Chihara Minori - Paradise Lost (TV Size) · forum

Mei

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-27T04:22:36+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[General]
Looks fine!

[Easy]
The break is a little long and doesn't really belong at all. You don't need breaks in TV sizes.keep this since i think it fits(no obivious durm there) ~~andiamlazy~~
00:41:172 (1) - Use 1/1 repeat slider so you don't ignore the vocal at 00:41:536
00:55:354 (1) - ^ There are plenty of other long sliders so you don't need these to be long too.

[Hard]
01:03:172 (3) - This circular placement is a little easier to read.you are stacking the note? well i just follow the distance so i think it should be fine
SPOILER
01:09:536 (3) - Right angle flow is kind of awkward and the stack is confusing, maybe this is better.
SPOILER

[Insane]
Holy shit I want this one ranked, so easy for a 4.57 star song. I think I could FC this.
00:57:172 (3) - I'd replace this with two circles so you can have a keypress on the vocal at 00:57:354
01:02:627 (1,2) - Similar thing here, I don't like sliders ending on strong, important vocals like this. this is kind overmap for me..and the i think to emphasis the vocal here is not that necessary.Meanwhile i am gonna follow the rhythm 01:01:900 (1,2,3,4) - so not going to overmap there.
01:08:445 (1,2) - ^^
01:21:354 (6) - ctrl-G would play better.
Great, fun diff!

Really nice mapset. I hope you rank soon so I can play the insanes for pp! They're just the right difficulty for me xD

others fixed o/ than you xxdeathx

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-09-28T05:38:45+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[Pandiar's Insane]
00:05:172 (2,4) - Blanket would be neater.　OK ~
00:24:627 (5,6,7) - I know small spacing here fits the music, but this kind of overlapped spacing looks like 1/4. Increase the spacing so they don't overlap at least. increase the spacing
00:36:263 (1) - improve blanket; middle point is a bit close.OK ~
00:58:263 (1) - How about repeat 1/2 slider so you don't ignore vocals oops nice
01:02:900 (2) - Put circle at the end so you can have a keypress on the last vocal. i like current pattern ><
01:08:445 (1) - ^ Turn into 1/2 sliders followed by 2 circles; first circle for vocal and next circle for drum.^
01:14:263 (1) - The strong drum is on the blue 3/4 tick at 01:14:536 so please don't end slider there. Put circle or slider on 01:14:536 ^ (´・ω・｀)
01:20:082 (1) - ^ ^ (◞‸◟)

thank you for modding ~~ !

code

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 51718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Paradise Lost (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
Version:Pandiar's Insane
Source:喰霊-零-
Tags:ga rei zero opening frey pandiar oracle
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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-09-28T07:56:47+00:00

update! And i also changed audio lead-in

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-09-29T04:58:14+00:00

Being a freshman,lots of things have to do..
;_ ; very sorry for delay, let me reply ur mods one by one.

RandomEffect wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:17:900~00:40:809- I prefer to increase hitsound's volume a bit
Fixed Increase by 15%

00:59:718 (4,5) - check blanketting
Fixed

01:20:082- finish?
Fixed

lkx_Shore wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:02:991 (1) - Add a soft-finish at slider head?I think there is a few empty.
I think there is no stress in the music, and I don't think this part should add some hitsounds

00:07:900 (4) - Remove a whistle at slider tail and add a clap will be better,Now sound like a litter whistle spam.
00:10:809 (5) - Same the above.
00:13:718 (4) - Above~
Well,no offence, but I think it sounds a bit weird if I change it like that.

00:17:900 - The sound is too low imo,Try 60% volume.
Fixed increase to 50%

00:39:354 (4) - Why not try this?Add a circle at 00:40:445 - is so bad...Cuz you isn't follow durm and it is very weak imo.
img
Btw,Add a soft-finish at 00:39:718 -

Surely,your idea is pretty nice though, I prefer the flow before. BTW,I fixed the hitsound

I think you missed clap in these places.
00:41:172 (2) -
00:42:263 (1) - Slider tail
00:43:718 (3) - Same as above
Indeed I deleted these claps last update.I am on purpose to do it

00:50:991 (7) - Why not add a finish here?I feel the power from the sound.

Fixed

00:54:991 (5) - Add a finish at slider tail,Cuz ♂Power♂.
I disagree. It sounds a little disturbing

00:57:354 (2) - Suddenly whistle?In order to maintain the overall,You'd better remove it.
Fixed

01:01:172 (1) - I feel the power again,Add a finish at slider head.
01:06:627 (6) - SAme as above parts.
Same as above

01:08:991 (3) - Remove to maintain the overall?If you accept 00:57:354 (2) - point of view.
Fixed

01:12:809 (1) - Add a finish will be better.
I just think I actually don't like put too much finish hitsounds into this diff.

01:14:263 (3) - Why not add a whistle at slider head.
Fixed good point

01:20:082 (4) - Add a soft-finish at slider head,If you love it.
It sounds stange...

xxdeathx wrote:
[Normal]

00:39:900 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - The stacks are neat but it's too much and will confuse normal players. I highly recommend unstacking most of it.

To be honest, I love this part I made, give me some time to think about it seriously

00:56:809 (1,2) - Try to avoid 3/4 gap altogether:

01:02:627 (3,4) - ^
01:08:445 (2,3) - ^
If more people mention this,I would change it.......Hard to say,but,I cannot think about a idea that how to replace them in a nicer shape and a better flow.

Thanks for all guys ,and thank for taking time to mod my diff .

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-09-30T05:05:41+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
Mei~~~~~~~~~~
Pandiarさ～～～～～～ん
Oracle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~HEYYYYYY

YO

Oracle's Extra
00:00:082 (1) - add finish
00:05:536 (3) - add finish on head
01:15:354 (2) - add finish on tail

so hard ;w;
i like this diff's stream. so fun \:D/ Nice~~
Good Luck Chihara Meinori ~~~

ALL FIXED!!

Gaia wrote:
as requested~

大家都在用的藉口又出現了!!
好啦, 沒藉口我好像真的慢慢來了 orz
oshioki time T^T
onegai D:

[Oracle's Extra]
00:18:445 (3,1) - 個人覺得比較好看 http://puu.sh/bCheA/ab6e442e3b.jpg 喜欢现在的
00:25:354 (3) - 跟easy 一樣 http://puu.sh/bChjZ/22ec23a749.jpg 现在的就行啊
00:27:354 (3) - 我覺得不好看 owo D:
00:27:718 (1) - 改成 00:28:082 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一樣? 想强调开头的那个音
00:29:536 (2) - 跟上面一樣喜欢现在的
00:35:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不知道這節奏是在跟啥仔细听背景音
00:47:900 (1) - 00:48:627 (3) - 形狀不平衡 (凸出因該在中間) 故意的;w;
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 好像不是在跟vocal o_o 跟的是背景音
01:01:536 (2) - 這樣不好看 ): 好像好一點? http://puu.sh/bChVJ/b89913d4ab.jpg 或 http://puu.sh/bChT7/cd14f2b1fc.jpg 可是我觉得很好看orz
01:01:900 (1,2) - ^
01:03:354 (1) - 圓圈的形狀可以更好好！很有用的方法，学到了
你現在的
01:17:172 (1) - 01:18:627 (1) - 我覺得這裡不適合stream l: 是在配背景的那個小聲音嗎 o-o 对的

Good luuuck and haaave fuuuuun~~

谢谢来mod！！

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~ hi!!!

[Oracle's Extra]
00:33:536 (1,2) - exchange their positions tried but prefer mine
01:17:172~01:20:627- cool! thank you!
01:23:900 (2,3) - I prefer to increase DS more done!
almost good~☆
Meinori-chan <3
~Good Luck~

thank u for modding~

lkx_Shore wrote:
~~不要打我，我写得好长~~ 打你

From your req.

Oracle's Extra
00:00:082 (1,2,3,1) - After i listened the music,it feel like a group of 4. yes..i'm grouping them by the tune difference.
00:04:445 (1,2) - Too far imo,Make them close? okay
00:47:900 (1) - Em...Too ugly...
00:49:536 (1) - Why not change into soft-finish,I feel more comfortable. good idea
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - Isn't good rhythm...Only for harder?But there is a strong vocal here.Beats at vocal start will be better imo. i'm not following vocal here~
01:08:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. ^
01:11:354 (1,1,1) - Mute made me feel weird.Change soft-sampleset at slider is enough imo.i guess it's fine as is..

Other

Goodluck.

谢谢mod!!

xxdeathx wrote:
Hi, I decided to mod your map from my queue.

[Extra]
00:12:991 (6,1) - Why don't you improve the blanket like this: good
SPOILER
00:28:991 (9,1) - How about a bigger jump here to fit the music: there's a big crash since it's the start of a new measure and section. i think jump in the opposite direction is enough
00:51:718 (1) - I don't think this needs NC, it can go with the same combo as the previous objects. removed
01:02:627 (1) - This part is very strong, so it would fit music better to map a keypress on each note, like 01:14:263 (1,2,1) - instead of slider repeat or slider end. i liked how i hold the reverse slider here, sorry!
01:15:354 (2) - I don't think this slider fits the music here, and you don't want to ignore the vocals at 01:15:536 and 01:15:718 it's fine i'm following a different track
Really nice mapset. I hope you rank soon so I can play the insanes for pp! They're just the right difficulty for me xD

谢谢！

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-12T19:19:03+00:00

Where is the paARadise? ? ?? ? Lost pls call 1-800-338-9090

Oracle:
00:04:627 (2) - I will wire you $5 via PayPal if you can tell me with a straight face that people are hitting this and having a good time.
00:05:900 - Am i missing something here?
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - JESUS.
01:08:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - CHRIST.
01:16:082 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ok ill wire you another $5 if you can tell me what you're mapping to here.
01:24:991 (1,2,1) - THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT AND YOU ARE PASSING IT

Insane:
01:03:354 (1,2) - youre gonna win $5 too

Panda:
00:04:445 (9) - yeah just use hitnormals. apply this to the rest of the map too

Hard:
Ye

Normal:
ye

Easy:
ye

So tl;dr I like the entire mapset but jesus christ Oracle calm down like I'd like it if some high leveled players looked at the map and gave some more pointers

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-10-15T09:54:03+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Panda:
00:04:445 (9) - yeah just use hitnormals. apply this to the rest of the map too

i should do so?
if it is not Unrankble i want to no change
because i don't like normal sounds....

thank you for modding >w<

code

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 66536
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Paradise Lost (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
Version:Pandiar's Insane
Source:喰霊-零-
Tags:ga rei zero opening frey pandiar oracle
BeatmapID:496368
BeatmapSetID:204020

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HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-10-25T18:03:00+00:00

@cdfa
i reduced the spacing of the first sliders you mentioned.
about the stream...try to mod it with headphones =w=
i guess you're not plannin to recheck tho..

~~!summon Lust~~ they're busy at modding other maps so

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-12-06T07:11:54+00:00

Hi o/
Request from Oracle.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

雖然不知道你是不是故意的, 有些間距是1.2x, 又有些1.1x, 嘛..雖然沒說不可以, 建議是統一起來用一樣間距, 對newbie可能比較容易些, 畢竟這是給newbie們玩的, 間距不同可能造成一些判斷錯誤

nothing to say~

[Frey's Normal]

00:23:718 (2,4) - 不太建議這種circle遮擋於slider的尾巴梗出現在newbie的難度裡, 你還是想要用的話, 00:24:445 (4) - NC, 主要是因為顏色上的相同, 會產生讀圖上的不便
00:26:263 (1) - 在slider-end加個whistle? 在這裡弄成一個低-高-高-低的音, 感覺蠻適合這部分的音樂表達
01:02:627 (3) - NC? 同樣跟00:56:809 (1,2) - 一樣是3/4節奏, combo方式上卻不相同, 若是故意的, 我還是想建議你NC, 因為就只有這裡的節奏劇烈變化. 01:08:445 (2) - 同這
01:25:809 (1) - 若是這spinner是跟著vocal的話, 應該是01:26:445 - 開始吧?

~

[Hard]

00:55:718 (2,3) - 試試看這兩個分別獨自ctrl+G, 感覺上flow比較順暢
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal

~

[Pandiar's Insane]

just suggestion: HP is a little high for me, and it's also make 00:17:536 - ~ 00:28:445 - reduce the hit point, try to -0.5 or 1.0?
00:36:082 (6) - it's so close that would make player hesitate a moment beacuse all 1/2 notes have large distance, try to use 1.2x or bigger distance?
00:51:354 (2) - try to move to 88|12 or other farther place, it would make player hard to read due to the distance is a little like 00:50:627 (6,7) - . Though you use NC to avoid the error, it's still not enough
01:25:900 (1) - if the spinner follow the vocal, I think it should start at 01:25:809 -

~

[Insane]

00:28:809 (1) - 考慮NC? 因為這裡的distance突然變化成1/4跳
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal

nice diff!

[Oracle 's Extra]

00:06:991 (5) - 感覺這裡NC才符合00:09:900 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡的設置. 00:12:809 (5) - 同這
00:54:991 (4) - 這裡的flow讓我不太舒服..., 原因一樣就是實際的移動跟想像的移動不同, 造成的不對勁感覺, 試試這樣子?
```
280,240,54991,2,0,L|188:216,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:56:445 (4) - 同上, 試著不要彎曲, 或是改到100|196 或其他位子
01:15:263 (2) - 總覺得這個下的位子不對啊.., 不是應該在01:15:263 - 么?, 試著把01:14:809 (1) - 結束在01:15:172 -

(pokes

that's all!
call me back after checking

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2014-12-06T18:54:10+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Frey's Normal]

00:23:718 (2,4) - 不太建議這種circle遮擋於slider的尾巴梗出現在newbie的難度裡, 你還是想要用的話, 00:24:445 (4) - NC, 主要是因為顏色上的相同, 會產生讀圖上的不便
Fixed

00:26:263 (1) - 在slider-end加個whistle? 在這裡弄成一個低-高-高-低的音, 感覺蠻適合這部分的音樂表達
Fixed 同时添加了00:27:536 (3) 的 Whistle

01:02:627 (3) - NC? 同樣跟00:56:809 (1,2) - 一樣是3/4節奏, combo方式上卻不相同, 若是故意的, 我還是想建議你NC, 因為就只有這裡的節奏劇烈變化.
01:08:445 (2) - 同這 All Fixed

01:25:809 (1) - 若是這spinner是跟著vocal的話, 應該是01:26:445 - 開始吧? 1:26:445? 确定没有打错吗？ Vocal的拖长音在01:25:718 (3) 就开始了。

Thanks for modding!

↓ ↓ ↓

Code for Queen Mei

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: garei0.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5900,17536,29172,40809,52445
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Paradise Lost (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
Artist:Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
Version:Frey's Normal
Source:喰霊-零-
Tags:ga rei zero opening frey pandiar oracle
BeatmapID:489868
BeatmapSetID:204020

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"1 (14).jpg",0,0
Video,0,"nyanyaiamop.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-06T22:15:02+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from Oracle.

[notice]

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[Easy]
雖然不知道你是不是故意的, 有些間距是1.2x, 又有些1.1x, 嘛..雖然沒說不可以, 建議是統一起來用一樣間距, 對newbie可能比較容易些, 畢竟這是給newbie們玩的, 間距不同可能造成一些判斷錯誤間距重新調過了，這下應該沒問題了
nothing to say~

~

[Hard]
00:55:718 (2,3) - 試試看這兩個分別獨自ctrl+G, 感覺上flow比較順暢我感覺同方向的slider更能表現先合理的歌詞的那個重複的感覺
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal
~

[Insane]
00:28:809 (1) - 考慮NC? 因為這裡的distance突然變化成1/4跳
01:25:900 (1) - 同Normal
nice diff!

轉盤的話我感覺沒有問題啊。。。ni的音很早就出現了，如果從01:26:445 - 起反而會超怪。。
謝謝你的mod ><,其他沒提的=fixed

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-12-07T03:48:44+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from Oracle.

[Pandiar's Insane]
just suggestion: HP is a little high for me, and it's also make 00:17:536 - ~ 00:28:445 - reduce the hit point, try to -0.5 or 1.0?　OK HP-1 and some change in this part
00:36:082 (6) - it's so close that would make player hesitate a moment beacuse all 1/2 notes have large distance, try to use 1.2x or bigger distance? set 1.2
00:51:354 (2) - try to move to 88|12 or other farther place, it would make player hard to read due to the distance is a little like 00:50:627 (6,7) - . Though you use NC to avoid the error, it's still not enough move it and use NC 00:50:627 (1)
01:25:900 (1) - if the spinner follow the vocal, I think it should start at 01:25:809 -OK

AR = 8.5 now
↓
8.7

thank you for modding ===== !!!

code

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TitleUnicode:Paradise Lost (TVサイズ)
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ArtistUnicode:茅原実里
Creator:Mei
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Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-12-07T05:54:09+00:00

i replied the mod ingame to Loneight~

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-12-07T06:56:57+00:00

IRC with mapper, fixed lead-in and some distance about the Easy
Bubbled!

ヽ( ･д･´)

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-12-07T19:38:37+00:00

>People that don't forum PM me when they finish applying changes and then complain when I don't come back.

If I remember correctly, the only map I had an issue with was Oracle's, sooo

Oracle:
00:49:900 (3) - Just have to say it while I'm here. Clap on beginning of slider

00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The issue here is mostly the flow. Like, I understand in the 2014 meta, sliders aren't really followed in terms of direction, but it's still just unnatural to be moving up like that.
01:16:082 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Jesus christ I literally didn't mod with headphones like once and now everyone
assumes I don't do it ever. Anyways, I hear what you're mapping to. . . but that's consistent through most of the map. So it's really random to just start mapping to that when it's there the entire time. It's not even when it's first introduced, but just randomly.
01:24:991 (1) - I feel like something went unbelievably wrong here. I'm popping it for that reason. (The map says latest version, and here is what the end looks like: http://puu.sh/dl1vs/cb17878e25.jpg )

Mei:
I sure wish mei replied to my mod last time.

That's all

FORUM PM ME WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-12-08T02:46:39+00:00

/me slaps mei
你把最后给删掉了！！！打死你a！！！！
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - trying to fix this
01:24:991 (1) - slaps mei for this
01:16:082 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - let it be....
00:49:900 (3) - ok!

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-12-08T02:50:35+00:00

gareizero;________;

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-09T04:25:29+00:00

CDFA wrote:
>People that don't forum PM me when they finish applying changes and then complain when I don't come back.

If I remember correctly, the only map I had an issue with was Oracle's, sooo

Oracle:
00:49:900 (3) - Just have to say it while I'm here. Clap on beginning of slider
00:56:809 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - The issue here is mostly the flow. Like, I understand in the 2014 meta, sliders aren't really followed in terms of direction, but it's still just unnatural to be moving up like that.
01:16:082 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Jesus christ I literally didn't mod with headphones like once and now everyone
assumes I don't do it ever. Anyways, I hear what you're mapping to. . . but that's consistent through most of the map. So it's really random to just start mapping to that when it's there the entire time. It's not even when it's first introduced, but just randomly.
01:24:991 (1) - I feel like something went unbelievably wrong here. I'm popping it for that reason. (The map says latest version, and here is what the end looks like: http://puu.sh/dl1vs/cb17878e25.jpg )

Mei:
I sure wish mei replied to my mod last time.

That's all

FORUM PM ME WHEN YOU ARE FINISHED

sorry CDFA, the reason why i didnot replied is i have disscussed those issue with you in-game. And you said 'maybe' you will rank it so i suppose you dont want to rank it ;w; About the mods, i am not going to change them because i find several guys to testplay them and they are satisfied with the 1/4 sliders. So i decide to keep them.
Anyway thank you for point out the issues in Oracle's diff. and sorry for not replying mod last time

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-12-15T03:22:17+00:00

Lol its fine, I was making a joke

Anyways, I'm gonna go ahead and rebubble this since the thing I popped was fixed

. Sorry it took so long.

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-12-17T23:09:21+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Lol its fine, I was making a joke

Anyways, I'm gonna go ahead and rebubble this since the thing I popped was fixed . Sorry it took so long.

thank you CDFA o/

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-12-26T08:05:38+00:00

01:16:445 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - jeesus christ @_@

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-12-29T03:18:28+00:00

恭喜rabk(

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2015-01-02T07:24:52+00:00

Short talk with mapper, Add 418 ms on audio lead-in.
Now Qualified

Irc talk

15:12 lkx_Shore: 我突然改变主意
15:12 *lkx_Shore is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496006 Chihara Minori - Paradise Lost (TV Size) [Oracle's Extra]]
15:12 lkx_Shore: +418ms 前置时间
15:14 Mei: 这个。。
15:14 Mei: 我之前想用2000的leadin
15:14 Mei: 但是出了bug
15:14 Mei: 无线更新
15:15 lkx_Shore: ...
15:15 Mei: 无限
15:15 lkx_Shore: 现在试试看行不行
15:15 Mei: 现在老板更新了不知道行不行
15:15 lkx_Shore: 不行就算
15:15 Mei: 我试试._.
15:16 Mei: 全部都要加么
15:16 lkx_Shore: 对呀，这个要统一的
15:17 Mei: 其实加个那个倒计时的行不行呀
15:17 Mei: 我先更新啊
15:18 lkx_Shore: 倒计时现在加了也没用了
15:18 Mei: 好了貌似没问题了
15:19 lkx_Shore: en

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 2015-01-02T07:27:57+00:00

Congrats Mei!! \:D/

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2015-01-02T07:29:23+00:00

grats <3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-01-02T07:41:11+00:00

Omg grats :3

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2015-01-02T07:46:49+00:00

Gratz Mei :3c

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-01-02T08:12:11+00:00

!! Gratz xD

Meg

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Joined August 2012

Meg 2015-01-02T08:31:46+00:00

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2015-01-02T08:44:15+00:00

Gratzz~

Sakaue Nachi

558 posts

Joined September 2012

Sakaue Nachi 2015-01-02T09:35:12+00:00

神麻婆又rank图了

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-01-02T10:06:53+00:00

grats mei xD

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2015-01-02T10:52:08+00:00

rinsukir wrote:
恭喜rabk(

打爆

lkx_Shore wrote:
Short talk with mapper, Add 418 ms on audio lead-in.
Now Qualified
Irc talk
15:12 lkx_Shore: 我突然改变主意
15:12 *lkx_Shore is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/496006 Chihara Minori - Paradise Lost (TV Size) [Oracle's Extra]]
15:12 lkx_Shore: +418ms 前置时间
15:14 Mei: 这个。。
15:14 Mei: 我之前想用2000的leadin
15:14 Mei: 但是出了bug
15:14 Mei: 无线更新
15:15 lkx_Shore: ...
15:15 Mei: 无限
15:15 lkx_Shore: 现在试试看行不行
15:15 Mei: 现在老板更新了不知道行不行
15:15 lkx_Shore: 不行就算
15:15 Mei: 我试试._.
15:16 Mei: 全部都要加么
15:16 lkx_Shore: 对呀，这个要统一的
15:17 Mei: 其实加个那个倒计时的行不行呀
15:17 Mei: 我先更新啊
15:18 lkx_Shore: 倒计时现在加了也没用了
15:18 Mei: 好了貌似没问题了
15:19 lkx_Shore: en

哇谢谢lkx ><

AllStar12 wrote:
Congrats Mei!! \:D/

wa thank you Allstar\:3/

Pandiar wrote:
grats <3

arigatou <333

Satellite wrote:
Omg grats :3

omg thank you SAT Satellite san :3

toara_fict wrote:
Gratz Mei :3c

thank you~~ toara san :3c

Karia wrote:
!! Gratz xD

thank you Karia >w<

iMage-- wrote:

hey iMage v(｡･ω･｡)

gokugohan12468 wrote:
Gratzz~

thank you desu~~~~~

Sakaue Nachi wrote:
神麻婆又rank图了

谢谢你对新人麻婆的支持

Gaia wrote:
grats mei xD

ヽ(｡ゝω・｡) ❤

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2015-01-02T11:59:12+00:00

mei和thou bad夫妻rank可喜可贺

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- Yuuto - 2015-01-02T12:15:26+00:00

wow congrats Mei

Citrus

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Citrus 2015-01-02T13:24:28+00:00

哇!我的黄泉姐姐~

Mei

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Mei 2015-01-03T08:38:32+00:00

Fycho wrote:
mei和thou bad夫妻rank可喜可贺

为什么是夫妻！！！才不是夫妻好吗。。总之谢谢飞球

Yuutosan wrote:
wow congrats Mei

thank you yuutosan :333

thou bad wrote:
哇!我的黄泉姐姐~

哇你居然要和我抢黄泉姐姐，不能忍！

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-01-03T22:11:52+00:00

gratz(∩・▽・∩)

Mei

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Mei 2015-01-04T10:01:30+00:00

M o k o r i wrote:
gratz(∩・▽・∩)

(∩・▽・∩)thank you desu~~~

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