Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora · forum

Meisle

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2014-03-14T13:50:14+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[KK's Hard]
00:14:033 (8,9) - umm this section sounds very quiet to me. how about putting clap on (8)'s head and on (9)?ok,its good for me too
00:24:255 (5) - this slider sounds very off. try moving the start to 00:24:477 - and put a circle on 00:24:255 - ? Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1412445 , I just moved (7) for an example of the new flowok
01:00:922 (10) - remove clap, sounds excessive sorry,i think its good to clap here
01:04:255 (1,2) - Switch New combo's on-off as the vocal begins at 01:04:699 - ok
01:07:811 (1,5) - same to the above... depending on your taste though. By the way, the 5 note stream looks a bit too fast for this Hard diff, maybe reduce distance some way?yeah,reduce the distance,but dont change the nc:3
01:09:588 (11) - remove clap, maybe?its ok here^^

thank you

Quilt wrote:
こんにちはー hi~
KK's Hard
00:12:033 (3,4) - you can make more good branket! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415044ok

01:07:366 (9) - try make branket slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415045sorry,dont want to blanket here:3

01:18:922~01:24:144: umm i feel these notes spacing are narrow (sorry i can't explain well. my english is poor(´；ω；｀))
so this mean you should use DS1.1 or 1.2 i think yes~i have changed the SVmy english is poor too(=;ェ;=)
がんばれー

thank you,try my best(＾-＾)

召唤神奇的米桶( ´･ω･`)

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Artist:Galileo Galilei
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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-15T08:54:40+00:00

Naryuga wrote:
Hi :3 (m4m with mint from in-game chat)

[General]
Soft-hitnormal sounds very quiet... lol maybe ok but just I don't like it very much xD
[Easy]
AR3 would fit for this calm, low-BPM song
00:19:366 (2,3) - Obviously wrong distance-snapping. Fix that
[Normal]
Use HP3 and OD4 ? HP5/OD5 looks very large for this difficulty spread, especially when the Hard diff uses HP5/OD5. And I suggest AR4~5 sure
00:02:477 (1) - and 00:06:033 (1) - : Remove newcombo? they just look like NC-spamming nah, 1beat1NC
00:50:922 (1) - place where close to center more to let beginners manage the spin at ease I think it's ok for normal-player.
01:07:366 (3) - (at end) well I just realised some places like this note uses "Auto-Auto" hitsounds (instead of "Normal-Soft" hitsounds, like 00:53:588 (4) - ). Is it intended? ok
01:18:033 (2,3) - put into one slider like 01:17:144 (1) - ? you can make a good flow with it i keep it now
[Insane]
00:19:144 (2) - (reverse arrow) replace the clap into Soft +Additional Normal whistle? nah, it's fine for me.
:3 good luck

Quilt wrote:
こんにちはー

Insane
00:17:588 (3) - change triple notes? follow back drum sound~ I know but i soo lazy (:3_...

00:31:144 (2) - move to x296 y276? hmm i want stack with 1

00:32:477 (5,1) - move move! like this? :p http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415023 ??

00:34:922 (8) - umm i think you should put note here~~ bcz guitar sound is here drum num1, guitar num2 lol

Hard
00:16:255 (4) - move to x332 y112? k

00:49:366 (2) - move to x324 y60 k

01:05:366 (2) - add note here? bcz here is kiai part. and u should follow drum sound i think i follow vocal here.

Easy and Normal are nothing to say!

がんばれー

thanks all ><!

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-03-15T09:49:59+00:00

Random modding~

General:

-- I'm quite concerned about the soft-hitnormal. It's nearly inaudible to me.

Easy:

00:45:144 (1) - I think this NC is unnecessary.
01:04:255 (5) - (184,68) the last dot is better in flow to the next slider.

Hard:

00:20:033 (1,2) - Imo starting combo from (2) will fit the song..
01:02:922 (1) - Mind making the shape better at the first curve? Looks too sharp currently.
01:07:366 (3,4) - The rhythm doesn't sound nice imo. Maybe you can add clap at the end of (3) like 00:55:366 (4,1). That will lessen the awkwardness.

KK's Hard:

00:14:699 (11,1) - This jump is too far comparing to the overall pace of the difficulty. Please reduce spacing.
00:34:477 (7,8,1) - The spin feels too short. Rather start from 00:34:477?
01:07:922 (2,3,4) - Hitsounds are missing, which sounds bad. Add Normal-whistle to all objects.

Insane:

00:14:699 (10,11) - Straight normal-whistles in a row sounded less effective. Mind switching the hitsound of these objects to soft-clap?
00:24:255 (2) - Imo this slider is ignoring a beat at 00:24:477. This didn't felt nice to me..
00:35:811 (1,2) - Start NC from (2). It's quite weird to see this rhythm change of 00:35:588 (9,1) in a different combo imo.
01:15:588 (2,3) - I think copy-pasting a rotated (2) in the place of (3) would look aesthetically better.

ffstar's Insane:

00:36:033 (10,11) - Add hitsounds please. If not, this feels overmapped.
01:16:922 (6,1) - Finish should be at (1) instead (6) according to your pattern.

Good luck~

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-03-16T05:02:59+00:00

Hello~
From

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
挖米桶
怎么这么多diff= =
建议str2，中间的tick可以插线构建音效

[Easy]
General
00:22:033 - 这个part减星减得太厉害了，空了
Beats
01:07:811 - 还是加个note？

[Normal]
General
不错，没啥要说的，可能节奏密了一点，不过不是大问题

[Hard]
General
没啥问题，质量不错
Placement
00:16:477 (1,2) - 叠的不好看，不如把2拉开，反正1.3和1差别不大，hard嘛
Hitsound
01:00:922 (4) - 听上去没音效啊，估计你是故意的，要不然就soft whistle

[KK's Hard]
General
别的问题不大，good job
Placement
00:09:588 (5,6,7) - 准确来说我觉得这里不是很好看哈，因为本来是比较伸展的排版，而这局部缩成一团，可以考虑把6拉直
00:33:588 (5,6) - 总觉得不是很好看 example：

SPOILER

01:22:477 (3,4,5) - 拉开点，1.2x没问题
Hitsound
00:14:588 (10,11) - normal whistle
01:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - 把音效加上哈，好好听原音乐
NCs
高潮部分建议一根白线加一个nc，不然nc有点长

[Insane]
General
整体质量不错哈
Placement
00:04:255 (1,2,3) - 这里有一点坑1pc，放的有点近 example：

SPOILER

00:37:144 (4,5) - 分别ctrl+g可能会舒服一点，毕竟不是很适合跳的地方，何况flow又是反向
01:16:033 (3) - nazi：这里要对称的话似乎弧度得加一点
01:08:699 (2,3,4) - 似乎拉开一点会好些，毕竟是个高音 example：

SPOILER

Hitsound
00:43:033 (5) - 像是soft clap，再听听啊

[ffstar's Insane]
General
啊。。不知不觉又写了一篇音效论文，排列和节奏我就不太想看了，我还是没能找着你的音效的下法，在我看来是缺乏打击感而且不太配合原曲的。。抱歉啦~

Hitsound
00:14:477 (4,5,6,7) - 不知为何听着比较奇怪，也不是不能理解这音效，可能是hit太轻的原因
00:17:366 (3,4,5,6,7) - 比较奇怪的击打感，我觉得hit音“实在是”太轻了，而clap相对重，所以导致这五个音打完了感觉却像是打了两个
以上两条我的建议解决方法是改MP3，把你的clap音量减小，这方面米桶是专家
00:37:144 (4) - 太轻了，我的建议是00:36:255 - 这一段开始全部白线用clap，你听一下原音乐我觉得像是都用的clap，到00:46:922 - 为止
00:42:811 (9,10,11) - 都有clap，听一下
00:44:588 (5) - 有clap
00:46:366 (11) - ^
00:49:588 (3) - normal whistle,就是用你用的那个像snare的音效
00:49:811 (5,6) - 有clap
00:51:366 - 456 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
00:53:144 (3) - 跟上边是一样的，听着中间是clap
00:54:255 - normal whistle
00:54:922 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
00:56:811 (4) - clap
00:57:811 (2) - normal whistle
00:58:699 - ^
01:00:255 (4,6) - ^
01:01:366 (2) - ^
01:02:033 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:02:699 (8) - clap
01:04:033 (4) - clap
01:05:588 (3) - 两头normal whistle
01:06:255 - clap
01:08:033 - clap
01:08:477 (2) - normal whistle
01:09:144 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:10:699 (2) - 没有音效或者soft whistle
01:10:811 (3) - clap
01:12:033 - normal whistle
01:12:699 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:13:366 (6) - 没听清楚，像是clap，不过建议减轻
01:14:477 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:15:144 (6) - normal whistle
01:15:588 - ^
01:16:255 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare
01:17:811 (2,3,4) - 分别是无音效（或soft whistle）、soft clap 、snare
01:18:255 - clap
01:18:699 (7,8) - clap
01:21:588 - normal whistle
01:21:811 - ^
01:22:699 - ^

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-16T07:30:10+00:00

Sonnyc's mod

Sonnyc wrote:
ffstar's Insane:

00:36:033 (10,11) - Add hitsounds please. If not, this feels overmapped. deleted (11)
01:16:922 (6,1) - Finish should be at (1) instead (6) according to your pattern. k fixed

Good luck~

thanks for the mod!

Atrue's mod

Atrue wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]
General
啊。。不知不觉又写了一篇音效论文，排列和节奏我就不太想看了，我还是没能找着你的音效的下法，在我看来是缺乏打击感而且不太配合原曲的。。抱歉啦~ 唉，我的音效设计本来就不好><，谢谢你的指导！

Hitsound
00:14:477 (4,5,6,7) - 不知为何听着比较奇怪，也不是不能理解这音效，可能是hit太轻的原因 ~~其实我没想什么，也不感觉奇怪啊~~好吧，把volumn降低了
00:17:366 (3,4,5,6,7) - 比较奇怪的击打感，我觉得hit音“实在是”太轻了，而clap相对重，所以导致这五个音打完了感觉却像是打了两个
以上两条我的建议解决方法是改MP3，把你的clap音量减小，这方面米桶是专家同上，把clap的volumn降低了
00:37:144 (4) - 太轻了，我的建议是00:36:255 - 这一段开始全部白线用clap，你听一下原音乐我觉得像是都用的clap，到00:46:922 - 为止不喜欢，有点吵
00:42:811 (9,10,11) - 都有clap，听一下嗯，fixed
00:44:588 (5) - 有clap fixed
00:46:366 (11) - ^ 有吗？@@ 我听了很多次没听到，比较像00:46:477 (12,13,14) - 这三个音
00:49:588 (3) - normal whistle,就是用你用的那个像snare的音效哇！这个好！nice!!!
00:49:811 (5,6) - 有clap 有点吵，比较喜欢我原本的
00:51:366 - 456 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare 哦，比较好听哦
00:53:144 (3) - 跟上边是一样的，听着中间是clap k
00:54:255 - normal whistle k，看了这个也顺便加了 00:50:699 (2) -
00:54:922 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
00:56:811 (4) - clap k
00:57:811 (2) - normal whistle k
00:58:699 - ^ k
01:00:255 (4,6) - ^ k，不过这个没加也没差吧？clap的声音太大了 ._.
01:01:366 (2) - ^ k
01:02:033 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:02:699 (8) - clap 之前加了snare，现在多一个clap好奇怪，换成clap也挺怪的
01:04:033 (4) - clap ok
01:05:588 (3) - 两头normal whistle k
01:06:255 - clap ~~个人觉得没有必要，但还是加了~~改变了想法不加了
01:08:033 - clap k
01:08:477 (2) - normal whistle k
01:09:144 (5,6,7) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:10:699 (2) - 没有音效或者soft whistle 没音效比较好
01:10:811 (3) - clap changed
01:12:033 - normal whistle k
01:12:699 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:13:366 (6) - 没听清楚，像是clap，不过建议减轻保留
01:14:477 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:15:144 (6) - normal whistle 保留
01:15:588 - ^ k
01:16:255 (3,4,5) - 分别是normal whistle（snare）、soft clap 、snare k
01:17:811 (2,3,4) - 分别是无音效（或soft whistle）、soft clap 、snare k
01:18:255 - clap ...好吧
01:18:699 (7,8) - clap k
01:21:588 - normal whistle k
01:21:811 - ^ k
01:22:699 - ^ k

非常感谢！！！

edit:

1PSA's mod

1PSA wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]
00:05:588 (5) - 这里这样我觉得更好看？应该没什么大碍
00:22:033 (1,2,3) - 弄成正三角怎么样？不了
00:54:033 (1) - ^,如果改的话后面一串也要改。这是改好的代码你的code是我原本的code o.o 不过你给了我一点灵感，改了一下
code
00:35:144 (8) - 这个slider有点奇怪？稍微改了一下，应该也没什么大碍
00:44:699 (6) - 下移一格更好吧，毕竟左边的slider结束点y为67？这个应该没必要
01:01:366 (2,4,5) - 2,5和4,5有点不等距等距？^
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？暂时保留

谢谢mod！

ids's mod

ids wrote:
嗯，我学着说一点吧
ffstar's Insane

00:01:922 - 这个地方需不需要压下蓝线？什么意思？slider在蓝线？应该不对吧

MINTONG!!!!

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412,176,21699,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,200,21811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Last edited by ffstar 2014-03-16T14:28:21+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2014-03-16T07:46:16+00:00

喜欢伽利略的歌~~~

[ffstar's Insane]

00:05:588 (5) - 这里这样我觉得更好看？
0.0
00:22:033 (1,2,3) - 弄成正三角怎么样？

00:54:033 (1) - ^,如果改的话后面一串也要改。这是改好的代码

0.0

296,212,54033,6,0,L|204:212,2,90,4|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,288,54699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,320,54922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,320,55033,1,2,0:1:0:0:
268,320,55144,2,0,L|172:320,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,320,55588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,320,55811,6,0,P|320:252|312:156,1,180,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,56477,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:35:144 (8) - 这个slider有点奇怪？
00:44:699 (6) - 下移一格更好吧，毕竟左边的slider结束点y为67？
01:01:366 (2,4,5) - 2,5和4,5有点不等距等距？
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？

[Insane]

00:13:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星歪了？
00:21:144 (2,3,4,5,6) - 没包好1？
00:22:922 (4) - 没包好3？
00:27:366 (1,2,3) - 间距不等？还是故意的？
00:34:477 (7) - ^
00:36:255 (2) - 要不要考虑包住9？
01:16:033 (3) - 用2旋转180°做3怎么样？
00:00:700，00:02:477，00:06:033 - 不需要什么音效之类的吗？

[kk's Hard]

00:49:588 (10) - 可不可以考虑换成两个slider？且它和下一个note离得太远会让玩家判断不出这个slider何时结束？
01:02:922 (5) - 感觉不太美观？
01:17:144 (1) - ^

还有同上面的音效
[Hard]

00:06:033 (3) - 没包好？
01:02:922 (1) - 这里不弄成正方形吗？
音效同上

[Normal]

没......

[Easy]

没。。

所以我觉得音效可以在丰富一点啥的...比如hitfinish可以不用原始的，开始那块也可以再加一些音效。

以上~~~~~
渣mod请随意忽略....

AIR

1,586 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-03-16T13:43:29+00:00

嗯，我学着说一点吧
ffstar's Insane

00:01:922 - 这个地方需不需要压下蓝线？

Insane

00:44:033 (2,3,4) - 两个音分开了，不是太和谐
01:01:144 (1,2,3) - 和上面一样

KK's Hard

00:25:144 (7) - 这里有压，但是前面类似的00:00:477 - 00:04:033 - 00:07:588 - 是空的，需要修吗？
00:49:588 (10) - 断成两个感觉好点？
01:05:033 - 滑条拉到这里？

Hard

00:36:255 (1,2,3) - 感觉需要重新分下音
01:11:366 (4,5,6,7) - 其他类似的地方用的是短折00:14:255 (5) - 00:49:811 (4) - 不知道是不是多余的话

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-16T14:48:48+00:00

Mostly are fixed, thanks!
Sorry i didn't reply anything, because My network is really slow + little lazy *.*
You can always in-game or forum pm if you want the reason.

Meisle

158 posts

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2014-03-16T16:21:36+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Random modding~

KK's Hard:
i
00:14:699 (11,1) - This jump is too far comparing to the overall pace of the difficulty. Please reduce spacing.ok, i use DS 1.5:3
00:34:477 (7,8,1) - The spin feels too short. Rather start from 00:34:477?ok
01:07:922 (2,3,4) - Hitsounds are missing, which sounds bad. Add Normal-whistle to all objects.ok

Good luck~

thank you:3

Atrue wrote:
Hello~ 早~
From

[KK's Hard]
General
别的问题不大，good job
Placement
00:09:588 (5,6,7) - 准确来说我觉得这里不是很好看哈，因为本来是比较伸展的排版，而这局部缩成一团，可以考虑把6拉直但是我觉得这一段的歌词唱的有点平缓,我想这边稍微弄的有个性点XD
00:33:588 (5,6) - 总觉得不是很好看 example：
SPOILER
嗯,直接转盘
01:22:477 (3,4,5) - 拉开点，1.2x没问题拉开了以后真的感觉好凶残- -,但是我还是照做了
Hitsound
00:14:588 (10,11) - normal whistle我觉得不加听起来好
01:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - 把音效加上哈，好好听原音乐好
NCs
高潮部分建议一根白线加一个nc，不然nc有点长
好

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

谢谢啦

1PSA wrote:
喜欢伽利略的歌~~~

[kk's Hard]
00:49:588 (10) - 可不可以考虑换成两个slider？且它和下一个note离得太远会让玩家判断不出这个slider何时结束？但是鼓音太明显了啊QAQ我实在觉得用两个slider不好
01:02:922 (5) - 感觉不太美观？我怕slider的样式太单调了,其实这种奇葩的slider还是挺好玩的:3
01:17:144 (1) - ^
一样
还有同上面的音效其实这一段还是比较安静的不是很需要再去加音效

谢谢啦

ids wrote:
嗯，我学着说一点吧

KK's Hard

00:25:144 (7) - 这里有压，但是前面类似的00:00:477 - 00:04:033 - 00:07:588 - 是空的，需要修吗？因为前面开头想做的干静一点,所以没弄,应该没事的啦
00:49:588 (10) - 断成两个感觉好点？要是有第3个再提出我真的一定改
01:05:033 - 滑条拉到这里？
好

谢谢

米桶:3

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2014-03-16T21:08:21+00:00

kawaii mintong! >///< for M4M~

[General]

shouldn't ffstar be in tags? o3o

[ffstar's Insane]

I think the beginning section should have some whistles to emphasize the guitar! For example:
00:00:811 (2) - head of slider
00:02:033 (5) - on the repeat

it's your preference, but I think having hitsounds would be cool

01:10:033 (1) - imo a gentler curve of the slider fits the music here:

SPOILER

[Insane]

same comment about hitsounds as in the other insane
00:22:922 (4) - improve blanket? :O
00:41:588 (1) - angle this so it doesn't overlap with 00:40:699 (3) for a cleaner look?

SPOILER

00:44:477 (3,4) - mmm I hear some 1/4 beats here D: how about a 1/4 kick slider?
00:54:033 (1) - separate into 1/2 circles/sliders to better match vocals
00:56:699 (3) - this overlap doesn't look very clean to me imo, how about stacking the head of the slider on the head of 00:55:811 (1) ? or maybe the tail of (3) with the head of (1)...
01:05:588 (3,4,1) - personally i think the jump should be bigger from (4) to (1) because it's a new combo & new verse in the song
01:20:922 (2) - move this to the right for better circular flow?

SPOILER

[KK's Hard]

i find it interesting that the SV here is the same as in mintong's insane

00:10:477 (7) - i think the pattern flows better if the slider curved the other way (blanketing 6's head). If you do this, I think you should also rotate the whole pattern to better lead into (1):

SPOILER

(AR lowered to show the whole pattern)
00:23:811 (4,5) - i think it would look neater if they overlapped the middle of (3): sorry for lots of pics haha

SPOILER

00:25:588 (1) - saaaame here D: it'd be nice if it were blanketed by 00:24:477 (6) (well you'd have to move the next few objects)
00:38:033 (6) - make the shape more apparent & symmetrical

SPOILER

00:46:922 (4) - i think it'd make more sense and be more consistent to place the NC here

i know it would make the previous combo pretty long though
01:02:922 (5) - how about making the slider like this?

SPOILER

01:22:477 (3) - NC here instead of 01:21:588 (1) for consistency (But i understand why you chose to NC there)

[Hard]
00:16:255 (4,1) - err the spacing here is a bit small & has a bit of an overlap D:
00:27:366 (1,2,3,4) - mmm i suggest either unstacking these circles or making a slider, the stacks might make it hard for the player to recognize the shift in rhythm
00:45:144 (1,2,3) - i think this is pretty cool

[Normal]

Hmm the 3/2 rhythms might be a bit hard for newbies to catch, but there's nothing really wrong with them

00:55:588 (3) - hmm i think it's okay to take this circle out. It makes the diff a bit easier, and there's no beat/vocal here

[Easy]

is goood

GOODLUCK KAWAII MINTONG!!!

Meisle

158 posts

Joined June 2012

Meisle 2014-03-17T09:28:59+00:00

Raose wrote:
kawaii mintong! >///< for M4M~

[KK's Hard]

i find it interesting that the SV here is the same as in mintong's insane hahaha~ coincidence

00:10:477 (7) - i think the pattern flows better if the slider curved the other way (blanketing 6's head). If you do this, I think you should also rotate the whole pattern to better lead into (1): :3yeah~your idea is good but i really want to keep this strange setting
SPOILER
(AR lowered to show the whole pattern)
00:23:811 (4,5) - i think it would look neater if they overlapped the middle of (3): sorry for lots of pics hahaok
SPOILER
00:25:588 (1) - saaaame here D: it'd be nice if it were blanketed by 00:24:477 (6) (well you'd have to move the next few objects)ok
00:38:033 (6) - make the shape more apparent & symmetricalok
SPOILER
00:46:922 (4) - i think it'd make more sense and be more consistent to place the NC here i know it would make the previous combo pretty long thoughyes~
01:02:922 (5) - how about making the slider like this?ok:3
SPOILER
01:22:477 (3) - NC here instead of 01:21:588 (1) for consistency (But i understand why you chose to NC there)ok

thank you

mintong~

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-17T13:55:21+00:00

Raose wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]

I think the beginning section should have some whistles to emphasize the guitar! For example:
00:00:811 (2) - head of slider
00:02:033 (5) - on the repeat

it's your preference, but I think having hitsounds would be cool um, sorry i think i just leave it nothing

01:10:033 (1) - imo a gentler curve of the slider fits the music here: k fixed
SPOILER

thanks for modding

mintong go go go

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mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-17T16:02:41+00:00

Raose wrote:
kawaii mintong! >///< for M4M~

[General]

shouldn't ffstar be in tags? o3o okk

[Insane]

same comment about hitsounds as in the other insane
00:22:922 (4) - improve blanket? :O okk
00:41:588 (1) - angle this so it doesn't overlap with 00:40:699 (3) for a cleaner look? well, I think it's ok for me...
SPOILER
00:44:477 (3,4) - mmm I hear some 1/4 beats here D: how about a 1/4 kick slider? okk
00:54:033 (1) - separate into 1/2 circles/sliders to better match vocals nah, I follow beat here
00:56:699 (3) - this overlap doesn't look very clean to me imo, how about stacking the head of the slider on the head of 00:55:811 (1) ? or maybe the tail of (3) with the head of (1)... Umm why, I'm sure in-play it doesn't matter...
01:05:588 (3,4,1) - personally i think the jump should be bigger from (4) to (1) because it's a new combo & new verse in the song I keep on of this
01:20:922 (2) - move this to the right for better circular flow? nah, it's my style
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:16:255 (4,1) - err the spacing here is a bit small & has a bit of an overlap D: DSDSDSDS opened
00:27:366 (1,2,3,4) - mmm i suggest either unstacking these circles or making a slider, the stacks might make it hard for the player to recognize the shift in rhythm mmm i keep on this, I will change if someone told this again.
00:45:144 (1,2,3) - i think this is pretty cool thanks

[Normal]

Hmm the 3/2 rhythms might be a bit hard for newbies to catch, but there's nothing really wrong with them
00:55:588 (3) - hmm i think it's okay to take this circle out. It makes the diff a bit easier, and there's no beat/vocal here sure

[Easy]

is goood

GOODLUCK KAWAII MINTONG!!!

Thanks!

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-03-20T16:04:26+00:00

IRCMOD with mintong-san

23:00 tellertheworld: hello~
23:02 Mintong: hello
23:02 tellertheworld: 你看得明中文嗎?
23:02 tellertheworld: Do u know chinese or cantonese?
23:02 Mintong: 我华人呢
23:02 tellertheworld: 很好~^o^~
23:03 tellertheworld: 可以和你做個ircmod?
23:03 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381421 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora]
23:03 tellertheworld: 是你的沒錯?
23:03 Mintong: 嗯
23:03 Mintong: 唔, 可以啊
23:03 Mintong: 可是有几个GD
23:03 tellertheworld: 先等等我玩一次
23:04 tellertheworld: 沒問題 GD我會找他們或POST左mappage
23:04 Mintong: 好
23:06 tellertheworld: 如此遊閒的一首歌這jump好像有點遠
23:07 Mintong: 有么 lol, 我还觉得有点慢
23:07 Mintong: .
23:08 tellertheworld: 可能我技術比較差
23:09 Mintong: 看个人性格吧~
23:09 tellertheworld: 可以了
23:09 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/378758 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [Insane]]
23:11 tellertheworld: 你準備好了嗎?
23:12 Mintong: 嗯
23:12 tellertheworld: 00:13:144 (1,2,3,4,5) -
23:13 tellertheworld: 距離近一點好像比較好
23:13 tellertheworld: 這裡還未入節奏
23:13 tellertheworld: 感覺上會慢一點
23:14 Mintong: 好像有点道理, 我考虑下
23:15 tellertheworld: 不知道為什麼
23:15 tellertheworld: 00:24:255 (2) -
23:15 tellertheworld: 盡是覺得 slider開始前沒明顯節奏
23:15 tellertheworld: 節拍
23:16 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CExH.jpg
23:16 Mintong: 嗯
23:16 Mintong: 怎么我没察觉到
23:16 Mintong: 我改下
23:16 tellertheworld: 試試這樣
23:17 Mintong: hmm 我用别的方式
23:18 tellertheworld: 好吧你是個有經理的mapper 我信你的~
23:18 tellertheworld: 00:35:144 (8,9,10) -
23:18 tellertheworld: 00:35:811 (10) - 明顯是不同的需要nc
23:19 tellertheworld: 如果希望突出00:35:811 (10) - 可以00:35:922 - 和00:36:033 - 加個圈
23:19 tellertheworld: 變成3連打
23:19 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CEIG.jpg
23:20 tellertheworld: 這是我的想法
23:20 Mintong: 那我选择NC吧
23:21 tellertheworld: 01:16:477 (4,5,6) -
23:22 tellertheworld: 節奏應該沒變的說
23:22 tellertheworld: 但有個大jump
23:22 tellertheworld: 有點太突出
23:24 Mintong: 唔
23:24 tellertheworld: 雖然我覺得這個00:34:255 (6) - 都有類似問題但1個就算了吧
23:25 Mintong: 稍微改了下
23:26 tellertheworld: 感覺上 01:02:033 (4,5,1,2,3) - 好像有點節奏不對
23:26 tellertheworld: 但又指不出呢>_<
23:27 tellertheworld: 00:59:144 (5,2,4,3) -
23:27 Mintong: orz 我听不出节奏不对
23:27 tellertheworld: 這幾個音有叮一聲
23:28 tellertheworld: 01:02:699 - 這裡都有
23:28 tellertheworld: 但 00:59:144 (5,2,4,3) - 都是圈或者 slider的開頭
23:29 tellertheworld: 但這個就在01:02:477 (5) - slider 的尾
23:29 Mintong: 我稍微改下节奏
23:29 Mintong: 故意的
23:29 tellertheworld: 嗯~
23:30 tellertheworld: 那insane 我就mod到這裡
23:30 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/380016 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [Hard]]
23:31 tellertheworld: 00:24:255 (2) - 同insane都是
23:33 Mintong: 嗯
23:34 tellertheworld: 00:16:255 (4) - 這裡距離有小小不同
23:34 tellertheworld: next是0.92x
23:35 tellertheworld: 不知你有沒有發覺
23:36 Mintong: .
23:36 Mintong: 改了, 还真没发现
23:36 tellertheworld: 今天mod太多了都差點沒發現
23:37 tellertheworld: 對了
23:37 tellertheworld: aimod說這個難度song setup有不同
23:37 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/382059 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [KK's Hard]]
23:38 tellertheworld: letterbox break
23:39 Mintong: 你告诉他吧
23:39 tellertheworld: 好吧
23:39 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381163 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [Normal]]
23:40 tellertheworld: 00:29:588 (2) -
23:40 tellertheworld: 這個slider個人應該放在00:30:033 -
23:40 tellertheworld: 現在的有d快了 (節奏
23:41 Mintong: 唔, 这个有个人脑补节奏
23:41 Mintong: 你就无视他吧lol
23:41 tellertheworld: 好吧
23:43 tellertheworld: normal 沒什麼問題了
23:43 *tellertheworld is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381421 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [Easy]]
23:44 tellertheworld: 00:18:033 - 這裡可以加個音
23:44 tellertheworld: 這個音與00:18:477 (1) - 的節奏相連
23:45 Mintong: 唔, 我考虑下有点懒惰
23:46 tellertheworld: 01:04:255 (5) -
23:46 tellertheworld: 對easy來說會不會有點難?
23:46 Mintong: 嗯, 我想给easy player挑战
23:47 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CG2B.png
23:47 tellertheworld: 這是你定的combo色
23:47 tellertheworld: 這歌應該比較 '陽光' 的
23:47 tellertheworld: 熱血的那種
23:48 tellertheworld: 但深藍深綠咖啡色
23:48 Mintong: 用亮颜色的话配video配BG 肯定会被喷的
23:48 tellertheworld: 也對..
23:50 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CGdi.jpg
23:50 tellertheworld: 這種顏色呢?
23:51 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CGfp.jpg
23:51 Mintong: 我觉得白色数字的会吃亏
23:51 Mintong: 看不清楚
23:52 tellertheworld: 你是白數字?
23:52 Mintong: 虽然我不是, 但是往往总会有吧
23:53 tellertheworld: 原來連這些都要考慮又學多了
23:53 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7CGlt.jpg
23:54 tellertheworld: 不過這淺紅有點不配合..
23:54 Mintong: 唔
23:54 Mintong: 我换换看
23:55 tellertheworld: 這淺紅是在那裡出現過?
23:55 Mintong: 你说video么
23:55 tellertheworld: 綠是草地咖啡是球場藍是天空對嗎?
23:56 Mintong: ...其实我颜色没配video或BG
23:57 tellertheworld: 竟然━Σ(ﾟДﾟ|||)━
23:58 tellertheworld: 需要 http://puu.sh/7CGyO.jpg
23:58 tellertheworld: 橙色嗎?
23:58 tellertheworld: 00:06:699 - 可以看到
23:58 Mintong: 唔, 好
23:58 tellertheworld: 唔好 or 好- -"?
23:58 tellertheworld: 唔好 cantonese= no
23:59 Mintong: 好*
00:02 tellertheworld: 那就差唔多看過這歌的file了
00:02 tellertheworld: osu檔也看了沒什麼問題
00:02 Mintong: 嗯
00:03 tellertheworld: 我的mod就到這裡

ffstar0716 IRCMOD

17:25 tellertheworld: hello~
17:25 ffstar0716: hi
17:26 tellertheworld: Is this map is urs?
17:26 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/383111 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora]
17:26 *tellertheworld is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/383111 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora [ffstar's Insane]]
17:26 ffstar0716: yea i have a GD there
17:28 tellertheworld: Do u have some time for IRCMOD?
17:28 ffstar0716: yea sure
17:28 tellertheworld: please wait. I play it once
17:28 ffstar0716: ok
17:30 tellertheworld: ok
17:30 tellertheworld: nice map~
17:30 ffstar0716: thanks

17:30 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7DEES.png
17:32 tellertheworld: 00:09:144 (5) -
17:32 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7DEI9.jpg
17:32 ffstar0716: i think you didnt update other diff so the aimod said those things...
17:32 tellertheworld: oh..
17:33 tellertheworld: I see...
17:33 tellertheworld: I think the note this different with 00:05:588 (5) -
17:34 ffstar0716: what do you mean?
17:34 tellertheworld: chinese is okay?
17:34 ffstar0716: yea sure
17:35 tellertheworld: 00:09:588 -
17:35 tellertheworld: 這裡有個重音
17:35 tellertheworld: 長的那種
17:35 ffstar0716: 嗯
17:36 tellertheworld: 我個人覺得這裡作為SLIDER的開頭會比較好
17:36 tellertheworld: 00:02:033 (5,5) -
17:36 tellertheworld: 反彈的長slider有這2處
17:36 tellertheworld: 但這個位開始進入節奏
17:37 tellertheworld: 應該可以有小小轉改
17:37 tellertheworld: 轉變
17:37 ffstar0716: 好
17:38 tellertheworld: 00:20:922 (4,5,6,7,8) -
17:38 tellertheworld: 這裡應該沒這麼快吧
17:39 ffstar0716: hmm?
17:39 tellertheworld: 感覺應該沒有太大的轉變
17:39 tellertheworld: 但就突然出現5連打
17:40 ffstar0716: 好，我考虑考虑
17:40 tellertheworld: 00:14:477 (4,5,6,7) -
17:40 tellertheworld: 這些可以作為改變節奏的連打
17:41 tellertheworld: 但是你有了00:21:588 (9,10,11) -
17:41 tellertheworld: 這3個我覺得已經足夠了
17:42 ffstar0716: 嗯，我暂时保留
17:42 tellertheworld: 00:50:033 (1) - nc
17:43 ffstar0716: 想该很久了，但懒惰，哈哈，改了
17:43 tellertheworld: 01:00:033 (2,3,4,5,6) -
17:43 tellertheworld: 和連打的這個一樣
17:43 tellertheworld: 好像有點特別
17:44 ffstar0716: 哦，这个我会考虑换...
17:45 tellertheworld: 01:02:255 (7) -
17:45 tellertheworld: 現在是slider的對?
17:45 tellertheworld: 但我覺得這裡不應該slider
17:46 tellertheworld: 01:01:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
17:46 tellertheworld: 前面的音節奏也相約
17:46 tellertheworld: 但突現出現slider
17:47 ffstar0716: 应该没什么大碍，暂时保留
17:48 tellertheworld: 也沒問題
17:50 tellertheworld: 就差不多了

24/3/2014:

KK's Hard IRCMOD

19:39 tellertheworld: 早晨~
19:39 KevinKang: 早~
19:40 tellertheworld: 可以做個ircmod嗎?
19:40 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/382059 Galileo Galilei - Natsuzora]
19:40 tellertheworld: 有個gd是你的對嗎?
19:40 KevinKang: 好啊~
19:40 tellertheworld: 先等等玩一次先
19:40 KevinKang: 好
19:42 tellertheworld: 可以了
19:42 KevinKang: 嗯
19:43 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7Hw7A.jpg
19:44 tellertheworld: 00:13:144 (6) -
19:44 tellertheworld: 個6字移上一點好似比較好
19:44 KevinKang: 好
19:45 tellertheworld: 00:44:699 (4,5,6) -
19:46 tellertheworld: 覺得用連打不是很好
19:46 tellertheworld: 首先不是kiai 還是突然在節奏沒變的地方出現
19:47 KevinKang: 但是那个蓝线的鼓音......
19:48 tellertheworld: 試試用1/4的slider + 反彈1次
19:50 KevinKang: 嗯~~~你觉得把那个蓝线上的note去掉打起来舒服吗？
19:51 tellertheworld: 現在突然出現3連打還是不重疊有點奇怪
19:51 tellertheworld: 00:46:477 (8,9,10) - 可以和這個一樣重疊可能會好一點
19:52 tellertheworld: 但2個重疊在短時間出現有點奇怪
19:53 KevinKang: 嗯~考虑了一下感觉还是简单点我把蓝线上的note去掉吧
19:53 tellertheworld: ... 但刪除之後空了這段只有2/4snap
19:53 tellertheworld: 會不會有點悶?
19:55 KevinKang: 好纠结啊~我觉得用1/4的slider反弹一次挺好但是可能要重新摆一下
19:56 tellertheworld: 需要時間?
19:57 KevinKang: 嗯
19:57 tellertheworld: 那我等等你
19:59 KevinKang: 好了~（我改图巨慢XD）
19:59 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/7HwEu.jpg
19:59 tellertheworld: 01:08:255 (5) -
20:00 tellertheworld: 高了一點
20:00 tellertheworld: 是故意嗎?
20:00 KevinKang: 好细微@.@自己都没发现
20:02 KevinKang: 改好了
20:02 tellertheworld: 很好的圖~
20:02 tellertheworld: 就以上了~

Last edited by -Teina- 2014-03-24T12:04:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

poddo_old

42 posts

Joined July 2013

poddo_old 2014-03-20T16:28:07+00:00

aaa this map is very good!! good luck at getting it ranked! //shoots kudosu

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-21T00:43:21+00:00

poddo wrote:
aaa this map is very good!! good luck at getting it ranked! //shoots kudosu

Thanks!

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-21T10:08:48+00:00

thanks teller's mod

lalala

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blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

4,755 posts

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blissfulyoshi 2014-03-23T01:02:48+00:00

I couldn't find any sources that called it Big Windup, so I would just keep the source as "Ookiku Furikabutte: Natsu no Taikai Hen"
Please try to get a better video

Easy:
00:00:700 (1,2) - you can definitely make a nicer looking pattern with these 2 notes. Maybe have them blanket each other

SPOILER

00:07:811 (1,1,1,1) - make every other one of these have a new combo to keep your pattern of a new combo every 2 tall white ticks
00:22:033 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:22:033 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - please add notes between these, the music is not that boring

Normal:
00:59:366 (5) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every tall white tick
01:08:255 (1,2) - it will look nicer if each of these could blanket the head of the other

Hard:
00:00:700 (1,2) - same as Easy
00:17:144 (2) - this overlap doesn't look that great
00:45:144 (1,3) - ^

KK's Hard:
01:02:922 (5) - new combo to ft your pattern of new combo every tall white tick in the chorus

Insane:
00:21:588 (6) - it is sort of annoying that this goes in the opposite direction of the note you need to go to next, I suggest making it point downward/ tangental instead
00:24:699 (3,1) - this overlap doesn't look that great
00:55:811 (1,3) - another lackluster overlap

ffstar's Insane:
00:04:033 (1,2) - since you didn't start combos early for basically the rest of the diss, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to fit your pattern

=================
Nice map overall. A few minor things here and there. Just please fix that video. Besides that, call me when ready for a remod

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

mintong89 2014-03-23T02:12:53+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
I couldn't find any sources that called it Big Windup, so I would just keep the source as "Ookiku Furikabutte: Natsu no Taikai Hen"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_Windup!
Please try to get a better video

Easy:
00:00:700 (1,2) - you can definitely make a nicer looking pattern with these 2 notes. Maybe have them blanket each other
SPOILER
Well...I keep it because i follow the DS Snap.
00:07:811 (1,1,1,1) - make every other one of these have a new combo to keep your pattern of a new combo every 2 tall white ticks k
00:22:033 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:22:033 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - please add notes between these, the music is not that boring kk

Normal:
00:59:366 (5) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every tall white tick kk
01:08:255 (1,2) - it will look nicer if each of these could blanket the head of the other I prefer current one

Hard:
00:00:700 (1,2) - same as Easy keep it now Edit: well this is not blanket style i think
00:17:144 (2) - this overlap doesn't look that great kk
00:45:144 (1,3) - ^ kk

Insane:
00:21:588 (6) - it is sort of annoying that this goes in the opposite direction of the note you need to go to next, I suggest making it point downward/ tangental instead hmm I think it's ok, because many modder didn't tell this
00:24:699 (3,1) - this overlap doesn't look that great kk
00:55:811 (1,3) - another lackluster overlap kk

=================
Nice map overall. A few minor things here and there. Just please fix that video. Besides that, call me when ready for a remod

thanks for mod!

Last edited by mintong89 2014-03-23T05:45:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-03-23T02:46:08+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
ffstar's Insane:
00:04:033 (1,2) - since you didn't start combos early for basically the rest of the diss, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to fit your pattern ok fixed

thanks!

mintong!

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Meisle

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Meisle 2014-03-23T08:36:23+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
KK's Hard:
01:02:922 (5) - new combo to ft your pattern of new combo every tall white tick in the chorus ok

thank you
@mintong help me to change it

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-03-23T09:16:45+00:00

updated

Last edited by mintong89 2014-03-24T13:45:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Meisle

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Meisle 2014-03-24T12:26:12+00:00

thanks teller's ircmod

@mintong my dif

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-03-24T13:46:02+00:00

Mintong wrote:
updated

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-04-06T15:49:31+00:00

We fixed a few things via IRC mod. Bubbled!

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-06T15:53:06+00:00

Thanks!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-04-07T05:10:51+00:00

hi~

General
- Artist Unicode: ガリレオガリレイ

- I feel like it'd be better to use the japanese title as the source (Ookiku Furikabutte) as blissfulyoshi said.

- Delete the underline between Ookiku_Furikabutte in tags if you end up keeping the english title

- the bg seemed a bit plain imo haha maybe try one of these (they are both 1024x768):

SPOILER

Easy
00:18:477 (1) - Finish on head maybe, I hear a faint cymbal in the bgm
00:23:811 (4) - NC, consistency for this part
00:22:922 (2,3,5,6) - soo these notes are pretty much silent which is unrankable, try to use something louder like the default soft hitsound
00:30:033 (2,3) - ^
00:33:588 (2,3) - ^
00:34:477 (4) - NC i guess =v=

Normal
00:04:255 (1,3) - the notes in this whole part were also kinda silent, please add more whistles or something...
00:22:922 (2) - same as Easy, please fix all your silent notes

Hard
00:14:255 (5) - perhaps add a repeat to keep the drums going, even if it's going softer. If you do, i suggest you make the next slider touch it to avoid spacing confusion~
00:20:477 - highly suggest you add note here. It'll provide a lead in that keeps the instrumental flow
00:22:033 (1) - Finish on head? would sound nice imo

KK's Hard
00:22:477 (2,3) - again, follow the spots I mentioned in Easy. these notes sound kinda silent orz
00:34:477 (1) - Clap would sound cool
00:54:922 (4) - try pulling this down to make a triangle pattern:

SPOILER

this will give space between (4,5) since right now, the distance vs. rhythm here is a bit inconsistent for this combo

Insane
00:20:477 - like in hard, I really suggest adding a note here to catch the drum

ffstar's Insane
nice xD

loved the map, great flow!

The only main thing that bothers me is the amount of silent notes in two sections: 00:00:477 (1) - to 00:12:922 (6) - & 00:22:477 (2) - to 00:36:033 (10) -
Please use a louder hitnoise.
It'd also be a nice bonus to get timing checked by someone, sometimes the hitsounds sounded a bit funny =v=
good luck and call me back~

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-07T11:43:53+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi~

General
- Artist Unicode: ガリレオガリレイ sure

- I feel like it'd be better to use the japanese title as the source (Ookiku Furikabutte) as blissfulyoshi said.

- Delete the underline between Ookiku_Furikabutte in tags if you end up keeping the english title I did like to keep english source, and done.

- the bg seemed a bit plain imo haha maybe try one of these (they are both 1024x768): kk edit: hmm I think these two BG is so messy so I use back old one
SPOILER

Easy
00:18:477 (1) - Finish on head maybe, I hear a faint cymbal in the bgm yeah i know but i think it too loud...
00:23:811 (4) - NC, consistency for this part k
00:22:922 (2,3,5,6) - soo these notes are pretty much silent which is unrankable, try to use something louder like the default soft hitsound hah, all fixed
00:30:033 (2,3) - ^
00:33:588 (2,3) - ^
00:34:477 (4) - NC i guess =v= k

Normal
00:04:255 (1,3) - the notes in this whole part were also kinda silent, please add more whistles or something...
00:22:922 (2) - same as Easy, please fix all your silent notes

Hard
00:14:255 (5) - perhaps add a repeat to keep the drums going, even if it's going softer. If you do, i suggest you make the next slider touch it to avoid spacing confusion~ I think it's ok for it so I keep on this
00:20:477 - highly suggest you add note here. It'll provide a lead in that keeps the instrumental flow k
00:22:033 (1) - Finish on head? would sound nice imo not really, it's too loud

Insane
00:20:477 - like in hard, I really suggest adding a note here to catch the drum k

It'd also be a nice bonus to get timing checked by someone, sometimes the hitsounds sounded a bit funny =v=
good luck and call me back~

@ffstar: 重新下载, 改过artist和BG.
@kevinkang: ^ + 改了你的diff一点音效以防被喷lol.
Thanks for mod!

Last edited by mintong89 2014-04-07T13:51:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

ffstar

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ffstar 2014-04-07T12:35:39+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hi~

ffstar's Insane
nice xD

loved the map, great flow!
The only main thing that bothers me is the amount of silent notes in two sections: 00:00:477 (1) - to 00:12:922 (6) - & 00:22:477 (2) - to 00:36:033 (10) -
Please use a louder hitnoise.
It'd also be a nice bonus to get timing checked by someone, sometimes the hitsounds sounded a bit funny =v=
good luck and call me back~

used original hitsound and now the hitnormal is louder
thanks!!!

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-07T13:35:45+00:00

Since KevinKang's network really slow, so I help him so fix. Fixed all.

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-04-08T23:29:41+00:00

hmmm aibat says there are unsnapped ends at: 00:00:700 (1,2) - & 00:06:033 (3) -

Also preview time seems randomly placed? How about starting it on the kiai at 00:50:477 (1) - ? xD

yep just those little things~

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-04-09T00:28:54+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hmmm aibat says there are unsnapped ends at: 00:00:700 (1,2) - & 00:06:033 (3) - k

Also preview time seems randomly placed? How about starting it on the kiai at 00:50:477 (1) - ? xD hmm i think this place is better place for preview orz

yep just those little things~

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-04-09T05:31:49+00:00

rebub~
Good luck ^_^

PatZar

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PatZar 2014-05-07T14:59:37+00:00

Nice map, go ranked

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-05-10T03:32:39+00:00

泡一个月, 美丽

Asagi Mutsuki

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-05-10T06:10:27+00:00

Mintong wrote:
泡一个月, 美丽

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Mintong wrote:
泡一个月, 美丽

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-05-18T01:42:07+00:00

It's about time to push this map forward.

[General]

The source should be the romanized anime title “Ookiku Furikabutte” or the original one “おおきく振りかぶって” since the translated one is not well known. (In fact I was sorta confused with that.)
Consider adding audio lead in on all difficulties. 1000ms or so should be enough.

[Easy]

It feels like OD(overall difficulty)3 is kinda high considering an Easy difficulty imo. Consider reducing it to 2.
00:00:700 - This hitsound change can be set with the red line. So it’s an unnecessary green line.
00:13:144 - An unnecessary green line here.
00:14:477 - It sounds like this hitsound similar to the bass drum doesn’t fit well. A default normal-hit should be more fitting here.

[Normal]

00:00:700 - This hitsound change can be set with the red line. So it’s an unnecessary green line.
00:13:144 - An unnecessary green line here.
00:24:477 (2) - It’d be easier to play if you make consistent with 00:26:477 (2,3) - by moving this note to 00:24:699 - .
00:50:922 (1) - A bit too far from the center. It’d be better to give more recovery to make it more friendly. Or you can fix easily by removing this slider.
01:18:033 (2,3) - It’ll be more fitting if you make a 2/3 slider as the song goes instead of these 2 notes.

[ffstar’s Insane]

01:23:366 (3,4,5) - It sounds like a custom clap is overused here to me. Consider adding a default normal-hit (by changing the sampleset to Normal) or a Normal custom whistle like Mintong did on his Insane difficulty to (4,5) instead.

Call me back when you are done.

ffstar

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ffstar 2014-05-18T03:31:45+00:00

KSHR wrote:
It's about time to push this map forward.

[ffstar’s Insane]
01:23:366 (3,4,5) - It sounds like a custom clap is overused here to me. Consider adding a default normal-hit (by changing the sampleset to Normal) or a Normal custom whistle like Mintong did on his Insane difficulty to (4,5) instead. fixed

Call me back when you are done.

updated!

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 35699
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:夏空
Artist:Galileo Galilei
ArtistUnicode:ガリレオガリレイ
Creator:Mintong
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:Big Windup!
Tags:Ookiku Furikabutte おおきく振りかぶって おお振り Oofuri mintong89 KevinKang ffstar0716
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KSHR

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KSHR 2014-05-18T07:18:39+00:00

Sorry, but there are some things to fix!

[General]

Artist Unicode: ガリレオ・ガリレイ
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From the opening video.

[Easy]

00:14:477 - The song folder includes a custom normal-hitnormal sound, there needs to add 2 green lines automatically if you fix as I suggested.

KSHR

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KSHR 2014-05-18T07:29:11+00:00

Okay~ everything should be ready to get ranked! Gratz~

EDIT: Added the heart icon.. Orz

mintong89

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mintong89 2014-05-18T07:30:42+00:00

Thanks you KSHR

~~这么烂的图 (除了gd) 也能rank, 我已准备被黑了~~

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ffstar 2014-05-18T07:33:26+00:00

yay lel

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Grats Mint

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Rukaru 2014-05-18T09:22:48+00:00

congratulation mint!

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Asagi Mutsuki 2014-05-18T10:14:05+00:00

gratz mint!

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Mintong <3

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Gratz Mintong~
F U ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffstar0716 djhad. Gratz~

Naryuga

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<3
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aaa 我爱米桶!!!

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hemicer 2014-12-24T00:23:34+00:00

This map isn't working for me. Please help or fix - thanks!

Edit: Never mind. It works when I take the "video" option off -- probably an update glitch. >.<

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