Studio EIM - Crescent Moon Island Boss Theme · forum

Squichu

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-09-07T18:08:08+00:00

hi there, mod from my queue! :3
I don't have much experience in modding high bpm songs, so sorry if this gets short ~ ;-;

General

background imagee should be 1366x768px or 1024x768px so it doesn't get resized

Easy
looks really nice rhythm-wise but you can definitely improve flow and visuals!

example 'flow' - 00:01:397 (1,2) - take a look here pls
green shows the movement you would expect and red how you actually have to move, so you should place (2) further to the left
cause even if the song has a rather aggressive character and 'abrupt' or 'broken' flow seems to fit it's better for easier diffs to have them flow smoothly, so beginners can focus on rhythm
and there are several more of them!
00:11:164 (3,1) -
00:13:257 (2,1) -
00:18:141 (1,2) -
00:29:303 (1,2) -
00:32:792 (2,3) -
00:41:513 (2,3) -
01:01:048 (2,3) -
01:28:955 (2,3) -
I only listed the ones that (imo) could be greatly improved, but there are more where moving them a few pixels works better!
If you want to fix some of them and need help with it pm me, I might be able to show some alternatives!
example 'visuals' - 01:53:722 (1,2) - blanket is off, make sure objects 'interact' with each other in easier diffs, it's a beginner's guide through the diff!
00:02:792 (2,1,2) -
01:58:606 (1,2) -
also, I'd suggest to snap red anchors as in 00:06:978 (1) - to some tick, cause sliders look in most cases better balanced then c:
hope you get what I mean.. Dx
00:10:466 (2,3) - DS is off here!
01:33:490 (1,1) - imo the object is to close to the spinner (on the timeline). beginners don't spin around the center, they can't re-adjust their aim fast enough here, same here - 01:55:815 (1,1) -

Normal

this diff needs a break! even if it's just 3-5 seconds, even standard Normal-players can't focus for 2 minutes without resting for a tiny little bit. x:
same about flow/visuals as in Normal
as I said I can go more into detail here, if you want. just send pm
00:01:396 (1,2,3) - I agree with Gray Veyron here, you should blanket this better, although I'd prefer if you don't have overlapping sliders like this as it might be very confusing (even for Normal-players)
similar here - 01:11:861 (2,3,1) - and 01:39:070 (1,2,3) -
00:05:233 (2) - move to 488|148 for better flow
00:09:768 (1) - imo the spinner shouldn't end on the downbeat, you can emphasize it faaar better if you place a circle or start of slider at 00:12:558
00:32:093 (1) - shape looks a bit out of place to me. maybe you could use a simpler curved slider for this, kind of like an extended, mirrored version of 00:34:186 (2) - ? that'd look better
00:56:861 (4,1) - cause of stack leniency (4) overlaps with 00:55:814 (3) - while playing. therefore you should place (1) at 484|260. it's not stacked in the editor then, but while playing it'll look like it!
you'd just have to move 00:58:256 (2,3) - too
similar - 01:42:558 (2,3,1) -

Hard

I don't get why this diff is longer than the easier ones. (spinner at the end) you should remove it or map the part in other diffs too, for consistency throughout your spread
Break is not a must-have-by-all-means, but I'd still prefer if you add one here, too. the diff is pretty tiring and as it looks now the gap between Normal and Hard diff is pretty huge. You should work on making this diff easier in order to get a better balanced spread
I don't get some jumps, for example 00:20:233 (9,10,1) - . you have to jump from (9) to (10), but the beat is clearly louder at (1), so the jump should be from (10) to (1) instead, no?
you do it perfectly at some other parts (eg 00:24:942 (5,6) - ), so why not evrywhere? ;-;
00:43:256 (1,2) - blanket? o:
01:54:419 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam doesn't make any sense to me. ono

really short mod, sorry. :/
hope something was helpful tho
Good luck!
*squee*

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-09-09T00:24:59+00:00

Xanandra wrote:
Hello

[Timing]

Hmm, timing seemed a bit wrong to me, I got -10 from current (1386) but since im not sure about my timing skills either... well. Will ask someone to check timing in the future too

[Hard]

01:22:239 (5) - Only place where you use this 1/4 this way, pretty inconsistent, so either take it out, or add notes at 01:11:076 - 01:16:657 - 01:27:820 - Although for the sake of making it easier, just take it out. Took the triplets out

[Normal]

02:01:396 - Why no spinner? Added

Also, you should map a middle diff between your current normal and hard, and call it hard, rename current hard to insane, current insane to extra. Will think of this

Thanks for mods!

Gray Veyron wrote:
Hi, From V&V's Modding Queue!

VINDICTUS! 8D Omg, The song just broke my Interior Speakers, it's too loud ;_;
[> General <]
- Your background is widescreen-ed? I thought the size should be 1366x768. Resized
[> Normal <]
00:01:396 (1,3) - The X-vy formation looks fine here, but i prefer this for better blanket and flowing Fixed
> http://puu.sh/bpolw/3dd386961d.png
00:05:233 (2,3,4) - Recorrect the triangle and the blanket here. Keep for blanket between 2 and 4, but it's a god suggestion tho
00:13:954 (2) - Move to x:200 or a bit lower for nicer blanket. Altho sometimes it look nicer, but I'm referring to the AR circle
00:18:140 (1,2) - Same as above, but you know what to do. Keep, make it in the mapping area
00:27:558 (2,3,4) - Flow broke much here, try making a parallel or just curve them. Doesn't seem broke imo
00:41:861 (3,4) - You've almost made a good symmetry here... Rearrange them equally. I didn't design it as a symmetry pattern if you realize
01:00:000 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:27:558 (2,3,4) - recommended a blanket here. Not sure if I can make it with current space but I'll consider it
01:11:861 (2,1) - I don't really like this overlap much, why not try the thing you did on 00:01:396 (1,3) -. Should be not much problem imo
01:37:675 (3,4) - Same as 00:27:558 (2,3,4) - Keep for 2 straight slider pattern
01:39:070 (1,3) - Same as 00:01:396 (1,3) - ^
01:57:209 (3) - Curve like the next one, better flowing. Keep to remain the pattern for the next mod as well
02:00:000 (2) - ^, or a blanket here? ^
- Not a very-much work here! But in this diff, the starting looks lazy, by then, it came up good. This is just my opinion for this diff >_> lol, less notes doesn't mean lazy, I wouldn't map a hard if I'm lazy enough, just not to make it too hard
[> Hard <]
00:01:396 (1) - Curve? nothing special came up for the song track. Keep, straight slider let players feels like a slider at the beginning imo
00:14:302 (6) - ^, Blanket each other? Did that if im not wrong
00:23:372 (8) - ^, Symmetry with slider (7). Tried it before, awkward pattern imo
00:34:535 (8,1) - How about a bigger space here, since the beat is strong here, spacing should be a little bigger here. tbh there's no more space haha, jk, I try to remain same space between 3 previous sliders
00:52:849 (5) - Instead of stacking, Move this circle (5) to x:96|y:276 for a triangle formation, although flow would be a little nicer here. Yep, keep for flow, and dont want a sudden jump there
01:13:954 (1,2,3,4) - imo, this pattern is too straightic, make a Square or a Diamond formation here. I map it on my playing experience, feel it's a better flow pattern
01:18:140 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:25:465 (3,4) - Ctrl + G? for a better playing spread.As mentioned before too, this one is based on how I map Insane XD
01:39:070 (1) - You should shorten this slider to a 1/2 beat slider and add a circle next to it. I can hear the intense percussion in the song track. Keep this to make the diff easier after the reverse slider, it was a stream before tho (imo I can't hear very strong thing there)
- Same comment as the previous diff, but likely a better one than before.
Good thing i didn't make a big mod like the other maps I've modded, since the mapping, right here, is great. I might think the Insane and Extra diff looks overmapped, but Well-played! I guess this is enough for me to mod this cool song.
(^3^)

Thanks for mods!

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-09-09T04:08:34+00:00

arghhhhh... i have done quite a lot of reply then it suddenly dissapeared zzzz
i am lazy to reply every mod again, if you really need it, please PM me
sorry for the inconvenience.

peppy should add auto-saved function to the forum orz

updated

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:Crescent Moon Island BGM
Artist:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
ArtistUnicode:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
Creator:Rakuen
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Source:마비노기 영웅전
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80,288,101163,2,0,B|184:224|184:224|188:280|240:316|296:288,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,101861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,132,102035,6,0,B|260:92|276:24|276:24|292:92|352:132,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,102733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,76,102907,6,0,L|320:48,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,92,103256,2,0,L|281:119,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,103605,2,0,L|276:200,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,103954,2,0,L|237:271,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104651,1,4,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104826,6,0,B|260:312|260:312|232:328|184:332|144:312|120:272|116:208|140:152|200:124|268:132|280:196,1,450,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,244,105872,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,236,106047,6,0,P|148:184|232:60,1,270,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,148,106744,2,0,B|328:152|376:112|376:112|444:104|500:144,1,270,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,138,107442,1,4,0:0:0:0:
236,148,107616,6,0,B|168:84|168:84|120:168|200:248,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,288,108314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,240,108489,2,0,L|444:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,108837,5,8,0:0:0:0:
286,250,109012,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,174,109187,2,0,L|394:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,109535,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,211,109710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,122,109885,2,0,L|308:15,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,110233,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,244,110407,6,0,B|160:144|160:144|104:196|4:168|12:112,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,80,111105,2,0,L|88:264,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,284,111628,2,0,P|88:344|168:232,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,264,112326,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,296,112500,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,332,112675,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,248,112849,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,164,113023,6,0,B|480:72|480:72|352:68|388:224,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,164,113721,2,0,B|32:72|32:72|160:68|124:224,1,270,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,114419,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,144,114593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,114768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,324,114942,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,232,115116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
340,292,115291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,115465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,232,115640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,64,115814,5,4,0:0:0:0:
180,120,115989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,132,116163,2,0,P|316:128|356:92,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,116512,2,0,L|376:356,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,288,116861,2,0,L|460:196,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,117209,5,2,0:0:0:0:
284,236,117384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,236,117558,2,0,L|196:236,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,212,117907,5,10,0:0:0:0:
196,212,118082,2,0,L|106:212,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,212,118605,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,118779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,60,118954,2,0,P|352:64|352:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,98,119302,2,0,L|252:100,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,100,119651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,98,119826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,32,120000,6,0,P|96:72|92:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,168,120349,2,0,P|248:128|252:92,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,120698,6,0,P|192:324|228:328,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,208,121047,2,0,P|255:176|212:168,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,300,121396,6,0,P|384:288|412:252,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,121744,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,88,121919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,48,122093,2,0,L|248:48,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,124,122442,2,0,L|312:124,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,232,122791,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,268,122965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,296,123140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,320,123314,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,320,123489,5,10,0:0:0:0:
276,296,123663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,268,123837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,232,124012,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,208,124186,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,124273,12,0,126802,0:0:0:0:

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2014-09-29T16:40:54+00:00

Nah Rakuen, Insane >>>> http://puu.sh/bSLd7/ee232f3f03.osu

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2014-09-30T17:51:33+00:00

Awesome

plz rank!!

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2014-09-30T17:58:00+00:00

Just looking at your map again and to throw a star , no kd.

Insane Collab

* 00:26:512 (1) - I don't really understand why this should be a 3/4 slider. Your rhythm in the KIAI only used 3/4 sliders when there are 2 cymbal sounds like 00:23:721 (1,2) - and 00:34:884 (1,2) - , but I only hear one sound here - like 00:32:093 (1) - and 00:37:675 (1) - . I highly recommend changing this into a 1/2 slider.
* 01:13:954 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not a very big issue, but this got a little boring while playing - especially because 01:19:535 (1,2,3,4) - is already repeating a lot. Maybe rotate the 4 notes after each combo?
* 01:33:750 (1) - Extend to the large white tick? Like 01:42:122 (1) - ?
* 01:36:541 (1) - ^
* 01:39:244 (1) - teach me so awesome ;_;
* 01:53:808 (2) - ^ this stream so awesome ;_;

rank this pls

Vertify

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Vertify 2014-10-06T19:05:45+00:00

Came here to mod - Played auto in [Extra] and I just came.
[ -Scarlet- ]- You're a mapping god.

Bonzi

213 posts

Joined January 2012

Bonzi 2014-10-06T20:21:28+00:00

Hey there!

[General]

The background image is 1366x854, which differs from the reccomended size of 1366x768. I made a 1366x768 version, take it if you want. http://puu.sh/c1Yk6/4f1dda637b.jpg

[ -Scarlet-'s Extra]

00:12:209 (1,1,1,1) - Even if it's an extra, that's quite difficult to read, because some circles are covered by the previous slider. Consider changing it.
00:17:878 (2,3,4,1) - Stack them manually, in play mode it looks confusing.
01:39:244 (1) - This is confused me a bit when i played it :/ (it reminds me of a violin key actually, cool)

[Insane Collab]

01:19:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern doesn't suit the rest of the map and it's inappropriate, i highly suggest you to change it to something simpler.

[ffstar's Insane]

00:57:733 (2) - Little playability issue, almost breaked there. Some players may see it as a full stream while it isn't. What about moving it on X: 152 / Y: 44?
01:11:163 (1,2,3) - Almost thinked it was 1/4 here, because of the low spacing between the beats. Maybe you could use 1,0x distance snap?

[Hard]

00:43:256 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better

Didn't found anything wrong on Normal and Easy.

I had a lot of fun playing the Extra, good luck with this, and have my star! \:D/

cmn_891127

1,308 posts

Joined July 2010

cmn_891127 2014-10-08T03:04:34+00:00

实在是好喜欢这个音乐~

[Genernal]
I don't like the hitnormal, it is really tooooooo soft (I love soft-hitnormal10, but it is not fitted the KIAI part of this song...). Normal-hitnormal.wav is much better.

[Normal]
01:27:209 (4,1) - you forgot a note at 01:27:733?

[Hard]
00:11:163 (5) - how about 3/4 slider? or triple slider/stream?
00:15:349 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:19:186 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111760
00:26:512 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111763
01:04:535 (7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111765

[Insane]
00:49:012 (1,2) - they are not quiet easy to read. Just a suggestion..., you can replace them to a reverse slider.
01:02:442 (5,1) - I prefer to stack at the beginning of (5)
01:04:709 (2) - stack on note (3)

[Easy]
没什么好mod的

[Extra]
打不动，变速太丧尽天良了，CS5接受不能

Lerq

Lerq 2014-10-24T22:38:48+00:00

Scarlet's extra best map 2k14

gogo ranked

FlobuFlobs

610 posts

Joined June 2011

FlobuFlobs 2014-11-13T23:36:03+00:00

Well for M4M

[Collab Insane]

Check your AImod lol, unsnapped objects and uninherited timing points
00:14:651 (3) - I would suggest to place a slider instead, it emphasizes way better and fits to the other placements you did like 00:16:047 (3) - 00:17:442 (4) - 00:18:837 (3) -
at the moment it feels like you are ignoring the beat
00:25:814 - how about placing here 2 cirles in triangle flow instead? the instrument you are following is stronger there than 00:25:116 - 00:25:465 -
it would emphasize better
Some parts are difficult to read because of kinda random feeling 1/4 and 1/2 spacing, for example: 00:35:233 (2,3) - looks almost like 00:36:453 (2,3) - and there are many of those parts, how is the player supposed to read that?
00:37:151 (5,6) - flow here is bad, 00:35:756 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you are making here a oval flow but which is already not the easiest to read you are automaticly sightreading and suggestion its somewhere near 00:36:453 (2) - but then you are making a flowbreak with a way too long jump to a beat which doesnt need so much emphasizing.

Change the jump pattern and spacing >_>
01:09:768 - feels kinda strange to ignore this one, maybe space the stream there or curve it or do something, it feels wrong to ignore it.
just like 01:09:768 -
01:19:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - uuuuhhh baby please no, this is horrible to play, its like random mashing and hoping to not break the slider after this long streaming part, it can be extremly frustrating

[ffstar's Insane]

00:09:419 (4,5,1) - Holy crap, whats up with this 1/4 spacing.
compared to the other 1/4 jumps its "fuck spacing" 00:05:930 (1,2,3) -
00:09:942 (2,3,4) - Thats already hard to hit but then it goes 00:10:291 (4,1) - ALL the way down and you have to go up with this slider? 00:10:465 (1) - its horrible to play, and has a horrible flow
you could fix it like that:
SPOILER
00:11:163 (1,2) - heres again such high distance follow by low spacing which could be readet as 1/4 00:11:337 (2,3,4,5) - , reduce spacing
00:17:442 (1) - why are you ignoring this loud beat? please do something
01:11:163 (1,2,3) - not sure if its readable after this 1/4 part but i think its fine
01:29:302 (1) - do you miss a finish here? shouldnt it sound like 01:27:907 (1) - ?
01:44:302 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - lol dick pattern

[Hard]

00:14:302 (6,7) - flow seems abit weird here, from this movement here it looks like oval flow 00:13:954 (5,6) - but it isnt, you have to stop the cursor completly and go all the way back.
the next circle should start 00:14:651 (7) - here
00:58:605 (6) - it can just be me but it feels so wrong to place a circle here, you can ignore it
01:22:326 (1) - 01:23:721 (1) - why do you ignore the 1/2 beats but then you are mapping them 01:27:907 (1,2,3) - here? change the slider to circles and add at 1/2 one?

I Hate the scarlet diff....

well... lol

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-11-22T19:26:26+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there, mod from my queue! :3
I don't have much experience in modding high bpm songs, so sorry if this gets short ~ ;-;

General
background imagee should be 1366x768px or 1024x768px so it doesn't get resized
Normal
this diff needs a break! even if it's just 3-5 seconds, even standard Normal-players can't focus for 2 minutes without resting for a tiny little bit. x:
same about flow/visuals as in Normal Not needed i guess
as I said I can go more into detail here, if you want. just send pm
00:01:396 (1,2,3) - I agree with Gray Veyron here, you should blanket this better, although I'd prefer if you don't have overlapping sliders like this as it might be very confusing (even for Normal-players) Remapped this part
similar here - 01:11:861 (2,3,1) - and 01:39:070 (1,2,3) - ok
00:05:233 (2) - move to 488|148 for better flow Remapped this part
00:09:768 (1) - imo the spinner shouldn't end on the downbeat, you can emphasize it faaar better if you place a circle or start of slider at 00:12:558 Remapped this part
00:32:093 (1) - shape looks a bit out of place to me. maybe you could use a simpler curved slider for this, kind of like an extended, mirrored version of 00:34:186 (2) - ? that'd look betterRemapped this part
00:56:861 (4,1) - cause of stack leniency (4) overlaps with 00:55:814 (3) - while playing. therefore you should place (1) at 484|260. it's not stacked in the editor then, but while playing it'll look like it!
you'd just have to move 00:58:256 (2,3) - too
similar - 01:42:558 (2,3,1) - Remapped this part
Hard
I don't get why this diff is longer than the easier ones. (spinner at the end) you should remove it or map the part in other diffs too, for consistency throughout your spread Added a new diff
Break is not a must-have-by-all-means, but I'd still prefer if you add one here, too. the diff is pretty tiring and as it looks now the gap between Normal and Hard diff is pretty huge. You should work on making this diff easier in order to get a better balanced spread ^
I don't get some jumps, for example 00:20:233 (9,10,1) - . you have to jump from (9) to (10), but the beat is clearly louder at (1), so the jump should be from (10) to (1) instead, no?
you do it perfectly at some other parts (eg 00:24:942 (5,6) - ), so why not evrywhere? ;-; Remapped this part
00:43:256 (1,2) - blanket? o: slider tail'd be covered
01:54:419 (1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam doesn't make any sense to me. ono Will look at this in final check
really short mod, sorry. :/
hope something was helpful tho
Good luck!
*squee*

Thanks for mods!

appleeaterx wrote:
Just looking at your map again and to throw a star , no kd.
Insane Collab

* 00:26:512 (1) - I don't really understand why this should be a 3/4 slider. Your rhythm in the KIAI only used 3/4 sliders when there are 2 cymbal sounds like 00:23:721 (1,2) - and 00:34:884 (1,2) - , but I only hear one sound here - like 00:32:093 (1) - and 00:37:675 (1) - . I highly recommend changing this into a 1/2 slider.
* 01:13:954 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not a very big issue, but this got a little boring while playing - especially because 01:19:535 (1,2,3,4) - is already repeating a lot. Maybe rotate the 4 notes after each combo? Remapped
* 01:33:750 (1) - Extend to the large white tick? Like 01:42:122 (1) - ? Fixed
* 01:36:541 (1) - ^ Fixed
* 01:39:244 (1) - [/color]teach me so awesome ;_;
* 01:53:808 (2) - ^ this stream so awesome ;_;

rank this pls

Thanks for mods!

ThEBonzi wrote:
Hey there!

[General]
The background image is 1366x854, which differs from the reccomended size of 1366x768. I made a 1366x768 version, take it if you want. http://puu.sh/c1Yk6/4f1dda637b.jpg
[Insane Collab]
01:19:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern doesn't suit the rest of the map and it's inappropriate, i highly suggest you to change it to something simpler.Remapped
[Hard]
00:43:256 (1,2) - Blanket could be done better Slidertail'd be covered
Didn't found anything wrong on Normal and Easy.

I had a lot of fun playing the Extra, good luck with this, and have my star! \:D/

Thanks for mods!

cmn_891127 wrote:
实在是好喜欢这个音乐~

[Genernal]
I don't like the hitnormal, it is really tooooooo soft (I love soft-hitnormal10, but it is not fitted the KIAI part of this song...). Normal-hitnormal.wav is much better. Ok, used another hitsound

[Normal]
01:27:209 (4,1) - you forgot a note at 01:27:733? Fixed

[Hard]
00:11:163 (5) - how about 3/4 slider? or triple slider/stream? Remapped
00:15:349 (1) - Ctrl+G Keep for the pattern
00:19:186 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111760 Remapped
00:26:512 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111763 Keep for the pattern
01:04:535 (7,8) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111765 Keep for the pattern

[Insane]
00:49:012 (1,2) - they are not quiet easy to read. Just a suggestion..., you can replace them to a reverse slider. Remapped
01:02:442 (5,1) - I prefer to stack at the beginning of (5) It's a doubles
01:04:709 (2) - stack on note (3) Keep for the arrangement

[Easy]
没什么好mod的

[Extra]
打不动，变速太丧尽天良了，CS5接受不能

Thanks for mods!

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Well for M4M

[Collab Insane]
Check your AImod lol, unsnapped objects and uninherited timing points Fixed
00:14:651 (3) - I would suggest to place a slider instead, it emphasizes way better and fits to the other placements you did like 00:16:047 (3) - 00:17:442 (4) - 00:18:837 (3) - Keep
at the moment it feels like you are ignoring the beat
00:25:814 - how about placing here 2 cirles in triangle flow instead? the instrument you are following is stronger there than 00:25:116 - 00:25:465 -
it would emphasize better Mapped with other pattern
Some parts are difficult to read because of kinda random feeling 1/4 and 1/2 spacing, for example: 00:35:233 (2,3) - looks almost like 00:36:453 (2,3) - and there are many of those parts, how is the player supposed to read that?
00:37:151 (5,6) - flow here is bad, 00:35:756 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you are making here a oval flow but which is already not the easiest to read you are automaticly sightreading and suggestion its somewhere near 00:36:453 (2) - but then you are making a flowbreak with a way too long jump to a beat which doesnt need so much emphasizing.

Change the jump pattern and spacing >_>
01:09:768 - feels kinda strange to ignore this one, maybe space the stream there or curve it or do something, it feels wrong to ignore it.
just like 01:09:768 -
01:19:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - uuuuhhh baby please no, this is horrible to play, its like random mashing and hoping to not break the slider after this long streaming part, it can be extremly frustrating

[Hard]
00:14:302 (6,7) - flow seems abit weird here, from this movement here it looks like oval flow 00:13:954 (5,6) - but it isnt, you have to stop the cursor completly and go all the way back.
the next circle should start 00:14:651 (7) - here
00:58:605 (6) - it can just be me but it feels so wrong to place a circle here, you can ignore it
01:22:326 (1) - 01:23:721 (1) - why do you ignore the 1/2 beats but then you are mapping them 01:27:907 (1,2,3) - here? change the slider to circles and add at 1/2 one?

I Hate the scarlet diff....

well... lol

No reply = remapped

Thanks for mods!

Added a new diff between Normal and Hard (current Hard > Light Insane)

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-11-23T03:07:34+00:00

FlobuFlobs wrote:
Well for M4M

[ffstar's Insane]
00:09:419 (4,5,1) - Holy crap, whats up with this 1/4 spacing.
compared to the other 1/4 jumps its "fuck spacing" 00:05:930 (1,2,3) - ~~i don't see any problem here, a heavy beat on the last note so a make i jump for that~~ k i changed my mind, adjusted
00:09:942 (2,3,4) - Thats already hard to hit but then it goes 00:10:291 (4,1) - ALL the way down and you have to go up with this slider? 00:10:465 (1) - its horrible to play, and has a horrible flow if you compare with 00:10:465 (1,2,3,4) - , those note are like "up down up down up down" flow (N flow)
you could fix it like that:
SPOILER
00:11:163 (1,2) - heres again such high distance follow by low spacing which could be readet as 1/4 00:11:337 (2,3,4,5) - , reduce spacing k adjusted a bit
00:17:442 (1) - why are you ignoring this loud beat? please do something like what? o.o, i thought i increased the spacing
01:11:163 (1,2,3) - not sure if its readable after this 1/4 part but i think its fine i hope so ><
01:29:302 (1) - do you miss a finish here? shouldnt it sound like 01:27:907 (1) - ? no
01:44:302 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - lol dick pattern lel

well... lol

thanks for the mod

updated

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: bgm_s2ep1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 71163
Countdown: 0
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Artist:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
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Creator:Rakuen
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:마비노기 영웅전
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Rakuen

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Rakuen 2014-11-23T11:57:43+00:00

Updated with combo color change

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-12-10T12:22:03+00:00

recheck

NO KD

General

change the bg with 1366x854 size which is larger than 1366x768 and unrankble
soft-hitfinish10.wav, soft-hitnormal10 have larger delay than 3ms, avoid that plz.
rearrange all hitnormal's volume in the whole diffset (except ex diff), most of time they're just really kind of noising.

【 -Scarlet- 】's Extra

00:05:582 (1,2) - larger ds plz, no more explaination.
00:12:209 (1,1,1,1) - avoid nc spam and arrange ds to same ones, this is a highly recommended.
00:14:302 (3) - and 00:14:651 (5) - add nc to give better version in readding these patterns.
00:24:419 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - do same nc settings like 00:27:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , yeah i know there r notes in star shape, but it'll still be better to change it.
01:24:768 (3,4) - ctrl+g to give better jump flow, the current version plays a bit odd to me.
02:04:012 (7,1) - shorter the jump, it's quiet part of the song here.
not sure 01:33:663 (2) - and 01:39:244 (1) - r rankble indeed or not, ask some other bats to check these, especially the 2nd one, try to give a similar version like this: http://puu.sh/doLYm/28dac17500.jpg (and maybe 01:36:454 (1) - as well.

Insane Collab

disable wide screen support. and in hard diff as well.
00:06:977 (1,2) - larger ds here for u give similar 1/4 jumps with same ds before. same to all 1/2 jumps like this, arrange them by urselves.

ffstar's Insane

00:26:512 (1) - move the 2nd control point to 344,200 is better to me with that anti-flow to emphasis the downbeat.
00:30:000 (1) - ctrl+g this feel better a lot, try it by urself, no more explain.
01:57:558 (3,2) - don't overlap the arrow.
this diff's ds r too random to me...

Light Insane

01:29:651 (3) - ctrl+g. all anti-flow here's much better than current verstion (to me.
01:54:419 (1,1,1,1) - still think these'r just nc spam... orz.

theramdan's Easy

01:33:490 (1,1) - need a at least4/1 gap after a spinner in easy diff, this is a must fix. try another rhythm style, end spinner at 01:34:884 or just remove it. same to 01:55:815 (1,1) - as well.

hard and normal diff r fine to me.

but Insane Collab and ffstar's Insane diff really need more work on it to me. ask 2-3 mod to both of them to improve since it's not updated for long time.

poke me later, i'll do a recheck again.

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2014-12-12T13:16:18+00:00

Xanandra wrote:
Hello

[Timing]

Hmm, timing seemed a bit wrong to me, I got -10 from current (1386) but since im not sure about my timing skills either... well.

[Extra]

00:13:954 (1,2,3,4) - This played pretty bad imo, I didnt understand why the use of 1/4 sliders at all, I would just take them away. Remapped this part
00:17:355 - Add note here? Changed 00:17:268 (2) to 1/4 slide instead~
00:30:000 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Omg, this played very very sexy, dont change them ever. LOL, made a slighttt- changes at this part @
00:46:047 (7) - Dangerous slider, since the body has been covered almost entirely Remapped
00:47:093 (1) - Just minor suggestion, maybe change the direction (like a 90 degree rotation) or increase even further the spacing to highlight these two beats 00:47:093 - 00:47:268 - better (if you do this, taking out NC in 00:46:919 (1) - 00:47:268 (1) - might be a good idea) Kinda, rotated 00:46:919 (2,1) position
00:59:477 (1,2) - Change these two circles, so you can emphasize better the whateve rthing is called that starts at 00:59:651 Alright~
01:32:093 (1) - Minor, maybe move this to X:416 Y:212 Great~ Adjusted

Thanks for the mod~

ThEBonzi wrote:
Hey there!

[ -Scarlet-'s Extra]
00:12:209 (1,1,1,1) - Even if it's an extra, that's quite difficult to read, because some circles are covered by the previous slider. Consider changing it. Remapped~
00:17:878 (2,3,4,1) - Stack them manually, in play mode it looks confusing. I think it's already stack
01:39:244 (1) - This is confused me a bit when i played it :/ (it reminds me of a violin key actually, cool) ~ Maybe will adjust the slider a little

Thanks for the mod~

Hollow Wings wrote:
recheck

【 -Scarlet- 】's Extra
00:05:582 (1,2) - larger ds plz, no more explaination. Okay~
00:12:209 (1,1,1,1) - avoid nc spam and arrange ds to same ones, this is a highly recommended. Changed pattern, remove NC. Hope is better @@
00:14:302 (3) - and 00:14:651 (5) - add nc to give better version in readding these patterns. Alright~
00:24:419 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - do same nc settings like 00:27:209 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , yeah i know there r notes in star shape, but it'll still be better to change it. Hmm.... I guess so. Fixed NCs
01:24:768 (3,4) - ctrl+g to give better jump flow, the current version plays a bit odd to me. Changed.
02:04:012 (7,1) - shorter the jump, it's quiet part of the song here.Okay, fixed~
not sure 01:33:663 (2) - and 01:39:244 (1) - r rankble indeed or not, ask some other bats to check these, especially the 2nd one, try to give a similar version like this: http://puu.sh/doLYm/28dac17500.jpg (and maybe 01:36:454 (1) - as well.See what others have to say about these slider first only I'll make changes. About the 2nd one, hope if better~

Thanks for the mod~

Nah ET >>>> http://puu.sh/drAtS/b0ffcdc610.osu

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-12-12T15:00:34+00:00

omg I forget that I have GD on this
Forgive me Rakuen please dont ban me ;A;

I missed so many mods that I should apply

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-12-12T18:13:47+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
recheck

NO KD

ffstar's Insane
00:26:512 (1) - move the 2nd control point to 344,200 is better to me with that anti-flow to emphasis the downbeat. no, it's quite weird with this kind of anti-flow
00:30:000 (1) - ctrl+g this feel better a lot, try it by urself, no more explain. changed
01:57:558 (3,2) - don't overlap the arrow. moved
this diff's ds r too random to me...

hard and normal diff r fine to me.

but Insane Collab and ffstar's Insane diff really need more work on it to me. ask 2-3 mod to both of them to improve since it's not updated for long time.

poke me later, i'll do a recheck again.

updated

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:Crescent Moon Island BGM
Artist:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
ArtistUnicode:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
Creator:Rakuen
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:마비노기 영웅전
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Leiwa

575 posts

Joined July 2012

Leiwa 2014-12-13T14:58:13+00:00

for M4M
Excuse me for noob English
[General]

BG is larger than 1366*768
use this http://puu.sh/dsW9e/5643a31663.jpg

[ffstar's Insane]

00:09:593 (5) - Try like this. This is better flow
SPOILER
00:09:942 (2,3,4) - Try like this. This is better flow
SPOILER
00:11:337 (2) - Try like this. This is better flow
SPOILER
00:12:733 - 00:23:547 -
Song get more high, but this part is easier than the before.
＋ Spacing is really broken like 00:12:907 (3,4) - or 00:20:930 (1,2).
Tbh, I recommend you to remap this part to make better spacing.
00:27:907 (4,5,6) - I think repeat of 00:27:209 (1,2,3) - is nice.
or my way (ofc, I changed rhythm)
SPOILER
00:31:221 (4,5,6) - Try like this. This is better flow
SPOILER
00:36:279 (3,4) - Repeat of sliders?
01:02:791 (1) - It's so hard to read. Try like this.
SPOILER
01:11:337 (2,3) - Add NC to make easy to read
01:12:733 (2,3) - ^
01:23:721 (1,2,3) - Use same DS 01:22:326 (1,2,3) -
01:32:791 (1) - make perfect blanket
01:44:826 (1) - ^
01:50:407 (1) - ^
01:51:628 (3) - ^

[collab]

00:02:093 (3,4,5,6) - When I play, Their flow aren't good. Try like this.
SPOILER
00:05:930 (2) - 2nd tick make this slider ugly. Please remove this.
00:06:192 (3,4) - Please close to 00:05:930 (2) - end to make easy to read.
00:10:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I disagree with these stream jumps because they don't fit

music IMO.
00:12:907 (2) - Try like this. This is better flow and looks good.
SPOILER
00:15:349 (1,2) - why you need 3rd tick? Please remove this.
00:19:884 (3,4,5) - Try like this. This is better flow and looks good.
SPOILER
00:23:372 (1,1) - 3/8 sliders don't fit music IMO. Please make 1/4 sliders.
00:27:384 (4,5) - unti jump doesn't fit song. Try like this.
SPOILER
00:34:099 (7,1) - same as 00:10:465. I disagree.

01:22:675 (1) - hard to read. please consider to move (356,264)

[Extra]
[list]
[*]01:33:663 (2) - This suddenly slow down may be disQed issue like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153020

Good luck

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-12-13T15:58:17+00:00

Urushi38 wrote:
for M4M
Excuse me for noob English
[General]
BG is larger than 1366*768
use this http://puu.sh/dsW9e/5643a31663.jpg

[ffstar's Insane]
00:09:593 (5) - Try like this. This is better flow changed
SPOILER
00:09:942 (2,3,4) - Try like this. This is better flow changed
SPOILER
00:11:337 (2) - Try like this. This is better flow not that necessary i think
SPOILER
00:12:733 - 00:23:547 -
Song get more high, but this part is easier than the before.
＋ Spacing is really broken like 00:12:907 (3,4) - or 00:20:930 (1,2).
Tbh, I recommend you to remap this part to make better spacing. i already remapped but rakuen no update
00:27:907 (4,5,6) - I think repeat of 00:27:209 (1,2,3) - is nice. wow, so nice, thanks!
or my way (ofc, I changed rhythm)
SPOILER
00:31:221 (4,5,6) - Try like this. This is better flow nope
SPOILER
00:36:279 (3,4) - Repeat of sliders? not sure what you mean but you mean change to 1/4 repeat sliders? nope
01:02:791 (1) - It's so hard to read. Try like this. okay then, sad
SPOILER
01:11:337 (2,3) - Add NC to make easy to read okay
01:12:733 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:23:721 (1,2,3) - Use same DS 01:22:326 (1,2,3) - okay
01:32:791 (1) - make perfect blanket edited
01:44:826 (1) - ^ i cant make this ><
01:50:407 (1) - ^ edited
01:51:628 (3) - ^ edited
Good luck

updated

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: bgm_s2ep1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 71163
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 48838
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Crescent Moon Island BGM
TitleUnicode:Crescent Moon Island BGM
Artist:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
ArtistUnicode:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
Creator:Rakuen
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:마비노기 영웅전
Tags:theramdans [_-Scarlet-_] ffstar0716 mabinogi heroes vindictus nexon action mmorpg
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360,232,87732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,164,88605,5,8,0:0:0:0:
420,112,88779,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,184,88954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,236,89128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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296,208,90000,6,0,L|296:300,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,90349,2,0,L|384:362,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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344,100,90872,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,32,91047,1,10,0:0:0:0:
384,180,91221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,100,91570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,124,91744,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,196,91919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,24,92093,5,4,0:0:0:0:
344,100,92268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,248,92442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,24,92616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,208,93663,6,0,P|180:160|52:44,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,94361,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,72,94535,2,0,P|208:48|248:64,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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488,112,95582,2,0,B|500:208,1,90,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,95930,2,0,B|440:352,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,345,96279,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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176,216,97326,2,0,P|128:224|92:208,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,152,98721,2,0,L|508:152,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,99070,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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156,240,100291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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352,224,101861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,132,102035,6,0,B|260:92|276:24|276:24|292:92|352:132,1,270,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,102733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,76,102907,6,0,L|320:48,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,92,103256,2,0,L|281:119,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,103605,2,0,L|276:200,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,103954,2,0,L|237:271,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104302,1,10,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,348,104651,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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280,211,109710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,122,109885,2,0,L|308:15,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,244,110233,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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460,252,112849,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,164,113721,2,0,B|32:72|32:72|160:68|124:224,1,270,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,236,117384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,100,119651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,268,123837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,232,124012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,124273,12,0,126802,0:0:0:0:

Your Good Self

334 posts

Joined June 2012

Your Good Self 2014-12-13T17:25:30+00:00

M4M from t/141242

[General]

(only to some diffs)
02:06:802 - Hitsound at the end is a bit strange. How about using default soft-hitnormal just for this last note?

[theramdan's Easy]
00:30:350 (2) - Should bend on the downbeat, unless there's a special reason for doing it on the blue tick
01:25:117 (1) - ^

01:01:048 (2) - A single hitcircle here will do. Or a 1/1 slider. Should keep it simple for the easiest diff
01:06:629 (2) - ^
01:28:955 (2) - ^

01:33:490 (1) - End 2 beats earlier to give more recovery time. Giving a full measure of unmapped time can be painful, but you have to make an Easy, eh, easy?
01:53:722 (1,2) - Blanket?
01:55:815 (1) - Spinner doesn't feel right here. Break it up into the usual sliders and circles.

Don't quite agree with using 1/2 notes in Easy, with a BPM like this. Other than that, no major issue.

[Normal]
00:05:407 (3,4) - Unstack? Since 00:04:884 (2,3) already isn't stacked, it doesn't look nice to have only half the pattern stacked.
01:55:640 (5,1) - ^
02:01:221 (5,1) - ^

00:54:419 (1) - A straight middle section would have been fine imo
00:55:814 (3) - A simple, smooth circular slider would have been fine
00:55:814 (3,4) - When playtesting, these notes overlap, which doesn't look very nice.
00:55:814 (3,1) - Slight overlap between path of (3) and tail of (1)
01:11:861 (2) - Second half of the slider shape can be made smoother

SPOILER

Now:

Suggestion:

01:11:861 (2) - Blanket around 01:13:605 (3,1) (both if possible)
01:39:070 (1,4) - Overlap between path of (1) and tail of (4)
01:42:558 (2) - Simple circle curve here to make a clean slider bow with 01:44:651 (1)

[Hard]
00:08:198 (4,1) - Blanket could be *that* little bit better (hope I'm not nazimodding here). Look from 00:08:111
00:38:896 (3,1) - ^ (okay this is probably pushing it a bit) Look from 00:38:721
00:47:791 - Add 2 beat long kick slider?
00:57:907 (3) - Don't like how this slider is shaped. 00:23:721 (1) is still okay if you wanted to emphasize the kiai start, but this just feels out of place.
01:44:826 (2,3) - Just personal opinion but I think these are better unstacked

[Light Insane]
00:29:302 (1) - Move this point to x:140 y:280 to blanket better around 00:30:000 (3)
00:31:744 (6,1) - Blanket around tail of 00:31:396 (5) ?
00:43:256 (1,2) - Blanket can be better
01:54:768 (1,1,1) - Can remove the NCs here
01:58:605 (1,2,3) - Just a little idea I got, ignore if you don't like it

SPOILER

[ffstar's Insane]
00:11:861 (5) - Curve is a bit sharp
01:58:954 (3) - ^

00:21:279 (2,2) - Overlap
00:46:919 (2) - It'll flow better if you move this up, to x:256 y:56
00:53:023 (1) - Move this below 00:52:675 (4) for a bit better flow
01:02:442 (5,1) - Don't quite like how this pattern works
01:11:163 (1,2,3) - Should space this out, it's very easy to mistake this for a 1/4 pattern
01:12:558 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:837 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't feel right when 01:18:837 (1,2,3) all have the same spacing but 01:19:361 (4) is suddenly 2.0x
01:29:302 (1) - Very sharp and doesn't look/flow nice
01:42:035 (1,1) - Overlap is D:

some rough suggestion

01:46:047 (1,2) - Blanket can be better. Look from 01:46:614
01:54:768 (3,3) - Add finish

It would be great if you could reduce the spacing in some of the jumps, so that it gets easier overall and fits better with the overall difficulty curve of the mapset.

[Insane Collab]
00:17:442 (4) - Sharper curve, then blanket around 00:17:093 (2)
00:23:372 (1,1) - No need for NC here
00:23:721 (1,2) - Overlap

SPOILER

00:31:919 (6) - ctrl+H for better flow
00:34:884 (1) - End at where 00:35:233 (2) kinks
01:04:186 (1,2) - Overlap kind of annoying, but okay I guess
01:09:332 (5) - Slightly out of place. Move 1 grid to the right.
01:39:244 (1) - o.o <3
01:52:675 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well around here. More novel and interesting patterns could be done here too.
01:58:518 (7) - Move between 01:58:256 (6,1)

SPOILER

Nice map, now if only I could pass it D:
Not many issues I can find that aren't just simply "this is too difficult D:<"

[Thoughts]
Sorry I wasn't able to mod the harder diffs very well. They're slightly out of my playable range, so I can't give any concrete suggestions.
Also I started writing this quite some time ago, so feel free to ignore anything I wrote that's already been changed.

Difficulty curve from Light Insane to Insane is quite steep. From something I can easily play to something barely passable. In terms of star difficulty, its a jump from 3.47 to 4.98. Also the two Insanes are quite close together in terms of difficulty. I'd suggest either reducing the difficulty of one Insane to 4~4.5 stars, or map another one entirely.

Other than that, great maps, great song. Good luck!

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-12-13T18:13:34+00:00

Your Good Self wrote:
M4M from t/141242

[ffstar's Insane]
00:11:861 (5) - Curve is a bit sharp err, not sure what you mean but does sharp sliders make anything wrong?
01:58:954 (3) - ^

00:21:279 (2,2) - Overlap already remapped but what does overlap wrong in insane diff ><
00:46:919 (2) - It'll flow better if you move this up, to x:256 y:56 it feels really weird imo, seriously
00:53:023 (1) - Move this below 00:52:675 (4) for a bit better flow no, totally not ;w;
01:02:442 (5,1) - Don't quite like how this pattern works already edit that part in previous mod
01:11:163 (1,2,3) - Should space this out, it's very easy to mistake this for a 1/4 pattern intended
01:12:558 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:837 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't feel right when 01:18:837 (1,2,3) all have the same spacing but 01:19:361 (4) is suddenly 2.0x but you doesn't feel the same way as 01:17:442 (1,2,3,4) - did ;w; that jump is intended actually
01:29:302 (1) - Very sharp and doesn't look/flow nice sorry can you explain why sharp sliders = doesn't look/flow nice ><
01:42:035 (1,1) - Overlap is D: orz
some rough suggestion
01:46:047 (1,2) - Blanket can be better. Look from 01:46:614 ok, will do it for the next mod
01:54:768 (3,3) - Add finish no finish there ;w;

It would be great if you could reduce the spacing in some of the jumps, so that it gets easier overall and fits better with the overall difficulty curve of the mapset.

Other than that, great maps, great song. Good luck!

sorry i ignore all the mods, i dont really agree what you mentioned actually
this is Insane diff so i think sudden DS changing and overlapping are actually acceptable
also i really dunno why you hate sharp slider so much but it doesn't really feel wrong orz
thanks btw

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2014-12-14T06:03:06+00:00

from m4m
my map ::https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

[ffstar insane]

00:45:611 (2,3,4,5,6) - use same ds?

00:44:651 (1) - somehow i feel like this slider is out of place/ ugly

01:32:791 (1) - should make this flow with 01:32:616 (4) -
01:55:116 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing

[collab insane]
00:10:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:11:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

i feel like spacing is too large between the two .3x ds stream.. i think just increase DS just a bit on 00:10:814 (1,2,3,4) - like over here 00:12:209 (1) -
00:20:233 (5) - i think the curve should be the other way, flow feels weird when slider curves up to this part 00:20:582 (6) -

00:23:372 (1,1) - i feel SV slow down too much. everytime i play that part i get 100s

[light insane]

00:43:256 (1,2,3) - blanket?

sorry for short mod.. hope it's helpful

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-12-14T11:48:29+00:00

Aye, just wanted to say that the offset is really late. makes me getting 100s all the time und the extra :c
Please consder adding -20ms to your current offset. This set looks pretty interesting.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-12-17T21:43:30+00:00

Pho wrote:
Aye, just wanted to say that the offset is really late. makes me getting 100s all the time und the extra :c
Please consder adding -20ms to your current offset. This set looks pretty interesting.

Thanks!

Updated ffstar's Insane at p/3568601

Updated Scarlet's Extra at p/3565545

Updated background picture, combo color, and soft-hitnormal

Updated offset (-20) to 330ms

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2014-12-18T01:23:50+00:00

Urushi38 wrote:
for M4M
Excuse me for noob English

[collab]

01:22:675 (1) - hard to read. please consider to move (356,264) I don't think there's any problem here, just moved a little bit to the bottom @@

[Extra]
[list]
[*]01:33:663 (2) - This suddenly slow down may be disQed issue like this I guess so. For me this slider fits the song perfectly. Let's see what the BATs and others have to say about this
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153020

Good luck

Thanks for the mod~

Your Good Self wrote:
M4M from t/141242

[Insane Collab]

01:04:186 (1,2) - Overlap kind of annoying, but okay I guess Yea, overlapping should be fine here.
01:09:332 (5) - Slightly out of place. Move 1 grid to the right. I think it's fine as it is
01:39:244 (1) - o.o <3 Made a slighttt change here xd
01:52:675 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well around here. More novel and interesting patterns could be done here too. The flow is perfectly fine here. I think the pattern is good enough

Nice map, now if only I could pass it D:
Not many issues I can find that aren't just simply "this is too difficult D:<"

[Thoughts]
Sorry I wasn't able to mod the harder diffs very well. They're slightly out of my playable range, so I can't give any concrete suggestions.
Also I started writing this quite some time ago, so feel free to ignore anything I wrote that's already been changed.

Difficulty curve from Light Insane to Insane is quite steep. From something I can easily play to something barely passable. In terms of star difficulty, its a jump from 3.47 to 4.98. Also the two Insanes are quite close together in terms of difficulty. I'd suggest either reducing the difficulty of one Insane to 4~4.5 stars, or map another one entirely.

Other than that, great maps, great song. Good luck!

Thanks for the mod~

Nah ET >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> http://puu.sh/dz8x2/985ba20f3c.osu

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-12-18T02:06:56+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
Pho wrote:
Aye, just wanted to say that the offset is really late. makes me getting 100s all the time und the extra :c
Please consder adding -20ms to your current offset. This set looks pretty interesting.
Thanks!

Updated ffstar's Insane at p/3568601

Updated Scarlet's Extra at p/3565545

Updated background picture, combo color, and soft-hitnormal

Updated offset (-20) to 330ms

That really wasn't meant to be worth a KD lol

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-12-18T03:57:49+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
recheck

NO KD

General
change the bg with 1366x854 size which is larger than 1366x768 and unrankble
soft-hitfinish10.wav, soft-hitnormal10 have larger delay than 3ms, avoid that plz.
rearrange all hitnormal's volume in the whole diffset (except ex diff), most of time they're just really kind of noising.
Insane Collab
disable wide screen support. and in hard diff as well. Fixed
00:06:977 (1,2) - larger ds here for u give similar 1/4 jumps with same ds before. same to all 1/2 jumps like this, arrange them by urselves.Arranged a bit ds of notes in front
Light Insane
01:29:651 (3) - ctrl+g. all anti-flow here's much better than current verstion (to me. Keep, flow~
01:54:419 (1,1,1,1) - still think these'r just nc spam... orz.Reduced to 2 NC for music change
hard and normal diff r fine to me.

but Insane Collab and ffstar's Insane diff really need more work on it to me. ask 2-3 mod to both of them to improve since it's not updated for long time.

poke me later, i'll do a recheck again.

Fixed all general issues and asked few mods

Thanks!

Urushi38 wrote:
for M4M
Excuse me for noob English
[General]
BG is larger than 1366*768
use this http://puu.sh/dsW9e/5643a31663.jpg
[collab]
00:02:093 (3,4,5,6) - When I play, Their flow aren't good. Try like this. Fixed
SPOILER
00:05:930 (2) - 2nd tick make this slider ugly. Please remove this. Feel it's fine
00:06:192 (3,4) - Please close to 00:05:930 (2) - end to make easy to read. Previous 1/8 (s) use same DS
00:10:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I disagree with these stream jumps because they don't fit music IMO. Sorry, I feel it's okay to be there, not too hard
00:12:907 (2) - Try like this. This is better flow and looks good. Fixed
SPOILER
00:15:349 (1,2) - why you need 3rd tick? Please remove this. Fixed
00:19:884 (3,4,5) - Try like this. This is better flow and looks good. Keep, personal preference
SPOILER
00:23:372 (1,1) - 3/8 sliders don't fit music IMO. Please make 1/4 sliders. Fixed
00:27:384 (4,5) - unti jump doesn't fit song. Try like this. Fixed
SPOILER
00:34:099 (7,1) - same as 00:10:465. I disagree. As mentioned before

01:22:675 (1) - hard to read. please consider to move (356,264)
Good luck

Thanks for mods!

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2014-12-18T07:09:16+00:00

byfar wrote:
from m4m
my map ::https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

[ffstar insane]

00:45:611 (2,3,4,5,6) - use same ds? no

00:44:651 (1) - somehow i feel like this slider is out of place/ ugly i dont think so ;w;

01:32:791 (1) - should make this flow with 01:32:616 (4) - it's already flowed
01:55:116 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing the beats are getting stronger so no

sorry for short mod.. hope it's helpful

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-12-18T10:55:50+00:00

Your Good Self wrote:
M4M from t/141242

[General]

(only to some diffs)
02:06:802 - Hitsound at the end is a bit strange. How about using default soft-hitnormal just for this last note?

[Normal]
00:05:407 (3,4) - Unstack? Since 00:04:884 (2,3) already isn't stacked, it doesn't look nice to have only half the pattern stacked. Readable pattern
01:55:640 (5,1) - ^ ^
02:01:221 (5,1) - ^ ^

00:54:419 (1) - A straight middle section would have been fine imo Fixed
00:55:814 (3) - A simple, smooth circular slider would have been fine Fixed
00:55:814 (3,4) - When playtesting, these notes overlap, which doesn't look very nice. Fixed previous blanket
00:55:814 (3,1) - Slight overlap between path of (3) and tail of (1) ^
01:11:861 (2) - Second half of the slider shape can be made smoother Fixed
SPOILER
Now:

Suggestion:
01:11:861 (2) - Blanket around 01:13:605 (3,1) (both if possible) Fixed
01:39:070 (1,4) - Overlap between path of (1) and tail of (4) Dont get this
01:42:558 (2) - Simple circle curve here to make a clean slider bow with 01:44:651 (1) Keep, prefer this shape

[Hard]
00:08:198 (4,1) - Blanket could be *that* little bit better (hope I'm not nazimodding here). Look from 00:08:111 so detailed :\ , I'll leave it
00:38:896 (3,1) - ^ (okay this is probably pushing it a bit) Look from 00:38:721 kk
00:47:791 - Add 2 beat long kick slider? Break
00:57:907 (3) - Don't like how this slider is shaped. 00:23:721 (1) is still okay if you wanted to emphasize the kiai start, but this just feels out of place. Prefer the shape
01:44:826 (2,3) - Just personal opinion but I think these are better unstacked Fixed

[Light Insane]
00:29:302 (1) - Move this point to x:140 y:280 to blanket better around 00:30:000 (3) Fixed
00:31:744 (6,1) - Blanket around tail of 00:31:396 (5) ? Prefer this arrangement
00:43:256 (1,2) - Blanket can be better Not to block slider tail
01:54:768 (1,1,1) - Can remove the NCs here Reduced
01:58:605 (1,2,3) - Just a little idea I got, ignore if you don't like it Thanks, prefer only 2 weird shapes :p
SPOILER

[Insane Collab]
00:17:442 (4) - Sharper curve, then blanket around 00:17:093 (2) Sorry, prefer this shape
00:23:372 (1,1) - No need for NC here SV change
00:23:721 (1,2) - Overlap ?
SPOILER
00:31:919 (6) - ctrl+H for better flow not imo
00:34:884 (1) - End at where 00:35:233 (2) kinks Prefer to keep like this
01:04:186 (1,2) - Overlap kind of annoying, but okay I guess
01:09:332 (5) - Slightly out of place. Move 1 grid to the right.
01:39:244 (1) - o.o <3
01:52:675 (2,3) - Doesn't flow well around here. More novel and interesting patterns could be done here too.
01:58:518 (7) - Move between 01:58:256 (6,1)
SPOILER

Nice map, now if only I could pass it D:
Not many issues I can find that aren't just simply "this is too difficult D:<"

[Thoughts]
Sorry I wasn't able to mod the harder diffs very well. They're slightly out of my playable range, so I can't give any concrete suggestions.
Also I started writing this quite some time ago, so feel free to ignore anything I wrote that's already been changed.

Difficulty curve from Light Insane to Insane is quite steep. From something I can easily play to something barely passable. In terms of star difficulty, its a jump from 3.47 to 4.98. Also the two Insanes are quite close together in terms of difficulty. I'd suggest either reducing the difficulty of one Insane to 4~4.5 stars, or map another one entirely.

Other than that, great maps, great song. Good luck!

Thanks for mods and the comment!

byfar wrote:
from m4m
my map ::https://osu.ppy.sh/s/228745

[collab insane]
00:10:465 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:11:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i feel like spacing is too large between the two .3x ds stream.. i think just increase DS just a bit on 00:10:814 (1,2,3,4) - like over here 00:12:209 (1) - Looks fine for me
00:20:233 (5) - i think the curve should be the other way, flow feels weird when slider curves up to this part 00:20:582 (6) - Cool jump

00:23:372 (1,1) - i feel SV slow down too much. everytime i play that part i get 100s Fixed a bit

[light insane]

00:43:256 (1,2,3) - blanket? Keep

sorry for short mod.. hope it's helpful

Thanks for mods!

Updated all diff with new tags

Awaiting for theramdans to reply to the mods

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2014-12-19T14:08:51+00:00

oh this :>

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-12-19T17:05:15+00:00

Thanks to whoever modded my diff
It really reduce the time and energy I needed to self-mod this, really appreciate that
Here is the update with the mods applied and a little remap

http://puu.sh/dBc63/85c44b11e1.zip

I smell something good

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2014-12-19T20:35:27+00:00

Updated all diffs

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2015-01-06T09:25:10+00:00

bump
sorry just a little update http://puu.sh/e8Reh/f21c2a7567.zip
thanks

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2015-01-06T22:25:33+00:00

Updated theramdans' Easy

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2015-01-11T15:01:09+00:00

https://puu.sh/en37j/1b32e6e03d.osu

ossu

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Rakuen 2015-01-11T16:50:26+00:00

Updated :3

come some bat pls

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2015-01-21T11:27:09+00:00

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Preview time unsnapped

[theramdans's Easy]

02:01:550 (1) - Why not add spinner end length with another diff?

[Normal]

00:09:399 (4,5,1) - Maybe triple stack pattern not fit in normal diff,try to stack double stack here ?
00:28:410 (4) - Add a note? Sounds like this tune with the same 00:26:143 (5) - here.
00:34:515 (3,4,1) - The same as 00:09:399 (4,5,1). (Will won't comment this anymore)
01:08:352 (1) - Change a 1/1 slider here? Make the rhythm fill full which I think.
01:18:469 (4,5) - 感覺NM mode如果空拍，嘉文又有意見。

[Hard]

01:25:096 (1) - Missed a whistle in end

[Light Insane] These 1/4 jump seems not fit jump so far at light insane. (樂園啊這裡1/4的note jump放這麼遠，感覺會被QAT噴包)

00:31:986 (7) - This 1/4 jumps seems so far,suggest to fix this pattern.
00:40:358 (5) - The same as above
00:50:126 (5) - Same above.
00:58:498 (6) - feel will miserror to 1/2 which I think
01:12:451 (7) - Strong suggest 1/4 jump (4.98x so far..)
01:23:614 (5) - ^
01:25:009 (6) - Same above
01:27:800 (3) - ^ (Will won't comment this anymore,still have same issue)
01:25:794 (1) - Missed a whistle in head

[ffstar's Insane]

00:09:748 (1) - This 1/4 note jumps so far (5.22x) ,also change a distance here ?
00:46:899 (2) - Use ctrl+g will make flow better imo.
01:42:015 (1) - Do a symmetry pattern?
SPOILER

[Insane Collab]

01:41:841 (3,1) - Also can do a symmetry pattern looks better I think
SPOILER
01:47:596 (2) - Ctrl+g? Sounds like this part have a jump point,recommened use it.

[Scarlet's Extra]

00:00:330 (1,1) - I didn't hear the 1/8 snap sound,also can change a single slider here? Maybe can use this pattern :
SPOILER
00:18:120 (1,2) - This speed change have so big different,suggest 00:18:469 (2) - set a NC?
00:36:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why the same distance here (1/2 and 1/4 are same DS seems hard to read I think) ?
01:17:073 (2) - The same as 00:18:120.
01:19:341 (2) - Seems a bit close,move to (432|249)?
01:42:015 (1) - This slider head pattern looks weird,try this ? (And feel 01:41:841 (1,1) - so far I think) :
SPOILER
01:43:934 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:36:434.

ffstar

513 posts

Joined October 2011

ffstar 2015-01-24T19:17:14+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[ffstar's Insane]
00:09:748 (1) - This 1/4 note jumps so far (5.22x) ,also change a distance here ? fixed
00:46:899 (2) - Use ctrl+g will make flow better imo. i can't understand this
01:42:015 (1) - Do a symmetry pattern? ok
SPOILER

updated

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 71163
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 48838
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Crescent Moon Island BGM
TitleUnicode:Crescent Moon Island BGM
Artist:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
ArtistUnicode:Studio EIM, Chaotic Content
Creator:Rakuen
Version:ffstar's Insane
Source:마비노기 영웅전
Tags:theramdans [_-Scarlet-_] ffstar0716 mabinogi heroes vindictus season 2 nexon action mmorpg
BeatmapID:438328
BeatmapSetID:173422

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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theramdans

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theramdans 2015-01-26T11:17:09+00:00

Applied smallboat's mod, seems I overlooked it

update http://puu.sh/f31Zp/42eeb077e0.zip

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