osu_CN_yaya wrote:

首先，map的错误：
第一条绿线跟红线重合了，要删掉。
offset不对，你的重音全都对到红线上去了，4分拍的map,重音应该对应到比较长的那根白线。

hard
00:16:69 (6) - 变成一个Note
00:18:75 (6) - slider改为一拍，然后后面半拍加一个Note
00:22:87 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1238
00:25:12 (4) - 变成Note 。 做个小jump不错
01:00:94 - 加个note
01:08:06 (1) - 延长1/4
01:09:56 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1239
01:39:00 (7) - new combo
01:44:25 (1) - 不要用spinner
01:57:56 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1240
02:00:19 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1241
02:29:62 (4) - 少折一下
02:34:87 (8) - 改成Note
02:55:87 (10) - new combo
02:58:87 (18) - new combo
03:13:50 (8) - 太近


normal
00:29:06 (1) - 太近
02:27:00 (1) - 不要用spinner
其他的还可以


你要清楚一点：你是在跟节奏作图还是在跟唱声作图，不要一半一半。
慎用spinner，不是拖长音或者是无音或者是很适合放spinner的地方，不要用spinner
我给你的所有例子都不要管我的排列，我只是在放节奏。

anyway,这是你第一张，很不错了

1. osb文件不需要,删掉再full submit
2. Audio lead-in Hard跟其他文件不同,是1952ms,其他两个diff.是1996ms
   打开各个难度的osu文件,在[General]下找到
   
   [General]
   AudioFilename: ruka.mp3
   AudioLeadIn: 1952
   PreviewTime: 181314
   Countdown: 0
   SampleSet: Normal
   StackLeniency: 0.5
   Mode: 0
   LetterboxInBreaks: 1
   把1952那个地方都改成2000吧,也就是2秒,统一一下

Breeze wrote:

我路过的...

[General]

1. osb文件不需要,删掉再full submit
2. Audio lead-in Hard跟其他文件不同,是1952ms,其他两个diff.是1996ms
   打开各个难度的osu文件,在[General]下找到
   
   [General]
   AudioFilename: ruka.mp3
   AudioLeadIn: 1952
   PreviewTime: 181314
   Countdown: 0
   SampleSet: Normal
   StackLeniency: 0.5
   Mode: 0
   LetterboxInBreaks: 1
   把1952那个地方都改成2000吧,也就是2秒,统一一下

note没什么问题

star

虽然我个人并不喜欢前面没消失的note挡住后面要出现的note

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:752 (2) - align with 00:20:064 (1) fixed
00:37:877 (2) - 3 grids down on grid lv 3 fixed
00:56:064 (1) - nice slider, but so confusing to easy changed another one
01:56:064 (1) - ^ changed to spinner
02:08:064 (1) - ^ should i at least heave one? lol

[Normal]
00:14:064 (1,2,3,4) - so confusing spacing to normal fixed
00:26:064 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:54:752 (4,5,6) - make a straight line fixed
03:09:189 (5,6,7) - ^ i think this place isn't neccesary to change

[Hard]
00:02:252 (2,3) - separate them sorry for my careless...
00:05:252 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:08:252 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:11:252 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:22:127 (6) - spacing fixed
00:52:127 (8) - align with 00:51:377 (5) fixed

[Insane]
00:00:565 (1) - delete new combo fixed

pete2528 wrote:

:D

nice

Matsuri wrote:

Kawaii~* > w <

+Star

Estelle18 wrote:

Luka Luka >w<~

Shinxyn wrote:

two more diffs since way back then..
Why are there two offsets? remove the second?(then resnap) lol I will fix it

Easy- lots of 1/2 beats make it kinda hard to follow, but it's not much of an issue
00:56:064 (1,2) - this is the only 1/2 notes next to each other in this map, it really ruins the pace though, it could still work if you just remove (1).. yeah..
02:36:189 (5) - either map the rest of the song or end in a less awkward place (like at the break) i think i will delete the last part

Normal-
00:56:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some claps around here? since it seems to be lacking.. yeah,i will 0.0
01:08:064 (1) to the break - the claps just ended suddenly...? >: add some? yeah
01:34:502 (7) - new combo will be fixed
01:36:189 (11) - remove one repeat? yea~it sounds better
02:08:064 (1) to the break - same as 01:08:064 ^as 01:08:064
02:44:064 (1,2,3,4,1) - really clustered, couldn't tell that (3,4) were apart >_< it's my fault...
03:21:189 (4) - new combo? will be fixed

Hard- wee, good~
00:13:127 (7,8) - add finish? will be fixed
00:43:877 (9) - right a bit (its not grid snapped, but not "in line") lol how do you find it out...awesome shin...yeah i will fix it
00:56:814 (3) - add a clap to either side of slider? will be fixed
02:10:127 (1,2,3,4) - space these equally? will be fixed
02:29:627 (4) - remove one repeat? maybe i think it would not be better for those sliders after it
03:23:064 - O-o odd volume jump~ i will decrese a level

Insane- EH........ 17mil!? I don't think its "hard enough" to justify the score >_<~
either make it easier (.... reduce a total of two ticks off any of the difficulty settings gets this to a reasonable 13mil)
or make it harder...~! (OD+1, HP+1?), making it to 13mil would be the safer route~
No grid snap~ some arrangements could look better, but nothing important at this speed
Don't think you missed any hitsounds for this diff

well... i will remap it

~Here's your star

i think i will upload until i finish the remap for insane

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Add kiai time. note这么深色还是可以加的。。我只加了最后一段

[Easy]
01:38:250 - add a note No,这样会打乱后面三个circle
01:43:500 (5) - finish. fixed
01:44:250 (1) - the spinner is more than 5 secs, try to make it shorter. fixed
另外就是我觉得Easy是不是不要用太多弱拍音= =。。。这个是个人看法 我也知道有些地方用得不好。。不过暂时想不出方法解决

[Normal]
00:15:561 - add a note fixed
00:16:124 (7) - make the slider's hitsound <Normal-Clap-Normal-Clap> and many places like here. nice hitsound
00:36:186 (5) - don't like this 1/2 slider, according to the song. fixed
01:44:249 (1) - a too long spinner. and the time is different from [Easy] (though 0.001), but i think there may be a timing difference between diffs. fixed
03:06:377 (1,2,3,4) - maybe need spacing a bit. fixed

[Hard]
00:00:186 - 00:13:680 all normal sound is boring.
then all the way is <Normal-Whistle-Nomal-Whistle-.....>....change some of them 我还是不想加..normal-whistle有点烦人，clap又觉得不好
before 03:00:000, i can't find any 1/4 notes...maybe need some= =
03:02:627 (3,4) switch them, now the 1/4 is kind of meaningless. fixed
03:06:189 (3) new combo here instead of the next (1) fixed
03:06:377 (1,2,3....9) maybe use new combos frequently to make it easier to read. 我只有两种颜色，不觉得newcombo多比较好

and here's my star~

jamesleao wrote:

Hard:
00:01:124 (5) - 后面加个finish hitsound如何
Normal:
Good
Easy:
00:49:874 加一段KIAI如何

还有就是normal和hard的高潮还可以加一些KIAI（个人意见）

Good work

VanMoNky wrote:

I wanna make an Insane diff for this. May I?

Sushi971 wrote:

Add more lead in please.(set it to ~2sec)

[Easy]
00:20:061 (1,2) - align?
02:13:874 (x) - even if there are no notes, make kiai finish please~

[Normal]
Fine
03:25:877 (x) - even if there are no notes, make kiai finish please~

[Hard]
02:35:436 (4) - put it a little to the right to go for perfect diamond
02:47:252 (2,4) - align?


nice one~

DJPop wrote:

Set audio-lead-in max.

~Easy~
00:33:186 (3) - move up 5 grids & right 7 grids (Lv3)

~Normal~
00:25:499 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
02:36:186 (1) - silence the slidertick

~Hard~
03:25:877 - end Kiai here


+Star

Tonoko wrote:

好好啊...hard的感觉很像Ultimate的风格 > <

lukaluka

edit 对了顺便一提 那些曲线slider最好把中点定在头尾的中间,这样会好看一点 <---happy30 说的 /逃

哈~不如让monkey酱把这个gif放在右下角一直摆啊摆的 >w<

VanMoNky wrote:

For a suggestion, change the comboburst. Luka's hair is cut badly.

VanMoNky wrote:

EDIT : no kudosu for this post. After I put my diff here, I will mod your map.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Move "samfree" to tags. Move "vocaloid" to source. If necessary, change "vocaloid" to "Vocaloid2". fixed

[Easy]
Add some clap pattern. Clap fit to the song. fixed
--------------------------
If I'm the one who map this song with this style, I will do like this.
00:26:061 (1,2) - Move forward one 1/2 tick.
00:29:061 (1,2) - ^
00:30:374 (3) - Move forward one 1/2 tick. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
00:32:249 (1,2,3) - Move forward one 1/2 tick.
01:26:249 (1,2) - ^
01:29:248 (1,2) - ^
01:32:248 (1,2) - ^
The current beat is kinda hard to follow for me. I have remapped these
--------------------------
00:37:499 (1) - Add finish. fixed
00:49:874 (1) - Move it closer to the middle of the spinner. Add finish. I changed from another way
01:01:874 (1) - ^ fixed
01:37:499 (1) - ^ fixed
01:56:061 (1) - Replace this with some notes or sliders. finally i fixed lol
02:08:061 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]
01:03:374 (5,6) - Swap them. fixed
01:37:499 - Map this break. i think normal level should have more break lol

[Hard]
01:40:499 (1) - Replace this with some notes or sliders. fixed
02:25:499 (1) - ^ i prefer the spinner 0.0

Starred.

adron zhero wrote:

I didin't liked the BG(seems that she is staring at me) well..this BG is the song's original picture in NicoNico-Douga

Easy:
>>1:26:249 add circle
>>1:26:811 ^
>>1:29:249 ^
>>1:29:811 ^
>>1:32:249 ^
>>1:32:811 ^
(It's strange without these circles, but it's your choice) if i put these in it will be an easy+

Normal:
>>I saw that severals circles are with wrong spacing.You can add sections with diferent BPM if you want to add diferent spacing(I'm not saying that i don't like diferent spacing in one beatmap, but correct spacing is vital[for me at least ]).

do you mean the slow part?i think using different spacing can make beatmap pretty,close notes will let people feel the rhythm is slow

Hard:
>>Same thing then Normal.

Monky's Beat:
>>Same thing as Normal and Hard

Very good beatmap

adron zhero wrote:

Monky's Beat:
>>I saw that severals circles are with wrong spacing.You can add sections with diferent BPM if you want to add diferent spacing(I'm not saying that i don't like diferent spacing in one beatmap, but correct spacing is vital[for me at least ]).

happy30 wrote:

[MoNky's BeaT]
reminds me to djpop ><
no errors, but due the score, this diff could only be approved D:

fartownik wrote:

[MoNky's BeaT]
Yeah, this one got DJPopped (01:41:249 (6)).
[Oh God. I made it by autodidact ;__;]
The only thing I can say is that following the example will never give much things to you
Nazing~
01:40:874 (4) - New combo?
01:41:624 (7) - ^
[03:52:499] - End the kiai here.

Dang, a tip: If you end this difficulty there where [Hard] is ending and you reduce the HP Drain by
1 tick, you'll get a rankable score (14mln).

Overmapped, but mapped well.
+star.

happy30 wrote:

mod

fartownik wrote:

mod

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[Easy]
00:26:061 (1) - Allign with 4 from left, make sure this slider not overlapped with previous slider
01:40:686 (1) - Make parallel or curve?
01:41:624 (2) - ^
01:42:374 (3) - ^
02:00:374 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:18:749 (5) - Make symetric?
00:51:374 (4) - Make parallel or curve?
00:52:124 (6) - ^

[Hard]
01:56:811 (5) - Make parallel?
01:57:749 (8) - ^

Leorda wrote:

Don't forget the VanMonky Logo, LOL

Leorda wrote:

[MoNky's Beat]
I'm really want to say, you're are a overmapping mania in Indonesia
[I really want to say, you are a player with wrong grammar mania in Indonesia lol lol (kidding)]
00:01:874 (1) - Offscreen
00:30:186 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:374 (5) - ^
00:45:749 (3) - ^
01:52:311 (3,4) - ^
Offscreen means when a note couldn't be clicked on play mode. Since all my notes are still clickable, I don't change it.
01:55:874 (8) - Add a finish hitsound
And do some hitsound fixes. Thanks!
Don't forget the VanMonky Logo, LOL
lol no no. No need. But if they ask to, I want to make a Monkurine Luka with Luka's hair on MoNky's head.

Good Eurobeat
STAR

Aakiha wrote:

good map
shoot star

Bikko wrote:

I love this map

1. Max score is above +18 mil. Unrankable!
2. 00:41:249 (6) - New combo since it indicates a BPM change. I recommend even adding a little SB in here to let people know about the speed or something.
3. 00:41:999 (9) - ^ and 01:41:249 (6) - ^ and 01:41:999 (9) - ^
4. 00:48:749 (3) - New combo since it's a change in spacing?
5. 01:48:749 (3) - ^
6. 02:36:749 (3) - ^
7. 02:49:124 (9) - Suggestion: Possibly a new combo here?

LKs wrote:

prefect now
so cool skin.
hope be ranked~~

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Monky's Beat]
Max score is above +18 mil. Unrankable!
00:41:249 (6) - New combo since it indicates a BPM change. I recommend even adding a little SB in here to let people know about the speed or something.
00:41:999 (9) - ^ and 01:41:249 (6) - ^ and 01:41:999 (9) - ^
00:48:749 (3) - New combo since it's a change in spacing?
01:48:749 (3) - ^
02:36:749 (3) - ^
02:49:124 (9) - Suggestion: Possibly a new combo here?

VanMoNky wrote:

Fixed some combo mod. And I don't think it needs a warning. Now even the score fixed to 16+ mil. Yell hurrah!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Looking good now~
Bubbled!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Awesome map, really. But I have to pop for some fix.

[Normal]

4,49 stars Normal? Crazy! Rename it to "Normal+".

02:36:186 (1) - Don't silence completely notes, please. Seems weird.
02:47:999 (4,5) - ^

[MoNky's BeaT]

Great difficulty. Love it.


00:41:249 (1) & 00:41:999 (1) - Can you add an SB warning for this sliders, please?
01:41:249 (1) - & 01:41:999 (1) - ^

VanMoNky wrote:

Well, is it good enough..?

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

VanMoNky wrote:

abalee wrote:

consider to decrease the score next time.

Ranked now.

Yes I'll remember that.

And congratulation samipale!
I proud of you.

NatsumeRin wrote:

恭喜= =

Tonoko wrote:

;)