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Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon

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se-no
awesome song but game was boring :(

and there's no information full ver. ;8;

thank you for mapping i hope this map goes funny

Good luck!
Bundee

Umi wrote:

if someone tell me that it's nsfw, instant slap !
It's NSFW. xD
Fycho
please update my diff with the hitsounds together:3 http://puu.sh/9fRYb/2a8a181728.rar
Topic Starter
Umi
updated thx fycho :3
Kinomi
Topic Starter
Umi
everything updated, moved to pending and rdy for mods ;)
Papysh
<3
Topic Starter
Umi
aw sankyuu for star ! ;)
Neil Watts
Hi ! From my modding queue~

This vid is dangerous for your health...x.x
...But let's mod it ^^

Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon

Good general soundmapping :)
-Yomi's Easy-
- 01:22:767 - try something like this http://puu.sh/9KOcK/4de31c6c64.png
- 03:12:692 (2) - replace this slider with a circle
- 03:15:379 (7,1) - bad rhythm, try to map differently

-Normal-
- 01:23:662 - Add something here (a circle?)
- 02:51:423 - ^

-Fycho's Hard-
- 00:58:811 (3,4,5,6) - change something here?
- 01:40:901 (1) - add a clap here
- 02:20:304 (1,2,3,4) - change the pattern ?

-Insane-
- 00:02:394 (1) - place it in x:100 y:60
- 00:05:976 (3) - place it in x:256 y:300
- 00:38:438 - add something here
- 00:41:796 (1) - place it differently to respect the distances.
- 00:58:364 (4) - place it closer
- 01:08:662 (1,2,3,4) - no
- 01:18:513 (7,8,9,1) - make them a little closer?
- 01:20:976 (11,1) - you need to place something between these elements
- 01:22:767 (6,1) - make them closer
- 01:23:662 (2,3,4,5,6) - improve the distances
- 01:33:737 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:36:199 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - sadistic.
- 02:05:304 (1,2,3,4) - change the pattern
- 02:06:647 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
- 02:11:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^
- 02:20:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Interesting but too much streams from 02:05:304 to the end.

Good luck for getting your map ranked ;)
Topic Starter
Umi

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi ! From my modding queue~

This vid is dangerous for your health...x.x lol indeed
...But let's mod it ^^

Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon

Good general soundmapping :)

-Normal-
- 01:23:662 - Add something here (a circle?) yup add
- 02:51:423 - ^ prefer avoid here to introduice the slow part

-Insane-
- 00:02:394 (1) - place it in x:100 y:60prefer the current pattern
- 00:05:976 (3) - place it in x:256 y:300 ^
- 00:38:438 - add something here fit better without
- 00:41:796 (1) - place it differently to respect the distances.it's an insane diff, you're not forced the use always the same ds :3
- 00:58:364 (4) - place it closer good enough ^^
- 01:08:662 (1,2,3,4) - no why ? D:
- 01:18:513 (7,8,9,1) - make them a little closer?
- 01:20:976 (11,1) - you need to place something between these elements yeah added
- 01:22:767 (6,1) - make them closer aren't they enough close ?
- 01:23:662 (2,3,4,5,6) - improve the distances prefer the current way
- 01:33:737 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
- 01:36:199 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - sadistic.fun to play
- 02:05:304 (1,2,3,4) - change the pattern no >.<
- 02:06:647 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ ^
- 02:11:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - ^ ^
- 02:20:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
Interesting but too much streams from 02:05:304 to the end. because it's how the song is :3

Good luck for getting your map ranked ;)
thx for mod ! ;)
iyasine
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Sir Wali
Hey her from NM ^^


Yom´s Easy
  1. 00:36:423 (3) - its always easy ... dont hide circle and slider
  2. 01:06:423 (3) - ^
  3. 01:38:662 (5) - ^
  4. 02:02:394 (3) - ^
    and ~ and ~ and
  5. 03:26:796 (1) - 1/2 beat later


Normal
  1. 00:05:976 (3) - Insert Break Time (after the circle)
  2. 00:18:513 (2) - ^
  3. 01:24:782 (1) - why NC ?
  4. 02:18:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Realy nice ^^
  5. 02:32:394 (6) - NC
  6. & - ^


Fycho´s Hard
  1. 00:05:976 (3) - Break Time ?
  2. 00:46:722 (4) - Blanket
  3. 00:59:707 (1) - ^
  4. 01:05:080 (1) - ^
  5. 01:09:558 (3) - ^
    and ~ and ~ and
    Pls check your map about this ... " Blankets" i dont say more
  6. 01:38:886 (4) - x304 y246
  7. 02:22:095 (1) - ~ meh ~ bad blanket x)

    Maybe try this ?
  8. 02:41:573 (4) - x352 y309
  9. 02:42:468 (2) - x289 y200
  10. 03:20:080 (2) - meh ~ again bad blanket >.<


Insane
  1. 00:43:588 (1) - maybe on x337 y80
  2. 01:20:304 (1) - NC
  3. 01:27:468 (1) - why nc ? °-°
  4. 01:38:662 (4) - maybe x190 y82
  5. 02:04:185 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Beast ~ xD

I hope this mod help you
GooD LucK = )
Topic Starter
Umi

Sir Wali wrote:

Hey her from NM ^^

Normal
  1. 00:05:976 (3) - Insert Break Time (after the circle) yeah added
  2. 00:18:513 (2) - ^ ^
  3. 01:24:782 (1) - why NC ? why not ? '-'
  4. 02:18:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Realy nice ^^ thx :3
  5. 02:32:394 (6) - NC no need
  6. & - ^

Insane
  1. 00:43:588 (1) - maybe on x337 y80 hum i prefer the current place
  2. 01:20:304 (1) - NC why there ? '-'
  3. 01:27:468 (1) - why nc ? °-° to introduce the change of rythm
  4. 01:38:662 (4) - maybe x190 y82 yep fixed
  5. 02:04:185 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Beast ~ xD ;3

I hope this mod help you
GooD LucK = )
thx for your mod :3

iyasine wrote:

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Yauxo
Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q

[General]
  1. add Amuse Craft as tag

[Yomi's Easy]
  1. Looks good to me, I'd maybe rethink the usage of 1/2 Sliders from time to time as this can be pretty difficult in Easy diffs
  2. 00:07:767 (1) - 25% volume?
  3. 00:22:095 (1) - ^
  4. 00:23:886 (1) - Just for the consistency, I'd ctrl+g this. Players would think that this one starts where the slider before ended and where the circle was, as the combo before is just like this. It'd also make more sense with the flow afterwards
  5. 01:08:662 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - God I love that idea
  6. 01:28:364 (7) - NC?
  7. 01:30:155 (3) - Remove NC
  8. 01:31:946 (1) - NC
  9. 01:33:737 (3) - Remove NC
  10. 02:27:468 (1) - For after this Spinner, NCs seem weird. I'd move every NC to the next big white (means 02:32:841 (3) - 02:36:423 (3) - etc). Sounds better and makes more sense imo

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:513 (5) - Slight curve?
  2. 01:05:752 (4,5) - These are way too far outside, you should adjust them so that theyre inbounds
  3. 01:07:767 (2) - Curve towards 3?
  4. 01:15:379 (3) - 193/85
  5. 01:21:871 (2,3,4) - Iam not a fan of too many straight sliders, so I guess I'd point out that you could curve them slightly
  6. 03:15:379 (7,1) - This one might be difficult to guess as the 4 circles before indicate a normal 1/1 rhythm and the stacked slider is 1/2. Without really knowing the song or focusing on the approachcircle too much, people wont be able to read it correct. It's up to you if youd like to change it or not, but pointing it out wont hurt

[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 01:16:722 (5,6) - Are they supposed to be not the same?
  2. 02:07:543 (4) - A triplet maybe?
  3. 03:15:826 (1,2,3,4) - both combos should have the same gap between them (3 4 has more space than 1 2)

[Insane]
  1. 00:50:752 (1,3) - Does that overlap have to be there? :/
  2. 01:44:035 (5,1) - Somewhat nazi, but place these on the same y coord?
  3. 01:48:737 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about something like this?

Set looks fine to me, gl with it :3
Fycho
SPOILER
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Title:Hanabira to Ribbon
TitleUnicode:花びらとりぼん
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Umi
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:魔女こいにっき
Tags:Majo Koi Nikki Qoobrand Tsukuyomi fycho
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116,227,166722,2,0,L|107:178,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,152,167170,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,167282,12,4,170752,0:1:0:0:
165,100,177916,6,0,L|148:180,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,150,178364,2,0,L|220:230,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,287,178811,2,0,P|355:268|446:282,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,207,179483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,123,179707,6,0,L|471:37,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,180379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,185,180602,2,0,L|225:197,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,272,181050,2,0,L|102:284,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,233,181498,6,0,P|8:157|44:102,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,116,182170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,73,182394,2,0,L|219:153,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,237,182841,2,0,P|245:231|291:230,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,264,183289,6,0,L|371:226,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,186,183737,2,0,L|380:56,1,112.5,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,28,184185,2,0,P|339:15|301:13,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,80,184632,2,0,L|197:87,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,71,185080,6,0,P|104:128|106:211,1,150,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,278,185752,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,256,185976,1,2,0:0:0:0:
291,306,186199,1,2,0:0:0:0:
373,269,186423,2,0,P|384:232|386:195,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,108,186871,6,0,P|308:115|232:79,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,57,187543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
79,117,187767,2,0,L|-14:93,2,75,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,206,188438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,226,188662,6,0,P|266:222|343:154,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,22,189334,2,0,L|240:118,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,77,190005,2,0,L|136:152,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,113,190453,6,0,L|54:262,1,150,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,319,191125,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,265,191349,2,0,L|205:215,1,37.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,302,191685,2,0,L|309:358,1,37.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,207,192020,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,244,192244,6,0,P|463:239|499:158,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,79,192916,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,79,193028,1,2,0:0:0:0:
471,79,193140,2,0,L|392:89,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,134,193588,2,0,L|231:128,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,187,194035,6,0,P|106:191|40:129,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,43,194931,2,0,P|348:39|414:101,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,170,195602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
449,210,195826,6,0,L|445:284,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,334,196274,2,0,L|370:246,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,283,196722,2,0,L|205:292,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,215,197170,2,0,L|257:206,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,178,197617,5,2,0:0:0:0:
375,169,197729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,148,197841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,118,197953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
405,88,198065,2,0,L|382:-2,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,50,198513,2,0,L|290:90,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,111,198961,2,0,L|264:148,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,181,199408,6,0,P|198:205|114:185,1,150,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,253,200080,2,0,P|12:177|43:107,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,48,200752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
174,92,200976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,103,201199,6,0,L|337:99,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,121,201647,2,0,L|423:202,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,186,202095,2,0,L|331:267,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,345,202543,2,0,P|400:354|436:348,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,286,202991,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,211,203214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,226,203438,2,0,L|377:133,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,105,203886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,158,204110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,242,204334,2,0,L|241:316,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,323,204782,5,2,0:0:0:0:
77,271,205005,2,0,L|74:215,2,37.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,174,205453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,174,205565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
137,174,205677,2,0,L|127:121,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,111,206125,2,0,L|149:58,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,38,206573,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,206685,12,0,213737,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Umi

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in my Modding Q

[General]
  1. add Amuse Craft as tag

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:513 (5) - Slight curve?
  2. 01:05:752 (4,5) - These are way too far outside, you should adjust them so that theyre inbounds fixed
  3. 01:07:767 (2) - Curve towards 3? prefer straight shape
  4. 01:15:379 (3) - 193/85 kay
  5. 01:21:871 (2,3,4) - Iam not a fan of too many straight sliders, so I guess I'd point out that you could curve them slightly i curved one of them
  6. 03:15:379 (7,1) - This one might be difficult to guess as the 4 circles before indicate a normal 1/1 rhythm and the stacked slider is 1/2. Without really knowing the song or focusing on the approachcircle too much, people wont be able to read it correct. It's up to you if youd like to change it or not, but pointing it out wont hurt it actually play good so no change :3

[Insane]
  1. 00:50:752 (1,3) - Does that overlap have to be there? :/ it doesn't affect the play so ~
  2. 01:44:035 (5,1) - Somewhat nazi, but place these on the same y coord? k
  3. 01:48:737 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about something like this? yup not bad fixed

Set looks fine to me, gl with it :3
thx for mod ;)
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. tags suggetion:
    opening
[Normal]
  1. 01:22:543 (3) - I prefer only a circle at 01:22:543
  2. 01:38:214 (5,6) - align in a straight line?
  3. 02:44:483 (2,3) - ^
  4. 02:57:916 (1,3) - stack correctly
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:364- whistle
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2,3) - I prefer to curve a little, not straight
  3. 01:18:961- how about adding a note?
  4. 02:14:035 (3) - Ctrl+G?
  5. 02:45:155- I prefer to add a note
  6. 03:17:617 (1) - I prefer to avoid revese slider. suggetion~
[Yomi's Easy]
  1. 00:02:394 (1,1,1,1) - <3
  2. 00:23:886 (1) - mmm... it looks awkward as heart pattern?
  3. 01:21:199 (1) - I suggest to move the slider's head near the center
  4. 01:21:199 (1,2) - a little diffucult because immediately after spinner. suggestion
  5. 01:40:901 (4) - drum hitsound is not suitable, imo
  6. 01:46:274- whistle
  7. 02:20:304 (3,4) - continuing same pattern is boring. how about changing like this?
  8. 02:58:364 (2) - a little difficult for beginner. I suggest 1/1slider simply
  9. 03:00:155 (5) - ^
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:31:050- add a note and finish
  2. 00:59:147- add a note or change 00:59:259 (4,5,6) - to reverse slider
  3. 01:20:752- add some hitsound
  4. 02:44:931 (4) - I prefer curved slider at the same way as 02:44:483 (3) -
nice I've sound <3
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Umi

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. tags suggetion:
    opening
[Normal]
  1. 01:22:543 (3) - I prefer only a circle at 01:22:543 yeah better fixed
  2. 01:38:214 (5,6) - align in a straight line? okay
  3. 02:44:483 (2,3) - ^ ^
  4. 02:57:916 (1,3) - stack correctly fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:364- whistle added
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2,3) - I prefer to curve a little, not straight k~
  3. 01:18:961- how about adding a note? nop prefer without
  4. 02:14:035 (3) - Ctrl+G? yeah
  5. 02:45:155- I prefer to add a note not me '-'
  6. 03:17:617 (1) - I prefer to avoid revese slider. suggetion~ i'll consider if others ppl complain
nice I've sound <3
~Good Luck~
thx for mod random :3/
waxman
Sorry for late.

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ




[Normal]
01:17:617 (1) - According to 02:47:170 (1) - , it would be Whistle.
02:28:364 (5) - change it to 1/2 slider? it does make sense.


[Insane]
00:41:573 - it's really needed a circle imo.
00:44:931 (7) - add clap on beginning of slider.
03:11:573 (4,1) - change this spacing to like 03:11:573 (4,5,6) - or stack imperfectly


[Yomi's Easy]
01:40:901 (4) - Drum :arrow: Auto then take Clap off.
03:03:737 (2) -Add Auto Clap

00:57:916 (1,1) - at 01:00:155 is needed a circle. according to 01:17:617 (1,1) - 02:47:170 (1,1) -.
02:27:468 (1,1) - ^


[Fycho's Hard]
00:46:722 (4) - using blanket properly is better imo.
01:28:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - It's so weird because end of these sliders is placed on each 1/4 white lines. suggestion
01:31:946 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:28:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2)
01:43:476 (3) - Delete 01:43:476 (3). Triple is not really fit.

:3
Topic Starter
Umi

waxman wrote:

Sorry for late. and me sorry for the late reply @.@

[Normal]
01:17:617 (1) - According to 02:47:170 (1) - , it would be Whistle. yup fixed
02:28:364 (5) - change it to 1/2 slider? it does make sense. nop too hard imo


[Insane]
00:41:573 - it's really needed a circle imo. it follow nicely the voice actually
00:44:931 (7) - add clap on beginning of slider.added
03:11:573 (4,1) - change this spacing to like 03:11:573 (4,5,6) - or stack imperfectly [color=#40BF00]yup fixed ds[/color

:3
thx for mod waxman
Support
Hi it's Support from modding queue o/

[Insane]

00:40:901 (3,4,1) - I feel like the slider 1 is too close to 3 and 4, which can cause confusion for the player

01:09:558 (3,4) - maybe move it up a few units on the y, when playing I felt like note 4 is too low to feel comfortable

01:23:662 (2,3,4,5) - not sure if it was intended but maybe fix note 3 so the square will look even

01:31:946 (1,2,3) - maybe adjust the notes so the triangle look more even

02:00:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - omg its so good

Goodluck on your map! I like it :3
Topic Starter
Umi

Support wrote:

Hi it's Support from modding queue o/

[Insane]

00:40:901 (3,4,1) - I feel like the slider 1 is too close to 3 and 4, which can cause confusion for the player it's intentional here, play pretty good imo

01:09:558 (3,4) - maybe move it up a few units on the y, when playing I felt like note 4 is too low to feel comfortable fixed

01:23:662 (2,3,4,5) - not sure if it was intended but maybe fix note 3 so the square will look even intentional again :3

01:31:946 (1,2,3) - maybe adjust the notes so the triangle look more even yup fixed the pattern.

02:00:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - omg its so good 8-)

Goodluck on your map! I like it :3
thx for your mod ;)
Fushimi Rio
Hi m4m

[Yomi's Easy]
00:07:767 (1) - 感觉应该比前面弱一点
00:14:931 (1) - 00:22:095 (1) - ^
00:31:946 (2,3) - 弧度不一样啊 可以做成一样的
01:49:856 (1,2) - ^
03:18:513 (4,5) - omg

overall good 哇现在easy能做这么难啊

[Normal]
01:05:752 (4) - 2nd grid is out of screen now
01:13:364 (6) - ^, x-2

[Fycho's hard]
00:55:677 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:11:125 (2) - 往下放好看点
01:50:528 (2) - crtl+g(死
02:07:991 (1,2,3,4) - 这段重音错位不太舒服啊 感觉应该在这里就调节奏

[Insane]
00:57:916 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g, since the former part goes anticlockwise
00:58:364 (4) - ^
02:37:319 (3) - ^

……can't find issues orz
Because my broken English I used chinese to the gd. Sorry for that :(
Mood Breaker
Hello. I'm here for M4M request.
Please be gentle <3

[Yomi's Easy]
00:16:722 (1) - make this slider symmetric. Point 3 move to 256|340 and point 5 move to 128|192. Use Grid Level 4.
02:36:423 (3) - slider tail clap
02:37:319 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:57:916 (4) - Slider Head finish
01:40:901 (4) - make this slider symmetric
01:46:050 (1) - ^
01:52:991 (7) - if u mind to make this slider curve down?

[Fycho's Hard]
01:37:991 (2,4) - stack?
02:11:349 (1,2,3,4) - if u mind to make this reverse slider stop until red tick?
02:19:408 (3,4) - Ctrl + G
02:44:931 (4) - stack with 02:43:588 (1) -

[Insane]
00:41:796 (1) - stack with 00:41:349 (4) -
01:27:692 - Add a circle
02:36:423 (1,2) - stack with 02:35:080 (2) -
02:41:349 (7) - head slider clap
02:55:229 (3) - stack with 02:53:886 (4) -
Overall, this is a fantastic map. Hope to be ranked soon 8-)
Thanks and good luck Umi :)
Knotts
Hi M4M, sorry for messing up the rules on your queue lol.

Insane
  1. 00:56:796 (3,5,1,2,3) - Stack 00:56:796 (3) on top of 00:58:028 (2) and maybe move 00:56:573 (2) if you need more spacing after moving. It'd look cleaner to me.
  2. 01:04:856 (4) - Use 1.3x DS since you used that on 01:03:961 (2)
  3. 01:15:826 (1,9) - Shift the stream a little so that 01:16:834 (9) stacks onto 01:15:826 (1)
  4. 01:22:319 (4,1) - Blanket or move somewhere else. Overlap looks like bleh to me but that's just my opinion.
  5. 01:18:513 (7) - Since you mapped this you should put a circle at 01:18:961
  6. 01:35:304 (3) - Overlap a little more with 01:34:632 (5,6) so it looks like it has the same spacing.
  7. 02:31:050 (1,2,3) - Copy one slider and use them for all three since they're making the same sound.
  8. 02:40:677 (4,1) - Blanket since you have 02:41:125 (6,7) as a blanket.
  9. 02:45:155 - Why the pause here?
  10. 02:53:438 (3,1) - Blanket could be better.

Normal
  1. 01:34:632 (5,6) - You could use a repeating 1/4 starting at 01:34:856.
  2. 01:46:050 (1) - Ctrl + J looks a little better to me
Yomi's Easy
  1. 01:23:886 (4,2) - Fix stack
  2. 01:41:349 (5) - Lower down a little to fix blanket
  3. 03:15:826 (1) - Move a little to the left and then readjust the blanket for a evenly spaced pentagon (03:14:035 (4,1) looked too close before).

Bleh lame mod. I can't find anything in Fycho's Hard so if you want you can skip one of my difficulties
Avishay
Hey, M4M for you queue :3

[Insane]
00:31:946 (4,1) - They're not stacked properly

00:44:259 (4) - I dislike this slider a lot, not only he starts in the middle of the beat, he doesn't follow the vocal and he just felt meh when I played it.

00:56:573 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like the end of this pattern, it just flows badly and I didn't enjoy it. I suggest moving 3 to around x148 y200 and to stack 4 on the end of slider 1 beforethen. My suggestion looks like this http://puu.sh/bRq5t/228fd4313c.jpg

00:58:588 and 00:59:371 contain beats and should have notes there, perhaps you skipped them on purpose? I noticed that the song is full of those parts, please tell me if it was on purpose :?

01:22:991 (1) - It becomes ugly with some of the previous cirlces, move it to x324 y344 and move 01:22:767 (6) - to x396 y244

01:34:968 - I know I noted it before but this one is feeling really weird and I want a note here :<

02:36:423 (1) - CTRL + G ? It just flows much better like that

03:00:602 (5,6) - They're ugly and don't flow that well at all.

03:14:931 (3,4) - 4 is way too fair away from 3, just put it between 3 and the slider 1 afterwards.

I really like the streamy part btw :P

[Fycho's Hard]

01:13:140 (3) - Circle instead of a slider here please

01:13:364 (4) - Slider here, it follows the vocals very well and it feels much cooler and obviously a cirlce afterwards, an other cool thing is to start this slider and with a clap and add an oher clap in the cirlce afterwards, it follows the vocals so good and it is very enjoyable.

01:31:050 (4) - Why is this a full beat slider? It doesn't follow the vocals and it skips one beat.

02:44:931 (4) - CTRL+G?


I couldn't find anything in the easier difficulties, sorry!

Really good mapset, good luck!
Rakuen
M4M from your queue~

[General]
:3

[Audio Lead In]
Might wanna add audio lead-in for all diffs like around 1500 – 2000

[Combo Color]
Combo color 3 (which is green) might not fit the background pic. I would put something purple or slight dark blue

[Yomi’s Easy]
00:22:095 (1) – Prefer to put this on the middle of 00:23:886 (1) – because 00:28:364 (1) – is put at the middle line of the map as well and might not want reverse arrow of 00:23:886 (1) - conflict with it
00:31:946 (2) – This one’s a bit awkward blanket imo, the space for the curve is more than the head and tail, I would make it like this:
00:32:841 (3) – Might be a little hard for Easy players to react the same slider shape with 00:30:155 (3) - , and the number is (3) too
01:00:602 (1) – Imo it’s a bit too sided, I would put it nearer to the middle point (cuz of the spinner), but it looks fine to play still
01:01:498 (1) – About the NCs, this NC should be 1 big tick behind at 01:03:289 – (which applies for all the combos behind as well) because your NCs is every 2 big beat and 00:59:707 – is only 1 beat until 01:01:274 - . Move NCs 1 big beat to the back if you get what I mean. You can refer Normal diff for this.
^ Which also means 01:15:826 (1,2) – should have no new combo
01:12:244 (1) – Slightly off the blanket to 01:11:349 (6) – if you refer the approach rate (in either different position or approach rate)
01:22:991 (3) – I would move a bit down after the tail of 01:21:871 (2) – to fit the cursor movement of both sliders’ curve (if you get what I mean)
01:28:364 (7) – NC should be here instead of 01:30:155 (1) –
01:31:946 (4) – NC here as well and remove NC for 01:33:737 (1) – (well you can keep the 2nd NC tho cuz the rhythm is changing)
01:39:110 (1) – Feel this one’s a bit ugly, would make it curved another side like this:
02:25:229 – Missing clap here instead of clap for whole slider
02:31:050 (1) – The NC issue as mentioned before at 01:01:498 (1) – , strongly suggest to fix
02:57:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) – The note density is a bit close here altho it’s a slow part. Suggest just to map them more at 1/1
03:06:871 (3,4) – A bit confuse for Easy diff, new players might hit (4) first instead of (3) cuz it’s quite close to each other imo (opt.), maybe you can do something like this:

[Normal]
SV is a little fast imo, for the point raising from 0.60 to 1.00 at 00:31:050 – (opt. should be fine for playing)
AR fits the note dense but not the SV imo, I’d suggest to increase it by a little decimal to something, for instance 5.4 AR
00:02:394 (1) – Minor, this one looks almost perfect symmetry, but doesn’t seem for 00:04:185 (2) - , suggest to copy paste and rotate 180* or Ctrl+J it (not sure if it’s some kind of error)
01:01:050 (3) – I’d make this a little curve to fit with the cursor flow, and a bit different from 00:58:811 (5,6) - :
01:38:214 (5) – Curve the slider tail more to 01:37:319 (4) – like this (pic) would look better imo:
03:23:886 (2) – Just move this slightly down would look better imo:
03:26:125 (6) – Minor blanket for 03:25:677 (5) –

[Fycho’s Hard]
A lot of timing points aren’t fixed, for example 1ms difference like 199ms > 200ms would affect a lot at some part. Make sure it doesn’t happen for other diffs too
01:11:125 (2) – Space this a little and make it looks like it’s snapped with the slider border of 01:10:453 (1) – and head of 01:11:349 (3) – (pic), cuz there’s a bit distance between the slider tail and another slider head:
02:32:617 (4) - ^ As suggested like above
03:10:901 – Missing clap
03:15:826 – Missing Finish, like you did at 01:46:274 –
03:20:080 (2) – Minor blanket with 03:19:408 (1) –
03:33:737 – Timing is not snapped well! Didn’t sound the 5%

Overall looks fine

[Insane]
00:16:722 (1) – Not sure if you want to make a love shape XD , but well, this one looks fine
00:58:699 (5) – NC here to avoid combos more than 10? Prefer not to make 10 appear is soft and low bpm song (opt.)
01:16:722 (8) – and 01:20:304 (6) - ^ Applies

Can’t dig anything out in this diff, everything is kinda safe, good job!

Hope they helped
Topic Starter
Umi

imoutosan wrote:

Hi m4m


[Normal]
01:05:752 (4) - 2nd grid is out of screen now fixed
01:13:364 (6) - ^, x-2 ^

[Insane]
00:57:916 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g, since the former part goes anticlockwise nop prefer the current flow
00:58:364 (4) - ^ ^
02:37:319 (3) - ^ ^

Mood Breaker wrote:

Hello. I'm here for M4M request.
Please be gentle <3

[Normal]
00:57:916 (4) - Slider Head finish there is no finish sound here
01:40:901 (4) - make this slider symmetric k
01:46:050 (1) - ^ ^
01:52:991 (7) - if u mind to make this slider curve down? it doesn't change anything imo

[Insane]
00:41:796 (1) - stack with 00:41:349 (4) - nop intentional
01:27:692 - Add a circle following the voice
02:36:423 (1,2) - stack with 02:35:080 (2) - fixed
02:41:349 (7) - head slider clap added
02:55:229 (3) - stack with 02:53:886 (4) - change on my own way

Knotts wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:56:796 (3,5,1,2,3) - Stack 00:56:796 (3) on top of 00:58:028 (2) and maybe move 00:56:573 (2) if you need more spacing after moving. It'd look cleaner to me. nop
  2. 01:04:856 (4) - Use 1.3x DS since you used that on 01:03:961 (2) fixed
  3. 01:15:826 (1,9) - Shift the stream a little so that 01:16:834 (9) stacks onto 01:15:826 (1) we can't notice it during the play
  4. 01:22:319 (4,1) - Blanket or move somewhere else. Overlap looks like bleh to me but that's just my opinion. yep true
  5. 01:18:513 (7) - Since you mapped this you should put a circle at 01:18:961 not the same sound
  6. 01:35:304 (3) - Overlap a little more with 01:34:632 (5,6) so it looks like it has the same spacing.more or les fixed
  7. 02:31:050 (1,2,3) - Copy one slider and use them for all three since they're making the same sound.
  8. 02:40:677 (4,1) - Blanket since you have 02:41:125 (6,7) as a blanket. not forced
  9. 02:45:155 - Why the pause here?i already got several reflexion on this so fixed
  10. 02:53:438 (3,1) - Blanket could be better. improved

Normal
  1. 01:34:632 (5,6) - You could use a repeating 1/4 starting at 01:34:856. 1/4 too hard for a normal difficulty
  2. 01:46:050 (1) - Ctrl + J looks a little better to me preffer the current one

Avishay wrote:

Hey, M4M for you queue :3

[Insane]
00:31:946 (4,1) - They're not stacked properly fixed

00:44:259 (4) - I dislike this slider a lot, not only he starts in the middle of the beat, he doesn't follow the vocal and he just felt meh when I played it. follow the voice

00:56:573 (2,3,4,5) - I don't like the end of this pattern, it just flows badly and I didn't enjoy it. I suggest moving 3 to around x148 y200 and to stack 4 on the end of slider 1 beforethen. My suggestion looks like this http://puu.sh/bRq5t/228fd4313c.jpg not abd but i prefer the current pattern flow better to me

00:58:588 and 00:59:371 contain beats and should have notes there, perhaps you skipped them on purpose? I noticed that the song is full of those parts, please tell me if it was on purpose :? on purpose :)

01:22:991 (1) - It becomes ugly with some of the previous cirlces, move it to x324 y344 and move 01:22:767 (6) - to x396 y244 nop

01:34:968 - I know I noted it before but this one is feeling really weird and I want a note here :< same as 00:58:588 / 00:59:371

02:36:423 (1) - CTRL + G ? It just flows much better like that Y but it'll ruin my pattern if i do

03:00:602 (5,6) - They're ugly and don't flow that well at all. i disagree, flow good imo

03:14:931 (3,4) - 4 is way too fair away from 3, just put it between 3 and the slider 1 afterwards. a simple jump

Rakuen wrote:

M4M from your queue~

[General]
:3

[Audio Lead In]
Might wanna add audio lead-in for all diffs like around 1500 – 2000 not needed

[Combo Color]
Combo color 3 (which is green) might not fit the background pic. I would put something purple or slight dark blue yup ok

[Normal]
SV is a little fast imo, for the point raising from 0.60 to 1.00 at 00:31:050 – (opt. should be fine for playing)
AR fits the note dense but not the SV imo, I’d suggest to increase it by a little decimal to something, for instance 5.4 AR not a problem
00:02:394 (1) – Minor, this one looks almost perfect symmetry, but doesn’t seem for 00:04:185 (2) - , suggest to copy paste and rotate 180* or Ctrl+J it (not sure if it’s some kind of error) already symmetric
01:01:050 (3) – I’d make this a little curve to fit with the cursor flow, and a bit different from 00:58:811 (5,6) - : fixed
01:38:214 (5) – Curve the slider tail more to 01:37:319 (4) – like this (pic) would look better imo: intentional
03:23:886 (2) – Just move this slightly down would look better imo: yep fixed
03:26:125 (6) – Minor blanket for 03:25:677 (5) – did something else here

[Insane]
00:16:722 (1) – Not sure if you want to make a love shape XD , but well, this one looks fine it's obvious for me lol
00:58:699 (5) – NC here to avoid combos more than 10? Prefer not to make 10 appear is soft and low bpm song (opt.) not a problem imo
01:16:722 (8) – and 01:20:304 (6) - ^ Applies ^
thx guys!
Fycho
Thank you for modding.
SPOILER
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80304
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Hanabira to Ribbon
TitleUnicode:花びらとりぼん
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Umi
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:魔女こいにっき
Tags:Majo Koi Nikki Qoobrand Tsukuyomi fycho
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Kinomi
UMIchi your ava is sexy
http://puu.sh/bYVHf/351aaaf518.osu
Topic Starter
Umi

Tsukuyomi wrote:

UMIchi your ava is sexy
Ikr ;p

Anyways, updated :3
alacat
I'll check owo

EDIT : nyan

[General]
  1. Missing Tags : opening
  2. Please check the source to all diffs ! and check these too
  3. Disable Widescreen Support on E/N/H diff.
[Easy]
  1. 01:17:617 (1,1) - I think the notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty. I hope to give bigenners some time to recover here. So you should consider giving 2 beats.
  2. 01:28:364 - finish
  3. 02:47:170 (1,1) - Same as above.
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:155 (4) - add a whistle to the tail of the slider Because you added it on head.
  2. 02:56:097 (4) - Unsnapped slider o.o
  3. 01:22:543 (3) - a bit nazi mod, try to move this note left for the design
  4. 01:42:692 - missing a finish ? It have the crash cymbal in the music.
  5. 01:49:408 - It's better to use clap sound than whistle for putting sound with constant rhythm.
[Fycho]
  1. Good job :3
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:088 - I recommend you to add a break time for players.
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel kind of empty about hitsounds in this part, I hope you add some hit sounds to here.
  3. 02:09:334 (12,1) - Please use more spacing same as your next part 02:23:662 (8,1) - It prevents the player from misreading.
  4. 02:44:931 (6) - ,03:25:901 (8) - ,01:47:617 (4) - missing a clap, I guess you forgot to add it here
  5. 02:25:229 - ,02:26:125 - ,02:27:020 - How about using some claps here ?
Nice moe map :3 Let me now ~
Topic Starter
Umi

alacat wrote:

I'll check owo

EDIT : nyan

[General]
  1. Missing Tags : opening
  2. Please check the source to all diffs ! and check these too
  3. Disable Widescreen Support on E/N/H diff.
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:155 (4) - add a whistle to the tail of the slider Because you added it on head.
  2. 02:56:097 (4) - Unsnapped slider o.o
  3. 01:22:543 (3) - a bit nazi mod, try to move this note left for the design
  4. 01:42:692 - missing a finish ? It have the crash cymbal in the music.
  5. 01:49:408 - It's better to use clap sound than whistle for putting sound with constant rhythm.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:088 - I recommend you to add a break time for players.
  2. 00:57:916 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel kind of empty about hitsounds in this part, I hope you add some hit sounds to here.
  3. 02:09:334 (12,1) - Please use more spacing same as your next part 02:23:662 (8,1) - It prevents the player from misreading.
  4. 02:44:931 (6) - ,03:25:901 (8) - ,01:47:617 (4) - missing a clap, I guess you forgot to add it here
  5. 02:25:229 - ,02:26:125 - ,02:27:020 - How about using some claps here ?
Nice moe map :3 Let me now ~
fixed everything :3/

thx alanyan ;)
Kinomi
all fix
SPOILER
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Title:Hanabira to Ribbon
TitleUnicode:花びらとりぼん
Artist:Larval Stage Planning
ArtistUnicode:Larval Stage Planning
Creator:Umi
Version:Yomi's Easy
Source:魔女こいにっき
Tags:Majo Koi Nikki Qoobrand Tsukuyomi fycho opening
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Topic Starter
Umi
updated :3
alacat
Please add a video to Easy diff! and check #3 kiai on Normal diff again :>
alacat
fixed them ~

o(^▽^)o Bubbled
smallboat
Fix some hitsound and placement in easy diff , this looks good to go for me

Qualified ~ !

IRC
2014-10-23 10:59 Umi: So we go for irc ? :p
2014-10-23 11:00 smallboat: maybe can
2014-10-23 11:00 Umi: k just tell me when u want :)
2014-10-23 11:00 smallboat: now
2014-10-23 11:00 smallboat: lol
2014-10-23 11:00 Umi: oh k lol
2014-10-23 11:00 Umi: then i'm rdy
2014-10-23 11:06 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/442570 Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon [Normal]]
2014-10-23 11:06 smallboat: aimod
2014-10-23 11:13 Umi: anyways i checked aibat on normal diff and fixed the unsnapped slider
2014-10-23 11:13 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:13 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435676 Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon [Yomi's Easy]]
2014-10-23 11:13 smallboat: 03:05:080 (1) - medium green line unsnap
2014-10-23 11:13 Umi: k snapped
2014-10-23 11:13 smallboat: 24.1 mb
2014-10-23 11:14 Umi: not anymore since i delete n clap + osb.file
2014-10-23 11:14 Umi: d
2014-10-23 11:14 smallboat: can reduce less than >23.9mb?
2014-10-23 11:14 Umi: 23,8 for me
2014-10-23 11:14 smallboat: * xxxx < 23.9mb
2014-10-23 11:14 smallboat: type error w
2014-10-23 11:15 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:15 Umi: x)
2014-10-23 11:18 smallboat: same easy diff
2014-10-23 11:18 smallboat: 00:57:916 (1,1,2) -
2014-10-23 11:19 smallboat: umm this space
2014-10-23 11:19 Umi: it's enough imo
2014-10-23 11:19 smallboat: need to space 4 beat in easy
2014-10-23 11:20 Umi: is this a new rules ?
2014-10-23 11:20 smallboat: well..because QAT can pick this
2014-10-23 11:20 Umi: yeah but really to me there is enough time :/
2014-10-23 11:21 Umi: let me ask some opinion
2014-10-23 11:22 smallboat: Well I just have a bit worry
2014-10-23 11:23 Umi: asking some opinions atm
2014-10-23 11:23 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:26 smallboat: 02:27:468 (1,1) - same
2014-10-23 11:29 Umi: they're all busy ..
2014-10-23 11:29 smallboat: yes xD
2014-10-23 11:29 Umi: wait a bit sorry
2014-10-23 11:31 smallboat: nevermind
2014-10-23 11:31 smallboat: jusr say,normal diff nothing to say (except the aimod)
2014-10-23 11:31 smallboat: *just
2014-10-23 11:38 Umi: i'll just delete it and it should be okay
2014-10-23 11:38 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:39 Umi: fixed both
2014-10-23 11:39 smallboat: :D
2014-10-23 11:40 smallboat: hard diff fine
2014-10-23 11:40 Umi: k :3
2014-10-23 11:41 smallboat: last Ins diff
2014-10-23 11:41 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/433960 Larval Stage Planning - Hanabira to Ribbon [Insane]]
2014-10-23 11:41 Umi: rdy
2014-10-23 11:42 smallboat: 00:25:229 (2) - place a note make differnt with hard diff? (follow the piano ) :3
2014-10-23 11:42 smallboat: different rhythm
2014-10-23 11:42 smallboat: 00:27:020 (4) - same
2014-10-23 11:44 Umi: actually i prefer keep this part like this
2014-10-23 11:44 smallboat: okay lol
2014-10-23 11:44 Umi: more or less the calm before the storm lol
2014-10-23 11:44 smallboat: ohoh x)
2014-10-23 11:45 smallboat: 01:20:304 (6) - feel forgot add NC
2014-10-23 11:45 smallboat: lol
2014-10-23 11:47 Umi: uwa i messed my nc pattern here
2014-10-23 11:47 Umi: i did something else
2014-10-23 11:47 Umi: http://puu.sh/cmXt9/84e0a98743.jpg
2014-10-23 11:47 smallboat: okay :3
2014-10-23 11:47 Umi: what i did
2014-10-23 11:49 smallboat: :D
2014-10-23 11:51 smallboat: 02:09:558 (13) - hey missed note~
2014-10-23 11:51 Umi: what do u mean ? '-'
2014-10-23 11:52 smallboat: because you has been added a note at 02:07:767 (1)
2014-10-23 11:52 Umi: ah
2014-10-23 11:52 smallboat: 02:09:558 have a drum voice :3
2014-10-23 11:52 Umi: yeah but if you listen carefully it follow perfectly thhe piano here
2014-10-23 11:53 Umi: better like this
2014-10-23 11:53 Umi: it give also a little break x)
2014-10-23 11:53 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:57 smallboat: 03:19:408 (1) - missed a finish
2014-10-23 11:57 Umi: yup added
2014-10-23 11:57 smallboat: because the normal has been add here
2014-10-23 11:57 smallboat: okay
2014-10-23 11:57 Umi: y my bad
2014-10-23 11:58 smallboat: 03:26:573 (1) - missed whistle
2014-10-23 11:58 smallboat: same reason
2014-10-23 11:58 Umi: fixed
2014-10-23 11:59 smallboat: okay can update
2014-10-23 11:59 Umi: alright ! :3
Topic Starter
Umi
Thx alacat and smallboat =w=b
Luna-
Congratz!~ :D
Satellite
Really Cute BG ! Grats Umi chan ~
Knotts
Grats Umi :3
BeatofIke
Moe o3o
Meg
Gratz Umi~ :)
Oyatsu
Gratz!
moonlightleaf
:) beautiful BG desu >w<
alacat
moe mapper Umi =v=
Rakuen
:) Grats :)
CPLs
hi, according to this: http://vgmdb.net/album/43629 it has a (short ver.) written, you might want to change that or keep this one (I don't know which one is corect anyway :o )
Modem
YAY! Congratz!
iyasine
nice :D
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