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fhana - Hoshikuzu no Interlude

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Fycho
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月16日 at 19:22:32

Artist: fhana
Title: Hoshikuzu no Interlude
Source: 天体のメソッド
Tags: SoGa sora no method ending noel nonoka yuzuki Toyosaki Aki Natsukawa Shiina Minase Inori loli lolicon yuri
BPM: 127
Filesize: 14752kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.71 stars, 237 notes)
  2. Insane (3.43 stars, 338 notes)
  3. Normal (1.62 stars, 138 notes)
  4. SoGa's Easy (1.26 stars, 101 notes)
Download: fhana - Hoshikuzu no Interlude
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Sora no Method ED<3

Op map here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/220811

SoGa's Easy made by SoGa
BG is from http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=46407864
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[General]
如果第二集出之后rank的话可以改一下mp3

[Insane]
00:28:289 - 建议这里加上一个节奏 对于下一小节的引入很有帮助 例子:
SPOILER

00:35:611 (5,6) - 这里的节奏现在好蛋疼, 00:35:611 (5) - 推荐拆成一个1/2 + 一个note 00:36:084 (7) - 这个改成1/4节奏.. 意思就是最后的蓝线空出来 前面的节奏紧点 因为对于跟音乐以及引下一节来说这样改的节奏会好点

00:37:265 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这串不好看, 因为别人看的话会从(3)的尾部开始看串, 结果发现是个四不像弧线

00:42:108 (1) - 尾去掉whistle 换在00:42:462 (2) - 上

00:43:171 (5,6,1,2) - 建议这里还是跟着键盘音为好 不然这一段节奏太随意了点

00:54:155 (3,4) - 不跳一点吗 4的重音很明显

01:02:895 (1,2,3) - 尾部推荐都静音下

01:10:926 (2) - 加个whistle

01:13:761 (6,8) - swap whistle

01:23:682 (1) - add whistle

01:25:100 (7) - 头的话建议additiondrum 尾部clap , (8)上头尾都加上clap

01:26:045 (2) - whistle

01:27:226 (7) - ^

01:28:289 - 01:28:997 - 鼓点不加? 后面这个01:30:060 (4,5,6,7) - 四连明显跟的鼓音 但是前面的不是跟鼓 会不会这个四连有点突然

01:31:478 - 01:31:832 - 为了填充kiai的饱满 这两个地方推荐加note

01:32:541 - 这里其实有音 加不加?

01:47:659 (2,3,4,5) - 太尾杀的感觉 不如换成俩1/4滑条?

[Hard]

00:53:092 - 这里应该加一个note 听音乐的话这里非常适合

00:57:226 (1,3) - 叠好

01:04:430 - 同第一条

01:41:635 (3) - wpcap 换个稍微不这么夸张的滑条怎么样 insane里都没出现过这么奇葩的滑条

音效看看insane的改改?

[Normal]

00:29:824 (2,3,4) - 无理由的间距不等 做大死

音效同hard

美丽
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General

  1. Fine

Insane

  1. 00:34:312 (9,1) - Move down a bit. Now looks a little close.
  2. 00:48:722 (3) - Remove, It is excess rhythm imo. And add a whistle at 00:48:485 (2) - slider tail?
  3. 01:05:730 (5) - Stack better.
  4. 01:13:879 (7) - Werid rhythm. I think this one is more fit the music.
    img
  5. 01:27:580 (2) - Remove? Now sounds have a bit spam.
  6. 01:36:911 (1,2) - Stack better.
  7. 01:37:856 (1,2) - Same as above.

Hard

  1. 01:13:879 - Emm, Why not use this rhythm? It more fit the music imo.
    img
  2. 01:16:123 (1) - Change to 1/1 slider will have a better effect.
  3. 01:31:241 (1) - Why not use reverse slider? 3/4 slider is not fit here imo.
  4. 01:35:493 (2) - I guess you make a little mistake. Change to this rhythm will be better.
    img

Normal

  1. Nothing to see.

Soga's Easy

  1. 00:30:769 (3,4,1) - 让他们看起来更顺点？调整00:32:659 (1) - 的趋势迎合前面的物件。
  2. 00:36:438 (1) - 红点拉高点吧，现在看起来有点四不像。
  3. 00:38:800 (2,3) - 漏Clap？补上比较好。
  4. 00:43:052 (4) - ^
  5. 00:45:887 (1) - 滑条迎合趋势。
  6. 00:48:249 (2,3) - Blanket better.
  7. 00:55:336 (3) - 红点前加一个描点迎合之前的滑条。
    img
  8. 01:19:903 (2) - 滑条头Finish.
  9. 01:22:737 (4) - 太扭曲了不好看...

Others

Goodluck.
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lkx_Shore wrote:

Soga's Easy

  1. 00:30:769 (3,4,1) - 让他们看起来更顺点？调整00:32:659 (1) - 的趋势迎合前面的物件。Fixed
  2. 00:36:438 (1) - 红点拉高点吧，现在看起来有点四不像。Fixed
  3. 00:38:800 (2,3) - 漏Clap？补上比较好。Fixed
  4. 00:43:052 (4) - ^ Fixed
  5. 00:45:887 (1) - 滑条迎合趋势。
  6. 00:48:249 (2,3) - Blanket better.Fixed
  7. 00:55:336 (3) - 红点前加一个描点迎合之前的滑条。Fixed
    img
  8. 01:19:903 (2) - 滑条头Finish.Fixed
  9. 01:22:737 (4) - 太扭曲了不好看... Fixed
SoGa's Easy
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: ed.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38328
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Hoshikuzu no Interlude
TitleUnicode:星屑のインターリュード
Artist:fhana
ArtistUnicode:fhána
Creator:Fycho
Version:SoGa's Easy
Source:天体のメソッド
Tags:SoGa sora no method ending noel nonoka yuzuki Toyosaki Aki Natsukawa Shiina Minase Inori loli lolicon yuri
BeatmapID:518696
BeatmapSetID:216214

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Mafumafu
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Sorry for delay!

Hi, Fycho! There is Regraz's mod! :)
There is a few points of my mod:
  1. Thank you for requesting a mod from me! Note that I am still learning modding skills, so I am sorry if I cannot provide help to you!
  2. Mod is just a kind of suggestion, so feel free if you dont want to make change.
  3. I hope you can reply to my mod since it can help me know the other mappers' ideas and I can also learn something new.
  4. Bond means highly suggest.
  5. Same issues wont be repeated by me unless it is a GD..
  6. This is the one of the maps I modded since I used modding framework version 3 (mfv3)

General

  1. Fine

SoGa's Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:50:139 感觉漏vocal不好qwq
  2. 01:35:966 (3) - 感觉这个滑条下的不太对的上节奏，而且盖了些vocal，建议拆成note
    Structure:
  3. 00:23:210 (3,4) - 考虑修一下这个blanket。
  4. 00:32:659 (1) - 试一下这个pattern？更顺一些 http://puu.sh/c98ls/b85b449bd5.jpg
  5. 00:36:438 (1,2) - 包一下
  6. 00:39:745 (3,1,2) - 三角形 http://puu.sh/c98vZ/df301fcffb.jpg
  7. 00:45:887 (1) - 这个。。应该是方向反过来吧 http://puu.sh/c98DH/0a99a332e5.jpg
  8. 00:48:249 (2,3) - 包一下？
  9. 00:54:391 (2,3) - 这样叠一下~更美观 http://puu.sh/c98IN/d5392b3f02.jpg
  10. 01:22:737 (4) - 有点太扭曲qwq
    Hitsounds
  11. 00:38:800 (2,3) - 音效怎么没了qwq
  12. 00:43:052 (4) - 尾巴Clap
    Others:
  13. http://puu.sh/c98RA/60ced2caac.png 不知道为什么这个变成了0.999999999999

Normal

  1. Neat and Nice. nothing much to say.
  2. 00:34:548 (4) - Consider using a blanket here?
  3. 00:50:611 (2) - Follow the vocal？http://puu.sh/c9wg5/1cb429488d.jpg
  4. 01:01:950 (2) - Curve it to make a better extention of the previous slider. http://puu.sh/c9wkK/8c7f96d51c.jpg
  5. 01:11:399 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow here like: http://puu.sh/c9wql/8402ca032e.jpg

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:44:706 (2,3,4) - This is not intense part, triplet here seems a little overdose. Try to make 2,3 into a 1/4 slider. It can follow the vocal and downbeat well without being weird.
  2. 01:00:060 (5,6,7) - Try this, feel more fit to the music imo: http://puu.sh/c9xbT/ea8c61c388.jpg
    Structure:
  3. 00:26:517 (4,1,2,3) - Little crowded imo.
  4. 00:28:407 (5) - Ctrl+G?
  5. 00:37:856 (6) - Curve it in the opposite direction, to make a better flow on both 00:37:029 (3) - to 00:37:619 (4,5,6) - and 00:37:619 (4,5,6) - to 00:38:328 (1) - http://puu.sh/c9wXK/efe6ae08db.jpg
  6. (nazi)00:57:226 (1,3) - Stack well.
  7. 01:20:848 (3,4) - Nearly touching the HP Bar...consider moving it down a bit.
  8. 01:45:415 (3,1) - Why not use this natural blanket? http://puu.sh/c9xxZ/61bfb39035.jpg
    Hitsounds
  9. None
    Others:
  10. None

Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:04:785 (1,2,3,4) - Why not follow the vocal instead of following the downbeat? Guess Vocal is more apparent than downbeat.
  2. 01:30:178 (5) - Remove this. By doing this you can follow both the vocal and instrument at 01:30:297 (6,7) - Also the vocal at 01:30:297 (6) - need a break at 01:30:178 (5) - to be distinguished and emphasized from the previous vocal.
  3. 01:36:438 (6) - Consider using a 1/4 reverse. Just like 01:35:966 (5) - . You can emphasize the next vocal better.
    Structure:
  4. 01:47:659 (2,3,4,5) - Oh...so large DS... Seems too sudden but..well..it is fine.
    Hitsounds
  5. 01:33:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Soft whistles sound not enough for the high-pitch vocal. Consider using S:C1 Claps?
    Others:
  6. Fine

In all, this is a very nice mapset with well-made patterns. Hope this song get ranked soon!
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! :D If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
:)
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 4 times in total.
Zero__wind
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又要泡了
AIR
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AIR
hi :3

[SoGa's Easy]
  1. 00:45:887 (1) - 可以漂亮一些
  2. 00:48:249 (2,3) - 围好
  3. 01:01:950 (2,5) - 叠好
  4. 01:46:596 (3) - 最后突然用了下红线
  5. 01:49:903 - 统一下结束时间
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:997 (1,2,1,2) - 有点乱
  2. 01:11:399 (2,3) - ctrl+g
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:084 - 转盘衔接时间有点短
  2. 00:27:226 (2) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:48:485 (2,3) - 提前1/4后延到红线比较合适
  4. 01:00:533 (6,4) - 叠好
  5. 01:04:430 (4,5) - 叠在1开头比较合适
  6. 01:19:430 (6) - ctrl+g
  7. 01:42:816 (4,1) - 提前1/4
[Insane]
  1. 00:37:383 (4,2) - 叠好
  2. 00:49:667 (1,2) - 蓝线起2比较合适
  3. 01:00:769 (7,4) - 叠好
  4. 01:08:092 (3,2) - 叠好
  5. 01:15:178 (3,4) - 只增加了难度，换个方向好点
  6. 01:47:304 - 这里总觉得有点空
没了
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa

Regraz wrote:

At the very first I must say sorry to Fycho sincerely coz I made some silly mistakes or things before coz I am newer than now as a mapper. Really sorry!

SoGa's Easy


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:50:139 感觉漏vocal不好qwq Fixed
  2. 01:35:966 (3) - 感觉这个滑条下的不太对的上节奏，而且盖了些vocal，建议拆成note 这个后期看看怎么说吧，ez太贪心也不好，节奏会密。感觉
    Structure:
  3. 00:23:210 (3,4) - 考虑修一下这个blanket。 [/color]
  4. 00:32:659 (1) - 试一下这个pattern？更顺一些 http://puu.sh/c98ls/b85b449bd5.jpg 其实这个我改了拉客修的，飞球还没来得及传
  5. 00:36:438 (1,2) - 包一下
  6. 00:39:745 (3,1,2) - 三角形 http://puu.sh/c98vZ/df301fcffb.jpg
  7. 00:45:887 (1) - 这个。。应该是方向反过来吧 http://puu.sh/c98DH/0a99a332e5.jpg
  8. 00:48:249 (2,3) - 包一下？这个不怎么想包。看后期吧
  9. 00:54:391 (2,3) - 这样叠一下~更美观 http://puu.sh/c98IN/d5392b3f02.jpg 可能会出间距问题，不清楚，其实这个我也按拉克修给的改了，和上面一样，没来得及传。
  10. 01:22:737 (4) - 有点太扭曲qwq^没来得及传._.
    Hitsounds
  11. 00:38:800 (2,3) - 音效怎么没了qwq ^
  12. 00:43:052 (4) - 尾巴Clap^
    Others:
  13. http://puu.sh/c98RA/60ced2caac.png 不知道为什么这个变成了0.999999999999 这个是什么。。我也不知道
明天回来继续www

AIR wrote:

hi :3

[SoGa's Easy]
  1. 00:45:887 (1) - 可以漂亮一些 Fixed
  2. 00:48:249 (2,3) - 围好 Fixed
  3. 01:01:950 (2,5) - 叠好 Fixed
  4. 01:46:596 (3) - 最后突然用了下红线没问题
  5. 01:49:903 - 统一下结束时间 Fixed
SoGa's Easy
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Countdown: 0
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Title:Hoshikuzu no Interlude
TitleUnicode:星屑のインターリュード
Artist:fhana
ArtistUnicode:fhána
Creator:Fycho
Version:SoGa's Easy
Source:天体のメソッド
Tags:SoGa sora no method ending noel nonoka yuzuki Toyosaki Aki Natsukawa Shiina Minase Inori loli lolicon yuri
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KaedekaShizuru
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Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
hihihi

[insane]
  1. 00:31:709 (1,2,3,4) - 白线起的三连感觉有点怪，试试这样
    Picture
  2. 00:35:016 (6,7,8) - 78改成一个1/4滑条感觉好些
  3. 00:37:850 (2) - 因为后面那里接不上clap，所以24clap在这里感觉就有点怪。。试试干脆这个clap也不要，做成一段有24clap一段没有24clap这样交替的感觉（也就是去掉00:41:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ，00:44:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - ，00:48:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 的clap，这样我感觉相对会自然一点
  4. 00:53:913 这里既有鼓也有人声啊，建议不要漏，试试这样
    Picture
  5. 01:05:724 (1) - 这个slider听起来好怪，试试这样？
    Picture
  6. 01:08:323 (2,3,4) - 和01:07:142 (3) - 叠起来？
  7. 01:09:976 (2) - ctrl+g感觉好打点
  8. 01:12:339 (4,5,6,7,8) - 试试这样？我感觉01:13:525这里可以空出来
    Picture


[hard]
  1. 00:36:906 (6) - 感觉往右边弯好些
  2. 01:17:063 (1) - 滑条中间有人声啊建议别漏
    Picture
  3. 01:42:575 (2) - 这个finish去掉好些，感觉有点吵了


[normal]
  1. 01:04:543 (2) - 这样节奏上好些
    Picture
  2. 01:32:181 (1,2) - 去掉1尾巴上的finish和2的finish，感觉没什么必要finish吧._.


[soga's easy]
  1. 00:44:937 (1) - finish应该在滑条的中间，因为音乐里面刚好有一个这样的音，反而画条尾巴上的那个finish我觉得有点多余
  2. 00:49:189 (2) - clap啊
  3. 01:01:945 (3) - 试试加上3个clap，不要用finish
  4. 01:21:315 (3,1) - 换一下nc，然后后面的nc都可能要重新做一下，因为很明显的01:24:622 (3) - 这里有个nc

写到最后了居然更新。。唔可恶~~
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,486 posts
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Topic Starter
Fycho

yf_bmp wrote:

1st???
support

[General]
如果第二集出之后rank的话可以改一下mp3 已换

[Insane]
00:28:289 - 建议这里加上一个节奏 对于下一小节的引入很有帮助 例子:
SPOILER

00:35:611 (5,6) - 这里的节奏现在好蛋疼, 00:35:611 (5) - 推荐拆成一个1/2 + 一个note 00:36:084 (7) - 这个改成1/4节奏.. 意思就是最后的蓝线空出来 前面的节奏紧点 因为对于跟音乐以及引下一节来说这样改的节奏会好点

00:37:265 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这串不好看, 因为别人看的话会从(3)的尾部开始看串, 结果发现是个四不像弧线

00:42:108 (1) - 尾去掉whistle 换在00:42:462 (2) - 上

00:43:171 (5,6,1,2) - 建议这里还是跟着键盘音为好 不然这一段节奏太随意了点

00:54:155 (3,4) - 不跳一点吗 4的重音很明显

01:02:895 (1,2,3) - 尾部推荐都静音下没静音的习惯

01:10:926 (2) - 加个whistle

01:13:761 (6,8) - swap whistle

01:23:682 (1) - add whistle

01:25:100 (7) - 头的话建议additiondrum 尾部clap , (8)上头尾都加上clap 换成drum finish了

01:26:045 (2) - whistle

01:27:226 (7) - ^

01:28:289 - 01:28:997 - 鼓点不加? 后面这个01:30:060 (4,5,6,7) - 四连明显跟的鼓音 但是前面的不是跟鼓 会不会这个四连有点突然

01:31:478 - 01:31:832 - 为了填充kiai的饱满 这两个地方推荐加note 这里加了反而觉得节奏不好

01:32:541 - 这里其实有音 加不加? 不加也可以

01:47:659 (2,3,4,5) - 太尾杀的感觉 不如换成俩1/4滑条? 我思考下

[Hard]

00:53:092 - 这里应该加一个note 听音乐的话这里非常适合

00:57:226 (1,3) - 叠好

01:04:430 - 同第一条

01:41:635 (3) - wpcap 换个稍微不这么夸张的滑条怎么样 insane里都没出现过这么奇葩的滑条

音效看看insane的改改?

[Normal]

00:29:824 (2,3,4) - 无理由的间距不等 做大死

音效同hard

美丽

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

  1. Fine

Insane

  1. 00:34:312 (9,1) - Move down a bit. Now looks a little close.
  2. 00:48:722 (3) - Remove, It is excess rhythm imo. And add a whistle at 00:48:485 (2) - slider tail? 删掉节奏听了不好啊
  3. 01:05:730 (5) - Stack better.
  4. 01:13:879 (7) - Werid rhythm. I think this one is more fit the music.音乐里是triplet的音
    img
  5. 01:27:580 (2) - Remove? Now sounds have a bit spam. 这里加着增加连续感
  6. 01:36:911 (1,2) - Stack better.
  7. 01:37:856 (1,2) - Same as above.

Hard

  1. 01:13:879 - Emm, Why not use this rhythm? It more fit the music imo.
    img
    我觉得那样节奏有点别扭
  2. 01:16:123 (1) - Change to 1/1 slider will have a better effect.滑条长没处摆了，就3/4了 也合曲
  3. 01:31:241 (1) - Why not use reverse slider? 3/4 slider is not fit here imo. 跟人声
  4. 01:35:493 (2) - I guess you make a little mistake. Change to this rhythm will be better. 不不，这故意不跟人声的，不想放更多的双连在Hard
    img


Others

Goodluck.

Regraz wrote:

Normal

  1. Neat and Nice. nothing much to say.
  2. 00:34:548 (4) - Consider using a blanket here? not needed imo I like straight slider
  3. 00:50:611 (2) - Follow the vocal？http://puu.sh/c9wg5/1cb429488d.jpg 这样的话前半个也没跟全，反而别扭，所以就全不跟人声了
  4. 01:01:950 (2) - Curve it to make a better extention of the previous slider. http://puu.sh/c9wkK/8c7f96d51c.jpg
  5. 01:11:399 (2,3) - Ctrl+G for a better flow here like: http://puu.sh/c9wql/8402ca032e.jpg 我不是很喜欢这种flow

Hard


  • Rhythm:
  1. 00:44:706 (2,3,4) - This is not intense part, triplet here seems a little overdose. Try to make 2,3 into a 1/4 slider. It can follow the vocal and downbeat well without being weird. 噗三连反而比1/4容易读图吧，简单
  2. 01:00:060 (5,6,7) - Try this, feel more fit to the music imo: http://puu.sh/c9xbT/ea8c61c388.jpg 我倾向于现在的，整体上听着更好
    Structure:
  3. 00:26:517 (4,1,2,3) - Little crowded imo.
  4. 00:28:407 (5) - Ctrl+G?
  5. 00:37:856 (6) - Curve it in the opposite direction, to make a better flow on both 00:37:029 (3) - to 00:37:619 (4,5,6) - and 00:37:619 (4,5,6) - to 00:38:328 (1) - http://puu.sh/c9wXK/efe6ae08db.jpg
  6. (nazi)00:57:226 (1,3) - Stack well.
  7. 01:20:848 (3,4) - Nearly touching the HP Bar...consider moving it down a bit. 这个没事啦
  8. 01:45:415 (3,1) - Why not use this natural blanket? http://puu.sh/c9xxZ/61bfb39035.jpg 从间距和flow上来说反而不合适了
    Hitsounds
  9. None
    Others:
  10. None

Insane


  • Rhythm:
  1. 01:04:785 (1,2,3,4) - Why not follow the vocal instead of following the downbeat? Guess Vocal is more apparent than downbeat. 因为db合适
  2. 01:30:178 (5) - Remove this. By doing this you can follow both the vocal and instrument at 01:30:297 (6,7) - Also the vocal at 01:30:297 (6) - need a break at 01:30:178 (5) - to be distinguished and emphasized from the previous vocal.
  3. 01:36:438 (6) - Consider using a 1/4 reverse. Just like 01:35:966 (5) - . You can emphasize the next vocal better. 这故意放的1/2，比1/4折返更有引导性
    Structure:
  4. 01:47:659 (2,3,4,5) - Oh...so large DS... Seems too sudden but..well..it is fine.容我三思
    Hitsounds
  5. 01:33:131 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Soft whistles sound not enough for the high-pitch vocal. Consider using S:C1 Claps?太吵了 不合适，whistle配高音
    Others:
  6. Fine

In all, this is a very nice mapset with well-made patterns. Hope this song get ranked soon!
Finally, good luck on your ranking!
Thanks for reading this! :D If you have something that you dont understand, feel free to send me a forum-pm and I will try my best to explain it to you clearly!
:)
@AIR，基本都是些叠好什么的小nazi，所以就random的改了。

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[insane]
  1. 00:31:709 (1,2,3,4) - 白线起的三连感觉有点怪，试试这样 换了一种
    Picture
  2. 00:35:016 (6,7,8) - 78改成一个1/4滑条感觉好些
  3. 00:37:850 (2) - 因为后面那里接不上clap，所以24clap在这里感觉就有点怪。。试试干脆这个clap也不要，做成一段有24clap一段没有24clap这样交替的感觉（也就是去掉00:41:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ，00:44:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - ，00:48:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 的clap，这样我感觉相对会自然一点 nice catch
  4. 00:53:913 这里既有鼓也有人声啊，建议不要漏，试试这样 这里跟鼓，长滑条突出作用
    Picture
  5. 01:05:724 (1) - 这个slider听起来好怪，试试这样？
    Picture
  6. 01:08:323 (2,3,4) - 和01:07:142 (3) - 叠起来？排列移动了很多 没必要叠了
  7. 01:09:976 (2) - ctrl+g感觉好打点 突出重音，摆跳
  8. 01:12:339 (4,5,6,7,8) - 试试这样？我感觉01:13:525这里可以空出来感觉不好
    Picture


[hard]
  1. 00:36:906 (6) - 感觉往右边弯好些
  2. 01:17:063 (1) - 滑条中间有人声啊建议别漏 没办法要弄的话所有都要改 没长滑条不习惯
    Picture
  3. 01:42:575 (2) - 这个finish去掉好些，感觉有点吵了


[normal]
  1. 01:04:543 (2) - 这样节奏上好些 都差不多吧
    Picture
  2. 01:32:181 (1,2) - 去掉1尾巴上的finish和2的finish，感觉没什么必要finish吧._.


写到最后了居然更新。。唔可恶~~
no comment = fix, thanks for modding
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa

Mei wrote:

hihihi



[soga's easy]
  1. 00:44:937 (1) - finish应该在滑条的中间，因为音乐里面刚好有一个这样的音，反而画条尾巴上的那个finish我觉得有点多余 Fixed
  2. 00:49:189 (2) - clap啊 Fixed
  3. 01:01:945 (3) - 试试加上3个clap，不要用finish
  4. 01:21:315 (3,1) - 换一下nc，然后后面的nc都可能要重新做一下，因为很明显的01:24:622 (3) - 这里有个nc Fixed

写到最后了居然更新。。唔可恶~~唔，谢谢mei
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Ticket.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Nothing to say.
[SoGa's Easy]

  • IRC MOD
    2014-10-16 13:00 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/518696 fhana - Hoshikuzu no Interlude [SoGa's Easy]]
    2014-10-16 13:00 SoGa: oh，船爷，好好好~
    2014-10-16 13:02 smallboat: 00:20:370 (1) - 紅點對y軸
    2014-10-16 13:03 SoGa: y轴？
    2014-10-16 13:04 smallboat: 那個移到168 80吧
    2014-10-16 13:05 smallboat: 01:03:835 (5,1) - 這兩個交換NC
    2014-10-16 13:05 SoGa: fixed
    2014-10-16 13:05 smallboat: 01:05:724 (2) - 上面那兩個換了 這個要加NC
    2014-10-16 13:06 SoGa: ok
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:299 (4) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider end,to strong the background music. (Just as like 00:45:882 (2) - this.)
  2. 01:38:795 (6) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better.(Just as like 01:37:850 (4) - this.)
[Hard]
  2. 00:47:772 (3) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider end,to strong the background music.
  3. 01:38:795 (4) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better.
  4. 01:18:953 (1) - Perhaps don't overlap here,stack 01:17:772 (2) ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:102 (4) - Have a bit hard to read here,move to (95|341) keep consistent DS ?
  2. 00:48:008 (5) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider head,to strong the background music.
  3. 00:54:268 (6) - This 1/4 note seems have bit far,perhaps you can change a bit placement :
    SPOILER
  4. 01:38:795 (3) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better.
[Other]
  1. Cool mapset,if fix done,call me back.
Last edited by smallboat , edited 2 times in total.
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa
[SoGa's Easy]

  • IRC MOD
    2014-10-16 13:00 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/518696 fhana - Hoshikuzu no Interlude [SoGa's Easy]]
    2014-10-16 13:00 SoGa: oh，船爷，好好好~
    2014-10-16 13:02 smallboat: 00:20:370 (1) - 紅點對y軸
    2014-10-16 13:03 SoGa: y轴？
    2014-10-16 13:04 smallboat: 那個移到168 80吧
    2014-10-16 13:05 smallboat: 01:03:835 (5,1) - 這兩個交換NC
    2014-10-16 13:05 SoGa: fixed
    2014-10-16 13:05 smallboat: 01:05:724 (2) - 上面那兩個換了 這個要加NC
    2014-10-16 13:06 SoGa: ok

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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20370,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
61945,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
65724,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
69504,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
99740,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
106354,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 26,203,255
Combo2 : 254,103,137
Combo3 : 174,85,255

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Fycho
Global Moderator
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Topic Starter
Fycho

smallboat wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:47:299 (4) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider end,to strong the background music. (Just as like 00:45:882 (2) - this.)
  2. 01:38:795 (6) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better.(Just as like 01:37:850 (4) - this.) it would be noisy, although there is cymbal in music
[Hard]
  2. 00:47:772 (3) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider end,to strong the background music.
  3. 01:38:795 (4) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better. same
  4. 01:18:953 (1) - Perhaps don't overlap here,stack 01:17:772 (2) ?k, naziboat
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:102 (4) - Have a bit hard to read here,move to (95|341) keep consistent DS ?
  2. 00:48:008 (5) - Maybe can set a whistle hitsound in slider head,to strong the background music.
  3. 00:54:268 (6) - This 1/4 note seems have bit far,perhaps you can change a bit placement :
    SPOILER
    不不 这种滑条尾的跳不难读，故意的
  4. 01:38:795 (3) - Feel add a finish in head than add whistle and clap will be sounds like better.
[Other]
  1. Cool mapset,if fix done,call me back.
no comment = fix, updated all diffs

thanks for modding.
smallboat
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smallboat
Everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.

Bubbled !
pregnant_man
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pregnant_man
Looks fine from my side
(did some kind of irc check and blah-blah-blah)
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
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Satellite
yay!
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Gratz moe song & map!~ Fycho-san :D
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Topic Starter
Fycho

Satellite wrote:

yay!
wow, so fast ww

thank you smallboat and EvilElvis
Unsfamiliar
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Unsfamiliar
s-sugoi! fhana and fycho~

grats :3
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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yf_bmp
poet？
litoluna
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litoluna
omedeto!!! ;)
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
居然不是Melo点的
JMC
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JMC
BG Source : http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=46407864
artist : 刃天
if you do not mind please add in description
Rakuen
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Rakuen
好快0.0!

Grats フィコ XD /
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
gzzzz
VINXIS
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VINXIS
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wow that copypaste went wrong
gj!!!
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu
Gratz! (So late am I....)
Glad that my mod can help..(though just a little)
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