Hello, mod due request.
In first, i want to say something about whole map. I've played this map, and i got feel that i played a bunch of innecessary jumps that doesn't fit this map, because it's more calmly. This map was played well, but if jumps weren't here, map would be much better and pleasant for playing with calmly flow. This is your decide, and i understand it, but i want to say that this map doesn't fit the song, because jumps like 01:09:605 (2,3) - this and 01:22:031 (3,4,5,6) - this and other big jumps are too fast for this song and breaks the flow, making player twitch the cursor, when it's not necessary.
This is just my point and you shouldn't get mad because i told it. Now, the mod.
[%diff_name%]
00:01:900 (4,5,6) - these jumps doesn't fit, this is calmly part of song, make something calmer
00:19:469 (1) - how about making it round?
00:20:326 (3) - and this too, flow will be better
00:24:611 (1) - make it smoother a little
00:25:897 (6,2) - blanket with these objects will look better
00:55:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i just don't like how it looks and plays, if you don't mind, make (1)s and (2)s spaced a little like here 02:04:052 (1,2) -
01:04:677 (3,4) - try to stack them, because this pattern is confusing a little and even spacing doesn't help, player wants to press (4) later
01:09:605 (2,3) - they're doesn't makes sense, there is 5 notes 1/4 in music starting at 01:09:390 -
01:20:103 - there's 5 1/4 notes too
02:11:658 (5) - why did you add this beat when 02:11:015 - there's no beat? i think these patterns should be same
02:13:907 (1,2) - looks just bad for me, remind about patterns in 2009, unstack them if you don't mind
02:18:407 - and there's too 5 1/4 notes in rhythm. (don't forget that BATs are very picky about rhythm in approval maps)
02:32:119 - ^
03:01:477 (2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about such spacing in calm part?
03:04:048 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
03:06:619 (6) - repeat sliders with 2 and more repeats pretty boring to play, try to change it
03:35:758 (8) - add NC
03:36:615 (1) - remove NC
03:40:900 (7) - add NC
03:41:757 (1) - remove NC
and in following parts too, because these NCs aren't fitting, you should attach them to vocal
04:11:538 - yeah you know
04:25:251 - and again
05:05:545 (2) - add NC
In whole point map is good even with unfitting jumps, good luck with ranking!
sad thats you don't use normal-whistles
In first, i want to say something about whole map. I've played this map, and i got feel that i played a bunch of innecessary jumps that doesn't fit this map, because it's more calmly. This map was played well, but if jumps weren't here, map would be much better and pleasant for playing with calmly flow. This is your decide, and i understand it, but i want to say that this map doesn't fit the song, because jumps like 01:09:605 (2,3) - this and 01:22:031 (3,4,5,6) - this and other big jumps are too fast for this song and breaks the flow, making player twitch the cursor, when it's not necessary.
This is just my point and you shouldn't get mad because i told it. Now, the mod.
[%diff_name%]
00:01:900 (4,5,6) - these jumps doesn't fit, this is calmly part of song, make something calmer
00:19:469 (1) - how about making it round?
00:20:326 (3) - and this too, flow will be better
00:24:611 (1) - make it smoother a little
00:25:897 (6,2) - blanket with these objects will look better
00:55:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i just don't like how it looks and plays, if you don't mind, make (1)s and (2)s spaced a little like here 02:04:052 (1,2) -
01:04:677 (3,4) - try to stack them, because this pattern is confusing a little and even spacing doesn't help, player wants to press (4) later
01:09:605 (2,3) - they're doesn't makes sense, there is 5 notes 1/4 in music starting at 01:09:390 -
01:20:103 - there's 5 1/4 notes too
02:11:658 (5) - why did you add this beat when 02:11:015 - there's no beat? i think these patterns should be same
02:13:907 (1,2) - looks just bad for me, remind about patterns in 2009, unstack them if you don't mind
02:18:407 - and there's too 5 1/4 notes in rhythm. (don't forget that BATs are very picky about rhythm in approval maps)
02:32:119 - ^
03:01:477 (2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about such spacing in calm part?
03:04:048 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
03:06:619 (6) - repeat sliders with 2 and more repeats pretty boring to play, try to change it
03:35:758 (8) - add NC
03:36:615 (1) - remove NC
03:40:900 (7) - add NC
03:41:757 (1) - remove NC
and in following parts too, because these NCs aren't fitting, you should attach them to vocal
04:11:538 - yeah you know
04:25:251 - and again
05:05:545 (2) - add NC
In whole point map is good even with unfitting jumps, good luck with ranking!
sad thats you don't use normal-whistles