Doxx & Feint - Mind In Motion · forum

galvenize

919 posts

Joined June 2010

galvenize 2014-12-03T20:03:19+00:00

updated
http://puu.sh/dfJOe/c2cfab4ca8.osu

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-12-04T01:51:59+00:00

Sorry for afk on this, I will be back this weekend.

Birdy

5,720 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2014-12-04T15:13:41+00:00

I don't know if you're ready for more mods yet, but you did link me this yesterday already. So here we go!

[Lanturn's]
01:35:850 (3) - I don't know if they've removed the rule, but slider head used to be NOT allowed to overlap the end.
E: Can't find the rule anywhere, so I guess we're safe to go?

[Normal]
01:09:558 (3) - Unnecessary reverse arrow. Remove the last repeat.
01:21:018 (1,2) - I feel the design could be prettier. The flow could be thought about more, too.
02:11:917 - Here, on the other hand, should be an object. Keeping this empty breaks the consistency.

[Moway's]
00:48:659 (1) - I believe the sharp turn is a bit too compressed. Make it just a bit more open.
01:41:243 (1) - Missing clap in the end.

[Insane]
01:24:895 (5) - tbh would just be better as a 1/2 slider.
01:30:119 (3,4) - Kind of sudden, brutal jump. Reduce it a little?
01:39:389 (4) - Missing clap at the reverse.
01:41:412 (2) - ^
01:52:030 (1) - Clap on the wrong tick - move from reverse to the end.
02:11:749 (4) - Clap on the wrong tick - move from head to reverse.
02:17:142 (4) - ^

[galvenize's]
02:06:777 - Could have a circle here, as usual.
02:20:007 (6,7,8) - 1/1 slider could work here IMO.

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-05T20:07:15+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there!
mod as promised.

Normal
diff looks pretty neat, can't complain. .o. but the break confused me, tbh. cause there was none in Easy and it sounds a little weird to have one in the higher diff, but not in the lowest.. usually I'd suggest to have a break in E, too, but the song's quite relaxing so it works better if it's removed here (imo!). MAPPED THE BREAK xD
00:45:288 (3) - replace with two circles? it adds nice variety to use a short slider, but it's two seperate sounds, so circles fit so much better!
there are more short sliders like this and in the middle of the map they go with the flow and play fine, but in the beginning it feels just wrong (to me). and circles play more interesting.. .o. would be brutal for a beginning xD specially cause it's the lowest part.
01:08:884 (2,3) - reverses seem off. try this? - The rhythm would be too weird
01:16:973 (2,3) - similar to ^. this plays better, imo - ^
01:18:827 - this should be mapped, no? extend 01:18:322 (1) - or replace 01:18:996 (2) - with a short slider starting here? It plays fine too but I prefer to keep my pattenr for the reason that it'll break all the coming pattern D:
01:26:412 - if you keep the break, don't forget to 'resnap' start of it! resnappedd and mapped xD
01:37:704 - consider adding a cirlce here. the beat's more dominant than the ones (1) and (2) are mapped to it would be too hard for a Normal. Hard like they'd said :p
01:52:704 (4,5,6) - fitting or not, I don't think anti-jumps belong in a Normal diff You're totally right and now I have a better idea of how to fix it !
02:10:400 - missing a cirlce here, too o: no , too hard to read for a beginner
02:18:996 (1) - shorten this by a tick and put a cirlce on the downbeat? works well here, imo It's fitting really good.. but for Hard /Insane . There's less than a beat between the spinner and the circle LOL

Insane
uuh, I can't play this. but I'll try..
00:45:288 (3) - same as in Normal, two circles match better, imo okaaay done
00:50:850 (4,1) - the anti-stack feels a little lonely, cause it seems to be the only one of it's kind. consider using them more often!
for example at 01:04:333 (6,1) - (randomly picked, but I'm sure you can find parts that work well with anti-jumps where you don't have to change much) spaced the notes you mentionned at last
00:56:243 (4) - I don't like how this ends on the downbeat, that should be clickable, imo. alternate the rhythm? tastes.. :3
01:06:524 (4) - I'm pretty sure this sounds better if it starts on the red tick before, cause the beat's there Done and added a note thank you <3
01:46:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow is a bit weird, imo. you can improve that, just swap 2 with 3 and 4 with 5 and it plays a little better, I think It's actually fine
01:55:906 (7) - move this a little farther from (6), it feels too close cause of the previous jump. 28|176 should work fine? yap , better indeed!
02:03:490 (3) - ctrl+g, improves flow from previous. you might want to place 02:03:827 (4) - differently then done!

anyway, have fun getting this ranked!!
*squee*

THANKS A LOT <3

galvenize

919 posts

Joined June 2010

galvenize 2014-12-05T20:07:58+00:00

02:06:777 - Could have a circle here, as usual.
02:20:007 (6,7,8) - 1/1 slider could work here IMO.

eeeh it's fine.

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2014-12-06T17:15:58+00:00

02:18:996 (1) - shorten this by a tick and put a cirlce on the downbeat? works well here, imo It's fitting really good.. but for Hard /Insane . There's less than a beat between the spinner and the circle LOL

I meant like before the spinner. circle on the downbeat where it currently starts on, haha. :b I knew I should have phrased it differently orz

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-06T23:05:55+00:00

Yales wrote:
[General]
Kiai isn't snapped in all diffs. done in previous mods

[Normal]
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:37:174
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 02:20:320 done
01:38:546 (3) - Ctrl+J for better flow? nah , the transition would be too weird lool
02:00:794 (4) - Try to improve blanket a bit with 02:01:468 (1) - done
Nicely polished <3
[Insane]
Kiai isn't snapped! 01:37:174
Kiai's end isn't snapped! 02:20:320 done
00:44:277 (2) - You could have copy paste 00:43:266 (1) - for symmetry ._. yeah but the transition with would be too weird huehue
01:03:659 (4) - The shape isn't that good: First point at x76y152, 2nd at x76y120 and last at x132 y140, something like that. Fixed in another way
01:06:355 - Add a note? 01:06:524 (4) - Feels off right now Added sth in previous mod
01:08:209 (3) - You can delete, it doesn't follow anything and it would give more sustain on the vocal with a blank after 01:08:041 (2) - done
01:11:412 (4) - ^ changed in previous mod
01:30:625 (5) - Ctrl+h for better flow? Would look even better in my opinion if you copy 01:29:614 (2) - and ctrl+h done
01:39:389 (4) - Try to improve blanket with 01:38:884 (2) - (or w/e you want to call it) for better look http://puu.sh/deOt9/e15508b7cf.jpg pattern has been changed since time
01:40:653 (5) - Might sound better if you delete this note in my opinion Awesome idea indeed fixed!
01:46:636 (1) - I find a bit sad you hide the sound at the end of your slider.. It's a bit whatever though. Fixed and emphasized the sound
01:47:985 (1) - I would probably remove the red anchor honestly x.x It gives a bad look, and to improve it you could put this a bit higher but it would break the flow with the next triple. I'll ask another guy for this!
01:48:996 (5) - ^ Just an opinion eh ^
01:51:440 (6) - Would remove too, cause even if it's not overmapped, it sounds overmapped to me >.> Done
02:01:468 (1) - You could Ctrl+j 02:01:131 (5) - for better flow. Done but replaced with another slider!
02:02:985 (1) - 1.20 DS (around x448, y172) to have a sustain with 02:02:311 (4) - and it looks better too. Done
02:12:591 (2) - 1.20 ds cause you did it here 02:13:097 (4) - put 1.6 instead!
It's a cool diff you have there my second <3

Cool mapset, cool music !

PS: Va savoir pourquoi j'ai fait le mod en anglais

Thanks a ton Yales for your useful mod~

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-06T23:13:41+00:00

Static Noise Bird wrote:
I don't know if you're ready for more mods yet, but you did link me this yesterday already. So here we go! Thanksssssss

[Normal]
01:09:558 (3) - Unnecessary reverse arrow. Remove the last repeat.Done
01:21:018 (1,2) - I feel the design could be prettier. The flow could be thought about more, too. I find it cool imo
02:11:917 - Here, on the other hand, should be an object. Keeping this empty breaks the consistency. it'll break all the pattern D:

[Insane]
01:24:895 (5) - tbh would just be better as a 1/2 slider. nah
01:30:119 (3,4) - Kind of sudden, brutal jump. Reduce it a little? fixed
01:39:389 (4) - Missing clap at the reverse. pattern has been changed since
01:41:412 (2) - ^ done
01:52:030 (1) - Clap on the wrong tick - move from reverse to the end. done
02:11:749 (4) - Clap on the wrong tick - move from head to reverse. done too
02:17:142 (4) - ^ done

THANKS A TON!

MOWAY AND LANTURN SHOULD FIX MODS NOW!
CYA

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-12-06T23:27:09+00:00

Updated my diff. I am back now.

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Lanturn

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Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-12-07T09:04:32+00:00

Thanks for mod SNB. Like you said, it should be fine so I'll leave it as is :3

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-12-07T15:07:03+00:00

General

I recommend you check out the preview time in every difficulty as there is a slight inconsistency on them also in kiai times ofc.
@galvenize and @Moway need to be more careful about unsnapped points as there are some that aren't properly snapped, you guys should take a look to te AIBat.

Lanturn's Easy

01:04:165 (3,1,1) - These overlaps are bothering me a bit because to be honest there aren't good at all and since this is the easiest difficulty it can create some confusion for players who are not experienced so we would recommend using some other pattern here.
01:10:232 (1) - Wrong spacing.
01:15:625 (1,1) - I think you has many white dots for this slider that are somewhat unnecessary if you ask me, so I'd recommend you to do something like this:

1

2
01:26:412 (1,2,1,2) - Oh god.. this rhythm is so awful to be honest, I really would like you to try to do something different here cause it doesn't fit it at all...
[02:09:558 (1) - I think it would sound a lot better if instead of using a whistle will change it for a finish drum, you sould try it.
02:12:254 (1) - Same as above.

Normal

00:51:355 (1,2) - Just a minor stuff but what do you think to move the last point of the slider to X: 184 Y:252 to improve the parallel about this slider 00:51:355 (1) - it would be nice somehow.
01:25:737 (5) - Wrong spacing.
01:34:502 (1,1) - It doesn't cover an enough time after a spinner so that's means it's unrankable, make sure to give 2 beats after this spinner because you know it can give problems at the future.
02:16:973 (5) - This slider is too close to the bar so HP so would be Ideal if you consider to move it a couple of grids down to avoid this issue.

Moway's Hard

00:44:614 (2) - I would suppose that the whole map are you've used a distance of 1.0x so this can create a certain inconsistency because in this part is placed at a distance of 1.1x o something like that , it would be ideal if you place it at where it belongs.
00:56:412 (6) - Just a minor stuff but what do you think about using CTRL + G in this slider to improve the flow? (like you've did here 01:01:468 (5,6) - )

Insane

01:23:715 - until 01:37:114 - here, feels kinda empty without any kind of hitsounds, what about to use more "sampleset-normal as clap like you've did it before?
01:46:299 (5) - Missing clap?

galv's Insane

01:23:715 (1) - To be honest it doesn't fit into anything because there haven't a noticeable sound so would recommend you to convert this to 1/2 slider.

Very solid mapset, call me back when you're done to apply the changes...

Last edited by Gero 2014-12-07T20:06:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

galvenize

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Joined June 2010

galvenize 2014-12-07T15:43:07+00:00

01:23:715 (1) - To be honest it doesn't fit into anything because there haven't a noticeable sound so would recommend you to convert this to 1/2 slider.

I know but I think it plays well regardless.

Snapped green sections: http://puu.sh/dkMQP/c9333fe72a.osu

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-12-07T16:26:46+00:00

Gero wrote:
Moway's Hard

00:44:614 (2) - I would suppose that the whole map are you've used a distance of 1.0x so this can create a certain inconsistency because in this part is placed at a distance of 1.1x o something like that , it would be ideal if you place it at where it belongs. Yeah, this was a mistake. Fixed.
00:56:412 (6) - Just a minor stuff but what do you think about using CTRL + G in this slider to improve the flow? (like you've did here 01:01:468 (5,6) - ) Yeah, this is mainly for variety, and I think it plays fine so I'll keep this.

I blame pipe for unsnapped green sections hue

Thanks!

http://puu.sh/dkPEk/c35262ccb0.rar

edit: i forgot to change preview time pipe pls change thx

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-12-08T01:06:04+00:00

Gero

Gero wrote:
General

I recommend you check out the preview time in every difficulty as there is a slight inconsistency on them also in kiai times ofc. Fix this on all diffs, even mine secret!
@galvenize and @Moway need to be more careful about unsnapped points as there are some that aren't properly snapped, you guys should take a look to te AIBat.
Lanturn's Easy

01:04:165 (3,1,1) - These overlaps are bothering me a bit because to be honest there aren't good at all and since this is the easiest difficulty it can create some confusion for players who are not experienced so we would recommend using some other pattern here. I really don't see it being that confusing. I disagree with the M shaped, but I managed to work another pattern in to remove the circle from overlapping. I honestly believe this should be fine.
01:10:232 (1) - Wrong spacing. Fixed.
01:15:625 (1,1) - I think you has many white dots for this slider that are somewhat unnecessary if you ask me, so I'd recommend you to do something like this: Had to fix this with the above anyways, so fixed.
01:26:412 (1,2,1,2) - Oh god.. this rhythm is so awful to be honest, I really would like you to try to do something different here cause it doesn't fit it at all... For variety sake, I think this fits just fine. The song is pretty repetitive otherwise imo. The key idea is that I follow a few different things in this song. Since this part has one unique thing, I want to keep it like it is. If you remove the note, you can hear what I'm following.
[02:09:558 (1) - I think it would sound a lot better if instead of using a whistle will change it for a finish drum, you sould try it. Nah. I like the sound as is. Made some slight changes to hitsounds earlier in the song though.
02:12:254 (1) - Same as above.

Thanks <3

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Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-08T18:20:24+00:00

Gero wrote:
General

I recommend you check out the preview time in every difficulty as there is a slight inconsistency on them also in kiai times ofc.
@galvenize and @Moway need to be more careful about unsnapped points as there are some that aren't properly snapped, you guys should take a look to te AIBat.
Normal

00:51:355 (1,2) - Just a minor stuff but what do you think to move the last point of the slider to X: 184 Y:252 to improve the parallel about this slider 00:51:355 (1) - it would be nice somehow. Done!
01:25:737 (5) - Wrong spacing. Nice catch fixed!
01:34:502 (1,1) - It doesn't cover an enough time after a spinner so that's means it's unrankable, make sure to give 2 beats after this spinner because you know it can give problems at the future. Previoulsy ,there wasn't recovery time. At least , one beat is needed and it's not the easiest diff in the mapset so I'll keep it at it is!
02:16:973 (5) - This slider is too close to the bar so HP so would be Ideal if you consider to move it a couple of grids down to avoid this issue. Not a problem cause it's not touching the lifebar! But well , I moved it down!

Insane

01:23:715 - until 01:37:114 - here, feels kinda empty without any kind of hitsounds, what about to use more "sampleset-normal as clap like you've did it before? okay added some ! :p
01:46:299 (5) - Missing clap? added one!

Very solid mapset, call me back when you're done to apply the changes... \:D/

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2014-12-09T06:35:40+00:00

~ Bubbled ~

For the next BAT: Making sure about if the normal difficulty has enough time after an spinner because I'm pretty sure that it needs 2 ticks than one since the BPM isn't slow at all.

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-09T06:43:28+00:00

Thankssss :3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-12-10T17:46:13+00:00

As request.just give a bit suggestion.

[Lanturn's Easy]

01:15:625 (1) - Distance error,adjust to 1.10x . (Keep the same distance which I suggest.)

[Normal]

00:50:176 (3) - Same reason,adjust a bit distance make keep the consistent.
00:54:558 (2) - The same as above.
02:15:794 (2) - Need to be fixed this distance gap,so big (0.90->1.34),fix to 0.90x plz.

Gero,you mean this spinner (01:34:502) ?
I think that 01:34:502 (1) - spinner end is fine,it has been spaced 2/1 white line there in normal diff,so I think it has no problem to pick this rhythm spacing.
Irreversible says fine too.

[galv's Insane]

01:37:114 (1) - This green line should placed 01:37:282 here? Do a kiai flash I think.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2014-12-11T10:16:02+00:00

I really really hate symmetry maps now. I'm never mapping it again rofl. Fixed.

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325,346,121468,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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360,40,129558,5,2,0:3:0:0:
424,92,129895,2,0,B|424:166|424:166|464:230,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,318,131243,2,0,B|376:244|376:244|336:180,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,244,132254,5,2,0:3:0:0:
200,232,132591,2,0,B|143:250|107:234|107:234|56:274,1,150,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
31,192,133603,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Secretpipe 2014-12-11T17:02:30+00:00

Fixed all for Normal !

btw for galv's insane , he told me that it doesn't matter so he wont fix!

Commander , launch the rockets , everything is ready ! \o/

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-12-12T03:15:51+00:00

Okay,looks fine,this can go to me.

Roger,shoot ~ !