Kagamine Ren wrote:

缪斯万岁！

我叒唧唧摸不出啥东西（完全不会打这类图），凑活着看吧
推荐加点ar 别啊！那样我就打不了啦！

aji

01:06:623 (1) - 这个滑条好像跟错重音了 嗯, 我也这么觉得, 改了改
01:07:332 (3) - ↑ 233
01:18:316 (4) - 空一个太不人性了，十分难读 不改！！111
03:08:513 (1) - 难读，后面那个滑条换个位置吧
03:19:261 (4) - 偶数连还空一个，太难了T.T 我就喜欢四连叠一个单点233
03:26:820 (4) - 容易读成往下的._. 往外面又移了一点点
02:43:946 (1) - 这几个单点好变态owo 三分拍嘛ww 好像只能这么放
02:46:308 (7) - 滑条跟这个音舒服一点
02:46:426 (8) - ↑
02:46:781 (1) - ↑
02:47:135 (2) - ↑（都在滑条尾我是觉得不太好） 0.0不是二连音吗, 你说的是哪个

1. 00:18:670 (6) - make 1/2
2. 00:22:450 (6) -
3. 00:25:403 (3) - make 1/2
4. 00:26:938 (1,2) - replace with slider
5. 00:33:552 (6) - move 00:33:670 -
6. 00:44:537 (3) - move 00:44:655 -
7. 00:49:143 (2) - move 00:49:261 -
8. 01:01:544 - add note
9. 01:18:552 (5,6) -
10. 01:25:875 (1) - try something else
11. 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - unequal spacing
12. 02:27:411 - add note
13. 02:39:576 (3) - please change
14. 02:56:230 (1,2,3,4) - it's too harddddddddd please bring (2) closer
15. 02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - i like it
16. 03:03:198 (6) - move 03:03:434 -
17. 03:11:348 (2) - make 1/2
18. 03:26:820 (4) - ☆
19. 03:34:379 (1) - please change (；・∀・)
20. 03:41:289 - add note
21. 03:50:088 (1,2,3) - keep same rotation as previous
22. 03:53:041 (1) - bring a little down
23. 03:53:277 (1) - move a little up

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

from M4M

general

od-1？不好 od8多好玩

combo color的颜色怎么这么奇怪。。。ll难道不应该是鲜艳的颜色么233 这是蓝歌啊 当然要用蓝色的 (LL梗233

我能说整体滑条拉的不好看么orz 233来拉个好看的, 我也觉得好几个不好看啊

节奏

最开始那段快节奏的音轨真的不跟么。。。感觉只跟vocal不爽啊 那个听不清 不好跟 也不好打

00:18:434 (5,6,7,1) - 同上

00:26:348 (2,3,4,1) - 继续同上

01:25:875 (1) - 跟背景的吉他比较好吧，长滑条总觉得怪怪的；后面的break可以试试跟吉他？那后面还怎么break！！！

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 这里跟vocal有点怪啊

节奏看不出什么毛病。。。

排列

00:04:025 (3) - 红点后加一个白点，做成先直后弯的样子会不会好看一点？改了一点

00:10:757 (6,1) - 柑橘太紧了，可以摆开一点的 为什么不把它放在滑条6的怀抱里呢

00:22:804 (1,2,3,4) - flow好直啊，做成稍微弯的试试？往下拉了点

00:25:875 (1) - 不好看啊1111 我觉得这个还好啊22222

00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 好难读清orz 虽然打起来好像还好 主要是觉得不好看, 我还是放中间算了

00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - 突然变距有点坑，建议间距小一点 不好, 这里正是节奏起来的地方, 怎么能不拉大点

01:14:182 (1) - 和四秒那里的滑条一样。。 这个没法改orz

01:25:875 (1) - 这滑条orz 试试把点竖直方向上调开一点试试？ 0.0

02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - 突然摆跳有点坑 啦啦啦

02:28:356 (2) - 外婆草，这是什么。。没必要捏这根吧，就普通的弧度就好了啊 我在跟随歌词的意境制造紧张气氛啊, 难道你听不出来

02:39:576 (3) - 爷爷再捏一下吧，这实在是没法说好看啊 啊 那我再捏捏

02:57:647 (1,2,3,4) - 也是突然开始跳，不太舒服 11111

03:02:253 (3) - 试试把滑条尾朝向左侧向上的角度？这样flow不太顺 会吗 滑条不就是调整flow用的 怎么会不顺

03:23:041 (3) - 捏捏捏，不捏还是人 不做人啦

03:26:820 (4) - 你看，这个多好;w; 111111

03:34:379 (1) - 捏捏捏 都捏啦

03:43:237 (3) - 滑条尾可以往上钩一些 不好 钓不到鱼

03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这尾杀，我终于知道user's word啥意思了 尾杀失败

conclusion

节奏挺好，排列大部分都很不错，球捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏捏

1111111111111111111

Regraz wrote:

Hi! AR3! There is Regraz's mod!
There is a few points of my mod:

1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
2. Mod is just suggestions, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
4. Bond means highly suggest.
5. This is the 7th map I mod since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

1. You can uncheck the wide screen support if you dont want to put a storyboard in this mapset.

Normal

• 
  Rhythm:

1. 00:06:151 (1,2) - Personally speaking, it is better to replace this with a reverse 3/4 slider, since 3/4 single note is hard for newbie players. there is no judgment at slider ends, even at slider heads it's very loose, so i think 3/4 sliders are fine if is single
2. 00:45:836 (1,2,3) - 3 single notes seem a little hard for newbies. 127 至于吗
3. 00:49:143 Seems that adding a note will make the rhythm consisitent. add a little rest(?)
4. 00:59:064 (1,2,3) - A rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjmq/6dbf7c45fe.jpg 滑条判定那么松 没事的 而且你看LL那N的难度..
5. 01:00:718 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Also these 4 single notes seems too hard for newbies, they cannot react well coz the rhythm changes. i changed this into a short 1/2 slider
6. 01:09:930 Seems missing a note here? hmm, this is intended(?)
7. 01:57:174^ indeed
8. 02:08:985 (1) - Also a rhythm suggestion: http://puu.sh/bFjG5/04e3dbaee8.jpg , I guess this can provide more hit feel. then i will have to remap many notes after this, so no change 1111
9. 02:23:631 Add a note here to make the rhythm consistent
10. 03:08:867 (3) - Oh this slider is a little weird with starting at neither the whiteline nor the red line! I highly recomend you use 3/4 reverse slider: http://puu.sh/bFkYF/8bdb61113d.jpg . a 我先看看
11. 03:34:733 (1) - lengthen to 03:37:332 lengthened
12. 03:52:922 (1,2) - Oops!
    
    Structure:
13. 00:57:174 (3,4) - Not a good pattern imo, trying to make more effort on blanket? i changed for a pattern that doesn't need blanketing
14. 03:37:804 (1,2,3) - Why not make a perfect triangle with 1 2 and the head of 3?
15. 01:16:544 (1,2,1) - ^ if it's a perfect/equilateral triangle, the flow feels balanced into all three sides. but at this part it should back o first 2 notes and go through the slider, this feels better in playing
    
    Hitsounds
16. 00:20:324 (2) - Weird clap imo. hmm
17. 00:25:048 (1) - trying use claps instead of the slidertick here (by adding greenlines.) buhao
18. 00:46:781 (4) - whistle ok
19. 01:25:048 (1) - Maybe you can add a drum hitsound here. 233 the thinking bear
20. 02:58:592 (1) - Silence the sliderslide! It sounds noisy here! 强迫症.. 至于吗 不删
21. 03:31:190 (3) - same as the 1st point.
    
    Others:
22. None

Hard

1. -0.5 AR? good 我都忘了可以开0.5了, 感觉ar7不科学才放的8
   
   Rhythm:
2. 00:15:245 (5,6) - Why not continue using the triplets? because that is too sxbk
   
   Structure:
3. 00:36:387 (2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/bFWzZ/20dfc0c9d0.jpg good job
4. 00:44:891 (4) - Improve this blanket a 好啊
5. 01:12:647 (6,1,2) - ^
6. 03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - 妈呀这啥排列 打中间就行了啊 不难
   
   Hitsounds
7. 00:18:434 (5) - remove whistle on the tail?
   Others:
8. None

Expert

• 
  Rhythm:

1. 00:40:875 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally, I guess stream should start at 00:41:111 i think it feels better to put a slider there, 233
2. 03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - Better if you follow vocal here. i think that is not good
3. 03:30:245 (1,2) - Guess it should be: http://puu.sh/bGhzV/0cf3bd112b.jpg you're right, fixed
   Structure:
4. 00:43:356 (3) - Adjust DS to make players know this special rhythm i made a slider
5. 00:45:245 (5) - ^
6. 00:53:395 (1,2,3,4) - DS too large imo. this song is only 127 bpm, 2x sv, although ds multiplier is large, this is very playable, and i can do 700+c myself
7. 01:15:245 (4,6) - A perfect stack wont hurt. this is intentionally made to stack ingame
8. 01:16:899 (3,6) - Adjust this stack, now it is not perfect. this is weird, can't do a perfect one since it doesn't auto snap
9. 01:21:978 (2,3) - DS so large!!!!
10. 01:23:631 (1,2,1,2) - 这DS太残忍了啊
11. 02:07:096 (1,2,3,4) - Oh God 233
12. 02:57:883 (3) - 4.6x DS, Extra 也不能这样啊 这里是x0.75啊 不要只看ds啊 那个要算绿线的 我绿线要是0.5就是6.93x ds啦233
    Hitsounds
13. None
    Others:
    
14. 02:12:588 (2) - NC coz SV changes here. added both
15. 02:35:796 (5) - ^

Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

建议HP-1 打了次差点挂了 这bpm这od不科学建议od-1 hp改啦, 我喜欢od8的感觉, 不改, 体会一下LL出good就断的感觉
怎么不用下你发明的新梗233 233我要用在另一张图里
[Expert]
00:05:915 (1) - 这个如果是跟人声的话调到1/8放 啊 我还是觉得不好
00:26:938 (1) - 这个放下一点 离下个远点更适合 好啊
00:43:001 (2,3,4) - 建议分开一点看清楚点，后面还有同理 不好
01:02:844 (2,1) - 01:03:789 (2,1) - 这两组是相同的节奏建议间距保持一致 你看, 歌词里唱的是二度とこない切ない, 所以我觉得应该每个都不一样才对
01:15:245 (4) - 不stack一下吗，其实也行不过我是强迫症 啊好
01:18:552 (5) - NC 好, nightcore
01:58:907 (5) - 这个折返算不算遮挡了？ 能看出来啊 先放着
02:12:588 (1) - 这个很难看清楚 挺明显的啊 不改
02:50:856 (1) - 这个貌似没对上音 有啊 1/8嘛
[hard]
00:09:930 (1,2) - 直接1个折返好点？ 好
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - hard来说好像略坑。。。 点中间就行了啊 哪里坑了
其他貌似没什么问题

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

太dio，让我先射五个星星

1. Various of weird rhythm in [Expert]
2. Various of weird rhythm in [Hard]
3. Patterns in [Hard]

OSUtoto wrote:

写在前面——我不会附魔摸图

[?????]

-Expert-
00:33:552 (6,7) - 换成两个二连 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107527 。。这里这么散
01:57:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这样既美观又实用 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107622 :arrow: 后来改成1/8了
01:59:773 (2) - 这一段节奏比较慢，不应该出现这种短条条 不好 这个鼓点多好啊
02:26:348 (3) - 换成两个圈圈，这样衔接比较圆滑 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107566
02:30:836 (4) - 移到(168,272)打着舒服 这里的歌词是紧张所以不可以拉开啦
02:28:356 (2) - 不好看！ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107633 这里要放一个动摇的滑条(
02:42:174 (6,7) - 为了烘托两声啪啪（好像是咔咔）， https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107637 不想改丽(
03:11:348 (2,3,4,5) - 不合节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107592 人声->鼓点的转换
03:47:489 (2,3) - finish放在3上 这里的音调和别的不一样啊 所以才放在前面
03:48:907 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1) - 可以根据音乐的“噔噔”、“噔噔”来适当改变间距 那样感觉会造成跟1/4还是1/3的混乱233
03:51:859 (2,1,2,3,4) - 二倍速绿线，交换2、3的位置和滑条方向之后会更刺激 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2107602

00:36:387 (2) - 为何加速 啊 我发现没加new combo啊 概率
01:25:875 (1) - 不好看，拉长点摆成花花或其他什么 花花lovelove



-其他-
我要作GD

-其他2-
niconiconi

-其他3-
滑条不好看！！

-其他4-
圈的颜色不好看

-其他8-
音效懒得摸

-其他6-
其他难度懒得摸

-其他8-
我会数数

nold_1702 wrote:

Rebubble

384059043 wrote:

ar3也要rank辣

Sellenite wrote:

1星N卡
2星R卡
3星SR卡
4星UR卡
我 要 单 抽 UR ！

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

不行我要和你的图在一起！

Autumn wrote:

助你上前三

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

我觉得应该射到51星233

不行我要和你的图在一起！

Sharlo wrote:

手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad

Sharlo wrote:

手贱射了一个拆散了你们
sad

Zero__wind wrote:

aji人也要rank图

happy623 wrote:

來啦

CDFA wrote:

They're not even mermaids

This is unfortunate

I have a thing for mermaids

Expert:
00:47:726 (1) - I get why you do this, but it's not super fun to play ->1.1x and changed the next patterns
00:49:143 (2) - This jump is a little big
01:11:230 (4) - This jump is also pretty large o-o o.o it has the slider leniency, should be fine as i can get 300s, moved a little anyways
02:12:588 (1) - This is just really weird to play. It's on a weirdly syncopated beat where there isn't anything completely noteworthy there (And don't give me this "if u listen closely" like I know exactly what you're mapping to but it's not a natural thing to feel, especially with this slowed down slider)
maybe it's for the crossover effect www, anyways i deeted the node and moved next sliders to the right
03:50:560 (1) - This. . . this feels like it's wrong. I can kind of hear what you're going for, but it's not consistent with the other times, so it looks like a mistake idk, changed to 1/3
03:52:923 (1,1,1,1) - Nope. The word is literally whispered, it doesn't warrant a jump or even so many notes. At the very least, remove the combos. ok i removed the combos 233

Hard:
03:52:922 (1,1,1,1) - Same as insane. It's even weirder now because like there's a weird stacking thing going on. Especially with the AR, it just looks cluttered. ->normal 4x

Normal:
03:52:922 (1,2) - Same as insane hmm.. i used a reverse slider, seems more fitting

Nyan nyan. The insane can be really cluttered at times and the jumps don't all make sense ;w;

CDFA wrote:

Commenting on 01:10:639 (2,3,4,5) - I tried playing this, and I only got a 300 on both of the notes after akwardly jerking up and hoping I hit the note. It doesn't feel very good to play ( It'd make me a happy panda if you adjusted it, since the slider leniency isn't as big as you think.

That's all. I'm happy to rank otherwise

EvilElvis wrote:

SPOILER

Saigyouji Yuyuko wrote:

ar3要rank啦

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了

感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

思考，又有ur，我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

思考，又有ur，我今晚要抽欧洲券了_(:з」∠)_

你们说的欧洲券是指那个活动送的绿的还是那个抽满星送的五个一次的蓝的啊

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

20%ur那个啊，抽完悲剧了233，不过11连出了两个一样的肥希，还是没UR candle

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈我抽到UR了

感谢楼上各位的支持, 我一定会继续努力做更多LL的歌曲的(?)

Sakuno Uryu wrote:

为数不多喜欢的LL的歌之一，但是ar3为啥你做的这么蛋疼。。。打起来好难受啊