[Hard]

nold_1702 wrote:

Hello,there are only a few problems.

[Hard]

This SL is unrankable , please use 0.5 SL as you did on [Minuet]

same applys on [Normal]

please call me back.

Alarido wrote:

\o/ eeeeeeeeeeeee \o/

Seu primeiro map Tarrasky (:

Só falta 1 Bat (:

^_^

Ranking Criteria wrote:

There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Popped because of Unused files.

- soft-hitnormal64.wav done
- soft-sliderslide64.wav done
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- soft-hitnormal50.wav done
- soft-sliderslide50.wav done
- soft-sliderslide67.wav done
- soft-sliderslide42.wav done
- soft-hitnormal67.wav done
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- soft-sliderslide59.wav done
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- soft-sliderslide41.wav done
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- soft-sliderslide81.wav done
- soft-sliderslide40.wav done


Please delete them, and call me back for a check.

1. 00:09:176 (1) - soft-hitnormal53.wav sounds abruptly cut off. If you're not using this sound anywhere else, consider making this tone longer and have it fade out. Otherwise, create a new copy of this sound with a longer tone.
2. 00:23:428 (1,2,3) - You're better off using a 2/4 or 3/4 long slider with decreased slider velocity to more accurately map this part, instead of adding circles where the music doesn't suggest to. This goes for all triples.

Cherry Blossom wrote:

you went offline, so i'll post the log and continue.

00:57 *Tarrasky is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/476048 Hasegawa Tomoki - Zetsubou no Minuet [Minuet]]
00:57 Tarrasky: fix ^^
00:58 Tarrasky: thanks <3
00:58 Cherry Blossom: ok lemme recheck it now, i have time
00:58 Tarrasky: ^^
00:58 Tarrasky: its 22:00 in here \o
00:58 Tarrasky: happy new year \o
00:59 Cherry Blossom: first
00:59 Cherry Blossom: it's nice to use 1 hitsound per object
00:59 Cherry Blossom: but, make it enough audible
00:59 Cherry Blossom: consider than under 25% is considered as inaudible
00:59 Cherry Blossom: increase volume.
00:59 Tarrasky: oh D;
00:59 Tarrasky: i can fix
00:59 Cherry Blossom: of hitsounds.
00:59 Tarrasky: ok, 25% in normal map and kiai 35% sounds nice?
01:00 Cherry Blossom: i recommend 35% normal, 45% kiai
01:00 Cherry Blossom: 35% sounds nice
01:02 Cherry Blossom: and, please
01:02 Cherry Blossom: don't use pure white combo color
01:02 Tarrasky: oh, agree
01:02 Cherry Blossom: use something like gray
01:03 Cherry Blossom: well let me check diffs now
01:03 Cherry Blossom: Normal :
01:03 Cherry Blossom: 00:28:178 (4) - NC
01:04 Tarrasky: k, let me look
01:04 Cherry Blossom: please, keep a consistent distance here, don't use different DS for Normal
01:05 Cherry Blossom: NC here too 01:26:178 (4) -
01:05 Tarrasky: k
01:06 Cherry Blossom: Hard :
01:08 Cherry Blossom: 00:39:928 (8,1) - this is quite overkill for a Hard player because there is a DS change here
01:08 Cherry Blossom: it should be better if you keep a consistent DS here

Hard

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  The diff gap between Normal and Hard is too large imo

1. 00:39:928 (8,1) - this is quite overkill for a Hard player because there is a DS change here i'm not sure about ;/
2. 00:42:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - the distance between the lastest objects is reallly large, and that's why the star rating is high, and that's why the gap between Normal and Hard is large, try to arrange this pattern to make it easier and fix the diff spread issue between this diff and Normal.
3. 01:32:928 (1,2,3) - i don't think it is a really good idea to make these circles distanced like this, make them overlapped. Because 1/4 120 BPM = 1/2 240 BPM (and if you want a reference with this BPM i can take FREEDMAN, Distorted Lovesong or Kokou no sousei...) and it is not REALLY handleable by hard players.

Minuet

1. 00:29:428 (8) - Remove NC to keep consistency.

Call me back.

those wrote:

Cute keysounding.
[Minuet]

1. 00:09:176 (1) - soft-hitnormal53.wav sounds abruptly cut off. If you're not using this sound anywhere else, consider making this tone longer and have it fade out. Otherwise, create a new copy of this sound with a longer tone. fix
2. 00:23:428 (1,2,3) - You're better off using a 2/4 or 3/4 long slider with decreased slider velocity to more accurately map this part, instead of adding circles where the music doesn't suggest to. This goes for all triples. i think sounds nice this triple cause the violoncelle pulls a faster rate

FaiVillager wrote:

ooops I'm here now

[Normal]
00:02:426 (2) - move to x392 y96
00:04:926 (7) - to y340
00:07:926 (4) - x312 y112
00:18:178 (1,1) - remove green lines like these cause they're not for this diff no need
00:38:178 (1) - 200,288,38178,6,0,P|144:232|152:168,1,143.999995605469,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:46:178 (1) - x396 y288 fix
01:14:178 (1,1) - for some sliders like these, I think u can change there slidertick vol to about 10%

[Hard]
00:23:428 (5) - 348,304,23428,2,0,P|384:272|400:244,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:34:178 (1) - x428 y360 fix

[Minuet]
pretty fine for me thanks ^^

Hope u good luck!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Rebubbled.

1. METADATA isn't confirmed, i'm downloading the CD, please wait for a while.
   Reference: http://www.starchild.co.jp/special/zetsubou2/story.html
   
   

   Source: 俗・さよなら絶望先生
   Tags: 'Zoku Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei', 'original soundtrack'

2. Delete the useless .osb

1. 00:27:178 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - i wonder why these are deviated from the y axis, 00:49:928 (6) - 00:53:428 (2,3,4) - too
2. 01:10:178 (1) - this is being intentionally unstacked right?

1. 00:39:278 - unsnapped green line
2. 00:43:678 (4) - as your map is clean and mainly symmetric, nazi is welcomed i guess, put this at 295,43 for a perfect stacking of slider tail and 00:42:678 (2) -
3. 00:45:178 (3) - Stack with 00:44:178 (1) -
4. 00:48:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do these look like being placed randomly? try this maybe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2439415 as tidy as 01:08:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

1. 01:25:178 (3,1,2) - slightly adjust positions for perfect symmetry of the circle

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. METADATA isn't confirmed, i'm downloading the CD, please wait for a while.
   Reference: http://www.starchild.co.jp/special/zetsubou2/story.html
   
   

   Source: 俗・さよなら絶望先生
   Tags: 'Zoku Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei', 'original soundtrack'

2. Delete the useless .osb

[Minuet]

1. 00:27:178 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - i wonder why these are deviated from the y axis, 00:49:928 (6) - 00:53:428 (2,3,4) - too
2. 01:10:178 (1) - this is being intentionally unstacked right?

[Hard]

1. 00:39:278 - unsnapped green line
2. 00:43:678 (4) - as your map is clean and mainly symmetric, nazi is welcomed i guess, put this at 295,43 for a perfect stacking of slider tail and 00:42:678 (2) -
3. 00:45:178 (3) - Stack with 00:44:178 (1) -
4. 00:48:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do these look like being placed randomly? try this maybe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2439415 as tidy as 01:08:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -

[Normal]

1. 01:25:178 (3,1,2) - slightly adjust positions for perfect symmetry of the circle