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BanYa - Moonlight

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fartownik
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Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 stycznia 2010 at 16:25:19

Artist: BanYa
Title: Moonlight
Source: Pump It Up: Zero
Tags: Bassmaster
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2583kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bassmaster's Easy (1,68 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Hard (4,82 stars, 413 notes)
  3. Normal (4,37 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Streammania (5 stars, 473 notes)
Download: BanYa - Moonlight
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd BanYa beatmap. This time [Streammania] is easier a bit, but [Hard] is more challenging.
Moved to pending, ready for mods.
Added 2x Speed warning.
Last edited by fartownik , edited 22 times in total.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Streammania]
00:00:48(2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move a little down?
00:05:31(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Yes!!! This is good stream combo XD [No issue on this stream]
00:21:65(2,3,4) - Distance issue.
00:49:15(5) - [Opinion] If I were, I aligned with (4)'s end or make [(4)'s end,(5),(6)'s start] into line pattern.
00:54:15(3) - How about move 1 grid up?

Good PIU song :3
And good luck for you XD

Here's my star :3
ps. No kudosu for this reply plz :3...
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
My diff.

Download: BanYa - Moonlight (fartownik) [Bassmaster's Easy].osu
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
/me starować this pierdolona mapa kurwa mać XD
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Bassmaster's Easy
00:04:151 (2) - move it 1-2 squares left
00:15:484 (2,4) - soft clap here and on the slider's end

Normal
00:28:818 (4,5) - ...soft whistles?
00:31:485 (5,6) - ^
00:51:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pretty strange... fix spacing or set new combos (like on 3rd)
00:56:151 (5) - new combo
01:01:485 (1,2) - move them 1-2 squares left

Hard
00:05:485 (1) - remove finish from here

Streammania
... That was awesome!

Your smart usage of new combos and spacing grants you another star!
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik

Lokamp wrote:

Bassmaster's Easy
00:04:151 (2) - move it 1-2 squares left - Done.
00:15:484 (2,4) - soft clap here and on the slider's end - Done.

Normal
00:28:818 (4,5) - ...soft whistles? - Done.
00:31:485 (5,6) - ^ - Done.
00:51:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pretty strange... fix spacing or set new combos (like on 3rd) - I don't see anything strange in this part.
00:56:151 (5) - new combo - Done.
01:01:485 (1,2) - move them 1-2 squares left - Done.

Hard
00:05:485 (1) - remove finish from here - Nope.

Streammania
... That was awesome!

Your smart usage of new combos and spacing grants you another star!
Thanks for modding.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
WITAJ!!!

[General]
1) Tags?
2) The Source must be a Pump It Up! ZERO

[Bassmaster's Easy]
00:09:151 (x) - Add note here with finish hitsound
00:11:818 (x) - ^

[Normal]
01:11:651 (5,6) - Remove whistle hitsound and add the finish hitsound
01:14:318 (5,6) - ^
01:16:985 (5,6) - ^
01:38:985 (1) - Silence this spinner

[Hard]
00:52:818 (7) - Offscreen (end of slider)
01:08:318 (3) - Move 1 grid down
01:08:985 (3) - ^

I REALLY LOVE THIS SONG!!!!
STAR
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~ >.<

[Basssmaster's Easy]
01:01:485 (1) lol~~ I think this part is place spinner..

[Normal]
01:35:485 (1) Undo new combo?


Another diff is good~ >w<

Starred~~
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
How can Banya songs be always so cool!~

Overall
Add "Bassmaster" to the tags, please.

Normal
00:44:651(1,2) - Switch New combo?
00:47:318(1,2) - ^
01:00:151(1) - Doesn't really like this New Combo...

Hard
00:40:151(5) - New combo?
01:40:151(x) - Forgot to end the kiai on this diff. Fix it please.

Streamania and Bassmater's Easy
No problems found.

Damn, this map is so good~
Star!

Edit:
My star was feeling lonely, so I gave her a purple friend~ :3
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

How can Banya songs be always so cool!~

Overall
Add "Bassmaster" to the tags, please.

Normal
00:44:651(1,2) - Switch New combo?
00:47:318(1,2) - ^
01:00:151(1) - Doesn't really like this New Combo...

Hard
00:40:151(5) - New combo?
01:40:151(x) - Forgot to end the kiai on this diff. Fix it please.

Streamania and Bassmater's Easy
No problems found.

Damn, this map is so good~
Star!

Edit:
My star was feeling lonely, so I gave her a purple friend~ :3
Fixed, thanks for modding and for the kudosu star :) I really appreciate that.
Detective Tuesday
233 posts
Here since the beginning
Detective Tuesday
Most of this checks out. Just 2 small placement fixes. (I think I was on grid level 2 when I did this).

Normal

1:23:485 (3 and 4) should be moved down one tick. There, beautiful!

Hard

0:54:485 (4) should be raised one tick. Easy fix.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Detective Tuesday, fixed. Thanks for modding.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

~ Set a preview point.
~ BG color to black.
~ Delete unused timing sections on all difficulties.

Bassmaster's Easy :

~ Remove unused timing sections.

00:22:818 (5) - New combo.
00:30:151 (2,3,4) - Confusing stack for an Easy, make all white ticks or reposition.
01:40:151 - End kiai here.

Normal:

00:52:318 (4,5) - Looks a little messy and confusing, reposition?
01:38:985 - Kiai on this spinner? There is on the other difficulties...

Hard:

~ Make sure to check for kiai explosion consistency, you may want to remove some kiai explosions before the kiai starts.

01:04:151 (1) - Unnecessary kiai explosion.

Streamania:

00:58:151 (5) - New combo.
00:58:485 (8) - ^
01:04:151 (1) - Random kiai explosion.

Too many kiai explosions are deemed unrankable so you might want to consider reducing some of them, make sure to check for kiai consistency between difficulties. Apart from that really nice maps, starred :D
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 135 (-17 from current). Way too late lol...

[General]
Preview Point pl0x.
The dark blue hitcircle is kind of blending in with the background, please change it.
Maybe lower hitsound volume a bit? The whistles can get really noisy at times.

[Easy]
Too many repeats? I dunno, repeats, although are just as easy as holding them, kinda is offshooting for new players. Maybe lessen a few stuff on red notes or something, but that's just me being sensitive on Easy's. (especially since some of these repeat spams are like, 1 white or red tick away from the last repetition and some new players might go blargh on these)
Also...

Larto wrote:

Overall: ARGH. DON'T PLACE TIMING SECTIONS THAT ONLY CHANGE THE SAMPLE SET OR THE VOLUME DIRECTLY ON NOTES. AT LEAST 1/4 BEFORE THEM.
Or at least 1/8.

[Normal]
I guess the standards for difficulty have been raised up a notch, huh...
01:04:151 (1) - couldn't see it at first, but w/e.

[Hard]
I somehow don't like some of the excessive Finishes on the first part.
Also, lower OD? That's pretty fast for a Hard :\
00:15:485 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing somehow suddenly increased as opposed to the distance from 1-2-3. It may be just my nazi but I really felt that my mouse suddenly sped up just to catch these.
01:25:818 (3) - kinda got covered by the orange 1 slider combining with the white 1 note, but w/e

[Streammania]
Consult someone else of their opinion on those sudden 2x sliders. I personally don't approve of them.
00:51:485 (3) - can't see where this slider went due to the previous notes :\
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik

Shulin wrote:

General:

~ Set a preview point. - Done.
~ BG color to black. - Done.
~ Delete unused timing sections on all difficulties. - Done.

Bassmaster's Easy :

~ Remove unused timing sections. - Done.

00:22:818 (5) - New combo. - Done.
00:30:151 (2,3,4) - Confusing stack for an Easy, make all white ticks or reposition. - Done.
01:40:151 - End kiai here. - Done.

Normal:

00:52:318 (4,5) - Looks a little messy and confusing, reposition? - Done.
01:38:985 - Kiai on this spinner? There is on the other difficulties... - Done.

Hard:

~ Make sure to check for kiai explosion consistency, you may want to remove some kiai explosions before the kiai starts.

01:04:151 (1) - Unnecessary kiai explosion. - Deleted.

Streamania:

00:58:151 (5) - New combo. - Done.
00:58:485 (8) - ^ - Done.
01:04:151 (1) - Random kiai explosion. - Deleted.

Too many kiai explosions are deemed unrankable so you might want to consider reducing some of them, make sure to check for kiai consistency between difficulties. Apart from that really nice maps, starred :D - 3 times before the general kiai section is probably rankable... I hope...

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 135 (-17 from current). Way too late lol... Eee... it sounds really weird. I won't change it at the moment.

[General]
Preview Point pl0x. - Done.
The dark blue hitcircle is kind of blending in with the background, please change it. - Done.
Maybe lower hitsound volume a bit? The whistles can get really noisy at times. - I think there are fine.

[Easy]
Too many repeats? I dunno, repeats, although are just as easy as holding them, kinda is offshooting for new players. Maybe lessen a few stuff on red notes or something, but that's just me being sensitive on Easy's. (especially since some of these repeat spams are like, 1 white or red tick away from the last repetition and some new players might go blargh on these) -
Also...

Larto wrote:

Overall: ARGH. DON'T PLACE TIMING SECTIONS THAT ONLY CHANGE THE SAMPLE SET OR THE VOLUME DIRECTLY ON NOTES. AT LEAST 1/4 BEFORE THEM.
Or at least 1/8.

[Normal]
I guess the standards for difficulty have been raised up a notch, huh...
01:04:151 (1) - couldn't see it at first, but w/e. - Nothing special...

[Hard]
I somehow don't like some of the excessive Finishes on the first part.
Also, lower OD? That's pretty fast for a Hard :\ Lowered by 1 tick.
00:15:485 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing somehow suddenly increased as opposed to the distance from 1-2-3. It may be just my nazi but I really felt that my mouse suddenly sped up just to catch these. Nothing special too... it's intuitive.
01:25:818 (3) - kinda got covered by the orange 1 slider combining with the white 1 note, but w/e. ^

[Streammania]
Consult someone else of their opinion on those sudden 2x sliders. I personally don't approve of them. - If really needed, I'll add the 2x speed warning in SB.
00:51:485 (3) - can't see where this slider went due to the previous notes :\ - Meh, it's intuitive too. It can't go anywhere else.
Thanks for modding, Shulin and Zekira.
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Modding~
  • [Bassmaster's Easy]
    Good, no prob

    [Normal]
    00:52:318 (4) Newcombo
    01:23:151 (2) Clap?

    [Hard]
    01:22:818 (3,4,5,6) Whistle

    [Streammania]
    00:43:985 (5) Make it curve more
    00:59:818 (x) Add note
What a stream~
Good map
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Applied some of your notices. Thanks for modding.
dkey
1,276 posts
Joined June 2009
dkey
Star~
Nakata Yuji
471 posts
Joined April 2009
Nakata Yuji
So, what can I expect from the mapper of Great Nano Desu?

Bassmaster's Easy:
Some of the sliders, such as
00:17:485 (1,2) -
can be really confusing to beginners.

This map is pretty difficult to read, at least for a beginner. I would recommend turning down the circle size; the circles overlap each other often, which almost feels like playing a map with that one mod whose name is one that I can't seem to place. Overall though, this is a nice map.

Normal:
00:52:318 (4) - Incorrectly placed.

Again, it's kind of hard to read, partially because it's so slow. I think that you should increase the overall difficulty by a few ticks, but otherwise, this is another good difficulty.

Hard:
This is a masterpiece. Kudos for this difficulty, it's fun and challenging, keep it the way it is.

Streammania:
Yet another good difficulty.


--------------------

I think you have some illegal usage of kiai time, where you use it only so the stream comes out, and not for the rest of the effect. I was told off on one of my other maps for it, so you may want to ask a BAT about it.

Overall, this is a good map. I like it, and I'm starring it too.
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
simplistiC
[Bassmaster's Easy]
00:07:485 (1,1) - Spacing. Maybe should move 00:09:485 (1) - more to the left
00:43:485 (1,1) - maybe make this symmetrical? make one a horizontal+vertical flip of the other?
01:05:485 (1,2) - make this symmetrical?

[Normal]
01:36:151 (1) - Add a finish to end of slider at 01:37:485?

[Hard]
Ok.

[Streammania]
Ok.

Cool map. Star~
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
don't put inherited timing sections on top of a note, unless is necessary or are used for kiai, put them half or one beat earlier, 'cuz if someone hit early ruin the effect

Bassmaster's Easy
00:02:151 (2,3) - wrong spacing
00:25:151 (5) - remove
00:30:651 (3) - wrong spacing
01:11:485 (3,4) - put a slider like here 01:14:152 (4)

Normal
00:30:985 (4) - wrong spacing
00:52:318 (4) - ^
01:17:818 (1) - start point at 01:18:151, end point the same
01:19:151 (2) - start point at 01:19:485, end point the same

Hard
01:17:651 - add note
01:17:985 - ^
01:18:985 - ^
01:19:318 - ^

Streammania
how about to put a break time, i know the song is short, but is full of streams >.<
use a SB warning for that change of velocity in the sliders
00:04:152 (6) - shorten half beat and repeat
00:04:568 (1) - remove
00:28:485 (8) - shorten half beat and repeat and 00:28:985 (9) - remove
00:31:151 (9) - ^
00:46:651 (4) - wrong spacing
00:47:318 (6) - new combo
01:10:151 - add note?
01:10:818 - ^
01:12:818 - ^
01:13:485 - ^
01:15:485 - ^
01:16:151 - ^

Star!
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik

Lissette wrote:

don't put inherited timing sections on top of a note, unless is necessary or are used for kiai, put them half or one beat earlier, 'cuz if someone hit early ruin the effect - Done.

Bassmaster's Easy
00:02:151 (2,3) - wrong spacing - Done.
00:25:151 (5) - remove - Done.
00:30:651 (3) - wrong spacing - Done.
01:11:485 (3,4) - put a slider like here 01:14:152 (4) - Done.

Normal
00:30:985 (4) - wrong spacing - Done.
00:52:318 (4) - ^ - Done.
01:17:818 (1) - start point at 01:18:151, end point the same - Done.
01:19:151 (2) - start point at 01:19:485, end point the same - Done.

Hard
01:17:651 - add note
01:17:985 - ^
01:18:985 - ^
01:19:318 - ^

- This is good as it is. No need to add any notes.

Streammania
how about to put a break time, i know the song is short, but is full of streams >.<
use a SB warning for that change of velocity in the sliders
00:04:152 (6) - shorten half beat and repeat - Nope, it's good as it is.
00:04:568 (1) - remove - Done.
00:28:485 (8) - shorten half beat and repeat and 00:28:985 (9) - remove - Nope, it's good as it is.
00:31:151 (9) - ^ - Nope, it's good as it is.
00:46:651 (4) - wrong spacing - - God... it's intuitive.
00:47:318 (6) - new combo - Done
01:10:151 - add note?
01:10:818 - ^
01:12:818 - ^
01:13:485 - ^
01:15:485 - ^
01:16:151 - ^

- Nope for adding notes.

Star!
I'll add 2x speed warning soon. Thanks for modding.
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
OMFG what a great map..

all diffis good, star o/ :arrow: :arrow: ranked gogo
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Man, this is one fun-as-hell map

  1. Offset: 144 (A little earlier than yours)
  2. Lower tickrate on all difficulties to 1? 2 sounds like a bit much to me
[BASSMASTER'S EASY]

Seems fine

[NORMAL]

Lookin' good

[HARD]

The 2x speed Storyboard in this difficulty appears in all the other difficulties too when it shouldn't. Set the 2x speed storyboard to "Diff. Specific" on hard, delete the .osb from the folder, and Full resubmit. That should fix it.

The map itself seems fine

[STREAMMANIA]

Streams goooooo

Map looks great

Nice map. Can't fault the map itself. Nice work.

Starred
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Stupid Bancho died, posting here.

[Easy]
Not that easy, some of these repeated sliders are placed in a way tht might be tough. Well, whatever, newbies ain't that stupid, I hope.
00:32:151 (1) - 1/2 shorter, +1 repeat.
01:19:151 (1,1) - lolspacing.

[Normal]
00:25:485 (1) - shorten by 1/1 and add slider at 00:26:818 (1)?
00:40:152 (1,2,3,4) - delete, add spinner/slider instead?
00:43:152 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I didn't like this part, doesnt fit the rhythm IMO.
00:51:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:32:151 (1,2), 01:34:818 (1,2) - whistles at the end do not fit.

[Hard]
01:11:818 (4), 01:14:485 (4), 01:17:152 (4) - GAAAAY.
01:17:735 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - THAT'S FUCKING CONFUSING D:

[Steammania]
RAAAAAGE
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
lol >_>

[All diffs]

hmm... select all the timing sections, except the first one (so select all the inherit timing sections) and put them 8ms back.
Kiai time will start correctly then

I really like the hitsounds in this mapset :)

[Easy]

00:00:144 (1,2,3) -
00:07:477 (1,1,1) -

these notes have a too high volume imo D:

[Streammania]

01:01:477 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - recheck the new combo settings here.


Contact me when you're finished.

Good now, Protobubbled!
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
On Normal, the source says "Pump It Up" while the others say "Pump It Up: Zero"
Add ": Zero" to the source in Normal please!

Easy~
01:08:143 (1) - Minor suggestion: Add a finish at the end of spinner.

Edit: Bubbled after fixes~
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
star ~ :)
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee

Lissette wrote:

don't put inherited timing sections on top of a note, unless is necessary or are used for kiai, put them half or one beat earlier, 'cuz if someone hit early ruin the effect.
I found that it wasn't really done. So sorry for the popping. Please manually move them 1/4 beat forward/backward to make the hitsound displayed better.

and meanwhile I suggest to remove the useless inhertited timing sections.

Edit: all right. Rebubbled.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
It's not a masterpiece, but still a very good map.

Ranked!
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
To me, it is a masterpiece. My favourite map of yours~ Please make more BanYa map~~ :3
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