Hello, from my M4M queue. My english skills is equal to zero. ;w; I hope you understand:
[Extra]
I skip extra, extreme, expert, overmap, or forced extra difficulty, but here are some fast advice:
00:04:828 (1,2,3) - This is 1/8 beat, not 1/4. Please, use 1/8 slider. Better fit than 3 circle. Slider start: 00:04:828, and end here: 00:05:016
Okay, please stop overmapping! Here is problems:
00:06:891 (3,4,5) - 1/4 triplet? Are you sure you can hear in 1/4? I don't hear 1/4 sound. Delete 00:06:984 (4) - circle, because unneccessary, and overmapped! There is no beat!
More unnecessary triplets, circles because there is no emphasized beat:
00:08:204 (2,3,4) -
00:09:891 (3,4,5) -
00:12:891 (3,4,5) -
00:15:891 (3,4,5) -
00:18:891 (3,4,5) -
00:20:204 (2,3,4) - this is 1/8 part, not 1/4
00:24:891 (3,4,5) -
00:26:204 (2,3,4) - this is 1/8 part, not 1/4
01:20:016 (2,3,4) -
01:24:516 (3,4,5) -
01:38:016 (2,3,4) -
02:59:203 (3,4) -
03:02:016 (2,3,4) -
Please follow the stronger voices!
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[Insane]
00:04:828 (1,2,3) - Same as extra. Use 1/8 slider!
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00:08:016 (1,2,3,4) - This circles is not fit here! Don't use 1/4 triplet here: 00:08:203 (2,3,4) - because can't heared 1/4 sound! Use this:
00:08:016 (1,2) - Delete circles, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:08:016 (1) -
00:08:297 (3) - Delete circle!
Better fits the stronger sound, and not overmapped!
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00:14:016 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^ Please, follow the stronger voice, and don't use 1/4 triplet, because not fit, can't heared 1/4 beat!
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00:18:703 (2,3,4,5) - Another problem: Delete circles, and please, use 1/8 repeat slider here: 00:18:703 - slider end here: 00:18:891 -, and delete 00:18:984 (4) - circle, because overmapped, there is no audible sound.
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00:20:203 (1,2,3) - Use 1/8 slider! This triplets is not fit here!
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00:23:203 (1,2,3) - Same as above ^
00:26:203 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:203 (1,2,3) - ^
Use 1/8 slider!
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01:20:016 (2,3,4) - This background sound is very low! Please, delete circles! Tis is not fit here, and can't heared audible beat.
01:26:016 (2,3,4) - Same as above ^
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01:33:516 (3,4,5) - Delete 01:33:609 (4) - circle, because there is no audible sound!
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01:35:016 (2,3,4) - Please, delete circles! This is not fit here, and can't heared audible beat.
01:38:016 (2,3,4) - Same as ^
01:41:016 (2,3,4) - ^
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02:21:141 (1,2,3) - 02:21:234 (2) - Delete circle, don't follow the stronger sound.
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02:21:891 (4,5,6) - Please, use 1/2 slider, because triplets is not fit here! This sound is very weird so use 1/2 slider!
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02:23:016 (2) - I think two circle is better! Better fits the stronger sound!
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02:24:141 (1,2,3) - 02:24:234 (2) - Delete circle, don't follow the stronger sound.
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02:27:891 (4,5,6) - Same as 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
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02:33:141 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:24:141 (1,2,3) -... Delete 02:33:234 (2) - circle
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02:33:891 (5,6,7) - Partly same 02:24:141 (1,2,3) - Use this here: http://puu.sh/ddaMA/02fbcaa9a4.jpg 1/1 slider
02:36:891 (4,5,6) - ^
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02:39:234 (5) - delete circle, because there is no audible beat!
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02:39:703 (1,2,3) - Not fit here. Please, follow stronger sound! Use this: http://puu.sh/ddb1w/29ad95c428.jpg
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02:50:016 (2,3,4) - Delete objects, because there is no emphasized beats!
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02:57:422 (2) - Delete circle... because there is no audible beats!
02:59:016 (2,3,4) - ^ No audible beats
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03:00:328 (2) - ^ No audible beat.
03:02:016 (2,3,4) - Delete objects, because there is no emphasized beats!
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03:05:016 (1) - This spinner is not fit here! Please, map this part!
Oh my god!....
[Hard]
Hard slider velocity is equal to insane Slider velocity. Please, use smaller SV. Must difference!
00:42:141 (1,2,3,4) - Please, follow the stronger sound! use this here: http://puu.sh/ddcFC/3755818cc8.jpg
00:43:641 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 00:52:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Use similar!
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01:19:266 (1,2,3) - This conception is bad, not fit the music. Use this here/similar: http://puu.sh/dddgD/d569f63c3a.jpg
01:22:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:28:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:31:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:34:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:37:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:40:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:43:641 (4) - Delete circle. There is no audible beat!
01:48:891 (2) - Two circle is better fits the stronger sound!
01:49:266 - Missing circle. There is bass drum!
01:49:453 (3) - This repeat is not fit here. Can't followed the stronger sound! Delete circle: 01:50:016 (4) - and use this here: http://puu.sh/dddKK/570a9a3283.jpg
01:52:266 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:19:266 (1,2,3) -
02:21:891 (4,5,6) - This is little weird. I think use this here: http://puu.sh/dddTz/3626e76ae7.jpg This stronger sound is very weird, and not 1/4 rhythm!
02:23:953 - Missing circle! there is Bass drum!
02:26:953 (1) - This slider is not fit here, because 02:26:953 - here is no stronger beat! Delete slider, and put circle here: 02:27:141 - .
02:27:891 (5,6,7) - Use similar: 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
02:28:641 (2,3) - Replace them. Slider ---> Circle. Better fits the stronger sound!
02:29:391 (5,6) - Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddesM/6ef5373740.jpg This is fit the stronger sound!
02:31:641 (1,2,3) - Same as/ Use similar: 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
02:33:891 (4,5,6) - ^
02:34:641 (2,3,4) - Use this: http://puu.sh/ddeCu/909bdf4bf7.jpg This is fit the stronger sound!
02:39:891 (4,5,6) - Use this: http://puu.sh/ddeIo/613b56d027.jpg Better fits the stronger sound!
02:42:328 (1) - Delete circle, unncecessary, and there is no stronger audible beat!
02:47:203 (3) - ^
02:49:266 (1,2,3) - Use this similar: 01:19:266 (1,2,3) - This conception is bad, not fit the music. http://puu.sh/dddgD/d569f63c3a.jpg
02:52:266 (1,2,3) - ^
02:55:266 (1,2,3) - ^
02:58:266 (1,2,3) - ^
03:01:266 (1,2,3) - ^
...
[Normal]
01:35:391 (4,5,1) - This stronger sound is very weird, and this 1/2 sliders is not fit here, because this sound is not 1/2 beat. Use long slider here: 01:35:391 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddfma/d0afa63c4a.jpg
01:41:391 (5,6,7) - Currently objects is not fit here! Not follow the background sound! Use this here: http://puu.sh/ddfu5/613d875c88.jpg It's better fit.
02:32:766 (6) - This slider is not fit the stronger sound! One circle is better! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/ddfIO/d867f49338.jpg
02:59:391 (5,6,7) - Same as: 01:35:391 (4,5,1) -
[Easy]
Easy slider velocity is equal to Normal Slider velocity. Please, use smaller SV. Must difference!
Even a lot of mods needed! Good luck!
[Extra]
I skip extra, extreme, expert, overmap, or forced extra difficulty, but here are some fast advice:
00:04:828 (1,2,3) - This is 1/8 beat, not 1/4. Please, use 1/8 slider. Better fit than 3 circle. Slider start: 00:04:828, and end here: 00:05:016
Okay, please stop overmapping! Here is problems:
00:06:891 (3,4,5) - 1/4 triplet? Are you sure you can hear in 1/4? I don't hear 1/4 sound. Delete 00:06:984 (4) - circle, because unneccessary, and overmapped! There is no beat!
More unnecessary triplets, circles because there is no emphasized beat:
00:08:204 (2,3,4) -
00:09:891 (3,4,5) -
00:12:891 (3,4,5) -
00:15:891 (3,4,5) -
00:18:891 (3,4,5) -
00:20:204 (2,3,4) - this is 1/8 part, not 1/4
00:24:891 (3,4,5) -
00:26:204 (2,3,4) - this is 1/8 part, not 1/4
01:20:016 (2,3,4) -
01:24:516 (3,4,5) -
01:38:016 (2,3,4) -
02:59:203 (3,4) -
03:02:016 (2,3,4) -
Please follow the stronger voices!
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[Insane]
00:04:828 (1,2,3) - Same as extra. Use 1/8 slider!
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00:08:016 (1,2,3,4) - This circles is not fit here! Don't use 1/4 triplet here: 00:08:203 (2,3,4) - because can't heared 1/4 sound! Use this:
00:08:016 (1,2) - Delete circles, and put 1/2 slider here: 00:08:016 (1) -
00:08:297 (3) - Delete circle!
Better fits the stronger sound, and not overmapped!
--------------
00:14:016 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^ Please, follow the stronger voice, and don't use 1/4 triplet, because not fit, can't heared 1/4 beat!
--------------
00:18:703 (2,3,4,5) - Another problem: Delete circles, and please, use 1/8 repeat slider here: 00:18:703 - slider end here: 00:18:891 -, and delete 00:18:984 (4) - circle, because overmapped, there is no audible sound.
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00:20:203 (1,2,3) - Use 1/8 slider! This triplets is not fit here!
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00:23:203 (1,2,3) - Same as above ^
00:26:203 (1,2,3) - ^
00:29:203 (1,2,3) - ^
Use 1/8 slider!
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01:20:016 (2,3,4) - This background sound is very low! Please, delete circles! Tis is not fit here, and can't heared audible beat.
01:26:016 (2,3,4) - Same as above ^
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01:33:516 (3,4,5) - Delete 01:33:609 (4) - circle, because there is no audible sound!
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01:35:016 (2,3,4) - Please, delete circles! This is not fit here, and can't heared audible beat.
01:38:016 (2,3,4) - Same as ^
01:41:016 (2,3,4) - ^
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02:21:141 (1,2,3) - 02:21:234 (2) - Delete circle, don't follow the stronger sound.
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02:21:891 (4,5,6) - Please, use 1/2 slider, because triplets is not fit here! This sound is very weird so use 1/2 slider!
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02:23:016 (2) - I think two circle is better! Better fits the stronger sound!
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02:24:141 (1,2,3) - 02:24:234 (2) - Delete circle, don't follow the stronger sound.
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02:27:891 (4,5,6) - Same as 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
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02:33:141 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:24:141 (1,2,3) -... Delete 02:33:234 (2) - circle
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02:33:891 (5,6,7) - Partly same 02:24:141 (1,2,3) - Use this here: http://puu.sh/ddaMA/02fbcaa9a4.jpg 1/1 slider
02:36:891 (4,5,6) - ^
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02:39:234 (5) - delete circle, because there is no audible beat!
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02:39:703 (1,2,3) - Not fit here. Please, follow stronger sound! Use this: http://puu.sh/ddb1w/29ad95c428.jpg
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02:50:016 (2,3,4) - Delete objects, because there is no emphasized beats!
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02:57:422 (2) - Delete circle... because there is no audible beats!
02:59:016 (2,3,4) - ^ No audible beats
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03:00:328 (2) - ^ No audible beat.
03:02:016 (2,3,4) - Delete objects, because there is no emphasized beats!
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03:05:016 (1) - This spinner is not fit here! Please, map this part!
Oh my god!....
[Hard]
Hard slider velocity is equal to insane Slider velocity. Please, use smaller SV. Must difference!
00:42:141 (1,2,3,4) - Please, follow the stronger sound! use this here: http://puu.sh/ddcFC/3755818cc8.jpg
00:43:641 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , 00:52:641 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ Use similar!
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01:19:266 (1,2,3) - This conception is bad, not fit the music. Use this here/similar: http://puu.sh/dddgD/d569f63c3a.jpg
01:22:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:28:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:31:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:34:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:37:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:40:266 (1,2,3) - ^
01:43:641 (4) - Delete circle. There is no audible beat!
01:48:891 (2) - Two circle is better fits the stronger sound!
01:49:266 - Missing circle. There is bass drum!
01:49:453 (3) - This repeat is not fit here. Can't followed the stronger sound! Delete circle: 01:50:016 (4) - and use this here: http://puu.sh/dddKK/570a9a3283.jpg
01:52:266 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:19:266 (1,2,3) -
02:21:891 (4,5,6) - This is little weird. I think use this here: http://puu.sh/dddTz/3626e76ae7.jpg This stronger sound is very weird, and not 1/4 rhythm!
02:23:953 - Missing circle! there is Bass drum!
02:26:953 (1) - This slider is not fit here, because 02:26:953 - here is no stronger beat! Delete slider, and put circle here: 02:27:141 - .
02:27:891 (5,6,7) - Use similar: 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
02:28:641 (2,3) - Replace them. Slider ---> Circle. Better fits the stronger sound!
02:29:391 (5,6) - Better conception: http://puu.sh/ddesM/6ef5373740.jpg This is fit the stronger sound!
02:31:641 (1,2,3) - Same as/ Use similar: 02:21:891 (4,5,6) -
02:33:891 (4,5,6) - ^
02:34:641 (2,3,4) - Use this: http://puu.sh/ddeCu/909bdf4bf7.jpg This is fit the stronger sound!
02:39:891 (4,5,6) - Use this: http://puu.sh/ddeIo/613b56d027.jpg Better fits the stronger sound!
02:42:328 (1) - Delete circle, unncecessary, and there is no stronger audible beat!
02:47:203 (3) - ^
02:49:266 (1,2,3) - Use this similar: 01:19:266 (1,2,3) - This conception is bad, not fit the music. http://puu.sh/dddgD/d569f63c3a.jpg
02:52:266 (1,2,3) - ^
02:55:266 (1,2,3) - ^
02:58:266 (1,2,3) - ^
03:01:266 (1,2,3) - ^
...
[Normal]
01:35:391 (4,5,1) - This stronger sound is very weird, and this 1/2 sliders is not fit here, because this sound is not 1/2 beat. Use long slider here: 01:35:391 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/ddfma/d0afa63c4a.jpg
01:41:391 (5,6,7) - Currently objects is not fit here! Not follow the background sound! Use this here: http://puu.sh/ddfu5/613d875c88.jpg It's better fit.
02:32:766 (6) - This slider is not fit the stronger sound! One circle is better! Use this similar: http://puu.sh/ddfIO/d867f49338.jpg
02:59:391 (5,6,7) - Same as: 01:35:391 (4,5,1) -
[Easy]
Easy slider velocity is equal to Normal Slider velocity. Please, use smaller SV. Must difference!
Even a lot of mods needed! Good luck!