TKS wrote:

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:30:303 (1) - i feel this triplet is a bit weird to play. maybe 00:30:303 (1) - move to 00:30:754 - as a k for the chicken's voice? also if you want to keep triplet, dkd will get better sound totally. I'll go with k dk.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - K? it lacks the consistency with 00:35:717 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - . pitch is not the same but its really strong sound as with them. D also fits better. I want to make it different because of the sound, I'll try D.
3. 01:19:927 (3) - or 01:20:153 (1) - should be removed. this part is actually calm part. therefore, 4plet doesnt fit for the flow. Removed (1)
4. 01:27:145 (3,1) - same. same.

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:29:288 (1) - remove? this pattern is fine for me since bpm is too low but its really hard to catch the rhythm. im sure players get confused. Yup and it gets a better consistency with the next pattern this way.
2. 00:39:326 (1) - same as Futsuu. it needs finisher sound imo. D again
3. 00:49:476 (2,3) - 2 notes of triplet move to 00:49:363 - . i mean 00:49:363 - dd d d k here. sounds better for me. Yeah, it probably sounds better, but I want to keep a rhythm consistency and this is a bit too hard to play imo.
4. 00:56:694 (2,3) - same. same.
5. 01:04:138 (1,2) - k. d d doesnt fit because the pitch of chicken's voice is clearly higher than previous notes. Not sure if it really doesn't fit but I like how the pattern looks with k k and it sounds good too, so I'll follow your suggestion.
6. 01:07:747 (1,1) - same. ^
7. 01:17:897 - ~ 01:28:047 - no need triplet sound for the same reason as Futsuu. they are just not good for the flow of song. Fixed
8. 01:24:664 (1) - why is this slider shorter than 00:13:386 (1) - ? really plays weird even if its just intentional. Uuuh, that's because I had x0,75 SV and forgot to fix the slider. Fixed on Oni too.

[Oni]

1. 00:39:326 (1) - the same as others. D
2. 01:03:799 (3,1,1,1,2) - almost the same reason as Muzukashii. kddk k will get better imo. Fixed
3. 01:07:408 - same. kddkkkk or something? Yup
4. 01:20:040 (1) - 01:27:258 (1) - remove for the same reason as others. Removed.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[General]
wow no Kantan *cries*

[ Oni]
00:06:393 - I think there should be a note (preferably a don) here instead a slider end, this will make it consistent with the rest of the chicken sounds here, the slider wouldn't be bad as a 1/2 slider, but up to you if you decide to remove/change it because this. Replaced by a k and a d. Rip sliders. :'(


[ Muzukashii]
I'm a bit worried about the ddk and kkd patterns, but ddd or kkk just doesn't fit there nicely, so I think it's okay to keep them. Should be fine.
00:29:514 (2) - This note should be moved to 00:29:288 - so it follows the chicken better. Changed the whole pattern into k k kk d d dd to make it easy to play.
00:34:927 (1) - This should be on 00:34:814 - for the chicken and 00:35:040 (1) - could be changed as a kat as it has a higher tone than the next. Removed this note and 00:35:491 - instead.
00:38:311 (1,3) - ^Something similar.
00:41:920 (1) - and 00:42:258 (1) - ^
01:01:544 (2) - Remove to be consistent with 01:09:213 - ? To be consistent, I need to remove both triples. I removed both and the first d k of the pattern too, it's d k d k d now.

[ Futsuu]
00:05:717 - and 00:06:168 - add notes (kats) here, or do something like you did in 01:23:311 (2,1) - ? the way you have now feels a bit incomplete. Fixed with dk kk k.

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Mao wrote:

cute song