General:
- There is and unsnapped inherited points @ 00:32:846
- This diff also could use some works on the aesthetics part
00:11:692 (1,2,3,4) - don;t know if you tried to mirror or not . either way , make mirror with them
00:15:619 (1,2,3,4) - why create your own rhythm if there is already one ? > 00:15:619 (1,2) - remove > 00:15:820 (8) move to 00:15:820 ! sounds perfect this way
00:16:927 (13) - remove. its unnecessary. the beat ends @ 00:16:826 there is not beat @ 00:16:927 . ( also try to align them so they are in a straight line )
00:17:129 (1,2,3,4) - again the mirror issue. make them perfectly mirrored. ctrl+H
00:21:961 (8) - replace with 1 circle. The beat here must be clicked one as it is a strong beat .Also increase the spacing a bit :3
00:28:404 (6,7) - this overlap doesn't look nice. fix it
00:36:458 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i would keep the spacing between these the same
00:40:082 (4,5) - pls no touch
00:41:088 (7) - tiny curved reversed slider doesn't look that nice as you may think
change it
00:42:498 (1,2) - no touch T^T... make a nice blanket instead
00:47:733 (5,2) - they touch
no touch pls
00:49:545 (1) -this is an ugly reverse slider
change it
00:59:008 (2,3,4) - mirrors !!!
01:00:619 (1,2,3,4) - not identical flipped mirror.copy paste and then use 2x ctrl + > or <
01:03:840 (5) - NC
01:04:243 (6,7,8,1) - this part sounds too passive. follow the the lyrics here 100%. . Suggestion : Delete 01:04:242 (6,7,8) - and put 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1 circle > then delete 01:05:249 (1) - and you are g2g
01:07:061 (2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't recommend spacing triplets away from the kick slider. Stick em together like a stream.
01:08:270 (1,2) - not perfect mirror. use ctrl+J
01:12:095 (3,4) - Y U DO DIS ? no toucherino pls
01:13:706 (2,4) - use 2x ctrl+ <
01:19:041 (6) - remove > 01:19:343 (8) change into 1 circle > then ad some space between them. Don't forget to fix the combo color if you change !
01:19:746 (9,1) - doesn't follow the lyrics as it should since it sounds nicer. > remove 01:20:149 (1) and move 01:19:746 (9) to 01:19:947
01:21:357 (6) - the beat on the tail has to be clicked. it is the end of the song and the beat here must be together with these: 01:21:860 (7,8) . So i recommend : 01:20:954 (5) - turn into a reverse slider > add a note @ 01:21:558 then make a nice pattern . something like this :
http://puu.sh/bujjA/aeb9ec7c02.png01:21:860 (2,3) - note perfectly mirrored ( use ctrl+h on (2) )
01:22:364 (4,5) - stack (4) on to or (5)
well I still fix it, so thx for it