Hayami Saori - Omou Koto -TV size- · forum

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-09-14T06:39:40+00:00

Hi Giralda

random bubble check because this map already bubbled 20 days we will screw up together Trust /runs

General

appareantly the soft-hitwhistle2 sounds as default soft whistle here. i guess better to remove it to reduce the size of map too (correct me if i'm wrong)

Easy

00:16:734 (1) - remove finish on tail? the music only like "teng" sounds as bell here. imo whistle only fits better
00:24:801 (2) - add whistle to repeat. i heard a kinda loud music here. emphasize that sound would be nice
00:30:852 (1) - hmm try rotate -20 degree clockwise? imo the flow can improved more balance with that
00:42:952 - the S:C4 here is unnecessary imo since the whistle sound is really same with S:C3 previous greenline. if you remove this one,00:43:078 - remove this too
00:44:969 (3) - try rotate 20 degree clockwise to keep the previous flows?
00:51:020 (1) - hmm add whistle to repeat to emphasize the vocal?
01:25:810 -, 01:24:927 - unnecessary greenline
I would say incerase 10% volume in kiai times. the claps sound hear too low for me

Normal

00:17:238 (1) - remove this note since the new rule said at least 2/1 gap after a spinner. and remove the greenline as well http://puu.sh/byhwf/bd0e70424e.png
00:29:591 (4) - nazi, but try move the 2nd curve to downward around 132,248? so the flow would be easier to read :p
00:30:852 (1) - try add whistle on head and repeat to emphasize the vocals?
00:43:457 (2) - inconsistency spacing (0,92x) here. make sure it placed with 1,0x
01:16:986 (3) - yup 0,95x is the minimal of the spacing here but would be better if keep be safe by move to 396,340 to have 1,01x spacing. i don't want get an unrank by nazi thing like this lol

Hard

00:11:692 (3) - nazi but try move to 344,204 to make a diagonal line flow here? if you follow this one, 00:12:448 (4) - move to 452,92 to keep the consistency spacing
00:16:734 (1) - same as Easy
00:34:885 - the music become a little bit loud here. imo it feels empty w/o hitsound so add whistle to the00:34:885 (1) - 's head?
00:38:415 (5) - the inconsistency spacing here looked bad. imo move the slider to 128,112 would make neater design here
00:58:078 (8) - hmm remove finish sound? i know the music become louder than before but the sound still on category of clap sound so finish feels too loud here. how about replace with whistle instead?

Insane

00:08:667 (1) - since you hitsounded the head of slider with cymbal, imo the normal spacing isn't really good here. move to 96,160 to give a little bit jump here
00:44:969 (1) - imo the flow from previous circle to this slider a little bit sharp here. try smoother it by move to 344,212. if you follow this one, you can move 00:45:473 (2) - to 188,120 to avoid a huge jump
00:55:053 (1) - the slider a little bit close with the previous slider. make it a little bit further by move to 432,192
01:15:221 (1) - nazi thing but you can make neater flower pattern here, at least move this circle to 204,60

make sure to fix red mentions here and call me back

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Kihhou 2014-09-14T08:01:40+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi Giralda
random bubble check because this map already bubbled 20 days we will screw up together Trust /runs

General
appareantly the soft-hitwhistle2 sounds as default soft whistle here. i guess better to remove it to reduce the size of map too (correct me if i'm wrong)

Easy
00:16:734 (1) - remove finish on tail? the music only like "teng" sounds as bell here. imo whistle only fits better
00:24:801 (2) - add whistle to repeat. i heard a kinda loud music here. emphasize that sound would be nice
00:30:852 (1) - hmm try rotate -20 degree clockwise? imo the flow can improved more balance with that rotated a bit more than that
00:42:952 - the S:C4 here is unnecessary imo since the whistle sound is really same with S:C3 previous greenline. if you remove this one,00:43:078 - remove this too
00:44:969 (3) - try rotate 20 degree clockwise to keep the previous flows? rotated more and changed 00:47:490 (1) -
00:51:020 (1) - hmm add whistle to repeat to emphasize the vocal? vocal here doesnt need emphasis imo since its just the "tsu" pronunciation o3o
01:25:810 -, 01:24:927 - unnecessary greenline
I would say incerase 10% volume in kiai times. the claps sound hear too low for me

make sure to remove red mentions here and call me back

fixed the others not mentioned ~

thanks xinely c:

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Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Giralda 2014-09-18T03:55:31+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi Giralda
random bubble check because this map already bubbled 20 days we will screw up together Trust /runs omg yessss hahaha

General
appareantly the soft-hitwhistle2 sounds as default soft whistle here. i guess better to remove it to reduce the size of map too (correct me if i'm wrong)

Normal
00:17:238 (1) - remove this note since the new rule said at least 2/1 gap after a spinner. and remove the greenline as well http://puu.sh/byhwf/bd0e70424e.png
00:29:591 (4) - nazi, but try move the 2nd curve to downward around 132,248? so the flow would be easier to read :p
00:30:852 (1) - try add whistle on head and repeat to emphasize the vocals?
00:43:457 (2) - inconsistency spacing (0,92x) here. make sure it placed with 1,0x
01:16:986 (3) - yup 0,95x is the minimal of the spacing here but would be better if keep be safe by move to 396,340 to have 1,01x spacing. i don't want get an unrank by nazi thing like this lol

Hard
00:11:692 (3) - nazi but try move to 344,204 to make a diagonal line flow here? if you follow this one, 00:12:448 (4) - move to 452,92 to keep the consistency spacing
00:16:734 (1) - same as Easy
00:34:885 - the music become a little bit loud here. imo it feels empty w/o hitsound so add whistle to the00:34:885 (1) - 's head?
00:38:415 (5) - the inconsistency spacing here looked bad. imo move the slider to 128,112 would make neater design here
00:58:078 (8) - hmm remove finish sound? i know the music become louder than before but the sound still on category of clap sound so finish feels too loud here. how about replace with whistle instead?

Insane
00:08:667 (1) - since you hitsounded the head of slider with cymbal, imo the normal spacing isn't really good here. move to 96,160 to give a little bit jump here
00:44:969 (1) - imo the flow from previous circle to this slider a little bit sharp here. try smoother it by move to 344,212. if you follow this one, you can move 00:45:473 (2) - to 188,120 to avoid a huge jump
00:55:053 (1) - the slider a little bit close with the previous slider. make it a little bit further by move to 432,192
01:15:221 (1) - nazi thing but you can make neater flower pattern here, at least move this circle to 204,60

make sure to fix red mentions here and call me back

Did everything for mines and Tari's upon her permission. Thanks moe Xinely~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-09-18T04:31:00+00:00

recheck

General

00:51:524 - Easy diff, i see this greenline use S:C30 here but i can't find the file music for that custom hitsound. probably you removed it? :C

Easy

00:34:759 - unnecessary greenline here. remove it
01:24:927 - unnecessary greenline too

Normal

00:22:784 (1) - probably add whistle on head to emphasize vocal and consistency with next stanza. add whistle to repeat too if you want to emphasize the vocal
00:26:818 (1) - ^
00:34:759 - unnecessary greenline

Kihhou

1,040 posts

Joined March 2013

Kihhou 2014-09-18T04:49:07+00:00

ilie

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-09-18T05:09:33+00:00

we fixed the source from "." to “。” according this page. confirmed with japanese people

Qualified (ノ>∨<)ノ