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Miran Himemiya & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune

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bagnz0r
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bagnz0r
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, April 28, 2010 at 3:41:35 PM

Artist: Miran Himemiya & Chocolate Rockers
Title: Tomadoi Bitter Tune
Source: Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu
Tags: nogizaka haruka no himitsu anime
BPM: 148
Filesize: 11444kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.8 stars, 204 notes)
  2. Normal (4.52 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Miran Himemiya & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune
Download: Miran Himemiya & Chocolate Rockers - Tomadoi Bitter Tune (no video)
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One of my favorite animes, Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu!

E #1:
- Fixed spacing (Normal)

E #2:
- Fixed some stuff (Hard)

E #3:
- Updates
Last edited by bagnz0r , edited 9 times in total.
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
I'm not a very good modder, so you don't have to follow all these suggestions (especially the New Combo mods) ^^

[Overall]
  • Add a preview point (Timing > Set Current Position as Preview)
    Maybe use more hitsounds other than just whistles?
[Normal]
  • 00:01:384 (1) - Not sure if you're suppose to have notes before the offset
    00:17:600 (4) - New combo
    00:18:411 (1) - Remove new combo
    00:33:006 (1) - Remove new combo?
    00:33:817 (2) - New combo?
    00:36:249 (1) - Remove new combo?
    00:37:060 (2) - New combo?
    00:37:668 (1) - Remove combo
    01:07:465 - Add note?
[Hard]
  • 00:01:384 (1) - Same as normal
    00:17:195 (4) - Spacing
    00:17:600 (6) - New combo
    00:18:411 (1) - Remove new combo
    00:20:033 (7) - Spacing
    00:22:060 (6) - Spacing?
    00:25:100 (4) - Spacing
    00:26:519 (8) - Spacing
    00:45:573 (7) - Spacing?
    00:48:411 (7) - Spacing
    00:59:560 (4) - Spacing
    01:03:614 (11) - Spacing
    01:20:641 (4) - Spacing
    01:21:452 (4) - Spacing
Star~
GoLiMaR_old
GoLiMaR_old
Not sure about the timing...
Anyway, here're some suggestions

Normal:
00:39:290 - put a note here?
00:41:519 - ^
00:52:060 - ^
00:52:465 - ^
01:13:141 - ^
01:20:438 - ^
01:21:249 - ^
01:22:060 - ^

01:10:202 - spacing

01:11:114 - slider should end at 01:12:533

Hard:
00:14:357 - new combo
00:16:790 - remove new combo
00:57:330 - spacing

*star*
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
[Normal]
some notes are too close,I hope you make it by DS 1.0x not too low.
[Hard]
OA-1
some parts are hard to read,like:
00:33:817 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read.
Fine,star.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
Timing seems off... it might be me tho

[Normal]
The easiest diff needs to be good enough for newbies, either make an easier diff, or make this one less confusing
Preview Point not set?
00:07:871 (1) - This combo burst is hiding the repeat on the slider
Other than that, no problems found

[Hard]
Preview point not set
00:01:384 (1,1) - Are you crazy? =O theese 2 take anything by surprise, and barely any time to even reach them too, try decreasing overall difficulty
At kiai time it does look better for the overall difficulty you are using, since it matches the speed, however you still may want to lower it since there's very little reaction time

Very few problems, so +Star
bagnz0r
Topic Starter
bagnz0r

Sakura301 wrote:

try decreasing overall difficulty
No.
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete "nogizaka haruna no himitsu" from Tags, they're already on Source so they're unnecesary :3
- 2nd and 4th combocolours are so similar to the other ones, change them?
- Add a Preview Point (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)

~Normal~
- Oh my... 4.30 stars? x_x Decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty, they're way too high for just a Normal (and it's worse when you have Normal as your easiest)

00:30:573 (1) - I really think you should increase the spacing from here to the end of the Slowdown section, things like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6342 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6343 become really confusing with such a low spacing.
00:52:263 (3,4) - Unstack those, I find it too hard and confusing for the easiest diff.
01:10:100 (3,4) - Too hard for easiest diff too, imo :/

~Hard~
- Ahhh Decrease Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate again,what's the reason for having them THAT high? e_e

00:01:384 (1) - Add a break after this.
00:16:992 (7,8,9) - A bit confusing, could you stack them in a single point? Up to you though.
00:19:830 (7,8,9) - Fix Spacing.
00:30:573 (1) - Same issue as in [Normal]. Things like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6344 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6345 are so confusing >.<

*star*
Last edited by Beuchi , edited 1 time in total.
bagnz0r
Topic Starter
bagnz0r

Beuchi-chan wrote:

what's the reason for having them THAT high? e_e
That kills DoubleTime players.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
First of all
i think you need make a easy diff

Normal
00:07:871(1) - add a finish hitsound
00:14:357(6) - add a finish hitsound and new combo
00:22:263(5) - end at 00:23:276
00:23:682(x) - add a note?
00:28:952(7) - end at 00:29:763
00:30:168(x) - add a note?
00:48:411,00:48:614(3.4) - remove note
00:48:411(x) - add slider end at 00:48:614 and add whistle at the begin
00:48:817(x) - add a note with whistle

Hard
00:07:871(1) - add a finish hitsound and reduce volume
00:14:357(1) - ^
00:23:276(x) - add a note
00:23:682(x) - add a note?
00:29:763(x) - add a note
00:30:168(x) - add a note?
00:51:249(x) - ^

Star~
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
Konnichiwa BAGNOGAMUH!

Tomadoi Bitter Tune

[General]
- you actually don't need to put "nogizaka haruka no himitsu" in Tags since it's already in source and "anime"... instead put the names of the characters etc..
- Set a preview point please XD

-Put break here in both diffs 00:02:719

[Hard]
-This hard is soo not suitable with high Overall Diff since it requires good timing like in parts like this 00:05:844 (5,6,7,8,9) - or 00:21:046 (2,3,4) - ... I only recommend high OD if the map is continuous. Please lessen the OD 3x or 2x.

-00:43:141 remove break

Following are just minor no need to follow them if you don't find it useful.
00:45:168 (4) - new combo
00:48:411 (7) - ^
00:57:330 (1) - add finish hitsound (use finish in parts like it needs power XD)
00:58:141 (2,6) - ^
00:59:155 (1) - ^
01:03:411 (9,10,11) - this is just ugly =(
01:20:438 (2,3,4) - spacing here is illegal, imo. to make it legal make the section 2x in bpm. o.o then respace.

[Normal]
-Overall diff is still too high for a normal.. but it's ok for me. it's up to you though.

-Please use finish hitsound T.T

-00:43:141 remove break

That's all I found.

Good luck~
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