Neku okazaki wrote:

[Kantan]
Good ~

[Futsuu]
00:29:284 (47) - d | Is better ~ OK
00:31:078 (51) - Delete | Not is necesary OK
00:49:815 (33) - k? keep
00:53:005 (41) - k | Is different to 00:53:204 (42) - OK
01:21:509 (105) - Delete | Need small breaks ~ keep

[Muzukashii]
00:13:337 - ~ 00:22:506 - Use only 1/2 | 1/4 Is hard for this song not only 1/2
° 00:47:324 - ~ 00:49:317 - Make it more hard | Changing the system suddenly makes it sound weird keep
°00:53:005 (70,71,72) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad keep
00:59:184 (96) - Delete OK
00:59:981 (98) - ^ OK
00:59:981 (98) - ~ 01:20:613 - I say it in the blue point keep
01:16:128 (148,149,150) - I say it in the red point keep

This diff need more work

[Oni]
I see it good BUT You need to regulate the diff. Is more diferent this 01:08:752 - and this 00:46:227 - . For this, I see it Unrankeable

Thank you mod.

=w=

[General]
If I recall correct, the Source should be pop'n music, not Pop'n music.

Suggested Difficulty Settings:
Kantan: HP3-4/OD3-4
Futsuu: HP4/OD4
Muzukashii: HP5/OD5
Oni: HP6/OD6

00:00:580 - 00:13:337 - Keeping this part the same for all four diffs is a nice detail
01:46:625 - 01:57:788 - ^
00:51:609 - You should end the first kiai here.
01:46:625 - And the second kiai here.

[Oni]
This diff is lacking consistency, as in, you have heavy streams in 00:38:852 - 00:47:224 but then you have really easier patterns 00:47:224 - 00:51:211 while the music doesn't change in intensity, and something similar happens in the second kiai. If you're going to focus on a particular rhythm in a part, you should keep following it for the time that rhythm is still playing, I know you did these parts different because in the second part you followed another instrument than in the first, but this really feels awkward to play, which is very weird while playing.
I think you should keep the scroll speed the same in the first kiai would be nice (remove the slow down in the middle).

00:13:337 - 00:24:500 - In this part, patterns like 00:13:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) really stand out, the music is pretty calm here so this doesn't fit too much, you could simplify this to make it fit better, or just follow the flute in this part.
00:26:094 - 00:30:480 - Here you could change a bit your patterns and let the kats emphasize the flute like you did in 00:30:879 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73). Example:

00:32:473 (73) - A big don here wouldn't be bad.
00:32:872 - 00:35:264 - And we have another drastical change in difficulty, some patterns like in the previous part would be nice.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,5) - You could remove this notes to create a break and allow this strong beat 00:38:453 (4) have better emphasis, as it won't be hidden with the other notes.
00:38:852 (6) - Snap this note properly as it breaks how the speed up is done, moving it somewhere else and putting it back should work.
00:43:636 (49,51,52,53,56) - These big notes are too much in this part as it is not heavier than the previous stream, better keeping them as normal notes. You could add a kat in 00:44:533 and a don in 00:44:732, this would help to keep following this fast instrument while keeping this part not too heavy in notes, allowing
00:53:404 (97) - Remove this note so you keep following that windy instrument cleanly.
00:55:197 (105) - ^, or you could add a slider in 00:54:799 - 00:55:197 for the same purpose.
00:59:184 (127) - Remove this too.
00:59:981 (132,137) - Change these to kats, it'd keep following the flute better (Note that 132 isn't, but it compliments better the whole pattern than a don).
01:01:576 (140) - Remove or add a slider like I suggested in 00:55:197 (105).
01:01:975 (141,142) - Remove these two.
01:02:174 - Here my suggestion is a bit long so I'll better put a image, but this pattern would compliment better the flute here.
01:19:118 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - Here the rhythm is pretty much not in the music itself, you could try a spinner in 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 which would match with the increasing sound there.

01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note.
01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - If you could follow the percusions better here it'd be nicer, this stream feels really out of place, yes, music is intense but doesn't reflect the main rhythm in the music too fine. Removing 01:42:340 (36,41,44) would be enough, you can try a different way though.
01:44:632 (47) - Remove this note and extend the slider here, this allows the slider to cover better the held note and makes 01:45:032 (48) have more emphasis.
01:45:031 - Here you could try a rhythm like this, the constant 1/1 doesn't really represents the music nicely here, as the song has still some variety.
http://puu.sh/avwA7.png

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty has the same difficulty consistency problems Oni has.
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - This part has a higher note density than 00:26:094 - 00:35:663, but it's calmer, and this really breaks how the map feels, you should follow something similar as I suggested in Oni and make the first part follow only the flute, so the second part would be intenser now, matching with the song.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - As in Oni.
00:38:852 - I'm going to suggest a general pattern for this kiai, note that the song begins this 1/4 rhythm on the white ticks, so this section would benefit greatly with the triples beginning in the white ticks, and specially there should be a triple in the downbeat (the large white tick). ddd are highly suggested to use over kkk, something like this, you could try in different colors and put what you feel better.

00:44:234 (35) - You could remove this note so you follow the piano better.
00:51:211 (65,66,67) - k k d -> k ddd, this would emphasize nicely this last note.
00:57:191 (88,90) - Remove these to keep following the flute.
00:57:789 - Something like this for the flute

01:01:576 (104,105) - Remove.
01:03:470 (112,113) - ^
01:03:869 - Add a don and make 01:03:968 (115) a don too.
01:04:566 (118) - Make this slider begin in 01:04:367 along with the held note here.
01:05:364 - Maybe add a note here to keep the flute.
01:06:759 (126) - Remove.
01:09:551 (133,137) - Remove these notes, they feel a bit intrusive with the instrument your following here.
01:18:719 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) - As in Oni.
01:30:679 (1) - As in Oni.
01:43:436 (39,40) - As in Oni.
01:45:032 (41,42,43,44) - Something similar as I suggested in Oni, but simpler.
01:21:211 (163,171) - Looking as you focused a bit on percusions here, deleting this note would do the trick to make this part better, of course, you will have to keep patterns for percusions in the rest of this kiai to fix the inconsistencies I mentioned earlier.

[Futsuu]
This diff is very simple compared with the Muzukashii, there are very few 1/2 patterns, adding a few more would make the spread better.
The first kiai would benefit with some more notes.
I'm going to focus on notes that could be moved to improve the rhythm or follow better the instruments I think you're basing on, don't be scared about the length ;w;
00:14:932 (17) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:18:520 (25) - Remove to make this part calmer than the next.
00:21:709 (32) - ^
00:25:297 (36) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:29:284 (45) - Move to 00:29:682 -
00:37:656 (1,2,3) - Remove them, same reason as in the other diffs.
00:39:251 - You could add a don here.
00:41:443 - Spots like this would be nice to add a note too, here a kat would be nice.
00:43:835 (16) - Move this 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:50:214 (32,33) - Move these 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:56:593 (49) - ^
00:57:590 (52) - Move to 00:56:792.
00:59:981 (57) - Move to 00:59:383.
01:00:181 - Add a don.
01:00:181 - Move 1/2 beat forward.
01:03:570 (65,66) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:04:367 (67) - Make this slider end in 01:04:367 (67) and add a don in 01:05:563.
01:06:759 (70) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:06:958 - Add a don.
01:09:551 (75) - Remove this note.
01:12:938 - Maybe add a don.
01:13:536 - ^
01:18:719 (92,93,94,95) - As in the other difficulties.
01:26:493 - A don would be nice here to make a 1/2 pattern.
01:29:682 - A kat here for the same purpose.
01:30:679 (1) - As in the other difficulties.
01:37:057 (8) - Move this note to 01:39:250.
01:46:227 (29) - Remove the big note, it's too loud here ;w;

[Kantan]
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - If you could simplify a bit this part it'd be better, as this part is calmer than the next.
00:57:589 (32) - Remove this one so you keep notes on the flute only.
00:59:981 (37) - ^
01:01:975 (41) - ^
01:03:570 (44) - Move to 01:03:171.
01:04:766 (47) - Remove
01:05:164 (48) - Move to 01:05:563.
01:09:551 (55) - Remove this one so the big note is more emphasized.
01:18:719 (69,70,71,72) - I think a spinner from 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 would fit better here, as we have this increasing sound instead clear beats in the music.
01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note, and at the same time would allow a tiny break for players.
01:45:031 (21) - Remove this note and extend 01:43:437 (20) until here, it'd make more sense as you'll cover properly this held note.

That'd be all from my part, fixing the difficulty inconsistencies that Oni and Muzukashii have would be a big step ahead, as it's the biggest problem it has, Futsuu only suffer of this a bit in the first kiai.

Good luck.

DakeDekaane wrote:

=w=

[General]
If I recall correct, the Source should be pop'n music, not Pop'n music. fixed

Suggested Difficulty Settings: all keep
Kantan: HP3-4/OD3-4
Futsuu: HP4/OD4
Muzukashii: HP5/OD5
Oni: HP6/OD6

00:00:580 - 00:13:337 - Keeping this part the same for all four diffs is a nice detail
01:46:625 - 01:57:788 - ^
00:51:609 - You should end the first kiai here. fixed
01:46:625 - And the second kiai here. fixed

[Oni]
This diff is lacking consistency, as in, you have heavy streams in 00:38:852 - 00:47:224 but then you have really easier patterns 00:47:224 - 00:51:211 while the music doesn't change in intensity, and something similar happens in the second kiai. If you're going to focus on a particular rhythm in a part, you should keep following it for the time that rhythm is still playing, I know you did these parts different because in the second part you followed another instrument than in the first, but this really feels awkward to play, which is very weird while playing.
I think you should keep the scroll speed the same in the first kiai would be nice (remove the slow down in the middle).

00:13:337 - 00:24:500 - In this part, patterns like 00:13:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) really stand out, the music is pretty calm here so this doesn't fit too much, you could simplify this to make it fit better, or just follow the flute in this part.
00:26:094 - 00:30:480 - Here you could change a bit your patterns and let the kats emphasize the flute like you did in 00:30:879 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73). Example:

00:32:473 (73) - A big don here wouldn't be bad.
00:32:872 - 00:35:264 - And we have another drastical change in difficulty, some patterns like in the previous part would be nice.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,5) - You could remove this notes to create a break and allow this strong beat 00:38:453 (4) have better emphasis, as it won't be hidden with the other notes.
00:38:852 (6) - Snap this note properly as it breaks how the speed up is done, moving it somewhere else and putting it back should work.
00:43:636 (49,51,52,53,56) - These big notes are too much in this part as it is not heavier than the previous stream, better keeping them as normal notes. You could add a kat in 00:44:533 and a don in 00:44:732, this would help to keep following this fast instrument while keeping this part not too heavy in notes, allowing
00:53:404 (97) - Remove this note so you keep following that windy instrument cleanly.
00:55:197 (105) - ^, or you could add a slider in 00:54:799 - 00:55:197 for the same purpose.
00:59:184 (127) - Remove this too.
00:59:981 (132,137) - Change these to kats, it'd keep following the flute better (Note that 132 isn't, but it compliments better the whole pattern than a don).
01:01:576 (140) - Remove or add a slider like I suggested in 00:55:197 (105).
01:01:975 (141,142) - Remove these two.
01:02:174 - Here my suggestion is a bit long so I'll better put a image, but this pattern would compliment better the flute here.
01:19:118 (212,213,214,215,216,217,218) - Here the rhythm is pretty much not in the music itself, you could try a spinner in 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 which would match with the increasing sound there.

01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note.
01:42:240 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - If you could follow the percusions better here it'd be nicer, this stream feels really out of place, yes, music is intense but doesn't reflect the main rhythm in the music too fine. Removing 01:42:340 (36,41,44) would be enough, you can try a different way though.
01:44:632 (47) - Remove this note and extend the slider here, this allows the slider to cover better the held note and makes 01:45:032 (48) have more emphasis.
01:45:031 - Here you could try a rhythm like this, the constant 1/1 doesn't really represents the music nicely here, as the song has still some variety.
http://puu.sh/avwA7.png

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty has the same difficulty consistency problems Oni has.
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - This part has a higher note density than 00:26:094 - 00:35:663, but it's calmer, and this really breaks how the map feels, you should follow something similar as I suggested in Oni and make the first part follow only the flute, so the second part would be intenser now, matching with the song.
00:37:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - As in Oni.
00:38:852 - I'm going to suggest a general pattern for this kiai, note that the song begins this 1/4 rhythm on the white ticks, so this section would benefit greatly with the triples beginning in the white ticks, and specially there should be a triple in the downbeat (the large white tick). ddd are highly suggested to use over kkk, something like this, you could try in different colors and put what you feel better.

00:44:234 (35) - You could remove this note so you follow the piano better.
00:51:211 (65,66,67) - k k d -> k ddd, this would emphasize nicely this last note.
00:57:191 (88,90) - Remove these to keep following the flute.
00:57:789 - Something like this for the flute

01:01:576 (104,105) - Remove.
01:03:470 (112,113) - ^
01:03:869 - Add a don and make 01:03:968 (115) a don too.
01:04:566 (118) - Make this slider begin in 01:04:367 along with the held note here.
01:05:364 - Maybe add a note here to keep the flute.
01:06:759 (126) - Remove.
01:09:551 (133,137) - Remove these notes, they feel a bit intrusive with the instrument your following here.
01:18:719 (153,154,155,156,157,158,159,160) - As in Oni.
01:30:679 (1) - As in Oni.
01:43:436 (39,40) - As in Oni.
01:45:032 (41,42,43,44) - Something similar as I suggested in Oni, but simpler.
01:21:211 (163,171) - Looking as you focused a bit on percusions here, deleting this note would do the trick to make this part better, of course, you will have to keep patterns for percusions in the rest of this kiai to fix the inconsistencies I mentioned earlier.

[Futsuu]
This diff is very simple compared with the Muzukashii, there are very few 1/2 patterns, adding a few more would make the spread better.
The first kiai would benefit with some more notes.
I'm going to focus on notes that could be moved to improve the rhythm or follow better the instruments I think you're basing on, don't be scared about the length ;w;
00:14:932 (17) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:18:520 (25) - Remove to make this part calmer than the next.
00:21:709 (32) - ^
00:25:297 (36) - Remove to follow the flute better.
00:29:284 (45) - Move to 00:29:682 -
00:37:656 (1,2,3) - Remove them, same reason as in the other diffs.
00:39:251 - You could add a don here.
00:41:443 - Spots like this would be nice to add a note too, here a kat would be nice.
00:43:835 (16) - Move this 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:50:214 (32,33) - Move these 1/2 beat backwards, so they fit better with the piano.
00:56:593 (49) - ^
00:57:590 (52) - Move to 00:56:792.
00:59:981 (57) - Move to 00:59:383.
01:00:181 - Add a don.
01:00:181 - Move 1/2 beat forward.
01:03:570 (65,66) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:04:367 (67) - Make this slider end in 01:04:367 (67) and add a don in 01:05:563.
01:06:759 (70) - Move 1/2 beat backward.
01:06:958 - Add a don.
01:09:551 (75) - Remove this note.
01:12:938 - Maybe add a don.
01:13:536 - ^
01:18:719 (92,93,94,95) - As in the other difficulties.
01:26:493 - A don would be nice here to make a 1/2 pattern.
01:29:682 - A kat here for the same purpose.
01:30:679 (1) - As in the other difficulties.
01:37:057 (8) - Move this note to 01:39:250.
01:46:227 (29) - Remove the big note, it's too loud here ;w;

[Kantan]
00:13:337 - 00:22:905 - If you could simplify a bit this part it'd be better, as this part is calmer than the next.
00:57:589 (32) - Remove this one so you keep notes on the flute only.
00:59:981 (37) - ^
01:01:975 (41) - ^
01:03:570 (44) - Move to 01:03:171.
01:04:766 (47) - Remove
01:05:164 (48) - Move to 01:05:563.
01:09:551 (55) - Remove this one so the big note is more emphasized.
01:18:719 (69,70,71,72) - I think a spinner from 01:18:719 - 01:20:314 would fit better here, as we have this increasing sound instead clear beats in the music.
01:30:679 (1) - Finish this spinner in 01:32:273 to match correctly with that held note, and at the same time would allow a tiny break for players.
01:45:031 (21) - Remove this note and extend 01:43:437 (20) until here, it'd make more sense as you'll cover properly this held note.

That'd be all from my part, fixing the difficulty inconsistencies that Oni and Muzukashii have would be a big step ahead, as it's the biggest problem it has, Futsuu only suffer of this a bit in the first kiai.

Good luck.

Kantan~Oni All change. Thanks to a lot of mod.Thank you for the image with. I was saved fairly

Hello

Kantan

00:08:553 kat
00:18:121 don-don-kat-kat-don
00:20:513 kat
00:30:081 kat
00:45:231 can be d-d-k
00:50:015 kat
00:54:001 kat
00:57:988 d-k-d
01:07:556 don finisher
01:25:895 don
01:26:692 kat
01:57:788 kat

Futsuu

00:03:769 kat don kat
00:06:161 kat-don-don
00:19:716 don
00:30:081 kat
00:40:447 don
00:50:413 don
01:08:354 kat
01:11:543 kat
01:25:895 kat
01:26:692 kat
01:27:091 don
01:26:293 no need for a finish here
01:29:483 k-d-k
01:30:280 don
01:37:456 no finisher (don too)
01:39:449 don-don-kat
01:46:625 finish

I'll have to leave it at that, too tired X_X

I will come back for the muzu tomorrow!!
enjoy and good luck

hi again

Muzukashii

00:06:161 kat
00:11:742 kat
00:18:918 kat
00:30:081 kat-don instead of don-kat
00:34:068 don
00:38:852 kat
00:39:251 kat
00:39:450 don
00:39:649 kat
00:40:447 same as last combo of notes
00:44:433 kat
00:45:231 kat
00:56:991 don
01:03:968 kat
01:06:261 kat
01:09:849 kat
01:10:746 don
01:13:138 kat
01:16:327 don
01:21:111 http://puu.sh/aIi40/072c5f3c9a.jpg set up like this
01:23:503 these 2 finishers aren't needed
01:24:300 kat
01:25:496 kat
01:26:891 don
01:27:091 kat
01:28:386 don
01:28:586 don
01:37:257 don
01:37:456 kat
01:38:054 don
01:38:253 kat
01:40:745 don
01:40:944 don
01:41:542 kat
01:41:542 kat
01:41:841 kat

enjoy

Tuxxy wrote:

Hello

Kantan

00:08:553 kat keep
00:18:121 don-don-kat-kat-don keep
00:20:513 kat keep
00:30:081 kat keep
00:45:231 can be d-d-k keep
00:50:015 kat keep
00:54:001 kat keep
00:57:988 d-k-d OK
01:07:556 don finisher keep
01:25:895 don keep
01:26:692 kat keep
01:57:788 kat keep

Futsuu

00:03:769 kat don kat OK
00:06:161 kat-don-don keep
00:19:716 don keep
00:30:081 kat OK
00:40:447 don keep
00:50:413 don OK
01:08:354 kat OK
01:11:543 kat OK
01:25:895 kat OK
01:26:692 kat keep
01:27:091 don keep
01:26:293 no need for a finish here OK
01:29:483 k-d-k OK
01:30:280 don OK
01:37:456 no finisher (don too) OK
01:39:449 don-don-kat keep
01:46:625 finish OK

Muzukashii

00:06:161 kat keep
00:11:742 kat keep
00:18:918 kat keep
00:30:081 kat-don instead of don-kat keep
00:34:068 don keep
00:38:852 kat keep
00:39:251 kat keep
00:39:450 don keep
00:39:649 kat keep
00:40:447 same as last combo of notes keep
00:44:433 kat OK
00:45:231 kat keep
00:56:991 don keep
01:03:968 kat keep
01:06:261 kat keep
01:09:849 kat keep
01:10:746 don keep
01:13:138 kat OK
01:16:327 don keep
01:21:111 http://puu.sh/aIi40/072c5f3c9a.jpg set up like this keep
01:23:503 these 2 finishers aren't needed OK
01:24:300 kat OK
01:25:496 kat keep
01:26:891 don keep
01:27:091 kat keep
01:28:386 don OK
01:28:586 don OK
01:37:257 don keep
01:37:456 kat keep
01:38:054 don keep
01:38:253 kat keep
01:40:745 don OK
01:40:944 don OK
01:41:542 kat OK
01:41:841 kat keep

enjoy

Thank you mod

Hi, mod from my queue.






Really fun maps! Have my star.
Good Luck!

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue.

[General]
How about decrease all hitsound by -10%? Currently is too loud for song imo. OK

[Oni]

00:21:310 (26,27,28,29) - How about make these to k d k d? Well it's just my sense of depth. OK
00:26:095 (36) - There's have a drum cymbal at here so I think it's better if you put K imo. OK
00:28:486 (47) - How about k here to let it more fit to the song? If you apply please make 00:30:281 (56,57,58) - these to kkd for the various. OK
00:44:234 (48) - k here? it just like you do it at here 00:42:839 (40,41,42,43,44) - kkd d k (k d d k). OK
00:56:991 (111) - k here to follow the pitch? OK
01:01:178 (134) - ^ OK
Stream part is great! <3

[Muzukashii]

00:13:337 (14) - D here because the drum cymbal? OK
00:19:716 (31) - ^ OK
00:49:416 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - I'm find this rhythm is weird to play, try d k k d k k d k? good~

[Futsuu]

00:45:231 - I think you shouldn't ignore this cymbal because it quite loud! but you can fix it by move 00:45:629 (18) - this to here. OK
01:23:901 (9) - I'm don't get reason why you put big note at here. change not finish

[Kantan]

00:30:081 (42) - k here to follow the pitch? OK
00:34:068 (49) - here too. Should be k just like you do it at Futsuu. OK

Really fun maps! Have my star.
Good Luck!

Thank you mod

Nekomata Master <3

[ Kantan]
00:11:742 - This note is d in Muzu and Oni Change to d for consistency?

00:29:284 - This note is the only one here which doesn't follow the flute so move it to 00:29:682 ? This way the rhythm would also be the same as 00:25:297 (33,34,35,36,37) and a repeating pattern makes it easier for newbie to play!

00:54:001 (27,28,29) - You should probably change this to ddk since well the pitch goes that way, and also having the same pattern as before at 00:51:609 (23,24,25) while the music is different sounds strange ;w;

The map generally follows the flute while adding some variable patterns in suitable places, nice Kantan!

[ Futsuu]
00:11:742 - Same as Kantan~

00:18:520 - Maybe change this to k? The pitch here is really similar to 00:18:121 unlike 00:18:918 (24,25) which has a much lower pitch than this :3

00:32:473 - hm delete this note? In nearby parts like 00:29:284 you chose to map to the flute and ignore the bass so you should do the same thing here~

00:48:221 - Why did you map 1/2 patterns here? In the whole kiai you only used 1/2 in places which the melody is actually in 1/2 (like 00:43:038 (11,12,13,14) or 00:49:417 (27,28,29,30) so you should delete this note lol

00:48:221 - ^

01:05:962 - k for the flute k

01:42:639 - Why is this big note? Look at 01:29:881 its the same music but its a small note there, at least be consistent in the same patterns~ Also a big note in a 1/1 pattern looks kinda irregular >_>

I should probably sleep now since its 12am, will continue tomorrow!

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Nekomata Master <3

[ Kantan]
00:11:742 - This note is d in Muzu and Oni Change to d for consistency? OK

00:29:284 - This note is the only one here which doesn't follow the flute so move it to 00:29:682 ? OK This way the rhythm would also be the same as 00:25:297 (33,34,35,36,37) and a repeating pattern makes it easier for newbie to play!

00:54:001 (27,28,29) - You should probably change this to ddk since well the pitch goes that way, and also having the same pattern as before at 00:51:609 (23,24,25) while the music is different sounds strange ;w; ddk change while the music is different sounds strange...sorry keep

The map generally follows the flute while adding some variable patterns in suitable places, nice Kantan!

[ Futsuu]
00:11:742 - Same as Kantan~ OK

00:18:520 - Maybe change this to k? The pitch here is really similar to 00:18:121 unlike 00:18:918 (24,25) which has a much lower pitch than this :3 OK 00:18:520 - add k. change k d d k k d d D

00:32:473 - hm delete this note? In nearby parts like 00:29:284 you chose to map to the flute and ignore the bass so you should do the same thing here~ keep

00:48:221 - Why did you map 1/2 patterns here? In the whole kiai you only used 1/2 in places which the melody is actually in 1/2 (like 00:43:038 (11,12,13,14) or 00:49:417 (27,28,29,30) so you should delete this note lol keep

00:48:221 - ^ ^

01:05:962 - k for the flute k OK

01:42:639 - Why is this big note? Look at 01:29:881 its the same music but its a small note there, at least be consistent in the same patterns~ Also a big note in a 1/1 pattern looks kinda irregular >_> finish delete

I should probably sleep now since its 12am, will continue tomorrow!

Thank you mod

Hello~Here is mod as your requested
Sorry for delay.
[Oni]
00:03:370 - Here has background sound what you catch.Though it is quiet but still suggest you add it. All Diff can use this Mod

00:47:523 - Suggest you stop stream at here likes 00:43:038 -

00:51:011 - Add a k.Here still has background sound.And according pitch i suggest you add a k.

01:03:370 (143,144) - Move to 01:03:271 - Here suggest you follow Instrumental.It is more comfortable to play in my opinion.

01:16:726 - This empty is odd when my testplay orz.

01:45:828 - ~ 01:46:625 - Here has drum sounds during 1/4.I rcommend you add it.
Seems you 1st kiai time is harder than 2nd kiai time.Recommend you make a balance.

01:49:416 - Likes 00:03:370 - All Diff can use this Mod

[Muzukashii]
00:27:689 (9,10,11) - I think this pitch is gradually lowers so recommend you change to k k d

00:29:284 (15,16,17) - These 3 are gradually increased.So recommend you change to d d k

00:30:879 - Um..have 2 plans the rhythm is strange
1.00:31:178 - Add a Note here.
2.00:30:978 (21) - Delete this Note
You can choose 1 to fix.

00:32:473 (27) - The drum sound is powerful here.You can Add a Finish

00:51:011 - Add a k here.The pitch is clearly.when my testplay i feel uncomfortable

[Futsuu]
01:33:469 - Seems background start at here.How about add a k here?

01:46:227 (29) - This sound is the same likes 01:45:828 (28) - So change this d to k is better.

[Kantan]
00:30:480 - I don't know why suddenly here empty.Maybe below Diffculty? The background sound is clearly to listen so i think it is no problem to add it.

01:06:361 (46) - change to k is better..Oh it is only my personal opinion

01:26:293 - Clearly sound too.So add it will be more eaiser to play.

01:29:483 - The same likes^

01:46:227 (22) - The sound is Gradually reduce so suggest you change it to k.

Nice map.Good Luck~
take my star! lol

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello~Here is mod as your requested
Sorry for delay.
[Oni]
00:03:370 - Here has background sound what you catch.Though it is quiet but still suggest you add it. All Diff can use this Mod OK.All diff add d

00:47:523 - Suggest you stop stream at here likes 00:43:038 - keep

00:51:011 - Add a k.Here still has background sound.And according pitch i suggest you add a k. fixed

01:03:370 (143,144) - Move to 01:03:271 - Here suggest you follow Instrumental.It is more comfortable to play in my opinion. keep.I want to hear the opinions of other people

01:16:726 - This empty is odd when my testplay orz. keep

01:45:828 - ~ 01:46:625 - Here has drum sounds during 1/4.I rcommend you add it.
Seems you 1st kiai time is harder than 2nd kiai time.Recommend you make a balance.

01:49:416 - Likes 00:03:370 - All Diff can use this Mod

[Muzukashii]
00:27:689 (9,10,11) - I think this pitch is gradually lowers so recommend you change to k k d fixed

00:29:284 (15,16,17) - These 3 are gradually increased.So recommend you change to d d k fixed

00:30:879 - Um..have 2 plans the rhythm is strange
1.00:31:178 - Add a Note here. 1/4 kkkkd is bad
2.00:30:978 (21) - Delete this Note fixed
You can choose 1 to fix.

00:32:473 (27) - The drum sound is powerful here.You can Add a Finish fixed

00:51:011 - Add a k here.The pitch is clearly.when my testplay i feel uncomfortable hmm,1/2 long but OK...

[Futsuu]
01:33:469 - Seems background start at here.How about add a k here? fixed

01:46:227 (29) - This sound is the same likes 01:45:828 (28) - So change this d to k is better. fixed

[Kantan]
00:30:480 - I don't know why suddenly here empty.Maybe below Diffculty? The background sound is clearly to listen so i think it is no problem to add it. 1/1 long is bad

01:06:361 (46) - change to k is better..Oh it is only my personal opinion fixed

01:26:293 - Clearly sound too.So add it will be more eaiser to play. 1/1 long is bad

01:29:483 - The same likes^ ^

01:46:227 (22) - The sound is Gradually reduce so suggest you change it to k. fixed

Nice map.Good Luck~
take my star! lol

Thank you mod.

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:17:324 (22) - d ? The pitch of the flute is lower than that at 00:16:526 (21) -
2. 00:35:264 (53) - k would be better as the pitch remains high. Making this k could result in a consistent pattern as 00:22:506 (31) -
3. 00:38:852 (1) - As the background sound is not that loud, remove finish ?
4. 00:49:616 (19) - maybe k for the high-pitched special instrument sound there ?
5. 00:51:609 (23) - consider adding finish here ? I could hear a strong cymbal sound.
6. 00:57:989 (32) - ^
7. 01:01:178 (38) - k would be better so that it would be consistent to 00:54:799 (29) - which has the same pitch.
8. 01:02:374 (39,41) - you may swap these notes to d k so that both the instrument sound and the pitch of the music could be followed better.
9. 01:04:367 (43) - K for the loud cymbal sound ?
10. 01:05:962 (45,46,47) - k k d ? The pitch at 01:05:962 (45,46) - seems to be higher.
11. 01:07:556 (49) - same as 01:04:367 (43) -
12. 01:23:104 (5,6) - d k to follow the pitch of the music better ?

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:03:769 (3,4) - d k ? The music at 00:04:566 (4) - is higher-pitched than 00:03:769 (3) -
2. 00:19:716 (27) - K as you did in Kantan ?
3. 00:26:094 (36) - K ? The cymbal is very prominent.
4. 00:28:885 (42) - k would be better, as it has a higher pitch than 00:28:486 (41) -
5. 00:26:892 (37,38,39) - k d k if you change ^ , the flow of notes would be improved.
6. 00:32:473 (50) - D ? similar to 00:26:094 (36) -
7. 00:45:231 (18) - K ? Again, this is for the loud cymbal.
8. 00:51:609 (34) - same as Kantan
9. 00:54:599 (42,43) - d k would be better for following the pitch of the flute.
10. 00:56:195 (46) - k could fit the snare there.
11. 01:17:124 (92) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here.
12. 01:23:104 (7,8) - same as Kantan
13. 01:33:868 (2) - D here so that it would be consistent to the previous 01:21:111 (2) -
14. 01:41:044 (19,20,21) - consider changing this to d d k so as to follow the increasing pitch more ?

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:18:320 (28) - k ? I could hear the same pitch as 00:18:121 (27) -
2. From 00:38:852 to 00:51:609 - The use of triplets is too frequent, this makes the diff like an easy Oni. I recommend you to change some of them to 1/2 notes and here is an example, with big don at 00:38:852 - , 00:45:231 - and 00:46:825 - : (cursor at 00:45:231 - )
3. 01:03:172 (105,106) - k d would be better imo, as this could map the high-pitched sound at 01:03:172 (105) - well.
4. 01:07:556 (6) - K ? Same as Kantan.
5. 01:17:124 (25) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here.
6. From 01:21:111 to 01:43:237 - This part has the same problem as the first kiai. It has even more complex patterns, so I strongly recommend you to make it easier as well in order to make a good diff spread from Futsuu to Oni
7. 01:23:901 (17) - k to follow the high-pitched music better ?

• [Oni]

1. 00:26:692 (54,55) - d k would be much better for following both the snare and the pitch of the music.
2. 00:41:144 (25,26) - making this dk could fit the background instrument well imo.
3. 00:49:816 (80,81,82,83,84) - k d k d k ? This could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:49:816 (80) - and the drums at 00:50:214 (82,84) - nicely.
4. 00:55:795 (103,104,105) - you may try ddk here. This could follow the increasing pitch of the music well.
5. 00:57:988 (118) - k to match the snare sound there ?
6. 01:03:171 (143,144) - k d ? Again, k could be used for the high-pitched instrument at 01:03:171 -
7. 01:08:354 (168,169,170,171) - D D K K ? The pitch keeps increasing.
8. 01:09:949 (174) - k ? It has the same pitch as 01:09:750 (172) -
9. 01:11:543 (178,179,180,181) - D D K D ? This could fit the music in a way better.
10. 01:17:124 (198) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here.
11. 01:17:822 - add a note here ? I feel like something is missing.
12. 01:23:104 (17) - It seems that d could follow the low-pitched music better imo.
13. 01:23:901 (19) - maybe K for the increased pitch ?
14. 01:33:868 (1) - D for the stressed music there ?
15. 01:41:841 (33) - k here so as to match the relatively high-pitched music.
16. 01:46:625 (52) - I think you may have missed the finish here as well.
17. 01:48:220 (53) - k as you did in other diffs ?

That's all and good luck~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:17:324 (22) - d ? The pitch of the flute is lower than that at 00:16:526 (21) - fixed
2. 00:35:264 (53) - k would be better as the pitch remains high. Making this k could result in a consistent pattern as 00:22:506 (31) - fixed
3. 00:38:852 (1) - As the background sound is not that loud, remove finish ? fixed
4. 00:49:616 (19) - maybe k for the high-pitched special instrument sound there ? fixed
5. 00:51:609 (23) - consider adding finish here ? I could hear a strong cymbal sound. fixed
6. 00:57:989 (32) - ^
7. 01:01:178 (38) - k would be better so that it would be consistent to 00:54:799 (29) - which has the same pitch. fixed
8. 01:02:374 (39,41) - you may swap these notes to d k so that both the instrument sound and the pitch of the music could be followed better. fixed
9. 01:04:367 (43) - K for the loud cymbal sound ? fixed
10. 01:05:962 (45,46,47) - k k d ? The pitch at 01:05:962 (45,46) - seems to be higher. fixed
11. 01:07:556 (49) - same as 01:04:367 (43) - fixed
12. 01:23:104 (5,6) - d k to follow the pitch of the music better ? fixed

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:03:769 (3,4) - d k ? The music at 00:04:566 (4) - is higher-pitched than 00:03:769 (3) - fixed
2. 00:19:716 (27) - K as you did in Kantan ? fixed
3. 00:26:094 (36) - K ? The cymbal is very prominent. fixed
4. 00:28:885 (42) - k would be better, as it has a higher pitch than 00:28:486 (41) - fixed
5. 00:26:892 (37,38,39) - k d k if you change ^ , the flow of notes would be improved.fixed
6. 00:32:473 (50) - D ? similar to 00:26:094 (36) - fixed
7. 00:45:231 (18) - K ? Again, this is for the loud cymbal.fixed
8. 00:51:609 (34) - same as Kantan fixed
9. 00:54:599 (42,43) - d k would be better for following the pitch of the flute. fixed
10. 00:56:195 (46) - k could fit the snare there. fixed
11. 01:17:124 (92) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here. fixed
12. 01:23:104 (7,8) - same as Kantan fixed
13. 01:33:868 (2) - D here so that it would be consistent to the previous 01:21:111 (2) - fixed
14. 01:41:044 (19,20,21) - consider changing this to d d k so as to follow the increasing pitch more ? fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:18:320 (28) - k ? I could hear the same pitch as 00:18:121 (27) - fixed
2. From 00:38:852 to 00:51:609 - The use of triplets is too frequent, this makes the diff like an easy Oni. I recommend you to change some of them to 1/2 notes and here is an example, with big don at 00:38:852 - , 00:45:231 - and 00:46:825 - : (cursor at 00:45:231 - ) fixed
3. 01:03:172 (105,106) - k d would be better imo, as this could map the high-pitched sound at 01:03:172 (105) - well. fixed
4. 01:07:556 (6) - K ? Same as Kantan. fixed
5. 01:17:124 (25) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here. fixed
6. From 01:21:111 to 01:43:237 - This part has the same problem as the first kiai. It has even more complex patterns, so I strongly recommend you to make it easier as well in order to make a good diff spread from Futsuu to Oni OK.I changed easily
7. 01:23:901 (17) - k to follow the high-pitched music better ? fixed

• [Oni]

1. 00:26:692 (54,55) - d k would be much better for following both the snare and the pitch of the music. fixed
2. 00:41:144 (25,26) - making this dk could fit the background instrument well imo. hmm,keep.
3. 00:49:816 (80,81,82,83,84) - k d k d k ? This could follow the relatively high-pitched music at 00:49:816 (80) - and the drums at 00:50:214 (82,84) - nicely. fixed
4. 00:55:795 (103,104,105) - you may try ddk here. This could follow the increasing pitch of the music well. fixed
5. 00:57:988 (118) - k to match the snare sound there ? fixed
6. 01:03:171 (143,144) - k d ? Again, k could be used for the high-pitched instrument at 01:03:171 - fixed
7. 01:08:354 (168,169,170,171) - D D K K ? The pitch keeps increasing. fixed
8. 01:09:949 (174) - k ? It has the same pitch as 01:09:750 (172) - fixed
9. 01:11:543 (178,179,180,181) - D D K D ? This could fit the music in a way better. fixed
10. 01:17:124 (198) - According to your mapping, I think you may have missed the finish here. fixed
11. 01:17:822 - add a note here ? I feel like something is missing. OK.add k
12. 01:23:104 (17) - It seems that d could follow the low-pitched music better imo. fixed
13. 01:23:901 (19) - maybe K for the increased pitch ? fixed
14. 01:33:868 (1) - D for the stressed music there ? fixed
15. 01:41:841 (33) - k here so as to match the relatively high-pitched music. fixed
16. 01:46:625 (52) - I think you may have missed the finish here as well. fixed
17. 01:48:220 (53) - k as you did in other diffs ? fixed

That's all and good luck~

Thank you mod!

Hello~ :3 Here’s a taiko mod via Random~^^


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JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3 Here’s a taiko mod via Random~^^

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[General]

1. 01:20:314 -ここの小節線がちょっとカッコ悪く見えたのでOmit bar line 使って消してみるのはどうでしょうか? fixed
   Before https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2015426
   ↓
   After https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2015439
   

[Kantan]

1. HP > 4? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2015384 クリアできるラインが低すぎるので… 4に変更で。fixed
2. 00:24:500 (33,34) - k-d >>>>d-delete? 33ノーツ目をdに変更。34ノート目はkeepで
3. 00:38:852 (1) – finisher? 00:45:231 (12) - 同様に…?　fixed
4. 01:10:347 (52) – delete? 休ませる目的なら削れそうなとこも削ってみてはどうでしょう:3 fixed.01:16:738 - ここも削除しました。
5. 01:29:881 (18,19) – kd ?　fixed

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:58:785 (81) – d? fixed
2. 01:13:536 (17) – add k? ピアノフォローも兼ねてkの提案で/ fixed
3. 01:33:469 (1) – add d? 01:20:712 (1) –ここと同じ気がしますし、Muzukashiiくらいの密度であれば入れてもあまり違和感はないかなとも思いました fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:16:925 (26) – don ? fixed
2. 00:45:031 (54) – remove the finisher …?次のストリームに繋げるのに個人的に違和感感じました;; ここ自体のバスの音が00:43:636 (45) –と違って強くないと思うので.. fixed
3. 00:47:423 (76) – add note ? パーカッション?的な音は止まってるようにも聞こえないので出来る限りfinisherまで詰めてあげてfinisherの勢いを更につけてみてはどうでしょうか? kを追加してみました。ここは他の方の意見も参考にしたい箇所です。
4. 00:56:892 (112) – delete? 他の1/2のパターンと同じじゃないかな,,,?　fixed
5. 01:02:674 (138) – delete….? 個人的には最後まで綺麗に取ってほしいかな..割と主観かもしれなので無視ってもらってもいいです。良かったので採用で。fixed
6. 01:18:520 - , 01:18:619 - >>ノーツ入れてみてはどうでしょうか? 01:17:522 (1,2,3,4,5) -同様に! kkを入れてみました。fixed
7. 01:33:469 (1) – add note ? fixed

がんばってください!!></

Thank you mod & two stars.
頑張ります!

hi
[Oni]
00:06:161 (7) - k? it's better imo
00:22:905 (44) - delete slider and Put D/k here 00:24:500 -
00:38:453 - D

[Muzu]
01:02:972 - k?
01:34:466 - k 01:34:665 - d , its better for me
00:38:453 (1) - D ?

[Futsuu]
01:04:367 (67) - eeeee? the sliders must should be here 01:05:164 -
00:38:453 - D
01:43:436 (27) - the slider should be here 01:44:632

[Kantan]
01:43:436 (20) - the slider isnt snap

well, that's all
need more mod imo but nice following the rhythm

Genocide wrote:

hi
[Oni]
00:06:161 (7) - k? it's better imo keep
00:22:905 (44) - delete slider and Put D/k here 00:24:500 - sorry.I not understand.
00:38:453 - D fixed

[Muzu]
01:02:972 - k? fixed
01:34:466 - k 01:34:665 - d , its better for me fixed
00:38:453 (1) - D ? fixed

[Futsuu]
01:04:367 (67) - eeeee? the sliders must should be here 01:05:164 - fixed
00:38:453 - D fixed
01:43:436 (27) - the slider should be here 01:44:632 fixed

[Kantan]
01:43:436 (20) - the slider isnt snap fixed

well, that's all
need more mod imo but nice following the rhythm

Thank you mod

Free modding from a trainee.
Hope it be helpful~





以上. Wish you ranked

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Free modding from a trainee.
Hope it be helpful~

Kantan

00:57:191 - k? too empty though.. fixed

Futsuu

00:53:802 (39) - delete? It will be much better i think. fixed
00:22:905 (33) - too intensive. Kore, 'futsuu' na ningen ha dekimasen... keep

Muzukashii

00:15:530 (20,21) - dk? fixed
00:59:383 (82) - d and 00:59:483 - d fixed

Oni

00:43:138 - d. fixed
00:53:104 (96) - k. fixed
00:30:280 (70,71,72) - ddk changed other pattern.

以上. Wish you ranked

Thank you mod

Slider Velocity
Slider Velocityはむずかしい以上の難易度で 1.40 もしくは 1.60 に設定をするべきです。 かんたん/ふつうに関しては 1.00 と 1.20 が一般的に使用されます。

Im not good at japanese language but I find this. Just have a look.

Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/JP:Taiko_Ranking_Criteria

GOOD LUCK

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Slider Velocity
Slider Velocityはむずかしい以上の難易度で 1.40 もしくは 1.60 に設定をするべきです。 かんたん/ふつうに関しては 1.00 と 1.20 が一般的に使用されます。

Im not good at japanese language but I find this. Just have a look.

Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/JP:Taiko_Ranking_Criteria

GOOD LUCK

bpmもさほど速いわけではないないので特に指摘が無い限り全diff-SV1.4のままでいこうと思います。

Charlotte wrote:

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Slider Velocity
Slider Velocityはむずかしい以上の難易度で 1.40 もしくは 1.60 に設定をするべきです。 かんたん/ふつうに関しては 1.00 と 1.20 が一般的に使用されます。

Im not good at japanese language but I find this. Just have a look.

Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/JP:Taiko_Ranking_Criteria

GOOD LUCK

bpmもさほど速いわけではないないので特に指摘が無い限り全diff-SV1.4のままでいこうと思います。

Alright~ Good map though, hope u rank soon~

General

Add 1500 AudioleadIn for a nice adequate 2 secs of time before the first object

Kantan

00:15:729 (19,20,21) - dkk instead of kdd, it would fit the flute better

I feel there are a bit too many finishes in this difficulty, especially the section before the last kiai time

Futsuu

00:16:925 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - try ddkkddkk instead of kddkkddk
01:07:158 (72) - change to d, the flute playing at 01:06:958 (71,72) is held at one note

Muzukashii

00:50:015 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - follow suit with the song with it's alternating pitches, dkdkdk instead of dkkdkk
00:54:799 (66,67) - k d instead of d k
01:42:639 (39) - change to k

Oni

00:25:297 (45,46,47,48) - actually, because the tone at 00:25:297 is held, why not kk kd
00:50:812 (87) - change to d?
00:59:383 (125,126,127) - use dkd instead?
01:34:466 - add a d, there is the music here as well, which can also help tie the rhythm together


Good Luck on this :0

neonat wrote:

General

Add 1500 AudioleadIn for a nice adequate 2 secs of time before the first object fixed

Kantan

00:15:729 (19,20,21) - dkk instead of kdd, it would fit the flute better fixed

I feel there are a bit too many finishes in this difficulty, especially the section before the last kiai time

Futsuu

00:16:925 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - try ddkkddkk instead of kddkkddk fixed
01:07:158 (72) - change to d, the flute playing at 01:06:958 (71,72) is held at one note fixed

Muzukashii

00:50:015 (46,47,48,49,50,51) - follow suit with the song with it's alternating pitches, dkdkdk instead of dkkdkk fixed
00:54:799 (66,67) - k d instead of d k fixed
01:42:639 (39) - change to k fixed

Oni

00:25:297 (45,46,47,48) - actually, because the tone at 00:25:297 is held, why not kk kd fixed
00:50:812 (87) - change to d? fixed
00:59:383 (125,126,127) - use dkd instead? fixed
01:34:466 - add a d, there is the music here as well, which can also help tie the rhythm together fixed


Good Luck on this :0

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