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nano.RIPE - Gekka (Short Size)

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Umi
first ! 8-)

Can i make the easy ? >.</
- Tu -
nano.ripe <33
Topic Starter
No_Gu

-Umi- wrote:

first ! 8-)

Can i make the easy ? >.</
ok
Flower
done!
http://puu.sh/3OJCq.osu
音效基本直接复制你的了 有mod的话如果没有特殊情况就麻烦你来改了
Topic Starter
No_Gu
Umi
Finished !

> http://puu.sh/3QsJD/3f4189ccdb.rar with some custom hitsounds :3
1PSA
http://puu.sh/3WJzA.zip 做完了 :) 是不是有点太难了,需不需要remap
Topic Starter
No_Gu

1PSA wrote:

http://puu.sh/3WJzA.zip 做完了 :) 是不是有点太难了,需不需要remap
没啥问题 挺好的
1PSA
01:02:410 这里失误,弄了两条绿线,留S:C1的,S:C3的删掉,要不然hitfinish就出不来,抱歉,然后00:06:596这里音量加了些,http://puu.sh/3Xg7g.zip
ts8zs
这timing看起来……有点吓人
[Insane]
00:41:363 - note?
01:16:363 (1) - 有点歪
01:24:735 (5) - 左上一点
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[✿'s Hard]
00:02:734 (5) - 感觉可以柔和一些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918566
00:45:665 (2) - 应该拆成两个滑条
00:57:526 (4) - 感觉偏的方向反了?注重flow似乎也没什么大问题:3
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[1PSA's Normal]
01:19:154 (1) - not fit 2
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
[Umi's Easy]
01:19:154 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918579
01:21:247 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918580
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?
Sun Rainbow
M4M

Grenral
求你换个BG行吗 好诡异
none~

Umi's Easy
00:00:990 (1,2) -
00:03:083 (3,2) -

1PSA's Normal
01:23:689 (2,1) - Blanket


Insane
00:25:782 (4,5,1) -

再也挑不出什么东西
1PSA
quote="Sun Rainbow"

Sun Rainbow wrote:

[box=1PSA's Normal]01:23:689 (2,1) - Blanket
我想说我这是做的正三角好吧包起来了,谢谢mod


quote=“ts8zs”
[quote=“ts8zs”]01:19:154 (1) - not fit 2 没动你说哪个2
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ? 这看No_Gu的了[/quote]
谢谢mod

传了 http://puu.sh/3ZADD.zip
Topic Starter
No_Gu

ts8zs wrote:

这timing看起来……有点吓人其实这样还有不准的地方。。鼓手太蛋疼,我懒的再插红线修了。。
[Insane]
00:41:363 - note?其实确实应该加但是加完那边跳略大也不舒服
01:16:363 (1) - 有点歪k
01:24:735 (5) - 左上一点k
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ?现在这好点

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Insane
00:25:782 (4,5,1) - 你仔细听听其实都有音
update
Umi

ts8zs wrote:

[Umi's Easy]
01:19:154 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918579 Fixed
01:21:247 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/918580 No change
01:24:851 (1) - End at 01:29:270 - ? ^

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Umi's Easy
00:00:990 (1,2) - don't really understand what u mean :/
00:03:083 (3,2) - no change to keep blanket 00:03:806 (1,3) -
Thx for mod.

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osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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GridSize: 4

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Title:Gekka (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:月花 (TV Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Umi's Easy
Source:Hataraku Maou-sama!
Tags:はたらく魔王さま! ending Flower -Umi- 1PSA
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TrigonometrY
m4m from your queue

First of all:
http://puu.sh/bvZKJ/4d5b99d244.jpg

@Umi and 1PSA: make longer AudioLeadIn, current one doesn't give player any chance for preparing.

[Umi's Easy]
00:45:665 (3) - add finish to slider head like you did before 00:40:084 (1,3) -
00:45:665 (3) - 00:56:828 (1) - 01:07:991 (1) - same, there is cymbal sound. You may decrease volume to 30% for more soft sound
01:13:224 (4) - please don't skip that strong beat 01:13:572 - suggest to use next rhythm: http://puu.sh/bw0Lv/a6b34722e7.jpg and add finishes to head and ending of (5) slider or http://puu.sh/bw0OP/54e1e272ef.jpg if you prefer not to complicate rhythm.
00:40:084 (1,2,3) - it's not 1/2 rhythm, 00:40:607 - there is no sound unlike 00:40:665 - or 00:40:433 - so I earnestly propose to change this part. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/bw1js/6b5f676d85.jpg

[1PSA's Normal]
01:02:061 (6) - maybe remove slider? 01:01:712 (5,6,1,2,3) - this part is really difficult for Normal

[Flower's Hard]
HP Drain/OD +1, current values are too low for Hard
00:01:339 - missed beat? Suggest to add circle
00:26:131 - 00:44:270 - 00:45:317 - 01:04:851 - same

[Insane]
00:16:689 (2) - resnap it http://puu.sh/bw5Nq/141a32127b.jpg
00:16:340 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you break the flow on purpose, but it's played just bad. Could you improve it like this? http://puu.sh/bw4LN/711b357d9c.jpg http://puu.sh/bw4Nr/a8fb56e271.jpg
00:51:156 - add circle like you did there 00:06:538 (4) -
01:01:712 (3) - there is should be 1/3 rhythm, not 1/4: http://puu.sh/bw59z/bcab71010d.jpg
01:12:177 (1,2,3,4) - as I said above. My suggestions:

Anything else is perfect for me. Good luck!
koreapenguin
K.Penguin's m4m

General

  1. check AiMod, you can find some problems and fix :3
  2. haven't break times so uncheck plz :3
  3. lost AudioLeadIn in Umi and 1PSA
  4. how about add english title on tags?
    the devil is a part-timer overlord at work

Umi's Easy

  1. 00:03:806 (1) - about slider head on sound :3 how about add 'Additions : Drum and Whistle' hear to more good, and 00:03:806 - 00:06:247 - here how about just use 'Additions : Drum' becuz Drum set in basic hitnormal is noise
  2. 00:16:339 (1) - New combo here?
  3. 00:45:665 (3) - add finish on slider head , i can hear crash cymbal
  4. 00:47:759 (3) - same as ^, hear to slider end :3
  5. 00:56:828 (1) - you lost finish, umi san!
  6. 01:07:991 (1) - ^ 01:11:479 (1) - ^ 01:13:224 (4) - even slider end
nice diff umi >~<, about crash use soft finish it more better it's up to you :3


1PSA's Normal
  1. uncheck widescreen :3 http://puu.sh/bw4KE/bc4492cdda.png even letter box
lol nice norma, it fine to me :D can't find other thing, i think so just little bit many 1/3 :3 is hard to beginners little bit, they might be confuse on them


Flower's Hard
  1. 00:22:875 (4) - hitsound is wrong.. i can't hear Big DOOOM
  2. 00:26:363 (4) - even too, i guess it not miss? right, but i think so it lttile nosie just del is more better
  3. 01:01:712 (3) - http://puu.sh/bw5n8/b233bec241.jpg it hear to better :3
always make super nice map Flower san, give me a your maptalent. specially flow is good on your maps


Insane
  1. how about this http://puu.sh/bw5NC/685ea43e6a.png i think so introduction is little bit loud
  2. 00:16:689 (2) - unsnapu!! check Ai mod :3
  3. 00:49:156 (1) - how about New combo here? it would be easier to read :3
  4. 01:01:712 (3) - isn't 1/3?... look Flower's Hard :3 i think so it's 1/3 is right
also nice Insane, can't find problem an rhythm, flow, patterns to me :3 awesome lol


i hope understanding my english... i think my english is so bad super bad...


TAKE MY FIRST STAR!! WHeeeeeeeeeeeee /o/
kakifly
m4m ~

Umi's Easy

-nazi- if this 00:26:131 (1) - were to blanket with 00:27:526 (3) - you need to make a little adjustment to the slider body
- 00:47:759 (3) - this note ends on a strong downbeat imo; maybe you should change a rhythm a bit so a note starts on 00:48:456 ?
- 00:51:247 (1,3) - stack is off; recheck
easy is very nice; sorry i couldnt find much

1PSA's Normal

- try cs 3.5 for better diff spread? or ask umi to lower the cs in their easy
- 00:11:480 (4,1) - recheck blanket; its a bit off
- 00:13:922 (2,1) - ^
- 00:17:759 (1,3) - ^
- 00:22:293 (4,5) - ^
- 00:24:735 (4,5) - ^
- theres quite a few blankets in need of fixes; although these are mostly nazi blanket mods its best if you polished the diff to look nice; i'll try to point out most of them but be aware
- 00:40:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - this 'string' of sliders is a bit long imo ; maybe have a 1/1 or short break in between? remove a slider or two that isnt as necessary
- 00:58:224 (5,6) - not sure if you intended to blanket these or not but the blanket is off
- 01:06:596 (5,6) - ^

Flower's Hard

- 00:00:990 (1) - shouldnt this be a 1/1 slider?
-00:03:806 (1,2) - imo i think these would work nicer as a repeat slider
- 00:06:131 (6,7) - make this a 1/3 slider? if you listen carefuly the sound on 7 is a bit more faint than 6
- 00:22:526 (2,3,4,5) - imo i dont think these circles work here; they dont match the music that well? since i replayed the part a few times and the circles just dont seem right, i would suggest a circle at 00:22:642 then a 2/3 slider at 00:22:991 ?
- 00:35:200 (5) - 00:35:898 (1) - avoid overlap mabe?
- 01:18:107 (4,1) - blanket?

Insane

-00:06:538 (4,1) - imo this random 1/6 note is a bit confusing especially when using hd
- 00:25:665 (4,5,6,7) - i dont see a point of this stream here? theres nothing really in the music to hint it
- 00:38:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think a few 1/3 sliders would work nicely here
- 00:48:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally dont like this overlap stream >o<
couldnt find much after the kiai; its pretty nice

good luck !
Low
M4M

[General]
- first timing section seems a bit early.
- there's inconsistencies in the timing sections for each diff.
- there's inconsistencies in the audioleadin for each diff. you also don't need it; it's auto calculated now


[Easy]
00:49:852 (5) - put it in a position so that it blankets with (4). looks a lot neater than what you currently have.
01:02:410 (1) - the end of this is unsnapped
01:07:991 (1) - use the very end of this slider's shape to blanket the next circle.
01:20:549 (1,2) - why not make (1) the same curve as (2) to create a blanket with the two sliders? it would look really cool imo

[Normal]
01:02:410 (1) - the end of this is unsnapped

[Hard]
00:57:177 (3) - flip horizontally and reverse. this is the shape you should have this, it flows much better to me.
01:01:712 (3) - add a repeat to the end of this to match the sound in the music.

[Insane]
- OD 7.5 maybe? it seems appropriate for an insane diff.
00:16:689 (2) - start of this slider is unsnapped
00:10:433 (4) - space this out more? it feels like i'm holding back to play this.

this is solid. GL
Aeonian Sonder
[Insane]
00:06:538 (4) - This is questionable.
00:07:294 (3) - Could you make this a soft-hitclap instead for the head? This is just for insurance of the hitsounds, because my normal-hitnormal is not default, and this might also be the same for other players.

00:39:968 (9,1) - I'm not sure if you'll do this, but make this on the same line are the previous circles.
01:01:712 (3) - Is this on purpose?

[Flower's Hard]
00:06:596 (1) - Same as the insane

[Easy]
00:10:782 (2) - Could you make this blanket the end of slider 1?

This is SO going to get ranked.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
thanks! but i'm too busy to reply each,sorry
smallboat
Forum PM,old request check.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support and Enable coundown on all of the difficulties.
  2. Audio-lead in are not consistent,check the Easy and normal diff,suggest set 1500 here.
  3. Suggest removed the title 'short size',it is not a submitted title I think.
  4. Add 'Umi' to the tags.
[Umi's Easy]
  1. 01:07:206 (1) - Forgot add finish here? (And if fix it,remember reduce a bit volume to 50%)
  2. 01:12:439 (4) - This slider end feel fit add the finish here,why not add it? ( ^ )
[1PSA's Normal] The kiai time unsnapped : 01:01:509 and 01:12:787.
  1. Nothing to say.
[Flower's Hard] Check the AiMod have 3 error in there.
  1. 00:00:578 (2) - Have a drum rhythm there,suggest add a note fit this the part music.
  2. 00:09:648 (2) - Maybe can add a whistle here with the same 00:06:858 (2).
  3. 00:25:578 (4) - Remove this finish? Sounds like have bit weird at this parts.
[Insane]
Unsnapped circle (should be placed 1/8 in there.) : 00:05:752 (4) -.

  1. 00:17:323 (2) - Add a note make played better I think.
  2. 00:41:043 (2) - The same reason as above,why not add a note with same 00:41:276 (3,4) - here?
  3. 00:49:764 (6) - Maybe add a note do a anti-jump with (5)?
  4. 01:19:067 (2) - Feel forget add a whistle in slider end?
  5. 01:23:602 (4) - Suggest remove whistle in end will be sounded like better.

Looks fine,call me back to recheck this.
Topic Starter
No_Gu

smallboat wrote:

Forum PM,old request check.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Disable the Widescreen Support and Enable coundown on all of the difficulties.k
  2. Audio-lead in are not consistent,check the Easy and normal diff,suggest set 1500 here.k
  3. Suggest removed the title 'short size',it is not a submitted title I think.ost has a track 月花 (Short Size)
  4. Add 'Umi' to the tags. k

[Insane]

Unsnapped circle (should be placed 1/8 in there.) : 00:05:752 (4) -.in fact I'm not sure if it's 1/8 or 1/12...

  1. 00:17:323 (2) - Add a note make played better I think.
  2. 00:41:043 (2) - The same reason as above,why not add a note with same 00:41:276 (3,4) - here?
  3. 00:49:764 (6) - Maybe add a note do a anti-jump with (5)?for the 3 tips,I mainly follow drums and there is no drum sound,so don't want to add note there
  4. 01:19:067 (2) - Feel forget add a whistle in slider end?k
  5. 01:23:602 (4) - Suggest remove whistle in end will be sounded like better.k
[/notice]
Umi

smallboat wrote:

[Umi's Easy]
  1. 01:07:206 (1) - Forgot add finish here? (And if fix it,remember reduce a bit volume to 50%) fixed
  2. 01:12:439 (4) - This slider end feel fit add the finish here,why not add it? ( ^ ) kay added with volum 40%
I did several changes with previous mod as well ty guys.

diff
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 50346
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Gekka (Short Size)
TitleUnicode:月花 (Short Size)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Umi's Easy
Source:Hataraku Maou-sama!
Tags:はたらく魔王さま! ending Flower -Umi- Umi 1PSA
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BeatmapSetID:106595

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
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Topic Starter
No_Gu
uploaded and fixed for flower cuz I donno if he is able to fix it in time
smallboat
Okay,this map looks good to go for me.

Bubbled !
Topic Starter
No_Gu
Thank you very much!!

leave a title proof: http://www.lantis.jp/release-item2.php? ... bfec087500
- Yuuto -
So, why is this dead?
Sonnyc
Random bubble check.

General:

-- Add "The Devil Is a Part-Timer!" and "moon flower" to tags.

Umi's Easy:

01:09:299 - Missing clap.
01:15:578 (2,1) - Come on, you can improve this blanket :3

1PSA's Normal:

00:04:300 (3) - Extend 1/6 to fit the song please.

Flower's Hard:

01:00:928 (3) - Consider adding one more reverse to fill in 01:01:276.

Insane:

00:59:764 - Consider adding a note here to fit the vocal.

Star for a nice map. Forum pm me after mods get applied.
xxdeathx
Are you sure about the snapping in some parts?

xxdeathx wrote:

I am worried that a lot of objects may be snapped wrong to the music (or the offset is off), so if I give a mod post I may be forced to pop it. A lot of objects on the 1/6 tick before the slider, like 00:09:182 (2) - should be snapped to the 1/8 tick at 00:09:212 - you listen to the music at 25% and it sounds closer to 1/8. Also others like 00:06:392 (2) - should be on 00:06:421..
Sonnyc
[Insane]
After checking thanks to xxdeathx's post, the ringing sounds from the intro part seems to sound at 1/8. The following is where the sound appears and you need a fix. Extending the slider end wouldn't be mandatory, but better to extend to fit the snap.

00:06:421 - 00:07:817 - 00:09:212 - 00:10:607 - 00:12:003 - 00:13:398 -

Also found an issue at "soft-sliderslide3.wav" which is a mute sound while not being a 0 byte file.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed all except adding tags..they are not necessary imo
thx,update
Sonnyc
Rebubbled~
xxdeathx
[General]
  1. You must have The Devil Is a Part-Timer! tag. Many people will search this anime/map by the English name. Also all the other ranked maps from this anime have it.
[Normal]
  1. AR5 is much better since it gets a little cluttered with AR4
  2. 00:08:602 (1) - As discussed with Insane, the end should be snapped to 1/8 but i think it's better to end 00:08:950
[Insane]
  1. I think AR9 is too fast for a slow song like this, consider lower AR
  2. 00:07:119 (4) - Sonnyc and I think this should be snapped to 1/8
After you fix snap you may want to get Sonnyc to rebubble and call me back
Topic Starter
No_Gu
though I still think tag is unnecessary but..orz fixed all
xxdeathx
Sorry, I used wrong timestamp for insane:
00:07:090 (4) - this should be 1/8
00:07:206 (1) - this slider end should be 1/6
Topic Starter
No_Gu
nvm.fixed
Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

Rebubbled~
xxdeathx
Qualified!!
Fycho

xxdeathx wrote:

I am worried that a lot of objects may be snapped wrong to the music (or the offset is off), so if I give a mod post I may be forced to pop it. A lot of objects on the 1/6 tick before the slider, like 00:09:182 (2) - should be snapped to the 1/8 tick at 00:09:212 - you listen to the music at 25% and it sounds closer to 1/8. Also others like 00:06:392 (2) - should be on 00:06:421..

Are you reallt sure?

I played this map and found its rhythms are very weird, and discussed with IamKwaN
This song is a kind of general 1/6 song, it's very strange to have some 1/8 rhythm in it.
The snap can't be designed according to some small beats like these, they are not in the main soundtrack, if mapper want to follow these beats, then the whole song's timing is wrong. The timing is based on the drum track. (That 1/8 beats track is random)
mapping is not following beats simply.

In Insane diff:
00:05:724 (4) - This is the instrument's startting beats, why do you think it's 1/8? it's hard to listen which beat it is.
00:07:555 (2) - This is actually 1/6, why is snapped to 1/8 too?
00:07:090 (3) - again this is 1/6

Apart from these, I think this song shouldn't force to have 1/8rhythms, all are 1/6(from music theory). if 1/6 ticks don't have beat, then don't overmap it.


Other than these, soft-sliderslide2.wav is a muted hitsound, but it's not 44byte blank file which is provided by ranking criteria
Setz
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