Hello~
Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore
~General~ - Add
Strike Witches to tags?
- Combocolors should be consistent through diffs, you're using a different color for every diff. Same with background colors I guess, there's no need to change them between diffs.
~Pants~ - Feels pretty linear and repetitive, maybe you should make other kind of patterns =x
- Remove all the unnecessary combocolors (3,4,5). If you're using only 2 colors there's no need to use every slot, it causes confusing things like 2 different combos being the same colour:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037800:01:625 (2) - Allign properly with (2)?
00:05:502 (1) - OH GOD What is this doing here! D:!
00:08:155 (1) - Allign properly with (5)?
00:12:237 (1) - Besides being maybe a too short spiner for the easiest diff, its endpoint is too near from the next note. You should leave a bit more of space to leave newbies a bit of recovery time~
00:17:951 (6) - Allign properly with (5)?
00:29:788 (2) - Allign properly with (1)?
00:32:645 (1) - There's probably something way better to do here instead of leaving that slider repeating for a while :c
01:11:421 (4) - Allign properly with (2,3)?
~Skirt~ - Remove all the unnecessary combocolors (3,4,5). If you're using only 2 colors there's no need to use every slot, it causes confusing things like 2 different combos being the same colour:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5038100:32:645 (2) - There's probably something way better to do here instead of leaving that slider repeating for a while :c
01:05:706 (1) - Fix spacing here? If this is supposed to be a Normal-ish diff, you shouldn't use jumps =x
01:07:747 (3) - Fix spacing here.
01:09:380 (3) - Fix spacing here too? Same reason as the first one.
01:10:196 (1) - ^
01:11:829 (1) - ^
~Pantsu~ - Remove all the unnecessary combocolors (3,4,5). If you're using only 2 colors there's no need to use every slot, it causes confusing things like 2 different combos being the same colour:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50383 - Why are you using your custom hitsounds only in this difficulty? What is the difference between the others D:
00:19:380 (6) - Fix spacing here.
00:50:196 (4) - Add a New Combo here to mark the spacing change.
~Waka's Breezy~ - Remove all the unnecessary combocolors (3,4,5). If you're using only 2 colors there's no need to use every slot, it causes confusing things like 2 different combos being the same colour:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5038400:17:135 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This looks pretty messy, could you arrange it to be a bit more clean? =x
00:19:788 (1) - You should move this away, the reverse arrow is kind of hidden...
00:22:033 (1) - I don't like this antijump at all, it looks like if the stream is going on and there's no space between those notes >:
00:27:645 (6,7) - 1/4 jumps?! No way! D:
00:29:278 (6,7) - ^
01:22:441 (4,5,6,7) - Again, this looks pretty messy :c
01:23:972 (13,1) - 1/4 jumps?! No way! D:
Not bad but could be better, specially the easiest diff, it feels pretty plain ;_; but Pantsu is fun xP
Good luck with this~