1. 00:12:970 (4) - どうでもいいけど後ろのぎゅ～んｗみたいな音に合わせてSV変えてみるのもイイかも、どうでもいいけどｗ
2. 00:37:839 (1) - whistle for the whistle sound ?
3. 00:39:023 (2,3) - switching the whistle works better i guess because the piano sound at 00:39:220 is stronger?
4. 00:40:207 (1) - add a whistle on the head? for the piano + eeehhh because you've added on 00:40:799 (2) - it must be fitting here
5. 00:43:168 (4) - add whistle? like here, this is also higher than the prevous piano
6. 00:46:523 (1,2) - add whistle on both head, the reason is the same as I suggested ^
7. 00:48:102 (1) - whistle for pianoo
8. 00:52:049 (1) - only a whistle is kinda weak, does a normal finish not fit for you xD? or drum thing.
9. 00:59:056 (13) - ここもclapいれたほうが叩きやすいのでわｗこのclapの入れ方が自分には理由あるように見えないから、5連打みたいな音作ってくれた方がリズム取りやすい感ある
10. 01:19:779 - o_0 no kiai here? I wonder why there's in 2nd chorus and here isn't.
11. 01:30:931 (3) - finish here instead of on red tick works much cooler to me, well it's okay if the current one has a reason.
12. 02:10:207 (1,2,3) - 2010年大好きマンにはキツい（ＨＡＲＤＴＯＲＥＡＤ）
13. 02:24:220 (3) - you may put a soft finish here, it sounds better and the beat is probably in the song, listen to the song without samples and judge it there actually is or not.
14. 02:38:628 (1) - normal sampleset fits here with these normal samples and the normal finish
15. 02:49:681 (1,2,1,2) - 前にtwitterで言ってたやつ、完全に自分の好みだけど
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 03:11:293 (5) - where is a whistle w 03:12:872 (5) - too, or you just didn't want because no 2 triplets there
17. 03:16:128 (5) - here is also the cymbal sound with like the clap sound unless my ears are dead.
18. 03:19:286 (4,5,6) - I would rather use a 1/1 slider instead since you have followed rhythm for the guitars in the part and here suddenly has been changed on the piano. if you didn't like do something else like a 1/2 slider + a circle anyway.
19. 03:31:523 (9) - A clap to follow... somehow strange sound?
20. 03:32:510 (2) - feels kinda overmapping to put a circle because the piano there is too small. but whatever, I just prefer removed ver though.
21. 04:03:497 (1) - スライダーの後ろちょっとうるさくない？ volume下げたいけどとりあえずwhistleいらなさそうな雰囲気ある
22. 04:28:858 (2,3,4) - to be honest this pattern is hard to read as hell, 04:28:365 (9) - disturbs 04:28:858 (2) - to read when to start clicking this circle. to avoid it, I would reduce two reverses on 04:28:464 (1) - and then add a circle at 04:28:760 since the stronger beat which is 1/4 starts at 04:28:760 -, this is more reasonable I guess. 04:54:122 (2,3,4,5) - this too please, especially the stacks under 04:53:332 (6,7,8,9) - are like "eh what was that LOL" it feels like kind of out of place unless collab with skystar.
23. 05:05:470 (1) - このスライダーかわいいけどスライダーの後ろ部分の音がどう聞いても邪魔にしか聞こえない；サークルに変えて05:05:668 - ここからスピン始めた方が"自然"で自分は好きです。

Delis wrote:

Did not mod hitsounds for like 3 months so this should be a faggot mod pro

[■ General]
I don't think beating satellite (mapper01.png) during the bg is monochrome fits, I'm not really good at handling storyboards so this is up to you.

[■ Phantasm]
wow this ar though

1. 00:12:970 (4) - どうでもいいけど後ろのぎゅ～んｗみたいな音に合わせてSV変えてみるのもイイかも、どうでもいいけどｗ
2. 00:37:839 (1) - whistle for the whistle sound ? changed
3. 00:39:023 (2,3) - switching the whistle works better i guess because the piano sound at 00:39:220 is stronger? yes
4. 00:40:207 (1) - add a whistle on the head? for the piano + eeehhh because you've added on 00:40:799 (2) - it must be fitting here i add the end instead，cuz i dont want to use the same whistle in eeehhh
5. 00:43:168 (4) - add whistle? like here, this is also higher than the prevous piano add
6. 00:46:523 (1,2) - add whistle on both head, the reason is the same as I suggested ^ add
7. 00:48:102 (1) - whistle for pianoo add
8. 00:52:049 (1) - only a whistle is kinda weak, does a normal finish not fit for you xD? or drum thing. normal sampleset finish
9. 00:59:056 (13) - ここもclapいれたほうが叩きやすいのでわｗこのclapの入れ方が自分には理由あるように見えないから、5連打みたいな音作ってくれた方がリズム取りやすい感ある
10. 01:19:779 - o_0 no kiai here? I wonder why there's in 2nd chorus and here isn't. yeah，on purpose
11. 01:30:931 (3) - finish here instead of on red tick works much cooler to me, well it's okay if the current one has a reason. o.o already have finish
12. 02:10:207 (1,2,3) - 2010年大好きマンにはキツい（ＨＡＲＤＴＯＲＥＡＤ）
13. 02:24:220 (3) - you may put a soft finish here, it sounds better and the beat is probably in the song, listen to the song without samples and judge it there actually is or not. pretty right
14. 02:38:628 (1) - normal sampleset fits here with these normal samples and the normal finish changed
15. 02:49:681 (1,2,1,2) - 前にtwitterで言ってたやつ、完全に自分の好みだけど
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 03:11:293 (5) - where is a whistle w 03:12:872 (5) - too, or you just didn't want because no 2 triplets there omg，add
17. 03:16:128 (5) - here is also the cymbal sound with like the clap sound unless my ears are dead. right，also add a finish
18. 03:19:286 (4,5,6) - I would rather use a 1/1 slider instead since you have followed rhythm for the guitars in the part and here suddenly has been changed on the piano. if you didn't like do something else like a 1/2 slider + a circle anyway. changed 1/2 + circle
19. 03:31:523 (9) - A clap to follow... somehow strange sound? yes
20. 03:32:510 (2) - feels kinda overmapping to put a circle because the piano there is too small. but whatever, I just prefer removed ver though. not overmap imo，i remove this but here obvious have piano，so keep sorry
21. 04:03:497 (1) - スライダーの後ろちょっとうるさくない？ volume下げたいけどとりあえずwhistleいらなさそうな雰囲気ある
22. 04:28:858 (2,3,4) - to be honest this pattern is hard to read as hell, 04:28:365 (9) - disturbs 04:28:858 (2) - to read when to start clicking this circle. to avoid it, I would reduce two reverses on 04:28:464 (1) - and then add a circle at 04:28:760 since the stronger beat which is 1/4 starts at 04:28:760 -, this is more reasonable I guess. 04:54:122 (2,3,4,5) - this too please, especially the stacks under 04:53:332 (6,7,8,9) - are like "eh what was that LOL" it feels like kind of out of place unless collab with skystar. changed and adjust placement
23. 05:05:470 (1) - このスライダーかわいいけどスライダーの後ろ部分の音がどう聞いても邪魔にしか聞こえない；サークルに変えて05:05:668 - ここからスピン始めた方が"自然"で自分は好きです。

Hollow Wings wrote:

recheck

NO KD

General

1. remove "title\Thumbs.db" 卧槽这是什么神奇的东西。。fix

Phantasm

1. 02:06:260 (3,4) - actually like u did at 01:24:418 (1,2) - or 01:33:102 (5,6) - is better to me, but consider to the ds i recommed u just don't stack them and completely spread.
2. 04:25:799 (5,1) - too large this jump is, i highly recommend u try to shorter the ds here. like exchange 04:25:997 (1,2) - and rearrange series of jumps at 04:25:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - changed
3. 04:53:233 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1) - just stack them perfectly. fix

better to reply me the sb mod in the previous mod of mine already let examination check x.x

poke me later when u r ready.

Hollow Wings wrote:

recheck

NO KD

General

1. remove "title\Thumbs.db"

Phantasm

1. 02:06:260 (3,4) - actually like u did at 01:24:418 (1,2) - or 01:33:102 (5,6) - is better to me, but consider to the ds i recommed u just don't stack them and completely spread. Sorry Hollow Wings. I'll keep here Q.Q

better to reply me the sb mod in the previous mod of mine

poke me later when u r ready.

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/225293

Storyboard

1. have those square changing colors following bg's as well? like give same version in black and white or colored version of different part in this song. done
2. actually i think those lyric pics r hard to see clearly, thou idk u r tend to change them or not... maybe give those font bold and higher size. Sure~
3. remove lyric46.png, it's not used coz u spread that lyric into two images. deleted
4. remove the element "bg.jpg" in background layer, it's codeless. nope this code is aimed for hide the original BG and lower down the SB load by 1x, which is very useful. Also, it will make the real background black.
5. idk if it's acceptable but maybe shift ur "bg.jpg" and "bg_black.jpg" into png format. That's not necessary, jpg format will make the file small.

[notice]

Phantasm

good luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

bubbled #1

kakifly wrote:

i love this song
+support !

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Moved to pending forums.

Sellenite wrote:

senya god！

kakifly wrote:

Sellenite wrote:

senya god！

senya = 5 letters & 2 syllables
5 - 2 = 3
god = 3 letters
senya god is correct

scanter wrote:

I just ready for S rank on this

1. 02:38:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I personally like to add some jumps between 02:38:135 (3,4) - and 02:38:332 (5,6) - , it will look better, or formal curves should fit enough.
2. 02:43:365 (1) - clap can be removed
3. 03:53:233 (7) - whistle instead of finish here would fit more
4. 04:39:418 (9) - I guess you forgot NC here? or on purpose?
5. 05:02:707 (5) - whistle in the head

OniJAM wrote:

Just few suggestions here:

1. 02:38:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I personally like to add some jumps between 02:38:135 (3,4) - and 02:38:332 (5,6) - , it will look better, or formal curves should fit enough. 弄跳有些难。。其实这个我是试过这个是直线连打，不会出100，不是太打算放那种标准弯曲的那种stream
2. 04:39:418 (9) - I guess you forgot NC here? or on purpose? 本来我也是nc的，不过sakura提到我这里并没有变ds，就不用nc，不然可能迷惑玩家。我觉得可以，就保持到现在了

Some nazi things before we put it forward. Call me back~

OniJAM wrote:

Just few suggestions here:

1. 02:38:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I personally like to add some jumps between 02:38:135 (3,4) - and 02:38:332 (5,6) - , it will look better, or formal curves should fit enough.
2. 02:43:365 (1) - clap can be removed
3. 03:53:233 (7) - whistle instead of finish here would fit more
4. 04:39:418 (9) - I guess you forgot NC here? or on purpose?
5. 05:02:707 (5) - whistle in the head

Some nazi things before we put it forward. Call me back~

10nya wrote:

can't wait this map to get qualified! >v<

OniJAM wrote:

ok it looks fine to me

Bubble #2!

my bubble virgin :/

Ranking Criteria wrote:

There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images, so crop and resize them as much as possible. If there are particular reasons for apparently useless transparency, then please explain them. For transparent sprites, there should be at least one pixel of transparent border around them so that interpolation (e.g. a black-bordered image on a black background) works properly (although a shadow or glow around the image will fix this problem as well).

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file.

Xgor wrote:

Took a quick look at the SB and I noticed that widescreen support is set to on even if the background images is made only for 4:3.
I wouldn't call it a poppble offence (as there is no images falling of the screen.) buut it might be a good idea to fix before rank.
I let the next BAT that looks at it be the judge about that...

Also title\p21.png and title\p22.png has very minor amounts of unused transparency so it's no big deal.