big? Try to reduce it and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

00:15:280 (6) - Very nazi. 1 grid down.
00:29:762 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Dusty's Hard]

00:54:590 (x) - Remove unused section.

[Lunatic]

00:10:936 (1,1) - Remove new combos.
00:11:349 (2) - New combo.
00:26:866 (3) - Slider repeat is totally hidden.
01:30:384 (1,2,3,4) - Really hard to read.
01:59:556 (1) - Sounds weird.
Topic Starter
Sakura

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Offset +10. Done

Why .osb file is so big? Try to reduce it and full submit. Well Dusty made it so i dont know how to fix it X_X

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

00:15:280 (6) - Very nazi. 1 grid down. Done
00:29:762 (1) - Remove new combo. Done

[Dusty's Hard]

00:54:590 (x) - Remove unused section. Done

[Lunatic]

00:10:936 (1,1) - Remove new combos. Done
00:11:349 (2) - New combo. Done
00:26:866 (3) - Slider repeat is totally hidden. Fixed
01:30:384 (1,2,3,4) - Really hard to read. Fixed
01:59:556 (1) - Sounds weird. I hope this sounds better
Edit: working with ppl in #mod to fix the osb
Matma Rex
I really don't think these storyboarded thingies are a problem. The .osb probably could have be en made more efficiently and neatly, but it's good enough, and 100+kB is not a record (Kyto's Jump Jump has way over 250). Having falling things isn't uncommon, either, it's used for example in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/11137.


Also, Thumbs.db in subfolders. Kill them.
Topic Starter
Sakura

Matma Rex wrote:

I really don't think these storyboarded thingies are a problem. The .osb probably could have be en made more efficiently and neatly, but it's good enough, and 100+kB is not a record (Kyto's Jump Jump has way over 250). Having falling things isn't uncommon, either, it's used for example in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/11137.


Also, Thumbs.db in subfolders. Kill them. <-- done, full submiting then
Topic Starter
Sakura
As a recommendation from the ppl in #mod
Im going to ask for a second opinion... sorry osuplayer111 >_<

Edit: unless of course you want to recheck
orioncomet
Sorry, I agree with Matma Rex I really don't think .osb file thing is a problem and .osb file depends on the SB [such as Kyto's Jump Jump .osb file around 270KB] seem really too much more this one and It was ranked and SB are good x_x That's all for me, a map is fine.
Topic Starter
Sakura
I'll just wait patiently for osuplayer111's remod i guess, even if you guys ask me to look for other BATs, i dont think i should really, since osuplayer111 popped the bubble it's only natural he/she remods it right?
Dusty
small .osb change to make lyric burst stuff trigger-looped.

an image change, one of them had weird white borders on my computer, this should fix it(?)

EDIT: So I finished the romaji SB once again.(!!!)



Download: IOSYS - Artificial Children (Sakura301) [Dusty's Hard].osu

Download: romaji.zip
Topic Starter
Sakura

Dusty wrote:

small .osb change to make lyric burst stuff trigger-looped.

an image change, one of them had weird white borders on my computer, this should fix it(?)

EDIT: So I finished the romaji SB once again.(!!!)
So the .osb is even BIGGER now?... oh i guess now i am in more trouble than before ;_;
Topic Starter
Sakura
Small update:
Changed 00:08:772 (3,4) - Due to stack leniency making it uglier otherwise:

Old

New
If you are goint to point this out then better be prepared to show me a "gameplay" screenshot without having to reduce stack leniency to zero since that's unrankable
Andrea
All seems fine now.

Bubbled~

To the next BAT: Make sure to recheck the size of the file .osb!
Ephemeral
Ranked after a tiny slider change to fix some stacking issues
Dusty

Ephemeral wrote:

Ranked after a tiny slider change to fix some stacking issues
Oh, good, just as I was starting to hate the map :D
Shohei Ohtani
Ok now I think that's every IOSYS map except for Border of Extacy I hope.

also gj :3~
Topic Starter
Sakura
Thanks :D
Natteke
This vocal is from Albatrosicks? Sounds so familiar
Garven
Yeah, it's miko+Resurrection doing the vocals on this song.
Card N'FoRcE
Too bad Stack Leniency totally ruined Lunatic (imho, that's the only difficulty i played), this looked like an interesting map.
Shohei Ohtani
Wrong thread ;~;.
Beuchi

CDFA wrote:

Just made some itty bitty lazy changes to some diffs. Just for guest mappers to see.

DC:
+1 OD
I think I did a +1 on HP Drain

Dusty:
-1 HP Drain (To match Working on that Swing)

Working on that Swing;
-1 HP Drain
-1 OD

This is only because the scores for DC's mode and Working on that swing~. Feel free to change it~.

What. xDDD
Shohei Ohtani

Beuchi-chan wrote:

CDFA wrote:

Just made some itty bitty lazy changes to some diffs. Just for guest mappers to see.

DC:
+1 OD
I think I did a +1 on HP Drain

Dusty:
-1 HP Drain (To match Working on that Swing)

Working on that Swing;
-1 HP Drain
-1 OD

This is only because the scores for DC's mode and Working on that swing~. Feel free to change it~.

What. xDDD
WAIT OH CRAP WRONG THREAD. ;~;/
Andrea
Nice fail CDFA xD
Shohei Ohtani
:3~.

I reverted those changes anyway about a minute or 2 after I made them~.
Topic Starter
Sakura

CDFA wrote:

:3~.

I reverted those changes anyway about a minute or 2 after I made them~.
Now you see why i call you CDFAIL XD
hian_old
good map ><
hellokitty98
good map and good song ^^
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