1. Remove unneeded timing points~
2. 00:47:104 - Remove clap, it should be at 00:47:771 -
3. 00:49:771 (3) - This one is a bit off imo, try this rhythm:
   
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4. 00:53:104 - These are not needed timings~ mentioned tho :33
5. 01:13:604 (3) - Minor blanket
6. 01:57:771 (3) - Same as 00:49:771 (3) -
7. 02:21:604 (3) - Minor blanket
8. 03:17:771 - Can add some whistles here, too quiet
9. 03:29:271 (2) - Put up there?:
   
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10. 03:34:438 (2) - I'd NC here for the change and new KIAI part
11. 04:00:938 - Add Clap

1. Remove unneeded timing points~
2. 00:27:771 (2) - Try not to stack 00:26:104 (4) - ? (opt.)
3. 01:13:604 - Missing Finish? Like 01:16:271 -
4. 01:27:104 - A clap fits here
5. 01:53:104 (4) - Prefer to follow the triangle placed at 01:51:104 (1) - , seems the slider is a bit off flow imo
6. 02:04:271 (1) - Missing Finish? First KIAI have finish
7. 02:12:104 (5) - Clap!
8. 02:17:104 (5) - Try not to stack on 02:15:771 (2) - , maybe move the set 02:16:438 (3,4,5,6) - upper
9. 02:18:271 - Clap?
10. 02:50:438 - Clap!
11. 03:01:104 - Clap? @_@
12. 03:17:771 - Too quiet ; w ;
13. 03:24:938 - imo here needs clap...and for 03:25:438 - too
14. 03:33:771 (5) - NC for off KIAI
15. 03:44:104 - Clap!?
16. Try to check the hitsounds for all diffs too?

1. 00:32:271 (7) - This stack will break the flow imo, I'd make it moving to 00:32:438 (1) -
2. 00:37:271 (3) - Nor perfectly stacked tho
3. 00:42:521 (4) - ^ This one too~
4. 00:47:771 - Clap?
5. 00:56:271 (6,7,1) - Rhythm is strange...prefer something like 00:57:438 (3,1,2) - (opt. both looks ok)
6. 01:01:604 (5,1) - Umm...there's a triplet at previous set tho
7. 01:04:104 - Clap here sounds cool!
8. 01:24:104 - Sounds a clap in song!
9. 01:51:104 (1) - Make it snapped like on the tail of 01:50:771 (4) - (reverse and 1.4x DS):
   
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10. 02:01:104 (5) - NC to signify SV change
11. 02:25:771 - Clap or Finish?
12. 03:05:271 (2) - NC, there's anti jump here
13. 03:17:771 - Come some whistles~
14. 03:25:438 - Missing Clap? ;w;
15. 03:33:771 - Prefer a slowed down slider to be added here too~ like 0.8SV
16. 03:44:104 - Clap clap...OAQ

1. 00:08:104 (8) - Clap?
2. 00:09:854 (2) - Clap! :3
3. 00:10:354 (6) - ^ :3
4. 00:10:604 (8,9) - ^ :33
5. 02:29:438 (1,2) - Minor blanket:
   
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6. 03:20:938 (2) - Too specific...prefer to follow vocal at 03:21:104 -

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Default = Normal mods
Opt. = Optional / Minor / Nazi
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
:3

[KIAI Times]
Prefer the KIAI to stop at where the bg music stops. The first one at 01:20:438 - .
So maybe you can do a flash effect (on and off) at 01:21:771 - if you want.
Applies to the rest of the KIAI parts.

[Easy]

1. Remove unneeded timing points~
2. 00:47:104 - Remove clap, it should be at 00:47:771 -
3. 00:49:771 (3) - This one is a bit off imo, try this rhythm:
   
   Image

   
4. 00:53:104 - These are not needed timings~ mentioned tho :33
5. 01:13:604 (3) - Minor blanket
6. 01:57:771 (3) - Same as 00:49:771 (3) -
7. 02:21:604 (3) - Minor blanket
8. 03:17:771 - Can add some whistles here, too quiet
9. 03:29:271 (2) - Put up there?:
   
   Image

   
10. 03:34:438 (2) - I'd NC here for the change and new KIAI part
11. 04:00:938 - Add Clap

[Normal]

1. Remove unneeded timing points~
2. 00:27:771 (2) - Try not to stack 00:26:104 (4) - ? (opt.)
3. 01:13:604 - Missing Finish? Like 01:16:271 -
4. 01:27:104 - A clap fits here
5. 01:53:104 (4) - Prefer to follow the triangle placed at 01:51:104 (1) - , seems the slider is a bit off flow imo
6. 02:04:271 (1) - Missing Finish? First KIAI have finish
7. 02:12:104 (5) - Clap!
8. 02:17:104 (5) - Try not to stack on 02:15:771 (2) - , maybe move the set 02:16:438 (3,4,5,6) - upper
9. 02:18:271 - Clap?
10. 02:50:438 - Clap!
11. 03:01:104 - Clap? @_@
12. 03:17:771 - Too quiet ; w ;
13. 03:24:938 - imo here needs clap...and for 03:25:438 - too
14. 03:33:771 (5) - NC for off KIAI
15. 03:44:104 - Clap!?
16. Try to check the hitsounds for all diffs too?

[Hard]

1. 00:32:271 (7) - This stack will break the flow imo, I'd make it moving to 00:32:438 (1) -
2. 00:37:271 (3) - Nor perfectly stacked tho
3. 00:42:521 (4) - ^ This one too~
4. 00:47:771 - Clap?
5. 00:56:271 (6,7,1) - Rhythm is strange...prefer something like 00:57:438 (3,1,2) - (opt. both looks ok)
6. 01:01:604 (5,1) - Umm...there's a triplet at previous set tho
7. 01:04:104 - Clap here sounds cool!
8. 01:24:104 - Sounds a clap in song!
9. 01:51:104 (1) - Make it snapped like on the tail of 01:50:771 (4) - (reverse and 1.4x DS):
   
   Image

   
10. 02:01:104 (5) - NC to signify SV change
11. 02:25:771 - Clap or Finish?
12. 03:05:271 (2) - NC, there's anti jump here
13. 03:17:771 - Come some whistles~
14. 03:25:438 - Missing Clap? ;w;
15. 03:33:771 - Prefer a slowed down slider to be added here too~ like 0.8SV i think it's good now
16. 03:44:104 - Clap clap...OAQ

[Insane]

1. 00:08:104 (8) - Clap?
2. 00:09:854 (2) - Clap! :3
3. 00:10:354 (6) - ^ :3
4. 00:10:604 (8,9) - ^ :33
5. 02:29:438 (1,2) - Minor blanket:
   
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6. 03:20:938 (2) - Too specific...prefer to follow vocal at 03:21:104 -

Nice song and map!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

1. 00:07:771 (5) - 156,200?顺便加finish
2. 00:47:604 我觉得这里加个circle节奏更连贯
3. 01:13:604 (1) - 滑条头加finish
4. 01:28:604 (3,4) - 我是觉得叠起来显得气势不足，你后面那个相同的部分也是跳的
5. 03:47:771 (3) - 滑条头加finish
6. 04:03:771 (1,2) - 每个地方都加clap吧，这1/3听起来太虚了
7. 04:09:604 (1) -
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:07:771 (4) - 滑条头加finish
2. 01:13:604 加finish
3. 01:51:104 (1) - 距离这么放好看
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:46:938 (5) - finish改放在滑条尾
5. 03:47:771 (3) - 头加finish
6. 04:03:771 (3) - 同insane

Sellenite wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:07:771 (5) - 156,200?顺便加finish 位置不改了 想保持三角梗 finish加了
2. 00:47:604 我觉得这里加个circle节奏更连贯 沒音
3. 01:13:604 (1) - 滑条头加finish 好
4. 01:28:604 (3,4) - 我是觉得叠起来显得气势不足，你后面那个相同的部分也是跳的 差不多吧
5. 03:47:771 (3) - 滑条头加finish 好
6. 04:03:771 (1,2) - 每个地方都加clap吧，这1/3听起来太虚了 加了有點吵
7. 04:09:604 (1) - 不明白
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:07:771 (4) - 滑条头加finish
2. 01:13:604 加finish
3. 01:51:104 (1) - 距离这么放好看
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:46:938 (5) - finish改放在滑条尾
5. 03:47:771 (3) - 头加finish
6. 04:03:771 (3) - 同insane

hard都fix了 除了同insane
thanks for mod
normal滑条速度有点感人，easy没问题
美丽

1. 00:09:938 (3,7) - + drum clap (addition)
2. 00:10:770 (10) - + drum finish (addition)
3. 00:11:438 (2) - 感觉这个地方可以再加个其他啥自定义的音效强调一下这个音 o.o
4. 00:21:604 (9,10) - clap换成finish
5. 00:41:604 (1) - 总觉得这个形状稍微好一点 o.o vocal比较饱满滑条瘪瘪的不好看(什么垃圾理由
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:42:938 (9) - 头上加drum addtion的finish
7. 00:53:771 (1) - 头上的finish用normal的addtion, 尾上加个finish听听看呗 ><
8. 00:57:604 (6) - +finish, 00:57:771 (1) - 头上的finish去掉，不过本来感觉这个三连就不太合理 感觉重音在红线上orzz
9. 01:02:271 (3,5) - +drum finish,
10. 01:04:104 (8,9) - 可以加条绿线稍微高点sv? 感觉会比较有趣
11. 01:07:771 (3) - 感觉头上加个finish 不然这个01:07:104 (1) - 上的finish就感觉有点奇怪 o.o
    你在03:46:938 - 这个地方白线是直接滑条过去的就比较好解释 所以..
12. 01:17:771 (1) - 这个用normal的addtion比较好吧? o.o
13. 02:01:771 (1) - 同00:53:771 (1) -
14. 02:04:271 (6,1) - 6上finish.. 1去掉? 03:36:271 (6,1) - 同
15. 02:10:271 (3,5) - +drum finish 03:42:271 (3,5) - 同
16. 02:12:438 (1) - 同前面说过的.. 还有03:44:438 (1) -
17. 02:25:771 (1) - 头finish?
18. 03:18:938 (2,3) - 是不是该往前提半拍然后滑条多拉长1/2啊 听着舒服些?

1. 00:45:771 (1,4) - 1的尾巴上+whistle 4的头上+whistle 因为2中间空了个clap声 最好补点啥盖过去orz
2. 01:16:771 (2) - 头上加个finish?
3. 01:53:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面
4. 02:41:604 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用这个节奏试试? 感觉缺了clap节奏听起来不太好
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 03:34:104 (1) - 我觉得还是用3/4滑条好些啊

1. 00:07:104 (1) - 尾巴+clap
2. 00:21:104 (4) - 头用soft clap 或者直接不带音效了 折返用drum finish?
3. 01:48:438 (5) - NC?
4. 03:53:604 (5) - ^

Irie Miyuki wrote:

hi~hi 骗分m4m来啦

[Insane]

1. 00:09:938 (3,7) - + drum clap (addition) 有點吵
2. 00:10:770 (10) - + drum finish (addition)
3. 00:11:438 (2) - 感觉这个地方可以再加个其他啥自定义的音效强调一下这个音 o.o 感覺沒其他clap比這個好了
4. 00:21:604 (9,10) - clap换成finish
5. 00:41:604 (1) - 总觉得这个形状稍微好一点 o.o vocal比较饱满滑条瘪瘪的不好看(什么垃圾理由
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:42:938 (9) - 头上加drum addtion的finish
7. 00:53:771 (1) - 头上的finish用normal的addtion, 尾上加个finish听听看呗 >< 尾不加 頭加了
8. 00:57:604 (6) - +finish, 00:57:771 (1) - 头上的finish去掉，不过本来感觉这个三连就不太合理 感觉重音在红线上orzz 我覺得重音在大白線
9. 01:02:271 (3,5) - +drum finish,
10. 01:04:104 (8,9) - 可以加条绿线稍微高点sv? 感觉会比较有趣 現在的比較好 再快就有點難了
11. 01:07:771 (3) - 感觉头上加个finish 不然这个01:07:104 (1) - 上的finish就感觉有点奇怪 o.o 我覺得差不多
    你在03:46:938 - 这个地方白线是直接滑条过去的就比较好解释 所以..
12. 01:17:771 (1) - 这个用normal的addtion比较好吧? o.o
13. 02:01:771 (1) - 同00:53:771 (1) -
14. 02:04:271 (6,1) - 6上finish.. 1去掉? 03:36:271 (6,1) - 同
15. 02:10:271 (3,5) - +drum finish 03:42:271 (3,5) - 同 也是有點吵
16. 02:12:438 (1) - 同前面说过的.. 还有03:44:438 (1) -
17. 02:25:771 (1) - 头finish?
18. 03:18:938 (2,3) - 是不是该往前提半拍然后滑条多拉长1/2啊 听着舒服些?

感觉这首歌编曲低音不太够 然后你的音效基本也都是全程clap+finish 整首歌听起来很干燥
要是能加点drum音效 用用whistle来提亮一下音色感觉更好 o.o

[Hard]

1. 00:45:771 (1,4) - 1的尾巴上+whistle 4的头上+whistle 因为2中间空了个clap声 最好补点啥盖过去orz 有點難搞 我看看有沒其他解決方法
2. 01:16:771 (2) - 头上加个finish?
3. 01:53:771 (1,2,3,4) - 同前面
4. 02:41:604 (1,2,3,4) - 这里用这个节奏试试? 感觉缺了clap节奏听起来不太好 圖片美麗 用了自己方法改
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 03:34:104 (1) - 我觉得还是用3/4滑条好些啊 3/4太難了

音效我就不继续写了orz 和insane的看法一样的 o.o

[Normal]

1. 00:07:104 (1) - 尾巴+clap
2. 00:21:104 (4) - 头用soft clap 或者直接不带音效了 折返用drum finish? 這個只改了折返
3. 01:48:438 (5) - NC?
4. 03:53:604 (5) - ^

[Easy]
厉害


Good Luck~

smallboat wrote:

Forum PM

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1. Insane的 WidescreenStoryboard forgot select it，or you can cancel widescreenStoryboard in all diff .fixed

[Easy]

• 
  
  Hitsound:

1. 00:07:104 (1) - Why this first red line volume is 70%? Another volume are 80% here.
2. 00:19:104 (1) - Slider head is downbeat,why not add a finish? Sounds like better.
3. 00:29:771 (3) - Remove this clap hitsound make keep consistent for another diff. (Btw,combo a bit long,forgot set a NC here?)
4. 00:31:604 (4) - Why these hitsound are not the same with another diff?
5. 00:35:771 (2) - This slider hitsound seems so quiet ,add a whistle in head here? (Follow this vocal to add)
6. 00:40:104 (3) - Missed a clap.
7. 01:53:771 (5) - This combo seems so long,I suggest add a NC here.
8. 01:59:104 (1) - I guess it is a downbeat,you shouldn't add clap here,suggest add finish express this vocal.
   
   Placement:
9. 03:33:771 (1) - Feel no necessary do a single NC,it is can be read easily I think (And it has no speed change,too). kkkkkkk
   
   Rhythm:
10. 02:38:938 (1) - Although the space is 3.5 (Actually want to space 4 beat)beats，But I still think it will be picked this reason,suggest replace rhythm here : wow great idea, accepted
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    又是一張Easy音效與其他難度不同的map，我主要挑都是比較明顯的，昨晚摸長喜那張摸了1小時多都在摸漏掉的音效。

[Normal]

• 
  
  Hitsound:

1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
2. 00:29:771 (1) - Why add a whistle at head? Because easy diff add a finish here.
3. 00:35:104 (1) - Add a whistle in end.
4. 01:01:771 (1) - Missed a finish.
5. 01:19:771 (3) - You can remove this hitsound in slider end,because easy diff has no voice here.
6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
7. 03:00:438 (3) - Slider reverse should be added finish ,not clap
   
   Placement:
8. 00:08:771 (3) - Notice the distance,keep the same part to 1.00x.
9. 02:20:271 (5) - Move to (262,363) keep the curve?
10. 03:23:104 (1) - The same as 00:08:771 (3) reason.
11. 03:33:771 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
    
    Rhythm:
12. 02:22:438 (4) - The vocal is at 02:22:604 (4) - start here,try to replace this rhythm ? i don't want to ignore that clap
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:48:271 (5) - Suggest remove this note will be played better and cool,it has no vocal here I think. i can hear here had one voice

[Hard]

• 
  
  Hitsound:

1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
3. 00:35:771 (3) - Add a whistle in head.
4. 01:06:938 (5) - Missed a finish
5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
7. 02:04:271 (4) - Missed a finish.
8. 02:14:938 (4) - The same as above.
9. 03:00:438 (1) - Missed a finish in end.
10. 04:09:604 (1) - Remove this clap make the same hitsound set with ins diff.
    
    Placement:
11. 00:21:438 (3,4,5,6) - Sounds like noisy,maybe you can reduce a bit volume (-10%) for all diff at this part? same
12. 00:52:438 (4,1) - DS is so far,suggest make these objects move a bit closely (to 2.00x),I don't think it can be passed by their check.
13. 
    
    Rhythm:
14. 00:10:271 (4) - Add a one slider reverse ? I listen the 00:10:521 has a blue tick in there. i want to use same rhythm with insane
15. 00:17:688 (5) - Sounds like has no blue tick sound here,suggest remove this note.
16. 00:42:521 (4) - The same as above.

[Insane]

• 
  
  Hitsound:

1. 00:19:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
2. 00:29:771 (1) - The same as normal diff reason.
3. 00:35:771 (4) - Add a whistle
4. 01:06:938 (6) - Missed a finish
5. 01:20:104 (3) - The same as normal diff reason.
6. 01:59:104 (1) - The same as easy diff reason.
7. 02:04:271 (6) - Missed a finish.
8. 02:14:938 (7) - The same as above.
9. 03:01:104 (3) - Missed a finish
   
   Placement:
10. 00:21:438 (7,8,9,10) - The same as hard diff reason i don't think so
11. 02:58:938 (4) -Move to (287,123) make closer the 02:59:104 (1). (DS so far now) it's good now
12. 
    
    Rhythm:
13. 00:37:438 (4,5,6,7) - I didn't listen any bluetick sound at this stream,maybe you can change 1/4 slider here? i think have here
14. 00:51:188 (2,5) - The same reason as above.
15. 03:58:521 (1) - The vocal is start 03:58:521 here,not at the blue tick line,btw,why not add 03:57:938 (8,9,10) - these note? Just follow the last vocal (03:58:521 (1)) seems playing not so smooth. i think it's fine on playing, it can read 成 white line起的slider
    
    This diff overmapped have bit serious,suggest check another BATs (Suggest find C445 I think)(or you can ask QAT to check this diff?) to improve these rhythm. 現在都因overmapped的原因被un，所以再寫下去都是overmap好幾行 (所以就寫到前一分鐘)

[Other]

1. Rhythm and placement looks okay,but your hitsound didn't keep consistent for all diff,I have a bit hate about that.
2. 這音效也漏太多了(實際上我只看了全部diff前面3分鐘，如果再寫下去全都是音效mod)，覺得音效還是有些有漏提，確定都沒問題再找我 (建議你把一個diff加完再用我給你的軟件直接複製，很快)

Oracle wrote:

we set a couple of whistles on Hard and Insane diffs.
looking cool to me.

Qualified~

Sellenite wrote:

kowai