Sakaue Nachi wrote:

建议HP-1 打了次差点挂了 这bpm这od不科学建议od-1 hp改啦, 我喜欢od8的感觉, 不改, 体会一下LL出good就断的感觉
怎么不用下你发明的新梗233 233我要用在另一张图里
[Expert]
00:05:915 (1) - 这个如果是跟人声的话调到1/8放 啊 我还是觉得不好
00:26:938 (1) - 这个放下一点 离下个远点更适合 好啊
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一点看清楚点，后面还有同理 不好
01:02:844 (2,1) - 01:03:789 (2,1) - 这两组是相同的节奏建议间距保持一致 你看, 歌词里唱的是二度とこない切ない, 所以我觉得应该每个都不一样才对
01:15:245 (4) - 不stack一下吗，其实也行不过我是强迫症 啊好
01:18:552 (5) - NC 好, nightcore
01:58:907 (5) - 这个折返算不算遮挡了？ 能看出来啊 先放着
02:12:588 (1) - 这个很难看清楚 挺明显的啊 不改
02:50:856 (1) - 这个貌似没对上音 有啊 1/8嘛
[hard]
00:09:930 (1,2) - 直接1个折返好点？ 好
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - hard来说好像略坑。。。 点中间就行了啊 哪里坑了
其他貌似没什么问题

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

太dio，让我先射五个星星

1. Various of weird rhythm in [Expert]
2. Various of weird rhythm in [Hard]
3. Patterns in [Hard]

OSUtoto wrote:

写在前面——我不会附魔摸图

[?????]

-Expert-
00:33:552 (6,7) - 换成两个二连 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107527 。。这里这么散
01:57:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样既美观又实用 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107622 :arrow: 后来改成1/8了
01:59:773 (2) - 这一段节奏比较慢，不应该出现这种短条条 不好 这个鼓点多好啊
02:26:348 (3) - 换成两个圈圈，这样衔接比较圆滑 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107566
02:30:836 (4) - 移到(168,272)打着舒服 这里的歌词是紧张所以不可以拉开啦
02:28:356 (2) - 不好看！ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107633 这里要放一个动摇的滑条(
02:42:174 (6,7) - 为了烘托两声啪啪（好像是咔咔）， https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107637 不想改丽(
03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - 不合节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107592 人声->鼓点的转换
03:47:489 (2,3) - finish放在3上 这里的音调和别的不一样啊 所以才放在前面
03:48:907 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - 可以根据音乐的“噔噔”、“噔噔”来适当改变间距 那样感觉会造成跟1/4还是1/3的混乱233
03:51:859 (2,1,2,3,4) - 二倍速绿线，交换2、3的位置和滑条方向之后会更刺激 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107602

00:36:387 (2) - 为何加速 啊 我发现没加new combo啊 概率
01:25:875 (1) - 不好看，拉长点摆成花花或其他什么 花花lovelove



-其他-
我要作GD

-其他2-
niconiconi

-其他3-
滑条不好看！！

-其他4-
圈的颜色不好看

-其他8-
音效懒得摸

-其他6-
其他难度懒得摸

-其他8-
我会数数

nold_1702 wrote:

Rebubble

384059043 wrote:

ar3也要rank辣

Sellenite wrote:

1星N卡
2星R卡
3星SR卡
4星UR卡
我 要 单 抽 UR ！

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

不行我要和你的图在一起！

Autumn wrote:

助你上前三

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

不行我要和你的图在一起！

Sharlo wrote:

手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad

Sharlo wrote:

手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad

Zero__wind wrote:

aji人也要rank图

happy623 wrote:

來啦

CDFA wrote:

They're not even mermaids

This is unfortunate

I have a thing for mermaids

Expert:
00:47:726 (1) - I get why you do this, but it's not super fun to play ->1.1x and changed the next patterns
00:49:143 (2) - This jump is a little big
01:11:230 (4) - This jump is also pretty large o-o o.o it has the slider leniency, should be fine as i can get 300s, moved a little anyways
02:12:588 (1) - This is just really weird to play. It's on a weirdly syncopated beat where there isn't anything completely noteworthy there (And don't give me this "if u listen closely" like I know exactly what you're mapping to but it's not a natural thing to feel, especially with this slowed down slider)
maybe it's for the crossover effect www, anyways i deeted the node and moved next sliders to the right
03:50:560 (1) - This. . . this feels like it's wrong. I can kind of hear what you're going for, but it's not consistent with the other times, so it looks like a mistake idk, changed to 1/3
03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - Nope. The word is literally whispered, it doesn't warrant a jump or even so many notes. At the very least, remove the combos. ok i removed the combos 233

Hard:
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - Same as insane. It's even weirder now because like there's a weird stacking thing going on. Especially with the AR, it just looks cluttered. ->normal 4x

Normal:
03:52:922 (1,2) - Same as insane hmm.. i used a reverse slider, seems more fitting

Nyan nyan. The insane can be really cluttered at times and the jumps don't all make sense ;w;

CDFA wrote:

Commenting on 01:10:639 (2,3,4,5) - I tried playing this, and I only got a 300 on both of the notes after akwardly jerking up and hoping I hit the note. It doesn't feel very good to play ( It'd make me a happy panda if you adjusted it, since the slider leniency isn't as big as you think.

That's all. I'm happy to rank otherwise

EvilElvis wrote:

SPOILER

Saigyouji Yuyuko wrote:

ar3要rank啦

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了

感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

思考，又有ur，我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

思考，又有ur，我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_

你们说的欧洲券是指那个活动送的绿的还是那个抽满星送的五个一次的蓝的啊

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

20%ur那个啊，抽完悲剧了233，不过11连出了两个一样的肥希，还是没UR candle

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了

感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)

Sakuno Uryu wrote:

为数不多喜欢的LL的歌之一，但是ar3为啥你做的这么蛋疼。。。打起来好难受啊