as your req here
WIP at Normal Hard Insane.. full ver why
also i have a suggestion for your reply:
"1.2x spacing makes 03:27:826 (1,2) - too close imo, I'd like to keep the current spacing" <-- and then use 1,3x spacing at all since 1,24x categoried as 1,2x here
quick check here since i'm being so busy Q_Q
also good luck on the map
General
- i find a BG for suggestion here http://puu.sh/ciU6Y.jpg
- please add kiai times ~
Easy
- 00:17:831 (3) - the slider looks a little bit messy here because it has much different curve with previous slider. try smoother it?
- 00:20:688 - imo you should map this drum sound if you following to map drums here. since the drum sound is quite loud for me
- 00:23:367 - the trumpet has crash sound here so you must to map this one.http://puu.sh/ciU9Y.jpg
- 00:26:402 (2) - inconsistency spacing (1,12x) make sure it has 1,0x spacing here
- 00:29:795 - keep the slidertick sound here since the music is loud same as 00:29:438 - , or other way is 00:29:081 (2) - end the slider to 00:29:795 - (personally i prefer do this one rather than use slidertick)
- 00:39:973 - you should map this time since piano sound starts in this time, hmm i would do 00:40:330 (2,3) - becomes http://puu.sh/ciUsL.jpg (first slider starts 00:39:973 - ) and 00:41:759 - remove this greenline
- 00:52:116 - the sound of slidertick a little bit weird for me here altho it emphasizing the music. i prefer to remove this one actually
- 00:57:116 - and 00:58:544 - imo you should map this time since they have snare drums here. feel really empty for me
- 01:14:972 (1) - so nazi but imo the slider a little bit closer with previous slider here. try make it a little bit further with 184,304 and move 01:16:044 (2) - 400,272 when you follow this one
- 01:21:401 (1) - well actually you give finish on stanza doesn't give much sense to me since we need clickable from that stanza. also i dont get why need map the red tick when it has vocal only here. i strongly suggest to change it, at least like http://puu.sh/ciV0O.jpg
- 01:34:972 (3) - nazi but the flow can improved a lot by keep the current flow on previous here. move 120,276 would be keep the flow here imo
- 01:56:043 (2) - nazi, inconsistency spacing (1,06x) here
- 02:03:007 - try map this sound? the piano has quite loud sound here. i guess skip it feels kinda empty
- 02:05:328 (3,4) - the design a little bit makes confuse here because (2) and (4) slider are too closer. move 02:05:328 (3,4) - (click them all) to 232,288 and fix the rest spacing when you follow this one
- 02:12:828 - and 02:14:257 - same as 00:57:116 - and 00:58:544 -
- 02:24:971 (3) - nazi, i know you arrange the slider for flow for previous but it get a little bit weird for next slider here. i would make http://puu.sh/ciW00.jpg for consistency flow for both previous and next
- 02:37:113 (1) - same as 01:21:401 (1) -
- 02:43:542 (3) - nazi, blanket stuff can be improved here by move to 448,128 (but this one quite bothering me)
- 02:50:684 (3) - another nazi, but according your flow on (2) slider, the circle should be placed at 272,272
- 03:07:827 (1,3) - these sldier are too close imo. try make them a little bit further so design can improved with well
- 03:29:255 (2) - that 1,26x i guess an inconsistency here since you had 1,24x before so i think your normal spacing for 0,80 SV is 1,2x spacing here
- 03:46:397 (2) - the flow on this slider like being crash the previous flows, well my mouse feels it so i prefer move the tail of this slider to 464,0
- 03:58:897 (3) - start the slider in 03:58:719 - ? i see your rhythms are following drum mostly even drums in red ticks so you should map this one too for consistency imo
- 04:00:504 - 04:02:826 - 04:03:897 - give finish for them, i'm sure i hear cymbals on that times
Normal
- 00:15:510 (4) - the sound only a vocal here so imo no need to map thi time. better to remove it since this part is calm after all
- 00:16:402 (1) - i dont get why need inconsistency spacing here. better to keep the spacing by 1,0x
- 00:22:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo this rhythm a little bit hard for Normal here. i would remove this circle 00:24:617 (6) - and extend this slider 00:24:081 (5) - to that time
- 00:34:795 (5,6) - hmm according the curve on (5), it curving on right side so imo the next slider should be on leftward instead of right side again. i would like to make neutral slider instead in (5) to keep the flow, i mean as http://puu.sh/cjlLl.jpg
- 00:51:937 (3) - inconsistency 1,07x spacing here
- 00:53:544 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont get the reason why inconsistency spacing here while the SV is same with previous, also the music doesnt epic so i really suggest to use 1,0x here
- 01:01:223 (5) - maybe remove this note? you used lot of 1/2 before (from begining until now) to follow the drum, i guess you can remove this one for make easier rhythm
- 01:05:687 (3,4) - imo you can change these circles into 1/2 slider repeat to follow the drum at 01:05:866 -
- 01:06:937 (6) - try change this slider with a circle in whitetick? imo it feels kinda weird when you're following drum mostly and suddenly skip this one
- 01:10:687 (1,2,3) - too much 1/2 at previous here so i really suggest to change with 1/2 slider repeat to make easier here
- 01:16:758 - well actually sound after the tick to end of tail a little bit noisy here for me. but i saw normal-sliderslide as sound of tick here, maybe you can fix this one (if you fix it, fix rest of sounds that have similar with it)
- 01:30:686 (4) - move to 488,208 to make a blanket with 01:29:972 (2) - ? it looked neater imo (dont forget fix rest of spacings if you fix it)
- 01:48:365 - quite empty when you skip the piano sound on calm part imo, try use 01:48:365 - 1/2 slider and remove the circle 01:48:543 (5) - ?
- 01:49:257 - why not map the piano sound here? the sound is really loud that it should be mapped here imo (if you fix this one, 01:50:686 - make sure map this one for consistency)
- 02:04:257 (2) - nazi but this slider has an inconsistency spacing (1,07x)
- 02:38:542 (6) - another inconsistency spacing (1,11x)
- 02:56:399 - omg skip map the cymbal sound here? imo you should map the cymbal since it has louder sound than vocal on redtick here o.o
- 03:17:827 (4) - add finish on head? i hear a cymbal here
- 03:40:326 - the drum is weak here so imo 75% feels too louder. try use around 50%?
- 03:54:076 (2) - inconsistency spacing (0,94x), also i'm sure the blanket can improved here
- 03:59:433 (1,2) - well this is my personal taste but their (heads tails) sound having cymbal actually here (you can know it by "ppssh" sound), imo better to add finish for both heads and tails (if you fix this one, fix for 04:02:290 (2,3) - too )
Hard
- 01:09:794 (2) - aaa imo flownya bisa lebih bagus (natural) kalo di ctrl+G sih. cuma mouse bisa jelasin ini
- 01:12:115 - kiai harusnya mulai dari sini, disini ada cymbalnya, kalo di 2nd whitetick nya sih dengerku cuma trompet, walau ada cymbal pun pasti lebih lemah daripada yg di stanza (kalo fix 02:27:828 - ini juga di fix ya)
- 01:24:437 (5) - wee jumpnya agak sakit sih disini imo, gw sih prefer ngestack tp ini bener2 cuma taste
- 01:34:972 (5) - coba kasih little jump disini buat emphasize cymbal nya? well gw gak ada ide sih jadi ya just saying~
- 01:58:186 (3) - podo karo 01:09:794 (2) -
- 01:59:614 (2) - imo sih disini lebih enak di ctrl+G jadi kek simetris gtu flownya buat ke next, kerasa lebih natural sih ~
- 02:14:614 (1) - hmm gw kurang agree soal finish di tail sih soalnya cymbal itu kerasa lebih enak kalo ada yg clickable di time itu, http://puu.sh/cm7mS.jpg coba ini?
- 02:26:399 (4,6) - coba add whistle buat 2 circle ini? suaranya buat emphasize trumpetnya sih :3 (kalo fix 01:10:687 (4,5) - kasih buat circle sama slider's tailnya)
- 02:28:899 (5) - karena bentuk slider berikutnya curving, ini coba circlenya di buat flownya melingkar juga (move ke 488,168) ?
- 02:39:613 (6) - udah lewat 1 stanza, harus di NC buat konsistensi soalnya dirimu NC tiap stanza
- 03:07:648 - hmm ini musiknya cukup kuat jadi kudu di map imo, jadiin aja slidernya jadi 1/2 terus add circle di stanza e
- 03:17:827 (1) - add finish di kepala soalnya cymbal ~
- 03:29:969 (1,3) - combo e cukup dowo iki, tau sih NC e gra2 vocal tp inconsistency e bener2 gak enak dilihat, krn lu gak suka NC di stanza, jadi gw saranin buat swap NC 03:30:326 (3) - disini aja
- 03:50:326 (3,1) - gak diblanket in? kelihatan messy banget disini
Insane
- AR 9 feels quite fast here especially in calm part, how about AR 8,6?
- 00:08:724 (3,4) - try ctrl+G here? imo the jump on (5) a little bit forced here on calm part
- 00:24:527 (5,6,7,8,9) - hmm since this is just Insane diff, dont make quite hard streams (especially that 00:24:527 (5,6) - these spacings)
- 01:06:937 (2) - quite huge jump for Insane diff here, you should reduce the spacing here imo o.o
- 01:49:614 (2) - hmm just my taste but maybe try ctrl+G here? imo i get better flow because it makes circular flow here
- the rest of diff is fine, some what bothering me are your mapping style as i learn from your reply on Easy so i wont touch it. i wonder about the SV here since the SV has a huge gap with the Hard when Hard only 1,4 and Insane become 1,9 (from Easy and Normal only 0,16 too) so kinda fast for me here (also your jumps look kinda hard for Insane)
also i have a suggestion for your reply:
"1.2x spacing makes 03:27:826 (1,2) - too close imo, I'd like to keep the current spacing" <-- and then use 1,3x spacing at all since 1,24x categoried as 1,2x here
quick check here since i'm being so busy Q_Q
also good luck on the map