哼哼 要飞了
Thanks!smallboat wrote:
Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.
[Scarlet Princess]
01:17:654 (4,5,6) - Sure.
01:56:711 (4) - Feel no need to add so quickly speed change,reduce to 1.5x? And add a NC. I'm very sure it's easily readable, and I made it 2x so it'd fit with how the instrument plays. Also an NC is not necessary, because the music's rhythm is still "continued" (not sure of the correct term lol) from 01:55:057.
160,265,77654,6,0,L|148:208,1,56.25,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,77890,2,0,L|268:147,1,56.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,128,78127,2,0,L|140:71,1,56.25,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,78363,6,0,L|318:57,1,56.25,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
thanks, please fix it examination coz im lazy to give code LOLsmallboat wrote:
Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.
[Scarlet Princess]
05:19:488 (2) - This hitsound seems sounds like noisy , make the same with 05:17:711 (3) - head? that's mistake lol, removed normal additions
05:23:822 (4,6) - The same reason as above ,remove all whistle hitsound will listen better I think. nope, drum fits a lot here
05:26:377 (1) - Has no special heavy vocal here,feel don't need a single NC. removed
also fixed the SB problem and the tag problem.smallboat wrote:
Sorry late few days. Forum PM.because so long song have bit lazy to check it.
[Scarlet Princess]
01:17:654 (4,5,6) - Fixed as Hinsvar says
01:56:711 (4) - Feel no need to add so quickly speed change,reduce to 1.5x? And add a NC. No change as Hinsvar says
02:27:847 (6) - Stack 02:29:584 (1) ? 02:40:720 (1,4) - Switch NC,because downbeat vocal start at 02:41:175 (4). stacked
02:47:425 (2) - Suggest stream DS keep consistent. Fixed
02:48:902 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move down a bit? Looks the pattern better : done03:16:949 (2) - (132|68)? Make symmetry with (1) , can have a good flow better imo. no change according to Kawaiwkyik
03:24:949 (6,7) - This 1/4 distance seems place so far I think,perhaps you can reduce a bit distance make close some with these objects?
(6) - Move to (318,146),(7) - Move to (100|184). ^
05:19:488 (2) - This hitsound seems sounds like noisy , make the same with 05:17:711 (3) - head? Fixed as Xinely says
05:23:822 (4,6) - The same reason as above ,remove all whistle hitsound will listen better I think. No change as Xinely says
05:26:377 (1) - Has no special heavy vocal here,feel don't need a single NC. Fixed as Xinely says
06:08:961 (1) - Maybe can change 2 note to follow the vocal. I guess it's not necessary
06:14:573 (6) - You can add a note and add finish express the downbeat do a song end. done
08:11:341 (2) - Sounds like have a drum point here,add a note? 没鼓音啊111
08:26:978 (2) - Suggest change a note make this play better,sounds like no stream there. Fixed
09:55:369 (1,2) - Stack 09:53:981 (1) - slider head? Make far a bit with 09:55:022 (5). Fixed as Kawaiwkyik says
10:35:376 (5) - Add a note at (364,182),make play better I think. no change as IamKwaN says
Thx Rakuen~~~Rakuen wrote:
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[Preview Point]
Prefer to be 00:21:936 - =v= Nice idea~ done
[Scarlet Princess]
- Examination:
Call me back!
- 00:13:270 - Prefer to add a circle here, not too strong on vocal, like 00:15:770 (5) - no sound here =w=
- 00:15:270 (4) - Tail can be closer to 00:14:603 (3) - : ok~
- 00:31:270 (2) - Not to stack 00:30:603 (1) - done
Hinsvar:- 00:49:662 (2,3) - Make their DS nearer to each other (on tail too maybe)
done. Also make the DS between 01:02:300 (1,2,3,4) - nearerEdit: Keep no change, Hinsvar will give the reason below w
happy623:- 04:25:879 (3) - NC here to make it strong on 04:24:546 (1,2,1,2) - done
- 04:45:435 (1) - Ctrl+G better flow imo yep fixed
Elaine:- 06:07:666 - Finish? done
Examination:- 0Arrange the DS a bit, make them all around the same done
- 07:25:762 (3,4,5) - Maybe can lower volume (or near silence) of slider tail, sounds extra especially 07:26:128 (4) - Fixed
El SolarBeam:- 08:38:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit low volume of claps here sure
Regraz:- 09:03:667 - Finish Added
Kawaiwkyik:- 09:56:756 - Finish Added
IamKwaN- 11:21:747 (1,2,3) - and 11:24:184 (1,2,3) - , can't see one of the border line of (3), but if it's okay to rank then...? Just check it out here, I think 3 is still readable and a pattern like this is fun
谢谢nardo~Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
exam恭喜啦