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Gordon123

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Gordon123 2014-11-14T13:00:28+00:00

Так,мля,понеслась ;)

[Easy]

00:37:212 (3) - знаешь ,это как то не очень мне нравиться,ты бы загнул чутка(загнул < я лол XD) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237943
01:11:695 (1) - убери whistle ,а то не оч!
01:22:730 (1) - ^
01:33:764 (1) - ^ + https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237945

[BoatKrab's Normal]

01:14:454 (1,2,3,4) - maybe Whistel
01:22:730 (1) - ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237958
01:44:799 (1) - ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237965

[BM's Hard]

01:11:695 (1) - чё это его так скривило + убери whistle > мой вариант https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237984
01:22:730 (1) - да нафиг так кривить? честно я не понимаю!!!
01:46:868 (5) - ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237996

[Insane]

00:32:385 (7,8,9,10) - я бы это место сделал так(сложнее будет) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238003
кривые слайдеры,я их не очень люблю, вот пример :
01:06:178 (1) - ovo ну я бы сделал так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238019

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Good Luck~

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-14T13:43:48+00:00

Gordon123's mod

Gordon123 wrote:
Так,мля,понеслась ;)
[Easy]

00:37:212 (3) - знаешь ,это как то не очень мне нравиться,ты бы загнул чутка(загнул < я лол XD) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237943 Загнул
01:11:695 (1) - убери whistle ,а то не оч!
01:22:730 (1) - ^
01:33:764 (1) - ^ + https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237945
Исправил Drum сэмпл. Насчёт свистком я подумаю. Там же явно "отрыжка" идёт

[Insane]

00:32:385 (7,8,9,10) - я бы это место сделал так(сложнее будет) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238003 Я специально хочу оставить такой паттерн, он мне нравится
кривые слайдеры,я их не очень люблю, вот пример :
01:06:178 (1) - ovo ну я бы сделал так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2238019 Нет, не хочу слишком правильные "sharp" слайдеры.
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Good Luck~

Спасибо за мод!

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-11-14T14:17:16+00:00

Gordon123 wrote:
[BM's Hard]

01:11:695 (1) - чё это его так скривило + убери whistle > мой вариант https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237984 его не скривило, такая форма слайдеров "имитирует/изображает" тот звук в треке, и да, ХС НА ШАДРЕНЕ, ПЛЗ
01:22:730 (1) - да нафиг так кривить? честно я не понимаю!!! не нафиг, а нахер, если на то пошло, давай еще грубее зачем, объяснение привела выше
01:46:868 (5) - ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237996 ломается флоу, не хочу тут менять

Спасибо за чек, но в следующий раз когда пишешь мод, напиши еще и оскорбления в адрес маппера. Так, для полноты картины.

No changes, Шадрен, хс на тебе

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-14T14:22:26+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
Gordon123 wrote:
[BM's Hard]

01:11:695 (1) - чё это его так скривило + убери whistle > мой вариант https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237984 его не скривило, такая форма слайдеров "имитирует/изображает" тот звук в треке, и да, ХС НА ШАДРЕНЕ, ПЛЗ
01:22:730 (1) - да нафиг так кривить? честно я не понимаю!!! не нафиг, а нахер, если на то пошло, давай еще грубее зачем, объяснение привела выше
01:46:868 (5) - ... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2237996 ломается флоу, не хочу тут менять
Спасибо за чек, но в следующий раз когда пишешь мод, напиши еще и оскорбления в адрес маппера. Так, для полноты картины.

No changes, Шадрен, хс на тебе

ой-ой забыл. В следующий раз игнорь, я сам буду находить моменты, связанные с хс. Прости

Seikatu

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Seikatu 2014-11-14T17:44:36+00:00

D:

[Easy]
AR3 получше вроде или нет
00:59:281 (3,4,1) - может довертеть? что бы 01:00:661 (1) - на 00:58:937 (2) - лежало?
01:25:488 - такое ощущение что пауза не нужна. (можно удалить 01:28:247 (1) - и сделать спиннер)

SPOILER

[BoatKrab's Normal]
AR4,5? Or maybe even 5.
00:28:592 (2) - x:386 y:284
00:28:937 (3) - rotate it by 5 and place at x:372 y:323, for better flow
00:34:454 (3) - rotate by 15
00:39:971 (3) - x:394 y:238
00:45:488 (3) - i don't think overlaps like this are allowed in normals.
01:48:247 (1) - move to 01:47:902 - and extend till 01:50:316 -

[BM's Hard]
01:05:143 (6) - ну продли реверс до белого тика

, а ещё он вылазит, а еще эти реверсы неровненько стоят.
01:31:350 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:41:006 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:28:247 (2,3,4) - попробуй немного "расжать" паттерн.
00:50:316 (3,4,5) - и вот этот
01:13:074 (4,5,6,7) - попробуй их немного раздвинуть, и в других таких же. (А еще можно для таких моментов св повышать)

Собственно все (потому что я неочень). Фун мап, гл.

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-14T18:21:59+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
D: :D

[Easy]
AR3 получше вроде или нет Да, поставлю
00:59:281 (3,4,1) - может довертеть? что бы 01:00:661 (1) - на 00:58:937 (2) - лежало? довертел
01:25:488 - такое ощущение что пауза не нужна. (можно удалить 01:28:247 (1) - и сделать спиннер)
SPOILER
Я всеми руками за, но правила ранкинга гласят, что нужно минимум 4 белых тика после спиннера в изе

[Insane]
00:28:247 (2,3,4) - попробуй немного "расжать" паттерн. "Расжал на 1.315"
00:50:316 (3,4,5) - и вот этот А этот на 1.5
01:13:074 (4,5,6,7) - попробуй их немного раздвинуть, и в других таких же. (А еще можно для таких моментов св повышать) Тут я ещё подумаю, но пока не хочу менять

Собственно все (потому что я неочень). Фун мап, гл. Вполне хороший мод

Спасибо большое за мод!

Last edited by Shadren 2014-11-14T18:28:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

riffy

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riffy 2014-11-14T18:25:56+00:00

We did an IRC check with the mapper and AI've checked Alexa's diff before. No major changes were applied, so I won't post the log.

[BoatKrab's Normal]

To fix the balance of the spread I highly suggest you using AR5.
CS3,5 instead of 3,4 would do better, but that's a minor thing.
00:39:626 (2,3,4) - a spacing mistake. Please, fix that.
01:00:661 (1,2) - such sliders are quite hard to read as the second reverse-arrow appears sorta late. I would suggest avoiding this kind of sliders.

The main issue here is that your rhythm is too easy and it hurts the spread. I strongly recommend you to add some 1/2 objects in order to make Easy>Normal>Hard transitions in the spread more balanced. You use nearly the same rhythm as Easy does and it is not a good thing for the spread. In addition, blankets and flow might use some more work.

Squichu

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Squichu 2014-11-14T22:08:43+00:00

hi there!
here's the mod you requested. :3
Keep in mind I'm just making suggestions.

General

I know someone checked it, but the offset feels slightly off to me, like 5-10ms at max, please double-check with someone!
atm more than 20% of your audio file is unused, I kind of wonder why? the beginning's way earlier mapable, it feels like a waste to not map it, since players won't get to enjoy the full song (and it's cut already)..
also, I don't like that the higher diffs start slightly earlier than the other two diffs, when the parts could actually be mapped. (you could for example put a spinner before the part mapped atm in all diffs and end it earlier in H/I while it could go on til 00:20:661 - in E/N to have enough recovery time.)
Please consider mapping more of the song!

Easy
diff looks great as it is. just one thing cause of personal preferance -

00:28:937 (3) - uh, this shape looks a bit of, how about a 'standard' wave slider? (those symmetrical ones I can't do)
01:31:695 (2,3,1) - movement feels kind of abrupt, cause triangle. consider moving 01:33:764 (1) - to 236|364 and blanket 01:31:695 (2) - from that point instead.

BoatKrab's Normal

00:34:454 (3) - consider moving it slightly further up. the movement from 00:33:074 (1,2) - 3 is so unnaturally linear '-'
00:44:109 (1,2,3) - while I love the pattern, I'm sure it'll confuse beginners, because they'll notice the approach circle of 3 too late or will get confused about it. Please alternate the placement
00:46:868 (1,3) - I'm trying not to mention blankets and such, cause most ppl don't seem to care, but please refine this blanket. >-<
same - 01:17:212 (1,3) -
00:53:764 (1) - why don't you ctrl+g this? it improves flow by a ton and the back-forth stacking shouldn't be a problem either.
01:03:419 (1) - I'd prefer if you end this at 01:05:488 and put an object at 01:06:178. it's the beginning of the 'exciting' part, it should be hit!
01:26:178 (1) - hmh. similar to ^, I'd actually like it even more if you use a break here, so it's the same as in Easy, but that's totally up to you ofc!
(That'd include deleting 01:25:488 (1,2) - too btw)

In case you decide to change rhythms like Bakari suggested, feel free to pm me and I'll take another look at this diff. :3

BM's Hard
Really fun to play diff!

00:21:178 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack them, cause it feels a bit awkward when you don't move, hop to 00:21:695 (4) - and wait for the next object again.
00:26:868 (4,1) - I think you can emphasize this background sound better (dunno what to call it) by going with a two-reverse slider instead

because the previous pattern's movement could be improved here's an example of how you could place the objects (which is fun to play, imo)
screen

I hope this is understandable.. orz
00:31:523 (3) - I'd prefer a one-reverse slider here instead of one long one to emphasize the downbeat better
00:34:281 - unlike most other parts here's no 'break' but the beat continues, so you might wanna add a circle here
00:38:247 (4,5,1) - jump from 5 to 1 fits nicely, but I'm not sure about 4 - 5. think about removing the jump from 4-5
suggestion
01:05:488 - 01:05:661 - I'd wish you mapped this sound. '^'
01:23:419 (2) - ctrl+g works better with the flow, imo. not sure if the distance is that well, tho. up to you!

Insane
I don't know if you know that I suck with Insanes, but I'll try. '_'

00:32:557 (8,9,10) - feels a bit exaggerated to me. how about you round the movement out like you did at similar parts? plays better, imo.
(I mean patterns like 00:37:902 (7,8,9,10) - for example)
01:05:488 (1) - since the music comes to an abrupt halt, I prefer if you slow this slider down to 0,7 or 0,6. looks fun to play to me!
01:25:143 (9) - the beat's ongoing, so this should end on the downbeat, I think
same - 01:47:212 (9) -
01:32:643 - not quite sure, but I feel like there should be a circle? because it's significantly louder than the blue ticks between 01:32:730 (7,8,9) -

welp, that's all. sorry for short mod, hope it was of help, tho. good luck!

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T08:11:54+00:00

Squirre's mod

Squirrel wrote:
hi there!
here's the mod you requested. :3
Keep in mind I'm just making suggestions.

General
I know someone checked it, but the offset feels slightly off to me, like 5-10ms at max, please double-check with someone! ok,will check
atm more than 20% of your audio file is unused, I kind of wonder why? the beginning's way earlier mapable, it feels like a waste to not map it, since players won't get to enjoy the full song (and it's cut already)..
also, I don't like that the higher diffs start slightly earlier than the other two diffs, when the parts could actually be mapped. (you could for example put a spinner before the part mapped atm in all diffs and end it earlier in H/I while it could go on til 00:20:661 - in E/N to have enough recovery time.)
Please consider mapping more of the song! I'll think about it
Easy
diff looks great as it is. just one thing cause of personal preferance -
00:28:937 (3) - uh, this shape looks a bit of, how about a 'standard' wave slider? (those symmetrical ones I can't do) changed
01:31:695 (2,3,1) - movement feels kind of abrupt, cause triangle. consider moving 01:33:764 (1) - to 236|364 and blanket 01:31:695 (2) - from that point instead. changed, but some another
Insane
I don't know if you know that I suck with Insanes, but I'll try. '_'
00:32:557 (8,9,10) - feels a bit exaggerated to me. how about you round the movement out like you did at similar parts? plays better, imo.
(I mean patterns like 00:37:902 (7,8,9,10) - for example) okay
01:05:488 (1) - since the music comes to an abrupt halt, I prefer if you slow this slider down to 0,7 or 0,6. looks fun to play to me! changed
01:25:143 (9) - the beat's ongoing, so this should end on the downbeat, I think
same - 01:47:212 (9) - It could be some confuse
01:32:643 - not quite sure, but I feel like there should be a circle? because it's significantly louder than the blue ticks between 01:32:730 (7,8,9) - If I'll add circle there players could get confused, I think
welp, that's all. sorry for short mod, hope it was of help, tho. good luck!

Thanks you for mod!

AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2014-11-15T09:09:28+00:00

Seikatu wrote:
[BM's Hard]
01:05:143 (6) - ну продли реверс до белого тика , а ещё он вылазит, а еще эти реверсы неровненько стоят. фиксед
01:31:350 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:41:006 (2) - ^ на этих двух я специально сделала такой флоу, не буду его менять

Спасибо~

Squirrel wrote:
BM's Hard
Really fun to play diff!
00:21:178 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack them, cause it feels a bit awkward when you don't move, hop to 00:21:695 (4) - and wait for the next object again. fixed
00:26:868 (4,1) - I think you can emphasize this background sound better (dunno what to call it) by going with a two-reverse slider instead to be honest, I don't like multi-reverse sliders, don't want to add them, but I changed this moment almost as you want

because the previous pattern's movement could be improved here's an example of how you could place the objects (which is fun to play, imo)
screen

I hope this is understandable.. orz
00:31:523 (3) - I'd prefer a one-reverse slider here instead of one long one to emphasize the downbeat better I want to emphasize vocals here, so no changes
00:34:281 - unlike most other parts here's no 'break' but the beat continues, so you might wanna add a circle here don't want to add a circle here. endless stream of objects isn't the best variant for the map
00:38:247 (4,5,1) - jump from 5 to 1 fits nicely, but I'm not sure about 4 - 5. think about removing the jump from 4-5 fixed
suggestion
01:05:488 - 01:05:661 - I'd wish you mapped this sound. '^' I'd like to keep this, sorry
01:23:419 (2) - ctrl+g works better with the flow, imo. not sure if the distance is that well, tho. up to you! will keep this too

thank you!

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BoatKrab

740 posts

Joined September 2012

BoatKrab 2014-11-15T14:11:05+00:00

Hi! there,

this beatmap i can find a bit fix and not give kds to me pls

Awesome BG, I love it <3 and I like a Hard and Insane Diff ><

[Easy]
I can't find ;T_T;

[BM's Hard]
- I think AR 7 is better than 7.5. I think

@#$%^&*()_P)(*&^%$#@!ATFkamf1)*IFHSA3621a$%^&!

[Insane]
CAN"T FIND TOO @#$%^&*()(*&^%$!

tomhet65

137 posts

Joined November 2012

tomhet65 2014-11-15T17:09:48+00:00

Insane

00:21:525 (2,3,4) - Хочется играть что-то такое ломанное http://puu.sh/cRInM/8adacaa61f.jpg
00:27:387 (10,1) - Может смягчить этот скачок.
00:29:973 (8) - А тут напротив - увеличить.
00:32:387 (7,8,9,10) - Может сначала обойтись без стака 00:31:697 (5,9) - и сделать как-то поудобнее?
01:16:525 (7) - Попробуй замапить бит вместо этого скучноо слайдера http://puu.sh/cRITd/f4d02cde47.jpg
01:38:594 (7) - И/или тут.

BM's Hard

00:51:697 (3,4,5,6) - Тут что-то не так, но я не могу объяснить что, может ты поймешь.
00:53:076 (2,3,4,5) - Похоже на аналогичную штуку в инсе, только из-за ар играется сложнее, мне пришлось экстренно включать безумные умения лоу-ар на этом паттерне.
01:05:145 (6) - Очень хотелось бы играть последнюю ноту тут. http://puu.sh/cRJgY/ad95c6b0c3.jpg
01:31:697 (3) - Я бы его как-то отвернул для подчеркивания сменившегося звука, да хоть бланкетом к 01:32:214 (4) -

BoatKrab's Normal

00:22:042 (1,3) - I don't like how it looks. Try something like http://puu.sh/cRJTc/2db5e3b573.jpg
00:28:939 (3,4) - Irregular spacing.
00:39:628 (2,4) - I don't sure about it in normal. Don't change it, but you should ask someone experienced about all this overlaps.
00:41:008 (4) - Irregular spacing.
01:06:870 (1,2,3) - Don't like how it looks again. Try http://puu.sh/cRQrf/5de0b41810.jpg or http://puu.sh/cRQGp/788cc3f2b4.jpg.
01:19:628 (4,1,2,1) - Make good line http://puu.sh/cRRH7/b3ffb02d65.jpg
01:42:387 (2) - Irregular spacing and all map have 0.05~ random changes in ds, make it more uniform.

Easy

00:23:076 (2,3,4) - Меня за такое в изи ругают .-. В остальном без придирок наверное.

Хорошая мапка, только нормал грязноват. Удачи!

Shadren

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Topic Starter

Shadren 2014-11-15T17:23:25+00:00

tomhet65's mod

tomhet65 wrote:
Insane

00:21:525 (2,3,4) - Хочется играть что-то такое ломанное http://puu.sh/cRInM/8adacaa61f.jpg Уломал
00:27:387 (10,1) - Может смягчить этот скачок. Подумаю
00:29:973 (8) - А тут напротив - увеличить. И тут тоже
00:32:387 (7,8,9,10) - Может сначала обойтись без стака 00:31:697 (5,9) - и сделать как-то поудобнее? Попробовал изменить паттерн
01:16:525 (7) - Попробуй замапить бит вместо этого скучноо слайдера http://puu.sh/cRITd/f4d02cde47.jpg
01:38:594 (7) - И/или тут. А вот тут я оставлю, т.к игроков смутит появление триплета, где на фоне песни его слабо слышно. Тем более, я почёркиваю главный характерный звук этим слайдером ^
Easy

00:23:076 (2,3,4) - Меня за такое в изи ругают .-. В остальном без придирок наверное. Пока оставлю так
Хорошая мапка, только нормал грязноват. Удачи!

Спасибо за мод!

Pappy

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Pappy 2014-11-15T17:32:08+00:00

Just a mod here o/

[General]

Change BPM to 87 and double SV because it is dubstep song, they have main slow BPM. If you don't want snap again everything after BPM changes, just Ctrl+A and move everything.
It's just me offset is off?

[Insane]

Overral this diff is funny to play, it have interesting flow. owo
00:22:042 (1) - If you move it to x:304|y:136 it can look nicer with notes before. Can create kind of symmetry.
00:23:766 (7,8) - Ctrl+G, plays awesome <3 Like this other notes placed like this.
00:49:111 (8,1) - Fix blanket owo Move second point to x:158|y:96 and last to x:108|y:148.
01:13:076 (4,5,6,7) - This square shape can be improved.

How to fix it?

01:13:594 (7) - move to x:260|y:206
01:13:076 (4) - move to x:216|y:274

01:33:421 (8,1) - Blanket fix is need Second poiny move to x:323|y:193 Last point move to x:248|y:273
01:35:663 (7) - It is off from square pattern with previous notes. Move to x:264|y:118
01:47:732 (1) - Move spinner start to 01:47:904 cuz it is strange and unexpected when spinner starts not from white line.

[Hard]

Fine diff <3
00:27:559 (1,2) - This jump is definietly too hard. Reduce it a bit, plz... ;_; Jumps on hard should be very consistent with music to better catch the rhytm. I don't see anything special on (2), just casual drum.
00:49:283 (4) - Jump should be between 00:49:283 (4,1) not between 00:49:111 (3,4) . Fix it :3
00:59:973 (2,3,1) - Flow isn't good, just Ctrl+G on 01:00:318 (3)
01:47:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why isn't this a spinner like in insane? If you don't want to change it, note to Shadren to map this part, it is strange that hardest diff have this part easier.
01:49:973 (4,1) - I doesn't feel this jump, really.

[Normal]

Too easy from Hard? Anyway looks fine.
00:39:973 (3,4) - This spacing... Fix it O.o
00:23:421 (3) - Move to x:356|y:264 to get better shape with two previous notes. After this move also tail to fix blanket.
00:24:801 (2) - Move second point to x:120|y:220 to get better blanket with 00:24:456 (1)
00:45:490 (3) - Move to x:358|y:176 to overlap with turning on 00:44:111 (1) -
00:32:387 (4) - Move to x:308|y:112 to better blanket with (1) and (3)
01:47:559 (5) - Add New Combo.
01:48:249 (1) - Move start of this to 01:47:904
You should add more&more 1/2 because I can't find any. Plz ;;

Easy is awesome, can't find problems here.

Good luck! Awesome mapset!

TrigonometrY

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Joined November 2011

TrigonometrY 2014-11-15T17:54:44+00:00

Забавно, что именно этот трек я не удалил после прослушки нового альбома ножей, т.к. он единственный напоминает их прежний стиль.
Круто. Круто, круто, круто.

Breadhunter

313 posts

Joined June 2011

Breadhunter 2014-11-15T18:04:06+00:00

Фига тут модов уже D:
Старый бг был лучше, имхо

ИЗИ

00:28:939 (3) - попробуй сделать конец более выпуклым, а кончик чтобы смотрел вниз больше
01:20:663 (2,1) - а тут можно бланкет сделать получше как?
Все норм, что тут сказать

BoatKrab's Normal

00:48:249 (3) - blanket: move middle of the slider to (x:132 y:44)
End. D:

Alexa's

00:21:266 (2) - Попробуй на (x:7 y:111) Тут просто заметно
01:04:111 (3,4) - можно попробовать повернуть их в другую сторону, что подчеркнуть звук
01:35:835 (3) - бланкет

инсейн

А тут чисто, для меня

В общем, удачи с картой!

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T18:08:11+00:00

Pappy's mod

Pappy wrote:
Just a mod here o/

[General]
Change BPM to 87 and double SV because it is dubstep song, they have main slow BPM. If you don't want snap again everything after BPM changes, just Ctrl+A and move everything. Okay
It's just me offset is off?

[Insane]
Overral this diff is funny to play, it have interesting flow. owo thanks~
00:22:042 (1) - If you move it to x:304|y:136 it can look nicer with notes before. Can create kind of symmetry. no, I want leave it as it is
00:23:766 (7,8) - Ctrl+G, plays awesome <3 Like this other notes placed like this. okay
00:49:111 (8,1) - Fix blanket owo Move second point to x:158|y:96 and last to x:108|y:148. Fixed
01:13:076 (4,5,6,7) - This square shape can be improved.
01:13:594 (7) - move to x:260|y:206
01:13:076 (4) - move to x:216|y:274
Fixed
01:33:421 (8,1) - Blanket fix is need Second poiny move to x:323|y:193 Last point move to x:248|y:273 Fixed
01:35:663 (7) - It is off from square pattern with previous notes. Move to x:264|y:118 Fixed
01:47:732 (1) - Move spinner start to 01:47:904 cuz it is strange and unexpected when spinner starts not from white line. I've started from beginning of sound

Easy is awesome, can't find problems here.

Good luck! Awesome mapset!

Thank you for mod!

Last edited by Shadren 2014-11-15T18:20:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T18:14:21+00:00

Breadhunter wrote:
Фига тут модов уже D:
Старый бг был лучше, имхо Бака сказал поменять, и нашёл бг покруче. Мне нравиться
ИЗИ
00:28:939 (3) - попробуй сделать конец более выпуклым, а кончик чтобы смотрел вниз больше Ага
01:20:663 (2,1) - а тут можно бланкет сделать получше как? Попробовал
Все норм, что тут сказать
инсейн
А тут чисто, для меня

В общем, удачи с картой!

Спасибо за мод!

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T18:17:00+00:00

TrigonometrY wrote:
Забавно, что именно этот трек я не удалил после прослушки нового альбома ножей, т.к. он единственный напоминает их прежний стиль.
Круто. Круто, круто, круто.

Да, это точно. И спасибо за звёздочки

AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2014-11-15T18:45:30+00:00

без изменений, но спасибо за мод! @tomhet65

Pappy wrote:
[Hard]
Fine diff <3 nice to hear it!
00:27:559 (1,2) - This jump is definietly too hard. Reduce it a bit, plz... ;_; Jumps on hard should be very consistent with music to better catch the rhytm. I don't see anything special on (2), just casual drum. fixed
00:49:283 (4) - Jump should be between 00:49:283 (4,1) not between 00:49:111 (3,4) . Fix it :3 will fix that if someone else mention it
00:59:973 (2,3,1) - Flow isn't good, just Ctrl+G on 01:00:318 (3) I'd like to keep this
01:47:904 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Why isn't this a spinner like in insane? If you don't want to change it, note to Shadren to map this part, it is strange that hardest diff have this part easier. added a spinner
01:49:973 (4,1) - I doesn't feel this jump, really. there's no problem anymore because of spinner :3

thank you!

Breadhunter wrote:
Alexa's
00:21:266 (2) - Попробуй на (x:7 y:111) Тут просто заметно ага
01:04:111 (3,4) - можно попробовать повернуть их в другую сторону, что подчеркнуть звук оставлю так, пожалуй
01:35:835 (3) - бланкет да

спасибо!

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TicClick

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TicClick 2014-11-15T19:15:22+00:00

несмотря на то, что я люблю как регги, так и дропы, Хьюстон, у вас проблемы в виде провала по сложности между нормалом, который на самом деле не нормал, а изи и очень, просто безумно лёгок для нормала, и хардом. хорошим решением было бы выкинуть нормал или переименовать его в изи, а вместо него сделать или у кого-нибудь выцыганить новую, блестящую, со вставочками 1/2 (желательно побольше) дифку. если что, это я официально про провал говорю, от других вы можете услышать только то же самое

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-11-15T19:16:15+00:00

напиши, когда это исправишь и соберёшь несколько модов для новой дифки

syuru

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syuru 2014-11-15T19:48:08+00:00

from ingame req :>
the 1/4 sliders in insane are so fun
[General]

the song sounds way faster than 87bpm, and using this bpm makes it difficult to throw in triples in your insane which would add variety to your 4 choruses unless you use 1/8 beat snap
i'm not too fond of the light gray combo color, i think something like
might be better for the bg

[Easy]

why not just flat hp 2?
didn't find anything else ✔

[BoatKrab's Normal]

01:00:673 (1,2) - are multiple repeats on sliders allowed for nm?
01:17:224 (1,3) - blanket could be improved by curving in the tail

[BM's Hard]

00:43:949 (5) - move to 252, 88 so the jump between this and the next combo is not as wide
01:20:328 (1,2) - jump is too big for hard imo
01:42:052 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]

00:38:431 (10) - move to 164, 80 for a more even funnel pattern
00:43:776 (9) - move down to around 420, 216, i think your spacing here should be consistent
00:51:535 (7) - move up so it mirrors 8 in terms of spacing,
00:59:983 (9,10,11) - spacing here feels too uneven
01:02:397 (3,4) - it looks like you're going for a crescendo effect, so make this jump smaller than 5 and 6 and place 7 farther from 8
01:05:500 (1) - extend like and change SV to .5
01:14:466 (1,3) - try some more wavy slider shapes to fit the music and do so for the other sections like this
01:29:638 (4,5,6,7) - these are too spaced out compared to the 1/4 sliders elsewhere, decrease spacing a little

tomhet65

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tomhet65 2014-11-15T20:03:18+00:00

Ого тут движуха.

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T20:47:32+00:00

TicClick wrote:
напиши, когда это исправишь и соберёшь несколько модов для новой дифки

Даже не ожидал, что БАТ сам придёт, ну да ладно. Скоро порешаю эту проблему.

AlexaBM

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AlexaBM 2014-11-15T20:49:50+00:00

no changes, I'd like to keep these jumps for now. anyway, thank you! @ankou

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-15T21:14:25+00:00

ankou's mod

ankou wrote:
from ingame req :>
the 1/4 sliders in insane are so fun
[General]
the song sounds way faster than 87bpm, and using this bpm makes it difficult to throw in triples in your insane which would add variety to your 4 choruses unless you use 1/8 beat snap
i'm not too fond of the light gray combo color, i think something like
might be better for the bg Changed
[Easy]
why not just flat hp 2? fixed
didn't find anything else ✔
[Insane]
00:38:431 (10) - move to 164, 80 for a more even funnel pattern okay
00:43:776 (9) - move down to around 420, 216, i think your spacing here should be consistent okay
00:51:535 (7) - move up so it mirrors 8 in terms of spacing okay
00:59:983 (9,10,11) - spacing here feels too uneven I think, it's good
01:02:397 (3,4) - it looks like you're going for a crescendo effect, so make this jump smaller than 5 and 6 and place 7 farther from 8 I changed this pattern
01:05:500 (1) - extend like and change SV to .5 I'll use there 1/4 and changed SV to 0.5
01:14:466 (1,3) - try some more wavy slider shapes to fit the music and do so for the other sections like this No, I want smooth slidere there
01:29:638 (4,5,6,7) - these are too spaced out compared to the 1/4 sliders elsewhere, decrease spacing a little changed DS to 3.5

Thank you for mod!

Axey

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Axey 2014-11-16T14:34:19+00:00

\knife party/

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-16T16:06:24+00:00

BakaHuang wrote:
\knife party/

/ytrap efink\

ryuu

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ryuu 2014-11-16T20:01:50+00:00

хай
что-нибудь напишу

изя

00:59:293 (3) - почему не зеркальная копия (1)? или наоборот
01:16:190 (2) - тут тип блаблабла. стак.

нормал

00:31:707 (4) - ctrkh? потому что я не люблю, когда слайдеры, идущие друг за другом, идут по кругу
01:06:190 (1) - анранкед. два белых тика должно быть в нормале после спиннера
01:44:811 (1) - пожалуйста, наклони его вот так. и тогда, относительно пред. слайдера, он будет выглядеть идеально

бм'с хард

00:21:362 (3) - совсем чуть-чуть подвинь дальше от (1,2). хотя вот у тебя дальше трипл с другим дс идёт. я люблю, когда такие вещи на одном расстоянии. так что. вот.
00:26:880 (1) - убрать нк, сделать на след., а потом ещё убрать тут 00:27:569 (1) -. потому что до этого у тебя была такая логика. и дальше тоже
00:50:845 (1) - убрать нк, сделать на следующий?
01:12:397 (2) - выгни в другую сторону? чтобы с пред. смотрелся милее. ну или сделай ctrlh, ctrlj копию 01:13:776 (3) - этого
01:17:914 (2) - а вот тут уже выгни, плиз

инсейн

00:39:293 (2) - нестак задуман?
00:54:811 (9,10) - по какой логике они тут? я думала, 9 должна быть под (3), ну а 10. хз.

про нк. если тебя устраивают твои, то не читай

для меня они слишком длинные.
00:23:431 (5) - я бы поставила тут, потому что джамппаттерн мне удобнее выбивать, если он отличается цветом от того, что только что было до него/на его месте
дальше я тупо буду кидать ссылки для нк
00:26:880 (7) -
00:32:397 (7) -
00:37:914 (7) -
00:43:431 (7) -
00:45:500 (6) -
00:48:949 (7) -
00:51:017 (5) -
00:54:466 (7) -
00:57:224 (9) -
00:59:983 (9) -
дальше бы я отделяла те маленькие слайдерики от пред., ну да ладно
пусть будут
а то и так слишком много получилось

выжала, что смогла
удачки

Shadren

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Shadren 2014-11-17T07:25:15+00:00

ryuu's mod

ryuu wrote:
хай
что-нибудь напишу

изя

00:59:293 (3) - почему не зеркальная копия (1)? или наоборот Для следующего бланкета
01:16:190 (2) - тут тип блаблабла. стак. Точно

нормал

00:31:707 (4) - ctrkh? потому что я не люблю, когда слайдеры, идущие друг за другом, идут по кругу окей
01:06:190 (1) - анранкед. два белых тика должно быть в нормале после спиннера бпм тут по натуре будет 174, а не 87, так что там будет 2 белых тика
01:44:811 (1) - пожалуйста, наклони его вот так. и тогда, относительно пред. слайдера, он будет выглядеть идеально Вроде наклонил так как еа пикче

инсейн

00:39:293 (2) - нестак задуман? Ой, точно
00:54:811 (9,10) - по какой логике они тут? я думала, 9 должна быть под (3), ну а 10. хз.
про нк. если тебя устраивают твои, то не читай
для меня они слишком длинные.
00:23:431 (5) - я бы поставила тут, потому что джамппаттерн мне удобнее выбивать, если он отличается цветом от того, что только что было до него/на его месте Да, раньше было так, но я оставлю как сейчас, чтобы было больше джампов
дальше я тупо буду кидать ссылки для нк
00:26:880 (7) -
00:32:397 (7) -
00:37:914 (7) -
00:43:431 (7) -
00:45:500 (6) -
00:48:949 (7) -
00:51:017 (5) -
00:54:466 (7) -
00:57:224 (9) -
00:59:983 (9) -
дальше бы я отделяла те маленькие слайдерики от пред., ну да ладно
пусть будут
а то и так слишком много получилось
Поменял НК, и с "слайдериками" тоже

выжала, что смогла
удачки

Спасибо за мод!

-Kanzaki

889 posts

Joined June 2012

-Kanzaki 2014-11-17T16:00:05+00:00

Easy

00:26:190 (3) - outside of the area
00:28:949 (3,4,1) - same
00:33:086 (1) - same
00:38:259 (4) - same
00:43:431 (4) - same
00:44:121 (1) - same
00:45:845 (2) - same
00:46:880 (1) - same
00:48:259 (3) - same
00:49:638 (1) - same
00:52:397 (1) - same
01:00:673 (1,2,3) - same
01:07:569 (3) - same
01:11:707 (1) - same
01:14:466 (1) - same
01:25:155 (4) - same
01:35:155 (3,4,1) - same
01:39:293 (1) - same
01:42:052 (1) - same
01:46:190 (3) - same

Try this sliders like this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2250441) :

01:07:569 (3) -
01:13:086 (3) -
01:18:949 (2,3) - you use a circle and a slider here but you can use only one slider if you want to make my slider
01:24:121 (3) -
01:29:638 (3) -
01:35:155 (3) -
01:41:017 (2,3) - same with 01.18.949

Normal

00:24:466 (6) - outside of the area
00:27:224 (5) - same
00:28:259 (2,4) - same
00:31:707 (4) - same
00:37:914 (4) - same
00:38:604 (1) - same
00:44:121 (1,3) - same
00:46:880 (1) - same
00:53:776 (4) - same
01:02:742 (4) - same
01:07:569 (3,5) - same
01:09:638 (3) - same
01:16:535 (4) - same
01:17:914 (2,3,4,6) - same
01:20:673 (3) - same
01:23:431 (2) - same
01:31:017 (1) - same
01:35:155 (3) - same
01:39:293 (1,5) - same
01:43:431 (4) - same
01:46:190 (3) - same

01:25:500 (1) - 01:27:569 - try a spin here

Good Luck with your map

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-11-17T17:38:29+00:00

пофиксила все, кроме последнего. спасибо! @ryuu

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163,341,82397,2,0,L|156:264,1,71.5000021820069,2|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
89,323,82742,6,2,B|72:289|81:261|81:261|69:245|69:245|78:225|78:225|35:173|67:116,1,214.500006546021,6|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
138,164,83431,2,0,P|184:138|208:49,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,204,84121,6,0,L|315:275,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
381,365,84466,2,0,L|401:294,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,84811,2,0,L|509:355,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,233,85845,6,0,P|174:225|131:236,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,306,86190,2,0,P|176:313|208:310,2,65,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,266,86707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,202,86880,6,0,L|19:137,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,152,87224,2,0,L|85:87,1,65,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,30,87569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,74,87742,1,8,1:0:0:0:
268,33,87914,1,8,1:0:0:0:
336,69,88086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,34,88259,6,2,B|444:16|481:42|481:42|430:110|485:190,1,214.500006546021,6|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
509,247,88949,2,0,P|457:265|364:237,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,109,89638,5,2,1:0:0:0:
276,23,89811,1,2,1:0:0:0:
196,55,89983,2,0,P|160:61|126:52,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
45,24,90328,2,0,B|35:65|54:98|54:98|40:171,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,292,91017,6,0,L|173:206,1,71.5000021820069,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,271,91362,2,0,L|258:185,1,71.5000021820069,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,251,91707,2,0,L|342:165,2,71.5000021820069,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,322,92224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
445,279,92397,6,0,L|476:133,1,143.000004364014,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
328,47,93086,2,0,L|298:186,1,143.000004364014,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
240,349,93776,6,2,B|204:351|182:333|182:333|164:351|164:351|133:341|133:341|90:371|32:351,1,214.500006546021,6|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
1,278,94466,2,0,P|5:217|30:186,1,71.5000021820069,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,149,94811,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,255,95155,6,0,P|230:230|238:195,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
321,207,95500,2,0,P|321:171|304:140,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
387,120,95845,2,0,P|346:65|270:61,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,149,96535,6,0,B|125:199|125:199|135:297,1,130,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,374,97224,2,0,B|275:324|275:324|265:226,1,130,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,93,97914,2,0,P|336:110|408:63,1,130,6|6,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
346,226,98604,2,0,P|353:288|403:328,1,130,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,352,99121,1,0,2:0:0:0:
505,270,99293,6,2,B|508:230|482:195|482:195|500:161|500:161|457:122|466:71,1,214.500006546021,6|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
391,30,99983,2,0,P|337:57|263:30,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,124,100673,6,0,L|107:211,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
190,167,101017,2,0,L|178:254,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
261,209,101362,2,0,L|249:296,1,71.5000021820069,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,356,101707,1,4,0:0:0:0:
437,268,102052,5,4,0:1:0:0:
350,39,102397,1,4,0:1:0:0:
199,122,102742,2,0,P|156:124|119:112,1,71.5000021820069,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
50,80,103086,2,0,P|52:123|40:160,1,71.5000021820069,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
7,228,103431,6,0,P|50:226|115:314,3,143.000004364014,2|2|2|2,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,359,104811,6,2,B|320:360|356:318|356:318|334:278|334:278|374:249|376:200,1,214.500006546021,6|0,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
368,133,105500,2,0,P|317:89|241:99,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,220,106190,2,0,P|119:256|132:296,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
214,287,106535,2,0,P|221:251|208:211,1,71.5000021820069,2|2,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
162,147,106880,2,0,P|231:162|282:113,1,143.000004364014,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107742,12,4,110328,1:0:0:0:

Shadren

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Topic Starter

Shadren 2014-11-18T07:38:27+00:00

-Kanzaki wrote:
Easy
00:26:190 (3) - outside of the area
00:28:949 (3,4,1) - same
00:33:086 (1) - same
00:38:259 (4) - same
00:43:431 (4) - same
00:44:121 (1) - same
00:45:845 (2) - same
00:46:880 (1) - same
00:48:259 (3) - same
00:49:638 (1) - same
00:52:397 (1) - same
01:00:673 (1,2,3) - same
01:07:569 (3) - same
01:11:707 (1) - same
01:14:466 (1) - same
01:25:155 (4) - same
01:35:155 (3,4,1) - same
01:39:293 (1) - same
01:42:052 (1) - same
01:46:190 (3) - same

Try this sliders like this (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2250441) :

01:07:569 (3) -
01:13:086 (3) -
01:18:949 (2,3) - you use a circle and a slider here but you can use only one slider if you want to make my slider
01:24:121 (3) -
01:29:638 (3) -
01:35:155 (3) -
01:41:017 (2,3) - same with 01.18.949

Normal
00:24:466 (6) - outside of the area
00:27:224 (5) - same
00:28:259 (2,4) - same
00:31:707 (4) - same
00:37:914 (4) - same
00:38:604 (1) - same
00:44:121 (1,3) - same
00:46:880 (1) - same
00:53:776 (4) - same
01:02:742 (4) - same
01:07:569 (3,5) - same
01:09:638 (3) - same
01:16:535 (4) - same
01:17:914 (2,3,4,6) - same
01:20:673 (3) - same
01:23:431 (2) - same
01:31:017 (1) - same
01:35:155 (3) - same
01:39:293 (1,5) - same
01:43:431 (4) - same
01:46:190 (3) - same

01:25:500 (1) - 01:27:569 - try a spin here

Good Luck with your map

No changes, sorry. Anyway, thank you for mod.

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2014-11-18T14:52:41+00:00

M4M time

I love this map

[General]

Suggest Double BPM, halve SV. SV looks a little too high.
Also suggest change in combo colour, since the neon-ish colours don't fit the song IMO. I suggest grey, b&w series of colours.

[Easy]
00:49:638 (1) - This looks like its gonna disappear from the screen, maybe shift it inside the grid more?
00:59:293 (3,1) - Blanket maybe?
01:11:707 (1,3) - Fix blanket
01:20:673 (2,1) - Maybe make slider 1 more J shaped like this for blanket:
01:26:535 - Why is this bit empty? Should map something here
01:31:707 (2) - Shift 2nd point in slider lower like in here 00:37:224 (3) -

Nice Easy, smooth blankets, smooth flow and nice patterns. I like it

[Normal]
00:37:914 (4,5,1,2,3) - Maybe find some variety here and curve slider 1?
01:03:431 (1,1) - If I'm not wrong, this isn't enough recovery for Normal (unrankable)
01:21:362 (4,1) - Try blanket?
Again at the empty bit

Amazing normal. Beat placements are very good, esp for a map like that. Nice flow too! I like this

[BM's Hard]
00:34:466 (1,2) - Maybe shift 1 lower to have 1 and 2 blanket?
00:54:466 (2,3,1) - Suggest ctrl h here for flow from 00:53:776 (1) - to 00:54:466 (2) - ?
00:59:293 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Why not make slider 1 at the beginning here the same as the rest? Double short sliders
01:37:914 (3,4,5,1) - Why not instead of circular from 4 to 1, try a symmetry from 3 to 4?
01:43:431 (1) - I don't suggest a double reverse, maybe a single reverse and hitcircle

This hard is amazing as well, really neat and nice flow.

[Insane]
00:38:604 (1) - Try ctrl g
00:43:431 (1,2,3,4) - Try 1,3,2,4 or 1,2,4,3
00:46:535 (6,1) - Fix blanket?
00:59:983 (1,2,3,4) - Try 1,4,2,3
01:02:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is rather weird, I suggest something more polygon orientated
01:05:500 (1) - Suggest extend this note to 01:05:845 - and slow the slider down more
01:06:190 (1) - I don't suggest sliders like these, maybe go with the ones similar to that in the Hard diff (there are a few of these)
01:09:638 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This bit may seem a bit plain for an Insane (there are a few of these)
01:11:707 (1) - Why is this note circular when it has the same musical sense as 01:06:190 (1) - ? (there are a few of these)
01:15:845 (5,7) - Fix blanket?
01:25:673 (1) - Map something else instead of having a spinner

Despite everything I've pointed out, this diff is still fantastic. Most of the issues are with the patterns and slider shapes in chorus, which I highly suggest you fix though.

Amazing diffspread. I like this

Good luck for rank

Last edited by emilia 2014-11-18T16:00:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Thunderstorm

437 posts

Joined May 2009

Thunderstorm 2014-11-18T15:39:12+00:00

Ку.

К изи/нормалу претензий не имею.

[Хард]
В принципе, в часть 00:21:190 (1) - 00:44:121 (1) - можно было бы добавить немножко клэпов. Там как раз даже в музыке присутствует. Должно лечь довольно ровно.
00:21:707 (4,1) - на мой взгляд, такие вещи сильно ломают ритм игры. Как-будто о ступеньку запнулся. Олсо, выглядело бы немного эстетичнее, если бы было застакано. На твой вкус, в принципе. Можно оставить. С другой стороны, я бы не спамил анти-джампы, а чередовал бы джамп-паттернами. Должно было бы играться интереснее.
Ну там далее подобные моменты.
00:24:811 (2,1) -
00:27:914 (3,1) -
00:30:328 (2,1) -
00:32:052 (4,1) -
00:42:742 (1,2) -
01:06:190 (1) - он какой-то немножко угловатый. http://puu.sh/cVRWX/d6594e4baf.jpg ?
01:11:707 (1) - Аналогично. http://puu.sh/cVS7b/f8939a57cc.jpg ?
01:17:224 (1) - ^. Могу предложить что-то вида http://puu.sh/cVSmH/61d282b863.jpg Или вообще слайдер переделать.
01:22:742 (1) - ^, может, что-то вида http://puu.sh/cVSrS/4daad0fe8f.jpg ?
01:33:776 (1) - ^, http://puu.sh/cVSwX/b5a6290c71.jpg
01:39:293 (1) - тоже что-то наподобие предыдущего можно намутить
01:44:811 (1) - можно сделать как я предлагал 01:17:224 (1).
П.С. Я предлагал переделки на основе имеющихся слайдеров. При большом желании, их просто можно заменить на новые. Или оставить. Но, повторюсь, они как-то визуально не вписываются, ИМХО

[Инс]
00:24:121 (5,6,1) - как я предлагал на харде, подобные части неплохо бы смотрелись джамп-антиджамп чередующимися паттернами. Но, тут как сам пожелаешь
01:04:811 (1,2,3,4) - Ох, знаю я одного любителя подобных джампов. Ему всю плешь проел, тебе тоже скажу - ну зачем такой спейсинг в стримах? Это же не на аппрувд идёт. Я б советовал сделать его ну хоть немного поменьше.
Последующие подобные части, соответственно, тоже. Прописывать не буду, они легко находятся.
01:06:190 (1) - здесь - ладно. но 01:17:224 (1) - опять он же

01:28:259 (1) - и опять он же. 01:39:293 (1) - Здравствуй, старый друг.
А в частях типа 01:44:811 (1) - гнутые слайдеры. Нет, оно имеет право на жизнь, но выглядит копи-пастой. Подумай, может, стоит чутка разнообразить?
01:09:293 (2,3) - я б предложил застакать
01:20:328 (2,3) - ^
01:31:362 (2,3) - ^
Или просто разнообразить подобные паттерны, опять же методом джамп-антиджамп.
Ах, да, попробуй воткнуть slider tick rate на 4ку. Слушается забавно, длинные слайдеры с 2мя тиками выглядят привлекательнее.
ПыСы. Песня доставила безбожно. Сет достойный. Удачи с ранком

Shadren

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Topic Starter

Shadren 2014-11-18T16:44:59+00:00

Estellia-'s mod

Estellia- wrote:
M4M time I love this map

[General]
Suggest Double BPM, halve SV. SV looks a little too high. I'll think about this
Also suggest change in combo colour, since the neon-ish colours don't fit the song IMO. I suggest grey, b&w series of colours. Prefer neon colors

[Easy]
00:49:638 (1) - This looks like its gonna disappear from the screen, maybe shift it inside the grid more? It's okay http://puu.sh/cVX3E/3cb62a38e9.jpg
00:59:293 (3,1) - Blanket maybe? fixed
01:11:707 (1,3) - Fix blanket fixed
01:20:673 (2,1) - Maybe make slider 1 more J shaped like this for blanket: http://puu.sh/cVPXD/692dc63000.jpg No, it's ok
01:26:535 - Why is this bit empty? Should map something here There must be break for newbies
01:31:707 (2) - Shift 2nd point in slider lower like in here 00:37:224 (3) - fixed

Nice Easy, smooth blankets, smooth flow and nice patterns. I like it

[Normal]
00:37:914 (4,5,1,2,3) - Maybe find some variety here and curve slider 1? nope :3
01:03:431 (1,1) - If I'm not wrong, this isn't enough recovery for Normal (unrankable) bpm is 87 (it's 1 white tick), but really it's 184 and there 2 white ticks
01:21:362 (4,1) - Try blanket? fixed
Again at the empty bit

Amazing normal. Beat placements are very good, esp for a map like that. Nice flow too! I like this thanks

[Insane]
00:38:604 (1) - Try ctrl g no, I want my variant
00:43:431 (1,2,3,4) - Try 1,3,2,4 or 1,2,4,3 ^
00:46:535 (6,1) - Fix blanket? fixed
00:59:983 (1,2,3,4) - Try 1,4,2,3 -
01:02:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is rather weird, I suggest something more polygon orientated ^
01:05:500 (1) - Suggest extend this note to 01:05:845 - and slow the slider down more ^
01:06:190 (1) - I don't suggest sliders like these, maybe go with the ones similar to that in the Hard diff (there are a few of these) there must be WHEEE
01:09:638 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This bit may seem a bit plain for an Insane (there are a few of these) -
01:11:707 (1) - Why is this note circular when it has the same musical sense as 01:06:190 (1) - ? (there are a few of these) i want to diversify map
01:15:845 (5,7) - Fix blanket? fixed
01:25:673 (1) - Map something else instead of having a spinner I'll think about this

Despite everything I've pointed out, this diff is still fantastic. Most of the issues are with the patterns and slider shapes in chorus, which I highly suggest you fix though.
Amazing diffspread. I like this Good luck for rank

Thank you for mod!

Last edited by Shadren 2014-11-18T16:57:52+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-11-18T16:56:01+00:00

no changes were applied, sorry :\

хс на Шадрене. про анти-джампы: по-моему, они неплохо вписываются под музыку, джампы присутствуют больше в киае, там они выглядят естественнее и нужнее. а на не-киаях можно немного использовать анти-джампов. музыка располагает, так почему бы и нет?
про форму слайдеров: такие формы как нельзя лучше "имитируют" эти звуки, на которые наложен слайдер. они выглядят красиво и вписываются под музыку. честно, не вижу с этим проблем. но все равно спасибо! @Thunderstorm

anyway, thanks for your time!

Shadren

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Topic Starter

Shadren 2014-11-18T17:05:41+00:00

Thunderstorm's mod

Thunderstorm wrote:
Ку. Ку

К изи/нормалу претензий не имею.

[Инс]
00:24:121 (5,6,1) - как я предлагал на харде, подобные части неплохо бы смотрелись джамп-антиджамп чередующимися паттернами. Но, тут как сам пожелаешь
01:04:811 (1,2,3,4) - Ох, знаю я одного любителя подобных джампов. Ему всю плешь проел, тебе тоже скажу - ну зачем такой спейсинг в стримах? Это же не на аппрувд идёт. Я б советовал сделать его ну хоть немного поменьше.
Последующие подобные части, соответственно, тоже. Прописывать не буду, они легко находятся. Я думаю, что они легко играются, правда. Но я ещё подумаю
01:06:190 (1) - здесь - ладно. но 01:17:224 (1) - опять он же 01:28:259 (1) - и опять он же. 01:39:293 (1) - Здравствуй, старый друг.
А в частях типа 01:44:811 (1) - гнутые слайдеры. Нет, оно имеет право на жизнь, но выглядит копи-пастой. Подумай, может, стоит чутка разнообразить? Карта не долгая, думаю, никто жаловаться не будет
01:09:293 (2,3) - я б предложил застакать
01:20:328 (2,3) - ^
01:31:362 (2,3) - ^ Ну я подумаю
Или просто разнообразить подобные паттерны, опять же методом джамп-антиджамп.
Ах, да, попробуй воткнуть slider tick rate на 4ку. Слушается забавно, длинные слайдеры с 2мя тиками выглядят привлекательнее. Ну давай попробуем
ПыСы. Песня доставила безбожно. Сет достойный. Удачи с ранком
Насчёт клэпов я пока ещё подумаю. Просто хочу слышать на карте драм сэмплсэт

Спасибо за мод!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-11-19T11:54:10+00:00

Привет

[General]

Интересное место для офффсета, почему именно 11018, а не -17?
Не забуду упомянуть, что нужно убрать вайдскрин суппорт это всегда в тренде.

[Easy]

00:49:638 (1) - Вот этот бы слайдер по-выше сделать http://puu.sh/cWZgp/c90fce4e6e.jpg
01:11:707 (1,3) - Судя по тому, что у тебя там везде бланкеты, тут можно сделать тоже.
01:35:155 (3) - И тут можно чуть ближе к полю(ниже), если есть желание.
Мило, а еще мне показалось забавным, что в последних 3х киаях 80% игры идет на правой стороне поля :3

[Normal]

00:48:949 (4,5) - Хм а во всех подобных паттерных слайдеры параллельны (не учитывая киай), хотя может тут это специально.
01:03:431 (1) - Должно быть 2 бита на восстановление после спиннера для нормала.
01:21:362 (4,1) - Чуть-чуть подправить бланкет. Он же там задуман? http://puu.sh/cWZJ6/e38c618af0.jpg
01:47:569 () - Сюда бы ноту воткнуть, с соффт сэмпл-сетом пойдет.
Вполне на уровне.

[BM's Hard]

OD странно низкий (причем это хард и электроника), хотя-бы до 6 давай подтянем, больше баланса в мапсете и по дифке.
00:52:397 (1) - ноуп, наверное надо какой-то текст чтоб это объяснить, но ммне просто не нравится его форма.
01:43:431 (1) - Если убрать 2й рипит будет лучше, например http://puu.sh/cX0ju/94ce91672b.jpg
01:47:569 () - И тут есть ощутимый бит, нота с соффт семплом пойдет.
Отлично.

[Insane]

00:32:397 (1,2,3,4) - Хорошо-бы сделать так, чтоб послений джамп был не 4.15, а что-то в районе 3.5DS Сейчас это просто довольно заметный\большой скачок в сложности, а это даже не киаи.
00:45:155 (4,5) - Так-же какой-то слишком зафорсенный джамп, скорее всего потому что правильнее было-бы сделать джамп между 00:45:328 (5,1) -
01:24:638 (4,5) - Ну я конечно все понимаю, но это просто ад. ~3.75 было бы намного менее адовее и больше походило бы на то, что уже игралось и будет играться дальше.
01:47:569 () - Сюда бы ноту воткнуть, с соффт сэмпл-сетом пойдет.
Спасибо звездам Тома за то, что они плюют на сложность слайдер джампов. :3 Я думаю многим понравится.

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