jamesleao wrote:

Hard:
00:01:124 (5) - 后面加个finish hitsound如何
Normal:
Good
Easy:
00:49:874 加一段KIAI如何

还有就是normal和hard的高潮还可以加一些KIAI（个人意见）

Good work

VanMoNky wrote:

I wanna make an Insane diff for this. May I?

Sushi971 wrote:

Add more lead in please.(set it to ~2sec)

[Easy]
00:20:061 (1,2) - align?
02:13:874 (x) - even if there are no notes, make kiai finish please~

[Normal]
Fine
03:25:877 (x) - even if there are no notes, make kiai finish please~

[Hard]
02:35:436 (4) - put it a little to the right to go for perfect diamond
02:47:252 (2,4) - align?


nice one~

DJPop wrote:

Set audio-lead-in max.

~Easy~
00:33:186 (3) - move up 5 grids & right 7 grids (Lv3)

~Normal~
00:25:499 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
02:36:186 (1) - silence the slidertick

~Hard~
03:25:877 - end Kiai here


+Star

Tonoko wrote:

好好啊...hard的感觉很像Ultimate的风格 > <

lukaluka

edit 对了顺便一提 那些曲线slider最好把中点定在头尾的中间,这样会好看一点 <---happy30 说的 /逃

哈~不如让monkey酱把这个gif放在右下角一直摆啊摆的 >w<

VanMoNky wrote:

For a suggestion, change the comboburst. Luka's hair is cut badly.

VanMoNky wrote:

EDIT : no kudosu for this post. After I put my diff here, I will mod your map.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Move "samfree" to tags. Move "vocaloid" to source. If necessary, change "vocaloid" to "Vocaloid2". fixed

[Easy]
Add some clap pattern. Clap fit to the song. fixed
--------------------------
If I'm the one who map this song with this style, I will do like this.
00:26:061 (1,2) - Move forward one 1/2 tick.
00:29:061 (1,2) - ^
00:30:374 (3) - Move forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
00:32:249 (1,2,3) - Move forward one 1/2 tick.
01:26:249 (1,2) - ^
01:29:248 (1,2) - ^
01:32:248 (1,2) - ^
The current beat is kinda hard to follow for me. I have remapped these
--------------------------
00:37:499 (1) - Add finish. fixed
00:49:874 (1) - Move it closer to the middle of the spinner. Add finish. I changed from another way
01:01:874 (1) - ^ fixed
01:37:499 (1) - ^ fixed
01:56:061 (1) - Replace this with some notes or sliders. finally i fixed lol
02:08:061 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]
01:03:374 (5,6) - Swap them. fixed
01:37:499 - Map this break. i think normal level should have more break lol

[Hard]
01:40:499 (1) - Replace this with some notes or sliders. fixed
02:25:499 (1) - ^ i prefer the spinner 0.0

Starred.

adron zhero wrote:

I didin't liked the BG(seems that she is staring at me) well..this BG is the song's original picture in NicoNico-Douga

Easy:
>>1:26:249 add circle
>>1:26:811 ^
>>1:29:249 ^
>>1:29:811 ^
>>1:32:249 ^
>>1:32:811 ^
(It's strange without these circles, but it's your choice) if i put these in it will be an easy+

Normal:
>>I saw that severals circles are with wrong spacing.You can add sections with diferent BPM if you want to add diferent spacing(I'm not saying that i don't like diferent spacing in one beatmap, but correct spacing is vital[for me at least ]).

do you mean the slow part?i think using different spacing can make beatmap pretty,close notes will let people feel the rhythm is slow

Hard:
>>Same thing then Normal.

Monky's Beat:
>>Same thing as Normal and Hard

Very good beatmap

adron zhero wrote:

Monky's Beat:
>>I saw that severals circles are with wrong spacing.You can add sections with diferent BPM if you want to add diferent spacing(I'm not saying that i don't like diferent spacing in one beatmap, but correct spacing is vital[for me at least ]).

happy30 wrote:

[MoNky's BeaT]
reminds me to djpop ><
no errors, but due the score, this diff could only be approved D:

fartownik wrote:

[MoNky's BeaT]
Yeah, this one got DJPopped (01:41:249 (6)).
[Oh God. I made it by autodidact ;__;]
The only thing I can say is that following the example will never give much things to you
Nazing~
01:40:874 (4) - New combo?
01:41:624 (7) - ^
[03:52:499] - End the kiai here.

Dang, a tip: If you end this difficulty there where [Hard] is ending and you reduce the HP Drain by
1 tick, you'll get a rankable score (14mln).

Overmapped, but mapped well.
+star.

happy30 wrote:

mod

fartownik wrote:

mod

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Easy]
00:26:061 (1) - Allign with 4 from left, make sure this slider not overlapped with previous slider
01:40:686 (1) - Make parallel or curve?
01:41:624 (2) - ^
01:42:374 (3) - ^
02:00:374 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:18:749 (5) - Make symetric?
00:51:374 (4) - Make parallel or curve?
00:52:124 (6) - ^

[Hard]
01:56:811 (5) - Make parallel?
01:57:749 (8) - ^

Leorda wrote:

Don't forget the VanMonky Logo, LOL

Leorda wrote:

[MoNky's Beat]
I'm really want to say, you're are a overmapping mania in Indonesia
[I really want to say, you are a player with wrong grammar mania in Indonesia lol lol (kidding)]
00:01:874 (1) - Offscreen
00:30:186 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:374 (5) - ^
00:45:749 (3) - ^
01:52:311 (3,4) - ^
Offscreen means when a note couldn't be clicked on play mode. Since all my notes are still clickable, I don't change it.
01:55:874 (8) - Add a finish hitsound
And do some hitsound fixes. Thanks!
Don't forget the VanMonky Logo, LOL
lol no no. No need. But if they ask to, I want to make a Monkurine Luka with Luka's hair on MoNky's head.

Good Eurobeat
STAR

Aakiha wrote:

good map
shoot star

Bikko wrote:

I love this map

1. Max score is above +18 mil. Unrankable!
2. 00:41:249 (6) - New combo since it indicates a BPM change. I recommend even adding a little SB in here to let people know about the speed or something.
3. 00:41:999 (9) - ^ and 01:41:249 (6) - ^ and 01:41:999 (9) - ^
4. 00:48:749 (3) - New combo since it's a change in spacing?
5. 01:48:749 (3) - ^
6. 02:36:749 (3) - ^
7. 02:49:124 (9) - Suggestion: Possibly a new combo here?

LKs wrote:

prefect now
so cool skin.
hope be ranked~~

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Monky's Beat]
Max score is above +18 mil. Unrankable!
00:41:249 (6) - New combo since it indicates a BPM change. I recommend even adding a little SB in here to let people know about the speed or something.
00:41:999 (9) - ^ and 01:41:249 (6) - ^ and 01:41:999 (9) - ^
00:48:749 (3) - New combo since it's a change in spacing?
01:48:749 (3) - ^
02:36:749 (3) - ^
02:49:124 (9) - Suggestion: Possibly a new combo here?

VanMoNky wrote:

Fixed some combo mod. And I don't think it needs a warning. Now even the score fixed to 16+ mil. Yell hurrah!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Looking good now~
Bubbled!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Awesome map, really. But I have to pop for some fix.

[Normal]

4,49 stars Normal? Crazy! Rename it to "Normal+".

02:36:186 (1) - Don't silence completely notes, please. Seems weird.
02:47:999 (4,5) - ^

[MoNky's BeaT]

Great difficulty. Love it.


00:41:249 (1) & 00:41:999 (1) - Can you add an SB warning for this sliders, please?
01:41:249 (1) - & 01:41:999 (1) - ^

VanMoNky wrote:

Well, is it good enough..?

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

VanMoNky wrote:

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

Yes I'll remember that.

And congratulation samipale!
I proud of you.

NatsumeRin wrote:

恭喜= =

Tonoko wrote:

;)