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fergas

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fergas 2014-10-15T14:08:21+00:00

Chu-chu! Feint hype train! All aboard!

SPOILER

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-10-18T08:52:11+00:00

fergas wrote:
Chu-chu! Feint hype train! All aboard!
SPOILER

XD

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

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Nozhomi 2015-01-09T18:30:01+00:00

Speedrank inc ♥ /runs
I'm waiting for it !

Secretpipe

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Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-10T12:05:49+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
Speedrank inc ♥ /runs
I'm waiting for it !

dw baby <3

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2015-01-11T14:37:14+00:00

asked via pm :

Here is full hit sound for the map, and also Insane full hit sounded : https://puu.sh/emYVh/9f08b768b1.rar

Secretpipe

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Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-11T14:40:53+00:00

Thank you bby <3

Maeglwn

Maeglwn 2015-01-12T07:12:39+00:00

[General]

you need a diff below 2 stars
asphyxia insane tags are different than the rest

[Collab Normal]

cs3 would probably be chill in this
01:01:426 (2,3,4) - try to avoid stacking these if possible
01:03:826 (1) - don't think there's enough time between this and the next note
01:40:169 (2,3,4) - same
01:44:969 (1,2) - flow here seem sa bit awkward with the slider going downwards instead of flowing with the last note

[Hard]

YOU HAVE A LOT OF UNSNAPPED NOTES PLEASE FIX
00:46:684 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should reverse the position of these 2 stacks. would flow nicer
00:57:312 (1,2,3) - isn't this a bit excessive for a hard? seems really fast. idk. mostly a call on your part I guess
01:03:826 (1) - 2 repeats was a bit unexpected playing through it. maybe 1 repeat and a single tap? o.o
01:05:198 (1) - same
01:06:569 (1) - why not end on 01:07:941 - ?
01:08:626 (1,2,3,4) - come onNNNNNNNNNNNNN, make a pattern with this, stacking all 4 notes in such a big buildup is SOOOOOOOOOOO boring. make a cool square pattern or zig zag pattern or somethin

[Asphyxia's Insane]

tags
hitsounds?
this entire map is really hard for an insane. might be better off as an extra
sv very, very high
01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this seems really hard for an insane. lots of movement. like.. intense amounts of movement. maybe make it a little easier?
01:07:426 (10,11,12) - same thing here. 4.0 spacing.. jesus
there isn't really a whole lot WRONG with the map, it's just.. an extra. LOL

[Insane]

meh. I'm not really a big fan of all of the extensive pattern usage throughout the map. aside from that, this map is actually probably fine for the most part. I don't see a whole lot

gl secretpipe babe

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2015-01-12T20:29:36+00:00

Maeglwn wrote:
[notice][General]

[Asphyxia's Insane]
tags
hitsounds? Ye fixed
this entire map is really hard for an insane. might be better off as an extra
sv very, very high
01:05:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this seems really hard for an insane. lots of movement. like.. intense amounts of movement. maybe make it a little easier? I already nerfed it, it was bigger so I am going to keep it, plays nicely anyway and adds challenge
01:07:426 (10,11,12) - same thing here. 4.0 spacing.. jesus Feels a lot easier while playing tho, leaving as it is for now
there isn't really a whole lot WRONG with the map, it's just.. an extra. LOL I don't wanna change the name to Extra yet since I feel like it's still an Insane, but if more people tell me it's more appropriate as an Extra then sure

Thx Maeg babe

Buttercup

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Joined May 2012

Buttercup 2015-01-12T22:14:13+00:00

Good luck o3o <3

Last edited by Buttercup 2015-01-14T22:53:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gordon123

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Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2015-01-14T19:04:11+00:00

Hello Secretpipe ^^
[General]

00:25:426 - make 60-70% volume(60% pls) first blow was very loud,as for me ,very painful to the ears(correct it please)
^ это я говорю про все диффы/I'm talking about all the difficulties
Question : 1)for this map there will be storyboard?
2)maybe i can make Easy? (idk maybe its hard(hmm..i noob in it))

[Colors]
1)1st color

2)2nd color

3)3rd color

[Collab Normal]

-Не пишу на русском,так как это коллаб(жалко)
00:43:255 (4) - I would have done so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525355
00:44:283 - make circle(in rythm maybe)
00:47:369 (1) - maybe Finish https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525387
00:52:855 (1) - Drum-Finish? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525393
00:55:598 (1) - Finish?
00:57:655 (6) - Clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525427
00:58:341 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525439
01:01:426 (2) - Clap?
01:01:769 (4) - Clap? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525397
01:03:141 (6) - Clap(всё в клапе XD)
01:09:312 (1) - Finish and Clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525507
01:10:684 (3) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525521
01:11:712 (4) - Clap
01:14:112 (5) - Claps > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525529 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525535
01:17:541 (1) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525545
01:18:912 (3) - Clap
01:25:084 (5) - 1) Clap 2) Finish > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525561 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525569
01:30:569 (3) - Claps > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525585 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525593
01:31:255 (1) - Finish
01:36:741 (1) - Clap
01:41:541 (6) - Finish https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525605
01:44:626 (6) - Clap
01:50:455 (1) - Whistle
01:50:798 (2) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525611
-Может и не ахти хитсаунды звучат,зато тайко не будет однообразно+они подходят!(Посмотри в харде,там в начале Whstle's стоят,мб добавить?) <russian AlexaBM understand

[Hard]

00:51:484 - maybe make circle x:320 y:308
01:01:598 (2) - correct this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525669
01:08:626 (1,2,3,4) - maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525681

[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:27:484 (2) - delete Whistle
01:18:741 (5,6,1) - maybe Clap?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
for you star

and...
Good Luck

Last edited by Gordon123 2015-01-15T18:09:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Tarrasky

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Tarrasky 2015-01-15T01:29:14+00:00

nice map, congrats ^^

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2015-01-15T18:51:41+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
Hello Secretpipe
[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:27:484 (2) - delete Whistle It follows the song, though ;_;
01:18:741 (5,6,1) - maybe Clap? I am following the basic 2,4 claps so that'd break the pattern, so no

Thanks a lot for checking! http://puu.sh/eyKKL/93860e790c.txt

(I added few extra finishes and removed a whistle)

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2015-01-15T19:10:40+00:00

@Maeglwn no changes, sorry.
@Gordon123 None of suggestions were applied, also hitsounds are up to Secretpipe, so.. SECRET PLS

thank you for mods anyway!

Gordon123

1,038 posts

Joined June 2013

Gordon123 2015-01-15T19:40:19+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
@Maeglwn no changes, sorry.
@Gordon123 None of suggestions were applied, also hitsounds are up to Secretpipe, so.. SECRET PLS

thank you for mods anyway!

так бы сразу что ль

ладно ,не важно! XD

Kyshiro

Elite Mapper

1,642 posts

Joined January 2011

Kyshiro 2015-01-15T20:10:23+00:00

IRC on assfixia's diff

mod

20:44 Kyshiro: offset -2
20:45 Kyshiro: considering people would definitely dt this
20:45 Asphyxia: The issue is, I start getting unsatisfied
20:45 Asphyxia: from
20:45 Asphyxia: 01:12:055 - to 01:39:484 -
20:45 Asphyxia: so idk
20:45 Kyshiro: 01:07:255 (9,10,11,12) - make this spacing a lot less
20:45 Kyshiro: because this will suck with dt
20:46 Asphyxia: 01:04:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is a huge challenge too
20:46 Kyshiro: easier than those 1/4 sliderjumps
20:46 Kyshiro: its like the same as in time bomb
20:46 Kyshiro: but way worse
20:46 Kyshiro: kiai seems fine to me tho
20:47 Asphyxia: k reduced
20:47 Kyshiro: 01:42:569 (2) - wtf is this tho
20:47 Kyshiro: also i cant hear hitsounds
20:47 Kyshiro: at ALL
20:47 Asphyxia: IMO it fits but then again, it doesn't
20:48 Kyshiro: it fits in some weird way but im sure everyone's gonna complain
20:48 Kyshiro: because it literally skips the beat it's supposed to land on
20:49 Asphyxia: I'll see if I can come up with something better
20:49 Asphyxia: but the thing is, that kiai doesn't look THAT appealing to me, nor it plays that well either
20:49 Asphyxia: but idk
20:49 Kyshiro: it does
20:49 Kyshiro: in fact it looks better than what you've previously shown me
20:49 Asphyxia: 01:35:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about this then
20:50 Asphyxia: well yeah since I remapped it one more time
20:50 Kyshiro: 01:35:369 (1,2,3,4) - fine 01:36:055 (5,6,7) - random
20:50 Asphyxia: which resulted into that
20:50 Asphyxia: hmm
20:50 Kyshiro: http://kshro.s-ul.eu/ijquAxCU
20:51 Kyshiro: so easy to make something out of it
20:51 Kyshiro: y u no do
20:51 Asphyxia: I was thinking more like
20:51 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/eyUgV/8d0c3fe2af.jpg
20:51 Kyshiro: that doesnt change a thing
20:51 Kyshiro: lol
20:51 Kyshiro: still random
20:51 Kyshiro: sure its a fun jump i guess
20:51 Kyshiro: but yea
20:52 Asphyxia: hmmmhmhmhmhmhmh
20:52 Asphyxia: any other parts you feel should be improved
20:52 Asphyxia: AND NOW'S YOUR CHANCE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE TRIPLETS
20:52 Kyshiro: the hitsounds
20:52 Kyshiro: which arent audible
20:52 Kyshiro: at all
20:52 Kyshiro: like none
20:53 Kyshiro: 01:02:969 (5,6,7) - i'd put this tripple here 01:03:655 (10,1) -
20:54 Asphyxia: works, but I don't know a good place for 6 then
20:54 Kyshiro: 01:17:369 (6,7,1) - > 01:17:026 (4,5) -
20:54 Asphyxia: since I don't want it stacked, I want the cursor to be moving
20:54 Asphyxia: well
20:55 Kyshiro: idk it just feels like you put a lot of unnecessary tripples
20:55 Kyshiro: 01:37:598 (5,6,7) - this one for example + you break the pattern of what you use before this
20:56 Asphyxia: fixed the second
20:56 Kyshiro: before this you put the tripples where they end on the big white
20:56 Kyshiro: and here suddenly the tick before it
20:56 Kyshiro: i honestly dunno how to explain
20:57 Kyshiro: it comes natural for me
20:58 Asphyxia: I guess I need to work on that more, but I have a different style too
20:58 Asphyxia: but do you have any placement suggestions for uh
20:58 Asphyxia: 01:02:969 (5,6,7) -
20:58 Asphyxia: part
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:055 (6,7) - delete
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:312 (8,9,10) - 1/2 backward
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:655 - tripple on 01:03:826 (1) -
20:59 Kyshiro: ez
20:59 Kyshiro: dont have to change any placement
21:00 Asphyxia: uhh
21:00 Asphyxia: uhhhhh
21:00 Asphyxia: uhhhhhhhhhh
21:02 Asphyxia: ok
21:02 Asphyxia: i think I got it now
21:03 Kyshiro: ok
21:04 Asphyxia: Anything else?
21:04 Asphyxia: because your suggestions are good
21:04 Asphyxia: and I am far more satisfied with this than before
21:06 Asphyxia: I guess I could raise the volume
21:06 Asphyxia: to 80% on the kiai
21:06 Kyshiro: nothing else
21:06 Kyshiro: and yes
21:06 Kyshiro: raise the volume a LOT
21:06 Kyshiro: because its really inaudible

Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2015-01-15T20:13:04+00:00

Kyshiro wrote:
IRC on assfixia's diff

mod
20:44 Kyshiro: offset -2
20:45 Kyshiro: considering people would definitely dt this
20:45 Asphyxia: The issue is, I start getting unsatisfied
20:45 Asphyxia: from
20:45 Asphyxia: 01:12:055 - to 01:39:484 -
20:45 Asphyxia: so idk
20:45 Kyshiro: 01:07:255 (9,10,11,12) - make this spacing a lot less
20:45 Kyshiro: because this will suck with dt
20:46 Asphyxia: 01:04:512 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is a huge challenge too
20:46 Kyshiro: easier than those 1/4 sliderjumps
20:46 Kyshiro: its like the same as in time bomb
20:46 Kyshiro: but way worse
20:46 Kyshiro: kiai seems fine to me tho
20:47 Asphyxia: k reduced
20:47 Kyshiro: 01:42:569 (2) - wtf is this tho
20:47 Kyshiro: also i cant hear hitsounds
20:47 Kyshiro: at ALL
20:47 Asphyxia: IMO it fits but then again, it doesn't
20:48 Kyshiro: it fits in some weird way but im sure everyone's gonna complain
20:48 Kyshiro: because it literally skips the beat it's supposed to land on
20:49 Asphyxia: I'll see if I can come up with something better
20:49 Asphyxia: but the thing is, that kiai doesn't look THAT appealing to me, nor it plays that well either
20:49 Asphyxia: but idk
20:49 Kyshiro: it does
20:49 Kyshiro: in fact it looks better than what you've previously shown me
20:49 Asphyxia: 01:35:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about this then
20:50 Asphyxia: well yeah since I remapped it one more time
20:50 Kyshiro: 01:35:369 (1,2,3,4) - fine 01:36:055 (5,6,7) - random
20:50 Asphyxia: which resulted into that
20:50 Asphyxia: hmm
20:50 Kyshiro: http://kshro.s-ul.eu/ijquAxCU
20:51 Kyshiro: so easy to make something out of it
20:51 Kyshiro: y u no do
20:51 Asphyxia: I was thinking more like
20:51 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/eyUgV/8d0c3fe2af.jpg
20:51 Kyshiro: that doesnt change a thing
20:51 Kyshiro: lol
20:51 Kyshiro: still random
20:51 Kyshiro: sure its a fun jump i guess
20:51 Kyshiro: but yea
20:52 Asphyxia: hmmmhmhmhmhmhmh
20:52 Asphyxia: any other parts you feel should be improved
20:52 Asphyxia: AND NOW'S YOUR CHANCE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE TRIPLETS
20:52 Kyshiro: the hitsounds
20:52 Kyshiro: which arent audible
20:52 Kyshiro: at all
20:52 Kyshiro: like none
20:53 Kyshiro: 01:02:969 (5,6,7) - i'd put this tripple here 01:03:655 (10,1) -
20:54 Asphyxia: works, but I don't know a good place for 6 then
20:54 Kyshiro: 01:17:369 (6,7,1) - > 01:17:026 (4,5) -
20:54 Asphyxia: since I don't want it stacked, I want the cursor to be moving
20:54 Asphyxia: well
20:55 Kyshiro: idk it just feels like you put a lot of unnecessary tripples
20:55 Kyshiro: 01:37:598 (5,6,7) - this one for example + you break the pattern of what you use before this
20:56 Asphyxia: fixed the second
20:56 Kyshiro: before this you put the tripples where they end on the big white
20:56 Kyshiro: and here suddenly the tick before it
20:56 Kyshiro: i honestly dunno how to explain
20:57 Kyshiro: it comes natural for me
20:58 Asphyxia: I guess I need to work on that more, but I have a different style too
20:58 Asphyxia: but do you have any placement suggestions for uh
20:58 Asphyxia: 01:02:969 (5,6,7) -
20:58 Asphyxia: part
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:055 (6,7) - delete
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:312 (8,9,10) - 1/2 backward
20:59 Kyshiro: 01:03:655 - tripple on 01:03:826 (1) -
20:59 Kyshiro: ez
20:59 Kyshiro: dont have to change any placement
21:00 Asphyxia: uhh
21:00 Asphyxia: uhhhhh
21:00 Asphyxia: uhhhhhhhhhh
21:02 Asphyxia: ok
21:02 Asphyxia: i think I got it now
21:03 Kyshiro: ok
21:04 Asphyxia: Anything else?
21:04 Asphyxia: because your suggestions are good
21:04 Asphyxia: and I am far more satisfied with this than before
21:06 Asphyxia: I guess I could raise the volume
21:06 Asphyxia: to 80% on the kiai
21:06 Kyshiro: nothing else
21:06 Kyshiro: and yes
21:06 Kyshiro: raise the volume a LOT
21:06 Kyshiro: because its really inaudible

http://puu.sh/eyXHn/cabe4312a5.txt

Wee, thanks so much Kyshiro! We made the Insane generally better in terms of rhytyhm, and I made few adjustments so it's more appealing visually. @Secretpipe, try to raise the volume of every section to something more similar what I have now currently!

Secretpipe

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Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-15T20:46:21+00:00

Maeglwn wrote:
[General]
you need a diff below 2 stars nah , new rules is under 2.25 bby
asphyxia insane tags are different than the rest changed tags !

[Hard]
YOU HAVE A LOT OF UNSNAPPED NOTES PLEASE FIX [b]DONE[/b]
00:46:684 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should reverse the position of these 2 stacks. would flow nicer sure !
00:57:312 (1,2,3) - isn't this a bit excessive for a hard? seems really fast. idk. mostly a call on your part I guess It's just a triplet/ triple. The triple is weird is you compare with triplet made with two circles + a slider. but it's not excessive otherwise !
01:03:826 (1) - 2 repeats was a bit unexpected playing through it. maybe 1 repeat and a single tap? o.o Well , I didn't want to change this because I thought this will better fits but actually , found another pattern with your help xD Thanks !
01:05:198 (1) - same Done too !
01:06:569 (1) - why not end on 01:07:941 - ? If you listen carefully , it's the end of the kickroll so the spinner ends just at the moment where the kiai is about to start with some drumz behind : 01:08:626 (1,2,3,4,1) -
01:08:626 (1,2,3,4) - come onNNNNNNNNNNNNN, make a pattern with this, stacking all 4 notes in such a big buildup is SOOOOOOOOOOO boring. make a cool square pattern or zig zag pattern or somethin yea LOLOL

[Insane]
meh. I'm not really a big fan of all of the extensive pattern usage throughout the map. aside from that, this map is actually probably fine for the most part. I don't see a whole lot Thanks :3

gl secretpipe babe ilu my babe

Secretpipe

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Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-15T20:50:17+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
Hello Secretpipe ^^
[General]

00:25:426 - make 60-70% volume(60% pls) first blow was very loud,as for me ,very painful to the ears(correct it please)
^ это я говорю про все диффы/I'm talking about all the difficulties
Question : 1)for this map there will be storyboard?
2)maybe i can make Easy? (idk maybe its hard(hmm..i noob in it))
[Colors]
1)1st color
2)2nd color
3)3rd color will ask preetee for dis
[Collab Normal]

-Не пишу на русском,так как это коллаб(жалко)
00:43:255 (4) - I would have done so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525355
00:44:283 - make circle(in rythm maybe)
00:47:369 (1) - maybe Finish https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525387
00:52:855 (1) - Drum-Finish? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525393
00:55:598 (1) - Finish?
00:57:655 (6) - Clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525427
00:58:341 (1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525439
01:01:426 (2) - Clap?
01:01:769 (4) - Clap? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525397
01:03:141 (6) - Clap(всё в клапе XD)
01:09:312 (1) - Finish and Clap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525507
01:10:684 (3) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525521
01:11:712 (4) - Clap
01:14:112 (5) - Claps > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525529 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525535
01:17:541 (1) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525545
01:18:912 (3) - Clap
01:25:084 (5) - 1) Clap 2) Finish > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525561 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525569
01:30:569 (3) - Claps > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525585 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525593
01:31:255 (1) - Finish
01:36:741 (1) - Clap
01:41:541 (6) - Finish https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525605
01:44:626 (6) - Clap
01:50:455 (1) - Whistle
01:50:798 (2) - Whistle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525611 Well , hitsounding has been remade and it seems that the claps you pointed were right
-Может и не ахти хитсаунды звучат,зато тайко не будет однообразно+они подходят!(Посмотри в харде,там в начале Whstle's стоят,мб добавить?) <russian AlexaBM understand
[Hard]

00:51:484 - maybe make circle x:320 y:308 nah , it doesn't fit with the song and diff !
01:01:598 (2) - correct this slider https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525669 nah , it will affect all the pattern then oAo
01:08:626 (1,2,3,4) - maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2525681 Same reason huehue
for you star and...
Good Luck

Thanks a ton for modding and for star !

Secretpipe

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Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-15T21:01:49+00:00

Also , this need to be see about mapset :

Buttercup

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Joined May 2012

Buttercup 2015-01-16T06:14:42+00:00

Maeglwn wrote:
[Collab Normal]
01:40:169 (2,3,4) - same oh okay, feel uncomfortable, fixed

diff update

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - One Last Time.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47241
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 68626
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:One Last Time
TitleUnicode:One Last Time
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:Secretpipe
Version:Collab Normal
Source:
Tags:Drum And Bass dnb Asphyxia Nhawak AlexaBM
BeatmapID:595225
BeatmapSetID:219941

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2015-01-16T21:11:55+00:00

Collab Normal
0:46:341 (3,4) - might be confusing to press for new players
0:57:312 (5,6,7) - ^

Hard
0:46:426 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - might be confusing to read for new players
0:57:312 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^

Asphyxia's Insane
1:05:712 (6,7,8) - big jumps in one line is not the best in my opinion
1:07:255 (9,10,11,12) - make the sliders a bit bigger? idk

Insane
0:52:341 (7) - move it down a little i feel like its a little better
1:03:826(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont realy like how this pattern looks,,

other then that the patterns are ok you might will want to change some other ones but they are defenitly playable

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2015-01-16T21:57:44+00:00

Fookiezi wrote:
Asphyxia's Insane
1:05:712 (6,7,8) - big jumps in one line is not the best in my opinion Did you try it? It's definitely playable and it plays well, so I'll keep it as is
1:07:255 (9,10,11,12) - make the sliders a bit bigger? idk Do you mean the spacing? I added slightly more to it

Thanks for your mod!!

http://puu.sh/eBYYf/69c1630c58.txt <- Insane

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,568 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2015-01-19T14:20:21+00:00

cc toi :3 modmodmod tiiiiiiiiiiiiiimu
J'ai mod hors ligne j'espère que pas trop de trucs auront bougé.

- General :

Remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks for all diffs.

- Asphyxia's Insane :

Can't notify something wrong here...

- Insane :

01:42:226 (1,2,3,4) - You break flow here imo. You should move 01:42:740 (2,3,4) - to 424:200 to adjust it.

- Hard :

You have a lot of unused greenlines, check them (like 01:07:084 - )
01:21:655 (3,1) - Stack maybe ?
01:31:598 (2,3) - I think flow is really strange here. Why not just follow slider here ?
01:31:598 (2,1) - Broken blanket.
01:37:084 (2,3) - Pllsssss follow slider (01:37:769 (3) - at 4:160).
01:38:455 (2,4) - Dat stack
01:39:826 (6,7) - This one is ok because you give movement to follow next pattern. Ohwell do like you want with this pattern XD.

- Collab Normal :

SR of the lowest diff should be under 2*. It's 2.05* atm. Find a way to reduce it.
CS 3.5 seems a little too much for a Normal imo. 3.2 or 3 looks better.
00:57:312 (5,6,7) - This section is too much dense compared to the rest of the map. I recommand to change for 2 reverses sliders. It play smoother and follow music well.
01:08:969 (2,1) - Overlap.
01:26:798 (3) - For this one why not just follow the flow of the slider and move 01:27:141 (4) - to adjust DS ? Right now this movement is kinda strange imo and not natural at all.
01:29:883 (1,2,3,4) - In a higher diff why not, but in a Normal I think this kind of overlaps are really akward and I wonder if it's really readable by a new player imo. You should try something else for this part.
01:01:426 (2,3,4) - / 01:40:169 (2,3,4) - : I dunno but maybe triplet is too much for this diff. I would change them for one 1/2 slider and circle instead but, do what you want.

That's all I hope it's not too late.
GL mukyu~

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-22T18:51:48+00:00

Fookiezi wrote:
Hard
0:46:426 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - might be confusing to read for new players This is fine and it's not for new players cause it's an hard lol
0:57:312 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

Insane
0:52:341 (7) - move it down a little i feel like its a little better nah , it'll destroy the pattern !
1:03:826(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i dont realy like how this pattern looks I do D:

other then that the patterns are ok you might will want to change some other ones but they are defenitly playable

thanks for modding

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-22T19:02:07+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
cc toi :3 modmodmod tiiiiiiiiiiiiiimu
J'ai mod hors ligne j'espère que pas trop de trucs auront bougé. <3

- General :
Remove Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks for all diffs. done for all diffs :3

- Insane :
01:42:226 (1,2,3,4) - You break flow here imo. You should move 01:42:740 (2,3,4) - to 424:200 to adjust it. nah , otherwise , it'll break the blanket made with 01:41:884 (5) -

- Hard :
You have a lot of unused greenlines, check them (like 01:07:084 - ) it's not unused , it's for hitsound volume <3
01:21:655 (3,1) - Stack maybe ? nah , I made it for show that it's not a stack
01:31:598 (2,3) - I think flow is really strange here. Why not just follow slider here ? because it'l be weird with 01:32:626 (1) - then but I moved the circle <3
01:31:598 (2,1) - Broken blanket. fixed
01:37:084 (2,3) - Pllsssss follow slider (01:37:769 (3) - at 4:160). okayyyyy xD
01:38:455 (2,4) - Dat stack rly nigga? XD fixed!
01:39:826 (6,7) - This one is ok because you give movement to follow next pattern. Ohwell do like you want with this pattern XD. thanks ! Ill keep it as it is atm o3o

That's all I hope it's not too late.
GL mukyu~

ily bby <3<333<3<3

thx for modding !

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-01-22T22:36:52+00:00

strarru for moe o3o

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2015-01-24T17:49:34+00:00

increase the fucking sv in hard, you barely even move your cursor on 1/1 sliders.

no ty, i won't take denials.

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2015-01-24T18:17:57+00:00

@Fookiezi no changes. thanks!
@Nozhomi fxed first and 2nd suggestion. thank you!
@Nhawak try to remove some triples and 1/2 sliders, so star rating is below 2,0

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Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-24T18:31:24+00:00

Lally wrote:
strarru for moe o3o

Thanks a lot ♥

Lizzy wrote:
increase the fucking sv in hard, you barely even move your cursor on 1/1 sliders.

no ty, i won't take denials.

TOLD YA THAT I'M NOT SURE ;;;;;;

Buttercup

1,065 posts

Joined May 2012

Buttercup 2015-01-24T18:46:02+00:00

Nozhomi wrote:
- Collab Normal :
01:08:969 (2,1) - Overlap.
01:26:798 (3) - For this one why not just follow the flow of the slider and move 01:27:141 (4) - to adjust DS ? Right now this movement is kinda strange imo and not natural at all. okay
01:29:883 (1,2,3,4) - In a higher diff why not, but in a Normal I think this kind of overlaps are really akward and I wonder if it's really readable by a new player imo. You should try something else for this part. fixed
01:01:426 (2,3,4) - / 01:40:169 (2,3,4) - : I dunno but maybe triplet is too much for this diff. I would change them for one 1/2 slider and circle instead but, do what you want. not changed

That's all I hope it's not too late.
GL mukyu~

thanks <3

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AruOtta

1,296 posts

Joined May 2012

AruOtta 2015-01-24T19:59:30+00:00

Hey, let me recheck the map :3

[Collab Normal]

01:33:312 (5,2) - Try to make them parallel ?
Yeah it's useless, but it means this diff is perfect :3

[Hard]
Pour être honnête, la première fois que j'ai ouvert la diff je me suis dit "Oh non pas du CS5" alors qu'il est à 4 xD
Ça pourrait peut être rendre bien à 3.5 ou 3.7, c'est ce que j'aurais fait à ta place (mais après fait comme tu veux :3)

00:31:769 (3,4) - La distance snap entre ces deux sliders et trop élevée, je te conseille de rapprocher (4) *idée de pattern* :

SPOILER

00:45:998 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Les stacks dans ce pattern sont assez embêtant, c'est particulièrement dur d'identifier l'instant où jouer les circles la première fois =/ Je te conseille de changer un peu le pattern, voici un exemple que tu pourrais faire :

SPOILER

00:50:112 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (1,2) - Ce sont deux même patterns mais ils ont des hitsounds différent, c'est un peu étrange
00:57:655 (1,2,3,4) - Peut être tu pourrais envisager de les déstacker ?
( 01:01:084 (1,2) - Tu va nous faire des patterns à la Irre bientôt xD )
01:03:141 (1,2,3,4) - Ici le stack est moins gênant, c'est plus la distance snap qui l'est
01:15:141 (2,3) - Essaye de mettre la même distance snap que à 01:09:655 (2,3) pour rester cohérent
01:31:598 (2,3) - ^
01:38:455 (2,4) - Mal stacké

Y'a vraiment des patterns je me suis dit OH PUTAIN O.o
Ton mapping s'est vraiment amélioré, ça fait plaisir à voir <3

[Insane]
00:28:169 (1,2,3) - Essaye d'avoir une distance snap constante, ici on croirait qu'ils sont tout les 3 à un tick de distance =/ (envisage plutôt une distance similaire à 00:34:512 (3,4) entre (1,2))
00:40:512 (1) - J'ai l'impression que ce NC est décalé, tu devrais le placer plutôt à 00:39:141 (7) (ça fait beaucoup de vert sinon, et bon le vert, les légumes, tout ça tout ça...)
01:03:826 (1,2) - Ça fait bizarre d'avoir un stack là alors que les circles qui suivent ne sont pas stacked
01:11:798 (7,9) - Ces deux circles là sont overmappés, il faut les enlever (sinon unrankable bb) Et c'est pareil pour tout les pattenrs de ce genre (j'ai pas dit tout les 1/4 du kiai hein :>)
01:43:598 (7) - NC oublié ici je crois
01:49:084 (5) - ^

[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:28:169 (1,2) - This seems like 1/1 beat of distance, I suggest to decrease the distance snap
00:34:855 - Maybe you could play this beat ? It seems a bit empty at this moment =/
00:43:084 - ^
01:42:569 (2,2) - I don't understand these rythms... It should be 1/2 sliders I think... That's just weird

Très belle map, elle à le potentiel pour être ranked (mis à part quelques petites fautes, c'est globalement excellent)
Call me back <3

Asphyxia

osu! Alumni

1,986 posts

Joined June 2012

Asphyxia 2015-01-24T20:43:42+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:28:169 (1,2) - This seems like 1/1 beat of distance, I suggest to decrease the distance snap Considering this is the hardest difficulty of the mapset, it's quite appropriate to keep such things. Moreover, the approach rate is high enough for players to judge if it's 1/2 or 1/1, so I keep it.
00:34:855 - Maybe you could play this beat ? It seems a bit empty at this moment =/
00:43:084 - ^ They're intentionally done, I'd like to leave them as they are because notes there wouldn't fit for me personally. (if you INSIST, I can try to come up with something but <.<)
01:42:569 (2,2) - I don't understand these rythms... It should be 1/2 sliders I think... That's just weird If you listen to the song, they fit somehow, but yeah I fixed it into something more consistent which also flows better!

Très belle map, elle à le potentiel pour être ranked (mis à part quelques petites fautes, c'est globalement excellent)
Call me back <3

Thanks a ton Kenterz! <3

Update --> http://puu.sh/eYkBV/057978c963.txt

Buttercup

1,065 posts

Joined May 2012

Buttercup 2015-01-24T20:51:10+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Hey, let me recheck the map :3

[Collab Normal]

01:33:312 (5,2) - Try to make them parallel ?
Yeah it's useless, but it means this diff is perfect :3 I have not left completely parallel, but the current way is good

thanks

diff update

osu file format v13

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Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-24T22:22:52+00:00

Hello Secretpipe! i wanted to mod this but i guess i'm late x_x

General

* Your background has really weird dimensions. I highly recommend to find a 1366x768 background, or call someone to resize it for you.

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* 01:08:726 - Useless green line.
* 00:28:512 (2) - Add a whistle here on the head to keep your pattern.
* 00:47:026 - I personally think the drum sampleset (hitnormal, or clap) would fit quite well here on the slider end.
* 00:48:741 (2) - I'd also add a whistle here as well.
* If you agree with the above suggestion, try 00:54:226 (3) - as well.
* 00:56:969 (4) - There should really be a whistle on this note imo, because it's basically the same sound as 00:51:484 (4) -
* 00:57:484 - Sounds more like a clap to me o_o
* 00:58:855 (2) - I recommend you to also add a clap on this slider head, since you did add a clap on the red tick at 01:03:141 (5) -
* 01:12:055 (1,2,3,4) - Tweaking the placement can greatly improve the flow here.

* 01:13:426 (4) - Missing clap on the slider end?
* 01:20:626 (2,3,4) - Seeing that 01:31:598 (2,3,4) - is in one line, how about putting these in one line as well? Plays better imo.

* 01:31:255 (1) - Add a finish here as well? The cymbal is really clear and quite similar to 01:09:312 (1) -

Hard

* 00:47:455 - 00:50:541 - 00:52:941 - 00:56:112 - These green lines have no use at all in this diff, because the part between the current green line and the next one is completely empty.
* 00:25:426 (1) - Not an issue, but I noticed that you have you the additions set to 'Soft'. I was wondering that maybe you forgot to add something here, if not it's fine

* 00:42:741 (3,4) - This distance seems really large compared to the mapset, and with this direct straight movement from the top to the bottom of the map played a bit awkward for me. Reducing the distance to something like 2.0x and moving (4,5) a bit to the right makes this pattern a bit more smoother.

http://puu.sh/eYsSh/740c140b27.jpg

* 01:03:655 (4) - Optional, but I'd actually remove the note. Removing it should be fine, since this sound is noticeably softer than (1,2,3) - and after this combo you have a on-going single-tap with reverse sliders here and there which can a bit tricky - removing this note can create a small gap for players to rest.
* 01:04:341 (2) - No hitsound here? At least a clap should be here imo.
* 01:05:712 (2) - ^
* 01:23:026 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm... could you move this up a little? The slider end of (4) almost goes out of the playfield. This is not unrankable, but moving so close to the border of the playfield felt a bit uncomfortable to me ;w;
* 01:39:826 (6,7) - These are so close that they are almost touching each other, because of how large the curve of (6) is. This is different than similar rhythms in your mapset, and might not be that visually appealing. Consider increasing the distance here a just a tad?

* 01:33:312 (3) - 01:36:055 (3) - 01:40:855 (1) - etc.. (basically when you have that 4 times 1/2 slider pattern) Change to the drum sampleset on the slider end? The deep sound there deserves some love owo
* 01:43:941 (2,3) - Same thing about the spacing. This one feels a bit cramped as well - since it almost gets overlapped by the slider body.

Insane

* 00:46:512 - Useless green line.
* 01:28:169 (4,5,1) - This was a bit boring to be honest, sorry ;_; Consider making (3) a reverse slider. Even though the clap won't be clickable, I feel like it has a nice effect.

* 01:43:598 (7) - NC here to keep your NC-per-measure pattern? This combo feels a bit longer compared to the rest of the diff anyways.
* 01:49:084 (5) - ^
* 01:48:741 (4,5,6,7,8) - This was also a bit plain for me, sorry again ;__; Using some circles here and there makes would make this part much more interesting and you can show some more creative pattern(s) with this c:

My hitsounds suggestions from the Hard diff can also be applied on this diff (was too lazy to copy/check again ._.)

Asphyxia's diff looks fine to me.

Good luck o3o/

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-24T22:37:53+00:00

Kenterz wrote:
Hey, let me recheck the map :3

[Hard]
Pour être honnête, la première fois que j'ai ouvert la diff je me suis dit "Oh non pas du CS5" alors qu'il est à 4 xD
Ça pourrait peut être rendre bien à 3.5 ou 3.7, c'est ce que j'aurais fait à ta place (mais après fait comme tu veux :3) oui 3.5 est mieux ( et dire que j'critique le CS dans chacun de mes mods XDD)

00:31:769 (3,4) - La distance snap entre ces deux sliders et trop élevée, je te conseille de rapprocher (4) *idée de pattern* :
SPOILER
nah , cet "antijump" ou mini jump se joue très bien imo et ton pattern me semble bon mais brise le pattern fait avec 00:33:998 (1) - .
00:45:998 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Les stacks dans ce pattern sont assez embêtant, c'est particulièrement dur d'identifier l'instant où jouer les circles la première fois =/ Je te conseille de changer un peu le pattern, voici un exemple que tu pourrais faire :
SPOILER
Ca se joue très bien même si tu peux avoir un peu de mal au début.
00:50:112 (1,2) - 00:55:598 (1,2) - Ce sont deux même patterns mais ils ont des hitsounds différent, c'est un peu étrange fixed!
00:57:655 (1,2,3,4) - Peut être tu pourrais envisager de les déstacker ? naaah , ca se joue bien
( 01:01:084 (1,2) - Tu va nous faire des patterns à la Irre bientôt xD ) nah xD
01:03:141 (1,2,3,4) - Ici le stack est moins gênant, c'est plus la distance snap qui l'est Si je change, ca va pas etre consistent avec 01:03:826 (1) -
01:15:141 (2,3) - Essaye de mettre la même distance snap que à 01:09:655 (2,3) pour rester cohérent done ! et j'ai fait un triangle too !
01:31:598 (2,3) - ^ done
01:38:455 (2,4) - Mal stacké done

Y'a vraiment des patterns je me suis dit OH PUTAIN O.o
Ton mapping s'est vraiment amélioré, ça fait plaisir à voir <3 thanks <3

[Insane]
00:28:169 (1,2,3) - Essaye d'avoir une distance snap constante, ici on croirait qu'ils sont tout les 3 à un tick de distance =/ (envisage plutôt une distance similaire à 00:34:512 (3,4) entre (1,2)) Si je change 00:28:169 (1,2) - , ca brise le triangle , si je change 00:28:512 (2) - , ca brise le symmetrical avec 00:27:655 (7) - et sije change 00:29:026 (3) - , ca casse le blanket donc si je change un truc, ca nique tout mes patterns xD

00:40:512 (1) - J'ai l'impression que ce NC est décalé, tu devrais le placer plutôt à 00:39:141 (7) (ça fait beaucoup de vert sinon, et bon le vert, les légumes, tout ça tout ça...) done et oui ca fait bcp de légumes XD
01:03:826 (1,2) - Ça fait bizarre d'avoir un stack là alors que les circles qui suivent ne sont pas stacked oki je l'ai move mais je pleur :'(
01:11:798 (7,9) - Ces deux circles là sont overmappés, il faut les enlever (sinon unrankable bb) Et c'est pareil pour tout les pattenrs de ce genre (j'ai pas dit tout les 1/4 du kiai hein :>) nah , je me suis beaucoup inspiré de asphyxia sur ca et c'est pas unrankable vu que ca suit les drums
01:43:598 (7) - NC oublié ici je crois done
01:49:084 (5) - ^ done

Très belle map, elle à le potentiel pour être ranked (mis à part quelques petites fautes, c'est globalement excellent)
Call me back <3

I WANT CALL U BACK BUT A NEWW MOD APPEARED!

Pereira006

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Joined October 2010

Pereira006 2015-01-25T12:06:00+00:00

Let me know when this get bubble

Kurai

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Kurai 2015-01-25T15:33:36+00:00

Coucou mon amour !

→ 1366x768 bg

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2015-01-25T16:02:46+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
Hello Secretpipe! i wanted to mod this but i guess i'm late x_x that's fine ! thanks a ton !

:idea: General

* Your background has really weird dimensions. I highly recommend to find a 1366x768 background, or call someone to resize it for you. indeed, thanks for having noticed it !

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Alexa told me that I can fix for her. Also , there's one basic suggestion for nhawak s I guess I can fix for him!
* 01:08:726 - Useless green line. removed successfully.
* 00:28:512 (2) - Add a whistle here on the head to keep your pattern. done
* 00:47:026 - I personally think the drum sampleset (hitnormal, or clap) would fit quite well here on the slider end. done
* 00:48:741 (2) - I'd also add a whistle here as well. done
* If you agree with the above suggestion, try 00:54:226 (3) - as well. done
* 00:56:969 (4) - There should really be a whistle on this note imo, because it's basically the same sound as 00:51:484 (4) -
* 00:57:484 - Sounds more like a clap to me o_o done
* 00:58:855 (2) - I recommend you to also add a clap on this slider head, since you did add a clap on the red tick at 01:03:141 (5) - done and removed another clap !
* 01:12:055 (1,2,3,4) - Tweaking the placement can greatly improve the flow here. the flow is decent in your screen too! I adjusted a blanket though!
* 01:13:426 (4) - Missing clap on the slider end? there's one actually :O
* 01:20:626 (2,3,4) - Seeing that 01:31:598 (2,3,4) - is in one line, how about putting these in one line as well? Plays better imo. nah , don't want to change mapper's style here!
* 01:31:255 (1) - Add a finish here as well? The cymbal is really clear and quite similar to 01:09:312 (1) - yea nice catch

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* 00:47:455 - 00:50:541 - 00:52:941 - 00:56:112 - These green lines have no use at all in this diff, because the part between the current green line and the next one is completely empty. nice catch , I could have an unrank xD thanks <3
* 00:25:426 (1) - Not an issue, but I noticed that you have you the additions set to 'Soft'. I was wondering that maybe you forgot to add something here, if not it's fine there's already the big "BOOM" xD
* 00:42:741 (3,4) - This distance seems really large compared to the mapset, and with this direct straight movement from the top to the bottom of the map played a bit awkward for me. Reducing the distance to something like 2.0x and moving (4,5) a bit to the right makes this pattern a bit more smoother.
http://puu.sh/eYsSh/740c140b27.jpg
you're right , fxied!
* 01:03:655 (4) - Optional, but I'd actually remove the note. Removing it should be fine, since this sound is noticeably softer than (1,2,3) - and after this combo you have a on-going single-tap with reverse sliders here and there which can a bit tricky - removing this note can create a small gap for players to rest. THANKS A TON I MANAGED TO FIND A BETTER PATTERN ACTUALLY <3 and I removed the note !
* 01:04:341 (2) - No hitsound here? At least a clap should be here imo. yes
* 01:05:712 (2) - ^ yes²
* 01:23:026 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm... could you move this up a little? The slider end of (4) almost goes out of the playfield. This is not unrankable, but moving so close to the border of the playfield felt a bit uncomfortable to me ;w; done
* 01:39:826 (6,7) - These are so close that they are almost touching each other, because of how large the curve of (6) is. This is different than similar rhythms in your mapset, and might not be that visually appealing. Consider increasing the distance here a just a tad?
I just moved that note a bit further!
* 01:33:312 (3) - 01:36:055 (3) - 01:40:855 (1) - etc.. (basically when you have that 4 times 1/2 slider pattern) Change to the drum sampleset on the slider end? The deep sound there deserves some love owo done
* 01:43:941 (2,3) - Same thing about the spacing. This one feels a bit cramped as well - since it almost gets overlapped by the slider body. done

Insane

* 00:46:512 - Useless green line. done
* 01:28:169 (4,5,1) - This was a bit boring to be honest, sorry ;_; Consider making (3) a reverse slider. Even though the clap won't be clickable, I feel like it has a nice effect. much better indeed!
* 01:43:598 (7) - NC here to keep your NC-per-measure pattern? This combo feels a bit longer compared to the rest of the diff anyways. there's already a NC :O
* 01:49:084 (5) - ^ this too
* 01:48:741 (4,5,6,7,8) - This was also a bit plain for me, sorry again ;__; Using some circles here and there makes would make this part much more interesting and you can show some more creative pattern(s) with this c:
I love my pattern so I'd rather keep it <3

My hitsounds suggestions from the Hard diff can also be applied on this diff (was too lazy to copy/check again ._.)

Asphyxia's diff looks fine to me.

Good luck o3o/

THANKS A TON FOR GOOD AND USEFUL MOD <3

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