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AKINO from bless4 - MIIRO

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Lust
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Lust
Hey, just a few things I noticed on 0108's diff (really fun btw)

[0108's Extra]
  1. 00:14:064 (1,2,3,4) - The angle to hit this triplet is kind of awkward. The movement from 1 to 2 comes from the top to the bottom and back to the top again. I found more often times than not I slammed right into the middle of the triplet, which felt kinda odd. Maybe soften the angle of approach a bit? Finding a new spot for 1 works as well.
  2. 00:25:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Are these intended to be snapped like this? I hope not, they play kind of awkward as they are. Listen to it back on 25% and see where the sounds are in the music and map it accordingly. Would play a lot better imo
  3. 00:58:064 (9,10,11,12,1) - This pattern is really cool. I love playing it everytime! Good job with this
  4. 01:01:603 (4,6) - 6 is kind of hard to notice since it is obscured underneath 4's hitburst. The player's eyes are looking at 01:01:910 (5) - by the time 6 appears so there might be some confusion here
  5. 01:07:756 (1,2,3) - This up and down motion followed by a quick 1/4 slider into another one that flows in another direction is a little weird to play imo. I think you should maybe place 3 on the other side of 01:08:372 (1) - 's slider start so it flows a bit better
  6. 01:12:910 (10,11,12,1) - Just a little visual aspect that bugs me a bit, but maybe have this either more of a curve or perhaps a straight line? Would look better and maybe even play better as well
  7. 01:15:449 (4,1) - (Nazi) Try to avoid the overlap? Pretty miniscule, I am sure you can do something about it
  8. 01:29:526 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This is also pretty cool haha. Really creative!
Looked over the rest of the set, really nice diffs everyone! I am pretty interested in this mapset, call me whenever you guys think its ready to be moved forward (although don't rush into ranking haha).

Good luck!
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108

Lust wrote:

Hey, just a few things I noticed on 0108's diff (really fun btw)

[0108's Extra]
  1. 00:14:064 (1,2,3,4) - The angle to hit this triplet is kind of awkward. The movement from 1 to 2 comes from the top to the bottom and back to the top again. I found more often times than not I slammed right into the middle of the triplet, which felt kinda odd. Maybe soften the angle of approach a bit? Finding a new spot for 1 works as well.
  2. 00:25:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Are these intended to be snapped like this? I hope not, they play kind of awkward as they are. Listen to it back on 25% and see where the sounds are in the music and map it accordingly. Would play a lot better imo
  3. 00:58:064 (9,10,11,12,1) - This pattern is really cool. I love playing it everytime! Good job with this
  4. 01:01:603 (4,6) - 6 is kind of hard to notice since it is obscured underneath 4's hitburst. The player's eyes are looking at 01:01:910 (5) - by the time 6 appears so there might be some confusion here
  5. 01:07:756 (1,2,3) - This up and down motion followed by a quick 1/4 slider into another one that flows in another direction is a little weird to play imo. I think you should maybe place 3 on the other side of 01:08:372 (1) - 's slider start so it flows a bit better
  6. 01:12:910 (10,11,12,1) - Just a little visual aspect that bugs me a bit, but maybe have this either more of a curve or perhaps a straight line? Would look better and maybe even play better as well
  7. 01:15:449 (4,1) - (Nazi) Try to avoid the overlap? Pretty miniscule, I am sure you can do something about it
  8. 01:29:526 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - This is also pretty cool haha. Really creative!
Looked over the rest of the set, really nice diffs everyone! I am pretty interested in this mapset, call me whenever you guys think its ready to be moved forward (although don't rush into ranking haha).

Good luck!
some changed!!!
Thank you nasshy~ :)
http://puu.sh/ek9L5/9969784c83.osu
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
plz rank
star
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn
ルイさん
カレンさん
えりーさん
ErunamoJAZZ
Kawaiwkyik
bakabaka


Thank you a lot for giving me a star!!! :D
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai
できました！

http://puu.sh/enHGL.zip
hopperhtkn
317 posts
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Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

ShiraKai wrote:

できました！

http://puu.sh/enHGL.zip
Uploaded!!!
スライダーの使い方上手すぎ惚れた :roll:
T1Y
75 posts
Joined January 2013
T1Y
star :D
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ちょっと直すとこあるので少々お待ちを
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
修正
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Title:Miiro
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:hopperhtkn
Version:rui's Extra
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:Kantai Collection kancolle Combined Fleet Collection Opening Heanday pkhg ShiraKai HabiHolic val0108 rui caren_sk
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327,320,44680,2,0,L|330:352,2,32.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,328,44987,2,0,L|181:352,2,32.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,239,45295,2,0,L|84:237,2,32.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,116,45603,2,0,L|110:90,2,32.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,47,45910,2,0,L|239:15,2,32.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,99,46218,6,0,L|448:80,1,73.1250027894975,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,188,46526,2,0,P|476:219|465:265,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,328,46833,2,0,P|350:299|316:269,1,73.1250027894975
236,199,47141,2,0,P|214:229|187:253,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,312,47449,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,196,47603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,280,47756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,88,47910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,263,48064,2,0,P|340:229|349:194,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,32,48372,2,0,P|67:66|58:101,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,208,48680,6,0,P|29:236|70:269,1,73.1250027894975,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,356,48987,2,0,P|187:321|180:285,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,49295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,312,49449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,49603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,260,49756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,24,49910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,220,50064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,24,50218,2,0,P|252:40|212:56,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,50526,5,8,0:0:0:0:
218,127,50680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,199,50833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,304,50987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,340,51141,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,228,51295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,196,51449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,372,51603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,168,51756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,51910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,300,52064,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,116,52218,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,328,52372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,52526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,88,52680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,256,52833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,28,52987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,228,53141,2,0,P|463:235|420:240,1,73.1250027894975,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,156,53449,6,0,P|49:149|92:144,1,73.1250027894975,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,140,53680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,140,53756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,148,53833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,175,53910,1,10,0:0:0:0:
300,201,53987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,228,54064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,236,54141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,236,54218,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,214,54295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
511,175,54372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
502,126,54449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,91,54526,1,10,0:0:0:0:
423,78,54603,1,2,0:0:0:0:
379,91,54680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,91,55141,5,2,0:0:0:0:
351,103,55449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,263,55603,1,2,0:0:0:0:
327,263,55910,5,0,0:0:0:0:
327,263,56064,2,0,P|248:336|108:312,1,233.999992858887,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,56526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,72,56680,2,0,P|124:48|188:40,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,263,56987,2,0,P|271:287|207:295,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,57295,2,0,P|104:188|168:180,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,192,57603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,24,57756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,57910,2,0,P|220:196|244:256,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,58218,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,128,58372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,58449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,128,58526,6,0,P|296:77|184:72,1,175.499994644165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,58833,2,0,P|124:168|136:228,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,328,59141,2,0,P|255:293|197:273,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,360,59449,2,0,P|84:338|130:298,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,192,59756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,56,59910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,60064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,88,60218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,60372,2,0,P|384:48|452:64,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,124,60680,2,0,P|189:160|131:198,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,256,60987,5,4,0:0:0:0:
84,136,61141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,256,61295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,61449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,284,61603,2,0,P|400:304|476:312,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,136,61910,2,0,P|456:116|380:108,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,16,62218,2,0,P|202:61|264:106,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,176,62526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,62680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,344,62833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
126,346,62909,1,2,0:0:0:0:
78,314,62986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
59,260,63063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,205,63140,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,100,63295,5,12,0:0:0:0:
364,124,63449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,168,63603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,192,63756,2,0,P|336:204|272:220,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,240,64064,2,0,P|52:248|120:268,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,263,64372,5,12,0:0:0:0:
218,360,64526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,192,64680,2,0,P|337:209|274:227,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,344,64987,2,0,P|70:311|118:259,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,28,65295,2,0,P|184:85|188:144,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,65526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,256,65603,1,10,0:0:0:0:
186,310,65680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,344,65756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,347,65833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,320,65910,6,0,P|368:272|360:204,1,116.999996429443,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,36,66218,2,0,P|216:93|188:144,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,224,66526,1,2,0:0:0:0:
8,100,66680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,280,66833,2,0,P|172:308|248:308,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,348,67141,2,0,P|374:295|336:230,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,67449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,164,67603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,67756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,360,67910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,68064,2,0,P|304:200|320:136,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,88,68295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,36,68372,6,0,P|464:36|492:160,1,233.999992858887,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,68833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,272,68987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,324,69141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,360,69295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,192,69449,2,0,P|16:140|172:68,1,292.499991073609
204,108,69910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,124,70064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,80,70218,2,0,P|472:148|456:196,1,116.999996429443,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,248,70449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,292,70526,1,10,0:0:0:0:
268,352,70680,2,0,P|244:360|212:372,1,58.4999982147217,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,316,70833,6,0,P|216:296|272:280,1,116.999996429443,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,196,71141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,148,71295,2,0,P|468:108|429:65,1,116.999996429443,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,71603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,216,71756,2,0,P|210:292|268:352,1,175.499994644165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,72064,2,0,P|400:320|456:296,1,116.999996429443,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,164,72372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,40,72526,2,0,B|360:20|296:32|296:32|280:80|252:140,1,233.999992858887,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,72910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,228,72987,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,248,73064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,248,73141,5,12,0:0:0:0:
40,116,73295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,73449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,196,73603,2,0,P|72:180|144:156,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,28,73910,2,0,P|328:44|256:68,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,161,74218,5,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,74372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,248,74526,2,0,P|152:244|220:228,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,136,74833,2,0,P|438:141|381:154,1,116.999996429443,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,75141,2,0,P|235:89|185:120,1,116.999996429443,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,152,75372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
85,174,75449,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,332,75603,6,0,P|106:326|163:313,1,116.999996429443,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,280,75910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,76064,2,0,P|432:120|331:113,1,233.999992858887,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,76526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,124,76680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,256,76833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,333,76987,2,0,P|232:340|300:348,1,116.999996429443
432,176,77295,2,0,P|372:180|305:191,1,116.999996429443,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,84,77603,2,0,P|96:48|33:161,1,233.999992858887,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,292,78064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,78218,5,8,0:0:0:0:
340,336,78372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,288,78526,5,8,0:0:0:0:
370,252,78680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,228,78833,5,8,0:0:0:0:
415,174,78987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,180,79141,5,8,0:0:0:0:
504,99,79295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,99,79449,6,0,L|400:112,1,73.1250027894975,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,79756,2,0,L|416:245,1,73.1250027894975,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,80064,2,0,L|296:89,1,73.1250027894975,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,80372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,212,80526,6,0,L|176:180,1,233.999992858887,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,40,80987,6,0,P|136:60|204:84,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,116,81295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,48,81449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,81603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,32,81756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,200,81910,2,0,P|432:296|352:332,1,195,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,320,82372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,352,82526,2,0,P|52:304|68:244,1,97.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,82833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,24,82987,6,0,P|376:120|316:200,1,195,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,234,83449,2,0,P|173:244|220:260,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,332,83756,2,0,P|395:296|358:263,1,97.5
184,48,84064,2,0,P|192:88|224:156,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,84372,5,8,0:0:0:0:
448,244,84526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,84680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,348,84833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,28,85141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,356,85449,6,0,P|92:360|68:276,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,31,85910,2,0,P|118:79|100:124,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,86218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,86372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,348,86526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,128,86680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,364,86833,2,0,L|340:244,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,44,87141,2,0,P|184:87|204:154,1,97.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,87449,2,0,P|150:260|195:231,1,97.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,44,87756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,243,87910,6,0,L|472:196,1,48.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,164,88064,2,0,P|392:212|384:260,1,97.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,208,89833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,123,90218,2,0,P|283:143|261:176,1,48.75,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,252,90372,2,0,P|162:231|184:198,1,48.75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,44,90526,1,4,0:0:0:0:

hitsound見直しました。お手数おかけしますが更新お願いします
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

val0108 wrote:

ちょっと直すとこあるので少々お待ちを
了解しました！

Updated~
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn
Th1tyさん＆Gamuさん
Starありがとうございます！！
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
修正加えました
すみません、うｐｄお願いします。
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
http://puu.sh/ephwN/b500b28388.osu
少し直しました！（全部）
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

val0108 wrote:

http://puu.sh/ephwN/b500b28388.osu
少し直しました！（全部）
本当に全部変わってるとはｗｗ
OKです！
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn
I added 2 soft-whistle to this map.
Please use those hitsounds to your diff if you want! :)

Updated~
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
wow difficulties.. You're still missing a 2nd Easy though :(

Good luck with this set <3 Have a star.

Some stuff about Easy.

A lot of overlapping, and it makes the map need some aesthetic fixes.

  1. First off. Try using CS 2.5. It fits this difficulty much better. 3 even would work.
  2. 00:04:372 (1,1) - Well this blanket is off. The end should be lower.
  3. 00:18:218 (2) - Could be balanced better. http://puu.sh/epphr.jpg
  4. 00:20:680 (2) - copy paste flip the above for this one.
  5. 00:28:987 (1) - I have to admit, this shape is a little strange. Maybe try something simple?
  6. 00:35:756 (4) - If you didn't swap to 2.5 CS, then you should nudge this off the previous slider so it doesn't overlap.
  7. 00:41:603 (2,3) - Blanket could be better honestly. Try using more nodes to help get the correct curve.
  8. 00:50:833 (4) - Because of 00:47:756 (3,1) - This circle feels a bit awkward to hit, maybe have it as a slider end, or just remove it all together?
  9. 00:55:141 (2) - Delete this slider? :P No really. The lead-in vocals are just meh to map to here and it gives a nice break for the Easy diff to prepare for the Kiai.
  10. 00:56:064 (1) - Too complicated for a beginner. It's best to have the whole sliderpath visible with a clear direction, and the way this is set up might cause newer players to not respond in time with their mouse.
  11. 01:15:141 (4) - Symmetry on this slider?
  12. 01:16:372 (2) - Optional, but maybe try to incorporate a blanket around the (3)? The straight edges from this note doesn't look that great going into the (3)
  13. 01:19:449 (2) - You should move this slider so it doesn't touch the edge of the previous note. Why not just make it blanket on the right side?
Annnnd yeah... I got bored I guess :3
Last edited by Lanturn , edited 1 time in total.
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

Lanturn wrote:

wow difficulties.. You're still missing a 2nd Easy though :(

Good luck with this set <3 Have a star.
Must I need to add 2nd Easy?
Otherwise I want to keep this mapset!

btw thank you star <3
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108

hopperhtkn wrote:

val0108 wrote:

http://puu.sh/ephwN/b500b28388.osu
少し直しました！（全部）
本当に全部変わってるとはｗｗ
OKです！
あざす！
結構ガチで作ったんでランクドよろしくっす^p^
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

hopperhtkn wrote:

Lanturn wrote:

wow difficulties.. You're still missing a 2nd Easy though :(

Good luck with this set <3 Have a star.
Must I need to add 2nd Easy?
Otherwise I want to keep this mapset!

btw thank you star <3
lol. I was joking. You're fine with the current set :P
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

Lanturn wrote:

lol. I was joking. You're fine with the current set :P

lol
Lanturn's Easy maybe? xD
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
good luck !!

IRC Proposal
18:13 caren_sk: 00:33:910 (1,2,3) -
18:13 caren_sk: ここ流れ左右逆のほうがいい
18:13 caren_sk: 00:33:295 (4,5,6,7) -
18:13 caren_sk: で上下左右ジャンプできたら
18:14 caren_sk: 00:33:910 (1) - で強調させるジャンプは
18:14 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507873
18:14 caren_sk: このあたりにとばして
18:14 hopperhtkn: マジかｗｗ
18:15 hopperhtkn: んー
18:15 hopperhtkn: やってみる！
18:15 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507877
18:15 caren_sk: 救い上げて連打に入りやすくするとか？
18:15 caren_sk: 後に差し支えない変更かと思う！
18:16 hopperhtkn: 00:34:218 (3,4) -
18:16 caren_sk: 細かいこというと連打は00:34:680 (3) - からになるかも
18:16 hopperhtkn: この連打の入りのほうが自然に感じるんだよねぇ
18:17 hopperhtkn: 確かに00:33:756 (7,1) - はちょっと違和感あるから
18:17 hopperhtkn: 変更したんだけど
18:17 hopperhtkn: *変更したいんだけど
18:18 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507885
18:18 hopperhtkn: 中々上手くいかないｗ
18:18 caren_sk: 色々音取り作ってみるね
18:19 caren_sk: 全部単発でもいけなくもない
18:20 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507893
18:20 caren_sk: 左右ジャンプに上下スライダーでスペーシングとって
18:20 caren_sk: 単発+三連打！
18:21 hopperhtkn: ちょっとスペーシング広すぎじゃない？
18:21 caren_sk: すごくCRN臭い
18:21 hopperhtkn: うんｗｗ
18:22 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507901
18:22 caren_sk: このぐらいかなｗ
18:22 hopperhtkn: 00:33:910 (1) - はどの方向に向いてる？
18:23 caren_sk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2507903
18:23 caren_sk: ↑いって↓いって
18:23 caren_sk: 単発して三連だ！

cut

18:30 caren_sk: http://puu.sh/eptLd/76796d1b52.jpg
18:30 caren_sk: http://puu.sh/eptM3/916ac5ea96.jpg
18:30 caren_sk: こんなのはどうでしょ
18:30 caren_sk: 連打要素のこしたアレンジです
18:31 hopperhtkn: あとで見てみるｗ！
18:31 caren_sk: りょ！
18:31 caren_sk: good luck !
18:32 hopperhtkn: いや
18:32 hopperhtkn: carenさんの譜面を！
18:32 caren_sk: んｗｗ
18:32 caren_sk: すみませんｗ！
18:33 hopperhtkn: ちょっと自分で
18:34 hopperhtkn: カレンさんの始めの提案をアレンジしたら
18:34 hopperhtkn: 良い感じになった！
18:34 caren_sk: おっみつかってよかったです！
18:34 hopperhtkn: アプデの時に確認してみて下さい！
18:35 caren_sk: かしこ！
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

Lanturn wrote:

wow difficulties.. You're still missing a 2nd Easy though :(

Good luck with this set <3 Have a star.

Some stuff about Easy.

A lot of overlapping, and it makes the map need some aesthetic fixes.

  1. First off. Try using CS 2.5. It fits this difficulty much better. 3 even would work. okay!
  2. 00:04:372 (1,1) - Well this blanket is off. The end should be lower. Fixed
  3. 00:18:218 (2) - Could be balanced better. http://puu.sh/epphr.jpg Fixed
  4. 00:20:680 (2) - copy paste flip the above for this one. Fixed
  5. 00:28:987 (1) - I have to admit, this shape is a little strange. Maybe try something simple? Changed to the simple curve
  6. 00:35:756 (4) - If you didn't swap to 2.5 CS, then you should nudge this off the previous slider so it doesn't overlap. so I can keep it? :oops:
  7. 00:41:603 (2,3) - Blanket could be better honestly. Try using more nodes to help get the correct curve. Fixed
  8. 00:50:833 (4) - Because of 00:47:756 (3,1) - This circle feels a bit awkward to hit, maybe have it as a slider end, or just remove it all together? I keep it so I want to follow Drum sound
  9. 00:55:141 (2) - Delete this slider? :P No really. The lead-in vocals are just meh to map to here and it gives a nice break for the Easy diff to prepare for the Kiai. That's right, fixed
  10. 00:56:064 (1) - Too complicated for a beginner. It's best to have the whole sliderpath visible with a clear direction, and the way this is set up might cause newer players to not respond in time with their mouse. Dismounted to Slider and circle
  11. 01:15:141 (4) - Symmetry on this slider? Fixed
  12. 01:16:372 (2) - Optional, but maybe try to incorporate a blanket around the (3)? The straight edges from this note doesn't look that great going into the (3) Fixed
  13. 01:19:449 (2) - You should move this slider so it doesn't touch the edge of the previous note. Why not just make it blanket on the right side? Moved to the end of 01:17:603 (4) - I hope it makes more fun!
Annnnd yeah... I got bored I guess :3
Thaaank you!!! :)
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

hopperhtkn wrote:

lol
Lanturn's Easy maybe? xD
lol. This is gonna be one huge osu! standard set XD
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn
Added 0kb soft-sliderslide.wav and some default hitsound to the map!

Re DLing plz :)
Rumteen
25 posts
Joined August 2013
Rumteen
Suggestion: 0108 diff od8, and crn's extra od 8.5 x3

Good map set! GL
star
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn
All diff's AudioLeadIn changed to the same time!
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

Rumteen wrote:

Suggestion: 0108 diff od8, and crn's extra od 8.5 x3

Good map set! GL
star
Thank you for your suggestion and Star~!! :)
FrzR
2,237 posts
Joined October 2012
FrzR
Random Star =w=)/

Good luck. :D
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
Short advice
19:59 rui: Audio in少しでいいから設けてもらえないですかね？
19:59 rui: AudioLead in
19:59 rui: read
19:59 hopperhtkn: iyasineさんにその事聞いたんだけど
19:59 hopperhtkn: 遅れてる感じは無かったからデフォルトでいいんじゃないかって
20:00 rui: うむ
20:00 hopperhtkn: ミス
20:00 hopperhtkn: 早すぎる
20:00 rui: それExtraの話だよねたぶん
20:01 rui: 俺とCRNさんワンテンポ早めから配置してるから
20:02 hopperhtkn: 確かに３連打の出だしが少し早く感じますね・・
20:02 hopperhtkn: 分かりました
20:02 rui: ありがとう
20:04 rui: あ、あとこれ最初1/6で取るようにしたので
20:04 rui: http://puu.sh/exVkp.zip
20:04 rui: 更新お願いします
20:04 hopperhtkn: 全部2000に変えておきます！
20:04 rui: ありがとう
20:05 rui: AudioLead in直してないやごめんよ
20:05 hopperhtkn: その音取りにすると
20:05 hopperhtkn: 00:00:731 -
20:05 hopperhtkn: ここにも音必要になりませんか？
20:05 rui: だな
20:05 rui: 抜けてる
20:05 hopperhtkn: 後開始から1/6はちょっときついような
20:05 hopperhtkn: まぁやり直せば良い話だけどｗ
20:06 rui: (44,60)にadd noteかな
20:06 rui: そう思ったけど
20:07 rui: 違う音取るのはおかしくないっていわれちゃったからな
20:07 hopperhtkn: 00:00:577 - 00:00:628 - 00:00:680 - ここの３つの音だけ取るのはどうです？
20:08 hopperhtkn: それかリバーススライダーにするとか
20:08 rui: リバース安定かねやっぱり
20:08 rui: もう一回渡すわ
20:09 hopperhtkn: 指弱すぎて叩けないｗ
20:09 hopperhtkn: お願いします！
20:09 rui: fanzhenが普通においてたからいいかなと思ったけどリバースにしておこう
20:12 rui: http://puu.sh/exVYj.zip
20:13 hopperhtkn: リトキチする上でのストレスの元になりかねないのでそっちのほうがいいですね
20:13 hopperhtkn: 00:00:731 -
20:13 hopperhtkn: 最後の音にWhistle付けます？
20:14 rui: つけます
20:14 hopperhtkn: okです！
20:14 rui: ありがとう
20:27 rui: tokorodesa
20:27 rui: 00:51:756 (3) -
20:27 rui: これなんでリバースにしたの？
20:29 hopperhtkn: スペクト先の人がAIM辛そうにしてたので変えたんですけど
20:29 hopperhtkn: 元のほうが良いですかね？
20:30 rui: 個人的にはすごく違和感を覚える
20:32 rui: 00:51:141 (1,2,3) - と　00:52:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - で分けられると思うから　混ざるのは違和感なんだよね
20:32 rui: うまく言葉でいけないけど
20:33 rui: 間違えてる
20:33 rui: 00:52:064 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
20:33 rui: 後ろはこうだ
20:34 rui: (4)ってのは(3)のリバース終了場所に勝手に置いたnoteね
20:35 hopperhtkn: 自分でやってみても
20:35 hopperhtkn: 以前の配置の方が自然に思えたので
20:35 hopperhtkn: 大体元通りにしました！
20:36 rui: あと気になったのは00:57:910 (4) -
20:36 rui: と音取るなら
20:36 rui: 01:07:756 (1) -
20:37 rui: ここも同じようにとったほうがよくない？　配置が困るけど
20:40 hopperhtkn: 確かに違和感ありますね・・
20:40 hopperhtkn: 00:57:910 (4) -
20:40 hopperhtkn: こっちの方を
20:40 hopperhtkn: 後者の方と大体同じ音取りにしました
20:41 rui: それでいいと思う
20:41 hopperhtkn: すいません５分ほど離席します！
20:41 rui: はい
20:42 hopperhtkn: あpdしておきますね
20:42 rui: まあAuto見てて気になったのそれぐらいなんで　
20:43 rui: 特に他に言うことないです
20:47 hopperhtkn: 戻りましたー
20:48 rui: いいと思う
20:51 hopperhtkn: ありがとうございます！！
20:52 rui: いえいえ
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ hopper san & guests o.o/ リクエストありがとうございます :)

hit sound
[hit sound]
  1. Easy diff のsliderslideの音付けですが、無音のsoft-sliderslideとsoft-slidetickを重ねるのはたしかアウトです。
    それと最近ルールにsoft-sliderslideの音付け禁止が追加されたみたい(Tickはちょっとわかりません。)なので念のためBAT/QATを訪ねて確認をとってみてください。

Easy
[lEasy]
  1. 00:38:833 (3,4) - slider tail が被ってますので初心者さんの混乱を防ぐために隙間を作ってみるといいかもしれません。
Heanday
[Heanday's Normal]
  1. 00:04:372 - Audio volume -10% ?
  2. 00:36:833 (1,1) - hmm...plz add circle & slider xD
  3. 01:29:141 (1) - remove sliderslide whistle ?
Insane
[Insane]
  1. star rateは4.84と落ち着いていますが、体感的にHabiのinsaneより難しく感じました :o DisqualityでUnrankする可能性がありますので
    単発が連続しているところに1/2sliderを混ぜてみたり、スタック一拍置き(Habi diff 00:40:987 - 01:19:141 - 参照)やDistanceがx2.50を超えているところを少し縮めてみたりなどいかがでしょうか。変更をオススメするポイントを下にまとめておきます。
  2. 00:04:526 ~ 00:06:372 - 単音ですしすべてサークルでフィットしてます・・・がやはり難しいです、1~2つ1/2slider & Reverseを混ぜてみては？
  3. 00:17:141 ~ 00:18:987 - ^
  4. 00:22:218 ~ 00:23:910 - ^
  5. 00:35:603 - BPM190超えでSV x1.50はたぶんBATの方に指摘されるかもしれません。
  6. 00:27:141 (4) - 飛びすぎかなと思います。画面左下が空いてますので、その空間に配置して次の00:27:603 (1) - へ展開してみてはいかがでしょう。
  7. 01:19:449 (1) - 上と同様です。(1)を動かすとビジュアルが崩れるので手前の(5)のサークルを動かしてみては？
Extra
[Extra]
  1. 00:25:449 - slider end のvolumeは最低20%が望ましいです。自分も10%をよく使用していましたが最近スタッフの方に指摘されました :?
    他の箇所は省きますね。
  2. 00:55:910 (1) - remove NC ? Kiai startの00:56:064 - ここからNew colorにしたほうが合うと思います。
  3. 01:30:218 (1) - ここのNCの必要性はあまり感じられませんでした。
rui
[rui's Extra]
  1. 00:55:910 (1,2) - NC付け替えてみませんか？down beat + kiai time の頭に合わせて00:56:064 - ここからNew colorがベターだと思います。
  2. 00:04:372 (1,2,3,4) - 流れの提案。反時計回りから次の00:04:987 (1) - ここで急に時計回りになるので時計回りに統一してみてはいかがでしょう。
    ちょっと文章で説明するのが難しかったです :? codeを貼っておきますのでよかったらお試しください。
    [box=code]
    433,146,4372,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    488,280,4526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,254,4680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,146,4833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:30:526 (5) - アクセントにNCいかがでしょうか。
[/box]
0108
[0108's Extra]
  1. 00:06:218 - タイムライン上で緑線が2本重なってますので、volume10%のほうを消したほうがいいと思います。
  2. 01:30:526 (17) - アクセントにNCいかがでしょうか。
CRN
[CRN's Extra]
  1. hopperさんのdiffにも書きましたがslider endのvolumeは最低20%が望ましいので、+10%をオススメします。
  2. 00:11:603 (8) - 次の00:11:756 (1) - の始点までが若干窮屈に感じましたので(8)をx:256 y:288に移動してみてはいかがでしょう。hidden泣かせになっちゃいますが流れはこちらのほうが好みです。
  3. 00:35:910 (1) - 手前のSV x1.20 sliderでかなりAIMに勢いがつきますのでこの(1)はslider endから外して並べたほうがスムーズにstreamナゾれると思います。
    00:35:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - を全選択でx:173 y:247 に移動をお試しください。
  4. 00:55:910 (1,2) - るいさんのdiffでも言いましたがここはdown beat + kiai time startに合わせてNCを付け替えたほうがいいと思います。

おしまい(¦3[___]
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ hopper san & guests o.o/ リクエストありがとうございます :)

hit sound
[hit sound]
  1. Easy diff のsliderslideの音付けですが、無音のsoft-sliderslideとsoft-slidetickを重ねるのはたしかアウトです。
    それと最近ルールにsoft-sliderslideの音付け禁止が追加されたみたい(Tickはちょっとわかりません。)なので念のためBAT/QATを訪ねて確認をとってみてください。

Easy
[lEasy]
  1. 00:38:833 (3,4) - slider tail が被ってますので初心者さんの混乱を防ぐために隙間を作ってみるといいかもしれません。
Heanday
[Heanday's Normal]
  1. 00:04:372 - Audio volume -10% ?
  2. 00:36:833 (1,1) - hmm...plz add circle & slider xD
  3. 01:29:141 (1) - remove sliderslide whistle ?
Insane
[Insane]
  1. star rateは4.84と落ち着いていますが、体感的にHabiのinsaneより難しく感じました :o DisqualityでUnrankする可能性がありますので
    単発が連続しているところに1/2sliderを混ぜてみたり、スタック一拍置き(Habi diff 00:40:987 - 01:19:141 - 参照)やDistanceがx2.50を超えているところを少し縮めてみたりなどいかがでしょうか。変更をオススメするポイントを下にまとめておきます。
  2. 00:04:526 ~ 00:06:372 - 単音ですしすべてサークルでフィットしてます・・・がやはり難しいです、1~2つ1/2slider & Reverseを混ぜてみては？
  3. 00:17:141 ~ 00:18:987 - ^
  4. 00:22:218 ~ 00:23:910 - ^
  5. 00:35:603 - BPM190超えでSV x1.50はたぶんBATの方に指摘されるかもしれません。
  6. 00:27:141 (4) - 飛びすぎかなと思います。画面左下が空いてますので、その空間に配置して次の00:27:603 (1) - へ展開してみてはいかがでしょう。
  7. 01:19:449 (1) - 上と同様です。(1)を動かすとビジュアルが崩れるので手前の(5)のサークルを動かしてみては？
Extra
[Extra]
  1. 00:25:449 - slider end のvolumeは最低20%が望ましいです。自分も10%をよく使用していましたが最近スタッフの方に指摘されました :?
    他の箇所は省きますね。
  2. 00:55:910 (1) - remove NC ? Kiai startの00:56:064 - ここからNew colorにしたほうが合うと思います。
  3. 01:30:218 (1) - ここのNCの必要性はあまり感じられませんでした。
rui
[rui's Extra]
  1. 00:55:910 (1,2) - NC付け替えてみませんか？down beat + kiai time の頭に合わせて00:56:064 - ここからNew colorがベターだと思います。
  2. 00:04:372 (1,2,3,4) - 流れの提案。反時計回りから次の00:04:987 (1) - ここで急に時計回りになるので時計回りに統一してみてはいかがでしょう。
    ちょっと文章で説明するのが難しかったです :? codeを貼っておきますのでよかったらお試しください。
    433,146,4372,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    488,280,4526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,254,4680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,146,4833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:30:526 (5) - アクセントにNCいかがでしょうか。
0108
[0108's Extra]
  1. 00:06:218 - タイムライン上で緑線が2本重なってますので、volume10%のほうを消したほうがいいと思います。
  2. 01:30:526 (17) - アクセントにNCいかがでしょうか。
CRN
[CRN's Extra]
  1. hopperさんのdiffにも書きましたがslider endのvolumeは最低20%が望ましいので、+10%をオススメします。
  2. 00:11:603 (8) - 次の00:11:756 (1) - の始点までが若干窮屈に感じましたので(8)をx:256 y:288に移動してみてはいかがでしょう。hidden泣かせになっちゃいますが流れはこちらのほうが好みです。
  3. 00:35:910 (1) - 手前のSV x1.20 sliderでかなりAIMに勢いがつきますのでこの(1)はslider endから外して並べたほうがスムーズにstreamナゾれると思います。
    00:35:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - を全選択でx:173 y:247 に移動をお試しください。
  4. 00:55:910 (1,2) - るいさんのdiffでも言いましたがここはdown beat + kiai time startに合わせてNCを付け替えたほうがいいと思います。

おしまい(¦3[___]
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
sorry double post :o
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

iyasine wrote:

sorry double post :o
np xD
thx!!
caren_sk
782 posts
Joined October 2010
caren_sk
thx modding !!

座標までありがとう！全て修正かけました！

update.

iyasine's modding wrote:

CRN
[CRN's Extra]
  1. hopperさんのdiffにも書きましたがslider endのvolumeは最低20%が望ましいので、+10%をオススメします。
  2. 00:11:603 (8) - 次の00:11:756 (1) - の始点までが若干窮屈に感じましたので(8)をx:256 y:288に移動してみてはいかがでしょう。hidden泣かせになっちゃいますが流れはこちらのほうが好みです。
  3. 00:35:910 (1) - 手前のSV x1.20 sliderでかなりAIMに勢いがつきますのでこの(1)はslider endから外して並べたほうがスムーズにstreamナゾれると思います。
    00:35:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - を全選択でx:173 y:247 に移動をお試しください。
  4. 00:55:910 (1,2) - るいさんのdiffでも言いましたがここはdown beat + kiai time startに合わせてNCを付け替えたほうがいいと思います。
rui
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Joined February 2009
rui
:)

iyasine wrote:

hi~ hopper san & guests o.o/ リクエストありがとうございます :)

rui
[rui's Extra]
  1. 00:55:910 (1,2) - NC付け替えてみませんか？down beat + kiai time の頭に合わせて00:56:064 - ここからNew colorがベターだと思います。　入れ替えました
  2. 00:04:372 (1,2,3,4) - 流れの提案。反時計回りから次の00:04:987 (1) - ここで急に時計回りになるので時計回りに統一してみてはいかがでしょう。
    ちょっと文章で説明するのが難しかったです :? codeを貼っておきますのでよかったらお試しください。　そのままにします。流れが全く逆になるのは意図的です。00:04:987 (1) - で音のパターンが変わるので流れも全く変えてます。
    [box=code]
    433,146,4372,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    488,280,4526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,254,4680,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    433,146,4833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:30:526 (5) - アクセントにNCいかがでしょうか。　つけました


おしまい(¦3[___]
modありがとうございました :)

http://puu.sh/ey6HZ.zip
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

iyasine wrote:

hi~ hopper san & guests o.o/ リクエストありがとうございます :)

hit sound
[hit sound]
  1. Easy diff のsliderslideの音付けですが、無音のsoft-sliderslideとsoft-slidetickを重ねるのはたしかアウトです。
    それと最近ルールにsoft-sliderslideの音付け禁止が追加されたみたい(Tickはちょっとわかりません。)なので念のためBAT/QATを訪ねて確認をとってみてください。
    全てのsoft-sliderslideを削除しました。slidertickはひとまずKeepしてBATのチェックの時に見て貰おうと思います。

Easy
[lEasy]
  1. 00:38:833 (3,4) - slider tail が被ってますので初心者さんの混乱を防ぐために隙間を作ってみるといいかもしれません。
    了解です！
Insane
[Insane]
  1. star rateは4.84と落ち着いていますが、体感的にHabiのinsaneより難しく感じました :o DisqualityでUnrankする可能性がありますので
    単発が連続しているところに1/2sliderを混ぜてみたり、スタック一拍置き(Habi diff 00:40:987 - 01:19:141 - 参照)やDistanceがx2.50を超えているところを少し縮めてみたりなどいかがでしょうか。変更をオススメするポイントを下にまとめておきます。
  2. 00:04:526 ~ 00:06:372 - 単音ですしすべてサークルでフィットしてます・・・がやはり難しいです、1~2つ1/2slider & Reverseを混ぜてみては？
  3. 00:17:141 ~ 00:18:987 - ^
  4. 00:22:218 ~ 00:23:910 - ^
    All changed
  5. 00:35:603 - BPM190超えでSV x1.50はたぶんBATの方に指摘されるかもしれません。SV x1.40にしました（いいのかな）
  6. 00:27:141 (4) - 飛びすぎかなと思います。画面左下が空いてますので、その空間に配置して次の00:27:603 (1) - へ展開してみてはいかがでしょう。
    いい配置が思いつかなかったので00:26:526 (1,2,3) - のDSを見直し、スペーシングを狭めました。
  7. 01:19:449 (1) - 上と同様です。(1)を動かすとビジュアルが崩れるので手前の(5)のサークルを動かしてみては？ 上と同様にスペーシングを変化させました。
Extra
[Extra]
  1. 00:25:449 - slider end のvolumeは最低20%が望ましいです。自分も10%をよく使用していましたが最近スタッフの方に指摘されました :?
    他の箇所は省きますね。Fixed
  2. 00:55:910 (1) - remove NC ? Kiai startの00:56:064 - ここからNew colorにしたほうが合うと思います。Fixed
  3. 01:30:218 (1) - ここのNCの必要性はあまり感じられませんでした。Fixed

おしまい(¦3[___]
ありがとうございました！
Have a good sleep ;)
Linkingg
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Linkingg
It´s good.
Aprove this please.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Hey hopperhtkn.. Sorry I'm so late. I just randomly decided to take two days off from the game for no reason.

Lanturn's Easy (That's actually an Easy rated diff!)
http://puu.sh/ezgqt.osu

Right Click+Save as :)

-Edit-

I'm not the best with offsets but hopefully it's close enough.
TV Size Mp3: http://puu.sh/ezxYX.mp3 (Offset is about 202. -478 from what you have)
Opening Video: http://puu.sh/ezy2v.avi (Offset is about -500 for viewing. (meaning it adapts changes to the beat))

Here's my diff with the above changes.
http://puu.sh/ezBpR.osu



I swear right where the spinner ends on all the diffs, the drums that are playing make the transition so awkward XD
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
hopperhtkn

Lanturn wrote:

Hey hopperhtkn.. Sorry I'm so late. I just randomly decided to take two days off from the game for no reason.

Lanturn's Easy (That's actually an Easy rated diff!)
http://puu.sh/ezgqt.osu

Right Click+Save as :)

-Edit-

I'm not the best with offsets but hopefully it's close enough.
TV Size Mp3: http://puu.sh/ezxYX.mp3 (Offset is about 202. -478 from what you have)
Opening Video: http://puu.sh/ezy2v.avi (Offset is about -500 for viewing. (meaning it adapts changes to the beat))

Here's my diff with the above changes.
http://puu.sh/ezBpR.osu



I swear right where the spinner ends on all the diffs, the drums that are playing make the transition so awkward XD
Wooow!! Lanturn's Easy is really here!? We are the strongest Fleet in osu! rightly xD
Thank u!! :)

And thank you TV Size mp3 and Video, but I almost decided to keep using this short size mp3.
But if Guest mappers want this mp3 change to the TV Size ver, I'll change it.
Give me your opinion!
If it's nothing I'll keep it.
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
Change the mp3 if you want hopper, I dont care :P

@Lanturn: welcome to the party \:D/
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