Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/evb8H/9e5821af04.osu
fixed some of hitsounds

Euny wrote:

• Thanks for modding my map!

• [Easy]
  
  00:14:033 (1) - 스핀끝나고 나오는 노트가 좀 빠른거같아서 지우는게 좋을거같아!
  
  빈공간 언니가 한번 짜봤어!
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  ▼ 이런식으로!

1. 00:12:802 (3) - 이걸 리버스로 만들고,
2. 00:14:956 (4) - 여기에 싱글노트 추가.
3. 00:15:264 (5) - 리버스슬라이더 추가.
4. 00:14:033 () - hitsound S:C5 추가.
5. 00:14:341 () - hitsound S:C4 추가.
6. 00:12:802 (3) - 슬라끝부분 hitsound S:C1 추가.
7. 00:14:956 (4) - clap 추가.
8. 00:15:264 (5) - 슬라 맨뒤 clap추가.
9. 00:16:495 (1) - 디스턴스 맞추기위해 살짝위로 변경!
10. 00:18:033 (2) - 이것도 디스턴스 맞추기위해 위치살짝 변경!

• [Normal]

1. 00:04:187 (1) - 스핀에 clap넣어보는것도 쨍한느낌주고 괜찮은거같아.
2. 00:20:341 (3) - 슬라 뒤에 휘슬제거.
3. 00:20:648 (4) - 슬라시작에 휘슬추가.
   ▲언닌 저 위 두 조합이 더 어울려보여서..
4. 00:39:879 (4) - 여기도 좀 패턴을 바꿔봤어. 그 전에 슬라슬라싱글노트 2번 있으니까, 이런식으로 의외성을 좀 줘보는것도 괜찮을거같아.
   
   SPOILER

   

Sonnyc wrote:

00:24:085 - 이쯤에서 비디오 깨져요. 비디오 인코딩 다시하셔야 할듯.

라우리어 난이도 맨 마지막에 무쓸모 타임라인들 삭제해주세요

Sonnyc wrote:

[Normal]
00:12:239 (3) - 00:21:162 (1) - 00:27:162 (3) - 간격

[Hyper]
00:54:700 (1,2,1) - 콤보 취향이라고 하셨었는데 하드랑 인세인 난이도는 다 감속 슬라이더에 뉴콤 해제되어있습니다. 난이도간 통일시켜주세요.

이거만 고치시면 버블 드릴게요

Sonnyc wrote:

black sheep wall

1. Spinners in the lower diffs need a lot more recovery time than what is given currently. In the easy, 00:13:777 (1,1) - the slider appears well before the spinner ends. In the normal, 00:03:931 (1,1,2) - appears before the spinner ends - with the multiple objects appearing here there might be a lot of confusion for newer players. In both cases, there is definitely not enough time between the spinners and the objects that follow.
2. The spinner usage in the easy is way more than needed. You would think that spinners will lower the difficulty since the note density is not high right? Well, in the case of the easy you use a lot of spinners which could be quite tiring for your average easy-level player. Keep that in mind, I highly recommend that you map out some of the rhythms. They are poorly placed for the most part. Try revising 00:03:931 (1) - , 00:23:623 (1) - , and 00:53:162 (1) - with either mapping or breaks.
3. The timing is kinda questionable. I found that bpm of 194.987 and an offset of 236 works rather well, although finding a second opinion would be recommended
4. Well, you don't have any combo colors set but that's not really much of an issue. Take this opportunity to set some if you'd like

1. Try OD7.5 or even OD8, with such high paced play a OD of 7 could cause some playability issues. Also this is an extra, you can take some liberties with the settings
2. 00:00:239 (1,2) - This plays a bit awkward since 1 looks like the next 1/2 slider. The quiet slider end doesn't help much either.
3. 00:14:546 (5,1) - Kind of an odd rhythm here especially with the clap hitsound you used at 00:14:546 (5) - 's slider end. Since there is a louder sound is on the slider end, there is a strange transition into 00:15:008 (1) - . I highly recommend that you change it to something like this, much more clear imo
   
4. 00:24:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Having this repeated circle pattern can be a bit hard to read with the changed rhythm. For players that play with non-transparent hitbursts, being able to play this pattern would be quite difficult. Try having the circles a little bit unstacked from eachother, or start an NC on 00:25:469 (4) - so it is more noticeable

1. 00:54:700 (1,2,3) - This pause followed by the movement of 2 into 3 can be a bit confusing. I suggest stacking it all on 3 for a clearer play
2. 01:05:085 (7,8,9,10,1) - Pretty hard pattern here, players can have their fingers fumbled with a hold on 01:04:854 (6) - followed by 1/4 circles and a movement to 01:05:315 (9,10,1) - . I highly recommend you revise this here
3. 01:14:931 (8,9,1) - Same issue as above, however here 01:14:931 (8,9) - kills the momentum so the jump to 01:15:162 (1) - becomes quite difficult. Try unstacking 8 and 9 a little bit and aim the flow upwards

1. 00:54:700 (1,2,3) - Same issue as I mentioned in the hyper

Lust wrote:

[Laurier's Extra]

1. Try OD7.5 or even OD8, with such high paced play a OD of 7 could cause some playability issues. Also this is an extra, you can take some liberties with the settings change to 8
2. 00:00:239 (1,2) - This plays a bit awkward since 1 looks like the next 1/2 slider. The quiet slider end doesn't help much either. fixed
3. 00:14:546 (5,1) - Kind of an odd rhythm here especially with the clap hitsound you used at 00:14:546 (5) - 's slider end. Since there is a louder sound is on the slider end, there is a strange transition into 00:15:008 (1) - . I highly recommend that you change it to something like this, much more clear imo
   sorry I don't think so.
4. 00:24:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Having this repeated circle pattern can be a bit hard to read with the changed rhythm. For players that play with non-transparent hitbursts, being able to play this pattern would be quite difficult. Try having the circles a little bit unstacked from eachother, or start an NC on 00:25:469 (4) - so it is more noticeable add NC

Lust wrote:

Hi my fiancee, sorry for this but I need to pop this bubble for the following reasons - some of which were pointed out already.

1. Spinners in the lower diffs need a lot more recovery time than what is given currently. In the easy, 00:13:777 (1,1) - the slider appears well before the spinner ends. In the normal, 00:03:931 (1,1,2) - appears before the spinner ends - with the multiple objects appearing here there might be a lot of confusion for newer players. In both cases, there is definitely not enough time between the spinners and the objects that follow.
2. The spinner usage in the easy is way more than needed. You would think that spinners will lower the difficulty since the note density is not high right? Well, in the case of the easy you use a lot of spinners which could be quite tiring for your average easy-level player. Keep that in mind, I highly recommend that you map out some of the rhythms. They are poorly placed for the most part. Try revising 00:03:931 (1) - , 00:23:623 (1) - , and 00:53:162 (1) - with either mapping or breaks.
3. The timing is kinda questionable. I found that bpm of 194.987 and an offset of 236 works rather well, although finding a second opinion would be recommended
4. Well, you don't have any combo colors set but that's not really much of an issue. Take this opportunity to set some if you'd like

/yay all Fixed

Additional Modding



[Hyper]

1. 00:54:700 (1,2,3) - This pause followed by the movement of 2 into 3 can be a bit confusing. I suggest stacking it all on 3 for a clearer play / No now is flow batter.
2. 01:05:085 (7,8,9,10,1) - Pretty hard pattern here, players can have their fingers fumbled with a hold on 01:04:854 (6) - followed by 1/4 circles and a movement to 01:05:315 (9,10,1) - . I highly recommend you revise this here / Fixed
3. 01:14:931 (8,9,1) - Same issue as above, however here 01:14:931 (8,9) - kills the momentum so the jump to 01:15:162 (1) - becomes quite difficult. Try unstacking 8 and 9 a little bit and aim the flow upwards / Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:54:700 (1,2,3) - Same issue as I mentioned in the hyper / Same Hyper

Lovely maps as always habi! Call me after you finish applying this mod and I'll rebubble, although I'd recommend maybe a mod or two after my own to clear off any rough edges. 9 days seems a bit fast eh?

Let me know if you need any help with applying anything

Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/eJqbJ/5c80212eb5.osu
change to 1/3

Rakuen wrote:

Referred the CD page: http://kancolle-anime.jp/goods/?page=cd

It says みいろ , so I guess title is Miiro

Also referred a database commonly used (not official tho): http://vgmdb.net/album/49585

Miiro is written there

Need a clarification where the source is actually referred to.

@Habi call me back after meta and Lust's reb, as you requested me recently

Rakuen wrote:

Referred the CD page: http://kancolle-anime.jp/goods/?page=cd

It says みいろ , so I guess title is Miiro

Also referred a database commonly used (not official tho): http://vgmdb.net/album/49585

Miiro is written there

Need a clarification where the source is actually referred to.

@Habi call me back after meta and Lust's reb, as you requested me recently

Lust wrote:

re-bubbled

No_Gu wrote:

[Easy]
00:14:389 (2,1) - this overlap makes a bad effect / I'm not bad
00:17:774 (2) - where the note places shows low sense,neither has vocal or strong beat.I suggest a rhythm like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2568649 / No
00:18:697 (1) - I would place a same rhythm like ^ / No
00:47:774 (4) - should place this 1/2 later if you want to follow the snare,or remove the clap / No
00:50:697 (1,2,3,4) - can you hear music more carefully then reset the hitsound?.. / why

[Normal]

00:24:851 (1) - the end snaps weird,better to stop at 00:25:877 (1/3) / not bad no

[Hard]

00:24:851 (1) - still feel strange weird,but it will go out of 1/1 if stop at 00:25:877.So I think two 1/3 sliders with arrow would work / not sure no
00:37:159 (3,5) - add NC / only (3) NC
00:42:082 (3,5) - ^ / ^
01:19:928 - why leave here empty? / this flow vocal. don't need this note

[Hyper]

00:00:082 (1,2,3) - discussed with Kibbleru and Garven,the span here should be 4 1/6+1 1/8.adding 1/8 will be hard to play,so a 1/6 slider here should work / (1),(2) note delete. so no stream this.
01:19:928 - why leave here empty? / same hard

[Insane]

00:00:082 (1,2,3) - same with Hyper / same hyper diff

Kibbleru wrote:

i was just looking through and found a few things worth mentioning while its popped

00:56:691 - ahh this part in the video is so kawaii =w=

hyper
00:29:697 (1) - may as well end this spinner 00:30:517 - ? / No.... this is flow vocal..
do the same for hard
i think some hitsounds are a bit off i wont mention all of them but i noticed these 2
00:11:389 - 00:13:851 - needs whistles / Sure
laurier's diff has nice hitsounds. so maybe check his for some reference.

insane
00:52:774 (6) - remove clap. add whistle / No.... this drum sound batter.. not vocal flow..
00:52:928 (7) - do the exact opposite ^ remove whistle add clap / same (^)