Konei wrote:

[Romance]

1. 00:55:944 (1) - Try to add a SC1 whistle to the end to catch the piano sound. uh... It's weird for me, if there has a whistle, it would be too prominent
2. 01:16:553 (2) - This Slider feels kind irky, the cursor lands kinda in nowhere while playing so I recommend to change this into circles. ok
3. 01:21:122 (3) - Try to remove this so you start the new pattern with the vocals. You did the same on 01:21:832 (1,2,3) - . I feel there should have a note to follow the shamisen, so keep it

Call me back after having a look.

captin1 wrote:

04:06:553 (2) - any particular reason why this is 1/6 before the white tick? i hear the sound directly on the tick 04:06:604 -

captin1 wrote:

doesn't really make sense to me and i think it sounds better mapped normally, your choice in the end though

1. Are you sure OD7 won't be too easy for a diff like this? I mean, I understand that this is quite a tricky map, but OD7 is still pretty low for a difficult one. Try OD7.5-8?
2. 04:16:959 (3,1,2,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but this is pretty hard to read (and also awkward to play) due to the stacks. Try making them more spaced, like 04:12:289 (1,2,3,4) or something? (Or just don't stack at all?)
3. 04:26:096 (2,1,2,1,2) - Similar case as the suggestion above. Unstack the stacked objects and use a more spaced pattern instead?

Hinsvar wrote:

Uh, what happened with the bubble? hmm.. I forget to asking captin after fixing the kiai lines

Random check (no kudosu pls). ...oops, I see this after giving you kd looool

1. Are you sure OD7 won't be too easy for a diff like this? I mean, I understand that this is quite a tricky map, but OD7 is still pretty low for a difficult one. Try OD7.5-8? ok! let it get more hard
2. 04:16:959 (3,1,2,1) - Not sure if it's just me, but this is pretty hard to read (and also awkward to play) due to the stacks. Try making them more spaced, like 04:12:289 (1,2,3,4) or something? (Or just don't stack at all?) I feel there should stack completely to explain my feeling, not hard to read for me because of the AR
3. 04:26:096 (2,1,2,1,2) - Similar case as the suggestion above. Unstack the stacked objects and use a more spaced pattern instead? same as ^

Ask captin to repair the bubble, and then I'll approve.

captin1 wrote:

whoop, got distracted by ffxiv, my bad.
here's #2 again after the fixed kiai lines

Thank you! captin

Hinsvar wrote:

Talking about kiai lines...

05:19:294 - Turn off the kiai here? (Leave the next timing point with the kiai turned on as is.) I'm pretty sure you make kiai flashes when the music goes like this previously.

I'll (really) reapprove after this.

Hinsvar wrote:

Well okay then, enjoy your well-deserved flame of approval \o/

iMage-- wrote:

Gratz !!