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Avril Lavigne - Nobody's Home

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Globule
2 posts
Joined August 2012
Globule
Why is this map is unranked ? O_O
340
330 posts
Joined January 2014
340
random small shitmod. everything i suggested is just my opinion and feel free to refuse it all!
also, such a nice beatmap!

[Insane]
  1. 00:51:596 (3,4) - i really don't like how it sounds D; try to make something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2138758 and it'll sound much better!
  2. 01:02:598 (5,6) - swap them on timeline
  3. 01:18:292 (5) - drum finish on the end of this slider sounds really strange. replace it with soft whistle, it'll sound much better imo.
  4. 01:30:427 (3) - make this slider 1/4 shorter and put 4th slider on freed red tick
  5. 01:33:501 (4) - i don't like rhythm here. i propose to make this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2138776
  6. 02:27:055 (1) - drum finish here
  7. 00:27:489 (7,1) - this overlap looks so weird in this map with almost no overlaps :o
[Hard]
  1. 00:49:654 (5) - everyone hates sliders that repeats more than 1 times :D https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2138809 this looks and plays more awesome
  2. 01:41:429 (5) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:631 (4,5) - is it blanket? if so, make it more perfect
Damnae
Elite Storyboarder
640 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
Damnae
Thanks!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
applied Kiiwa's and 340's mod, thank you
code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: nobodyshome.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51920
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nobody's Home
TitleUnicode:Nobody's Home
Artist:Avril Lavigne
ArtistUnicode:Avril Lavigne
Creator:Damnae
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:
Tags:under my skin zero__wind nemis
BeatmapID:312948
BeatmapSetID:114966

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.95
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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and just saying, the Hard might be too easy to fit in the spread nicely
Natteke desu
2,487 posts
Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
someday
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
no kd because p/2605388

[General]
  1. Please use this: http://puu.sh/cArKd/681fdc7861.jpg
  2. I timed it loosely in the past, so here's a fix (fully working one; no notes in the beginning are off): remove the offset at 00:18:266 and add these:
    SPOILER
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    13113,647.179376550534,4,2,2,40,1,0
    15732,647.179376550534,4,2,2,40,1,0
    18290,600,4,2,2,40,1,0
    Resnap the beginning objects.
[Insane]
OD +0.5
  1. 00:30:239 (1) - please use normal finish, it sounds better than a hollow drum sound
  2. 00:43:183 (3) - new combo should be here, remove it from 00:42:536 (1) -
  3. 02:07:963 (6) - missing clap
  4. 02:20:907 (6) - ^? Feels empty, even if you say you did it intentionally to emphasize voice
[Hard]
  1. Nemis:
    1. 00:26:193 (4,5) - the overlap looks awful to me
    2. 00:30:238 (1) - please use normal finish instead of drum
    3. 02:05:374 (4) - may cause combo breaks; consider replacing by a slider with single repeat and a note afterwards
  2. Damnae:
    1. 00:49:654 (5) - I'd replace it with http://puu.sh/cAlgN/f352020b25.jpg
    2. 01:37:545 (1) - consider removing finish, because a) you didn't set it on Insane on the same note and b) it sounds too harsh here
    3. 01:41:429 (5) - same as above; but again, it may be just me who dislikes such sliders
    4. 02:12:816 (4) - repeat has no hitsound (and I think it should have at least clap)
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 02:10:551 (5) - missing clap?
  2. 02:18:317 (4) - ^
  3. 02:31:261 - unused offset
  4. 02:40:645 (4,5) - swap their lengths
  5. 03:10:415 (6,1) - ^
[Nemis' Easy]
AR +1, OD +1
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
All fixed, thanks for mod!
code
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51920
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nobody's Home
TitleUnicode:Nobody's Home
Artist:Avril Lavigne
ArtistUnicode:Avril Lavigne
Creator:Damnae
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:
Tags:under my skin zero__wind nemis
BeatmapID:312948
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:4
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Damnae
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Damnae

TicClick wrote:

Hard
  1. 02:05:374 (4) - may cause combo breaks; consider replacing by a slider with single repeat and a note afterwards removed the last repeat instead
  2. 00:49:654 (5) - I'd replace it with http://puu.sh/cAlgN/f352020b25.jpg
  3. 01:41:429 (5) - same as above; but again, it may be just me who dislikes such sliders kept these two
Fixed all the others, I took care of Nemis' diff and parts. Thanks!

Zero__wind: Please update your diff as I applied timing changes to it.
TicClick
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TicClick
I forgot to recommend you to disable kiai @ 02:52:618 where the last chorus ends. What do you think?
Damnae
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Damnae
That's the most intense part of the song, so I think it should have kiai.
TicClick
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TicClick
It starts to fade there. Anyway, bubbled! Good job on mapping this.
Damnae
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Damnae
Thanks =)
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
lol
Flask
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[Insane]
  1. 01:51:136 (3,4,5) - This may be your style (and I like it) but I'd suggest you to do something like this. I feel those objects need same distance cuz the pitch of the vocal are the same.
    Image
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 00:18:290 (3) - 雖然照著spacing擺不過間距上看起來就怪怪的 這裡音樂快慢變化不是這麼明顯所以還是手動調成跟(1,2)等距吧 (Make the "distance" same as (1,2))
  2. 01:52:430 (1) - Is that a need to add a new combo here? I don't see the reason though. Perhaps swap the new combo between (1,2)
Call me backu
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Damnae
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mmmh there's no vocal on 01:51:136 (3) - ? The jump between 3 and 4 also serves to emphasize the beginning of vocals on 4.
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
both fixed
code
osu file format v13

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Okay, I'm not trying be a troll or anything, this is just my personal opinion and I feel like a must say something about this. (because it's an avril lavigne song)

  1. The slider-speed + large spacing is not exactlyyyy fitting for this song, some songs just are not meant to have slider-speed/spacing as high as this, feels like forcing the difficulty of the map. (trust me, I learned this the hard way)
  2. Pattern construction, you've got way too many circles/objects placed for no reason, let me give you some examples. I'll be really specific on the first ones, I won't bother mentioning all the iffy objects through the whole map.
  3. 00:21:664 (5) - No real sound/beat here, seems to be placed for no real reason. The vocals are quite loud here Avril starts the word "could" here and holds it, this screams SLIDER - The circle is there just to add difficulty or complete the pattern maybe?
  4. 00:24:900 (4) - Basically the same here.
  5. 00:27:489 (7) - This is a clear example of what I'm trying to say here. Honestly, this looks like you're trying to fill the blanks with objetcs for the sake of it, in this case slider-repeats. A little like 'overmapping' but not exactly?
  6. 00:32:666 (2) - Same as before.
  7. 00:35:255 (8) - ^
  8. 00:51:596 (3) - Bad repeat placement, yeah there's a beat there buuut why would you join these 2 rhythms in a single slider, listen to the song at 25% and you'll understand what I'm saying. There's a pause after this beat 00:51:595 - then the singers starts with the vocals , respect that pause in the music, you're mapping to a song. Look at this http://puu.sh/d1MRt.jpg , try this object placement in the timeline and see if it's better.
  9. ...

Okay so I don't want to you to take this the wrong way, this map is technically okay/not-unrankable so don't worry about that. BUT to me it feels like you're not exactly mapping to the music and that's something that I see in a lot of ranked maps nowadays, you could simply copy the whole map into another song and it would play just as well. Many people won't complain because the map is 'hard' enough, has objects in every 1/4, so yeah. That's not the way things should be though, you can still make things harder using other proper techniques.

I can see that this is an old map so maybe that's the reason for the way this map was constructed, so take this as an advice and apply it to your other maps. Please remember that circles/sliders/repeats are not the same, listen to the song and choose the right object. It's true that when you map other kind of music it doesn't really matter because it's just "1/2 1/2 1/2 1/2 1/2 1/4 stream", it looks like you were trying to do that with this song but it didn't work really well.

Best of luck with your future mapsets.
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