Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[Easy]
- 00:06:756 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
- 00:12:242 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:36:242 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. Please check new rule this forum. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
- 01:00:927 (1,1) - Same as above. need break 750ms over.
- 01:06:070 (3) - You forget to add whistle.
- 01:20:127 (1,1) - Same as 00:37:102 (1,1) -
- 01:32:470 (1) - It is not preferable for note to be covered.
- 01:50:299 (1,1) - Same as above.
- 01:53:727 (1) - Same as 00:07:616 (2) -
[Normal]
- AR7 !?!? Please set below AR6.1
- 00:09:327 (2) - Mmmm... Changed an another pattern better. It is not preferable for note to be covered.
- 00:11:556 (1) - Why do you make such a strange form?
- 00:12:756 (3) - This form is very dangerous. It is not preferable to cover.
- 01:19:099 (3) - You forget to add whistle.
- 00:03:156 (4) - Remove note ? For consistency here 00:01:785 -
- 00:12:756 (5,6) - Spacing is not desirable for 3.0 over in the Hard diff.
- 00:15:156 (5) - This spacing is really awkward. Therefore you should do add new combo.
- 00:36:070 (3,4) - It is hard to look in the Hard diff very much.
- 00:45:670 (4) - www Dirty form... ._.
- 01:40:013 (8,9) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this.
- 01:51:670 (4) - add new combo
- 00:04:699 (5) - add new combo
- 00:28:013 (1) - Ctrl + G ?
- I'm not sure. overmapping style. sorry =o=