Alicemagic!
hope there will be more ranked Little Busters maps, therefore I am here to give some suggestions~
[Easy]
00:43:212 (1) add clap?
01:23:689 (3,4) spacing (as you 1/4 note to overlap at 01:20:978, but you use 1/2 note to overlap here...)
[Normal]
I can find Nothing ! Nice~
[Rin's Taiko]
dunno how to mod Taiko, but it should set a preview point, right??
preview point : 01:16:280
[Hard]
00:47:729 clap in this part is good, but should be in lower volume and more clap
add clap at these notes :
00:48:896 (2) the end of the slider
00:48:994 (3,4,5,7,8)
00:50:621 (9) add finish on the start and the end of the slider
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00:54:415 this part should echo with the previous, but you miss a note on 00:55:319
would you like to try this?
add clap on 00:54:596 (2,4), 00:55:139, 00:55:500, 00:56:222
to continue the echo, also add clap on 00:56:403 (1,4,5,6), 01:00:198 (1)
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01:05:257 (2) add finish?
01:08:149 this part can be more euphonious, consider to try this:
01:08:149 (1) finish
01:08:510 (2,6,8) clap
01:08:691 (3,9) clap on the start of the slider, also clap on 01:10:679
01:11:040 (9) finish on the end of the slider
01:11:401 add clap on (1,3) the start of slider
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01:18:810 (13) this slider should end at 01:19:171 or 01:19:352
01:36:880 (X) add a note here
01:37:784 (14) move to 01:37:964
01:38:145 (x) add a note here and start the spinner at 01:38:326
[Insane]
set a preview point~ that should be 01:16:280 like other difficulties
00:30:568 (6) this note is unneccesary, but there should be a note at 00:30:749
01:25:327 (1) try to end at 01:27:315 or 01::27:676, if you choose the former, consider to add a note at 01:27:676
01:36:893 (x) add a note here?
01:37:797 (6) move it to 01:37:977
01:38:158 (x) add a note and start the spinner at 01:38:339
lol just realize, why the offset here is different form others??
try to find out which is better and fix it~ (I'm not good at timing, sor~)
Anyway, good map, Get my star and good luck~
