谢mod233Kagamine Ren wrote:
缪斯万岁!
我叒唧唧摸不出啥东西(完全不会打这类图),凑活着看吧
推荐加点ar 别啊!那样我就打不了啦!aji01:06:623 (1) - 这个滑条好像跟错重音了 嗯, 我也这么觉得, 改了改
01:07:332 (3) - ↑ 233
01:18:316 (4) - 空一个太不人性了,十分难读 不改!!111
03:08:513 (1) - 难读,后面那个滑条换个位置吧
03:19:261 (4) - 偶数连还空一个,太难了T.T 我就喜欢四连叠一个单点233
03:26:820 (4) - 容易读成往下的._. 往外面又移了一点点
02:43:946 (1) - 这几个单点好变态owo 三分拍嘛ww 好像只能这么放
02:46:308 (7) - 滑条跟这个音舒服一点
02:46:426 (8) - ↑
02:46:781 (1) - ↑
02:47:135 (2) - ↑(都在滑条尾我是觉得不太好) 0.0不是二连音吗, 你说的是哪个
thx_shorelkx_Shore wrote:
[General]“Kiai时间短于15秒。”(复读10次中) kiai fountain
加个空的sliderslide.wav吧?话说soft的底音用在这曲轻了点。 强迫症 至于吗..
另外开头那一小段用85%音量是不是大声了点? 开头那一声no tomenaide..自己编曲+唱把时间拖到5分钟就可以app了耶说的对啊
[Expert]所以是不扯淡就挑不出东西的情况233 candel
- 00:08:277 (1,2) - 大间距然后瞬间减速?...有点违和,虽然玩起也不难。 不难就不改了啊
- 00:36:623 - 漏音感觉莫名( 233
- 00:58:119 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
- 01:08:513 (1) - 漏Finish啦 加了
- 02:11:820 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
- 02:43:946 (1,2,3,4) - 迷惑性有点大...但不改也没什么所谓 三分拍嘛, 除非放滑条, 都是那样的
- 02:59:064 (3) - Nc? 哈皮
- 03:23:041 (3) - 这个滑条看起来好奇怪呀... 233
- 03:50:560 (1) - 有点莫名,我觉得不加然后让03:50:875 (1) - 稍微再03:50:560 (1) - 下面偏移一点也好 有点莫名 这是啥
[Hard]
- 00:36:387 (2) - 嗯,00:36:623 - 漏音 啊 不改丽还是
- 01:08:513 (2) - 漏Finish,为啥都漏这个地方... 当然是因为我的音效是复制的啊
- 01:22:096 (1) - 嗯我觉得这个sv用0.5x变速特别慢... 本来是0.75的 想了想 0.5算了
[Normal]Goodluck?
- 00:58:119 (4) - 头加whistle
- 01:05:678 (1) - 尾巴补finish
- 01:08:513 (1) - 头补finish,尾巴加whistle
- 01:10:403 (1) - finish
- 01:11:820 (3) - 尾巴whistle
- 02:18:434 (1) - whistle
- 02:20:324 (1) - finish
- 02:22:214 (1) - finish
- 02:27:883 (1) - finish
- 03:02:844 (2) - 连着用clap还不如换成whistle
thanks hw 11111Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur reqExpert
- 00:09:694 (1,3) - swap nc setting to emphasis the beat at 00:09:930 (3) - . it'll also help players catch the rhythm and read the sudden jumping pattern easier 不好
- 00:22:096 (4) - remove this note or shorter the ds from 00:21:623 (3) - , otherwise this jump is not that necessary for there's no heat beats in the song tracks, that'll play awkward, just try stuff like 00:25:875 (1,2) - 有下滑音的
- 00:34:340 (1) - here're 1/8 bell beats, change this to 1/8 repeating slider here you are right
- 00:43:001 (2,3) - and 00:44:891 (4,5) - r all 1/8 beats, change rhythm style and patterns here. same places in the whole map sets k
- 02:39:576 (3) - maybe unrankble for cannot read that overlap slider style this is not hard to read at all..
- 02:44:419 (4) - nc, really added
- 03:26:820 (4) - pretty sure this is unrankble, spread the slider's head and end without any bit of overlap plz 233 我放成0.63了
- 03:39:694 (1,2) - maybe overlap a bit more to give a better version here this is duo hao wo bu gai
- 03:41:584 (5,1) - swap nc setting for there's sudden rhythm shift behind, ur set plays not that well added one more nc
- 03:48:907 (1,2) - swap nc setting and set nc at 03:49:615 (5) - , and also remove nc at 03:50:875 (1) - . these 1/3 solo melody is really special, so u really need to give a clear nc notice added some
- 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove these nc, unnecessary nc spam buhao
- baka ar3 sama
Hard
- 00:28:710 (1,2) - swap nc setting i think it's better to show the stream beginning, so i put it here
- 00:34:261 (1,2) - ^
- 00:36:269 (1,2) - ^, fix others by urself
- 02:56:584 (4,6) - maybe avoid this overlap done
- 03:53:041 (1,1,1) - remove nc a, no
ranked!Normal
- 00:36:387 (1) - the slider's track's a bit offscreen in play mode it comes back
- 02:56:230 (2) - offscreen y:500 is offscreen, y:384 is not
- 03:33:552 (3,1) - swap nc setting to follow the vocal track ok
- 03:53:159 (1) - remove nc a
good luck
GGFFQQ55 wrote:
from M4M
general
od-1?不好 od8多好玩
combo color的颜色怎么这么奇怪。。。ll难道不应该是鲜艳的颜色么233 这是蓝歌啊 当然要用蓝色的 (LL梗233
我能说整体滑条拉的不好看么orz 233来拉个好看的, 我也觉得好几个不好看啊
节奏
最开始那段快节奏的音轨真的不跟么。。。感觉只跟vocal不爽啊 那个听不清 不好跟 也不好打
00:18:434 (5,6,7,1) - 同上
00:26:348 (2,3,4,1) - 继续同上
01:25:875 (1) - 跟背景的吉他比较好吧,长滑条总觉得怪怪的;后面的break可以试试跟吉他?那后面还怎么break!!!
03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 这里跟vocal有点怪啊
节奏看不出什么毛病。。。
排列
00:04:025 (3) - 红点后加一个白点,做成先直后弯的样子会不会好看一点?改了一点
00:10:757 (6,1) - 柑橘太紧了,可以摆开一点的 为什么不把它放在滑条6的怀抱里呢
00:22:804 (1,2,3,4) - flow好直啊,做成稍微弯的试试?往下拉了点
00:25:875 (1) - 不好看啊1111 我觉得这个还好啊22222
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 好难读清orz 虽然打起来好像还好 主要是觉得不好看, 我还是放中间算了
00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - 突然变距有点坑,建议间距小一点 不好, 这里正是节奏起来的地方, 怎么能不拉大点
01:14:182 (1) - 和四秒那里的滑条一样。。 这个没法改orz
01:25:875 (1) - 这滑条orz 试试把点竖直方向上调开一点试试? 0.0
02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - 突然摆跳有点坑 啦啦啦
02:28:356 (2) - 外婆草,这是什么。。没必要捏这根吧,就普通的弧度就好了啊 我在跟随歌词的意境制造紧张气氛啊, 难道你听不出来
02:39:576 (3) - 爷爷再捏一下吧,这实在是没法说好看啊 啊 那我再捏捏
02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - 也是突然开始跳,不太舒服 11111
03:02:253 (3) - 试试把滑条尾朝向左侧向上的角度?这样flow不太顺 会吗 滑条不就是调整flow用的 怎么会不顺
03:23:041 (3) - 捏捏捏,不捏还是人 不做人啦
03:26:820 (4) - 你看,这个多好;w; 111111
03:34:379 (1) - 捏捏捏 都捏啦
03:43:237 (3) - 滑条尾可以往上钩一些 不好 钓不到鱼
03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这尾杀,我终于知道user's word啥意思了 尾杀失败
conclusion
节奏挺好,排列大部分都很不错,球捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏
1111111111111111111
thanks for modding 111111Regraz wrote:
Hi! AR3! There is Regraz's mod!![]()
There is a few points of my mod:
- Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
- Mod is just suggestions, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
- I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
- Bond means highly suggest.
- This is the 7th map I mod since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)
General
- You can uncheck the wide screen support if you dont want to put a storyboard in this mapset.
Normal
Rhythm:
- 00:06:151 (1,2) - Personally speaking, it is better to replace this with a reverse 3/4 slider, since 3/4 single note is hard for newbie players. there is no judgment at slider ends, even at slider heads it's very loose, so i think 3/4 sliders are fine if is single
- 00:45:836 (1,2,3) - 3 single notes seem a little hard for newbies. 127 至于吗
- 00:49:143 Seems that adding a note will make the rhythm consisitent. add a little rest(?)
- 00:59:064 (1,2,3) - A rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjmq/6dbf7c45fe.jpg 滑条判定那么松 没事的 而且你看LL那N的难度..
- 01:00:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Also these 4 single notes seems too hard for newbies, they cannot react well coz the rhythm changes. i changed this into a short 1/2 slider
- 01:09:930 Seems missing a note here? hmm, this is intended(?)
- 01:57:174^ indeed
- 02:08:985 (1) - Also a rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjG5/04e3dbaee8.jpg , I guess this can provide more hit feel. then i will have to remap many notes after this, so no change 1111
- 02:23:631 Add a note here to make the rhythm consistent
- 03:08:867 (3) - Oh this slider is a little weird with starting at neither the whiteline nor the red line! I highly recomend you use 3/4 reverse slider: http://puu.sh/bFkYF/8bdb61113d.jpg . a 我先看看
- 03:34:733 (1) - lengthen to 03:37:332 lengthened
- 03:52:922 (1,2) - Oops!
Structure:- 00:57:174 (3,4) - Not a good pattern imo, trying to make more effort on blanket? i changed for a pattern that doesn't need blanketing
- 03:37:804 (1,2,3) - Why not make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and the head of 3?
- 01:16:544 (1,2,1) - ^ if it's a perfect/equilateral triangle, the flow feels balanced into all three sides. but at this part it should back o first 2 notes and go through the slider, this feels better in playing
Hitsounds- 00:20:324 (2) - Weird clap imo. hmm
- 00:25:048 (1) - trying use claps instead of the slidertick here (by adding greenlines.) buhao
- 00:46:781 (4) - whistle ok
- 01:25:048 (1) - Maybe you can add a drum hitsound here. 233 the thinking bear
- 02:58:592 (1) - Silence the sliderslide! It sounds noisy here! 强迫症.. 至于吗 不删
- 03:31:190 (3) - same as the 1st point.
Others:- None
Hard
- -0.5 AR? good 我都忘了可以开0.5了, 感觉ar7不科学才放的8
Rhythm:- 00:15:245 (5,6) - Why not continue using the triplets? because that is too sxbk
Structure:- 00:36:387 (2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bFWzZ/20dfc0c9d0.jpg good job
- 00:44:891 (4) - Improve this blanket a 好啊
- 01:12:647 (6,1,2) - ^
- 03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这啥排列 打中间就行了啊 不难
Hitsounds- 00:18:434 (5) - remove whistle on the tail?
Others:- None
Expert
Rhythm:
- 00:40:875 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally, I guess stream should start at 00:41:111 i think it feels better to put a slider there, 233
- 03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - Better if you follow vocal here. i think that is not good
- 03:30:245 (1,2) - Guess it should be: http://puu.sh/bGhzV/0cf3bd112b.jpg you're right, fixed
Structure:- 00:43:356 (3) - Adjust DS to make players know this special rhythm i made a slider
- 00:45:245 (5) - ^
- 00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - DS too large imo. this song is only 127 bpm, 2x sv, although ds multiplier is large, this is very playable, and i can do 700+c myself
- 01:15:245 (4,6) - A perfect stack wont hurt. this is intentionally made to stack ingame
- 01:16:899 (3,6) - Adjust this stack, now it is not perfect. this is weird, can't do a perfect one since it doesn't auto snap
- 01:21:978 (2,3) - DS so large!!!!
- 01:23:631 (1,2,1,2) - 这DS太残忍了啊
- 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - Oh God 233
- 02:57:883 (3) - 4.6x DS, Extra 也不能这样啊 这里是x0.75啊 不要只看ds啊 那个要算绿线的 我绿线要是0.5就是6.93x ds啦233
Hitsounds- None
Others:- 02:12:588 (2) - NC coz SV changes here. added both
- 02:35:796 (5) - ^
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this!If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
谢摸图111Sakaue Nachi wrote:
建议HP-1 打了次差点挂了 这bpm这od不科学建议od-1 hp改啦, 我喜欢od8的感觉, 不改,体会一下LL出good就断的感觉
怎么不用下你发明的新梗233 233我要用在另一张图里
[Expert]
00:05:915 (1) - 这个如果是跟人声的话调到1/8放 啊 我还是觉得不好
00:26:938 (1) - 这个放下一点 离下个远点更适合 好啊
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一点看清楚点,后面还有同理 不好
01:02:844 (2,1) - 01:03:789 (2,1) - 这两组是相同的节奏建议间距保持一致 你看, 歌词里唱的是二度とこない切ない, 所以我觉得应该每个都不一样才对
01:15:245 (4) - 不stack一下吗,其实也行不过我是强迫症 啊好
01:18:552 (5) - NC 好, nightcore
01:58:907 (5) - 这个折返算不算遮挡了? 能看出来啊 先放着
02:12:588 (1) - 这个很难看清楚 挺明显的啊 不改
02:50:856 (1) - 这个貌似没对上音 有啊 1/8嘛
[hard]
00:09:930 (1,2) - 直接1个折返好点? 好
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - hard来说好像略坑。。。 点中间就行了啊 哪里坑了
其他貌似没什么问题
wa 祝你抽到ur(Nightcore Princess G wrote:
太dio,让我先射五个星星
啊 我改啦OSUtoto wrote:
写在前面——我不会附魔摸图
[?????]
-Expert-
00:33:552 (6,7) - 换成两个二连 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107527 。。这里这么散
01:57:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样既美观又实用 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107622 :arrow: 后来改成1/8了
01:59:773 (2) - 这一段节奏比较慢,不应该出现这种短条条 不好 这个鼓点多好啊
02:26:348 (3) - 换成两个圈圈,这样衔接比较圆滑 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107566
02:30:836 (4) - 移到(168,272)打着舒服 这里的歌词是紧张所以不可以拉开啦
02:28:356 (2) - 不好看! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107633 这里要放一个动摇的滑条(
02:42:174 (6,7) - 为了烘托两声啪啪(好像是咔咔), https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107637 不想改丽(
03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - 不合节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107592 人声->鼓点的转换
03:47:489 (2,3) - finish放在3上 这里的音调和别的不一样啊 所以才放在前面
03:48:907 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - 可以根据音乐的“噔噔”、“噔噔”来适当改变间距 那样感觉会造成跟1/4还是1/3的混乱23303:51:859 (2,1,2,3,4) - 二倍速绿线,交换2、3的位置和滑条方向之后会更刺激 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107602
00:36:387 (2) - 为何加速 啊 我发现没加new combo啊 概率
01:25:875 (1) - 不好看,拉长点摆成花花或其他什么 花花lovelove-其他-
我要作GD
-其他2-
niconiconi
-其他3-
滑条不好看!!
-其他4-
圈的颜色不好看
-其他8-
音效懒得摸
-其他6-
其他难度懒得摸
-其他8-
我会数数
ok thanks~nold_1702 wrote:
Rebubble
ar3也要rank辣384059043 wrote:
ar3也要rank辣
抽UR啦!Sellenite wrote:
1星N卡
2星R卡
3星SR卡
4星UR卡
我 要 单 抽 UR !
不行我要和你的图在一起!Sakaue Nachi wrote:
我觉得应该射到51星233
candle[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
不行我要和你的图在一起!Sakaue Nachi wrote:
我觉得应该射到51星233
LL活动终于打完了, 好累Autumn wrote:
助你上前三
手贱射了一个拆散了你们[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
不行我要和你的图在一起!Sakaue Nachi wrote:
我觉得应该射到51星233
蜡烛Sharlo wrote:
手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad
本来就不在一起了,你射了离的更远了,你应该给我射的Sharlo wrote:
手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad
啦啦啦Zero__wind wrote:
aji人也要rank图
啦啦啦happy623 wrote:
來啦
i also removed a note in normal at 00:12:293 (1) - because someone said it's too close to spinner o.oCDFA wrote:
They're not even mermaids
This is unfortunate
I have a thing for mermaids
Expert:
00:47:726 (1) - I get why you do this, but it's not super fun to play ->1.1x and changed the next patterns
00:49:143 (2) - This jump is a little big
01:11:230 (4) - This jump is also pretty large o-o o.o it has the slider leniency, should be fine asi can get 300s, moved a little anyways
02:12:588 (1) - This is just really weird to play. It's on a weirdly syncopated beat where there isn't anything completely noteworthy there (And don't give me this "if u listen closely" like I know exactly what you're mapping to but it's not a natural thing to feel, especially with this slowed down slider)
maybe it's for the crossover effect www, anyways i deeted the node and moved next sliders to the right
03:50:560 (1) - This. . . this feels like it's wrong. I can kind of hear what you're going for, but it's not consistent with the other times, so it looks like a mistake idk, changed to 1/3
03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - Nope. The word is literally whispered, it doesn't warrant a jump or even so many notes. At the very least, remove the combos. ok i removed the combos 233
Hard:
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - Same as insane. It's even weirder now because like there's a weird stacking thing going on. Especially with the AR, it just looks cluttered. ->normal 4x
Normal:
03:52:922 (1,2) - Same as insane hmm.. i used a reverse slider, seems more fitting
Nyan nyan. The insane can be really cluttered at times and the jumps don't all make sense ;w;
owoCDFA wrote:
Commenting on 01:10:639 (2,3,4,5) - I tried playing this, and I only got a 300 on both of the notes after akwardly jerking up and hoping I hit the note. It doesn't feel very good to play( It'd make me a happy panda if you adjusted it, since the slider leniency isn't as big as you think.
That's all. I'm happy to rank otherwise
wwwwwwwwwEvilElvis wrote:
思考,又有ur,我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了
感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)
你们说的欧洲券是指那个活动送的绿的还是那个抽满星送的五个一次的蓝的啊Sakaue Nachi wrote:
思考,又有ur,我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_
20%ur那个啊,抽完悲剧了233,不过11连出了两个一样的肥希,还是没UR candle[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
你们说的欧洲券是指那个活动送的绿的还是那个抽满星送的五个一次的蓝的啊Sakaue Nachi wrote:
思考,又有ur,我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_
两个一样的好啊 可以觉醒了233Sakaue Nachi wrote:
20%ur那个啊,抽完悲剧了233,不过11连出了两个一样的肥希,还是没UR candle
做辉夜城啊,貌似还没有一首rank的[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了
感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)
233节奏比较复杂, 这么做好玩啊Sakuno Uryu wrote:
为数不多喜欢的LL的歌之一,但是ar3为啥你做的这么蛋疼。。。打起来好难受啊