ts8zs wrote:

01:28:650 - All spinner end at here 不要O.O
preview time 看着有点别扭虽然没影响._. 還好吧~
offset+6? 虽然也没影响._. offest應該沒問題~

[Insane]
00:05:047 (3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1895468 喜歡原來的
00:18:723 (2) - 252,348 本來的好些@@
00:55:782 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1895475 不喜歡<_>
01:04:165 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1895479 還是喜歡本來的嘖嘖._.
01:25:341 (3) - 336,348 不要~

[Flask's Normal]
00:00:635 (2,3) - 不平行 ok

[Easy]
00:00:635 (1) - end at 00:02:400 - and insert a break? 嗯嗯
01:08:135 (2) - 角度调小一些，看着不舒服._. 噗 故意的o.o 我考慮看看~

Aka wrote:

hi owo~


general stuff

・imo your 6th combo colour feels out of place and too dark, comparing to all of your previous 5 ones. i'd suggest either remove it or make it lighter OR maybe replace it with a kind beige colour (r183g165b132). Yes it's a little too dark... @@ Hmm I'll consider about it~ and ask others' opinion!!


easy

・00:00:635 (1) - ummm the spinner feels pretty awkward there in my opinion D: i'd finish it on the next white tick but there would be not enough time to catch the next slider.. well, its up to you, anyway changed end at 00:02:400 -
・00:30:635 (3) - shouldnt there be s:c2 clap? I think S:C1 sounds good too~
・00:39:459 (1,2) - the pattern look pretty strange, it has broken flow, what about rotating (2) a bit, maybe like this, to make it flow a bit smoother

SPOILER

I think it's fine here @@ sorry >.<
・00:46:518 (1,2,3,4) - the fact is that these 00:46:959 (2,4) - are overlapped is not good imo. considering the low ar in this diff i think its better to rework on this pattern Hmm yes maybe it's a bit hard to read for beginners.. I'll consider how to change~ o.o
・01:08:135 (2) - make it less curved. its like the only one slider which has such big curve D: Hmm okay~ orz


flask's

・00:07:694 (1,2,3) - nazi but make them blanketed perfectly :о
00:25:341 (1,2,3) -
01:19:165 (3,4,5) - 01:21:812 (1) - I think these are okay! sorry QwQa
・00:43:429 - , 01:11:003 - unnecessary green line FIXED!
・00:45:194 (3,4) - 10% is way too quiet and feels like clicking the emptiness. i'd recommend to use the same volume as alacat's diff has or adding like 20% more to this section even if there is no beats in music and youre following vocals. OK~ changed to 25%

insane
・00:31:628 - there are beats for a good triplet. are you sure i dont want add it there and stick only to vocals?
Hmm yes here have the Drum o.o but I wanna follow the vocal, sorry! <_>
・00:43:870 (2) - i dont think its a good idea to leave 1.50x for this slider. it has 2 reverses and approach circle of nearby next slider makes it a bit confusing considering how many reverses there D: i'd say consider leaving 1.20x like you have before OK changed to 1.3x ^^
・00:45:194 (2,3) - like i mentioned in flask's diff, 10% is way too quiet, add at least 20% more or make it like alacat made, 50/40 ;_;
Changed to 25% I really think it's the very quiet part of this song... 25% is totally enough IMO~ @@
・00:47:179 (2,3) - i think its better make them vise versa, note-slider. because of red tick your current slider stands on. you had such sliders before but i didnt mention them cause they were fitting the beats, while this one not imo D: Hmm I know o.o but I think it plays fine here... sorry! if others mention this too, I'll fix! ^^
・01:18:282 (1,2,3) - blanket (1,2) better and stack (3) with (1)'s end perfectly owo fixed ww

pretty clean mapset owo
dont you dare graving it and goooooooooood luck

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,187,255
Combo2 : 112,209,183
Combo3 : 114,175,243
Combo4 : 253,151,158
Combo5 : 255,184,149
Combo6 : 128,128,255

IamKwaN wrote:

hai, as promised. owo/

General

1. metadata我要再confirm一下 但據我找到的資料 (TV size) 應該要刪除 還是你有reference? fixed
   
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   http://heidi-net.com/artist_info/discography.php
   
2. Snap the preview time to 00:45:819. Done
3. Current combo colors are inconsistent. Hmm which color too dark?? or... why?? I think it's fine orz
4. The spread is worrying, especially the gap between N & H and that of H & I. Personally, Hard should be easier. I need to discuss with other team members before pushing this set forward. ok~ QAQ

Insane

1. 從00:04:165 開始 我覺得S:C2的clap的音量太高 雖然不至於跟音樂本身違和 但好像蓋過了音樂本身 能降低10~20%就好 OK
2. 00:24:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^ here I think it's ok.... :3
3. 00:43:429 (1) - 尾巴的finish略吵 背景的cymbal比較小聲 建議降低20%音量 00:43:870 (2,3) 也是很吵 連續的音效往往發揮不了它的功效 FIXED!!
4. 00:44:312 (3) - 這些鼓點是1/4 snapped才對吧 然後那clap太吵了 像機關槍 噗 好像真的是1/4.. 可是這樣我覺得1/6聽起來還不錯 如果你也覺得還行 我不太想改囧~~ O3Oa (降低10%音量了~)
5. 00:45:856 (1,3) - 考慮加whistle? 嗯嗯 後面那個圈也加了
6. 01:02:841 - 這條綠線調整成70%如何? 我看第一個kiai都是70% 80%有點高 OK!
7. 01:15:194 (2) - 3/4滑條有點彆扭 另外三個都是1/2 只有這個特別是3/4 kiai前面那些跟的是人聲以及沒有鼓點我覺得還可以 但這兒的背景鼓點還蠻明顯的 建議還是縮短成1/2吧 這裡我覺得還行>_> 想做些變化哈哈~
8. 01:16:959 (3) - ^ Also applies on 01:20:047 (1). ^

Flask's Normal

1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為normal節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果 嘛 你說的對 是沒I的效果<_< 但我覺得還OK拉 聽起來還行 Sorry拉o.o"
2. 00:00:635 (2) - Whistle on head? Also, on tail of 00:01:959 (3) and head of 00:03:723 (5). added!!
3. 00:21:812 (1,2) - 我個人不太喜歡這種突然從鼓點轉換到人聲的手法 綜觀這段都沒有跟人聲的地方 所以這裡我聽著有點不舒服 http://puu.sh/bHCjf/0c3f1282f5.jpg @@我覺得這裡還行耶 打起來也ok sorry!
4. 00:29:091 (2) - ^ Same for 00:50:047 (1,2,3) - 這個連clap的pattern都破壞了 and also 00:53:576 (1,2,3) - 嘛 跟vocal我覺得還行拉 clap也都有加到 應該沒問題唄<_>
5. 00:45:856 (5) - 頭尾whistle? nice ww
6. 00:45:635 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這段的密度有點誇張 考慮降低一下? http://puu.sh/bHCVl/fe2b47a5f0.jpg and also 00:59:973 (4,1,2,3,4) - 我覺得還好 不會很難 這歌也蠻慢的~ ok的xD
7. 01:25:782 (1) - 可以在紅線開始 ok changed!

Easy

1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為Easy節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果 同Normal摟 覺得還行!

1. http://puu.sh/bXtx0/bfbcfe0a0a.png

1. 00:44:312 (6,7) - 我個人還是主張這兒跟鼓點放1/4 比現在舒服多了

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. http://puu.sh/bXtx0/bfbcfe0a0a.png

[Insane]

1. 00:44:312 (6,7) - 我個人還是主張這兒跟鼓點放1/4 比現在舒服多了

IamKwaN wrote:

Beep.

Umi wrote:

hi there :3/ kaichou wa maid sama, it bring me back lot of memories~ Yes >w</

Easy

1. 00:23:576 (3) - rythm is awkward to me cuz you're skipping a important beat with a finish and also a strong vocal 00:24:459 - , so i recommend u one of these rythms Hmm~ I changed to another pattern~ and I think it's better!! owo
   
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2. 00:32:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - using 3 times in a row the same rythm isn't it a bit boring ? how about diversify, example :
   Hmm yes maybe a bit boring lol But as a Easy Diff~ for beginner, I think it's more clear and easy to with the same beat here!! so... Sorry <.>
   
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3. 00:51:812 (3) - and 01:05:929 (3) - pretty much the same reflexion as 00:23:576 (3) - Here I think these rhythm are fine and fit the music >.< Sorry
   
4. 01:22:473 - it shouldn't be SC:1 ? considering your clap's pattern. Fixed!!

Flask's Normal

1. 00:00:194 (1,2) - flow is kinda messed here, i'd turn the pattern like this Changed~~ :3
   
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2. 00:00:635 (2,3) - idk if it's intentional but they're not perfectly parallel Fixed, parellel now~~~
3. 00:31:518 (5) - Delete the reverse and add a note 00:32:400 - cuz it's where the NC should start and cuz it's a strong beat who need the click action. Fixed!
   
4. 01:02:179 (3,4) - move them to x:68,y:108 to increase the flow. Here I think the flow is okay~~ :3
5. 01:22:473 - same as easy diff Sure~~~
6. 01:22:694 (3) - forgot a clap ? ww Added~~

Insane

1. Increase AR to 8,5 for a better also it makes the whole diff easier to read imo Okay~~
2. 00:16:959 (1) - and 00:17:400 (1) - these NC aren't really needed Okay removed~ lool
4. 00:24:900 - reduce the volum to 30%, too noisy I think it's not too loud here... Okay reduce 5% volume~~ owo
5. 00:24:459 (1) - delete NC Hmm.. no~ I think this NC fit the music and the finish hitsound!!
6. 00:29:312 (1,1,1) - ^ no particular reason to have NC here (no SV Change or anti-jump) Hmm yes it's unneeded... but I like here, I think it looks more colorful xDD If it's not neceessary to change, I wanna keep now sorry Q.Q
7. 00:42:106 (1) - and 00:43:429 (1) - same as above Hmm... Same as above~~ >.<a
8. 01:02:179 - i don't really understand why u increased the SV here, it's acutally the same vocal as 01:01:297 - a normal SV would fit better. have a look at this pattern Hmm I wanna blanket it~~~ yay your suggestion is nice too >.< But I still wanna keep this, maybe for more fun~~~ Sorry <_>
   
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9. 01:24:679 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC again Looks more colorful~~~~~~~~~~~ Orz /me runs
10. 01:24:459 - volum down to 45% 55% (Reduce 10%) I wanna make the end more powerful~~ I think 45% is too quite xD
11. 01:24:900 - ^ to 55% 65%

P.S: Easy, Normal, Insane, I changed some hitsounds at 00:18:282 - These part (I use Drum and I think it sounds better :3/) Hope you think so~~~~~~~~~ o/

sweet set, call me back~